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Comfertable....इसमें cmrtble का मतलब क्या है मोहतरमा।।
Thriller Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai... (paused)
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Is site pe aana sbke lie bs timepass hota hai sir ji..yha koi saleery nhi milti...koi award nhi milta...bs samay faltu ho to aajate hai...
Lekin abhi mujhe samay nhi mil pa rha hai...jaise hi mai free rhugi mai bina kisi ke kahe...bina kisi ko btaye bs update dena start kr dugi...
Iske lie maafi chahti hu pr esa hi hai...abbi ghr ko sbhalne ke chkkr me samay nhi nikal pati...or agr manlo ese jaldi baji me aakr likhu bhi to shayd apna best nhi de paugi usse meri story pr bhi farak pdega or apko shayad story fr pasand na aaye...to mera manna hai jo bhi likho aram se likho or quality ke sath...mowgli ko ese hi niptana nhi chahti...mai apni har story ke lead charactar ko itna special bnana chahti hu ki reader use hmesa yaad rkhe...jo pichli 2kahani me hua bhi hai...
And character ko special bnana tb hi sambhav hai jb hmare pas paryapt samay ho use creative bnane ka...story ke plot sochne ka...story ke har character pr pura dhyan dene ka...story me mai khud bahut kuch bhul si gyi hu jb bhi shuru krugi dobara read krke and ek bar pura short review dekar shuru krugi...or achhe se krugi...
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Ankitarani ji besabari se intezaar rahega...Is site pe aana sbke lie bs timepass hota hai sir ji..yha koi saleery nhi milti...koi award nhi milta...bs samay faltu ho to aajate hai...
Lekin abhi mujhe samay nhi mil pa rha hai...jaise hi mai free rhugi mai bina kisi ke kahe...bina kisi ko btaye bs update dena start kr dugi...
Iske lie maafi chahti hu pr esa hi hai...abbi ghr ko sbhalne ke chkkr me samay nhi nikal pati...or agr manlo ese jaldi baji me aakr likhu bhi to shayd apna best nhi de paugi usse meri story pr bhi farak pdega or apko shayad story fr pasand na aaye...to mera manna hai jo bhi likho aram se likho or quality ke sath...mowgli ko ese hi niptana nhi chahti...mai apni har story ke lead charactar ko itna special bnana chahti hu ki reader use hmesa yaad rkhe...jo pichli 2kahani me hua bhi hai...
And character ko special bnana tb hi sambhav hai jb hmare pas paryapt samay ho use creative bnane ka...story ke plot sochne ka...story ke har character pr pura dhyan dene ka...story me mai khud bahut kuch bhul si gyi hu jb bhi shuru krugi dobara read krke and ek bar pura short review dekar shuru krugi...or achhe se krugi...
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Baap re baap itna clarification kon mangaIs site pe aana sbke lie bs timepass hota hai sir ji..yha koi saleery nhi milti...koi award nhi milta...bs samay faltu ho to aajate hai...
Lekin abhi mujhe samay nhi mil pa rha hai...jaise hi mai free rhugi mai bina kisi ke kahe...bina kisi ko btaye bs update dena start kr dugi...
Iske lie maafi chahti hu pr esa hi hai...abbi ghr ko sbhalne ke chkkr me samay nhi nikal pati...or agr manlo ese jaldi baji me aakr likhu bhi to shayd apna best nhi de paugi usse meri story pr bhi farak pdega or apko shayad story fr pasand na aaye...to mera manna hai jo bhi likho aram se likho or quality ke sath...mowgli ko ese hi niptana nhi chahti...mai apni har story ke lead charactar ko itna special bnana chahti hu ki reader use hmesa yaad rkhe...jo pichli 2kahani me hua bhi hai...
And character ko special bnana tb hi sambhav hai jb hmare pas paryapt samay ho use creative bnane ka...story ke plot sochne ka...story ke har character pr pura dhyan dene ka...story me mai khud bahut kuch bhul si gyi hu jb bhi shuru krugi dobara read krke and ek bar pura short review dekar shuru krugi...or achhe se krugi...
...bas gurumata bas ...ham 2025 Tak bina aapko kuchh kahe intejar Kar lenge...jaise koi to rok lo ko Kar rhe hai hai...
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Hmm...usse pahle hi ho jayegi start...no tnsn..Baap re baap itna clarification kon manga
Bs koi bolta hai to esa feel hota hai ki mujpr pressure pd rha hai...jbki esa nhi h...prr lgta h esa bs...anyway...kosis krugi jaldi krne ki or sbse pahle apko hi inform krugi ok
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Jb start krugi ek dm hi krugi...pahle mowgli wali khtm fir uske just bad khamoshiya part 2start...Baap re baap itna clarification kon manga
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Hmm...iska to pura plot soch liya hai...pahle wali se jada suspanse smete hue rhegi ye...
And kuch swal jinke jwab part 1 adhure se the...isme jaakr pure honge...
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तेरा धीरे से पलकों को उठाना ले लेता मेरी जान कहीं ।
तेरी कोमल सी पंखुड़ी से होंठ देते मुझे ठंडक कहीं ।
ये मीठी सी मुस्कान अंधेरों में फैलाती उजियारा कहीं ।
तेरा मंद मंद मुस्कराना और धीरे से इशारों में बुलाना हाय !!!
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