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2022 ke July me ...Meri baat hui hai unse...so fikar naat

 

[Akil]

Thank you sanju ji ..
Woww what a entry...prr ap to 1mhine ke lie underground ho gye the na...anyway happy to see u again...apke review me story me 4chand lg jate hai...

Ha wo sb likhte time meri ankhe bhi bhr aay thi..specially pawan ki maut wala part....baki rakshita ki family ki maut bhi kafi dard bhari thi ..

Karan ne rakshita ko sikhaya jrur...lekin bahut km aamay hone ke karan uski shiksha puri nhi ho payi...adhur hi rah gyi...or na hi uske pas koi divya shakti hai...but still she is confident...

Bus mujhe jo story me dalna tha wo hi mene dekha yiutube pr...baki to ye mahakavya sbne dekha hi tha pichhle saal....


Anyway...thanks itni tareef ke le...bs ek subject mil gya or story khud bnti chali gyi...spna to bs yhi tha ki kuch purane jmaane ka hai...jisme 2couple ek dusre ko dekhkar khush hote hai...pyar krte hai...

Puri kahani fir khud bn gyi...


Ji ha...yudh bs rakshita or chandraksh ke bich nhi...achhai or bura ke bich rahne wala hai....
Lekin afsos...rakshita ke pas shakti nhi ha..or wha chandraksh shaktiyo or shaktiya bdhaye jaa rha hai...dekhte hai mowgli kaise samna karti hai is sbk....

Khair thanks again sanju ji...ese hi honsla bdhate jaiye thank u

Yeh kisne keh diya ki raksita ke paas koi shakti asal mein vastavik shakti uske aur Aakash ke paas hai abhi tak toh
Pratham unke satkarmon ki shakti
Dvittiya unke pashu mitron ke roop mein
Trittya unke kaliyugkaaleen parijanon ke prem sneh evam apanepan ke roop mein
Chaturth unke ek dusre ke prati niswaarth prem ke roop mein
Shashtam unke satkarmon ke phalswarup us yug mein mili tatha is yug mein milne wale aashirvadon ke roop mein yeh sab is kahani mein mowgli urf rakshita aur pawan aur unke apanon ke hi paas hai naaki us chandu chavanpraash ke aur uske paas yeh sab shaktiyaan kabhi hongi bhi nahin

 

[Akil]

Btw kash kahani ka hero Nischal hota

Nishchhal is kahani ka hero hota toh..... Jivisha aur Rakshita dono mil kar uski herogiri nikaal deti aur Chandraaksh jo uska karta woh toh Serin Huyu and bachcha party plus surpmarich bhi na kar paate aur phir Aakash moghembo khush ho jata

 

[Bilal jan]

TUJHME TAB DIKHTA HAI
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ONE	TWO	THREE	FOUR	FIVE
SIX	SEVEN	EIGHT	NINE	TEN

ELEVEN	TWELVE	THIRTEEN	FOURTEEN	FIFTEEN
SIXTEEN	SEVENTEEN	EIGHTEEN	NINTEEN	TWENTY

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"sir...kya aajke jamane me bhi...achhai ka fal achha or burai ka fal bura hota hai....kya is modern time me...imandari se pesa kmaya ja sakta hai..."ek ladka school teacher se sawal poochta hai...

"Dekho beta...imandari se pesa kmaya jarur jaa skta hai...lekin ho sakta hai wo pesa km ho...ye tumpr nirbhar krta hai ki tum us pese me khud ko kaise santusht krte ho......."teacher bchho ko smjhane ki koshish krta hai...

"Sir...ye kaviyo ki aapas me ladai thi kya....."ek ladki ki baat sunkr sab hasne lgte hai...
"Tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai..."teacher bhi chehre pr ek smile ke sath puchhte hai...
"Ha sir...kisi kavi ne kaha ki kaal kare so aaj kar,aaj kare so ab,koi kahta hai sabra ka fal meetha hota hai...ye dono apas me ulte hue na...ek jaldi krne ko kah rha hai...to ek deri se krne ko.....kahi likha hota hai...karm krte rho...to koi kaha gya ajgar kare na chakri panchhi kare na kaam,daas maluka kah gye sbke daata raam...aisa kyu sir.."
Teacher bhi is bachhe ki baat sunkr hairan ho jaata hai...



"Akhir kya hai...kya hai us jungle me...kyu koi ek single ped bhi nahi kaat paata us jungle ka...kai saalo se is jungle ka sunte aarhe hai...or ab ye internation level pr bhi news ka vishay ban chuka hai......kya hai us jungle me..."shahar ke nye collector sahab...apne kuchh admiyo se baat kr rhe the....

"Pata nhi sir...us jungle me koi bhi aata jaata hai...bsss uske ped ko koi kaat nhi paata...ye aaj se nhi...pichhe 10saal se ascharya ka vishay bna hua hai...ek patta tak un pedo ka koi tod nhi paata hai..."ek aadmi us rahasyamayi jungle ke bare me jaankari deta hua bolta hai.....

"Acha....kya tumne khud dekha...ki us jungle me kuchh nhi hai...tum khud gye the usme..."collector utsuktavash puchhte hai...

"Ha sir....waha aane jane me kisi ko manahi nahi hai...bs pedo ko kuch nuksan nahi pahucha sakte... kuch logo ka manna hai ki...wha koi bhut rahta hai ped pr...to kai bolte hai ki...bhgwan ko pasand nhi ki koi prakrati ke sath khilwad kre...islie wha waha koi ek ped bhi nahi kaat paata..to koi wha alien ke hone ka dava krte hai...."

"Acha....dekho...bhagwan ka to pta nhi ...pr nature ka nuksan ho...hm bhi iske khilaaf hai...pr kya kre...ese hm nature ko bcha bhi nahi sakte...jin kitabo se pdhkr aj hm is mukaam pr aaye hai...wo kitabi na jane kitne pedo ki bali pr banti hai...agar hme aage bdhna hai...to thoda balidan to nature ko dena hi hoga....anway...ye btao...jb koi ped wha kaat'ta hai to...kya hota hai..."

"Sir wo ped ko kaat'ta rhta hai...lekin ped kat'ta nahi.....ek aadmi lagatar 2din tak ped ko kaat'ta rha...pr ped ki dhul tak nhi utaar saka wo...jaise wo aari ko ped se touch krta...ari tut jaati...is trh usne un 2dino me 1500aari istemal ki...or sbki sb tut'ti gyi...ped ki ek daali bhi nhi kaat saka..."

"Kya sirf kisi ek ped ki yaa..."
"Nahi sir...ye sbhi ped pr laagu hota hai...us jungle ke sbhi ped aaise hai..."

"Or dharti....dharti ke baare me kya vichar hai...kya wha jmeen bhi aisi hai...kya wha bhi khudai krna mushkil hai..."

"Sir...wha khudai bhi karne ki koshish ki...pr kuchh nhi ho paaya....jis ojar se khudai krte....wo tut jaata...ya kharab ho jaata..."
"Strange...wese...hmari aspas ki areas me kai baar posting hui....bs suna tha is jungle ke bare me...aj chalte hai...dekhte hai....kya hota hai wha...or suno...2,3constable ko bhi lelo...with guns..."

"Sir nhi jaaye to achha hai...suna hai usme koi bhut hai...ya fir...."

Collector uske kandhe pr hath rkhta hua-dro mt...kuchh nhi hoga...jaldi se chalne ki taiyari kro...orr kuch mjduro ko bhi sath rhna...ek jcb machine bhi...hm sb try krke dekhte hai.....


Karib 2ghante me sb intjam ho jaate hai...or collector sahab...3constable...kuch majdur,jcb machine or apne 4aadmiyo ke sath...us jungle me pahuch jaate hai....

Collector gaadi me se utarte hai...
Samne jungle tha...
Collecotr-isme andar jaane me to koi khatra nhi hai na...
"Nahi sir...yha to bahut log ghumte rhte hai...bs khatra hai ped ko katne se...agr koi yha is jungle ko nuksan na pahuchaye to...koi khatra nhi hai..."

"Thik hai chalo..."collector chalte hue bolte hai...
Sbhi us jungle ke bich me aajate hai...
Colloctor idhsr udhar...upr niche sb jagah dhyan se dekhta hai...
Collector-wese...dekhne me to aam jungle ke jaise hai ye.....
"Hey....udhar aao...chalo..yha khudai kro..."collector ek mjdur ko awaj deta hai...

Majdur jaise hi kudaala dharti pr maarta hai...ekdm kudale ke 2piece ho jaate hai...
Collector hairani se ekdm apna chashma utarkr dekhta hai...or harian ho jaate hai sbhi...

Collector jcb wale ko ishara krta hai...
"Hey...tum wo ped girao..."
Jcb wala ped ki taraf chal deta hai...or jaise hi jcb ka falak ped se touch hone wala hota hai...ekdm machine band ho jaati hai..."

"Sir...machine band ho gyi...chaalu nhi ho rhi..."jcb wala kaafi koshish krne ke bad bolta hai...
Collecotr constable ke pas jaata hai...
"Fire kro us ped pr...ek sath...."
"Dhaay dhaay dhay..."3goliya ek sath chalti hai...
Collecotr us ped ke paas jaakar dekhta hai...to...goliya ped ko lagne se pahle hi niche giri pdi thi.....

Collecotr soch me pd jaata hai...
Collector kuch sochkr-hey...kisi achhe video grapher ko phon kro...jaldi bulao...
Jaldi jaldi ek jaane mane video grapher ko bulaya jaata hai...jo vdeo editing,making sbme pefrect hota hai.....

Collector-suno...yha ped ko goli lgegi...use tumhe shoot krna...or fir usko slow motion me hme dikhana hai...ho jayega na...
"Try krta hu sir...kiya nhi ab tk aisa..."vdeo wala bolta hai...
Or camera lekar sahi angle set krta hai....khud thoda duri pr jakar khada ho jaata hai....

Or shoot krne ka ishara krta hai.....shoot hota hai...

Sbhi camera ke paas chale jaate hai...
Vdeo wala thodi si setting krta hai...or kuch der bad collector ko deta hai..
"Ho gya sir..."
Collector vdeo ko dekhne lgta hai...
Goli jaise hi ped ke paas aati hai...ek ajib si parat...pardarshi...paani jaisi...us goli ko rok leti hai...jisse goli niche gir jaati hai...

Collector-yee....ye kya hai...ye sb...nhi ye nhi ho sakta....collecotr apna sr pakadkr whi ka whi beth jaata hai...

2ghante bad...
Collector-ye announcement krwa do...ki agr koi bhi us jungle ke ped kaat paaya...to use inaam me 5lakh rupey diye jayenge....

"Sir ...5lakh..."
Collector-yha ek hospital bnega...garibo k lie...uska banna jruri hai......ese me 5to kya 10lakh bhi dene pde to hm pichhe nhi hatenge.....lekin kisi bhi tarah us jungle ka katna jruri hai......

1mhine tak us jungle ko kaatne ki bahut joshish ki jaati hai...prr...koi kaamyab nhi ho paata...sarkar us inam ko bdhakr 10lakh kar deti hai...bahut log...bahut compnies ne bhi try kiya...pr sb bekar...ab haarkr sb beth gye the...lekin wha ke aaspas me ek whi jagah thi,jaha hospital banya jaa sakta tha.....prr kya kre...mjbur the...


Ek table ke charo taraf kuchh aadmi kaala suit pant pahne bethe the...shaayd bussinessman the...
Ek aadmi ek suitcase ko table pr sarkaata hua samne bethe ek aadmi ki taraf kr deta hai ....


"Pure 10crore hai.....tumne is judge ko hmare raste se hatakr bahut bda kam kiya hai...weldone...babut fudakta tha saala......or ab no us acp dhananjay ka hai...use bhi bahut nasha chadha hai deshbhakti ka.....use bhi tumhe hi maarna hoga...pese mil jayenge..."

"Nahi....mai us acp ko maarne ke lie...koi pesa nhi lunga...usse to meri purani dushmani hai...mere bhai ko ancounter me mrwaya tha usne...smjho wo mr gya....."
Ek lmbe baalo wala aadmi wha se uthake suitcase lekar chal deta hai...

"Sir...ye sbse khunkhar or khatrnak bhediya hai....ise ek bar jiski supari di...smjho uski teharvi pakki..."ek aadmi bolta hai...

"Hmm...bs ye acp chala jaye...uske bad dekhna...hmari dahshat...pahla blast raliway station pr hoga....fir mandir, masjid,park ,college.....hahaha...."whi bethe sbhi aadmi jor jor se hasne lagte hai...


Acp dhananjya...ek imandar police officer...kaafi bahadur bhi hai....apne carrier me kaafi ancounter kiye hai...galat logo ke lie galat...or sahi ke lie sahi...
Apne office me bethe the...
"Uhuu uhuu...are...jara paani laao yar..."acp kuch files ko dekhta hua,gle ki kharash ko dur krne ke lie paani mangata hai...

Hawaldar paani lata hai...Acp paani pita hai...orrr...achank usko chakkr aane lgte hai.....sra ghum jaata hai...or wahi table pr sr rakhkr behosh ho jaata hai...


Jb uski ankh khulti hai...to wo ek ladki kaatne ke workshop me tha...or badha hua tha...ek table pr leta tha...pr ye table...ladki kaatne wala ojaar tha...samne ek gol baled lga tha...jisko nukile daanto se cover tha...ghumne pr usse lakdii kaati jaati thi...
Acp bandha hua pada tha...
Acp-hey...mai yha kaise aaya...kon ho tum log...

Samne khade 4,5aadmi ko dekhkar cheekhta hua bolta hai acp...
"Realax acp..."pichhe se ek aadmi aata hua bolta hai...jiske lambe baal tha...black suit pant me...or ankho pr black chashma ...
Acp-kon ho tum...or is tarah mujhe bandhne ka matlb...

"Matlab...matlab maut....itna bhi nahi samajhte....maut lekar aayi hai tumhe yha....."lambe baalo wala aadmi bolta hai...
Acp gusse me-ek bar mere hath khol de...fir btata hu kiski maut aayi hai.....
"Hahaha...acp....kya mujhe pagal smjha hai...khair....mai janta hu...tum kitne bahadur ho......kitne medal liye hai tumne...prr...aaj tumhe tumhari okat dikha hi deta hu...khol do ise..."lambe baal wala aadmi muskuraata hua bolta hai...

Acp ke man me ek ummid jaagti hai..
Ek aadmi aake acp ko khol deta hai...
Acp uthkr khada hota hai...or apne kapdo ko jhaadta hai...
"Mai jaanta hu acp...tum ek achhe fighter ho...5,5 ko akele chit krne ka hunar rkhte ho...mujhe agr tum touch bhi kr paaye to tumhe hm jaane denge..."lambe balo wala aadmi ghumta hua bolta hai... Or apna black suilt nikalta hai...sath hi apni shirt bhi......
Khatarnak bodya thi uski...
Acp-aajao...fir...

Lambe baalo wala aadmi bhagkr aate hai...or acp ko mukka maarta hai...lekin acp uska mukka rok leta hai...acp kuch kar paaye isse pahle wo acp ke muh pr dusre hath se mukka jad deta hai...
Hil gya pura acp...

"Kyu...kaisi rahi..."lambe balo wala muskurata hua bolta hai...
Acp uski taraf lapakta hai...lekin wo us aamdi tak aapata hai...isse pahle hi uske seene pr ek laat padi....dur jaa gira acp...muh se khun nikalne lge...

Acp fir se smbhlta hua aage jaata hai...lekin wo aadmi acp ke hath ko left hand se pakadkar...right hand se acp ka sr pakadkr tej jhatke se uske muh ped par de maarta hai...
Khun se lathpath ho gya acp ka chehra.....

2,3baar acp ka chehra us ped pr dee marta hai wo...acp ko jaise hi chhodta hai...niche gir pddta hai acp....
"Utha lao ise...nikal gyi iski mardangi..."lambe baalo wala aadmi apne aadmiyo se bolta hai...
Uske aadmi acp ko uthakr table pr lita dete hai....

"Chalu kro ise..."
Uske aadi us machine ko start kr dete hai...acp ke samne wo daanto wala charkha(blade) speed se ghumna lagta hai...ruuh kaaamp jaari hai ise dekhkar acp ki.....
"Kardo kaam..."


Wo blade acp ki taraf badhne lgta hai...
Acp ankhe band kr leta hai.......us balade ke ghumne ki awaaj se hi acp ki dil ki dhadkan tez ho gyi thi...
Wo balade dhire dhire....table ki lakdi ko kaat'ta hua aage badh rha tha...
Or ekdm acp ke kaano me awaaj aarhi rhi thi uski ab..

"Hey bhagwan...kisi ko to bhej...kab tk ye anyay hota rhega...kb tk ye
Log manavta ko maarte rhege...kab tak..."
Or itna sochte hi...lambe baal wale ke chehre pr khun ke chheente pdne shuru ho jaate hai...tadap tadap kr rha jaata hai... acp.....





"Please...please mujhe jaane do...mujhe chhod do please..."ek ladki bethi hui ,pichhe ki taraf sarakti hui samne uski taraf aarhe admio se hath jodkr bolti hai...
"Ese kaise jaane de jaanemn...ya to sidhi tarah taiyar ho ja...nhi to teri ijjt nilaam hokar rhegi..."unme se ek gurraya hua bolta hai...
"Nahi ...nahi plsss...mujhe jaane do...mai hath jodti hu ap logo ke..mujhe jaane do...."wo ladki roti hui bolti hai...

"Are chhammak chhallo...kitne dino se tujhe aate jaate dekh rhe the...ab hath me aayi hai to...aise kaise chhod de..hahahaha.."
Dono ladki pr junglee kutte ki tarah kuud pdte hai...use nochne lgte hai....ldki roti rahti hai...bilakhti rahti hai...prr wo jaalim bs apni krte rhte hai.....
Jaise hi wo dono khade hote hai...
"Abe...abe ye to mar gyi..."unme se ek ldki ki taraf dekhta hua bolta hai..
"Mrne de...hme kya...mja lena tha...le kiya...chal aa...tujhe pilaata hu..."
Ladki whi mri padi rah jaati hai...



2din baad....
Koi apni nokri ke lie jaa rha tha...to koi ghumne...koi shadi me...to koi exam dena...koi dosto ke sath ghumne jaa rha tha...to koi apme priwar ke pas...ese hi najane kitne aadmi ek jagah se dusri jagah jaa rhe the...bahut bheed thi railway station pr...aksar hoti hai.....lekin ye bheed shayad khaas honi wali thi.....
Hajaro ki sankhya me log station pr the...ek train aati hai...jisme se bahut public utarti hai....

Orr achank...ek dhamaka...ek dhamaka ke sath puri train itar bitar ho jaati hai..
Aspas ke logo me afra tafri mach jaati hai...10secodn me hi log wha mre pde the...to koi jakhmi tha...koi reng rengkr train se dur jaane ki koshish kr rha tha...to koi apna kata hua shiri utha rha tha...bachho bilbila rhe the....budhe ro rhe the...ek min me station kabrastn ban gya tha...
Jaldi jaldi ambulance aati hai...or logo ko idhar se udhar le jaati hai......5ambulance aayi thi...pr logo ki ginti khatam nhi ho rhi thi...itna bhayan kahar barsa kogo pr...

"Namashkar....railway station or
Pr huye dhamake me lagbhag
5000log maare gye or 8000ghayal...itna bhayank haadsa ...akhir kon ho sakta hai iske piche...kai bchhe anath ho gye...kai maao ki god ujad gyi...police prashan khamosh kyu hai...kya ye koi tettrtoist atteck hai..ya iske iske piche koi rajneeti mansha hai......"

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[Bilal jan]

Update 2


''Tring tring ''phon ki ghanti bajti hai..
''tring tring''
''uffff....shalini dekho na kiska phon hai..kabse baj rha hai..''rajni nahate hue andar se bolte hai..

tannu jo bahar jaate jate apni bhabhi ki awaj sunker ruk jaaati hai...
tannu- ab is mobile ke jamane me bhi,is dabbe ko ghar me rakhoge to yhi hoga na....kisi din mera matha ghum gya to bech dungi isko...

tannu gusse me palatti hai or mobile ki taraf lapalt'ti hai..
''hello''tannu thoda majakiya andaj me bolti hai...
''bhabhi....bhabhi...apke sasural se apke dusre pati ka phone hai
rajni nahakar bahar aachuki thi..
rajnii-kya bakati ho..
rajnii phon lekar-hello..

''madam mai insuarance sectror se bat kar rha hu..or apse.....''baat puri ho isse pahle rajnii phon kaat deti hai...
rajnii-ye log bhi na bss...bolti hui rajnii andar ki taraf chal deti hai...

uske pichhe pichhe tannu bhi ajati hai...
rajnii-tum kyu mere pichhe pichhe ghum rahi ho..kya bat hai?...

tannu-bhahi..i want pocket money ..tannu dant dikhaate hue bolti hai..
Rajni-whattt...kal hi to 1000rupey diye the...
tannu-1000 me kya hota hai bhabhi..wo to party me kharch ho gye..tannu masoomiyat se bolti hai.
Rajni-okkk deti hu...par ye shalini kaha gayi ...

tannu-kya pata..hongi unke kamre me..ya bat kr rhi hohi unke fiace se...
"Tañnu...tannu.."ajeet aata hua tannu ko awaj deta hai...

tannu-ha papa...
papa-tum..tum school nahi gayi aj...
tannu-mere pas pese nahi the to kaise jaati..
papa-to mangne chahiye the na..or shalini kaha hai...
tannu-i dont know ,where she is?

papa soffe pr bethte hue -pata nahi ye angrej kaha se ye bhasha chhod gye..hmari to kuchh samajh me aata nahi hai..



introduction...
mr ajeet...family ke mukhiya ..age 51...gao me kisaan the...pr bete ki nokri ke bad...tha shahar me aagye.....

Usha-inki wife...filhal mayke gyi hui hai...

Raaj-inka beta...inka khud ka business hai...actually apni mahmat or kabiliyt se or ek dost ke partnership me ek college khol diya...college achha chal rha hai...peso ki ab koi kmi nhi...lekin family me koi bhi fijulkharcha nhi krta...shayad purane din sbko yaad hai..

Rajni-raj ki wife...inse 2 saal chhoti...pichhle saal hi inki shadi hui...nature kaaafi cool hai...friendly bahevaiour ...ek achhi padhi likhi bahu hai...kaafi sundr hai

shalini-ek khubsurat or sharmili ladki...itni sharam ki ,ladko se bat karne me bhi hichkichati hai..age 25 saal...inka rishta ho gaya hai...bas kuchh din bad shadi ho jayegi.. ....

arjun-age 22sal...graudation...sidha sa ladka....tannu se iski kabhi nahi banti...hmesha ladai jhagde...tannu or ye sath me bethte hai to sab inse door hone ki koshish karte hai...kyuki yha kab jwalamukhi fat jaye koi nahi jaanta...
tannu-sbse chhoti ladki...wese to achhi hai..pr baharwalo ke lie...ghar me iski sbpar dada giri chalti hai...or asal me ye sbki ladli bhi hai..shayad isi vajah se uski dadagiri chalti hai..

ye the is family ke sadasya ...kuchh character bad me ayenge unhe unke introduction kahani ke sath sath hote rahenge ..


aaj shalini ka birthday tha...isliye use sab puchh rahe the ..lekin shalini ka kuch ata pata nahi tha...
tannu use dhundne jaati hai...pahle use uske kamre me dhundti hai...fir bari bari sabhi kamre me dhundti hai...or akhir me thak haarkar upar chhat par jati hai..
wo dekhti hai ki,shalini wha bethi hui apne fiance se bat kar rhi thi...
tannu-oho...chori chori chupke chupke chupke...

shalini ekdm tannu ko wha dekhkar chaunk jati hai..
shalini-tannu...bhag yha se
tanuu-bdi ghutar ghutar kar bate ho rahi hai...
shalini phon ko kaan se hatkar-kya baat hai...kyu mujhe pareshan kar rhi hai..
tannu haste hue-niche papa bula rhe hai...

shalini-chal na tu aati hu bs
tannnu-to fir bta du ..niche sbko ki tum apne saajan se baat kar rahi ho
shalini gusse me-tannnu ki bachhi maar khaegi tu
tannu haste hue-to fir bolo...muh band karne ka kya milega..
shalini-bol..kya chahiye..
tannu-jada nahi...bas 500.
shalini hairani se-pagal hai kya ...itne to mere pas hai hi nahi..

tannu-i don't know..bas mujhe chahiye...warna
shalini-offho...kuch kam karle babu plss
tannu-hamare yaha bargennimg nahi hoti .... m sorry

shalini-ufff....plsss yar mere pas nahi hai itne
tannu kuchh sochti hui-okkk...fir picket khali karo...
shalini-whatt
tannnu-i said jitne bhi pocket me hai sb khali karo
shalini-dekh..200 hai..lene hai to bol
tannu-okk 300 udhar rahe..
shalini phon par bye bolkar muh sa bnate hue niche aajati hai
or tannu ko 200 rupey nikalkar use dedeti hai
tannu peso ko khushi khushi lekar wha se chali jati hai..

Raaj gym se ajata hai...rajnii rasoi me kaam kar rhi thi..

Raaj jaise hi rasoi me jata hai..rashmi ko kaam karte dekh wahi ruk jata ..
rashmi andar bhige balo kaam kar rhi thi...bhigo balo se pani tapakakar uski kakar se bah rha tha...jisme wo kaafi sunder lag rhi thi...

Raaj se raha nahi jata or wo jakar rajni ko ekdm pichhe se hug kar leta hai..
rajnii-are..kya kar rhe ho
arjun-meri jaan aj to tum kmal ki lag rahi ho...man kar rha hai ki
rajnii-kya man kar rha hai
arjun-yhi ki tumse babut sara pyar kru...
rajni-chhodiye...bhi.....hmesha shararat...
Raaj-kya yar...ab itni sunder or sexy lagogi to kaise control hoga ..

Rajni-control karna padega...ye din hai...or yha kabhi bhi koi bhi asakta hai
Raaj-koi nahi ayega meri jaan

''bhabhi...bhabhi''achank shalini ki awaj dono ke kaano me gunjti hai
rajni khud ko chhudwate hue-dekho..agyi tumhari bahan....ab chhodo
Raaj use chhod deta hai
tabhi shalini kamre me ajati hai
shalini-bhabhi...kya hua ...kyu bula rhe the mujhe..

Rashmi-wo...aaj tumhara birthday hai na...to btao kya bnau tumhare liye..
Shalini-bhabhi..aap pareshan mat hov ...mai bna lungi khana..
Rajni-nahi ...aj tumhara birthdayh hai..tum koi kaam nahi karogi

Shalini-uff ye kya bat hui..
Raaj-sahi to hai...aaaj tum moj karo...
shalini-par bhaiya...itan sara kaam bhabhi kaise karegi akele..

Raaj-kar legi..ek din me kuchh nahi hota ...wese bhi tumhare bad to isi ko karna hai sabkuchh
Shalini kitchen se ajib sa muh bnakr nikal jati hai..
Rajni-chalo ap ap bhi....
Raaj bhi kitchen se nikal jata hai....

lekin use samne se tannu aaati hui dikhai deti hai
tannu arjun to dekhkar muskurane lagti hai
arjun-kya...dant kyu dikha rhi hai
tannu-aise hi...tannu muskurate hue kitchen me ghus jati hai..

arjun apne man me-iski hasi bahut khatarnak hai...hey bhgawan ...bacha ham sbko

tannu kichen me jakar ekdm Rajni ko pichhe se hug kar letti hai
Rajni-hato ji..fir agye aap....kitni bar samjhaya hai din me ye sab thik nahi...
Tannu-sachhi..

Rajni chaunkte hue pichhe hat'ti hai
Rajni-tannu tum
Tannu-hahaha...mugambo khush hau...ab nikalo 3000 rupey...nahi to ghar me Sabko bta dungi...ki tum log kichen me gulchharre udate ho
rajnii-ham pati patni hai...tum jisko kahogi wo tumhe hi dantega...
tannu-3000 dedo bhabhi...warna?...
rajni -warna kya..

tannnu-mujhse panga mahanga pad sakta hai..
rajni-dekh lungi...par bar bar tumhare is blackmail me nahi aungi...
tannu-okay...dekh lena fir...
tannu muskurati hui bahar chali jati hai...


evening,,,at dinner time
sabhi baithkar khana kha rhe the
.bas rajni ke alawa

Rajni andar kamre me thi....diining table par ajit,shalini,arjun,tannu or raaj bethe the..

Raaj jaise hi pahla tukda muh me dalta hai,ekdm tannu ki taraf dekht hai...uske bad ajit khana ka pahla tukda muh me dalte hi...raaj ki taraf dekhta hai,,,raaj ka bhi same reaction tha..
shalini bhi pahle tukde ko satak nahi pati muh me rokkar hi sbhi ki taraf dekhne lagti hai..

ajeet ki najar sbhi ko smile ke sath dekh rhi tannu par padti hai
ajeet saree kahani samajh jata hai
or ekdm se rajni ko awaj lgata hai
''bahu....bahu...''ajeet ki kadak awaj sunkar jaha sabhi chaunk or dar jate hai..
whi tannu khush ho jati hai
rajni ajeet ki awaaj sunkar bhagii hui aati hai
or akar chupchap khadi ho jati hai..
sabhi ajeet ko dekh rhe the...ki patanahi ajeet kya kahega
ajeet-bahu ye sbji...



ajeet ki baat ko tannu bich me hi kaat detai hai
tannu-bahut bekar ban rhi hai na..mirch ki jagah sugar daal di...saree sabji meethi ho gyi hai..ye sabji thi...halwa nahi...bhabhi ko kuchh nahi aata banana....
ajeet-ha ...islie..kalse tannu bnaegi sabji...
ajeet ki bat sunkar sbhi ko andar adar hasi chhoot jati hai...
or tannu ki sitti bitii gul ho jati hai..
tannu-mai..

ajeet-ha tum..bahu ko to bnani nahi aati na...islie ab tum bnaogi..
tanuu para jishan si hoti hui-par papa
shalini-tannu sabji bahut acchi bnati hai..
raaj-sirf sabji ku roti bhi acchha bnati hai..
tannu raz ko badi msumiyat se dekh rahi thi..
ajeet-haa...bahu...ye lo...ajeet rahsmi ko 3000 deta hai
''hotel se kuchh order kar do''
tannu-pr papa...hotel se khana to bs a1500 ya 200 ka ayega

ajeet-ha bahu ..jo baachenge unhe tum rakh lena..
tannu ka chhra dekhne layak tha...
rajni andar jakar hotel se khana order karti hai...
kuchh der me khana aajata hai...or sb pet bhar khana khate hai..
raat 9bje...
tannu badbdati hui rajni ke kamre me jati hai..
tannu-bhabhi....
rajnii or raaj use dekhkar hasne lagte hai
tannu-kyu has rhe ho aap sab..
raaj-kalse to bhai tannu ke hath ki tasty sbji khane ko milegi
..
tannu rotda sa muh bna leti hai
rajni-bechari...galat karne chali thi or...khud fas gyi..and thanks..khana bs 1500 ka aaya...mujhe 1500 mil gaye...bs tumhari vbajah se

tannu-its not good bhabhhi...
rajni-kya not good...
tannu-mujhse nahi bnega khana...mere baski nahi hai
raaj-kya jrurat thi...khane me sugar dalne ki
tannu-wo to bas..bhabhi ko pareshan karne ke lie..
rajni-hahah...mugambo khush hua.......
tannu kitkit karte hue kamrae se bahar nikal jati hai.....


usha apne mayke se arha thi...
bahut tez barish ho rahi thi... Apne bete ko phon krne ki kosis ki..pr phon barish me bhig gya tha.....usha ko samajh nahi aaya ki kya kre...

usha ko ek auto wala dikhai dete hai..
usha-bhaiya...bank colony chaloge kya
''madam itni barish ho rhi hai...kaise chale''

usha-mai apko double pese dungi...barish lagta hai bahhut der tak nahi rukne wali
''double pese ke sath 100 or dene honge...bolo to chalu...''

usha kuch sochne lagatai hai...
usha-thik hai chaliye
usha auto me bethkar chalne lagti hai...
bahut tej barish thi...sadak par charo taraf paani bhara hua tha....
baarish ki raftar itni tej thi ki kuch dikhai bhi nahi de rha tha....
kuch dur jane ke bad use achanak ek cheekh sunai deti hai...chekh itni tej thi ki auto wala bhi darkar auto rok deta hai..
usha hairani se-ye kya hai
''pta nahi madam..kisi ladki ki cheeekh hai''
usha-hame dekhna chahiye
''wo awaj us jungle se arhi hai...koi murder ka mamla ho sakta hai..koi chudail...bhut...kuch bhi...wese bhi ys jungle me bhut hai...aisa suna hai maine..'' auto wala usha ko smjhata hua bolta hai...

''aaaaaaaaaaaa.....aaaaaa...aaaaaa''fise 3 bar ye awaj jungle se bahut tej arhi thi
usha ko dar bhi lag rha tha..
usha-koi musibat me bhi ho sakta hai bhaiya...


''mai nahi jaunga...''
usha-plss bhaiya chalo...mai akeli nahi ja sakti ...bs dur se dekhege koi galat hua to bhag aayenge
auto wala kuch sochta hai-thik hai...age aap chalna..
usha barish me hi chal deti hai...

cheekh ki awaaj ab bhi aarhi thi..
usha or drivr darte darte us taraf badhte ja rhe the..
usha-dar to lag rha hai bhaiya..pr koi ladki kisi musibt me hui to...aise kisi ko hm kaise musibat me chhod sakte hai

wo dono dhire dhire smbhalte hue age badh rhe the...
ab awaj ekdm unke karib hui ja rhi thi...or jaise jaaise awaaj pas hoti ja rhi thi..unke dil ki dhadkan bhi badhti ja rhi thi..

ab wo awaj ke pas pachuh gye the..
chaunk gye dekhakr ye awaj ek ped se aarhin thi...
usha-ped se awaaj..

''bhut madam bhut...maine pahle ki kaha tha...yha bhut hai...bhagho yha se..''


usha or wo driver wha se chalne wale hi hote hai ki ekdm firse tej awaj me awaje aati hai..
is bar cheekh itni tej thi ki ...dono ko apne kaano par hath rakhna pada...
driver -madam bhagiye yha se..
wo dono pichhe ki taraf bhagne lagte hai... ...usha chalti chalti achank ruk jati hai..

''kya hua madam chaliye''
usha-bhaiya wo ped bahut bada tha na..
''ha madam''
usha-aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki koi us ped ke pichhe ho koi...
driver sochne lagta hai

''madam wo kisi insan ki awaj nahi thii...itni tej insan nahi bol sakta...or ye baat sb jànte hai ki is jungke me bhut hai...yha ke ped nhi kaat ski sarkar...''

usha-ha pr....hanuman chalisa pdhte huye chalte hai...mai ja rhi hu...us ped ke pichh dekhugi ek bar...

''madam aap marwaegi mujhe bhi..agar wo bhut hi hua to...''
usha-hm ekbar dekhege bs ..ped ke piche
driver-to fir ghumkar chalte hai...dur se hi dekh lenge
usha -ha ye thik hai..

usha or driver pure bheg chuke the...
barish rukne ka naam nahi le rhi thi
usha or driver ghumkar jate hai...or us ped ke karib paas hi pahuch jate hai
usha ki ankhank ankhe badi ho jaati hai..or us driver ki bhi

samne ek ladki karib 20,22saal ki ekdm nangi...ped pr kamar lgaye...ghutne modkar ghutno me muh chhhipaye...sardi se kamp rahi thi..or cheekh rahi thi..

usha-ye kon hai..
driver-bhut hai madam...chudail hai...
usha uski taraf chal deti hai...or wo driver bhi...dono dre hue the...us ladki ka chehra bhi nahi dikhai de rah tha...samne ki taraf baal bikhre pade the...ghutno ko modkar muh ghutno me chhupaya hua tha...
usha ekdm uske paas pahuch jati hai..
usha-kon ho tum..

wo ladki koi jawab nahi deti..
usha-kon ho btao..
Is driver ke ti hosh hde hue the...koi ladki bina kapdo ke jungle...dr wali bat to hai hi..
Usha ke awaj dene pr bhi
wo ladki bas muh ghutno me chhupaye roye ja rhi thi..

driver darta hua-kk..kon ho tum..
driver usse puchne ke lie uske kandhe par touch karta hai...
or touch karte hi...ek hatrnak jhatka ...bijli ka current jaise driver ko lagta hai..or driver kerib 10 meter dur jaa girta hai..
ankhe fat jati hai usha ki ye scene dekhakr..

wo ladki ab bhi ghutno me sar diye bethi thi...
usha -bhaiya...ye kya..hua
Usha driver ko uthane ke lie jaati hai...pr driver tb tk khud uth jaata hai..

''maine kaha tha madam...ye koi chudail hai....iske andar current hai...chalo yha sae..mare jayenge ham..."


Usha-tum chahe koi bhut pret hi sahi...hm tumhara koi nuksan krne nhi aaye...tumhari madad krne aaye hai...
Usha-hey bhgwan...na ise chhodkr jane ka mn kr rha...kon hai ye...kya hai.....itni barish me...

''madam aap pagal ho gyi ho kya...chalo...wo schme chudai hai..."
Usha achank apna duppatta uthake us ldki ke upr upar se hi daal deti hai...
Wo ldki duppte khud ke upar dalte hi ekdm se harkat me aati hai...
Or apne apko dekhti hai...or dupatto se khud ko jada sa cover krti hai....
Or ekdm muh uthakr upr ki taraf usha ko dekhti hai...

"Hey bhgwan...itni sundar ldki...mene aajtk nhi dekhi..."uska uska bheega hua chhera dekhkar sochti hai...

Wo driver bhi drta hua uske paas aata hai...or hairan rah jaata hai...
Driver-chudai itni sundr bhi hoti hai kya...

Usha-kon ho tum...kya naam hai tumhara...
Wo ladki hairani se ankhe chodi kiya usha ko dekhe jaa rhi thi...kuch bol nhi rhi thi...
Driver-kon ho tum bahan...
Wo ldki ab driver ki taraf dekhne lgti hai...



Driveer-ye kuch bolti kyu nhi....
Usha-shayad kisi ne ise yha presan krke chhoda hai...ise sadma beth gya hai...
Driver usha ko baat ko smjhta hua-agr aisa hota to iske shrir pr jakhm hote...iske kapde aaspas hote....
Usha-beti kya nam hai tumhara......
Jb koi bolta...wo ldki bs uski taraf ko hairani dekhne lgti hai...

Wo ldki usha ko or driver ko upar se niche tak kai baar dekh chuki thi.....

Usha-ye to kuchh bol nhi rhi...
Usha aage bdhti hai uss touch krne ke lie...
Driver-madam use touch mt krna...current lgta hai...
Usha fr bhi drte drte uske kandho ko touch kti hai...
Usha ko kuch nhi hota...driver ye dekhkar hairan ho jaata hai...
Usha-uske kahnde se hilakar use puchhti hai...
Usha-kon ho tum...

Ldki fir se usha ki taraf dekhne lgti hai...
Uska-driver bhaiya...plss auto me se mere kmpdo ka bag utha lao...
Driver-mai akela nhi jaunga...
Usha-fr ap yha ruko..mai jati hu...
Driver-nhi...nahi...mai jaata hu...driver darta hua bolta hai..

Usha-ha bhaiya...jaldi jao...
Driver auto ki taraf chal deta hai...
Usha-beti tum kon ho.....yha kaise aayi.....
Wo ldki idhar udhar dekhti hai...charo taraf dekhti hai...fir asman me dekhti hai...fir se usha ko dekhne lgti hai...
Usha ko uspr bahut dya arhi thi...pr ek dr bhi tha...ki pta nhi ye kon hai...or wo ghatna nhi bhula ja skti...jb driver ko current lga tha....

Itne me driver kapde le aata hai...
Usha apna bag kholti hai...
Usha-driver bhaiya...ap udhar muh krlo...isko kapde pahnane hai...
Driver dusri taraf muh kr leta hai...
Usha use suit salwar deti hai...
Usha-ye lo beti...pahanlo...inhe...
Wo ldki suit salwar lekar unhe dekhne lagti hai...

Kabbi suit ko palat'ti hai...to kabhi salwar ko...
Usha-pahan lo inhe...
Fir se usha ki taraf dekhne lgti hai..
Usha bag se ek saree nikalti hai...
Usha-ye lo...ise pahno...

Wo ldki saree ko lakar bhi use idhar udhar krke dekhne lgti hai...
Usha-khadi ho...mai pahnati hu...
Lakdi kuchh nhi bolti..bs chupchap bethi rahti hai...
Uska uska hath pakadkr use khada krti hai..pr wo ldki itna bhari thi...ki usha pr uthi nhi nhi...bad me ladki khud khadi hoti hai...
Usha-tum itni bhari kyu ho...moti bhi nhi ho...
Wo ldki kuchh nhi bolti...bs us duppte ko khud se lapatne ki koshish kr rhi thi...jaise apne sharir ko chhipane ki kosish kr rhi ho...
Usha us dupatte ke upr hi...uspr saree lapetne shuru kr deti hai ..
Wo ladki pahle idhar udhar hath per marti hai...pr fr shanti se khadi ho jaati hai....

"Madam....ab mai dekh sakta hu kya...."
Usha-haa...dekh lijiye...
Driver bhi ab is taraf muh kr leta hai...
Saree ulti sidhi uske sharir se lipti thi...

Usha-chalo ab yha se...
Wo ldki fir se usha ke honto ko dekhne lgti hai...
Usha-chalo..
Uska uska hath pakadkr use chalne ke lie jor lgati hai...pr wo ldki usha se hili tak nhi...

Ldki uske mn ki baat ko smjhti hui..ek kadam bdhati hai...or ekdm gir padti hai...

Usha-aree....kya hua....isse chala bhi nahi jaa rha......
Usha use firse uthati hai...
Driver-per me chot hai kya...
Use dekhti hai...per ekdm thik the...
Usha-nahi...thik hai sb kuchh...
Usha-chlo beti...

Usha firse uska hath pakadkr use sahara dene ki koshish krti hai...pr wo jese hi kadam bdhati hai...fir se gir padti hai....

Usha-bhaiya auto yhi laana hoga...isse chala nhi jaa rha...
Auto wala auto whi le ata hai...
Auto ki lite jaise hi us ldki ke chehre pr pdti hai...
Ankho pr hath rkhkr wo ekdm cheekh maarti hai...

Anuto wala bhi dr jaata hai...
Usha-kya hua...
Wo ldki ankho pr hath rkhe hue the...or cheekh rhi thi...dr rhi thi...

Usha-bhaiya lite band kro...ise problm hai lite se.....
Auto wala-bhut ko hi lite se problm hoti hai lgta hai budhiya ka time aagya...or mera bhi..... lite band kr leta hai...
Autowala fusfusata hai...

Tb jaakr ldki chahre se hath htaati hai....
Usha-kyaa hua...lite hi to thi wo...
Ladki ghabrayi hui si auto ki taraf dekhne lgti hai...
Usha-bhaiya...hme ise pakadkr kisi trh auto me bithana pdega....isse chala nhi jaa rha...
"Nahi madam...mai ise hath nhi lgaunga...mujhe pahle bhi current maara isne..."autowala ghbrata hua bolta hai..
Usha-nhi ho rha kuch...dekho...mene bhi to ise pakda hai na..

Auto wala ghbrata hua bahar nikalta hai...or darte hue pahle ek ungli us ldki ke hath par lgata hai...
Ldki use hairani se dekhne lgti hai...
Autowala-ha...ab to kuchh nhi ho rha....
Usha-kaise bhi krke ise andar auto me bithao bhaiya....

Badi muskhli se jaise taise krke dono us ldki ko auto me bithaate hai.....
Auto ki jaise hi andar ki lite jalti hai...ldki fir se cheekhe marne lgti hai...ek hath apni ankho pr or ek lite ki taraf krti hai...
Usha-lite band kro...jaldi...
Autowala lite bnd kr deta hai...

Tb jakar us ldki ko rahat si milti hai...
Usha-chalo ab...lite mt jalana.....
Autowala chal deta hai...
Autowala-ye ajib hai...bina kapdo ke mili...ye kuchh bol nhi rhi...mene jese hi ise hath lgaya current lga...light ko dekhlar cheekhe marti hai...kon hai ye.....sb lakshan chudailo wale hai...jai hanuman gyan gun sagar...auto wala hanuman chalisa badbdana shuru kr deta hai...

Usha-pta nhi...prr....dikhti to kisi achhe gharane ki hai....
Autowala-police sataion chale madam...
Usha-wo log iski halat nhi smjhenge...ek kam kro...ise mai apne ghar le jaati hu...subah police me khabar kr dungi...

"Subah tk ghar me sb jinda bachoge tb na...sbko kha jayegi ye..."auto wala sochta hai...

Autowala-sambhalr madam...ye koi gang ki chal bhi ho sakti hai...
Usha-hm itni baate kr rhe hai...iske chehre pr ek bar bhi esa bhav nhi aaya...ki use kuch smjh me aaya ho...jo bhi hai bhaiya...dekha jayega...ap bs chalte rhiye...

Krib 15min tak chalte rhte hai ye log...un 15min me wo ldki kabhi usha ko dekhti...to kabhi driver ko...kabhi bahar pedo ko dekhti...to kabhi auto ke andar ki chijo...lg rha tha...jaise kuchh jaane...kuchh smjhne ko koshish kr rhi hai wo....

Usha-bhaiya...bas rokna...yhi mera ghar hai...
Autowala rokta hai...
Usha-isko utarwao...
Autowala or usha us ladki ko utarte hai...wo ldki niche ek hi jagah khadi ho jaati hai...
Or us colony ko dekhne lgti hai...ek alg hi jigyasa ke sath...

Usha-bhaiya...jra andar se mere bete ko or bula do bs....mai ise andar nhi le ja paungi....
Auto wala andar jaakr aawaaj deta hai...dor bell bjata hai...

Raaj awaaj sun leta hai...or uske sath rajni bhi jaag jaati hai...
Rajni i-istime kon hai...
Raaj-kya pta..
Raaj baahr aata hai...or gate kholta hai...
Autowala-sahab...wo apki maa...
Raaj hairani se usha ko dekhkar.-mummy...ap istime...ap to kal aane wali thi na...or call krke btaya bhi nhi...
Usha-haa beta...mera phon barish me bheeg gya...

Raaj us ldki ko dekhta hua-ye kon hai..
Raaj usko upar se niche tak dekhta hai...ajib halat me thi wo...saree panhi thi pr wo abhi ajib trh se...bs ese hi Lapeti hui thi...or wo idhar udhar paglo ki taraf dekhe jaa rhi thi...

Usha-ye sb baad me...achha bhaiya...ye aap apke pese lo...usha apne purse se pese nikalne lgti hai...

Autowala-nhi madam rahne dijiye....
Usha-are ...kya hua...pese lijiye na...
Autowala-nhi madam...itna khtra hote hue bhi...apne insaniyat dikhai...to kya esi barish me mai apke kaam nhi aasakta...koi baat nhi...is ldki ka khayal rkhiyega...or apna bhi..
Autowala chal deta hai...

Raaj-mummy kon hai ye...orr..
Usha-bataugi prr pahle ek kaam kr...andar jaakr sb lite band krdena...candels jlao...or sbko jga dena...

Raaj-prrr kyuu...lites kuu band kru...
Usha-are btaugi...abhi hm barish me khade hai ...jaldi kr...
Raaj andar jaakr sb lite bnd krdeta hai....or ek do candels jla leta hai...
Or sbhi ko jaga deta hai...
Raaj-ha mummy...

Dhire dhire sbhi bahar ki taraf aate hai...
Itni bheed ko dekhkar firse wo ldki drne lgti hai...or usha ke seene me sr chhipane ki koshish krne lgti hai...

Usha-uske man ki baat smjh jaati hai...
Usha-andar jao sb...or sb eksath mt khade hona...ise bheeed se dar lg rha hai...
Tannu-mom ye kon hai...
Usha-beta btaungi...andar jao sb...bheed mt kro...rajni tum aao...ise pakadwakar andar le chalo...
Rajni-kyu...ye chal nhi sakti kya...
Usha-nhi chal sakti...jaldi aao...
Rajnii or usha jaise taise use andar le jaate hai...

Arjun bhi hairani se ye sb dekh rha rha...
Andar jaakr sbse pahle uski najar candel pr padti hai...rajni or usha use chatai(mat)pr bitha dete hai...kyuki uske kapde geele the...

Usha-koi nya saree lao...
Rajni uske lie koi dusri saree laati hai..
Or ussha use bahut mushkil se jaise taise nyi dusri saree pahnati hai...
Or bahar aati hai...

Usha uska kamra bahar se band kr deti hai...or bahar aakr lite jlaati hai...or apne kamre me jaakr pahle change krti hai...
Sbhi is ummid me usha ko aate jaate dekh rhe the...ki wo kb kuchh btayegi...
Kapde change krke usha bahar aati ha...or bahar ki lite jla deti hai...
Ajit-kon hai wo ladki...

Usha-btati hu...pr tum log meri baat pr vishwas krna ...or drna mt...
Ajeet-bolo...
Usha -mai auto se aarhi rhi...jungle se cheekh aayi...is ldki ki...mai or wo autowala dekhne gye to...ye bina kapdo ke wha ek ped ke niche bethi thi...or srdi se kamp rhi thi...
Tannu-so sad...

Usha-dya aarhi hai na tannu uspr...
Tannu-haa mummy aayegi hi na...
Usha-uss jb autowale ne touch kiya to...kmte km 10meter dur jaa gira wo...iske andar se current lga use...
Sb chaunk jaate hai sunkr...

Rajnii-prr mujhe to kuch nhi lga..esa kesa ho sakta hai...
Usha-mujhe nhi pta ye kon hai..lite se drti hai....hmari baato ko nahi samajh rhi....
Ajeet-kahi pagal to nahi....
Usha-pagal hoti to...ek orar ki ijjt kya hoti hai.....kese jaanti...ye wha jungle me bina kapdo ke thi...hme dekhkar buri trh simat gyi thi...dr tha ise ki koi iske sharir ko na dekhle...kya koi pagal aisa kregi...

Ajeet-haa pr...fr hai kon ye...orr...current lgna...
Usha-pta nhi...kuchh samaajh me nhi aarha...
Shalini-mummy...ye koi chor...ya kisi gunde ka plan bhi ho sakta hai...

Usha-ab mai le aayi beta...jo bhi hoga dekhege...pr ise aise mai nhi chhod sakti thi...
Tann-uska naam kya hai...

Usha-wo na bol pa rhi hai...na sun smjh pa rhi hai hmari baaat..or to or usse chala bhi nhi jaa rha...or hairani ki bat ye hai ki...usko chot bhi nahi hai...fir chal kyu nhi sakti wo...

Ajeet-aao dekhte hai use...
Usha-lite band krdo....wo dr jaati hai...
Sbhi lite band kr dete hai...or sb idhar udhar khade ho jaate hai...jise bheed si na lge...kamre me ek candle lekar usha jaati hai...
Usha dekhkti hai ki use candle se koi problm nhi ho rhi.....

Ajeej andar jaata hai pahle...baki sb udhar udhar se dekh rhe the...koi khidki se...koi side se...
Ajeet-tumhara nam kya hai...
Wo ladki ajeet ki taraf ajib tarah se dekhne lgti hai...
Ajeet-bhuk lgi hai...khana khana hai kya..
Ldki koi response nhi karti...
Ajeet kuch sochte hue-raaj...iska murder krdo...police ko kah denge ki hmare ghar me chori karne aayi thi...

Ladki fir bhi bina koi reaction ke ajeet ke chehre ko dekhe jaa rhi thi...
Ajeet-iske chehre pr koi reaction nhi aaya...ye schme hmari baat nhi samajh rhi........


ajib hai...

Tannu-lagta hai kisi or desh se aayi hai...
Ajeet-chehre dekho...indian hai...
Shalini-or kitni sundar hai ye...
Shalini-papa mai baat kru...plsss
Ajeet bahar aata hai...
Shalini-hello....kya tum mujhse dosti krogi...

Shalini uske pas bethkr uske samne apna hath age badhati hai...
Pr wo ldki bs shalini ke chehre ko dekhe ja rhi thi.....
Shalini-ye shhme kuchh nhi bol rhi.....ise khana khilaye kya...

tannu ek plate me uske lie khana lekar aati hai...
Shalini uske samne khane ki plate kr deti hai...

Ladki khane ki plate ko ajeeb tarah se dekhne lgti hai...
Shalini-khao na...
Shalini ki awaj sunkr firse shalini ko dekhne lgti hai...
Shalini apne hath se ek tukda uthati hai...
Ajeet or usha ghbra jaate hai...
Ajeet-nhi beti...uske muh me tukda mt dena...pta nhi....mujhe ye ajib lg rhi hai..
Shalini kuchh nahi sunte hue apne hath se ek tukda uthati hai...or uske muh ke samne kr deti hai.....

Wo ladki muh nhi kholti...bs tukde ko dekhne lgti hai...
Shalini ek tukda khud khaati hai...
Wo lakdi usko khate hue dekhne lgti hai...
Ab shalini dusra tukda use deti hai....
Wo ladki ab muh kholti hai...
Or shalini uske muh me tukda daal deti hai...
Sbhi ke chehre pr smile aajati hai...
Wo ladki tukda ko dhire dhire chabane lgti hai...

Lekin ekdm use khaansi uthti hai...
Shalini-paani...paani lao...
Arjun jaldi se paani lata hai...
Shalini use paani pilaati hai...paani pite pite wo ladki vomating kr deti hai...
Sbhi ghabra jaate hai...
Shalini uski vomationh ko saaf krti hai...

Ajeet-ye kya ho rha hai yrrr...smjh nhi aarha...ye khana bhi nhi kha paa rhi...pani tak pine se ise problm ho rhi hai...
Usha-hmari family doc hai...unhe bulaiye...
Ajeet-ab...
Shalini-haa papa bulaiye...

Ajeet apne ek personal doc ko phon krta hai...
Doc bhi emmergency samajh jaldi hi aajata hai...
Doc-kya hua sharma ji...itnu rat ko kya problm aagyi...
Ajeet-ji...meri bhanji hai...wo aayi thi aaj...prr kuch kha pi nhi rhi achank...
Ajeet kuchh chhipata hua bolta hai...

"Are sharma ji...itni si baat...abhi dekh lete hai ..
Ajeet-thodi parrshan si bhi dikhai de rhi hai...
Doc-are pr lite ku band ki hai...
Ajeet-wo...barish ki vajah se kite gyi hui hai...inverrter imergency ke kie band kiya hai...
Doc-are pr...ye candels ki lite me mai...reading kaise lunga...
Raaj-wo mai bta dunga...ap chek kriye...
Doc us ladki ke pas jaata hai...usha us ldki ko araam se lita deti hai..

Doc sthethoscope apne kaano me lgata hai...or jaise hi stethoscope uske seene se lgata hai...
"Dhammmm...dhammmm..."
"Aaaa...iii maa..."doc ekdm chillata hua stethoscope apne kaano se nikalkr fenk deta hai...

Doc ke chillane se ekdm wo ldki drkr khadi ho jaati hai...or rone lgti hai...
...usha use dilasa dilati hai...doc bahar chala jaata hai drkr...
Ajeet-doc kya hua...

Doc-tum pagal ho...kon hai ye...ye ...ye insan nhi hai...
Doc drta hua bolta hai...
Ajeet-kyaa baat kr rhe ho...yar..insan hai...saaf dikh rha hai...

Doc-uske dil ki dhadkan suno...kan fat jaate mere ...aisa lga jaise koi dimak me hathoda maar rha ho...
Raaj-kaisi baat kr rhe ho doc uncle...wo insan hai....

Doc-pagal mt bno...wo koi chudail hai...
Ajeet-ek kaam kro...uski nervers check kro...
Doc-bhaad me jao tum log...
Doc chal deta hai ..
Ajeet-doc ruko ek min....
Doc ruk jaata hai...
Ajeet-agar wo chudail nhi hai to...koi dusra option kya ho sakta hai...uske hone ka...
Doc kuchj sochta hua-yaar uski hearteat sunkr dekho...tum khud kahoge ki chudail hai...tumhe samajh nhi aata...
Usha-itne pdhe likhe hokr bhi ese bhuut pret jaisi baate kr rhe ho...

Doc-jo hai wo hai yar....agr tumhe bahra hona hai to tum sunlo ek bar uski heart beat....pta lgega...
Ajeet-doc chudail hai...thik hai...lekin agar 1%wo chudail nhi hui...or ilaj na hone ki vajah se mr gyi...to socho...ab wo esi hai...to mrkr kesi chudail bnegi...tum ilaaj nhi kr rhe...sbse pahle tumhe hi upar pahuchayegi...

Doc-dekho sharma ji...ye tumhari baato me mai nhi aanewala...
Raaj-doctoer uncle...ab is mamle me aap fas to hgye ho hi...to kyu bhag rhe ho...isse achha hai kuchh achha hi kar do...kya pta ..wo chudail aisa krne se apko baksh de...
Tannu-pr kuch nhi kiya...to pkka wo nhi bakshegi.....

Doc-kaise insan ho yar...tumhe dr nhi lgta...
Raaj-drna kya hai...wo upr wale ke bina ek ptta bhi nahi hilta...jb maut aani hogi to mr hi jayege...prrr ..jo hmare ghar aaya hai...use mrne ke lie nhi chhod skte .
Doc kuchh sochne lgta hai.....

Raaj-achha heartbeat mt check kijiye...prrr hme ye btaiye use khana kaise khilaye...
Doc-pahle mujhe sch btao...wo kon hai...30saal ka carrier me...aj tk na to suna na dekha aisa case...itni tej dil ki dhadkna kisi ki hoti hi nhi hai...

Usha ab majbur thi use sch btane ko...kyuki doc adha sach to jaan hi chuka tha...ab kisi or ko bulane se acha hai...usi ko sb sch btade...

Usha doc ko sari baat ekdm sch sch btati hai...wo current wali bhi...
Doc ki ankhe badi ho jaati hai sun sunkr..

Doc-yrr jungle me kon is halat me bethta hai...us jungle ke bare me kuch suna hai ya nhi...current maarti hai....kya tumhe ab bhi mai bewkuf lag rha hu...are wo chudail hai...

Usha-prr usne abbi tak hme nuksan nhi pahuchaya...or hm chahte hai bs aap hmari thodi si madad kro...
Doc-madad...apni maut ko bulakar...are wo tumhe sbko kha jaeygi...kmsekm mujhe to baksho...

Ajeet-doc agr wo bhut na hui...to socho tumhe kitna bda paap lgega...
Doc-ajib bewkuf ho yar....current marti hai...heart breat dj sound ke jaisi hai...us bhyank jungle se ayi ..fir bhi nhi man rhe...tum logo se bda bewkuf koi nhi hai..

Usha-hme nhi pta...pr wo ldki hmare ghr aayi hai...wo hmara bura kre ya achha...hmara karm hai usko bachana...
Ajeet-doc plss...kuchh karo...wo khana bhi nahi kha pa rhi...use bhuk hai...pr nhi kha pa rhi...wo mr jayegi ese rhegi to...
Doc ko wo log sarasr bewkuf lg rhe the...pr fir bhi doc unke request krne pr ek bar fir taiyar ho jaata hai...
Doc-thik hai ao...

Doc andar jaata hai...ab andar 3log eksath chale gye the...
Fir bhi us ladki ne unhe dekhkar kuch reaction nahi kiya...
Ajeet,raaz or doc andar the..
Doc uske paas jaakr-chudail mata...plsss...maaf krna...ye log apki mahanta se anbhigya hai...nadaan hai....
Ajeet-doc kya kr rhe ho...kuch kro na..

Doc-aa....aapka naam kya hai...bhut...nahi nahi...chudail mata...
Doc kampti awaaj me bolta hai...
Wo ladki apna ek hath aage bdhati hai...
Uska hath kamp rha tha...bahut jaada...wo kampte hatho se uska stethoscope ko touch krke use dekhne lgti hai.....
Ajeet-doc...iske hath kamp kyu rhe hai..
Doc-mujhe nhi pta......
Doc-kya ise bs vomating hui thi khate samay...
Ajeet-haa...bs ...

Doc-khilaiye...hath jodkr khilana...ki chudail mata plss bhog lga lo...shayad khale
Ajeet-koi medicine vgera...


Doc-yar...ab isme kya medicine du...agr ye chudail nhi hai,jo ki impossible hai..to...ho sakta hai...sardi ki vajah se aisa lag rha ho...ise halka garam krke paani do pahle...itni der se barish me thi...shayad sardi lgi hai...
Ajeet-to koi medicine do...
Doc kuchh sochta hua-ise medicine mt do...bs araam krne do...balki ise sone do ab...subah dekhna...ise garm paani do bs abhi...baaki subah dekhna...okk mai chalta hu...
Doc bs apna pichha chhudana chahta tha..

Or doc wha se chala jaata hai..
Ajeet-tannu...jao garam paani krwakr lao...
Tannu garam paani laati hai...
Ajeet uske pas jaata hai...
Ajeet-ye lo...paani piyo...
Ajeet uske muh ki taraf glas kr deta hai...
Lekin wo ldki kabhi glas ko dekhti hai...or kabhi ajeet ko...


Shalini ko kuchh yaad aata hai..
Wo andar jaati hai...or usko hath ko jodkr paani pine ka ishara krti hai...
Wo ldki hatho ko jod leti hai...pr uske hath ese kamp rhe the ..ki usme paani rukna mushkil tha...
Ajeet shalini ko glaas deta hai...or khud hatho ko jodkr usme paani daalne ko kahta hai...
Shalini paani daalti hai...
Ajeet hatho ke us ldki ki taraf kr deta hai..
Wo ladki smjhkar ... paani pine lgti hai..
Sb bahut khush hote hai....shalini or paani hath me daalti hai...wo ldki paani piti rahti hai...shalini or paani daalti...pr us ldki ki pyaas hi nahi mit rhi thi..jitna paani garam kiya tha...sara paani pi gyi thi wo...

Shalini-papa...agr isko kuchh khilakar bhi dekhe kya...
Ajeet-hmm ...le aao...tum hi khilana...
Shalini fir se khana le aati hai...or fir se pahle ki tarah use khilaane ki koshish krti hai...
Ek tukda firse us ldki ke muh ke paas laati hai..
Wo ladki jese hi khane ki kosis krti hai....pure tukde ko ekdm thuk deti hai...
Raaj-ye to bhut ganda kr rhi hai ...ghar me..

Ajeet-rhne do....wo nhi khayegi...ab isko ek blanket do...or sone do...
Sb us ldki ko ek blanked dekar bahar ajate hai...or ajib ajib baate sochne lgte hai...


Koi bhut smjh rha tha to koi insan...sbki ek alag soch thi.....lekin kisi ko usse dr nh lg rha tha...vajah..uska masoom chehra...aisa lg rha tha dekhkar jaise kitne dukho ko jhelkar ye ldki aayi hai

"Weldone....hame tumse yhi ummid thi...tumne bahut hi shandar trike se us acp ko hmate raste se hta diya...bahut khub...jab tak tum jaise log hmare sath hai..ye acp jaise ek to kya...10 bhi aajaye...to bhi hmara kuchh nhi bigad sakte...."ek aadmi suit pant me idhar se udhar chalta hua bolta hai...
Uske aspas 5,6log gun liye khade tha...or samne ek lambe baalo wala admi betha tha...

"Its my pleassure sir......suna hai bomb blast me...kaafi log maare gye...happy to see this.."lambe balo wala aadmi wine ka glas uthata hua bolta hai...

"Nahi.....ye to kuch bhi nhi......agr ye acp hmare kai plan ko fail nhi krta..hmari manzil ke bich me nhi aata...to isse bhi bda dhamaka hone wala tha...khair...koi baat nhi...ab hme hmare asli mission ko anjam dena hoga...government or media ka pura dhyan is samay us blast pr hai...yhi sahi moka hai.......apne kaam ko anjam dene ka..." Wo aadmi us lambe baal wale aadmi ke samne betha hai...or wine ka glass leta hua bolta hai...





"Yaar...akaash...yha college me hm sbki koi na koi gf hai...are gf chhod...hm sb...kisi na kisi se ko like krte hai...are like bhi chhod, hm sb kisi ne kisi pr line marte hai...are line bhi chhod hm sb ldkiyo ko to dekhte hi hai...are ladkiyo ko chhod,ham..."

"Tu sb baate hi chhod na...bat hi kyu kr rha hai...are bolna kya chahta hai bhai..."akash apne dost Jay se puchta hai...

Jay-are...matlb...yaar...tu kisi ko like kyu nhi krta....teri koi gf kyu nhi...tu kisi ldki ko kyu nhi dekhta...ye to sb vichar dimak me aana...natural hai na...jay akash ko upr se niche tak dekhta hua bolta hai...

Aksha uske mn ki bhavna ko smjhta hua-oye...dekh mai thik hai...tu mujhe kuchh ot mat smjh...smjha...

Jay-to fir...why you dur dur form ldki..
Akash-yar...ye sb meri typ ki nhi hai...
Jay-aaye haiye...to kaisi teri typ ki hogi...tu kya anokha koi...
Akash-nahi...prr...mujhe aisi ldki chahiye...jo...

Jay uski baato ko dhyan se sunta hai...
Jay-kaisi....
Akash-aisi ki...wo mujhse jaada pyar uski family ko kare...mai bhagne ki kahu to mere muh pr thappad markr kahe ki tere jaise hajaro pyar ko apni family ke lie thokar maar du...jo sahi galat me farkt smjhti ho...jiska pyar andha to ho...pr bewkuf nhi...

Jay ankhe fade uski baate sun rha tha..
Jay-whatt...ye sb kya tha...
Akash-islie tujhe nhi bta rha tha...kyuki tujhe samajh me aane wala tha nhi...to chhod...

Jay-yaar...ye sb tune kya bol diya...kya tu ek line me mujhe nhi smjha sakta...
Akash-ek line...uske lie...ha hai ek line...
Jay-wo kya....
Aksha-mujhe wo ladki chahiye...JISME MUJHE RAB DIKHE...

"Dhattt teri ki..."jay apne mathe pr haath marta hua bolta hai...

Jay-matlb tu kisi natak krne wali ladki se shadi krega...jo natko me durga ya kaali ma ka role krti hai...
Akash muskurata hua-tu nhi smjhega...chal...

Akash.....ek aisa ldka ..jo kabhi apne aapko samjh hi nahi paaya tha...har din wo ek nyepn ko face krta tha...kabhi lagta tha ki dunia uske sath hai...to kabhi lagta tha..ki dunia uske khilaaf..kabhi lagta tha ki wo sbse jaada confident hai...kabhi lagta tha ki wo sbse jaada dumb hai...akhir ...actual me wo hai kya...lekin...kabhi kisi ka dil nhi dukhata tha...kisi ko presan nhi krta...sbki respect krna.......lekin andar se kahi na kahi akela tha...logo ki is bheed me use talaash thi kis apne hamsafar ki...sachhe hamsafar ki...dekhne me wo thik thak tha...kaafi ladki use pasand krti thi...pr wo koi reaction nhi deta tha..kyuki wo jaanta tha ki ye kdki bs timepas typ hai...or use tympas nhi...sachha pyar chahiye tha...aisa pyar jo ek baar ho...to budhape tak rhe.....wo jis ladki ko pyar krega...usi se shadi krega...ya jisse shadi krega...usi ko pyar krega...
AKash ke ghar me...uski bahan...or papa the....


Mummy papa ki banti nhi thi...to dono me divorce ho gya......dono alg alg rahte hai ab...
Akash ke papa kaafi friednly nature ke the...or uski bahan bhi...
Akash jaise hi ghr aaya....

"Hello bhaisahab....khana khaoge...ya khaoge..." Akash ki bahan...madhu uski taraf muskurati hui bolti hai...
Akash apna bag rkhta hua-kya bol rhi hai...khana khaoge ya khaoge...kuch smjh nhi aaya...

Madhu-khana khaoge mtlb...khana...or khaoge mtlb maar.....puri line khana khaoge ya maar khaoge...
Akash-tujhe sharm nhi aati...tu mujhe maaregi...

Madhu-mai nhi papa...papa marenge...
Akash-kyu...aisa kya kr diya mene...
Madhu-krne ke lie nhi...na karne ke kie maarenge...
Akash-kyaa...
Madhu-lite ka bill jma na krne ke lie...
Akash ko yaad aata hai ki usne bijli ka bil jama nhi kiya..

Akash-ohhh shitt......bye bye...
Akash bolta hua wapas bahar bhag jaata hai...
Akash bike uthata hai....or jaldi se road ki taraf nikal padta hai....
Bike pr jaate jaate akash ka phon bajta hai ..
Wo jeans me se phon nkalta hai...or dekhta hai...ye jay ka phon tha...
Ekdm akash jaise hi samne dekhta hai...
"Dhadaam...."ufff....accident...
Gali se ek ladki scooty lekar aayi...or dono ne dhyan ni diya...

Ladki or akash dono gir jaate hai...
Akash utha hai...-soryy...soryy...
Ladki uthkr kapde jhadti hui-whatt soryy...gadhe ki tarah chalte ho...tmeej hai ya nhi...
Akash-i said na soryy...

Ladki-are to...isko to uthao kmsekm...
Aksah ajib tarah se kadki ko dekhne lgta hai...
Ldki-are mai ladki hu....
Akash-ohh...okk..
Akash age badhkr uski scooty uthata hai...
Ladki scooty pr bethkr-pata nhi kaha kaha se chale aate hai.....gadhe...ladki bak bak krke aage chl deti hai...
Akash bhi apni bike uthake apne raste chal deta hai...

Akash bill jama krta hai...or bill jma krke jaise hi nikalta hai...
"Oye akaash..." Jay daant dikhata hua akash ko awaaj deta hai...
Akash muskurakr-are..tu yha kya kar rha hai...

Jay-coffe pine aaya tha...aaj maid nhi aayi na...to socha bahar pilu...
Akash-ohh good...
Jay-kya good...aaja...pite hai...

Akash or jay coffe shop pr aakr beth jaate hai...or coffe order kr dete hai....

Jay-orr bta...yha kaha aye tha...
Akash-bill pay krne...
Jay-online kr diya kr yar...
Akash-nhi yhi thik hai...
Jay-yha ladkiya to kaafi sunder sunder hai yaar....


Akash-haa...dekh...senk ankho ko...
Jay-tu bta...mera phon kyu nhi uthaya..
Akash-are kya btau...ek bandriya bike pr kuud gyi thi...

"Orr wo bandriya mai hu ...hai na..."samne khadi wohi ladki akash ko ghure jaa rhi thi...
Aksash ki hawa sarak gyi usko dekhkar..
dekhkar...
Akash-tum...tum yha kaise aayi...
"Kaisi aayi...tumari pichhe wali seat pr mai bethi thi...beta tum aaj nhi bchoge...mai bandriya hu kya...

Jay-nhi...ap bandriya kaha ho...apki poonch nhi hai...agr punchh hoti...to bandriya hoti na....

Akash drta hua sa-haa...poonch nhi hai...
Ldki-majak sujh rha hai tumhe...meri scooty ki lite khrab ho gyi...u know that..
Akash-to thik kra lo na...

Ladki-tumne kharab ki hai...peso do....
Jay-allah ke naam pr dedo maalik...aisa bolo to denge na..ese pese kon mangta hai..


Akash ki ankhe chaudi ho jaati hai jay ki baat sunkr...
"Ye mrwaega jrur..."akash drta hua sochta hai...

Ladki apni sendal nikal leti hai....
Jay-sandel ke bdle me koi pese nhi dega...bekar hai...
Ldki-kmeene....

Wo ladki sandal jay ko maarne ko hoti hai...lekin jay ekdm thoda pichhe sarak jaata hai...
Ldka ka hath hwa me ghumkr rah jaata hai..

Ladki-tu to pkka mrega...
Jay-hey bcha na akash...
Akaksh-bas....bahut hua...tumhari btmeeji ko babut jhela mene...
Akash gusse me khada hota hai...
Jay akash ke piche khada ho jaata hai...
Ladki-achha....kya kroge tum...
Akash-tum hath lgaakr dikhao...hath tod dunga...

Ladki pichhe ki taraf ishara krti hai...uske frdn jo pichhe uske sath bethe the...uske paas aajate hai...
2ladke or ek ldki...
Dono ladke apne asteen ko upar chadhane lgte haj...

Ladki-hmm...to kya kroge...
Akash-tumhe kya lagta hai...mai inse dr jaunga...
Ladki-ohh achha....fighter ho kya...
Akash-ye sb agar...ek minute bhi mere samne thahar gye...to ...

Ladki-to tumhe mere pero me girkar mujhse maafi mangni hogi ...
Akash gusse me apni baajuo ko upar krta hai...
Akash-manjur hai ..
Jay-kya kr rha hai be...

Ladki-orr ye langoor...ye langoor ko meri 5sandal khani hogi...
Ladi jay ki taraf ishara krte hue bolti hai...
Akash-manjur hai....
Aksh un ldko ke samne jaakar khada ho jaata hai...
Jay-akash...bhai...kya koi or raasta nhi hai...

Akash-hai na...lekin uske alawa...or koi rasta hi nhi hai...
Jay-wo kya...

Akash kuchh sochta hua-bhaaaaaggggg...
Akash pichhe ki taraf bhagne lagta hai...
"Abe sale pahle ku nhi btaya..."bolta hua jay bhi uske pichhe bhag let hai...or in dono ke pichhe wo dono ladke...

Akash or jay jaldi se gate se bahar nikalkr gate bahar se band kr dete hai...
Wo ladke idhar udhar dekhte hai...bahar se chokidar khole isse pahle aakash or jay bike pr bethkr khisak jaate hai...

Jay-uff bach gye beta...maare jaate aaj to...
Akash-kya jrurt thi jaada bolne ki...poonch nhi hai...allah ke naam pe...bekwuf hai kya...kuchh to wo thi gusse me kuch or bhdka diya use...
Jay-soryy yar...mene sahi to kaha tha...
Akash-beta mujhse jaada wo tere khun ki pyasi hai wo ab...yha...mili...iska matlb wo aaspas hi kahi rahti hai...

Wo dono ladke wapas us ldki ke paas aate hai...
Ladki- kya..hua
"Bhag gye yar wo log..."unme se ek ldka bolta hai...
Ldki-kmeene...meri scooty bhi todi...or yha btmeeji bhi ki...or wo langoor..us langoor ko to chhodungi nhi....
"Relax yaar....chhod na..."uski saheli use smjhati hui bolti hai....


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Update 3
Koi bhut smjh rha tha to koi insan...sbki ek alag soch thi.....lekin kisi ko usse dr nhi lg rha tha...vajah..uska masoom chehra...aisa lg rha tha dekhkar jaise kitne dukho ko jhelkar ye ldki aayi hai

Us ldki ko jis kamre me rkha gya tha...wo kamra sbse niche tha...ground flour ke upr 3kamre the...fr uske upar terrace tha....


Sbhi uthkr apne apne kaamo me lg jaate hai...raat krib 3ghante tk ye sb chala ..islie kisi ki jladi ankh nhi khuli thi...

Rajni kitchen me thi...to tannu abhi tak soyi thi...shalini bahar park me bethi thi...or sabhi idhar udhar lge the...
Arjun ko us ladki ki yaad aati hai...or wo us kamre ki taraf chal deta hai...
Ab din tha...drne ki to koi baat to nhi...wo jaise hi uske kamre ka darvaaja kholta hai...us ladki ko dekhta hai...jo ek kambal me ajib tarah se lipti hui...soyi hui thi...uska masooom chehre dekhkar arjun ko vishwas nhi hota...ki wo doc is ladki ko chudail kaise bol sakta hai...


Arjun use dekhkar pichhe mudkr chalne wala hota hai...ki achank use kuchh yaad aata hai.. or ekdm pichhe dekhta hai...
ankhe fat jaati hai uski...dimak ghum gya ladke ka...ghume bhi kyu na usne najara hi aisa dekha liya tha...wo kuch soch samajhkr bahar ki taraf bhagta hai..

"Bhaiya...bhaiya...."arjun chilaata hua raaj ko dhundta hai....
Ajeet arjun ki awaaj synkar chaunk jaata hai...ki ise kya hua subah subah...
Or uske shor machane se bche kuche log bhi jaag jaate hai...or sbhi bahar ki taraf aate hai...

Ajeet-kya hua...
Arjun-papa wo ladki...
Ajeet-ha kya hua use....
Arjun-papa wo ajib hai...dekho chalkar...ap khud dekho...
Uski baat sunkr sbhi chal dete hai...shalini bhi bahar aakar sbko niche ki taraf bhagata dekhti hai...wo bhi us taraf chal deti hai...

Ajeet jaise hi gate kholta hai...samne wo ladki soyi thi...uske chehre pr suraj ki roshni damak rhi thi.... Suraj ki roshni me uska pyara sa chehra damak rha tha...
Raat me to dikhi nhi...or uski khubsurti hi ab dikhi thi...

Ajeet-kya hua...sb thik to hai arjun...
Arjun-kya thik hai papa....uske muh pr suraj ki roshni hai...
Usha-ha to...
Arjun-mummy...ye niche ka kamra hai...yha suraj ki roshni aane ka kya matlb. ...

Sb chaunk padte hai arjun ki baate sunkr ..
Pure kamre ko dekhte hai...us kamre me koi khidki ya roshandan tak nhi tha...to roshni aa kaha se rhi hai...

Ajeet dhyan deta hai...to roshni gate se aarhi thi...
Ajeet-gate se...
Raaj-pahli baat..gate hmara uttar disha me hai...dusra...gate se bhi suraj kaha dikhta hai...is kamre ka gate na bahar ki taraf hai...na suraj ki disha me...ye niche hai....kamre ka gate hmare ghar me hi hai...iske upr 1flour hai...ese kese aasakti hai suraj ki roshni...

Ajeet or sabhi roshni ka pichha karte hai...ki aa kaha se rhi hai...
Bahar aakr dekhte hai ..ki roshni ne left turn le rkha hai...or sidhiyo ki taraf se aa rhi hai...sbhi uska pichha karte hai...
Sidhi se upar aake roshni ghumkar fir se sidhi ki taraf se aarhi rhi...sbka dimak khrab ho gya....roshni kab se ese turn lene lgi...

Roshni ki kiran ka pichha karte hue chl dete hai sb...roshni ab upar ki taraf jaa rhi thi...maltb upr wali sidhiyo pr...ye babut hi ashcarya wali baat thi...
Ajeet upar jaaata hai...or dekhta hai...wo kiran upr suraj me vileen ho rhi thi..



Ajeet-ye...ye kaise ho sakta hai...ye to...asambhav hai...
Taanu-ye magic hai...aise kaise mud mudkar suraj ki roshni sirf ustak jaa rhi hai.....

Usha-pta nhi ye ladki...kitne chamatkar samete hue hai...kon hai ye...kabhi current marti hai...to kahi iske dil ki dhadkan tej rhti hai...
Ajeet-ab to mujhe bhi lgne lga ki...ye koi aam ladki nhi hai...

Usha-to kya kre ji...ye schme ajib ajib najare dikha rhi hai...
Ajeet-usko ese bichme uthaana thik nhi...use uthne do...tab usse kaise bhi karke baat krne ki koshish krte hai...tb tak aap log apne apne kaam kro...

Sbhi dimak me hajaro swaal liye us ladki ke jaagne ka intjar krne lgte hai...or is intjar me sb apne apne kam pr lg jaate hai...

Ajeet or raaj bahar park me beth jaate hai...
Shalini apne kamre me...jo upr tha...or taanu rajni or usha kitchen me the...

Ajeet-yrr..ye sb kya hai...ye kon hai...dimak fata haa rha hai sochkr...esa kaha hota hai...suraj ki roshmi ese turn lekar ustk pahuchi...ab tk hui ghatnao ko maine najar andaj kiya...prr ye to...bhuli nhi ja rhi hai...

Ajeet dekhta hai ki raaj ka dhyan uski baato pr nahi kahi or tha..
Jeet-raaj mai tumse kuchh puchh rha hu...or tumhara dhyan...
Raaj-papa...ye jo chhoti chidiya hoti hai...ye kitni kam ho gyi hai na...pahle kitni jaada hua krti thi...har jagah inke chahchahane ki awaaje aati thi...or ab...

Ajeet hairani se-mai tumse itne gambhir vishay pr baat kr rha hu...or tum..
Raaj-papa...wo dekho...4,5 chhoti chidiya...achank dikhi aaj...bs...unko dekhne lga...
Ajeet dekhta hai ki wo chidiya(chhoti bird)unke ghar ke chakkar lga rhi thi..

Ajeet bhi unko dekhkar smile kr deta hai...
Ajeet-sahi kaha...jb hm chhote the..gao me...to yhi chidiya...hmari chaat pr beth jaati thi subah subah...bahut achha lgta tha...

Ajeet kuch dhyan deta hua-prrr...ye sb hmare ghar ke chakkr kuu kaat rhi hai...
Raaj-ese hi...bs...aagyi...
Achank ek chidiya unke ghr ke andar chali jaati hai...

Raaj-wo to andar gyi...
Ajeet-kahi cup plate na tod de kitchen me ghuskar...
Itne me hi dusri bhi andar ghus jaati hai..
Raaj or ajeet thoda sa hairan ho jaate hai...
Or is trh wo 4,5chidiya andar ghus jaati hai sb...

Ajeet-ye andar kyu jaa rhi hai...
Raaj-pta nhi......
Itne me hi bahut sari chidiyo ke chahchahane ki awaaje aane lgti hai.....
Usms parrot,kabutar,chidiya,koyal sb the...or to or kauvve bhi...in sbki mix awaj aarhi thi...
Shayad ghar ki dusri side se...
Ajeet-ye sb kya ho rha hai...itna shor kyu kr rhe hai ye pakshi...
Awaaje or bhi jaada tez hoti jaa rhi thi...


Ajeet-aao....dekhe to...
Ajeet or raaj andar aate hai...wo dekhte hai...ki pure ghar me birds ud rhe the...
Sb dekhkar ghabra jaate hai...
Taanu darti hui-papa...ye kya ho rha hai...papa...
Raaj ek chhota sa kapda uthakr un pakshiyo ko hatane ki koshish krta hai...or pakshi hat'te nhi hai...kmsekm 20,30pakshi aagye the...

Chhoti chidiya se lekar kauvve tak...kaafi sare tote(parrot )the ..or sbse ajib baat ....1parrot ke muh me apple tha...to ek ke muh me mango...ek bird biscuit ka ek chhota piece lekar aayi thi...use chonch me dabakr bs idhar udhar ud rhi thi...


Hairan the ye harkat dekhkar sbhi...
Or shalini ek kapde se un
Pakshiyo ko bhagane ki koshish krti hai...pr wo bina dre ghar me ude jaa rhe the...ghar se bahar hi nahi nikal rhe the...

Ghar me sadasya dr gye the sbhi...is ajeeb ghatna se...
Krib 3minute tk ye sb chala...or fr ekdm ...sb pakshi bolna band kr dete hai...or sb idhar udhar shant beth jaate hai...koi window pr...koi pankhe pr...koi sidhi pr...

Ajeet raaj or sbhi dhyan se dekhne lgte hai...ki ab hone kya wala...kyuki sb buri trh dre hue the...jbse ye ldki ayi thi...sb ajeeb ajeeb ho rha tha...

Ekdm se achank sb pakshiyo ne bolna band kr diya...itna sannata ho gya...jaise yha koi ho hi na....
Ye sbse ajib tha...koi ek bhi pakshi bol nhi rha tha...
Sidhiyo ki deewar pr bethi...2 chidiya...udkar us ladki ke kamre ki taraf jaati hai....or fir ek ek pakshi..chupchap bina shor kiye...andar us ldki ke kamre ki taraf bdhne lgte hai.....ek ek krke ese jaa rhe the...jaise inka appointment fix ho...
Sb hairani bhari ankho se dekh rhe the...
Or sbhi us ldki ke kamre ki taraf chal dete hai...

Chalte samay...achank rajni ke pero me kuch lagta hai...
"Uiiii maaaa"rajni ek dm cheekh pdti hai...
Sbhi uski cheekh sunkr rukkr pichhe dekhte hai...

To uske pero ke pas ek gilahri thi...jo hath me ek mungfali liye jaa rhi thi...
Or sbke pero me se nikalr wo bhi us kamre me ghus jaati hai...

"Aaa...papa..."is bar tannu ki awaaj thi...use 2 bandr aate hue dikhai diya...jinme se ek ke hath me ek kela tha...


Bandr tannu ke paas se hokar wo bhi andar chala jaata hai..
Sbko ye spna sa lag rha tha...ye sb hai kya...sb ke sb us ldki ke kmre me ghuse jaa rhe hai...jaanvro ko itna shishtachar me kabhi kisi ne nhi dekha tha..
Khair ye sb bhi thoda thoda drte hue...kmre ki taraf jaate hai...

Andr ka najara dekhkar sbki ankhe chaudi ho jati hai...
Andr sb jaanver...ek gol ghera bnaye bethe the....us ghere ke bich me thi...wo soti hui ladki...

Jaanver sb idhar udhar dekh rhe the...pr koi shor kr nhi kr rha tha...
Ab thoda sa ajeet and family ka dr km hua...or kuchh achha sa lgne lga...wrna esea najara kaha dekhne ko milta hai...

Krib 1minute tk sb pakshi or jaanver chup bethe the...
"Bho bho..."ekdm pichhe se sbko awaaj aati hai..
Tannu dekhti hai..pichhe pados ka ek pilla...chhota kutta...khada tha...use jaane k lie jagah nhi thi...islie bhoka...

Tannu-ohh...ha aap bhi aayiye....thoda let ho gye shayad...aayiye ...apki hi ki kmi thi...
Tannu or sb thoda side ho jaate hai..pilla bhi aakr kamre me beth jaata hai...

Ajeet-taannu....ab kya hoga...
Tannu-sb janvro ki meeting.....mujhe kya pta papa....
Ajeet-tum us pille se mjak me boli...islie lga tumhe kuch pta hoga...
Tannu-mai to...

Itne me hi achank bandr ki awaaj unke kano me pdti hai...
Wo sb us taraf dekhte hai...
Or ashcharya...bandr ne apne muh pr ungli rkhkr unko chup rhne ka ishara kiya.

Sbbi ankhe bdi krke dekhte hai...unhe aaj khud se smjhdar janvar lg rhe the...
Ajeet-ye...kya hai...mai pagal ho jauga...
Ye bandar hme chup rhne ka ishara kr rha hai...

Tbhi ek chidiya udti hai...or us ladki ke chehre ke paas aakr beth jaati hai..

Sbhi bahar se khade hue is utsukta se dekhnr lgte hai...ki chidiya hi ab active hui thi kaafi der se...ab kya hoga...
Wo chidiya...thoda sa chehchahati hai...or us ldki ke gaalo pr chonch maarti hai...


Shalini-woow.....wo use jgaa rhi hai...shayad...wow little bird
Ab ek kabutar chalkar us ldki ke kaan ke kaan ke paas jaakr "gutur gu...gutur gu..."krta hui...

Ladki ekdm apni ankh kholti hai...
Arjun-wo jaag gyi...
Wo jaise hi ankh kholti hai...chidya uske gaalo pr fir se chonch rakh deti hai....
Wo ladki ankhe kholkr smile krti hai...
Uski smile bahut pyari thi...

Arjun-hey...usne smile kiya...pahli baar..
Wo ladki uthkr beth jaati hai...or aaspas sb janvro ko dhyan se dekhne lgti hai...
Or suraj se aati hui roshni ki vajah se sahi se uski ankhe nhi khul paa rhi thi...Ek dm ek gilahari chalkar aati hai...or us ladki ko ek chhilee hui mungfali deti hai...

Ajeet-are...ye gilhari use apni mungfali de rhi hai...
Ldki apne kampte hatho se mungfali lene wali hi hoti hai...ki ekdm use suraj ki roshni ki yaad aati hai...or wo ekdm apne kampte hatho ko uthati hai...or suraj se aati roshni ki taraf jod leti hai...


Tannu wo hmse namaste kr rhi hai...
Tannu hath jodkr -namaste ji....
Arjun-bewkuf...wo suruj ki kirno ko kr rhi hai...tujhe nhi...
Sb thoda sa side me ho jaate hai...taki suraj ki roshni puri jaaye....wo ladki ankh band kr leti hai...

Ldki ke hath jodne ki deri nhi thi..ki gilhri bhi mungfali ko niche rakhkr dono hath suraj ki kirno ki taraf jod leti....jo bethi hui babut cute lg rhi thi...
Or fr bandr bhi...or sbhi pakshi...suraj ki taraf muh kr lete hai...jaise ki us ldki ko copy kr rhe ho...


Usha-ye sb...jrur hmne koi punya kiya hoga...jo aisa sundar najara dekhne ko mila...kabhi sapne me bhi nhi socha tha...ki esa ho sakta hai..

Aaj chamatkar pr chatkar ho rhe the,is family me...
Kuch der tak ankh band krke hath jode rahti hai wo ladki...


Ajeet-kya sachme ye chudail hai...jaisa doctor ne kaha tha...
Raaj-maine aajtk life me itna sundar najara nhi dekha...
Shalini-sachme...ye kmaal hai...

Sbhi utsukta se dekh rhe the...ki ab aage kya hone wala hai...ab konsa karishma dekhna baaki hai...

Wo ladki ankhe kholkr smile krke gilahri ke samne hath faila deti hai...

Gilahri fir se apni mungfali uthati hai...or mungfali us ldki ko deti hai...

Wo ladki us mungfali ko lekar khaati hai...
Baahr khade sbhi use dekhkar smile krne lgte hai...


Mungfali khatam hone ke bad...fir tota aakr use mango deta hai...wo ldaki use bhi khane lgti hai..fir dusra tota apple deta hai.....fir bandr aata hai...ek chidiya biscuit deti hai...
Ye sb itne anushasan me the..ki dusra tabhi aage badhta tha...jab pahle wale ka diya hua khana khatam ho jaata tha....
Raaj-itna aushasan to insan me bhi nhi hai...
Sbbi chehre pr smile ke sath...ye sb dekh rhe the...apne kaam...vaam sb bhul gye the...

Wo ladki ab bandr ka diya hua bnana khati hai...

Tannu-ye pkka mowgli hai..
Raaj -shhh...chup tannu...
Khane ke bad...ab wo ladki ek chidiya ko apne hath me uthati hai...or use choomti hai...or fir ek ek krke sbhi pakshi or jaanvar ki peeth pr hath se sahlati hai...

Tannu dhire se-ye koi jaadui ldki hai...wrna ye ye birds hmare to pas bhi nhi aate kbhi...

Tannu ekdm se jor se bol padti hai..
Tannu-good morning...
Uske bolte hi pure kmre me afra tafri mach jaati hai...
Birds gate ki taraf bhagne lgte hai..
Sbhi unhe raste de dete hai...or dhire dhire chahchahat ke sath sbhi pakshi or janwar wha se nikal jaate hai.....

Ajeet-pagal bhaga diya na unhe..
Unke jaane ke bad...wo ladki un sb family walo ko dhyan se dekhne lgti hai...

Ajeet or sbhi andar aajte hai...is bar ldki un sbko ek sath dekhne pr bhi nhi dri...
Tannu-good morning mam...
Wo ladki tannu ko dekhne lgti hai...
Tannu-kya tum mowgli ho.....
Wo ldki kuch nhi bolti bs tannu ko dekhe jaati hai...
Shalini-ye sb..birds...animal...tumhare friends the na...tumhare dost....

Wo ladki kuchh samajhne ki koshish kr rhi thi...pr shayad use kuchh samajh me nhi aarha tha...
Wo ladki achank khadi hoti hai...
Sb use dhyan se dekhne lgte hai...
Ajeet-kahi jaana hai kya...
Tannu-use washroom jana hai shayad...
Shalini-washroom jana hai...aao udhar hai...

Wo ladki ek kadam badhati hai...bdi mushkil se...or ekdm gir padti hai...
Tannu-hey kya hua...
Tannu use uthane ke lie aage badhti hai...pr use ajeet rok deta hai...
Wo ladki khud uthti hai...or fir se ek kadam badhati hai...or is bar wo aage badh jaati hai...dhire dhire ladkhadati chaal se chalna shuru kr deti hai...
Wo ladki pura ghar ko ajib tarah se dekhne lgti hai...
Upr dekhti hai to upar pankha lag tha...use dhyan se dekhne lgti hai...

Tannu-ye pankha hai mowgli..
Shalini-garmi me chalta hai...
Wo ladki pure ghar ko dekhne ke bad...ladkhadate kadmo se fir se chalna shuru kr deti hai...
Or gate se bahar nikalkr left ki taraf chal deti hai...
Or wha aakr sidhiyo ke paas aake ekdm ruk jaati hai...

Or pichhe usha ki taraf dekhne lgti hai..
Tannu-shayad use upr jaana hai...
Usha us ladki ke paas aati hai...or use pichhe se pakad leti hai.....
Wo ladki bahut hi dhir dhire sidhiyo pr chadhti hai...or fr up jaakr fir se dusri sidhiyo pr chadh jaati hai...

Ajeet-wo shayad upr...terus pr jaana chahti hai...
...usha use pichhe se sahara deti hai...wo firse dhire dhire upar chadhti hai...

Or last me wo upr tarrace pr aajati hai...
"Jal"us ladki ke muh se achank ye shabd niklata hai...

Ajeet-are...ye boli...
Shalini-ha papa...ye jal...boli...
Raaj-jal matlb...paani...taanu paani lao jaldi...

Tannu ek glaas or ek jug me paani laati hai...or tannu us ldki ko glaas me dalakr paani deti hai ...shaayd wo pani pina chahti thi...pr ye kya...
Wo suraj ke samne ghutne modkar beth jaati hai.....or jal chadhaane lgti hai...

Sbhi usko ajib tarah se dekhne lgte hai...
hai...babut hairan the sb...

Or fr wha se khadi hoti hai...
Use achak flower pot dikhayi dete hai...jisme flower murjhaye hue the...
Wo ladki unke paas jaati hai...
Sbhi usko dhyan se dekh rhe the...uski har activity ko...

Wo ladki ek flower plot ke flowers ko jaise hi touch krti hai...ekdm sare flower khil uthte hai...

Sbhi ankhe faade ye chamatkaar dekh rhe the...
Kisi ko kuch samajh nhi aarha tha...uske sparsh matra se sare fool khil uthe...ye sb ho kya rha hai...

"Jal"achank us ladki ke muh fir se ye word nikla...
Tannu fir se use glaas me daalkr paani deti hai...or wo ladki pure jug ko leleti hai...

Wo ladki aage bdhti hai...or flowr pot me paani dalne lagti hai...
Tannu-he mowgli...tumhari awaj bahut mithi thi...ek baar or bolkr dikhao...
Wo ladki koi responce diye bina bs...sare flowr pot me paani daalti hai....

Paani khatam ho jaane ke bad...wo railing ke paas jaakr khadi ho jaati hai...jaise duniya ko smjhna...or dekhna chahti thi....baahr aate jaate logo ko...buildings ko...pedo ko dhyan se dekh rhi thi...

Ajeet-ye akhir chah kya rhi hai...
Bahut der tk railing ke paas khadi rahne ke bad...wo wapas niche ki taraf chal deti hai...or is baar use kisi sahare ki jarurat nhi pdti...balki bahut hi furti se...sbse pahle wo niche aajati hai...

Sbhi ke hosh ud jaate hai dekhkar...wo usha jb tk use pakadne ke lie aati...usse pahle wo niche pahuch chuki thi...palak jhapakne se bhi pahle uske kadam niche wali sbse last sidhi pr the...
Usha-sachme chudail hai....itni jaldi...abhi to ye gir rhi thi chalti hui...or ab...

Tannu-nhi mummy...mowgli hai...mowgli jaise tej chalte hai na...
Sbhi uske pichhe pichhe niche aate hai...wo sare ghar me ghumne lgti hai...
Tannu-hey mowgli ek bar Or kuch bolona..wo ladki pahle ek kamre me jati hai...us kamre me ghumne lagti hai..
Tannu -kahi ye chor to nhi...
Shalini-chup tannu..
Wo us kamre se ninalkar fir dusre or ese hi har kamre me ghumti hai.....


Jay -hello madhu...
Madhu-hello bhaiya...aiye...bethiye.
Jay soffe pr beth jaata hai...
"Bhaiya...jay bhaiya aaye hai...."madhu akash ko awaaj lgati hui bolti hai...

Akash baahr akar-oye...tu yha kaise...
jay-amry me jaana hai...chal bhr aate hai form...
Akash-mujhe intrest nhi hai army me...tu ja..
Jay-kaisa insan hai...deshbhakti karne ka moka mila hai...or tu pichhe hat rha hai...
Akash-to...deshbhakti ke lie sirf army jruri hai kya...har nagrik apne apne kaam krta hua...desh bhakti kr skta hai...bs apne kam imandari or lagan se karo...


Jay uske gharo me lagi hui pentings ko dekhta hai...
Jay-ha...jaise tu ye painter bnna chahta hai...bta isme konsi deshbhakti kr lega...yar heitght achhi hai teri...chal na...
Akash-painting to mera side kam hai..dont like government job...mai private me jaunga..
Jay-madhu...smjha isko...goverment job ke kitne farde hote hai...

Akash-ha hote hai...pr tere sath krne ka mauka mile...to bilkul nhi honge...
Madhu hasne lgti hai..
Jay-kyu bhai ...mai tera konsa dushman hu...

Akash-dushman...kl tu haddi paslee tudwa deta...
Madhu-kuu bhaiya kya hua tha...
Jay-are mujhse puchh madhu...ye tera bhai...ladki se drkr bhag gya...are islie kah rha hu army join kr...ek army man akela 5 ko maar sakta hai....agr tu army me hota to wo dono ldko ko yuu peet deta hai...

Akash-mai baat smbhal raha tha...panga tune krwaya...poonch nhi hai...allah ke naam pr dede...bhikari hai kya wo....
Jay-yar...wese wo ladki ...achhi thi...i mean tere lie ...kaafi sunder thi na...kya tujhe usme rab nhi dikha...
Akash-dikha...rab nhi...yamraj...
Madhu-kon ladki...

Jay-are iski bike se takra gyi...sunder thi..maine bola krke shadi...
Madhu-mere bhaiya konsa kisi road chalti ladki se shadi krenge...prnincess hogi...rajkumari..
Jay-akash...mai tera interview lena chahta hu...
Akash-kaisa interview...
Jay-tu achha painter hai na...to...aj ankh band krke...kisi ki photo bna...
Akash-filmy story ki tarah...

Jay-are bana na yr...fir jo ladki bnegi...hm dono milkar use dhundenge tere lie... ...
Madhu-kya jay bhaiya...kuchh bhi...
Akash kuchh sochta hua-wese idea bura nhi hai...
Jay-ha bna...
Madhu-bhaiya...kya ye sb...

Akash-are bethe hai...bor ho rhe hai...to...bna lete hai.....
Akash-lekin ap logo complete hone tak us tasveer ko dekhoge nhi...
Jay-okkk...


Akash apne pencil,brush,color vgera sb uthakr apne pas rkhta hai...
Or panting ke pichhe ka hissa akash or madhu ki taraf kar deta hai..
Jay-kitna time aakash...
Akash- adha ghanta...
Jay-ohh...madhu tb tk hm ludo khelte hai...ise bnane do...


Madhu ludo le aati hai...
Jay or madhu ludo khelne lgte hai...
Or akash apni ankho pr patti bandhkr painting bnane lgta hai...
Halanki ye sb masti thi...jay bhi ese hi ghumne aagya tha...
Or akash ko shok to tha hi painting bnane ka...wo ankh krke bhi achhi painting bna deta tha...ye usme khubi thi...to bs akash bhi shuru ho gya.....
Idhar madhu or jay luudo khelne lgte hai...

Akash ne masti masti me painting bnani shuru to kr di...pr use ye ni pta tha...ki wo babut bdi galti kr rha hai...is painting ke bad...uski life me bahut uthal puthal hone wali thi...

Idhar ye dono masti me game khel rhe the...
Akash pahle kisi ladki ke baal bnata hai....ankhe band kiye kiye.. baal pr black paint krkta hai...or baal ke bad wo ankho pr aata hai...lambi lambi ankhe banta hai...or fir naak...ese hi dhire dhire dhire wo kisi sampurna ladki ka chitra banane me busy tha...apne hisab or kapna se wo kisi sunder ldki ko hi bna rha tha...

Idhar in dono ke 1 game ho gya tha...
Isme madhu jeeti ...
Madhu-wooow...akash bhaiya mai jeet gyi...
Akash-tu hi jeetegi...iske baski jeetna thodi hai...
Jay-is bar mai jeetunga...
Fir se inka game start ho jaata hai...
Kaafi der tak game chalta hai...yha aaksh ladki ke chitra se faarik ho chuka tha...
Akash-picture is cmplt...
Jay-are bhaad me jaye teri picture...mai haar gya tujhe picture ki padi hai.....jeetkar rhuga is bar...
Madhu-kabhi nahi jeetoge bhaiya...

"Jab tk inka game pura hota hai...kyu na mai...is ldke ke aapsas ka achha sa acene bnau....mosam..pahad...ya fir koi achhi scenery..."akash sochta hua fir se...shuru ho jaata hai..

Karib 20min bad...
"Hurreyy.....i won..."madhu chillate hue bolti hai..
Aaksh ka hath madhu ki awaaj sunkr ruk jaata hai ...
Akash-ho gya..
Madhu-ha...
Akash-ab meri ankho se patti kholo...
Madhu-okk pr mai jeeti hu...islie sbse pahle bhabhi ki painting mai dekhungi...
Halanki janti madhu bhi thi wo bs ese hu painting bnai di hogi....koi babhi vabhi nhi bai....pr sb masti me the bs..

Akash sahara lekar madhu ke paas aata hai. ...madhu uski ankho ki patti kholti hai.
Akash ki ankh khulte hi uski najar wha bethe jay pr jaati hai...
Jo muh latkaye betha tha .
Akash-kyu bhai army man...ek ladki se haar gya...
Jay-mera moond kharab hai...

"Aaaaa...bhaiyyaaaaaaa" achank madhu ekdm cheekhti hai...
Akash or jay buri trh ghabra jaate hai...
Madhu aakr akash ke seene se chipak jaati hai...jo bahut dri hui thi...
Jay-hey...kya hua...
Madhu darti hui-bhaiya...bhaiya..wo...wo painting...


Jay-kya hua painting ko...
Madhu drte hue-dekho...
Jay jaakr paintig ko dekhta hai...uski bhi ankhe badi ho jaati hai...
Akash-kya hua jay...usme ek ladki bnayi thi mene...
Jay-kya yr...esi drawani painting bnakr kya madhu ko draana chahta tha tu...dr gyi na bechari.
Akash-are mene...ladki bnayi hai...
AKash madhu ko soffe pr birhakr painting ko dekhta hai..to wo bhi hairan ho jaata hai...

Akash-nhi...ye kaise ho sakta hai...maine to ladki ki paitning bnayi thi...or ye...
Akash ke hosh ud jaate hai....

Jay-mjak mt kr yar...
Akash-bhai mai sach bol rha hu...mene ye pahli painting nhi banyi ankh band krke...kai bnaayi hai...or sb achhi banti hai...pr ye...

Madhu-bhaiya...ye apne bnayi hai....janbujhkr...

Jay us panting ko dekhta hua...or uski taraf ishara krta hai. ...

Jay-kya ye...udti hui chamgaadad...tune nhi bnayi...kya ye shamshanghat ...jaha itni sari...jalti hui chitayen hai...ye mre hue log...kisia ke hath kte...kisi ke per.....ye ese hi ban gya...orr ye chhod...ye aadmi...ajib sa ganda sa...jiske hath me kisi ka kta hua sar hai.....ye kya esi hi ban gya...

Akash dhyan se dekhta hai...
Akash-jay....
AKash ghabrata hua bolta hai.....
Jay-bol...tune hi to bnaya ye sb...

Akash-jay dhyan se dekh...ye sr mera hai...is aadmi ne mera kta hua sr liya hua hai...
Jay or madhu dhyan se dekhte hai...
Wo sach me akash ka sr tha...
Sbke hosh gadhle ho jaate hai...

"Hahahaah...are tum log tumhari shakal dekho...hahahaaha....kyu aaya mja..."akaash haste hue bolta hai...
Jay-ye kya hai...
Akash-are masti kr rha tha...mtlb mujhe uljha diya...or tum log mje me kudo khel rhe the...ese kese...
Jay-akash ye kesi mjak hai yar...
Madhu-bhaiya esi mjak fir mt krna....bhaut drawna tha ye mjak...
Madhu thodi si naraj hokar andar chali jaati hai...


Akash jaldi se us painting ki photo leta hai mobile me..
Jay-kya kar rha hai...faad is painting ko...
Jay us painting ko faad deta hai...
Akash-jay...bahar aa...baat krni hai kuch...
Jay-kya hua...tu itna serius kyu hai...
Akash madhu ko awaj dete hue-madhu...mai bahar ja rha hu...
Madhu-thik hai bhaiya..

Akash jay ko lekar bahar aata hai...
Akash-madhu dre na ..islie mene us sach ko mjak bna diya. ...
Jay hairan hota hua-matlb...
Akash-wo painting mene nhi bnai...wo khud ban gyi...mai sach bol rha hu yar...mene to bs ek ldki ki painting bnanai chahi thi ....pta nhi ye sb...

Jay-fir to ye schme ajib hai....kya kre...
Akash-smajh nhi aarha...ese kese ho sakta hai...
Jay-kisi pandit se baat kre...
Akash-yrrr ye sb thagne wale hote hai ..
Akash-ese matter me wo hi help kr skte hai...



"Ye tumhare pichhle janam ka chitra hai...kisi buri aatma ne tumara sr kaatkr maara tha...abhi to bs chitra bna hai...kl ko spne aayenge...fir wo aatma...tumhe is janam me nhi chhodegi..."
Jay-iska kya bchaaw hai...

"10,000mantro ka jap,yagya ke sath krna hoga...22,000kharcha aayega...Ommm shanti..."




"Hmm....is chitra se lagta hai...iska koi rishta to hai..iske sath bhavishya me ye ghatna ghategi...koi pret aatma aayegi or iska sr katkr le jayegi..."
Akash-iska kuch upay...
"Prabhu...upay btaiye....hmm upay hai...tumhare ghar ka 11bar ishwar ka naam lekar prikraman krna hoga...sb thk ho jayega..."

Jay-thik hai...hm kr lenge...konse ishwar ka naam lekar...
"Murkh....tujhe bhasm kr denge...hoshiyar bnta hai...wo kam hm krenge.....11,000ka kharcha aayega matra..."




"Ohoo....is chitra ka matlab hai...koi bdi vipatti aane wali hai balak pr...koi bda sankat...kisi bhut pret ka peshgaar hai ispr...bchana hoga...wrna anarth ho jayega...."

Akash-iska upay...
"Hmmm.... Maa mansa devi ki yarta krni hogi...lekin bich me shaitann vighn dalega...islie tumhe mantr se bandhi bus me jaana hoga...us bus me tumhara koi buri shakti ahit nhi kr
Akash-wo bus kaha milegi...
"Hmare pas hai....us bus me koi buri shakti tumhara ahit nhi kr payegi.....matra 35,000..."


Is tarah akash or jay kai pandit ,molviyo se mile...pr sb pese thagne wale hi dikhe...kisi ne koi santushti wala upay nhi btaya...
Krib 6ghante ki bhagaduad se pareshan hokar...dono ek ped ke niche bethe the...
Akash-4000 rupey kharch ho gye...or faeda kuch hua nhi...kya kahi hm bina vjh hi shak to nhi kr rhe...

Jay-nhi akash...is painting ka kuch to matlb hai...khair...bs tu apna khyal rkhna yar....


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[غمگین]

Nice update

 

[The_Punisher]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.


To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[غمگین]

Ufffff such me bohat emotional hai bohat hi zabardast