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Thriller Tujhme Rab Dikhta Hai... (paused)

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"sir...kya aajke jamane me bhi...achhai ka fal achha or burai ka fal bura hota hai....kya is modern time me...imandari se pesa kmaya ja sakta hai..."ek ladka school teacher se sawal poochta hai...

"Dekho beta...imandari se pesa kmaya jarur jaa skta hai...lekin ho sakta hai wo pesa km ho...ye tumpr nirbhar krta hai ki tum us pese me khud ko kaise santusht krte ho......."teacher bchho ko smjhane ki koshish krta hai...

"Sir...ye kaviyo ki aapas me ladai thi kya....."ek ladki ki baat sunkr sab hasne lgte hai...
"Tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai..."teacher bhi chehre pr ek smile ke sath puchhte hai...
"Ha sir...kisi kavi ne kaha ki kaal kare so aaj kar,aaj kare so ab,koi kahta hai sabra ka fal meetha hota hai...ye dono apas me ulte hue na...ek jaldi krne ko kah rha hai...to ek deri se krne ko.....kahi likha hota hai...karm krte rho...to koi kaha gya ajgar kare na chakri panchhi kare na kaam,daas maluka kah gye sbke daata raam...aisa kyu sir.."
Teacher bhi is bachhe ki baat sunkr hairan ho jaata hai...



"Akhir kya hai...kya hai us jungle me...kyu koi ek single ped bhi nahi kaat paata us jungle ka...kai saalo se is jungle ka sunte aarhe hai...or ab ye internation level pr bhi news ka vishay ban chuka hai......kya hai us jungle me..."shahar ke nye collector sahab...apne kuchh admiyo se baat kr rhe the....

"Pata nhi sir...us jungle me koi bhi aata jaata hai...bsss uske ped ko koi kaat nhi paata...ye aaj se nhi...pichhe 10saal se ascharya ka vishay bna hua hai...ek patta tak un pedo ka koi tod nhi paata hai..."ek aadmi us rahasyamayi jungle ke bare me jaankari deta hua bolta hai.....

"Acha....kya tumne khud dekha...ki us jungle me kuchh nhi hai...tum khud gye the usme..."collector utsuktavash puchhte hai...

"Ha sir....waha aane jane me kisi ko manahi nahi hai...bs pedo ko kuch nuksan nahi pahucha sakte... kuch logo ka manna hai ki...wha koi bhut rahta hai ped pr...to kai bolte hai ki...bhgwan ko pasand nhi ki koi prakrati ke sath khilwad kre...islie wha waha koi ek ped bhi nahi kaat paata..to koi wha alien ke hone ka dava krte hai...."

"Acha....dekho...bhagwan ka to pta nhi ...pr nature ka nuksan ho...hm bhi iske khilaaf hai...pr kya kre...ese hm nature ko bcha bhi nahi sakte...jin kitabo se pdhkr aj hm is mukaam pr aaye hai...wo kitabi na jane kitne pedo ki bali pr banti hai...agar hme aage bdhna hai...to thoda balidan to nature ko dena hi hoga....anway...ye btao...jb koi ped wha kaat'ta hai to...kya hota hai..."

"Sir wo ped ko kaat'ta rhta hai...lekin ped kat'ta nahi.....ek aadmi lagatar 2din tak ped ko kaat'ta rha...pr ped ki dhul tak nhi utaar saka wo...jaise wo aari ko ped se touch krta...ari tut jaati...is trh usne un 2dino me 1500aari istemal ki...or sbki sb tut'ti gyi...ped ki ek daali bhi nhi kaat saka..."

"Kya sirf kisi ek ped ki yaa..."
"Nahi sir...ye sbhi ped pr laagu hota hai...us jungle ke sbhi ped aaise hai..."

"Or dharti....dharti ke baare me kya vichar hai...kya wha jmeen bhi aisi hai...kya wha bhi khudai krna mushkil hai..."

"Sir...wha khudai bhi karne ki koshish ki...pr kuchh nhi ho paaya....jis ojar se khudai krte....wo tut jaata...ya kharab ho jaata..."
"Strange...wese...hmari aspas ki areas me kai baar posting hui....bs suna tha is jungle ke bare me...aj chalte hai...dekhte hai....kya hota hai wha...or suno...2,3constable ko bhi lelo...with guns..."

"Sir nhi jaaye to achha hai...suna hai usme koi bhut hai...ya fir...."

Collector uske kandhe pr hath rkhta hua-dro mt...kuchh nhi hoga...jaldi se chalne ki taiyari kro...orr kuch mjduro ko bhi sath rhna...ek jcb machine bhi...hm sb try krke dekhte hai.....


Karib 2ghante me sb intjam ho jaate hai...or collector sahab...3constable...kuch majdur,jcb machine or apne 4aadmiyo ke sath...us jungle me pahuch jaate hai....

Collector gaadi me se utarte hai...
Samne jungle tha...
Collecotr-isme andar jaane me to koi khatra nhi hai na...
"Nahi sir...yha to bahut log ghumte rhte hai...bs khatra hai ped ko katne se...agr koi yha is jungle ko nuksan na pahuchaye to...koi khatra nhi hai..."

"Thik hai chalo..."collector chalte hue bolte hai...
Sbhi us jungle ke bich me aajate hai...
Colloctor idhsr udhar...upr niche sb jagah dhyan se dekhta hai...
Collector-wese...dekhne me to aam jungle ke jaise hai ye.....
"Hey....udhar aao...chalo..yha khudai kro..."collector ek mjdur ko awaj deta hai...

Majdur jaise hi kudaala dharti pr maarta hai...ekdm kudale ke 2piece ho jaate hai...
Collector hairani se ekdm apna chashma utarkr dekhta hai...or harian ho jaate hai sbhi...

Collector jcb wale ko ishara krta hai...
"Hey...tum wo ped girao..."
Jcb wala ped ki taraf chal deta hai...or jaise hi jcb ka falak ped se touch hone wala hota hai...ekdm machine band ho jaati hai..."

"Sir...machine band ho gyi...chaalu nhi ho rhi..."jcb wala kaafi koshish krne ke bad bolta hai...
Collecotr constable ke pas jaata hai...
"Fire kro us ped pr...ek sath...."
"Dhaay dhaay dhay..."3goliya ek sath chalti hai...
Collecotr us ped ke paas jaakar dekhta hai...to...goliya ped ko lagne se pahle hi niche giri pdi thi.....

Collecotr soch me pd jaata hai...
Collector kuch sochkr-hey...kisi achhe video grapher ko phon kro...jaldi bulao...
Jaldi jaldi ek jaane mane video grapher ko bulaya jaata hai...jo vdeo editing,making sbme pefrect hota hai.....

Collector-suno...yha ped ko goli lgegi...use tumhe shoot krna...or fir usko slow motion me hme dikhana hai...ho jayega na...
"Try krta hu sir...kiya nhi ab tk aisa..."vdeo wala bolta hai...
Or camera lekar sahi angle set krta hai....khud thoda duri pr jakar khada ho jaata hai....

Or shoot krne ka ishara krta hai.....shoot hota hai...

Sbhi camera ke paas chale jaate hai...
Vdeo wala thodi si setting krta hai...or kuch der bad collector ko deta hai..
"Ho gya sir..."
Collector vdeo ko dekhne lgta hai...
Goli jaise hi ped ke paas aati hai...ek ajib si parat...pardarshi...paani jaisi...us goli ko rok leti hai...jisse goli niche gir jaati hai...

Collector-yee....ye kya hai...ye sb...nhi ye nhi ho sakta....collecotr apna sr pakadkr whi ka whi beth jaata hai...

2ghante bad...
Collector-ye announcement krwa do...ki agr koi bhi us jungle ke ped kaat paaya...to use inaam me 5lakh rupey diye jayenge....

"Sir ...5lakh..."
Collector-yha ek hospital bnega...garibo k lie...uska banna jruri hai......ese me 5to kya 10lakh bhi dene pde to hm pichhe nhi hatenge.....lekin kisi bhi tarah us jungle ka katna jruri hai......

1mhine tak us jungle ko kaatne ki bahut joshish ki jaati hai...prr...koi kaamyab nhi ho paata...sarkar us inam ko bdhakr 10lakh kar deti hai...bahut log...bahut compnies ne bhi try kiya...pr sb bekar...ab haarkr sb beth gye the...lekin wha ke aaspas me ek whi jagah thi,jaha hospital banya jaa sakta tha.....prr kya kre...mjbur the...


Ek table ke charo taraf kuchh aadmi kaala suit pant pahne bethe the...shaayd bussinessman the...
Ek aadmi ek suitcase ko table pr sarkaata hua samne bethe ek aadmi ki taraf kr deta hai ....


"Pure 10crore hai.....tumne is judge ko hmare raste se hatakr bahut bda kam kiya hai...weldone...babut fudakta tha saala......or ab no us acp dhananjay ka hai...use bhi bahut nasha chadha hai deshbhakti ka.....use bhi tumhe hi maarna hoga...pese mil jayenge..."

"Nahi....mai us acp ko maarne ke lie...koi pesa nhi lunga...usse to meri purani dushmani hai...mere bhai ko ancounter me mrwaya tha usne...smjho wo mr gya....."
Ek lmbe baalo wala aadmi wha se uthake suitcase lekar chal deta hai...

"Sir...ye sbse khunkhar or khatrnak bhediya hai....ise ek bar jiski supari di...smjho uski teharvi pakki..."ek aadmi bolta hai...

"Hmm...bs ye acp chala jaye...uske bad dekhna...hmari dahshat...pahla blast raliway station pr hoga....fir mandir, masjid,park ,college.....hahaha...."whi bethe sbhi aadmi jor jor se hasne lagte hai...


Acp dhananjya...ek imandar police officer...kaafi bahadur bhi hai....apne carrier me kaafi ancounter kiye hai...galat logo ke lie galat...or sahi ke lie sahi...
Apne office me bethe the...
"Uhuu uhuu...are...jara paani laao yar..."acp kuch files ko dekhta hua,gle ki kharash ko dur krne ke lie paani mangata hai...

Hawaldar paani lata hai...Acp paani pita hai...orrr...achank usko chakkr aane lgte hai.....sra ghum jaata hai...or wahi table pr sr rakhkr behosh ho jaata hai...


Jb uski ankh khulti hai...to wo ek ladki kaatne ke workshop me tha...or badha hua tha...ek table pr leta tha...pr ye table...ladki kaatne wala ojaar tha...samne ek gol baled lga tha...jisko nukile daanto se cover tha...ghumne pr usse lakdii kaati jaati thi...
Acp bandha hua pada tha...
Acp-hey...mai yha kaise aaya...kon ho tum log...

Samne khade 4,5aadmi ko dekhkar cheekhta hua bolta hai acp...
"Realax acp..."pichhe se ek aadmi aata hua bolta hai...jiske lambe baal tha...black suit pant me...or ankho pr black chashma ...
Acp-kon ho tum...or is tarah mujhe bandhne ka matlb...

"Matlab...matlab maut....itna bhi nahi samajhte....maut lekar aayi hai tumhe yha....."lambe baalo wala aadmi bolta hai...
Acp gusse me-ek bar mere hath khol de...fir btata hu kiski maut aayi hai.....
"Hahaha...acp....kya mujhe pagal smjha hai...khair....mai janta hu...tum kitne bahadur ho......kitne medal liye hai tumne...prr...aaj tumhe tumhari okat dikha hi deta hu...khol do ise..."lambe baal wala aadmi muskuraata hua bolta hai...

Acp ke man me ek ummid jaagti hai..
Ek aadmi aake acp ko khol deta hai...
Acp uthkr khada hota hai...or apne kapdo ko jhaadta hai...
"Mai jaanta hu acp...tum ek achhe fighter ho...5,5 ko akele chit krne ka hunar rkhte ho...mujhe agr tum touch bhi kr paaye to tumhe hm jaane denge..."lambe balo wala aadmi ghumta hua bolta hai... Or apna black suilt nikalta hai...sath hi apni shirt bhi......
Khatarnak bodya thi uski...
Acp-aajao...fir...

Lambe baalo wala aadmi bhagkr aate hai...or acp ko mukka maarta hai...lekin acp uska mukka rok leta hai...acp kuch kar paaye isse pahle wo acp ke muh pr dusre hath se mukka jad deta hai...
Hil gya pura acp...

"Kyu...kaisi rahi..."lambe balo wala muskurata hua bolta hai...
Acp uski taraf lapakta hai...lekin wo us aamdi tak aapata hai...isse pahle hi uske seene pr ek laat padi....dur jaa gira acp...muh se khun nikalne lge...

Acp fir se smbhlta hua aage jaata hai...lekin wo aadmi acp ke hath ko left hand se pakadkar...right hand se acp ka sr pakadkr tej jhatke se uske muh ped par de maarta hai...
Khun se lathpath ho gya acp ka chehra.....

2,3baar acp ka chehra us ped pr dee marta hai wo...acp ko jaise hi chhodta hai...niche gir pddta hai acp....
"Utha lao ise...nikal gyi iski mardangi..."lambe baalo wala aadmi apne aadmiyo se bolta hai...
Uske aadmi acp ko uthakr table pr lita dete hai....

"Chalu kro ise..."
Uske aadi us machine ko start kr dete hai...acp ke samne wo daanto wala charkha(blade) speed se ghumna lagta hai...ruuh kaaamp jaari hai ise dekhkar acp ki.....
"Kardo kaam..."


Wo blade acp ki taraf badhne lgta hai...
Acp ankhe band kr leta hai.......us balade ke ghumne ki awaaj se hi acp ki dil ki dhadkan tez ho gyi thi...
Wo balade dhire dhire....table ki lakdi ko kaat'ta hua aage badh rha tha...
Or ekdm acp ke kaano me awaaj aarhi rhi thi uski ab..

"Hey bhagwan...kisi ko to bhej...kab tk ye anyay hota rhega...kb tk ye
Log manavta ko maarte rhege...kab tak..."
Or itna sochte hi...lambe baal wale ke chehre pr khun ke chheente pdne shuru ho jaate hai...tadap tadap kr rha jaata hai... acp.....





"Please...please mujhe jaane do...mujhe chhod do please..."ek ladki bethi hui ,pichhe ki taraf sarakti hui samne uski taraf aarhe admio se hath jodkr bolti hai...
"Ese kaise jaane de jaanemn...ya to sidhi tarah taiyar ho ja...nhi to teri ijjt nilaam hokar rhegi..."unme se ek gurraya hua bolta hai...
"Nahi ...nahi plsss...mujhe jaane do...mai hath jodti hu ap logo ke..mujhe jaane do...."wo ladki roti hui bolti hai...

"Are chhammak chhallo...kitne dino se tujhe aate jaate dekh rhe the...ab hath me aayi hai to...aise kaise chhod de..hahahaha.."
Dono ladki pr junglee kutte ki tarah kuud pdte hai...use nochne lgte hai....ldki roti rahti hai...bilakhti rahti hai...prr wo jaalim bs apni krte rhte hai.....
Jaise hi wo dono khade hote hai...
"Abe...abe ye to mar gyi..."unme se ek ldki ki taraf dekhta hua bolta hai..
"Mrne de...hme kya...mja lena tha...le kiya...chal aa...tujhe pilaata hu..."
Ladki whi mri padi rah jaati hai...



2din baad....
Koi apni nokri ke lie jaa rha tha...to koi ghumne...koi shadi me...to koi exam dena...koi dosto ke sath ghumne jaa rha tha...to koi apme priwar ke pas...ese hi najane kitne aadmi ek jagah se dusri jagah jaa rhe the...bahut bheed thi railway station pr...aksar hoti hai.....lekin ye bheed shayad khaas honi wali thi.....
Hajaro ki sankhya me log station pr the...ek train aati hai...jisme se bahut public utarti hai....

Orr achank...ek dhamaka...ek dhamaka ke sath puri train itar bitar ho jaati hai..
Aspas ke logo me afra tafri mach jaati hai...10secodn me hi log wha mre pde the...to koi jakhmi tha...koi reng rengkr train se dur jaane ki koshish kr rha tha...to koi apna kata hua shiri utha rha tha...bachho bilbila rhe the....budhe ro rhe the...ek min me station kabrastn ban gya tha...
Jaldi jaldi ambulance aati hai...or logo ko idhar se udhar le jaati hai......5ambulance aayi thi...pr logo ki ginti khatam nhi ho rhi thi...itna bhayan kahar barsa kogo pr...

"Namashkar....railway station or
Pr huye dhamake me lagbhag
5000log maare gye or 8000ghayal...itna bhayank haadsa ...akhir kon ho sakta hai iske piche...kai bchhe anath ho gye...kai maao ki god ujad gyi...police prashan khamosh kyu hai...kya ye koi tettrtoist atteck hai..ya iske iske piche koi rajneeti mansha hai......"
:o ek update mein hi itne saare scenes...,
ye to bilkul suspense ko charam par pahunchane wala shuruaat hai,
Ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai
 

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Pitamah-kon tha wo...jisne tumhe is sbse awgat kraya...
Rakshita-mai nhi jaanti pitamah...
Pitamah-kon ho sakta hai...jisne tumhe wo baate smjhayi jo hm nhi smjha ske...khair...
Pitamah-to us singni ne...tumahre hath se fal bhi khaya...
Ralshita-haa pitamah...mai satya bol rhi hu...
Pitamah-singh jo kbhi mans ke atirikt kuch nhi khate...wo fal khaye...ye bahut durlabh hai...

Rakahita-kintu mai satya kah rhi hu pitamah...
Pitamah-hm jaante hai ki tum asatya nhi bolti...or ye yoddha kon tha...kya tum ise jaanti ho...

Rakshita-nahi pitamah ..hm to bs yha fal lene aaye the...
Pitamah-rakshita putri....tum sadaiv sankat me kyu pdi rahti ho....sadaiv hi tumhari koi raksha kre...ye to sambhav nhi hai na....

Rakshita-kintu pitamah...mai akaran hi kisi sankat me nhi padti...ab dekhiye...is mrug ko un logo ne maar diya...iska kya dosh tha...kyu maara ise...
Pitamah-putri tum bahut bholi ho...kintu ye satya hai...hm isme paritavrtan nhi kar skte...ye sb karmo ka lekha jokha hota hai putri....ho sakta is mrug ke bhagya me aisi hi mrityu likho ho...

Rakahita-kintu pitamah...
Pitamah-tum ye kintu ,parantu bahut krti hu putri...hm to bs ye sochkr vichlit hai putri...ki tumhe sadaiv hi koi bchaye ye sambhav nhi hai...hme bhay hai ki...

Rakshita-pitamah....apse bda yodhha is samast sansar me koi nhi...yadi aisa hai to...ap mujhe apni shishya bna lijiye...ap mujhe dhanurvidya athwa anya vidhyao ka gyan deejiye...jisse mai swayam ki raksha kar saku...


Pitamah haste hue-tum bdi ho gyi ho...kintu tumhari baate ab bhi whi ho...ekdm natkhat....bhupad se jald hi is vishay me baat krege...ki tumhe kisi aise ko sonp de jo sadaiv hi tumhari raksha kr ske....ab ham chalte hai....

Rakshita or sbhi saheli -ji pitamah....

Pitamah apne ghode pr beth wha se chal dete hai...

Rakshita-arushi...pitamah me jo ant me kaha...mujhe uska tatparya samjh nhi aaya...
Arushi-wo tumhare vivah ki baat kr rhe the...hahaha...
Rakshita hairani se-acha...ye to vichitra baat hai...

Teeno saheliya fal lekar mandir me chali jaati hai...
Haan yeh baat to sahi hai... har baar wo musibat mol leti hai aur bak bak bahut karti hai... lekin ye bhi ek sach hai ki wo jo karti hai wo bas dusro ki madad karne hetu karti hai... aur madad bhi unki.. jinko madad karne ke liye koi nahi aata, jinhe aage koi hope na dikhe ki kare bhi to kya kare problem se nikalne ke liye..
Tab mowgli samne se aati hai madad karne ke liye.. wo bhi niswarth roop se..
chaahe uske liye koi musibat hi kyun mol leni pare ushe..
waise aatm suraksha bhi jaruri hai... I think ushe martial arts school mein admission leni chahiye... :D
Or jaate hi dekhti hai...ki wo kal wala ldka...fir se hath jode khada tha...
"Hey ishwar ..aaj to aap mujhe darshan de hi dijiye...mujhse wo nhi hoga ...na jane kaise vyakti...varsho tak nadi me khade hokar...athwa parvat pr bethkr apki tapasya kr lete hai...kya mai apka putra saman nhi..kripya mujhe daeshan de dijiye ishwar..."

Rakshita-are...ye to whi hai...jo pichhle divas aaya tha...abhi dekhti hu...rakshita uske pas chal deti hai...

"Hey ishwar...kripya mujhe darshan de dijiye...mai apni ankhe khol rha hu...kripya darshan dijiye ishwar...darshan dijiye...mai apni ankhe khol rha hu...khol rha hu...orrr ye kholi....."


Lekin ye kya ankhe kholte hi samne rakshita khadi thi...
"Are...tum aaj bhi aagyi..."wo ladka samne khadi hui rakshita ko dekhta hai...

Rakahita-are..mai to yhi rahti hu...tum yha aagye ho...or ek baat suno...ese ishwar ke darhshan nhi hote...tumhe kathor tap krna hi hoga...

"Achha...tumne kabhi kiya hai kathor tap..."
Rakshita-nhi...
"Kyuu...kya tumhe ishwar ke darshan nhi krne..."

Rakshita-nhi...kyuki mujhe to sbme ishwar ke darshan ho jaate hai...pitashree me...matashree me...bhishm pitamah me...wo dekho...us nanhe memne me...sbme ishwar ka waas hai...

"Tum baate to bahut achhi krte ho"
Rakshita-kya tum achhi baate nhi krte?

"Nhi...mai nhi krta"
Rakshita-mai achhi hu...islie achhi baate krti hu...
Pas me khada us ladke ka dost muh or hath rakhkr hasne lgta hai....or dhire se us ldke se fisfusata hai...
"Arthat tum achhe nhi ho...islie tum achhi baate nhi krte"

Wo apne dost ki trf ko ghoorkr dekhta hai...
"Achha thk hai...kintu ye sb to apratyaksh hai...mujhe to pratyaksh ishwar ke darshan krne hai..."

Rakshita-wo smbhav nhi hai.....kyuki tum kathor tap nhi kr skoge na...
Ladka muskurata hua-dekhna...mai bina kathor tap kiye ...ishwar ke darshan krke rahunga...
Rakahita-thik hai...prayas kro....ishwar kare tumhari manokaamna jald hi puri ho...

"Dhanyawad....wese tum isi gao se ho na.."
Rakshita-haa kintu...tum kyu puch rhe ho...
"Rakshita...putri yaha aana jara.."pandit ji rakshita ko bulate hue bolte hai...or rakshita wha chali jaati hai...

"Mitra...tum meri baat man jao...tumhe ishwar ke darshan nhi honge...uske lie kathor tap awashyak hai..."uska dost usko smjhata hua bolta hai...

"Kya maine tumse puchha..mai ishwar ke darshan awashya krke rahunga...."wo ladka apne dost ko bolta hai...or wha se chal deta hai...
is Akash ka kuch nahi ho sakta.. ye to nalla hi marega :buttkick:
har kan mein upor wala virajmaan hai.. murkh kahika itni si baat gyat nahi usko.. :sigh:
Kuch samay bad...rakshita jb ghar jaati hai...
Mala-rakshita putri bhojan to samay se kr liya kro...pure din mandir me hi rahti ho..kya krti rahti ho wha...
Rakshita-mata...pahle to bolti thi ki ishwar ki sadhna me dhyan lgao...or ab bolti ho ki...

Mala-putri ...maine aise to nahi kaha tha ki sadaiv whi rho...kisi ki bhi ati achhi nhi hoti...

Rakshita-mata..pahle sunishchit krle ki ap chahti kya hai...mai ghar pr rhu...athwa ishwar ki sadhna me lipt rhu...
Chanda-mata...vakpatuta me bhala rakshita se koi vijay hua hai...

Rakshita-didi...ye ap meri prashansha kr rhi hai...athwa ...
Chada-are pranshamsha hi hai..tum krodhit mt hov....
Rakshita-bhala mai apni didi se kaise krodhit hone lgi...meri didi to smasast sansar ki sarvshreshta didi hai...

Chanda-bs bs...ab jhaad pr na chadhao...chalo...ab kam me thoda hath btao...

Rakshita-didi...apko pta hai mujhe mandir me kitna kaam hai...
Chandana-acha...ye to mai jantu hu...kya krte ho waise wha...
Rakshita-mai...wha sfai krti hu...ishwar ki puja krti hu...shardhaluo me prashad vitrit krti hu...orr

Chanda-bs bs...mai swayam kr lungi...tum bhojan krke jao......


is trh...rakshita ka jaada samay ab bs mandir me hi gujarta tha...usse chhote 2bchhe or the...uske bawjood bhi...rakshita ghr me sbki laadli rhi....islie use koi kuch nhi bolta tha...

Bs ghar pr to wo khana khane...ya sone hi aati thi...pura din mandir me bethi rahti thi...mandir kaafi bda tha...wha ped bahut jada lge the..bs whi rakshita bethi hu kuch na kuch krti rahti thi.....iska man bhi yhi lagta tha...ghr pr to jaise bor ho jati thi...pujan karya me sbse aage rahti thi...pandit ji to bs naam ke hi the...vastav me mandir ki sari dekhbhal rakshita hi karti thi...


Rakshita pitamah se milne ke bad bahut khush thi...halanki usne ghar nhi btaya kyuki...agr wo ghar btati to uski mata uspr krodh krti ...kyuki pitamah ne to use bchaya tha...usse pahle jo sankat aaya tha uspr mata krodh na kre...islie rakshita ne ghar me bhi nhi btaya...lekin apni sakhiyo ko sbko btaya...or bdi khush thi...

Rakshiita or arushi mandir me bethe baate kr rhe the...
Rakshita-arushi...yadi pitamah swayam mujhe shatra vidya sikha de...to kaisa hoga...
Arushi-to tum sansar me sbse shresht yodha bna jaogi....kintu aisa hoga nhi...
Rakshita-haa maii to bs soch rhi thi...

Ese hi idhar udhar ki baate or dinbhr ke kriyakalapo me din gujar jaata hai...
Rat ko khana khakar sb sone ki taiyari me the...
Mala-kya hua swami...ap kuch vichlit hai...
Bhuapd-haa...rajbhawan me bahut hi tanavpurn vatavaran rahta hai....

Rakshita-kyu pitashree....kya hua...waha to swayam pitamah hai...to wha koi tanav kaise rah sakta hai...
Bhupad-pitamah to apni prtigya se bandhe hai putri...wo bhala isme kya kr sakte hai...koi bahri sankat aaye...to kuch kre bhi...kintu ...wha to kutumb me hi yudh chhidne jaa rha hai...

Mala-kintu kya koi bhi prayas nhi kar rha hai...us mahayudh ko rokne ka...
Bhupad-pitamah...matatma vidur...guru dronacharya ,kulguru kripacharya...or shre shrishn bahut prayatn kr rhe hai...kintu...mahatvakansha...

Rakshita-pitahsree... Pitamah ki baat wha koi kyu nhi manta...pitamah to swayam ishwar tulya hai...
Bhupad-putri...tumhare lie hai...hmare liye hai...hme yha bethkar jaisa lgta hai...wesa hai nhi...pitamah ki baat yadi wha maani jaati...to ye samasya utpann hi na hoti...

Mala-kya is mahayudh ka...hmare jeevan yapan pr bhi prabhav pdega...
Bhupad-hmare hi nhi...smpuran bharatvarsh pr prabhav pdega...vasudev shree krishn ne aaj babut hi prayas kiya...orrr.

Bhupad fir unko wo sb btate hai...jb krishna ji sandhi prastav lekar aate hai.....
Pura sunne ke bad...
Rakshita-pitashree...ye vasudev krishna kon hai...
Bhupad-putri...wese to dwarka nagri ke raja hai...kintu kuch vidwan log unhe ishwar ke samtulya mante hai...swayam pitamah bhishm bhi...unhe pranam krte hai...

Rakshita hairani se-kya wo itne samman ke patra hai...maine to unhe kabhi nhi dekha.....
Bhupad-dekhe to honge...kintu tumhe yaad nhi...samvle se hai...hath me bansuri rakhte hai...or sr pr mayur pankh...
Rakshita yaad krti hai...us din ka vakya jb wo shawak ko chhodne gyi thi...

Rakshita-kya...wo vasurdev krishna hai...jb pitamah bhishm unhe samman ka patra smjhte hai...to awashya hi wo is yogya hai...
Rakshita sari ghatna yaad krti hai...jb shree krishna ki di hui bansuri ne...sudarshsm chakra bnakr use chaya tha...

"Haa...jaise bhagwan vishnu ka sudarsham chakra hota hai...wese hi chakra us din tha...arthat...kya wo vastav me ishwar hai..."rakshita sochne lgti hai...

Rakshita kuch sochkr-kintu pitashree...
Mala-rakshita...so jao...tum kuch baat hi nhi krne deti ho...chup so jao....
Rakshita muh sa bnakr chup let jaati hai...or sochne lgti hai sb bate...wo pareshan se us vakya ko soch sochkr....
jab tak is dharti pe insaan hai tab tak yudh to hote hi rahenge.. Phir chaahe past mein ho ya present mein ho mein ya phir in future mein...
lekin do logo ya kayi logo ke bich hone wale yudh ke chalte harazana bharte hai baaki ke nirdosh.. chahe wo insaan ho ya phir bezuban janwar ya phir ped paudhe ya phir ye dharti maa :sigh:
2din bad....
"Hey ishwar...aj to darshan de hi do...chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...aaj to mai apke darshan kiye bina nhi jaunga...chahe mujhe yha sankdo divas bitane pd jaye.....mai bhuka rahuga ...pyasa rhunga...kintu aaj darshan krke hi jaunga...mai ankhe khol rha hu ishwar...kripya mujhe darsham de.....ye kholi mene ankhe...orrr...

Samne rakshita muh fulaye khade thi...
Ladka-are...jb bhi mai ishwar se prathna krta hu...tum kyu aajati ho...

Rakshita-tumhe mene bar bar amjhaya ki sihwar ke darshna aise nhi honge...kintu tum fir bhi roj yha akr ishwar ke darshan krne ki bolte ho...
"Ha mai darshan krke rahunga....kintu tum mere marg me badha bn jaati ho"

Rakshita -are...mai kaha badha bni...
"Kyuki hath mai ishwar ke samakhsh jodta hu...or samne tum aajati ho...murkh kanya kya chahti hu tum...ki mujhe ishwar ke darshan na ho..."

Rakshita-tumne mujhe murkh kaha ..mai tumhe mrityudand dilwa dungi...

"Achha dilwao...tum murkh thi...murkh ho...or sadaiv murkh rhogi..."

"Matashree...."rakshita mata ko yaad krke rone lgti hai...
"Are...isme vilap ki kya baat...hey kanya tum kyu vilaap kr rhi ho..."

Rakshita ki ankho se ansu nikal aate hai..
Arushi bhagi hui aati hai...or rakshita ko smbhalti hai...
Arushi-kyaa hua rakshita...tum vilap kyu kr rhi ho...kya hua...
Rakshita us ldke ki taraf ungli kakre-usne mujhe...mujhe murkh kaha....
Or rakshita fir rone lgti hai....

Arushi-ohhh...kon ho tum...kyu murkh kaha ise...
"Murkh ko murkh hi kaha jaata hai..."
"Dhadaaaaammm"
"Aaaaaa......"achank pichhe se us ladko ko kisi ne takkar maari...or wo ladka dur jaa gira...

Wo ladka jb uthakr dekhta hai...to wha memna khada tha...
"Mainnnn....mannn...mainnnn..."memna chillana shuru kr deta hai...

Arushi-rakshita chup ho jao...dekho tumahre mitra aagye...ab is yuvak ki khair nhi...

Memne ke chillane se or bhi memne or chhote kutte aajate hai......
Wo ladka dekhkar hairan rah jaata hai...
Uska dost-ye kya hai...ye sb....
Rakshita roti hui-mitra...isne mujhe murkh kaha....

"Maaainnnnnn...bhow bhow...mainnn...bhow bhow..."memne or kutte rakshita ke itne bolte hi us ladke ki taraf bhag lete hai....

Kmsekm 4 memne the or 5kutte(chhote wale)

Ladka dekhakr dar jaata hai.....
"Ishwar...bchao..."wo ladka bhag leta hai.....
Lekin ek memna aakar uske pichhwade pr ek takakr maarta hai...
"Aaaaa....maataaaaaaa.....bchaaaooo"
Pichhwada pakadkr bhaagta hai...lekin ek pilla uska kapde pakadr kheechne lagta hai...

Dusre pilla uske per me kaat leta hai...pagal sa ho jata hai wo ladka.....
Kbhi ek memne idhar se takkar marta to dusra udhar se...koi pilla kaat'ta...to koi kapde pakadlr kheechta...

Ladka buti trh preshaan ho jaata hai...
Wo jaise taise smbhta hai...
Or mandir ke samne hath jodkr-ishwar....
Itne me hi ek memna pta nhi kaha se aaya orr...
"Phatttt"us ldke ke muh pr laat maari...
Wo ladka muh pr hath rakhta hai..to memne ne ekdm uske pichhwade pr takkar maar di...
Pichhwade pr hath lgaya to kutte ne per me kaat liya...
Ldka pagal sa ho gya tha...
Or uska dost wo pata nhi kaha bhag gya tha...

Bachhe wha khade hokar use dekh dekhakar hasne lgte hai...

Wo ladka jaise taise smbhalkar girta pdta...memno ki laat khata hua rakshita ke paas aata hai...
Or hath jodkr-kripya inhe roke...mai chaama mangta hu...inhe roko...
Rakshita-ruk jao mitra...
Itna bolte hi sb pille or menne shant ho jaate hai...

Rakshkta jb uska huliya dekhti hai...to has pdti jai...
Uske chehre pr menne ki laaat ka nishan bn gya tha...or kapde jaha taha se fat chuke the...ekdm bhikari jaisa ho gya tha wo...

"Ye kya tumne ...maine tumhe sirf murkh kaha tha...or ye pashu....kon ho tum"
Rakshita-mai rakshita hu...or swayam bhishm piyamah ne mera nam rakha hai...
"Mujhe chhama krdo...mene tumhe murkh kaha.."itna bolkar wo ladka chal deta hai...

Arushali-are...tum to ro rhi thi na...
Rakshita-ha...kintu mere mitra ne jo uske sath kiya...ab achha lag rha hai....
:lol: :roflol:
ha ha ha ha ha ha..
Haan ye bilkul sahi kiya un jiv jantuo ne us haramkhor Akash ke sath :lol:
aare maar hi daalte jaan se.. jinda kahe chhoda ushe :D
ab yakin hai is baat pe ki ye tharki Akash aise hi laawarish maut marega :nutkick:

:roflol: :roflol: :roflol:
are koi is Akash ko us sherni ke samne faink do yaar... bichari bhukhi hogi.. uski bhojan banke kam se kam kuch to punya kama lega ye kamina akash :lol:
Agle din.


Wo ladka fir se mandir me jata hai...is bar wo akela tha...uska dost sath me nhi tha...
Jb dekhta hai...to rakshita ek memne ke bchhe ko glaas se dudh pila rhi thi...or muskura rhi thi...

Ladka apne mn me-..acha...to ye rahasya hai...ki ye pashu iske rakshak bn gye...aaj to iski sachhi jaankar hi rahunga...

Wo ladka dhire dhire dabe pao andar ki or jaata hai...or rakshita ke thoda pas se...uske side me ek kone me khada ho jata hai...jise rakshita dekh na ske...

Rakshita to memne ka pet bharne me magan thi...
Tbhi dusra memna bhi rakshita ke paas aajata hai...
Rakshita usse pakadti hai...or dusre dudh ka katora uthakar use pilana lagti hai...or idhar udhar dekhne lgti hai..
Rakshita-jaldi piyo mitra...kisi ne dekh liya to anarth ho Jayega....

"Achha...mtlb koi to rahasya hai...ye kanya kuch to anuchit kr rhi hai..tabhi itna bhaybheet hai....abhi gyan ho jayega..."wo ladka sochta hua..achank bahar nikal aata hai...

Ladka-rakshita....
Rakshita jb najar uthakr dekhti hai...ekdm hairan ho jaati hai...
Rakshita-tum...tum...tum yha kya kr rhe ho...
Rakshita darti darti si bolti hai...

Ladka-maine sb sun liya hai..ab purn satya btao...anyatha mai sbko bta dunga...

Rakshita-kya...kya bta doge...
Ladka-yhi jo tum kr rhi hi...dekho rakshita...ye jo tum kar rhi ho uchit nhi kr rhi ho...

Hanalki us ldko ko puri baat nhi pta tha...lekin bs andhere me teer chal rha rha...

Rakshita rone jaise ho jaati hai...
Ladka-hey hey tum vilap mt krna...dekho...kl ka dard ab tkk hai mujhe...tum vilap krogi to tumhare ye mitra mujhe fir se maarenge...dekho...mai kisi ko nhi btaunga yadi tum mujhe purn satya bta do....

Rakshita-kya tum satya bol rhe ho...kisi ko nahi btaoge...
Ladka-ha...yadi tum mujhe purn satya btao ro
to...

Rakshita-mai yha mandir me ...bs in pashuo ke lie aati hu...
Ladka hairani se-arthaat...
Rakshita-mandir me jo bhog lgta hai..dudh chadhaya jaata hai...mai wo sb churakar...ya bcha hua...ya fir ishwar ke samne se uthakr uthakr...kaise bhi krke...in pashuo ko khilaati hu....

Ladka-lekin aisa kyu...ye to tum ghar par bhi kar sakti ho na...
Rakshita-kisi ghr pr itna bhojan pakta hai kya...hm bahut hi nirdhan hai...apne pet bhar jaye wo hi bahut hai....pashuo ka pet kese bherege...ishwar hme chalate hai...samast sansar ko chlate hai.....to kya apne bhojan ke lie wo kisi manushya pr nirbhar rhege...yha is mandir me log asharfiyaa,sona,chadhaate hai...in sbka ishwar kya krege...mai unhe churakar...unse bhojan khreedkar in pashho ko khilaati hu....

Ladka-kintu...chori karna to uchit nhi hai na...
Rakshita-haa janti hu...kintu uska dand mujhe milega...kintu abhi in pashuo ka pet to bhar jayega na...
Ladka-kintu un asharfiyo se tum...tumhari
nirdhanta bhi dur kar sakti ho...

Rakshita-nhi..mai ye soch bhi nahi sakti...wo to mera swarth ho jayega...mai bs in pashuo ke lie hi ye karti hu...jo bhojan yha aata hai...ya bchta hai...pandit ji ki krjo se bchakar mai in pashuo ko prtidin khilaati hu...

Ladka-tumhara ghar kaha hai...
Rakahita-yhi hai...kintu in pashuo ke lie bhojan ka prabandh ho jaye...islie mai apne ghr nhi jaati...or jada samay yhi vyateet krti hu...

Rakshita itna bolkar apni najar nichi kr leti hai...

Ladka-tum udas kyu ho gyi ho....
Rakshita-chori karna uchit nhi hai...mai janti hu...kintu iske atirikt mujhe koi vikalp dikhai nhi deta..hmare ghr ke pas ek din...ek chhota kutta bhuk se mr gya tha...usdin mujhe bahut peeda hui...mai kuch din bad mandir aayi to dekha yha bahut bhojan vyarth jaa rha hai.....us din mujhe aisa krne ka sujha....


Ladka muskurata hua-mujhe chhama krdo...kal maine tumhe murkh kaha...tum bahut achhi ho...or tumhare ye mitra bhi...
Rakshiya uski baat sunkar thoda sa smile ke deti hai...

Ladka-or ek baat btau...mujhe ishwar ke darshan ho gye....
Rakahita-kyaa...tum satya bol rhe ho...
Ladka-haa...mujhe ishwar ke darshan ho gye...
Raoshita-kintu bina kathor tap ke...ye kaise smbhav hai...

Ladka muskurta hua-ye tum nhi smjhogi....mai chalta hu......or ab to ishwar ke darshan mujhe roj honge....

Ladka chal deta hai....uske dimak me kuch chal rha tha...
"Ishwar ka kaam jeev jagat ka palan poshan hai...kisi ka uchit anuchit magr darshan krna hai...manushya to apna pet swayam bhar skte hai...kintu ye pashu...ye pashu nhi...parantu tum inko sahara de rhi ho...tum mahan ho rakshita..mujhe to ishwar tumhare andar hi dikhai deta hai....agar ishwar hai to wo asie hi honge...be sahara ko sahara dene wale...bejubaan ki peeda samjhne wale....rakshita akhir maine bina kathor tap ke iswar ke darshsn kr hi liye.....ha rakhita...tum jaise logo me hi sayi mayne me ishwar ka was hota hai...ISHWAR ME MUJHE TUM...OT TUMME MUJHE ISHWAR DIKHAI DETA HAI..."muskurata hau rakshita ke khyalo me khoya hua chala jaa rha tha wo...
Haan chori karna paap hai.. lekin jis wajah se kar rahi hai wo punya hai...
is karya ko sudhar bhi sakti hai mowgli...
pujari ya pujaran se puch ke prasad un janwaro ko khilani chahiye ... to is paap se bhi mukt ho jayegi wo..
upor wala to sabme viraj maan hai ab ye baat un sabhi pe hai ki wo upor wale dwara diye gaye budhi gyaan ke raah pe chalte hai ki ya phir nadi ki ulti disha nao chalte hai..
mowgli bas wohi kar rahi joh uski karm hai.. woh bhi bina phal ki ichha kiye.. :check:
Sote wakt...
"Hasti hui rakshita...do chutiya ki hui thi...jo dono kandho pr aage ki taraf latak rahi rhi ..sundar chehra...mathe pr ek chhoti si bindi...or hasti hui aisi lag rhi thi...jaise manao dunai ka sari khushiya yhi sma gyi ho......Or memne ko glass se dudh pilaati hui"kitni achhi lag rhi thi wo...schme rakshita...tum mahan ho...


"Yadi tum kathor tap kroge to hi tumhe ishwar ki prapti hogi...."
"Mai to yhi rahti hu...tum yha aate ho"
"Are...laddu to ishwar kha gye...islie aaj pushp ka prashad hai..."
"Isne mujhe murkh kaha"
"Mera nam rakshita hai...swayam pitamah bhishm ne mera nam rakha hai..."
"Manushya to apna pet swayam bhar lete hai...kintu ye pashu kaise bharnge..."
"Haa ye uchit nhi hai...uska dand muje milega...kintu abhi in pashuo ka pet to bharega...iske atirikt mere pas koi vikalp nhi"

Rakshita ke muh se nikli ek ek baat...rah rahkr yaad aarhi thi...or jaise jaise uski baate yaad aati...chehre pr khud b khud muskaan laut aati hai....
Na chahte hue bhi...uska masoom sa chehra bar bar ankho ke samme aajata tha...

"Uska naam kya tha......rakshita...rakshita...kitna achha nam hai..."wo ladka sone se pahle sochta hai...or so jaata hai....


Next update will come soon.
tharki Akash ke mann mein laddu futa :roflol: :roflol:
are ye hawasi to sote jaagte khate pite bas mowgli ke bare sochne laga :D
Jane aage ab kya hoga..
Khair.. Mujhe kya... :lollypop:
tulsi is sanshar ke bhaanti bhaanti ke log... :roflol:
Khair let's see what happens next
Btw kaafi rochak aur dilachasp update tha..
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills ankita ma'am :applause: :applause:
 

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UPDATE 29


Pitamah-kon tha wo...jisne tumhe is sbse awgat kraya...
Rakshita-mai nhi jaanti pitamah...
Pitamah-kon ho sakta hai...jisne tumhe wo baate smjhayi jo hm nhi smjha ske...khair...
Pitamah-to us singni ne...tumahre hath se fal bhi khaya...
Ralshita-haa pitamah...mai satya bol rhi hu...
Pitamah-singh jo kbhi mans ke atirikt kuch nhi khate...wo fal khaye...ye bahut durlabh hai...

Rakahita-kintu mai satya kah rhi hu pitamah...
Pitamah-hm jaante hai ki tum asatya nhi bolti...or ye yoddha kon tha...kya tum ise jaanti ho...

Rakshita-nahi pitamah ..hm to bs yha fal lene aaye the...
Pitamah-rakshita putri....tum sadaiv sankat me kyu pdi rahti ho....sadaiv hi tumhari koi raksha kre...ye to sambhav nhi hai na....

Rakshita-kintu pitamah...mai akaran hi kisi sankat me nhi padti...ab dekhiye...is mrug ko un logo ne maar diya...iska kya dosh tha...kyu maara ise...
Pitamah-putri tum bahut bholi ho...kintu ye satya hai...hm isme paritavrtan nhi kar skte...ye sb karmo ka lekha jokha hota hai putri....ho sakta is mrug ke bhagya me aisi hi mrityu likho ho...

Rakahita-kintu pitamah...
Pitamah-tum ye kintu ,parantu bahut krti hu putri...hm to bs ye sochkr vichlit hai putri...ki tumhe sadaiv hi koi bchaye ye sambhav nhi hai...hme bhay hai ki...

Rakshita-pitamah....apse bda yodhha is samast sansar me koi nhi...yadi aisa hai to...ap mujhe apni shishya bna lijiye...ap mujhe dhanurvidya athwa anya vidhyao ka gyan deejiye...jisse mai swayam ki raksha kar saku...


Pitamah haste hue-tum bdi ho gyi ho...kintu tumhari baate ab bhi whi ho...ekdm natkhat....bhupad se jald hi is vishay me baat krege...ki tumhe kisi aise ko sonp de jo sadaiv hi tumhari raksha kr ske....ab ham chalte hai....

Rakshita or sbhi saheli -ji pitamah....

Pitamah apne ghode pr beth wha se chal dete hai...

Rakshita-arushi...pitamah me jo ant me kaha...mujhe uska tatparya samjh nhi aaya...
Arushi-wo tumhare vivah ki baat kr rhe the...hahaha...
Rakshita hairani se-acha...ye to vichitra baat hai...

Teeno saheliya fal lekar mandir me chali jaati hai...

Or jaate hi dekhti hai...ki wo kal wala ldka...fir se hath jode khada tha...
"Hey ishwar ..aaj to aap mujhe darshan de hi dijiye...mujhse wo nhi hoga ...na jane kaise vyakti...varsho tak nadi me khade hokar...athwa parvat pr bethkr apki tapasya kr lete hai...kya mai apka putra saman nhi..kripya mujhe daeshan de dijiye ishwar..."

Rakshita-are...ye to whi hai...jo pichhle divas aaya tha...abhi dekhti hu...rakshita uske pas chal deti hai...

"Hey ishwar...kripya mujhe darshan de dijiye...mai apni ankhe khol rha hu...kripya darshan dijiye ishwar...darshan dijiye...mai apni ankhe khol rha hu...khol rha hu...orrr ye kholi....."


Lekin ye kya ankhe kholte hi samne rakshita khadi thi...
"Are...tum aaj bhi aagyi..."wo ladka samne khadi hui rakshita ko dekhta hai...

Rakahita-are..mai to yhi rahti hu...tum yha aagye ho...or ek baat suno...ese ishwar ke darhshan nhi hote...tumhe kathor tap krna hi hoga...

"Achha...tumne kabhi kiya hai kathor tap..."
Rakshita-nhi...
"Kyuu...kya tumhe ishwar ke darshan nhi krne..."

Rakshita-nhi...kyuki mujhe to sbme ishwar ke darshan ho jaate hai...pitashree me...matashree me...bhishm pitamah me...wo dekho...us nanhe memne me...sbme ishwar ka waas hai...

"Tum baate to bahut achhi krte ho"
Rakshita-kya tum achhi baate nhi krte?

"Nhi...mai nhi krta"
Rakshita-mai achhi hu...islie achhi baate krti hu...
Pas me khada us ladke ka dost muh or hath rakhkr hasne lgta hai....or dhire se us ldke se fisfusata hai...
"Arthat tum achhe nhi ho...islie tum achhi baate nhi krte"

Wo apne dost ki trf ko ghoorkr dekhta hai...
"Achha thk hai...kintu ye sb to apratyaksh hai...mujhe to pratyaksh ishwar ke darshan krne hai..."

Rakshita-wo smbhav nhi hai.....kyuki tum kathor tap nhi kr skoge na...
Ladka muskurata hua-dekhna...mai bina kathor tap kiye ...ishwar ke darshan krke rahunga...
Rakahita-thik hai...prayas kro....ishwar kare tumhari manokaamna jald hi puri ho...

"Dhanyawad....wese tum isi gao se ho na.."
Rakshita-haa kintu...tum kyu puch rhe ho...
"Rakshita...putri yaha aana jara.."pandit ji rakshita ko bulate hue bolte hai...or rakshita wha chali jaati hai...

"Mitra...tum meri baat man jao...tumhe ishwar ke darshan nhi honge...uske lie kathor tap awashyak hai..."uska dost usko smjhata hua bolta hai...

"Kya maine tumse puchha..mai ishwar ke darshan awashya krke rahunga...."wo ladka apne dost ko bolta hai...or wha se chal deta hai...


Kuch samay bad...rakshita jb ghar jaati hai...
Mala-rakshita putri bhojan to samay se kr liya kro...pure din mandir me hi rahti ho..kya krti rahti ho wha...
Rakshita-mata...pahle to bolti thi ki ishwar ki sadhna me dhyan lgao...or ab bolti ho ki...

Mala-putri ...maine aise to nahi kaha tha ki sadaiv whi rho...kisi ki bhi ati achhi nhi hoti...

Rakshita-mata..pahle sunishchit krle ki ap chahti kya hai...mai ghar pr rhu...athwa ishwar ki sadhna me lipt rhu...
Chanda-mata...vakpatuta me bhala rakshita se koi vijay hua hai...

Rakshita-didi...ye ap meri prashansha kr rhi hai...athwa ...
Chada-are pranshamsha hi hai..tum krodhit mt hov....
Rakshita-bhala mai apni didi se kaise krodhit hone lgi...meri didi to smasast sansar ki sarvshreshta didi hai...

Chanda-bs bs...ab jhaad pr na chadhao...chalo...ab kam me thoda hath btao...

Rakshita-didi...apko pta hai mujhe mandir me kitna kaam hai...
Chandana-acha...ye to mai jantu hu...kya krte ho waise wha...
Rakshita-mai...wha sfai krti hu...ishwar ki puja krti hu...shardhaluo me prashad vitrit krti hu...orr

Chanda-bs bs...mai swayam kr lungi...tum bhojan krke jao......


is trh...rakshita ka jaada samay ab bs mandir me hi gujarta tha...usse chhote 2bchhe or the...uske bawjood bhi...rakshita ghr me sbki laadli rhi....islie use koi kuch nhi bolta tha...

Bs ghar pr to wo khana khane...ya sone hi aati thi...pura din mandir me bethi rahti thi...mandir kaafi bda tha...wha ped bahut jada lge the..bs whi rakshita bethi hu kuch na kuch krti rahti thi.....iska man bhi yhi lagta tha...ghr pr to jaise bor ho jati thi...pujan karya me sbse aage rahti thi...pandit ji to bs naam ke hi the...vastav me mandir ki sari dekhbhal rakshita hi karti thi...


Rakshita pitamah se milne ke bad bahut khush thi...halanki usne ghar nhi btaya kyuki...agr wo ghar btati to uski mata uspr krodh krti ...kyuki pitamah ne to use bchaya tha...usse pahle jo sankat aaya tha uspr mata krodh na kre...islie rakshita ne ghar me bhi nhi btaya...lekin apni sakhiyo ko sbko btaya...or bdi khush thi...

Rakshiita or arushi mandir me bethe baate kr rhe the...
Rakshita-arushi...yadi pitamah swayam mujhe shatra vidya sikha de...to kaisa hoga...
Arushi-to tum sansar me sbse shresht yodha bna jaogi....kintu aisa hoga nhi...
Rakshita-haa maii to bs soch rhi thi...

Ese hi idhar udhar ki baate or dinbhr ke kriyakalapo me din gujar jaata hai...
Rat ko khana khakar sb sone ki taiyari me the...
Mala-kya hua swami...ap kuch vichlit hai...
Bhuapd-haa...rajbhawan me bahut hi tanavpurn vatavaran rahta hai....

Rakshita-kyu pitashree....kya hua...waha to swayam pitamah hai...to wha koi tanav kaise rah sakta hai...
Bhupad-pitamah to apni prtigya se bandhe hai putri...wo bhala isme kya kr sakte hai...koi bahri sankat aaye...to kuch kre bhi...kintu ...wha to kutumb me hi yudh chhidne jaa rha hai...

Mala-kintu kya koi bhi prayas nhi kar rha hai...us mahayudh ko rokne ka...
Bhupad-pitamah...matatma vidur...guru dronacharya ,kulguru kripacharya...or shre shrishn bahut prayatn kr rhe hai...kintu...mahatvakansha...

Rakshita-pitahsree... Pitamah ki baat wha koi kyu nhi manta...pitamah to swayam ishwar tulya hai...
Bhupad-putri...tumhare lie hai...hmare liye hai...hme yha bethkar jaisa lgta hai...wesa hai nhi...pitamah ki baat yadi wha maani jaati...to ye samasya utpann hi na hoti...

Mala-kya is mahayudh ka...hmare jeevan yapan pr bhi prabhav pdega...
Bhupad-hmare hi nhi...smpuran bharatvarsh pr prabhav pdega...vasudev shree krishn ne aaj babut hi prayas kiya...orrr.

Bhupad fir unko wo sb btate hai...jb krishna ji sandhi prastav lekar aate hai.....
Pura sunne ke bad...
Rakshita-pitashree...ye vasudev krishna kon hai...
Bhupad-putri...wese to dwarka nagri ke raja hai...kintu kuch vidwan log unhe ishwar ke samtulya mante hai...swayam pitamah bhishm bhi...unhe pranam krte hai...

Rakshita hairani se-kya wo itne samman ke patra hai...maine to unhe kabhi nhi dekha.....
Bhupad-dekhe to honge...kintu tumhe yaad nhi...samvle se hai...hath me bansuri rakhte hai...or sr pr mayur pankh...
Rakshita yaad krti hai...us din ka vakya jb wo shawak ko chhodne gyi thi...

Rakshita-kya...wo vasurdev krishna hai...jb pitamah bhishm unhe samman ka patra smjhte hai...to awashya hi wo is yogya hai...
Rakshita sari ghatna yaad krti hai...jb shree krishna ki di hui bansuri ne...sudarshsm chakra bnakr use chaya tha...

"Haa...jaise bhagwan vishnu ka sudarsham chakra hota hai...wese hi chakra us din tha...arthat...kya wo vastav me ishwar hai..."rakshita sochne lgti hai...

Rakshita kuch sochkr-kintu pitashree...
Mala-rakshita...so jao...tum kuch baat hi nhi krne deti ho...chup so jao....
Rakshita muh sa bnakr chup let jaati hai...or sochne lgti hai sb bate...wo pareshan se us vakya ko soch sochkr....



2din bad....
"Hey ishwar...aj to darshan de hi do...chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...aaj to mai apke darshan kiye bina nhi jaunga...chahe mujhe yha sankdo divas bitane pd jaye.....mai bhuka rahuga ...pyasa rhunga...kintu aaj darshan krke hi jaunga...mai ankhe khol rha hu ishwar...kripya mujhe darsham de.....ye kholi mene ankhe...orrr...

Samne rakshita muh fulaye khade thi...
Ladka-are...jb bhi mai ishwar se prathna krta hu...tum kyu aajati ho...

Rakshita-tumhe mene bar bar amjhaya ki sihwar ke darshna aise nhi honge...kintu tum fir bhi roj yha akr ishwar ke darshan krne ki bolte ho...
"Ha mai darshan krke rahunga....kintu tum mere marg me badha bn jaati ho"

Rakshita -are...mai kaha badha bni...
"Kyuki hath mai ishwar ke samakhsh jodta hu...or samne tum aajati ho...murkh kanya kya chahti hu tum...ki mujhe ishwar ke darshan na ho..."

Rakshita-tumne mujhe murkh kaha ..mai tumhe mrityudand dilwa dungi...

"Achha dilwao...tum murkh thi...murkh ho...or sadaiv murkh rhogi..."

"Matashree...."rakshita mata ko yaad krke rone lgti hai...
"Are...isme vilap ki kya baat...hey kanya tum kyu vilaap kr rhi ho..."

Rakshita ki ankho se ansu nikal aate hai..
Arushi bhagi hui aati hai...or rakshita ko smbhalti hai...
Arushi-kyaa hua rakshita...tum vilap kyu kr rhi ho...kya hua...
Rakshita us ldke ki taraf ungli kakre-usne mujhe...mujhe murkh kaha....
Or rakshita fir rone lgti hai....

Arushi-ohhh...kon ho tum...kyu murkh kaha ise...
"Murkh ko murkh hi kaha jaata hai..."
"Dhadaaaaammm"
"Aaaaaa......"achank pichhe se us ladko ko kisi ne takkar maari...or wo ladka dur jaa gira...

Wo ladka jb uthakr dekhta hai...to wha memna khada tha...
"Mainnnn....mannn...mainnnn..."memna chillana shuru kr deta hai...

Arushi-rakshita chup ho jao...dekho tumahre mitra aagye...ab is yuvak ki khair nhi...

Memne ke chillane se or bhi memne or chhote kutte aajate hai......
Wo ladka dekhkar hairan rah jaata hai...
Uska dost-ye kya hai...ye sb....
Rakshita roti hui-mitra...isne mujhe murkh kaha....

"Maaainnnnnn...bhow bhow...mainnn...bhow bhow..."memne or kutte rakshita ke itne bolte hi us ladke ki taraf bhag lete hai....

Kmsekm 4 memne the or 5kutte(chhote wale)

Ladka dekhakr dar jaata hai.....
"Ishwar...bchao..."wo ladka bhag leta hai.....
Lekin ek memna aakar uske pichhwade pr ek takakr maarta hai...
"Aaaaa....maataaaaaaa.....bchaaaooo"
Pichhwada pakadkr bhaagta hai...lekin ek pilla uska kapde pakadr kheechne lagta hai...

Dusre pilla uske per me kaat leta hai...pagal sa ho jata hai wo ladka.....
Kbhi ek memne idhar se takkar marta to dusra udhar se...koi pilla kaat'ta...to koi kapde pakadlr kheechta...

Ladka buti trh preshaan ho jaata hai...
Wo jaise taise smbhta hai...
Or mandir ke samne hath jodkr-ishwar....
Itne me hi ek memna pta nhi kaha se aaya orr...
"Phatttt"us ldke ke muh pr laat maari...
Wo ladka muh pr hath rakhta hai..to memne ne ekdm uske pichhwade pr takkar maar di...
Pichhwade pr hath lgaya to kutte ne per me kaat liya...
Ldka pagal sa ho gya tha...
Or uska dost wo pata nhi kaha bhag gya tha...

Bachhe wha khade hokar use dekh dekhakar hasne lgte hai...

Wo ladka jaise taise smbhalkar girta pdta...memno ki laat khata hua rakshita ke paas aata hai...
Or hath jodkr-kripya inhe roke...mai chaama mangta hu...inhe roko...
Rakshita-ruk jao mitra...
Itna bolte hi sb pille or menne shant ho jaate hai...

Rakshkta jb uska huliya dekhti hai...to has pdti jai...
Uske chehre pr menne ki laaat ka nishan bn gya tha...or kapde jaha taha se fat chuke the...ekdm bhikari jaisa ho gya tha wo...

"Ye kya tumne ...maine tumhe sirf murkh kaha tha...or ye pashu....kon ho tum"
Rakshita-mai rakshita hu...or swayam bhishm piyamah ne mera nam rakha hai...
"Mujhe chhama krdo...mene tumhe murkh kaha.."itna bolkar wo ladka chal deta hai...

Arushali-are...tum to ro rhi thi na...
Rakshita-ha...kintu mere mitra ne jo uske sath kiya...ab achha lag rha hai....


Agle din.


Wo ladka fir se mandir me jata hai...is bar wo akela tha...uska dost sath me nhi tha...
Jb dekhta hai...to rakshita ek memne ke bchhe ko glaas se dudh pila rhi thi...or muskura rhi thi...

Ladka apne mn me-..acha...to ye rahasya hai...ki ye pashu iske rakshak bn gye...aaj to iski sachhi jaankar hi rahunga...

Wo ladka dhire dhire dabe pao andar ki or jaata hai...or rakshita ke thoda pas se...uske side me ek kone me khada ho jata hai...jise rakshita dekh na ske...

Rakshita to memne ka pet bharne me magan thi...
Tbhi dusra memna bhi rakshita ke paas aajata hai...
Rakshita usse pakadti hai...or dusre dudh ka katora uthakar use pilana lagti hai...or idhar udhar dekhne lgti hai..
Rakshita-jaldi piyo mitra...kisi ne dekh liya to anarth ho Jayega....

"Achha...mtlb koi to rahasya hai...ye kanya kuch to anuchit kr rhi hai..tabhi itna bhaybheet hai....abhi gyan ho jayega..."wo ladka sochta hua..achank bahar nikal aata hai...

Ladka-rakshita....
Rakshita jb najar uthakr dekhti hai...ekdm hairan ho jaati hai...
Rakshita-tum...tum...tum yha kya kr rhe ho...
Rakshita darti darti si bolti hai...

Ladka-maine sb sun liya hai..ab purn satya btao...anyatha mai sbko bta dunga...

Rakshita-kya...kya bta doge...
Ladka-yhi jo tum kr rhi hi...dekho rakshita...ye jo tum kar rhi ho uchit nhi kr rhi ho...

Hanalki us ldko ko puri baat nhi pta tha...lekin bs andhere me teer chal rha rha...

Rakshita rone jaise ho jaati hai...
Ladka-hey hey tum vilap mt krna...dekho...kl ka dard ab tkk hai mujhe...tum vilap krogi to tumhare ye mitra mujhe fir se maarenge...dekho...mai kisi ko nhi btaunga yadi tum mujhe purn satya bta do....

Rakshita-kya tum satya bol rhe ho...kisi ko nahi btaoge...
Ladka-ha...yadi tum mujhe purn satya btao ro
to...

Rakshita-mai yha mandir me ...bs in pashuo ke lie aati hu...
Ladka hairani se-arthaat...
Rakshita-mandir me jo bhog lgta hai..dudh chadhaya jaata hai...mai wo sb churakar...ya bcha hua...ya fir ishwar ke samne se uthakr uthakr...kaise bhi krke...in pashuo ko khilaati hu....

Ladka-lekin aisa kyu...ye to tum ghar par bhi kar sakti ho na...
Rakshita-kisi ghr pr itna bhojan pakta hai kya...hm bahut hi nirdhan hai...apne pet bhar jaye wo hi bahut hai....pashuo ka pet kese bherege...ishwar hme chalate hai...samast sansar ko chlate hai.....to kya apne bhojan ke lie wo kisi manushya pr nirbhar rhege...yha is mandir me log asharfiyaa,sona,chadhaate hai...in sbka ishwar kya krege...mai unhe churakar...unse bhojan khreedkar in pashho ko khilaati hu....

Ladka-kintu...chori karna to uchit nhi hai na...
Rakshita-haa janti hu...kintu uska dand mujhe milega...kintu abhi in pashuo ka pet to bhar jayega na...
Ladka-kintu un asharfiyo se tum...tumhari
nirdhanta bhi dur kar sakti ho...

Rakshita-nhi..mai ye soch bhi nahi sakti...wo to mera swarth ho jayega...mai bs in pashuo ke lie hi ye karti hu...jo bhojan yha aata hai...ya bchta hai...pandit ji ki krjo se bchakar mai in pashuo ko prtidin khilaati hu...

Ladka-tumhara ghar kaha hai...
Rakahita-yhi hai...kintu in pashuo ke lie bhojan ka prabandh ho jaye...islie mai apne ghr nhi jaati...or jada samay yhi vyateet krti hu...

Rakshita itna bolkar apni najar nichi kr leti hai...

Ladka-tum udas kyu ho gyi ho....
Rakshita-chori karna uchit nhi hai...mai janti hu...kintu iske atirikt mujhe koi vikalp dikhai nhi deta..hmare ghr ke pas ek din...ek chhota kutta bhuk se mr gya tha...usdin mujhe bahut peeda hui...mai kuch din bad mandir aayi to dekha yha bahut bhojan vyarth jaa rha hai.....us din mujhe aisa krne ka sujha....


Ladka muskurata hua-mujhe chhama krdo...kal maine tumhe murkh kaha...tum bahut achhi ho...or tumhare ye mitra bhi...
Rakshiya uski baat sunkar thoda sa smile ke deti hai...

Ladka-or ek baat btau...mujhe ishwar ke darshan ho gye....
Rakahita-kyaa...tum satya bol rhe ho...
Ladka-haa...mujhe ishwar ke darshan ho gye...
Raoshita-kintu bina kathor tap ke...ye kaise smbhav hai...

Ladka muskurta hua-ye tum nhi smjhogi....mai chalta hu......or ab to ishwar ke darshan mujhe roj honge....

Ladka chal deta hai....uske dimak me kuch chal rha tha...
"Ishwar ka kaam jeev jagat ka palan poshan hai...kisi ka uchit anuchit magr darshan krna hai...manushya to apna pet swayam bhar skte hai...kintu ye pashu...ye pashu nhi...parantu tum inko sahara de rhi ho...tum mahan ho rakshita..mujhe to ishwar tumhare andar hi dikhai deta hai....agar ishwar hai to wo asie hi honge...be sahara ko sahara dene wale...bejubaan ki peeda samjhne wale....rakshita akhir maine bina kathor tap ke iswar ke darshsn kr hi liye.....ha rakhita...tum jaise logo me hi sayi mayne me ishwar ka was hota hai...ISHWAR ME MUJHE TUM...OT TUMME MUJHE ISHWAR DIKHAI DETA HAI..."muskurata hau rakshita ke khyalo me khoya hua chala jaa rha tha wo...

Sote wakt...
"Hasti hui rakshita...do chutiya ki hui thi...jo dono kandho pr aage ki taraf latak rahi rhi ..sundar chehra...mathe pr ek chhoti si bindi...or hasti hui aisi lag rhi thi...jaise manao dunai ka sari khushiya yhi sma gyi ho......Or memne ko glass se dudh pilaati hui"kitni achhi lag rhi thi wo...schme rakshita...tum mahan ho...


"Yadi tum kathor tap kroge to hi tumhe ishwar ki prapti hogi...."
"Mai to yhi rahti hu...tum yha aate ho"
"Are...laddu to ishwar kha gye...islie aaj pushp ka prashad hai..."
"Isne mujhe murkh kaha"
"Mera nam rakshita hai...swayam pitamah bhishm ne mera nam rakha hai..."
"Manushya to apna pet swayam bhar lete hai...kintu ye pashu kaise bharnge..."
"Haa ye uchit nhi hai...uska dand muje milega...kintu abhi in pashuo ka pet to bharega...iske atirikt mere pas koi vikalp nhi"

Rakshita ke muh se nikli ek ek baat...rah rahkr yaad aarhi thi...or jaise jaise uski baate yaad aati...chehre pr khud b khud muskaan laut aati hai....
Na chahte hue bhi...uska masoom sa chehra bar bar ankho ke samme aajata tha...

"Uska naam kya tha......rakshita...rakshita...kitna achha nam hai..."wo ladka sone se pahle sochta hai...or so jaata hai....


Next update will come soon.
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Ankitarani ji...
Nice and superb update...
 

Rudrathakur

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Mujhe apni zindgi me aisi koi ldki chahiye jisme mujhe rab dikhayi de.....aakash me ye words uski ye soch uske iss janam ke karan aur iss ghatna ke baad hi janmi hogi...aaj us ldke ko rakshita me bhagwan ke darshan ho gye...wo ldka srf rakshita ke khayalo me khoya hua h... Aaj use ishwar ke darshan ek ldki me hue.. Sahi baat bhi h jis prakar ishwar hmse isneh krte h chahe wo iss sampurn sansaar ka koi bhi jeev ho. Vanaspati ho sbhi ishwar ko priya h. Usi prakar rakshita bhi h bina kisi swarth ke use sabhi se samtulya isneh h pr wo janwaro pakshiyo ke sang is liye jyada rhti h kyuki wo insaano ki trha samarth nhi h to bss rakshita se jitna ho skta h utna wo un sbhi ka khyal rkh rhi h..aur uske liye use chori tk karni pd rhi h...dekhte h ab aage kya hota h kya wo ldka aage rakshita ki help krega uske iss karya me...👍👍👍👏👏
Wahi pitamah ne to rakshita ke ran-kausal sikhne ki baat ko uhi uska bachpana smjh kr taal diya pr dekhte h rakshita ab kaise ye sab seekh paati h kya wo karn se vidhya hasil kregi future me ho skta h aisa hi...chlo ye bhi waqt aane pr pta chl jaayega...👏👍👍🗡
Wahi aaj rakshita ko phli baar vasudev g ke baare me malum pda aur ye bhi ki wo ishwar ka hi ek roop h aur is baat ko aur jis trha se bhupad ne usko unki bhesh-bhusha ke bare me btaya to usko itna to andaza ho gya h ki us din uski help bhi unhone hi ki thi bss abhi ye usko pakka krna h jo lgta h jald hi ho jaayega...
To dekhte h aage kya hota h 👍👍waiting ma'am
 

DARK WOLFKING

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mast update ...pitamah ne shastra vidya sikhane ka kehne par baat taal di .

aur wo ladka to roj aata hai aur bhagwan ko darshan dene bolta hai par har baar uske saamne rakshita hi aati hai 😁...

rakshita ko murkh kaha us ladke ne aur rakshita rone lagi jise dekhkar sab memne aur kutte milkar us ladke ki achchi durgati kar daali 🤣🤣🤣..

ab wo ladka rakshita me ishwar dekhne laga hai 😍..
 

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UPDATE 29


Pitamah-kon tha wo...jisne tumhe is sbse awgat kraya...
Rakshita-mai nhi jaanti pitamah...
Pitamah-kon ho sakta hai...jisne tumhe wo baate smjhayi jo hm nhi smjha ske...khair...
Pitamah-to us singni ne...tumahre hath se fal bhi khaya...
Ralshita-haa pitamah...mai satya bol rhi hu...
Pitamah-singh jo kbhi mans ke atirikt kuch nhi khate...wo fal khaye...ye bahut durlabh hai...

Rakahita-kintu mai satya kah rhi hu pitamah...
Pitamah-hm jaante hai ki tum asatya nhi bolti...or ye yoddha kon tha...kya tum ise jaanti ho...

Rakshita-nahi pitamah ..hm to bs yha fal lene aaye the...
Pitamah-rakshita putri....tum sadaiv sankat me kyu pdi rahti ho....sadaiv hi tumhari koi raksha kre...ye to sambhav nhi hai na....

Rakshita-kintu pitamah...mai akaran hi kisi sankat me nhi padti...ab dekhiye...is mrug ko un logo ne maar diya...iska kya dosh tha...kyu maara ise...
Pitamah-putri tum bahut bholi ho...kintu ye satya hai...hm isme paritavrtan nhi kar skte...ye sb karmo ka lekha jokha hota hai putri....ho sakta is mrug ke bhagya me aisi hi mrityu likho ho...

Rakahita-kintu pitamah...
Pitamah-tum ye kintu ,parantu bahut krti hu putri...hm to bs ye sochkr vichlit hai putri...ki tumhe sadaiv hi koi bchaye ye sambhav nhi hai...hme bhay hai ki...

Rakshita-pitamah....apse bda yodhha is samast sansar me koi nhi...yadi aisa hai to...ap mujhe apni shishya bna lijiye...ap mujhe dhanurvidya athwa anya vidhyao ka gyan deejiye...jisse mai swayam ki raksha kar saku...


Pitamah haste hue-tum bdi ho gyi ho...kintu tumhari baate ab bhi whi ho...ekdm natkhat....bhupad se jald hi is vishay me baat krege...ki tumhe kisi aise ko sonp de jo sadaiv hi tumhari raksha kr ske....ab ham chalte hai....

Rakshita or sbhi saheli -ji pitamah....

Pitamah apne ghode pr beth wha se chal dete hai...

Rakshita-arushi...pitamah me jo ant me kaha...mujhe uska tatparya samjh nhi aaya...
Arushi-wo tumhare vivah ki baat kr rhe the...hahaha...
Rakshita hairani se-acha...ye to vichitra baat hai...

Teeno saheliya fal lekar mandir me chali jaati hai...

Or jaate hi dekhti hai...ki wo kal wala ldka...fir se hath jode khada tha...
"Hey ishwar ..aaj to aap mujhe darshan de hi dijiye...mujhse wo nhi hoga ...na jane kaise vyakti...varsho tak nadi me khade hokar...athwa parvat pr bethkr apki tapasya kr lete hai...kya mai apka putra saman nhi..kripya mujhe daeshan de dijiye ishwar..."

Rakshita-are...ye to whi hai...jo pichhle divas aaya tha...abhi dekhti hu...rakshita uske pas chal deti hai...

"Hey ishwar...kripya mujhe darshan de dijiye...mai apni ankhe khol rha hu...kripya darshan dijiye ishwar...darshan dijiye...mai apni ankhe khol rha hu...khol rha hu...orrr ye kholi....."


Lekin ye kya ankhe kholte hi samne rakshita khadi thi...
"Are...tum aaj bhi aagyi..."wo ladka samne khadi hui rakshita ko dekhta hai...

Rakahita-are..mai to yhi rahti hu...tum yha aagye ho...or ek baat suno...ese ishwar ke darhshan nhi hote...tumhe kathor tap krna hi hoga...

"Achha...tumne kabhi kiya hai kathor tap..."
Rakshita-nhi...
"Kyuu...kya tumhe ishwar ke darshan nhi krne..."

Rakshita-nhi...kyuki mujhe to sbme ishwar ke darshan ho jaate hai...pitashree me...matashree me...bhishm pitamah me...wo dekho...us nanhe memne me...sbme ishwar ka waas hai...

"Tum baate to bahut achhi krte ho"
Rakshita-kya tum achhi baate nhi krte?

"Nhi...mai nhi krta"
Rakshita-mai achhi hu...islie achhi baate krti hu...
Pas me khada us ladke ka dost muh or hath rakhkr hasne lgta hai....or dhire se us ldke se fisfusata hai...
"Arthat tum achhe nhi ho...islie tum achhi baate nhi krte"

Wo apne dost ki trf ko ghoorkr dekhta hai...
"Achha thk hai...kintu ye sb to apratyaksh hai...mujhe to pratyaksh ishwar ke darshan krne hai..."

Rakshita-wo smbhav nhi hai.....kyuki tum kathor tap nhi kr skoge na...
Ladka muskurata hua-dekhna...mai bina kathor tap kiye ...ishwar ke darshan krke rahunga...
Rakahita-thik hai...prayas kro....ishwar kare tumhari manokaamna jald hi puri ho...

"Dhanyawad....wese tum isi gao se ho na.."
Rakshita-haa kintu...tum kyu puch rhe ho...
"Rakshita...putri yaha aana jara.."pandit ji rakshita ko bulate hue bolte hai...or rakshita wha chali jaati hai...

"Mitra...tum meri baat man jao...tumhe ishwar ke darshan nhi honge...uske lie kathor tap awashyak hai..."uska dost usko smjhata hua bolta hai...

"Kya maine tumse puchha..mai ishwar ke darshan awashya krke rahunga...."wo ladka apne dost ko bolta hai...or wha se chal deta hai...


Kuch samay bad...rakshita jb ghar jaati hai...
Mala-rakshita putri bhojan to samay se kr liya kro...pure din mandir me hi rahti ho..kya krti rahti ho wha...
Rakshita-mata...pahle to bolti thi ki ishwar ki sadhna me dhyan lgao...or ab bolti ho ki...

Mala-putri ...maine aise to nahi kaha tha ki sadaiv whi rho...kisi ki bhi ati achhi nhi hoti...

Rakshita-mata..pahle sunishchit krle ki ap chahti kya hai...mai ghar pr rhu...athwa ishwar ki sadhna me lipt rhu...
Chanda-mata...vakpatuta me bhala rakshita se koi vijay hua hai...

Rakshita-didi...ye ap meri prashansha kr rhi hai...athwa ...
Chada-are pranshamsha hi hai..tum krodhit mt hov....
Rakshita-bhala mai apni didi se kaise krodhit hone lgi...meri didi to smasast sansar ki sarvshreshta didi hai...

Chanda-bs bs...ab jhaad pr na chadhao...chalo...ab kam me thoda hath btao...

Rakshita-didi...apko pta hai mujhe mandir me kitna kaam hai...
Chandana-acha...ye to mai jantu hu...kya krte ho waise wha...
Rakshita-mai...wha sfai krti hu...ishwar ki puja krti hu...shardhaluo me prashad vitrit krti hu...orr

Chanda-bs bs...mai swayam kr lungi...tum bhojan krke jao......


is trh...rakshita ka jaada samay ab bs mandir me hi gujarta tha...usse chhote 2bchhe or the...uske bawjood bhi...rakshita ghr me sbki laadli rhi....islie use koi kuch nhi bolta tha...

Bs ghar pr to wo khana khane...ya sone hi aati thi...pura din mandir me bethi rahti thi...mandir kaafi bda tha...wha ped bahut jada lge the..bs whi rakshita bethi hu kuch na kuch krti rahti thi.....iska man bhi yhi lagta tha...ghr pr to jaise bor ho jati thi...pujan karya me sbse aage rahti thi...pandit ji to bs naam ke hi the...vastav me mandir ki sari dekhbhal rakshita hi karti thi...


Rakshita pitamah se milne ke bad bahut khush thi...halanki usne ghar nhi btaya kyuki...agr wo ghar btati to uski mata uspr krodh krti ...kyuki pitamah ne to use bchaya tha...usse pahle jo sankat aaya tha uspr mata krodh na kre...islie rakshita ne ghar me bhi nhi btaya...lekin apni sakhiyo ko sbko btaya...or bdi khush thi...

Rakshiita or arushi mandir me bethe baate kr rhe the...
Rakshita-arushi...yadi pitamah swayam mujhe shatra vidya sikha de...to kaisa hoga...
Arushi-to tum sansar me sbse shresht yodha bna jaogi....kintu aisa hoga nhi...
Rakshita-haa maii to bs soch rhi thi...

Ese hi idhar udhar ki baate or dinbhr ke kriyakalapo me din gujar jaata hai...
Rat ko khana khakar sb sone ki taiyari me the...
Mala-kya hua swami...ap kuch vichlit hai...
Bhuapd-haa...rajbhawan me bahut hi tanavpurn vatavaran rahta hai....

Rakshita-kyu pitashree....kya hua...waha to swayam pitamah hai...to wha koi tanav kaise rah sakta hai...
Bhupad-pitamah to apni prtigya se bandhe hai putri...wo bhala isme kya kr sakte hai...koi bahri sankat aaye...to kuch kre bhi...kintu ...wha to kutumb me hi yudh chhidne jaa rha hai...

Mala-kintu kya koi bhi prayas nhi kar rha hai...us mahayudh ko rokne ka...
Bhupad-pitamah...matatma vidur...guru dronacharya ,kulguru kripacharya...or shre shrishn bahut prayatn kr rhe hai...kintu...mahatvakansha...

Rakshita-pitahsree... Pitamah ki baat wha koi kyu nhi manta...pitamah to swayam ishwar tulya hai...
Bhupad-putri...tumhare lie hai...hmare liye hai...hme yha bethkar jaisa lgta hai...wesa hai nhi...pitamah ki baat yadi wha maani jaati...to ye samasya utpann hi na hoti...

Mala-kya is mahayudh ka...hmare jeevan yapan pr bhi prabhav pdega...
Bhupad-hmare hi nhi...smpuran bharatvarsh pr prabhav pdega...vasudev shree krishn ne aaj babut hi prayas kiya...orrr.

Bhupad fir unko wo sb btate hai...jb krishna ji sandhi prastav lekar aate hai.....
Pura sunne ke bad...
Rakshita-pitashree...ye vasudev krishna kon hai...
Bhupad-putri...wese to dwarka nagri ke raja hai...kintu kuch vidwan log unhe ishwar ke samtulya mante hai...swayam pitamah bhishm bhi...unhe pranam krte hai...

Rakshita hairani se-kya wo itne samman ke patra hai...maine to unhe kabhi nhi dekha.....
Bhupad-dekhe to honge...kintu tumhe yaad nhi...samvle se hai...hath me bansuri rakhte hai...or sr pr mayur pankh...
Rakshita yaad krti hai...us din ka vakya jb wo shawak ko chhodne gyi thi...

Rakshita-kya...wo vasurdev krishna hai...jb pitamah bhishm unhe samman ka patra smjhte hai...to awashya hi wo is yogya hai...
Rakshita sari ghatna yaad krti hai...jb shree krishna ki di hui bansuri ne...sudarshsm chakra bnakr use chaya tha...

"Haa...jaise bhagwan vishnu ka sudarsham chakra hota hai...wese hi chakra us din tha...arthat...kya wo vastav me ishwar hai..."rakshita sochne lgti hai...

Rakshita kuch sochkr-kintu pitashree...
Mala-rakshita...so jao...tum kuch baat hi nhi krne deti ho...chup so jao....
Rakshita muh sa bnakr chup let jaati hai...or sochne lgti hai sb bate...wo pareshan se us vakya ko soch sochkr....



2din bad....
"Hey ishwar...aj to darshan de hi do...chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...aaj to mai apke darshan kiye bina nhi jaunga...chahe mujhe yha sankdo divas bitane pd jaye.....mai bhuka rahuga ...pyasa rhunga...kintu aaj darshan krke hi jaunga...mai ankhe khol rha hu ishwar...kripya mujhe darsham de.....ye kholi mene ankhe...orrr...

Samne rakshita muh fulaye khade thi...
Ladka-are...jb bhi mai ishwar se prathna krta hu...tum kyu aajati ho...

Rakshita-tumhe mene bar bar amjhaya ki sihwar ke darshna aise nhi honge...kintu tum fir bhi roj yha akr ishwar ke darshan krne ki bolte ho...
"Ha mai darshan krke rahunga....kintu tum mere marg me badha bn jaati ho"

Rakshita -are...mai kaha badha bni...
"Kyuki hath mai ishwar ke samakhsh jodta hu...or samne tum aajati ho...murkh kanya kya chahti hu tum...ki mujhe ishwar ke darshan na ho..."

Rakshita-tumne mujhe murkh kaha ..mai tumhe mrityudand dilwa dungi...

"Achha dilwao...tum murkh thi...murkh ho...or sadaiv murkh rhogi..."

"Matashree...."rakshita mata ko yaad krke rone lgti hai...
"Are...isme vilap ki kya baat...hey kanya tum kyu vilaap kr rhi ho..."

Rakshita ki ankho se ansu nikal aate hai..
Arushi bhagi hui aati hai...or rakshita ko smbhalti hai...
Arushi-kyaa hua rakshita...tum vilap kyu kr rhi ho...kya hua...
Rakshita us ldke ki taraf ungli kakre-usne mujhe...mujhe murkh kaha....
Or rakshita fir rone lgti hai....

Arushi-ohhh...kon ho tum...kyu murkh kaha ise...
"Murkh ko murkh hi kaha jaata hai..."
"Dhadaaaaammm"
"Aaaaaa......"achank pichhe se us ladko ko kisi ne takkar maari...or wo ladka dur jaa gira...

Wo ladka jb uthakr dekhta hai...to wha memna khada tha...
"Mainnnn....mannn...mainnnn..."memna chillana shuru kr deta hai...

Arushi-rakshita chup ho jao...dekho tumahre mitra aagye...ab is yuvak ki khair nhi...

Memne ke chillane se or bhi memne or chhote kutte aajate hai......
Wo ladka dekhkar hairan rah jaata hai...
Uska dost-ye kya hai...ye sb....
Rakshita roti hui-mitra...isne mujhe murkh kaha....

"Maaainnnnnn...bhow bhow...mainnn...bhow bhow..."memne or kutte rakshita ke itne bolte hi us ladke ki taraf bhag lete hai....

Kmsekm 4 memne the or 5kutte(chhote wale)

Ladka dekhakr dar jaata hai.....
"Ishwar...bchao..."wo ladka bhag leta hai.....
Lekin ek memna aakar uske pichhwade pr ek takakr maarta hai...
"Aaaaa....maataaaaaaa.....bchaaaooo"
Pichhwada pakadkr bhaagta hai...lekin ek pilla uska kapde pakadr kheechne lagta hai...

Dusre pilla uske per me kaat leta hai...pagal sa ho jata hai wo ladka.....
Kbhi ek memne idhar se takkar marta to dusra udhar se...koi pilla kaat'ta...to koi kapde pakadlr kheechta...

Ladka buti trh preshaan ho jaata hai...
Wo jaise taise smbhta hai...
Or mandir ke samne hath jodkr-ishwar....
Itne me hi ek memna pta nhi kaha se aaya orr...
"Phatttt"us ldke ke muh pr laat maari...
Wo ladka muh pr hath rakhta hai..to memne ne ekdm uske pichhwade pr takkar maar di...
Pichhwade pr hath lgaya to kutte ne per me kaat liya...
Ldka pagal sa ho gya tha...
Or uska dost wo pata nhi kaha bhag gya tha...

Bachhe wha khade hokar use dekh dekhakar hasne lgte hai...

Wo ladka jaise taise smbhalkar girta pdta...memno ki laat khata hua rakshita ke paas aata hai...
Or hath jodkr-kripya inhe roke...mai chaama mangta hu...inhe roko...
Rakshita-ruk jao mitra...
Itna bolte hi sb pille or menne shant ho jaate hai...

Rakshkta jb uska huliya dekhti hai...to has pdti jai...
Uske chehre pr menne ki laaat ka nishan bn gya tha...or kapde jaha taha se fat chuke the...ekdm bhikari jaisa ho gya tha wo...

"Ye kya tumne ...maine tumhe sirf murkh kaha tha...or ye pashu....kon ho tum"
Rakshita-mai rakshita hu...or swayam bhishm piyamah ne mera nam rakha hai...
"Mujhe chhama krdo...mene tumhe murkh kaha.."itna bolkar wo ladka chal deta hai...

Arushali-are...tum to ro rhi thi na...
Rakshita-ha...kintu mere mitra ne jo uske sath kiya...ab achha lag rha hai....


Agle din.


Wo ladka fir se mandir me jata hai...is bar wo akela tha...uska dost sath me nhi tha...
Jb dekhta hai...to rakshita ek memne ke bchhe ko glaas se dudh pila rhi thi...or muskura rhi thi...

Ladka apne mn me-..acha...to ye rahasya hai...ki ye pashu iske rakshak bn gye...aaj to iski sachhi jaankar hi rahunga...

Wo ladka dhire dhire dabe pao andar ki or jaata hai...or rakshita ke thoda pas se...uske side me ek kone me khada ho jata hai...jise rakshita dekh na ske...

Rakshita to memne ka pet bharne me magan thi...
Tbhi dusra memna bhi rakshita ke paas aajata hai...
Rakshita usse pakadti hai...or dusre dudh ka katora uthakar use pilana lagti hai...or idhar udhar dekhne lgti hai..
Rakshita-jaldi piyo mitra...kisi ne dekh liya to anarth ho Jayega....

"Achha...mtlb koi to rahasya hai...ye kanya kuch to anuchit kr rhi hai..tabhi itna bhaybheet hai....abhi gyan ho jayega..."wo ladka sochta hua..achank bahar nikal aata hai...

Ladka-rakshita....
Rakshita jb najar uthakr dekhti hai...ekdm hairan ho jaati hai...
Rakshita-tum...tum...tum yha kya kr rhe ho...
Rakshita darti darti si bolti hai...

Ladka-maine sb sun liya hai..ab purn satya btao...anyatha mai sbko bta dunga...

Rakshita-kya...kya bta doge...
Ladka-yhi jo tum kr rhi hi...dekho rakshita...ye jo tum kar rhi ho uchit nhi kr rhi ho...

Hanalki us ldko ko puri baat nhi pta tha...lekin bs andhere me teer chal rha rha...

Rakshita rone jaise ho jaati hai...
Ladka-hey hey tum vilap mt krna...dekho...kl ka dard ab tkk hai mujhe...tum vilap krogi to tumhare ye mitra mujhe fir se maarenge...dekho...mai kisi ko nhi btaunga yadi tum mujhe purn satya bta do....

Rakshita-kya tum satya bol rhe ho...kisi ko nahi btaoge...
Ladka-ha...yadi tum mujhe purn satya btao ro
to...

Rakshita-mai yha mandir me ...bs in pashuo ke lie aati hu...
Ladka hairani se-arthaat...
Rakshita-mandir me jo bhog lgta hai..dudh chadhaya jaata hai...mai wo sb churakar...ya bcha hua...ya fir ishwar ke samne se uthakr uthakr...kaise bhi krke...in pashuo ko khilaati hu....

Ladka-lekin aisa kyu...ye to tum ghar par bhi kar sakti ho na...
Rakshita-kisi ghr pr itna bhojan pakta hai kya...hm bahut hi nirdhan hai...apne pet bhar jaye wo hi bahut hai....pashuo ka pet kese bherege...ishwar hme chalate hai...samast sansar ko chlate hai.....to kya apne bhojan ke lie wo kisi manushya pr nirbhar rhege...yha is mandir me log asharfiyaa,sona,chadhaate hai...in sbka ishwar kya krege...mai unhe churakar...unse bhojan khreedkar in pashho ko khilaati hu....

Ladka-kintu...chori karna to uchit nhi hai na...
Rakshita-haa janti hu...kintu uska dand mujhe milega...kintu abhi in pashuo ka pet to bhar jayega na...
Ladka-kintu un asharfiyo se tum...tumhari
nirdhanta bhi dur kar sakti ho...

Rakshita-nhi..mai ye soch bhi nahi sakti...wo to mera swarth ho jayega...mai bs in pashuo ke lie hi ye karti hu...jo bhojan yha aata hai...ya bchta hai...pandit ji ki krjo se bchakar mai in pashuo ko prtidin khilaati hu...

Ladka-tumhara ghar kaha hai...
Rakahita-yhi hai...kintu in pashuo ke lie bhojan ka prabandh ho jaye...islie mai apne ghr nhi jaati...or jada samay yhi vyateet krti hu...

Rakshita itna bolkar apni najar nichi kr leti hai...

Ladka-tum udas kyu ho gyi ho....
Rakshita-chori karna uchit nhi hai...mai janti hu...kintu iske atirikt mujhe koi vikalp dikhai nhi deta..hmare ghr ke pas ek din...ek chhota kutta bhuk se mr gya tha...usdin mujhe bahut peeda hui...mai kuch din bad mandir aayi to dekha yha bahut bhojan vyarth jaa rha hai.....us din mujhe aisa krne ka sujha....


Ladka muskurata hua-mujhe chhama krdo...kal maine tumhe murkh kaha...tum bahut achhi ho...or tumhare ye mitra bhi...
Rakshiya uski baat sunkar thoda sa smile ke deti hai...

Ladka-or ek baat btau...mujhe ishwar ke darshan ho gye....
Rakahita-kyaa...tum satya bol rhe ho...
Ladka-haa...mujhe ishwar ke darshan ho gye...
Raoshita-kintu bina kathor tap ke...ye kaise smbhav hai...

Ladka muskurta hua-ye tum nhi smjhogi....mai chalta hu......or ab to ishwar ke darshan mujhe roj honge....

Ladka chal deta hai....uske dimak me kuch chal rha tha...
"Ishwar ka kaam jeev jagat ka palan poshan hai...kisi ka uchit anuchit magr darshan krna hai...manushya to apna pet swayam bhar skte hai...kintu ye pashu...ye pashu nhi...parantu tum inko sahara de rhi ho...tum mahan ho rakshita..mujhe to ishwar tumhare andar hi dikhai deta hai....agar ishwar hai to wo asie hi honge...be sahara ko sahara dene wale...bejubaan ki peeda samjhne wale....rakshita akhir maine bina kathor tap ke iswar ke darshsn kr hi liye.....ha rakhita...tum jaise logo me hi sayi mayne me ishwar ka was hota hai...ISHWAR ME MUJHE TUM...OT TUMME MUJHE ISHWAR DIKHAI DETA HAI..."muskurata hau rakshita ke khyalo me khoya hua chala jaa rha tha wo...

Sote wakt...
"Hasti hui rakshita...do chutiya ki hui thi...jo dono kandho pr aage ki taraf latak rahi rhi ..sundar chehra...mathe pr ek chhoti si bindi...or hasti hui aisi lag rhi thi...jaise manao dunai ka sari khushiya yhi sma gyi ho......Or memne ko glass se dudh pilaati hui"kitni achhi lag rhi thi wo...schme rakshita...tum mahan ho...


"Yadi tum kathor tap kroge to hi tumhe ishwar ki prapti hogi...."
"Mai to yhi rahti hu...tum yha aate ho"
"Are...laddu to ishwar kha gye...islie aaj pushp ka prashad hai..."
"Isne mujhe murkh kaha"
"Mera nam rakshita hai...swayam pitamah bhishm ne mera nam rakha hai..."
"Manushya to apna pet swayam bhar lete hai...kintu ye pashu kaise bharnge..."
"Haa ye uchit nhi hai...uska dand muje milega...kintu abhi in pashuo ka pet to bharega...iske atirikt mere pas koi vikalp nhi"

Rakshita ke muh se nikli ek ek baat...rah rahkr yaad aarhi thi...or jaise jaise uski baate yaad aati...chehre pr khud b khud muskaan laut aati hai....
Na chahte hue bhi...uska masoom sa chehra bar bar ankho ke samme aajata tha...

"Uska naam kya tha......rakshita...rakshita...kitna achha nam hai..."wo ladka sone se pahle sochta hai...or so jaata hai....


Next update will come soon.
Nice and superb update...
 

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इस अपडेट की हर एक बात चुनी हुई सी लग रही मुझे...
हर एक शब्द में एक कहानी है... हर एक शब्द का पूर्ण अर्थ है
धन्य हो अंकिता इतनी सुंदर कहानी हम सभी के सम्मुख प्रस्तुत करने के लिए,

इस कहानी को अगर पब्लिश किया जाए तो पक्का ये बहुत ज्यादा आगे जाने वाली है 👌👌

सार्थक जीवन जीने की प्रेरणा देती एक कहानी 👌👌👌

:adore:
Thanks swati ji...aj apla review dene ka andaaj bda bdla bdla sa lga... :hug:



"Dhany ho" sammukh" "prastut"-mene suna tha writet hi kahani ko likhte samay usme duub jata hai...pr reader bhi dubte hai Aj dikha...bhasha hi badal gyi apki to....hheheh..

Anyway thank u swati ji...thank u so much...
 

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who is that boy, Is he Aakash? wants to see God, I would like to say on this, In a way, in our daily life we also get a direct indication of being God, whenever we start doing some bad things like stealing, cheating, cruelty etc. Only then does a fear, shame or doubt arise in us and when we help others and do auspicious things, the feeling of fearlessness, joy, contentment, and enthusiasm is all a direct sign of the existence of God.
Rakshita lives in her devotion and does not do housework, I would like to say on this, A person can continue to do good work with duty and intelligence even without love, but he cannot get the pleasure he gets from being in a loving mood, The real form of God love is to do whatever is possible to help others for goodness and perhaps that is what Rakshita is doing.
Why Rakshita crying, she is like a flower and the flower always blooms and looks beautiful and good. The beating of that boy was worth watching and the talk between the two was also very funny. :lol:
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...
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Thank u akash ji...apki baate shat prtishat sahi hai akash hi...bhay ka arth hi hota bai ki shayad koi hme wo krne se rok rha hai...orr achhe kaam krne se khushi milti hai...means usme ishwar ka waas hota hai....ha shayad rakshita ek foll ki trh hi hai...hemsha khili rahti hai...or uski trh bht komal bh...
Ab bhala rakahita ke mitra use rota hua kaise dekh skte the... so dho dala us ldke ko....
 
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