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[Brijesh]

Update 6
Uday 6

arandee se bhara khet bahut khoobasoorat dikhane laga tha . jab kataee huee to gaanv ke log bhee chamatkrt rah gae kyoki baaki kheto ke mukaabale dugunee phasal huee thee. phir harikaaka ko samaachaar mile unakee betee sunaina apane bachcho
aur nanad devakee ke saath gaanv aa rahee hai, jaise hee yah samaachaar mila harikaaka mano baukhala gae turant ghar mein putaee kara dee pados ke raghukaaka ko kah diya kee unake Freej mein paanee kee botale aur thanda lekar rakh de, pados mein raadhaa bhaabhee ko kah diya kee chhaach aur doodh jyaada diya kare. hirakaakee yaani kee harikaaka kee patnee jinda thee tab tak unake ghar par chaar bhaise thee lekin unake jaane ke baad harikaaka ne unhen raadhaa bhaabhee ko de dee thee . sab ne kaha chinta na karo kaaka abhee do din baaki hai sab ho jaayega shaanoo apane ghar se naee kursiyaan aur shaam tebal phain harikaaka ke ghar de gaya . phir bhee kaaka ka man nahin bhara tha vo to aise taiyaaree kar rahe the jaise ghar mein kiseekee shaadee ho.sunaina mumbee se tren se aanevaalee thee jo pados ke shahar mein shaam ko pahuchanevaalee thee lekin kaaka ne dayaaraam ko subah hee riksha lekar bhej diya bole kuchh bharosa nahin train
dopahar ko hee pahunch jaaye .kaaka ne raama ko bhee ghar pe bula liya tha kaam karane ab natu khet mein akela hee rah gaya tha. raama kahakar gaya tha kee deedee shaayad subah khet dekhane aaye tum jaldee uth jaana poora gaanv sunaina ko deedee kahakar bulaata tha aur vo rahatee bhee deedee kee tarah thee jab bhee mumbee se aatee to ados pados mein rahanevaalo ke lie tohapha lekar aatee . shaamako natu ko khabar milee kee deedee aa gaee hai us raat der tak harikaaka ke ghar mein jashn mana .raat ko jab sunaina ne harikaaka se poochha kee baaba raama kah
raha tha kee us bhabhootanaath vaale khet mein phasal huee hai kya ye sach hai to kaaka ne kaha sirph huee nahin dugunee huee hai kal chalana khet dekhane . sunaina ne kaha theek hai baaba kal chalate hai.

subah jab sunaina apane bachcho aur devaanshee ko lekar khet m phunchee tab tak natu apana saara kaam nipata chooka tha aur natu nim kee chhaav mein baitha tha . natu ne uthakar sunaina ko namaste kee sunaina ne bhee usake haalachaal poochhe . bachcho ne nahaane kee ichchha jaahir kee to natu ne toobavel chala diya aur bachche ek kundee mein nahaane lage . deedee ne natu se usake parivaar ke baare mein
poochha to natu sab bataane laga tab usaka dhyaan gaya kee unakee nanad devaanshee use ekatak nihaar rahee thee . jab sunaina bachcho ko kundee se bahaar nikalane gaee to mauka paakar devaanshee ne natu se poochha kee aap ko kahee dekha hua lag raha hai par yaad nahin aa raha kaha ? natu ne kaha har gareeb ka chehara ek jaisa hota hai . devaanshee se baat karane par usako pata chala kee vo physiology kee student hai to natu pareshaan ho gaya.

devaanshee ek maasoom aur adbhut saundary kee svaaminee thee badee
badee aur tej tarraar aankhe gol chehara ,galo mein padate gadde,napaatula shareer ekadam apsara see lagatee thee aur aavaaj mandir mein bajatee ghantiyon jaisa madhur natu bhee use dekhakar nihaarata hee rah gaya tha lekin phir vah vartamaan mein lot aaya tha use khud ko yaad dilaana pada kee vah ek naukar hai . thodee der mein deedee bachcho ko lekar aa gaee thee lekin
devaanshee chehare par ka prashn chinh vaise hee tha vo socha rahee thee kaha dekha hai is insaan ko , theek hai das din rukana hee hai jaan lungee aisa sochakar deedee ke saath ghar chalee gaee . natu
sochane laga kee na jaane ab kya hoga?


To be continued.....​

 

[kamdev99008]

Devanshee ne kya mental asylum me dekha tha natu ko?

 

[Brijesh]

Update 7
Uday 7
devaanshee ghar pahuchi aur sochne lagi kaha dekha hai natu ko tabhi usko yaad a gaya kee ye jaane maane manochikitsak doctor pallav ojha . unakee likhee huee kitaab mein unakee photo dekhee thee aur vo kitaab reference ke lie kaaphee baar lee thee laibreree se, vo soch mein pad gaee kee itana bada manochikitsak yahaan majadooree kyon kar raha hai jaane kya mazabooree hai kal baat karatee hu unase .sunaina ne devaanshee ko chup chup dekhakar usase poochha kya hua devee vaise to hamesha majaak mastee karatee rahatee ho aaj gumasum kyon ho idhar is baar achchha nahin laga kya ya kiseekee yaad sata rahee hai ? devaanshee ne javaab diya kee nahin bhaabhee aisee koee baat nahin hai mai darasal soch rahee thee mere project ke baare mein mein jisame kisee anajaan vyakti ka manovishleshan karana hai vaise pahale socha kee harikaaka ka manovishleshan karoo lekin unhen to mai pahale se jaanatee hu , phir mainne socha kee kyon na natu ka manovishleshan karoo vaise mujhe vo aadamee dilachasp laga aap kya kahatee ho ? sunaina ne kaha theek hai deveejee mai baaba se baat kar ke razamandi leti hu, raat me khane par sunaina ne baba se baat kar ke rajamnadi le liya hai aur devaanshee se kaha kee baaba ne haan to kar dee hai lekin saath mein kaha hai kee vo dukhee na ho is baat ka khyaal rakhana .devaanshee ne kaha theek hai bhaabhee mai khyaal rakhoogee phir sochane lagee kee kal baat karatee hu unase jaha tak mujhe yaad hai vo shaayad jel mein bhee gae the balaatkaar ke aarop mein.

is taraph natu ko bhee neend nahin aa rahee thee vo soch raha tha kee kya us ladakee ne use pahachaan liya hoga kya usane usakee koee kitaab padhee hogee jisame usakee photo bhee thee. usane bhagavaan se praarthana kee kee vo use pahachaan na pae ye shaant jindagee use raas aa gayee thee shahar se door bheeda bhaad se door achchha lag raha tha use yahaan . phir vah khaat se utha aur khet ka chakkar lagaaya aur phir khaat pe aakar let gaya . khet ke kinaare par ped bhee usase baat karate ho vaisa lagata tha phir vah ka ek kutta jise vo kaaloo naam se bulaata tha vo bhee usaka dost ban gaya tha vo usakee khatiya ke niche hee so jaata tha aur jab natu kaam karake baitha hota tha to vo
usase khelata rahata tha . lekin kaaphee baar natu ko aisa lagata tha kee jab vo raat ko sota hai to kaaloo use ghoorata rahata usakee khatiya ke chakkar lagaata tha jaise chaukeedaaree kar raha ho.

To be continued....

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Awesome update

 

[Black water]

Nice update

 

[kamdev99008]

Raj khul rahe hain dhire dhire.... Lekin rahasya gehrata bhi ja raha hai....
Monochikitsak hai... Aur balatkar ke mamle me sajayafta bhi....

Dekhte hain... Kya hai... Natu ka past

 

[Brijesh]

Update kal ayega

 

[Black water]

Waiting

 

[Brijesh]

Dosto aaj update nahi de paunga , kal 2 update post kar dunga .Aur new thread ka 1 update bhe

 

[Brijesh]

Update 8
Uday 8
subah panchhiyo ke shor se natu subah jaldee jag gaya. nahaadhokar taiyaar hua tab tak door se harikaaka aur devaanshee aate hue dikhe, natu ke man mein uthal puthal hone lagee kee kahee vah mujhe pahachaan to nahin gaee aur harikaaka ko sab bata diya . harikaaka najadeek pahunche aur unhonne kaha ye devaanshee bahan tumase kuchh baat karana chaahatee hai vo koee notebook lekar aayee hai usame se kuchh savaal karegee darana mat theek theek javaab dena, theek hai ! aaj tumhaaree chhuttee kaam ka raama ko bata deta hu . aisa bolakar harikaaka chale gaya vo aur devaanshee akele rah gae , devaanshee jis tarah se use nihaar rahee thee usaka dil tejee se dhadakane laga usane phir bhee bholepan ka abhinay jaaree rakha aur kaha mere jaise chhote aadamee se kya savaal poochhane hai aaj kaam bhee bahut hai . devaanshee ne apanee baat shuroo karate kaha doctor pallav ojha mai aapako pahachaan gaee hu to ab aapaka ye gareeb aur majadur vaala naatak band keejiye aur aap mujhe bataiye ke aap yahaan kaise ? mainne kisee professor se suna tha kee aap jel mein the lekin pata nahin mujhe lagata tha kee yah ardhasaty hai to mai poora sach sunana chaahatee hu . mai psychology kee student hu mujhe andaaja lag jaata hai kee saty kya hai asaty hai aur kya ardhasaty hai to aap mujhe bataiye kee sach mein us vaqt hua kya tha ?
natu ne ek aah bharee aur kaha kee mai pallav hu yah sach hai lekin ab doctor nahin hu aur jo sach tum mujhase jaanana chaahatee ho vo sach to mai khud se bhee chhupaana chaahata hu mai bhoolana chaahata hu kee bhootakaal mein kya hua tha . mai sajaayaaphta mujarim hu lekin mujhe jis gunaah ke lie saja milee vo mainne kabhee kiya hee nahin tha lekin khud ko begunaah saabit karane ke lie mere paas koee raasta nahin tha aur agar begunaah saabit ho bhee jaoo to bhee kya meree beevee , mera bachcha mujhe vaapas nahin milanevaale . mai balaatkaaree ke kalank ke saath jee loonga mujhe kiseese koee shikava nahin hai vaise bhee mai ab gumanaamee kee jindagee hee bataane vaala hu . devaanshee ne kaha kya ye shabd kisee doctor ke hai ya ek hataash vyakti ke kya aap ladana bhool chuke hai ? natu ne kaha ke nahin mainne haar nahin maanee hai lekin paristhiti ko sveekaar karana bhee samajhadaaree
kahalaata hai aur usaka mainne sveekaar kiya hai mai yahaan par khushee se rah raha hu mujhe ab kisee bhee cheej ka gam nahin hai . mainne jindagee mein achchha samay bhee dekha hai aur bura vaqt bhee. devaanshee ekatak pallava ko dekhe ja rahee thee kee kaise koee vyakti samaadhaan kar sakata hai vo bhee tab jab khud badanaam hua beevee aur bachche kee maut ho gaee . natu ne kaha ke meree tumase ek praarthana hai kee yah baat kisee ko mat bataana .
devaanshee ne kaha kee agar banaana hota to kal hee bata diya hota lekin meree dilachaspee aapakee kahaanee jaanane mein hai aapako badanaam karane mein nahin to aap jo hua vah bata deejiye to aapake dil ka boj bhee shaayad kam ho jaaye .

natu ne lambee saans chhodee aur kaha theek hai bataata hu .