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Brijesh

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Mega Update

Past of Natu

mera janm ati dhanik parivaar mein to nahin lekin haan dhanik to kah hee sakate aise parivaar mein hua . mere pita sundaralaal ojha sarakaaree naukaree mein the aur maan nirmala ek grhinee . meree maata mahaadev kee param bhakt thee isalie bachapan se shiv ke prati adamy aakarshan tha . mai bachapan se na to dubala na hee mota , ekadam beech mein tha pooree tarah ethaleet jaisa shareer | mai school mein running chaimpion tha hamesha pahale nambar par aata tha lekin pitaajee puraane khayaalaat vaale the unhonne mujhase kah diya ke sirph padhaee par dhyaan do khelakood sirph shauk ke lie theek hai . mai bhee pitaajee se bahut darata tha isalie padhaee mein dhyaan diya vaise bhee mujhe maanav man ke rahasyon kee taraph jyaada aakarshan tha isalie mainne pshology mein yahaan baichalar kee digree lee aur maastar kee digree USA se lee . vah se vaapas aakar mainne raajakot mein practice shuroo kee hipnotijm mein mai maastar tha kaisee bhee vyakti ho mai aasaanee se hipnotaiz kar dena . phir mere jeevan mein shobha aaee vo social worker
thee is vajah se ek do baar milana hai, aur hamadono mein pyaar ke ankur phoote , usake pita chandoolaal mere pitaajee ke mitra the isalie hamaaree love marriage cum a arrange ho gaee . kuchh saal baad ek beta hua , ek dam shaanti se jee raha tha mai . bahut saadhaaran dinacharya thee meree subah uthakar clinic aur shaam ko ghar pe ya ghoomane meree inakam bhee achchhee thee . dheere dheere mujhe sarakaaree kaam milane lage the , kaam tha gunahagaar ko hipnotaiz karake usase jurm kubulavaana vaise yah kubulaatanaama adaalat mein to maany nahin tha lekin phir kahaanee sunakar saboot khojana bahut aasaan tha jisame inspector masooree kee maastaree thee yah idea bhee unaka tha | inspector masooree ek chust , chaalaak aur eemaanadaar vyakti tha dipaartament mein usakee eemaanadaaree kee kasamen khaee jaatee thee koee koee to kah deta tha kee ek baar heeroin ke gaal mein daag mil jaayega lekin masooree kee vardee par nahin isee vajah se kee shahar mein jyaada samay tik nahin paata tha . lekin pata nahin is baar raajakot mein kaaphee lambee ining khel rahe the .

ek baar ek aisa kes aaya jisase meree aur inspector donon kee jindagee badal gaee . us vaqt mein kaaphee bachchon ke apaharan ho rahe the aur na koee saboot milata tha nahin suraag jisase kisee disha mein aage badha ja sake par ek din ek apahrt bachcha vaapas aaya aur raiket ka bhaanda phut gaya . us bachche ke kahe anusaar jab red kee gaee to vah se chaar bachche mile vo raiket chalane vaala grhamantree ka beta tha par usako arest nahin kar pae mansuree saahab kyoki pooree jimmedaaree farmhouse ke manager ne le lee thee , jo kee vishvaas ke kaabil nahin tha . chaar bachche mile the lekin baaki 160 bachchon ka kuchh ataapata nahin tha isalie mansuree saahab ne risk liya aur mantreejee ke bete ko kidanaip karake meree clinic mein le aaye aur mujhe kaha kee ise hipnotaiz karake pata karo baaki bachche kaha hai . lekin jab usane pooree kahaanee bataee tab hamane apana sar pakad liya vah alag alag gang se kidanaiping karavaata aur meedietar ke jariye farmhouse par laakar, ek tempo mein padosee raajy mein bhej dete jahaan kisee saadhu aseemaanand ka aashram tha vah unaka istemaal taantrik vidhi ke lie hota tha.

inspector mansuree ne aashram par red kee to aashram kee peechhe bahut saaree haddiyon ke dhaanche mile jo kee bachchon ke the lekin baaba kee pahunch bahut oopar tak thee isalie usane is baat ko daba diya aur inspector mansuree ko naksalavaadeeo ko madad karane ka aarop lagaakar saspend kar diya . mai jab unase milaane gaya to unhonne kaha ki saspend ho gaya usaka mujhe koee duhkh nahin hai lekin un manushy roopee jaanavaron ko saja nahin dila paaya isakee takaleeph hai.

phir kuchh din baad ek ladakee ko asistent ke taur par rakha naam tha preeti jo mere ek seeniyar kee siphaarish chitthee lekar aaee thee . apane kaam mein kaaphee hoshiyaar thee ,bala kee khoobasoorat thee kee aur baate to aise karatee thee jaise munh mein se shabdon ke jagah shahad tapak raha ho . meree patnee vaise kabhee kisee kee taareeph nahin karatee thee lekin vo preeti se kaaphee khush thee usane usaka dil bhee jeet liya tha . ek din dopahar tiphin kha raha tha tab vo saamane hee baithee thee aur meree najar bachaakar usane koee medisin ya chemical khaane mein mila diya jisase mai uttejit ho gaya aur usane bhee mujhe bahakaaya jisase mai na karanevaalee galatee kar baitha . shaam ko jab neend se jaaga tab police aa chukee thee aur preeti ne mujh par balaatkaar ka aarop lagaaya tha . mainne police ko bataane kee koshish kee kee mere khaane m kuchh mila diya tha lekin unake kaan mein ju tak na yahee rengee . medical report postive aaye aur mujhe gunahagaar maanakar saat saal kee saja dee gaee . ek saphal manochikitsak ab ek kaidee nambar ban chooka tha maine shobha ko bataane kee koshish kee kee yah ek shadayantr hai.

lekin vo bhee mujhe gunahagaar maanatee thee vo dipreshan mein aa gaee usame usane mere bete ko maarakar khud bhee sucide kar lee. samay kee kaisee vidambana kee ek manochikitsak kee patnee ne dipreshan mein aakar aatmahatya kar lee.

natu jab utha to usakee aankh mein aansoo the devaanshee kee aankhe
bhee nam thee . shaam ho gaee thee devaanshee ne jaate jaate poochha kee
kya mai aapake lie kuchh kar sakatee hu to natu ne kaha kee ek kaam jaroor kar sakatee ho mai yahaan natu banakar aaya hu natu banakar rahane do meree hakeekat kiseeko bhee mat batao. devaanshee ne sir hilaaya aur chalee gaee.natu ke man ka bhar halka ho chooka tha kitane saal baad kiseese itanee baate kee thee is kahaanee mein vo ronak patel ka naam gol kar chooka tha jisane madad kee usake bete ko
badanaam kyon karata . usake andar kee gaanth ab khul rahee thee usane socha kee ab shaanti se jeeoonga lekin use kaha maaloom tha kee niyati ne usake lie kuchh aur sochakar rakha hai .vo kamara usaka intajaar kar raha tha.


To be continued....
 

Nky

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Great update
 

TheMysterious_Ng

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Nice updates but thoda confused hu..
Story title s superhero ka naam UDAY h but abtk is naam s koi introduce ni hua aur Jo hua h wo h natu Jo pehle ek pschologist tha ... Natu ka past kafi sad Raha but Kya sirf Preeti akeli jimmedar h kyuki jinke yahan abhi natu kaam Kar Raha h unke bete k bare m natu n kaha tha ki wo bi jimmedar g but kaise..

Let's see...
 

Brijesh

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Nice updates but thoda confused hu..
Story title s superhero ka naam UDAY h but abtk is naam s koi introduce ni hua aur Jo hua h wo h natu Jo pehle ek pschologist tha ... Natu ka past kafi sad Raha but Kya sirf Preeti akeli jimmedar h kyuki jinke yahan abhi natu kaam Kar Raha h unke bete k bare m natu n kaha tha ki wo bi jimmedar g but kaise..

Let's see...
आगे चल कर पता चलेगा भाई 1 या 2 अपडेट में ।अभी तो बहुत बड़ा रहस्य आने वाला है।
 

Brijesh

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Adventure start
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haptaabhar rahakar sunaina aur devaanshee mumbee chale gae, jab tak devaanshee gaanv mein rahee tab tak roj natu ko milatee rahee aur ghanto tak baaten karatee , bahut se cases aur apane anubhav ko share kiye . devaanshee ke jaane ke baad natu do teen din tak usakee yaado mein khoya raha usake saath bitaaye pal yaad karata raha lekin phir usake man ne kaha kee shobha ke saath bevaphaee nahin karanee hai.


barasaat ka mausam shuroo ho gaya tha, jab aasamaan mein baadal dikhe to gaanv mein jashn man sab taraph khushee kee lahar daud gaee . vaise to havaamaan vibhaag ne deree se baarish kee sambhaavana vyakt kee thee lekin baarish samay par shuroo huee ise bahut se logo ne natu ke bhaagyashaalee kadamo ka parinaam samajha . lekin baarish shuroo hone se natu kee baadashaahee par gaaj giree khet ke baaju mein khatiya daalakar aasamaan mein taare ginate sona band ho gaya use na chaahate hue bhee us kamare mein sona pada pahale usane raam ko manaane kee koshish kee kee vah usake saath kamare mein soye lekin vo bola main apane ghar jaakar sounga. pahale ek do din darate darate gujare lekin ek do din baad usake man ka dar nikal gaya .

ek din raat mein bahaar bahut tej baarish ho rahee thee aur aadhee raat ko natu kee aankh khulee to use kamare mein ek prakaash ka srot dikhaee diya jo kee ek golaakaar daravaaje mein se aa raha tha natu dar gaya usane kamare ke daravaaje kee taraph badhane kee koshish kee lekin usake kadamo ne usaka saath na diya , usane hanumaan chaaleesa ka paath shuroo kar diya . aadhe ghante tak vo apanee jagah par baitha raha lekin aadhe ghante ke baad usake dar ne utsukata ka roop dhaaran kar liya ek baar dekhu ke us daravaaje ke paar kya hai, lekin kuchh gadabad huee to ye sochakar kamare ke daravaaje ke paas gaya lekin kamare ka daravaaja khula nahin to vo vaapas prakaashit daravaaje ke taraph gaya , jaise hee najadeek gaya usane kuchh khichaav mahasoos kiya aur vo us prakaashit daravaaje kee paar nikal gaya. paar nikalane ke baad apane aap ko ek pahaadee ke talee mein paaya vah najadeek mein ek sarovar tha jisame kamal khile hue the ek do hans bhee tair rahe the natu soch mein pad gaya ke namaaloom ye kaunasee jagah hai vah se thoda aage jaane ke baad use khoobasoorat ped paudhe aur panchheeo ka shoragul sunaee diya , thandee hava chal rahee thee lekin baarish nahin ho rahee thee phoolo ke sungandh se vo tarotaaja ho gaya . jab vah koee insaan nahin dikha to usane vaapas lautane ka phaisala liya jab vaapas pahaadee kee talahatee mein panhucha to usane daravaaje ko gaayab paaya vo vahee par baith gaya ek do ghante baithane ke baad bhee jab prakashit dvaar nahin dikha to aage badhakar kisee insaan ko dhoondhane ka socha , aage pahunchane ke baad usane dekha kee vah jangal hai ab usake man mein dar kee maatra badh gaee kee kahee koee jangalee jaanavar mil na jaaye usane paas padee ek daalee utha lee kee shaayad kaam mein aa jaaye vaise use pata tha kee isaka koee upayog nahin hai lekin doobate ko tinake ka sahaara . jab jangal paar kar liya to usane raahat kee saans lee use door kahee dhuaan uthata hua dikhaee diya to usane daud laga dee kee shaayad koee mile to gaanv ka raasta hee poochh loo .

thodee der baad jab natu dhue ke najadeek panhucha to dekha kee vah ek aashram tha. vo jaise hee phaatak ke najadeek panhucha to ek naujavaan saadhu usakee taraph aata hua dikhaee diya usane natu ka svaagat kiya aur kaha doctor pallav aapaka svaagat hai baaba bhootanaath ke aashram mein , aap kee raah dekhi ja rahee thee vaise aapako aane mein thodee der ho gaee .aap kuchh jalapaan kar leejiye baaba bhootanaath aap ko kuchh der baad mein milenge agar aap chaahe to us kutiya mein aaraam kar sakate hai . natu ne poochha ye jagah kaunasee hai ?

javaan saadhu ne kaha mera naam sarveshvaranaath hai aur aapake har savaal ka javaab baaba bhootanaath denge .natu ne kaha ye kaise ho sakata hai vo to kaee saal pahale gujar gae hai ?
sarveshvaranaath ne apana javaab dohara diya aapaka samaadhaan sirph baaba karenge . natu man masosakar rah gaya usane kue par jaakar haath paav dhoe aur kuchh naasta kiya aur kutiya mein bichhu ghaas kee chataee par fail gaya , usakee aankh turant lag gaee aur vo gaharee sukoonabharee neend mein kho gaya .jab jaga to to usane apanee kalaee mein bandhee ghadee mein dekha to 11 baj rahe the , vo kutiya se bahaar aaya to usane dekha kee jab vo aaya tha vaisa hee tha subah ka andhakaar tha. usane dekha kee saamane se sarveshvaranaath aa raha tha vo use ek kutiya kee taraph le gaya vah andar jaakar dekha kee ek saadhu padmaasan kee mudra mein baitha hai.

baaba bhootanaath bhavy kapal, tejasvee aankhe , kaalee laharaatee huee daadhee , majaboot bhujae, tekane ke lie dand aur ek kone mein dekha ek trishool , talavaar aur gada rakhee hai. baaba ne hasakar kaha tumhaara svaagat hai ,pallav . vaise kis
naam se tumhe bulaoo natu, pallav ya phir udayashankaranaath ? natu ne kaha ye jagah kaunasee hai baaba ? natu aur pallav donon mere naam hai lekin yah udayashankaranaath kaun hai ? baaba ne kaha ye jagah hai chaturth parimaan ya tum jis bhaasha mein samajhate ho usame kahu to 4th dimension .



To be continued....

 

Nky

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Nice update bhai
 
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