Romance Uff! Ye Mohabbat ! (completed)

[Jaguaar]

Update 45​

Yash ne avi ki naukri ka bandobast kar diya tha

Aur ab asal jindagi ki shuruwat ho chuki thi aur use sath tha pyaar ka.. aur lakshya samne ho to aadmi ki daudne se koi nahi rok sakta, avi ko bhi uska lakshya samne dikh raha tha, uske samne 3 uddeshya the, ek apne pairo par khada hona jiski shuruwat ho chuki thi dusra sanjana ke papa aniket aur yash ke uspar ke viswas ko sahi sabit karna aur teesra sanjana se shadi

Dekhte dekhte avi ki training ka ek mahina bhi nikal gaya aur ab bas ek din bacha tha uske lautne me aur bas ek din baad avi sanjana se milne wala tha, itne din to jaise taise nikal gaye the par ye aakhri ke 24 ghante bahut mushkil se beetne wale the, sanjana ka man adhir ho gaya tha wahi aasman se badal ghir aaye the aur barsat hone lagi thi, sanjana us din apne ghar par hi thi, usne badhiya coffee banayi aur cup lekar khidki ke paas aakar khadi ho gayi aur barish ko dekhne lagi

Hamesha barish ko dekh kar chidhne wali sanjana aaj shant thi, pata nahi kyu par aaj use ye pehli barish pasand aa rahi thi, pehle barish ki fuhar, wo mitti ki khushbu jiske samne to scent bhi fika pad jaye, wo khudke ke paas baith ke is khushbu ka anand le rahi thi.. wo soch rahi thi ke aajtak use kabhi barish itni pasand nahi aayi fir aaj kyu, aur agle hi pal uske dil ne use jawab de diya ke avi ko barish bahut pasand hai..
Barish me chalne wali to saaf aur thandi hawa sara vatavaran khushnuma bana rahi thi, beech me hi barish ki koi bauchar uske chehre par pani ke tushar uda deti aur sanjana usse khil uthti, use to aisa lag raha tha jaise avi pyaar se uspar pani fek raha hai, aur ye kalpana karte hi wo sharmayi aur uske galo par lali chha gayi, beech me hi hawa ka jhoka uske balo ki lat uda deta tha to use aisa lagta ke wo hawa na hokar mani avi ko jo uske balo se khel raha ho, use avi ki bahut yaad aa rahi thi

Man bechain ho gaya tha aur najar us barish me avi ko dhundh rahi thi, waise to dinbhar avi ka phone band hi rehta tha kyu jis factory me uska training chal raha tha waha phone allowed nahi tha aur ye pata hoke bhi sanjana se use call lagaya aur uska phone band aaya to wo phone ki taraf jhuthe gusse me dekh ke boli

Sanjana- bairi piya..

Use apne aap par hi hasi aane lagi.. aur wo khud se boli

Sanjana- ye chaubis ghante meri jaan le lenge, avi please jaldi aa jao ab duri sahi nahi jati, man tumse milne ko bechain hi raha hai aur be barish pagal bana rahi hai..

Use har jagah bas avi najar aa raha tha usne apni aankhe band ki aur apne dil ko samjhane lagi ke bas kuch ghante aur fir to avi aane hi wala hai

Fir sanjana ne aankhe kholi to barish me uske ghar ke bahar ek bike aakar khadi huyi aur us bike par baithe ladke ne sanjana ki taraf dekh kar apni dono bahe failayi, par helmet ki wajah se sanjana ko samjha nahi je wo kaun hai aur ye baat us ladke ke dhyan me aayi aur usne apna helmet utara, sanjana ko apni aankho par yakin nahi ho raha tha, wo avi tha, sanjana daud kar avi ke paas pahuchi aur bike par baithe avi ko gale laga liya

Virah, virah ke baad ki wo mulakat, wo lagav pyaar sab kuch tha us pal me , jo kuch bhi bolna tha wo dil ko dhadkan bol rahi thi, upar se megh baras rahe the aur niche ye premi pyaar me bheeg rahe the, hasi aansu sab tha us pal me, aaju baju ki building ke ladko ne ye scene se ke gaaliya seetiya baja dali aur chillane lage fir un dono ko hosh aaya, avi ne sanjana ko apne piche baithne kaha, sanjana ki maa khidki me se sab dekh rahi thi aur wo bhi muskura rahi thi, sanjana ne apni najro me jau kya aisa sawal liye apni maa ko dekha to unhone bhi gardan hila kar jane ki permission de di, sanjana ne ek flying kiss apni maa ko di aur jaldi se avi ke piche bike par baith gayi

Sanjana ne avi ki pith par halke se marte huye pucha
Sanjana- tum to kal aane wale the na ?

Avi gadi chalate huye haste huye bola

Avi- kal aata to jo maja abhi aaya hai wo kaise aata ? Socha chalo tumhe surprise de du, kaisa laga ?

Sanjana ne avi ko piche se gale lagaya aur boli

Sanjana- bahut bahut bahut pasand aaya, par hum ja kaha rahe hai itni barish me ?

Avi- just enjoy the ride, barish me ek mast long drive

Badhiya barish ho rahi thi, sanjana avi se chipki huyi thi Aur usne halke se apne hoth avi ki gardan par tika diye.. aur avi isse sihar utha.. usne gadi chalate huye hi sanjana ka ek hath jisse usne use gale lagaya tha wo pakda aur uski hatheli par apne hoth tika diye, kitna khubsurat pal tha wo, upar se barasta pani, thandi hawa aur ye dono pranay ka ufan uth raha tha, sanjana me apna wo hath avi ke hath se chhudaya aur jaha avi ne chuma tha wahi apne hoth tika diye aur fir se avi ko bilag gayi

Aaj un dono ko barish bahut bha rahi thi, unki gadi ab highway par daud rahi thi aur dono ko aaj apni khushi ke aage aasman chhota lag raha tha, sanjana ko to lag raha tha mano wo badlo me chal rahi ho, uski nachne ki icha ho rahi thi par chalti gadi me wo possible nahi tha wo chalti gadi par avi ke kandhe par hath rakh kar khadi huyi, avi has raha tha, sanjana ko lag raha tha ke mano wo koi panchi ho, wo aasman me udna chahti thi, fir usne aasman ki taraf dekhte huye apne dono hath failaye aur jor se chillaya

Sanjana- AVI... I LOVE YOU!!

Avi bhi helmet ka flap open karke jor se chillaya

Avi- I LOVE YOU TOO SANJU!!

Barish dono bhigaye ja rahi thi aur dono thoda aur aage gaye aur ab milan ki khumari kam hine lagi thi aur sanjana ko thand lagne lagi thi, bolte huye awaj tharthara raha tha, avi ne ek jagah gadi roki, highway par jhopdi numa shade me ek chota sa hotel bana hua tha aur waha ek vayask lady garam garam bhajiye tal rahi thi, dono jaldi se us shade me bhage aur waha rakhe bench par jakar baithe.. sanjana ke daat thand se katkata rahe the avi ne jhat apna jacket utar kar sanjana ko pehnaya aur hotel wale se ek towel lekar sanjana ka sir pochne laga , sanjana ab bhi thand se tharthara rahi thi, for avi ne ek chai li aur apne hath se sanjana ko chai pilane laga, us chai ki mithas sanjana sari jindagi nahi bhulne wali thi, avi ne sanjana ke chehre par aaye uske baal side hataye aur uski khubsurati ko niharne laga.. sanjana avi ki aankho me apne liye pyar saaf dekh rahi thi.. chai pine ke baad aur jacket pehenne se ab sanjana ko thoda acha laga aur ab wo theek hai aisa usne avi ko bataya aur fir barish me garma garam pakodo ko kaun gadha hai jo na bolega.. avi ne is hotel me se pakode liye aur sanjana se apne hath fold karke aisa bataya jaise use dobara thandi lag rahi ho, avi muskuraya, wo samajh gaya tha me sanjana kya kehna chah rahi hai , fir usne sanjana ko apne hath se pakode khilaye, us shade me aur bhi kuch log maujud the jo is prem kabutar ki jodi ko dekh ke muskura rahe the par unke kaha kisi se koi lena dena tha, un logo me ek couple bhi tha aur us lady ne jab avi sanjana ko apne hath se khila raha tha tab
Kohni maar ke aankho se ishara kiya aur boli, dekho ise kehte hai pyaar, aur wo bhi muskurane laga

Sanjana- to ab aage kya plan hai avinash rao

Avi- aage sabse pehle anya se milne jana hai aur uske baad sham ko tumhe ghar chhod dunga

Sanjana ne bhi ye baat phone karke apne ghar bata di

Barish ab kam ho chuki thi kar rim jhim shuru thi, dono wapis gaon aane ko nikle par avi ne gaon me na jate huye gadi dusri or mod di aur fir wo us jagah pahuche, sabse special jagah, avi ne gadi roki aur bola

Avi- tumhari icha thi na hamari tekdi dekhne ki, ye dekho...

Sanjana mantramugdh ho gayi thi, thoda uchayi par hone se aur abi abhi barish hone se uss aisa lag raha tha mano wo badlo ke beech hai.. har taraf kohra chaya hua tha aur upar aasman aur usme chaye huye megh us pal us kshan waha dharti ka swarg wali feeling aa rahi thi aur sanjana us vilobhaniya drishya ko apni aankho me kaid kar rahi thi itne me avi ne uska hath pakda

Sanjana ne mud ke dekha to avi apna ek ghutna niche tika ke baitha tha aur fir usne apni jeb se ek ring nikali aur sanjana ke samne karte huye bola

Avi- Sanju, will you marry me

Us tekdi ki khubsurti me khoyi sanjana ko jab ye sab hua to kuch samajh hi nahi aaya, uska gala bhar aaya aur wo jaise taise bas YES bol payi aur avi ne wo diamond ring sanjana ko ungli me pehna di

Sanjana ne jaldi se avi ko khada kiya aur use gale laga liya aur dono ekdusre ki bahi me sama gaye aur barish fir se shuru ho gayi.....

Superb Updatee

Yeh baat toh hai lambe se lamba time kab guzar jaata hai pata nhi chalta par yeh akhri ke kuch ghante guzaarne mein aisa lagta hai jaise sadiya beet rahi hai.

Toh apni tekdi pe hi Avi ne Sanjana ko Shaadi ke liye propose kiyaa. Gajabbb

 

[Naina]

Update 44​

Avi aur sanjana ko mehnat karke apne exams paas karne the aur apne pairo par khada hona tha aur sanjana ke papa ne jo unpar viswas jataya tha use sahi sabit karna tha

Dono me bahut jyada changes huye the pyaar to din ba din badh raha tha par uske sath sath dono ko jimmedari ka bhi ehsas tha aur fir aaya exams ka daur, dono ne apna pura dhyan exams par lagaya aur paas huye, sanjana ka education complete ho gaya tha par avi ka abhi ek saal bacha tha, sanjana to padhne me pehle se hoshiyar thi to use jyada dikkat nahi aayi

Ab sanjana ne college ki sunder duniya se nikal kar asal duniya me kadam rakha tha aur ab shuru huyi khoj naukri ki, sangram patil ko pehchan ke chalte sanjana ko jald hi job mil gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte ek saal beet gaya, ab avi ka bhi education complete ho chuka tha
Par kehte hai na, college ki life jitni khubsurat hoti hai utni hi college ke bahar ki duniya mushkil, avi ji jaan laga ke naukri dhundhne me laga hua tha par naukri milna itna aasan nahi tha.. aur dekhte hi dekhte chhe mahine aur gujar gaye, jaise jaise din beet rahe the avi ka tension badh raha tha, sanjana use samjha rahi thi ke aab theek hoga

Aniket ye sab dekh raha tha.. par for bhi wo shant tha aur ek din aniket avi ke ghar aaya aur use uthaya

Aniket- chal yaar bahut din ho gaye apni dhang se baat huye aur tekdi ke darshan huye

Dono apna stock leke tekdi par apni pasand ki jagah jakar baithe, avi shant tha aur aniket ne bolna suru kiya

Aniket- bol bhai Avinash Kanitkar, aaj bahut chup hai tu muh me dahi jamane ka karkhana khola kya

Avi- waisa nahi hai be anya, aajkal ke market ki halat dekhi hai na, jaan leva compitition hai bhai, sala ek chaprasi ke naukri ke liye bhi hajaro log apply karte hai, air hamare jaise fresher ko to koi khada bhi nahi karta bolne ko to sanjana ke papa ko mai bol aaya tha par ye itna bhi easy nahi hai bhai..

Aniket- shabash, chhe mahine me hi fat gayi teri ? Chinta mat kar sab theek hoga ab bata shadi me bare me kya socha hai ?

Avi- anya chadh gayi kya teko ? Mai yaha naukri ki baat kar raha aur tereko shadi sukh rahi ?

Aniket use aage samjhata ya batata itne me piche se awaj aaya

"Salo haramkhoro, hamesha mere ko jalti deke yaha aake party karte ho"

Piche yash haste huye khada tha

Avi- aaila yash tu idhar kaise ?

Yash- mai to idhar beer ko sunghte huye aa gaya mere ko malum tha ke tum yahi miloge, hamesha mere bagair party karte ho

Yash ne bhi unko join kiya aur bola

Yash- fir avi seth shadi kab kar raha ?

Avi- sala yaha sar pe baal nahi bach rahe aur ye maharaj puch rahe ke gajra loge kya

Yash- anya isko kya hua be

Aniket- devdas aaj pankaj udas hai, gum me hai apna majnu

Yash- kya hua be ? Aur hamare hote huye tu kyu udas hai ?

Avi ne bhi udas tone me jawab diya

Avi- wahi be naukari ka scene, naukri nahi to chokri bhi nahi

Yash- aisa hai kya, par beta iske liye tu khud jimmedar hai, sale post graduate ho gaya aur humko sadhi party bhi nahi di tune, bas bhi karmo ka phal hai ke ye tere

Aniket- ishq ne nakara bana diya ghalib warna aadmi tu bhi kaam ka tha

Aniket bhi yash ke sath mil ke avi ki maja lene laga

Yash- waah ustad kya sher mara hai

Aur avi chidhte huye bola

Avi- kamino le lo jitni maja leni hai..

Yash- ha to wo to hum lenge hi, aur agar teko aisa lagta hai ke hum maja na le to hamari baat maan

Avi- kya nalayak log ho be tum, yaha meri fati padi hai aur tumko maja sujh raha

Yash- to party de

Avi- ha bhi le liyo party bol kab chahiye teko party

Yash- yahi aaj ki party teri taraf se

Avi- nahi aaj nahi fir kabhi

Par aaj yash full from me tha aur avi ko aise nahi chhodne wala tha

Yash- fir kab dega ?

Avi- ye sunday ko karo done

Yash- na, tu Sunday ko party nahi dega pata hai mujhe

Avi- abe de dunga bhai

Yash- aur sunday ko tu yaha nahi raha to

Ab avi chidhne laga tha

Avi- yaha nahi rahunga to kaha jaunga

Yash- to surat ko tera baap jayega kya ?

Avi ko kuch samajh nahi aaya

Avi- mai surat ko kyu jaunga, aur waha jake karna kya hai ?

Yash- to training ke liye aapke pitaji ko bheju kya swarg lok se..

Avi- yash sidha sidha bol na bhai

Yash- abe gadhe mere sasur ke company me sales manager ki post khali hai, tu jane wala hoga to bata ?

Yash ki baat sun ke avi chauka aur uske kandhe ko pakad ke bola

Avi- jaunga bole to ? Abe pakka jaunga , yash mere liye baat kar na bhai..

Yash bhi nakhre karte huye bola

Yash- kar lunga baat par pehle do beer lagenge..

Avi- diye, do beer kya akkha beer me mehla dunga teko

Yash- theek hai fir

Avi ekdum edited hokar bola

Avi- kab karega baat

Yash ne fir apni jeb se ek letter nikala aur avi ke hath me rakhte huye bola

Yash- ye le joining letter, Friday ko surat me jake mar udhar training hai ek mahine ka

Avi ne jhat se wo letter khola to wo such me joining letter tha aur usme payment aur company ki taraf se ek flat ke bare me bataya gaya tha, avi ko to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha, uski aankhe bhar aayi thi usne yash ko gale laga liya

Avi- bhai yash tera ye upkar mai ni dagi bhar nahi bhulunga

Yash- oye hudd, upkar wagaire nahi hai ye teko naukri ki jarurat thi aur unko bharose ke aadmi ki bas baat khatam

Avi ne letter aniket ko dikhaya aur uske gale laga aur fir yash bola

Yash- ho gaya ? Sab khush hi gaye ? Ab nachne ka karyakram shuru kiya jaye

(Yede log bc bagair music ke hi nachne lagte hai )

Aur fir jab wo nach ke thak gaye to niche baith gaye aur avi bola

Avi- mai aaya jara ek minute me

Aniket- ha ha ja hamari bhabhi ko bhi de de khushkhabri

Avi ne sanjana ko call kiya, pehle to wo itni raat me avi ka call dekh ke chauki par fir jab avi ne use sari baat batayi to wo bhi khush ho gayi aur fir avi call karke apne dosto ke paas aaya

Avi- anya haramjade halkat tere ko ye sab pehle se malum tha na

Aniket kuch nahi bola bas apni battisi faad smile de di aur yash bola

Yash- waise to tu college se pass out hote hi ye offer dene wala tha tujhe par fir socha ke nahi pehle isko thoda dhakke khane do, aasani ne mili huyi naukri ki koi kimat nahi hoti, isiliye jaan ke tujhe chhe mahine latkaya, sorry..

Avi- abe sorry ki baat hi nahi hai yaha, mereko bhi to ye experience mila, waise sach batau to pata nahi gum log nahi hote to mera kya hota..

Yash- oye bas ho gaya ab Thank you puran.. aur ha mera sasur bahut danger aadmi hai, jitna paisa dega utna ragdega bhi, par mere ko yakin hai le tu sambhal lega, ab man laga ke training karne ka aur kaam pe lagne ka..

Aniket- aur training khatam hua ke fir bhai ki shadii.........

Insaan jeevan kaal mein kayi mahatvapoorn rishte judte dusre logo se...
kisi insaan ke jeevan mein dosti sabase mulyavaan rishta hai. agar jindagi mein dost ki kami hai, to samajh lijiye ye jivan hi santusht purn nahi hai. Bilkul fiki si ho jaye ye jindagi... har kisi ko bure ya achchhe jeevan ki ghatanaon ko saajha karane, sukhad palo ka aanand lene aur jeevan ki Memorable ghatanaon ko saajha karane ke liye ek achhe aur sachhe dost ki aavashyakata hoti hai.

Sachha dost woh hai, jise koi bhi hamesha ke liye dil ki gehrayi se pasand kar sakate hai, bharosa kar sakte hai. Dost wo jo koi nahi kar sakta ,wo ek dost kar dikhata hai.....
ghum ka mahol, koi dukh ho ya tragedy... in sab paristithiyo se bahar nikalne mein kisi apne se zyada ek dost zyada kargar sabit hota hai.... to kabhi prerna banke hume apni jindagi mein har muskil ko paar kar aage badhne ko encourage karta hai......

" koi na hai sath tera... door hai manjil.... par ye fikar kyun, jab ye dost sath hai tere..."
Jaise aniket aur yash hai avi ke liye......
uska hath thamne ke liye, is muskil ghadi mein sath dene ke liye...
ek sikh bhi de diya un dono ne ushe ki muskil se koi cheej mile to uski ahmiyat zyada hoti hai... insaan kadar zyada katne lag jaata hai....
aur main bhi is baat se sure hun ki ab avi Training mein focus ke sath sath job mein hi zyada ekagrata ke sath mehnat karega ......

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Khair..... kaafi dilchasp aur emotions bharpur update tha
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Adirshi

 

[Jaguaar]

Update 46​

Aur ab proposal ka khumar hata to sanjana hosh me aate huye boli

Sanjana- sharam nahi aati ? ek shadi shuda ladki ko shadi ke liye puch rahe ho

Avi- heein shadi shuda

Sanjana- ha, meri shadi ho chuki hai

Avi- aur ye kab hua ? aur mere ko nahi bulaya tumne shadi me

Sanjana- aaye to the tum choro jaise

Avi- sala mere ko kaise nai maul ye baat

Sanjana- dekho Mr. Avi meri shadi ho chuki hai aur wo bhi sakshat shri krishna ki sakshi me

Avi- aisa hai kya, to bolo bhi tumhare maa papa ko ke sasural bhej de tumko, aise shadi shuda ladkiyo ka jyada time mayke me rehna sahi baat nahi hai

Sanjana- fir uske liye tumhe pehle mujhe lene aana hoga na, permission leni padegi

Avi- meri biwi ko lane ke liye mujhe kisi ki permission thode hi chahiye, khair tum keh rahi ho to aata hu kal, company ke diye huye flat me tumhare hi hatho se rakhenge kalash

avi ki baat sunkar sanjana hasne lagi

sanjana- bas majak ho gaya ho to ab batao hum shadi kab karne wale hai ?

Avi- mai kal hi ghar par baat karta hu aur tumhare ghar aata hu, ab mujhe bhi nahi raha ja raha tumhare bagair, ye mahina kaise nikala hai bas mai hi janta hu3

Sanjana- ha jaise mai to yaha jhula jhul rahi thi na

Avi- to kal fix kare, mai maa aur anya ko leke aata hu

Aur fir avi ne sanjana ko uske ghar chhoda aur jaldi se apne ghar pahucha, itne dino baad maa bhi apne bete ko dekh ke khush ho gayi aur kuch idhar udhar ki baate karne ke baad avi ne jhat main mudde ko hath lagaya

Avi- maa ab apne ko meri company ke flat par shift hona hai

Shanta- ye to achi baat hai, par beta meri sari jindagi yaha isi ghar me biti hai, mera lagega waha ?

Avi- wo mai kaise bata sakta hu, bas itna hai ke ab tak bahut kaam kar liye tumne ab aaram karne ka time hai

Aur avi ke ye bolte hi uski maa samajh gayi ke isko kya bolne ka hai

Shanta- aaj tujhe achanak mere aaram ki chinta kaise hone lagi ? kya gadbad hai avya ?

Avi sharmanya

Avi- gadbad ? kaisi gadbad ?

Shanta- beta maine janam diya hai tujhe to mujhe mat sikha samjha aur baat kya hai sidhe sidhe bata

Fir avi jaise taise bola

Avi- wo tumhari bahu puch rahi thi ke usko lene kab aaunga to..

Shanta- acha aisa hai kya, mujhe laga hi tha, bol kab jana hai shadi ki baat karne

Avi- kal chale ?

Shanta- shabash, to sab pehle se hi thenra liya hai tune aur mujhe aise hi makkhan maar raha hai ? khair teri khushi me meri khushi hai, ab ja pehle ja ke aniket ko bata ye baat waise bhi uske bagair tera patta bhi nahi hilega, chalte hai kal

Avi ne khushi se maa ko gale lagaya aur sidha aniket ke ghar ki taraf bhaga

Is samay aniket ghar par hoga ye avi ko pata tha, wo uske ghar pahucha aur uske dekhte hi aniket uske paas aaya, ghar par narayanrao aur kaushalya bhi the, unkodekhte hi avi ne unke pair chuye, aur wo log apne room me chale gaye kyuki unko pata tha ye do dost kafi dino baad mile hai to dhingana to hoga hi

Unke jate hi aniket se apne pair aage kiye

Avi- arey hao bhai, tere pair to sabse pehle pakadne chahiye the, tu to mera ek importantkaam karne wala hai

Aniket- mai aur important kaam aaila meri bayi aankh fadak rahi hai re, o bhai tune koi naya lafda nahi kiya na ?

Avi- nahi re lafda wagaire kuch nahi bas ek chotasa kaam tha

Aniket chati ko hath lagate huye bola

Aniket- o bhai, tere chote kaam bahut danger hote hai, waise kaam kya hai wo bata

Avi- nahi kuch khas nahi tere ko bas mere sath ek jagah chalna hai

Avi ki baat sunkar aniket uske kandhe par hath marte huye bola

Aniket- bas itni si baat, arey dost ke liye to apan narak me bhi chale jaye, bol kaha jana hai

Avi- sanjana ke ghar meri shadi ki baat karne

Aur mano uske upar chipkali giri ho aise aniket chikha

Aniket- kyaaa ? shadi ki baat karne ? sanjana ke ghar ? aur mai ? nahi hoga

Avi use samjhate huye bola

Avi- bhai chal na yaar, tere bagair mera hai kaun

Aniket- kaun tu, mai nahi janta teko

Avi- acha beta dost ko bhul gaya, bas yahi hai teri dosti

Aniket avi ke pair pakadte huye bola

Aniket- o baba mai pair pakadta hu tere, mere ko mat maar re, mera record bahut kharab hai, yash ke time maine, uske sale, baap, maa, bodyguard sabka maar khaya aur mere time mere sasur ne pita tha, ye sab to theek tha be sanjana ka baap to policewala hai, wo pata nahi kaisa kaisa aur kaha kaha marega aur ab mera maar khane ka bilkul mood nahi hai, mere ko to tu maaf hi kar

Avi- ho gayi nautanki karke, tereko bataya tha na pichli baar unhone kya kaha tha to

Aniket- shadi ke liye ha kiya tha kya ?

Avi- nahi waisa nahi bola tha

Aniket- bas to fir baat cancel, policewale bahut bura maarte hai

Avi- yahi hai teri dosti hai na

Aniket- khadde me gayi be dosti, sala tum shadi karke maja karo aur maar mai khau, naat possible

Avi bhi jhuta natak karte huye gane laga

Avi- dost dost na raha, pyaar pyaar na raha

Aur aniket ne uske hath me rupaya rakhe jaisa kiya aur bola

Aniket- aage jao baba, sala nautanki, ek kaam karte hai mere bapu ko manate hai chalne ko fir koi tension nahi

Avi- ha ye idea sahi hai, waise bhi is kaam me bade hi sath chahiye aur kaka rahenge to sab sahi hoga

Fir aniket aur avi ne narayanrao aur kaushalya ko manaya aur unhone bhi unki baat maan li, agle din avi ki maa shanta, narayanrao aur kaushalya, avi aniket sab sanjana ke ghar pahuche, sanjana ke gharwalo ne bhi unka ache se swagat kiya aur sari baat chit khushi khushi sampann huyi aur is baar pehli baar aniket ke maar khaye bagair love story puri huyi thi aur akhir me fix huyi shadi ki tarikh

Avi ki maa ko chinta ho rahi thi ke ye sab kaise hoga aur unhone aniket se ye baat bhi ki

Aniket- arey kaki aap kyu tension le rahi hai mai hu na aur aapko pata nahi hai avi ke kitne dost hai, sab aayenge aur mai to hu hi sab dekhne ko, aap sab apne bete ki shadi enjoy karo aur sara tension mere pe chhod do

Yash aur aniket dono kaam pe lag gaye the aur ghar ke samne ke patangan me bada sa mandap bandha gaya jiske dekh ke avi ki maa ne pucha

Shanta- arey itna bada mandap kyu ?

Aniket- arey kaki ye bhi chhota padega itne log aayenge, aap dekho bas aur sara kaam mere jimme chhod do

Yash bhi chinta me tha

Yash- anya, tere dimag me kya hai be, itna sab karne se to shahar me ek marriage hall book kar lete na

Aniket- usme kya maja hai bhai, sara kaam mojke karna padta hai, yaha sara gaon apna hai jo karna hai bindass karna hai, tu dekh bas

Yash- arey par hum dono kya kya karenge

Aniket- tu avi koache se janta nahi bhai, bahut chahne wale hai uske

Itne me waha ek bus aake ruki aur usme se avi ke sare dost utarne lage aur dekhte hi dekhte sabne apne apne kaam bant liye the, aniket has raha tha aur yash samajh gaya tha ke aniket ne hi ye sari gang jama ki hai aur ab yash sure tha ke sare kaam jaldi jaldi ho jayenge

Udhar sanjana ke ghar me bhi shadi ki gadbad chal rahi thi uski sari sehaliya rishte daar sab pahuch gaye the aur sanjana ki dost uske mehndi aur haldi ke karyakran me busy ho gayi thim sanjana ko mehndi lag rahi thi, har taraf bas awaj hiawaj tha, koi beech me hi sanjana ko avi ka naam leke chhed deta, sab ne milke sanjana ko haldi lagayi jisse uska roop aur nikhar aaya tha

Udhar avi ko bhi haldi lagane ka karyakran shuru hua, priya aur komal ne to avi ko haldi me nehla diya tha aur isme priya ko najane kya sujha usne komal ko bhi haldi me rang diya, wahi yash aur aniket kuch kaam se waha se ja rahe the to komal aur priya ne unpar bhi hamla kar diya, yash to pakad me aa gaya par aniket bhagne laga to komal naraj ho gayi

Komal- ani jara si haldi se kya ho jayega, avi tum samjhao apne dost ko

Avi- usko aise thode hi haldi lagani hai

Itna bol ke avi ne apne dono hath failaye aur bola

Avi-anya bhai ko congrats nahi karega kya ?

Aniket- sala nautanki

Itna bol ke aniket ne avi ko gale laga liya, sham ko sangeet ka karyakran shuru hua aur ab bari thianiket bhi usne kisi ko nahi chhoda jise nachaya na ho, raat bhar bas dhamal hota raha

Agle din ki avi aturta se raah dekh raha tha, aur sanjana aur sab log waha aa gaye the, sanjana ke waha aate hi sab uske paas jama ho gaye, sanjana ne ek pile rang ki saree pehni thi aur sar par pallu liya hua tha, avi balcony me khade hokar sanjana ko dekh raha tha aur sanjana ki naja bhi avi ko dhundh rahi thi aur ye baat aniket ke dhyan me aa gayi wo avi ke sath balcony me khada tha aur usne waha se jordar siti bajayi, sanjana ne chauk ke upar dekha to dono ki najre mili, un najro me kitni aturta kitni tadap thi ye wo dono hi jante the, avi ne ek baar apni palke jhapkayi namo najrose keh raha ho bas thoda samay aur fir to hamesha ke liye ek hona hai… us pile saree me sanjana bahut khubsurat dikh rahi thi apni ne apna ek hah apne dil par rakha mano meh raha ho haayy ! kitni sunder dikh rahi hai meri dilruba, dono me smile kiya aur aage ki tayari me lag gaye..

Sare dosto ne mil ke avi ko tayar kiya, cream color ki sherwani aur cherry red color ki dhoti, sar par jari ka pheta, maa ne ek motiyo ki mala uske gale me pehnayi.. dulhe ke gateup me avi bahut badhiya lag raha tha..

Barat nikli, aniket ki beti annanya avi ke sath ghodi par bithi thi, kareeb kareeb gaya gaon aur aur mere sare XF wale bhi maujud the barat me, aniket to bhoot ker jaisa nach raha tha ghodi ke aage aur uske sath me yash priya komal aur yash ka peta prish bhi tha, itne me docter sunam aur docter siddharth bhi pahuch gaye aur unke sath nachne me shamil ho gaye.. narayanrao bechare inko sambhalte huye pareshan huye ja rahe the.. waise to m,andap tak ka rasta chota tha par waha pahuchne me inko do ghante lag gaye the aur akhir me aniket ne avi ko bhi nachaya..

Avi mandap me ab pandit ke paas baith kar shadi ki vidhi puri kar raha tha par uska pura dhyan entry par laga hua tha jaha se sanjana aane wali thi, ek ek pal use yugo jaisa lag raha tha aur aakhir me wo pal aaya, sanjana use aate huye dikhayi hi..avi ka dil mano dhadakna bhul gaya ho.. uske liye sari duniya ruk gayi thi, aaju baju ka sara awaj shant ho gaya tha, waha bahut se log the lekin avi ko bas sanjana dikh rahi thi..

Sanjana ne ek kashta padar ka pile rang ka shalu pehna hua tha.. aur jamuni rang ki kinar jispar jari ka wark tha.. pairo me najuk payal thi jiski madhur jhankar idhar avi ke man me uth rahi thi.. hatho me chudiya.. kamar par kamarpatta… hath par kohni tak nikali huyi mehndi j gore hatho par khul kar dikh rahi thi, gale me chandrahaar.., balo ka juda bana hua tha jisme mogre ke phulo ki veni lagi huyi thi, dando par bajubandh mohak dikh raha tha.. kano me jhumke aur naak me motiyo ki nath… halkasa makeup aur hotho par laal lipstick, aisa lag raha tha wo hoth na hokar gulab ki pankhudiya ho, chlte huye nath halke se hotho ko touch ho rahi thi.. avi paglo jaisa us sunderta ko nihar raha tha use to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ke ye sunderta ki murat kuch samay baad hamesha ke liye uski hone wali hai.. sanjana dheere dheere chalte huye uske paas aayi, avi sudh budh kho kar use dekh raha tha

Itne me aniket se use kohni mari aur bola

Aniket- malum hai teri hai aise kya dekh raha be..

Aniket ki baat sunkar avi hosh me aaya aur sanjana sharmayi aur wo pal aaya jiski dono chatak ke jaise raah dekh rahe the, saptapadi ke samay jab avi ne sanjana ka sath pakda to wo feeling hi alag thi, sab kisi sapne jaisa lag raha tha, mangalashtak huye dono ne ekdusre ko haar pehnaya.. aur isi ke sath dono hamesha hamesha ke liye ekdusre ke ho gaye…

Ho gayi avi ki shadi.. yash aur aniket ek jagah thak ke baithe the aur yash bhavuk ho gaya tha

Yash- anya aaj bahut bada kaam kar diya tune, avi ko settle kara diya

Aniket- wo to karna hi tha bhai

Yash- tere jaisa dost milna avi ke bhi bhagya hai, bachpan se use sambhala hai, gayab hua to dhundha hai, mere piche hath dho ke pada tha uski naukri ke liye aur ab shadi..

Aniket ne yash ko gaur se dekha aur gambhir awaj me bola

Aniket- ye tu bol raha hai yash ? ulta avi jaisa dost mujhe mila hai ye to mera bhagya hai aur ye baat tujhse achi tarah aur kaun janta hoga

Yash ghabraya aur kuch nahi bola, aniket hasa aur aage bola

Aniket- avi ne jo mere liye kiya hai uski to mai bharpayi bhi nahi kar sakta

Kuch bolne ke liye yash bola

Yash- tumhari baate tum dost jano..

Aniket- pata to tujhe bhi hai bas tu bola nahi kabhi aur mai tujhe uska dosh bhi nahi dunga..

An yash ke kaan khade ho gaye

Yash- tu kya bol raha hai ani sara samjhe aisa bol

Aniket ne ek lambi saas chhodi aur bola

Aniket- avi ka pehla pyaar komal hai na ?

Yash par to mano bijli giri ho, wo aniket se najar nahi mila pa raha tha fir bhi jaise taise bola

Yash- tu kuch bhi bol raha hai anya

Aniket- mujhe pata hai re, bahut si baate hai aisi, uske hath par ka AK ka tatoo, jab jab pyaar ki baat aayi avi ka hath us tatoo par jata hai.. is patthe ko dairy likhne ki adat thi, jab ye gayab hua aur mai iske ghar gaya na to mujhe iski ek dairy mili, uske baad maine mere shadi ki CD dekhi avi phero ke pehle tak tha fir gayab ho gaya tha, wo aansu bhari aanko se bas komal ko dekh raha tha, teri aur uski tekdi par ki mulakat usne dairy me likhi hai, usne dosti ke liye pyaar kurban kiya hai bhai uske aage maine jo kiya wo to kam hi hai..

Yash ko kya bole samajh nahi aa raha tha par ek sawal uske man me uth raha tha aur usne pucha

Yash- tujhe ye sab pata hai ye avi janta hai ?

Aniket hasa aur bola

Aniket- pagal hai kya ? use ye pata chala to mai janta hu fir hamare beech faltu me duriya aayengi, aaj use lagta hai ke mai kuch nahi jaanta isiliye wo bindass mere pas aata hai mere se freely baat karta hai ghar par aata hai, yahi agar use pata chala ke mai ye baat janta hu to wo utna freely mere se komal se baat nahi kar payega, mil nahi payega, jo hona tha ho gaya use hum nahi badal sakte, aaj avi ki life ki ek nayi shuruwat hai, aur mai janta hu ke tu agar dost ke liye bhai se ye baat chupa sakta hai to usi dost ke liye ye baat bhi kabhi apne hothopar nahi layega

Yash ki aankho me pani tha, usne aniket ko kas ke gale laga liya

Yash- tum dono dhanya ho ulta mai to aisa bolunga ke mai naseeb wala hu jo mujhe aisa dost aur bhai mile….



Samapt.

Bahut Bahut Dhanyawaad !
Adirshi

Awesome Updateee

Toh aakhir Avi aur Sanjana ki shaadi ho hi gayi aur saath mein iss prem kahani ka bhi anth hua. Par anth hone ke pehle Aniket ne ek dhamaka kar diya ke usko pata tha Avi Komal se pyaar karta hai.

 

[Jaguaar]

Aur yaha isi ke sath ek aur kahani ka samapan hote huye, aap sabhi logo ka bahut bahut dhanyawad jinhone apni uttar pratrikriyao se mujhe is kahani ko likhne me sahyog kiya... aapke support ke bagair mai ye nahi likh pata
Naina Jaguaar Babybulbul Sauravb Naik kingkhankar DARK WOLFKING SANJU ( V. R. ) Shanu Punnu ragish7357 Aryan s. Kala Nag Harry killer Dev the lover Guri006 Verma sahab Dhaal Urph Pradeep raman chopra Chinturocky Damha Lucky.. Sasha!
aur mere tamam reader dosto jinka naam mai yaha mention nahi kar paya par aapko tahe dil se dhanyawaad deta hu aur sath hi sabhi silent readers ka bhi shukriya jinhone kabhi comment nahi kiya lekin kahani padhte rahe aur ant me sabse bada thank you mashish bhai ko jinhone mujhe message kar karke story likhne ko kaha warna mai to agle saal hi story shuru karne wala tha.. D mashish bhai kuch technical difficulties ki wajah se kisi bhi story par comment nahi par ka rahe the par reactions ke madhyam se wo hamare sath bare rahe
aap sabhi ka bahut bahut aabhar

App me se kuch logo ko lag raha hoga ke maine bahut jaldi story complete ki hai aur mujhe ek ek updates post karna chahiye tha and all par baat aisi hai ke mai ja raha hu ghumne, aur uske baad job me I will be super busy aur waise bhi main beech me do bade break le chuka hu jab maine koi update nahi diya tha to ab mai aisa nahi karna chahta tha, so thats it, ab kuch din aaram karenge kyuki ab waqt hai KF ki un khas kahaniyo ko padhne ka jo kafi samay se meri reading list me hai to milte hai aap sabhi se un kahaniyo par reviews ke sath,
aur aap sab se yahi mulakat hogi ek nahi kahani ke sath jald hi
tab tak ke liye

Adirshi
(aur ha reviews rukne nahi chahiye )

Ek aur jabardast kahani likhne ke liye aapka bahot bahot shukriya Adirshi bhaiii.

Umeed hai aap aise hi aur story likhenge. Aur usse humlogo ke saamne pesh karenge.

 

[kingkhankar]

Best Ending for any of the stories in this forum......
Last twist to mast nikla.

This story highlights that
Friendship is above Everything
or as some people say
Friendship is Everything

Romance ke upar freindship bhari hogaya.

Ek dosti Krishna Sudama ka aur ek dosti Avi and Aniket ka.....

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Aur yaha isi ke sath ek aur kahani ka samapan hote huye, aap sabhi logo ka bahut bahut dhanyawad jinhone apni uttar pratrikriyao se mujhe is kahani ko likhne me sahyog kiya... aapke support ke bagair mai ye nahi likh pata
Naina Jaguaar Babybulbul Sauravb Naik kingkhankar DARK WOLFKING SANJU ( V. R. ) Shanu Punnu ragish7357 Aryan s. Kala Nag Harry killer Dev the lover Guri006 Verma sahab Dhaal Urph Pradeep raman chopra Chinturocky Damha Lucky.. Sasha!
aur mere tamam reader dosto jinka naam mai yaha mention nahi kar paya par aapko tahe dil se dhanyawaad deta hu aur sath hi sabhi silent readers ka bhi shukriya jinhone kabhi comment nahi kiya lekin kahani padhte rahe aur ant me sabse bada thank you mashish bhai ko jinhone mujhe message kar karke story likhne ko kaha warna mai to agle saal hi story shuru karne wala tha.. D mashish bhai kuch technical difficulties ki wajah se kisi bhi story par comment nahi par ka rahe the par reactions ke madhyam se wo hamare sath bare rahe
aap sabhi ka bahut bahut aabhar

मैं हैरत में था कि महिश भाई का कमेन्टस क्यों नहीं आ रहा है । आशा करता हूं जल्दी ही उनके कहानियों पर रेभो देखने को मिलेंगे ।

वैसे आप ने बहुत जल्दी स्टोरी समाप्त कर दी । कुछ दिन और चलने चाहिए था ।

आज तो काम पर जा नहीं पाया पर शायद नेक्स्ट तीन दिन मुझे समय नहीं मिले कुछ भी पढ़ने को । बाद में रेभो जरूर दूंगा ।

 

[Naina]

Revo morning mein

 

[Shanu]

Very nice ending bhai

 

[Mit patel]

super story thi

 

[Naik]

Update 46​

Aur ab proposal ka khumar hata to sanjana hosh me aate huye boli

Sanjana- sharam nahi aati ? ek shadi shuda ladki ko shadi ke liye puch rahe ho

Avi- heein shadi shuda

Sanjana- ha, meri shadi ho chuki hai

Avi- aur ye kab hua ? aur mere ko nahi bulaya tumne shadi me

Sanjana- aaye to the tum choro jaise

Avi- sala mere ko kaise nai maul ye baat

Sanjana- dekho Mr. Avi meri shadi ho chuki hai aur wo bhi sakshat shri krishna ki sakshi me

Avi- aisa hai kya, to bolo bhi tumhare maa papa ko ke sasural bhej de tumko, aise shadi shuda ladkiyo ka jyada time mayke me rehna sahi baat nahi hai

Sanjana- fir uske liye tumhe pehle mujhe lene aana hoga na, permission leni padegi

Avi- meri biwi ko lane ke liye mujhe kisi ki permission thode hi chahiye, khair tum keh rahi ho to aata hu kal, company ke diye huye flat me tumhare hi hatho se rakhenge kalash

avi ki baat sunkar sanjana hasne lagi

sanjana- bas majak ho gaya ho to ab batao hum shadi kab karne wale hai ?

Avi- mai kal hi ghar par baat karta hu aur tumhare ghar aata hu, ab mujhe bhi nahi raha ja raha tumhare bagair, ye mahina kaise nikala hai bas mai hi janta hu3

Sanjana- ha jaise mai to yaha jhula jhul rahi thi na

Avi- to kal fix kare, mai maa aur anya ko leke aata hu

Aur fir avi ne sanjana ko uske ghar chhoda aur jaldi se apne ghar pahucha, itne dino baad maa bhi apne bete ko dekh ke khush ho gayi aur kuch idhar udhar ki baate karne ke baad avi ne jhat main mudde ko hath lagaya

Avi- maa ab apne ko meri company ke flat par shift hona hai

Shanta- ye to achi baat hai, par beta meri sari jindagi yaha isi ghar me biti hai, mera lagega waha ?

Avi- wo mai kaise bata sakta hu, bas itna hai ke ab tak bahut kaam kar liye tumne ab aaram karne ka time hai

Aur avi ke ye bolte hi uski maa samajh gayi ke isko kya bolne ka hai

Shanta- aaj tujhe achanak mere aaram ki chinta kaise hone lagi ? kya gadbad hai avya ?

Avi sharmanya

Avi- gadbad ? kaisi gadbad ?

Shanta- beta maine janam diya hai tujhe to mujhe mat sikha samjha aur baat kya hai sidhe sidhe bata

Fir avi jaise taise bola

Avi- wo tumhari bahu puch rahi thi ke usko lene kab aaunga to..

Shanta- acha aisa hai kya, mujhe laga hi tha, bol kab jana hai shadi ki baat karne

Avi- kal chale ?

Shanta- shabash, to sab pehle se hi thenra liya hai tune aur mujhe aise hi makkhan maar raha hai ? khair teri khushi me meri khushi hai, ab ja pehle ja ke aniket ko bata ye baat waise bhi uske bagair tera patta bhi nahi hilega, chalte hai kal

Avi ne khushi se maa ko gale lagaya aur sidha aniket ke ghar ki taraf bhaga

Is samay aniket ghar par hoga ye avi ko pata tha, wo uske ghar pahucha aur uske dekhte hi aniket uske paas aaya, ghar par narayanrao aur kaushalya bhi the, unkodekhte hi avi ne unke pair chuye, aur wo log apne room me chale gaye kyuki unko pata tha ye do dost kafi dino baad mile hai to dhingana to hoga hi

Unke jate hi aniket se apne pair aage kiye

Avi- arey hao bhai, tere pair to sabse pehle pakadne chahiye the, tu to mera ek importantkaam karne wala hai

Aniket- mai aur important kaam aaila meri bayi aankh fadak rahi hai re, o bhai tune koi naya lafda nahi kiya na ?

Avi- nahi re lafda wagaire kuch nahi bas ek chotasa kaam tha

Aniket chati ko hath lagate huye bola

Aniket- o bhai, tere chote kaam bahut danger hote hai, waise kaam kya hai wo bata

Avi- nahi kuch khas nahi tere ko bas mere sath ek jagah chalna hai

Avi ki baat sunkar aniket uske kandhe par hath marte huye bola

Aniket- bas itni si baat, arey dost ke liye to apan narak me bhi chale jaye, bol kaha jana hai

Avi- sanjana ke ghar meri shadi ki baat karne

Aur mano uske upar chipkali giri ho aise aniket chikha

Aniket- kyaaa ? shadi ki baat karne ? sanjana ke ghar ? aur mai ? nahi hoga

Avi use samjhate huye bola

Avi- bhai chal na yaar, tere bagair mera hai kaun

Aniket- kaun tu, mai nahi janta teko

Avi- acha beta dost ko bhul gaya, bas yahi hai teri dosti

Aniket avi ke pair pakadte huye bola

Aniket- o baba mai pair pakadta hu tere, mere ko mat maar re, mera record bahut kharab hai, yash ke time maine, uske sale, baap, maa, bodyguard sabka maar khaya aur mere time mere sasur ne pita tha, ye sab to theek tha be sanjana ka baap to policewala hai, wo pata nahi kaisa kaisa aur kaha kaha marega aur ab mera maar khane ka bilkul mood nahi hai, mere ko to tu maaf hi kar

Avi- ho gayi nautanki karke, tereko bataya tha na pichli baar unhone kya kaha tha to

Aniket- shadi ke liye ha kiya tha kya ?

Avi- nahi waisa nahi bola tha

Aniket- bas to fir baat cancel, policewale bahut bura maarte hai

Avi- yahi hai teri dosti hai na

Aniket- khadde me gayi be dosti, sala tum shadi karke maja karo aur maar mai khau, naat possible

Avi bhi jhuta natak karte huye gane laga

Avi- dost dost na raha, pyaar pyaar na raha

Aur aniket ne uske hath me rupaya rakhe jaisa kiya aur bola

Aniket- aage jao baba, sala nautanki, ek kaam karte hai mere bapu ko manate hai chalne ko fir koi tension nahi

Avi- ha ye idea sahi hai, waise bhi is kaam me bade hi sath chahiye aur kaka rahenge to sab sahi hoga

Fir aniket aur avi ne narayanrao aur kaushalya ko manaya aur unhone bhi unki baat maan li, agle din avi ki maa shanta, narayanrao aur kaushalya, avi aniket sab sanjana ke ghar pahuche, sanjana ke gharwalo ne bhi unka ache se swagat kiya aur sari baat chit khushi khushi sampann huyi aur is baar pehli baar aniket ke maar khaye bagair love story puri huyi thi aur akhir me fix huyi shadi ki tarikh

Avi ki maa ko chinta ho rahi thi ke ye sab kaise hoga aur unhone aniket se ye baat bhi ki

Aniket- arey kaki aap kyu tension le rahi hai mai hu na aur aapko pata nahi hai avi ke kitne dost hai, sab aayenge aur mai to hu hi sab dekhne ko, aap sab apne bete ki shadi enjoy karo aur sara tension mere pe chhod do

Yash aur aniket dono kaam pe lag gaye the aur ghar ke samne ke patangan me bada sa mandap bandha gaya jiske dekh ke avi ki maa ne pucha

Shanta- arey itna bada mandap kyu ?

Aniket- arey kaki ye bhi chhota padega itne log aayenge, aap dekho bas aur sara kaam mere jimme chhod do

Yash bhi chinta me tha

Yash- anya, tere dimag me kya hai be, itna sab karne se to shahar me ek marriage hall book kar lete na

Aniket- usme kya maja hai bhai, sara kaam mojke karna padta hai, yaha sara gaon apna hai jo karna hai bindass karna hai, tu dekh bas

Yash- arey par hum dono kya kya karenge

Aniket- tu avi koache se janta nahi bhai, bahut chahne wale hai uske

Itne me waha ek bus aake ruki aur usme se avi ke sare dost utarne lage aur dekhte hi dekhte sabne apne apne kaam bant liye the, aniket has raha tha aur yash samajh gaya tha ke aniket ne hi ye sari gang jama ki hai aur ab yash sure tha ke sare kaam jaldi jaldi ho jayenge

Udhar sanjana ke ghar me bhi shadi ki gadbad chal rahi thi uski sari sehaliya rishte daar sab pahuch gaye the aur sanjana ki dost uske mehndi aur haldi ke karyakran me busy ho gayi thim sanjana ko mehndi lag rahi thi, har taraf bas awaj hiawaj tha, koi beech me hi sanjana ko avi ka naam leke chhed deta, sab ne milke sanjana ko haldi lagayi jisse uska roop aur nikhar aaya tha

Udhar avi ko bhi haldi lagane ka karyakran shuru hua, priya aur komal ne to avi ko haldi me nehla diya tha aur isme priya ko najane kya sujha usne komal ko bhi haldi me rang diya, wahi yash aur aniket kuch kaam se waha se ja rahe the to komal aur priya ne unpar bhi hamla kar diya, yash to pakad me aa gaya par aniket bhagne laga to komal naraj ho gayi

Komal- ani jara si haldi se kya ho jayega, avi tum samjhao apne dost ko

Avi- usko aise thode hi haldi lagani hai

Itna bol ke avi ne apne dono hath failaye aur bola

Avi-anya bhai ko congrats nahi karega kya ?

Aniket- sala nautanki

Itna bol ke aniket ne avi ko gale laga liya, sham ko sangeet ka karyakran shuru hua aur ab bari thianiket bhi usne kisi ko nahi chhoda jise nachaya na ho, raat bhar bas dhamal hota raha

Agle din ki avi aturta se raah dekh raha tha, aur sanjana aur sab log waha aa gaye the, sanjana ke waha aate hi sab uske paas jama ho gaye, sanjana ne ek pile rang ki saree pehni thi aur sar par pallu liya hua tha, avi balcony me khade hokar sanjana ko dekh raha tha aur sanjana ki naja bhi avi ko dhundh rahi thi aur ye baat aniket ke dhyan me aa gayi wo avi ke sath balcony me khada tha aur usne waha se jordar siti bajayi, sanjana ne chauk ke upar dekha to dono ki najre mili, un najro me kitni aturta kitni tadap thi ye wo dono hi jante the, avi ne ek baar apni palke jhapkayi namo najrose keh raha ho bas thoda samay aur fir to hamesha ke liye ek hona hai… us pile saree me sanjana bahut khubsurat dikh rahi thi apni ne apna ek hah apne dil par rakha mano meh raha ho haayy ! kitni sunder dikh rahi hai meri dilruba, dono me smile kiya aur aage ki tayari me lag gaye..

Sare dosto ne mil ke avi ko tayar kiya, cream color ki sherwani aur cherry red color ki dhoti, sar par jari ka pheta, maa ne ek motiyo ki mala uske gale me pehnayi.. dulhe ke gateup me avi bahut badhiya lag raha tha..

Barat nikli, aniket ki beti annanya avi ke sath ghodi par bithi thi, kareeb kareeb gaya gaon aur aur mere sare XF wale bhi maujud the barat me, aniket to bhoot ker jaisa nach raha tha ghodi ke aage aur uske sath me yash priya komal aur yash ka peta prish bhi tha, itne me docter sunam aur docter siddharth bhi pahuch gaye aur unke sath nachne me shamil ho gaye.. narayanrao bechare inko sambhalte huye pareshan huye ja rahe the.. waise to m,andap tak ka rasta chota tha par waha pahuchne me inko do ghante lag gaye the aur akhir me aniket ne avi ko bhi nachaya..

Avi mandap me ab pandit ke paas baith kar shadi ki vidhi puri kar raha tha par uska pura dhyan entry par laga hua tha jaha se sanjana aane wali thi, ek ek pal use yugo jaisa lag raha tha aur aakhir me wo pal aaya, sanjana use aate huye dikhayi hi..avi ka dil mano dhadakna bhul gaya ho.. uske liye sari duniya ruk gayi thi, aaju baju ka sara awaj shant ho gaya tha, waha bahut se log the lekin avi ko bas sanjana dikh rahi thi..

Sanjana ne ek kashta padar ka pile rang ka shalu pehna hua tha.. aur jamuni rang ki kinar jispar jari ka wark tha.. pairo me najuk payal thi jiski madhur jhankar idhar avi ke man me uth rahi thi.. hatho me chudiya.. kamar par kamarpatta… hath par kohni tak nikali huyi mehndi j gore hatho par khul kar dikh rahi thi, gale me chandrahaar.., balo ka juda bana hua tha jisme mogre ke phulo ki veni lagi huyi thi, dando par bajubandh mohak dikh raha tha.. kano me jhumke aur naak me motiyo ki nath… halkasa makeup aur hotho par laal lipstick, aisa lag raha tha wo hoth na hokar gulab ki pankhudiya ho, chlte huye nath halke se hotho ko touch ho rahi thi.. avi paglo jaisa us sunderta ko nihar raha tha use to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ke ye sunderta ki murat kuch samay baad hamesha ke liye uski hone wali hai.. sanjana dheere dheere chalte huye uske paas aayi, avi sudh budh kho kar use dekh raha tha

Itne me aniket se use kohni mari aur bola

Aniket- malum hai teri hai aise kya dekh raha be..

Aniket ki baat sunkar avi hosh me aaya aur sanjana sharmayi aur wo pal aaya jiski dono chatak ke jaise raah dekh rahe the, saptapadi ke samay jab avi ne sanjana ka sath pakda to wo feeling hi alag thi, sab kisi sapne jaisa lag raha tha, mangalashtak huye dono ne ekdusre ko haar pehnaya.. aur isi ke sath dono hamesha hamesha ke liye ekdusre ke ho gaye…

Ho gayi avi ki shadi.. yash aur aniket ek jagah thak ke baithe the aur yash bhavuk ho gaya tha

Yash- anya aaj bahut bada kaam kar diya tune, avi ko settle kara diya

Aniket- wo to karna hi tha bhai

Yash- tere jaisa dost milna avi ke bhi bhagya hai, bachpan se use sambhala hai, gayab hua to dhundha hai, mere piche hath dho ke pada tha uski naukri ke liye aur ab shadi..

Aniket ne yash ko gaur se dekha aur gambhir awaj me bola

Aniket- ye tu bol raha hai yash ? ulta avi jaisa dost mujhe mila hai ye to mera bhagya hai aur ye baat tujhse achi tarah aur kaun janta hoga

Yash ghabraya aur kuch nahi bola, aniket hasa aur aage bola

Aniket- avi ne jo mere liye kiya hai uski to mai bharpayi bhi nahi kar sakta

Kuch bolne ke liye yash bola

Yash- tumhari baate tum dost jano..

Aniket- pata to tujhe bhi hai bas tu bola nahi kabhi aur mai tujhe uska dosh bhi nahi dunga..

An yash ke kaan khade ho gaye

Yash- tu kya bol raha hai ani sara samjhe aisa bol

Aniket ne ek lambi saas chhodi aur bola

Aniket- avi ka pehla pyaar komal hai na ?

Yash par to mano bijli giri ho, wo aniket se najar nahi mila pa raha tha fir bhi jaise taise bola

Yash- tu kuch bhi bol raha hai anya

Aniket- mujhe pata hai re, bahut si baate hai aisi, uske hath par ka AK ka tatoo, jab jab pyaar ki baat aayi avi ka hath us tatoo par jata hai.. is patthe ko dairy likhne ki adat thi, jab ye gayab hua aur mai iske ghar gaya na to mujhe iski ek dairy mili, uske baad maine mere shadi ki CD dekhi avi phero ke pehle tak tha fir gayab ho gaya tha, wo aansu bhari aanko se bas komal ko dekh raha tha, teri aur uski tekdi par ki mulakat usne dairy me likhi hai, usne dosti ke liye pyaar kurban kiya hai bhai uske aage maine jo kiya wo to kam hi hai..

Yash ko kya bole samajh nahi aa raha tha par ek sawal uske man me uth raha tha aur usne pucha

Yash- tujhe ye sab pata hai ye avi janta hai ?

Aniket hasa aur bola

Aniket- pagal hai kya ? use ye pata chala to mai janta hu fir hamare beech faltu me duriya aayengi, aaj use lagta hai ke mai kuch nahi jaanta isiliye wo bindass mere pas aata hai mere se freely baat karta hai ghar par aata hai, yahi agar use pata chala ke mai ye baat janta hu to wo utna freely mere se komal se baat nahi kar payega, mil nahi payega, jo hona tha ho gaya use hum nahi badal sakte, aaj avi ki life ki ek nayi shuruwat hai, aur mai janta hu ke tu agar dost ke liye bhai se ye baat chupa sakta hai to usi dost ke liye ye baat bhi kabhi apne hothopar nahi layega

Yash ki aankho me pani tha, usne aniket ko kas ke gale laga liya

Yash- tum dono dhanya ho ulta mai to aisa bolunga ke mai naseeb wala hu jo mujhe aisa dost aur bhai mile….



Samapt.

Bahut Bahut Dhanyawaad !
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