Romance Uff! Ye Mohabbat ! (completed)

[Adirshi]

Superb Updatee

Yeh toh hai aaj kal naukri milna bahot bahot mushkil hai. Upar se fresher ko toh aise dekhte hai jaise woh koi mujrim hai.

Finally Avi ko naukri mil gayi. Dekhte hai yeh Naukri ki duniya Avi aur Sanjana ke jeevan mein kyaa rang bharti hai.

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[Adirshi]

Superb Updatee

Yeh baat toh hai lambe se lamba time kab guzar jaata hai pata nhi chalta par yeh akhri ke kuch ghante guzaarne mein aisa lagta hai jaise sadiya beet rahi hai.

Toh apni tekdi pe hi Avi ne Sanjana ko Shaadi ke liye propose kiyaa. Gajabbb

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[Adirshi]

Awesome Updateee

Toh aakhir Avi aur Sanjana ki shaadi ho hi gayi aur saath mein iss prem kahani ka bhi anth hua. Par anth hone ke pehle Aniket ne ek dhamaka kar diya ke usko pata tha Avi Komal se pyaar karta hai.

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[Adirshi]

Ek aur jabardast kahani likhne ke liye aapka bahot bahot shukriya Adirshi bhaiii.

Umeed hai aap aise hi aur story likhenge. Aur usse humlogo ke saamne pesh karenge.

Bahut jald bhai nayikahani ke kaam chalu hai

 

[Adirshi]

Best Ending for any of the stories in this forum......
Last twist to mast nikla.

This story highlights that
Friendship is above Everything
or as some people say
Friendship is Everything

Romance ke upar freindship bhari hogaya.

Ek dosti Krishna Sudama ka aur ek dosti Avi and Aniket ka.....

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[Adirshi]

Very nice ending bhai

bahut bahut shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

super story thi

bahut bahut shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

Behad shaandaar story ka lajawab samapti
Sab kuch tha is kahani dukh dard payar mahobbat dosti yaari
Aisi bahot kam padhne ko milti h
Bahot bahot shukriya (ADIRISHI) itni khoobsurat kahani k liye
Or intizar rehega aapki nayi kahani k a

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[Adirshi]

Insaan jeevan kaal mein kayi mahatvapoorn rishte judte dusre logo se...
kisi insaan ke jeevan mein dosti sabase mulyavaan rishta hai. agar jindagi mein dost ki kami hai, to samajh lijiye ye jivan hi santusht purn nahi hai. Bilkul fiki si ho jaye ye jindagi... har kisi ko bure ya achchhe jeevan ki ghatanaon ko saajha karane, sukhad palo ka aanand lene aur jeevan ki Memorable ghatanaon ko saajha karane ke liye ek achhe aur sachhe dost ki aavashyakata hoti hai.

Sachha dost woh hai, jise koi bhi hamesha ke liye dil ki gehrayi se pasand kar sakate hai, bharosa kar sakte hai. Dost wo jo koi nahi kar sakta ,wo ek dost kar dikhata hai.....
ghum ka mahol, koi dukh ho ya tragedy... in sab paristithiyo se bahar nikalne mein kisi apne se zyada ek dost zyada kargar sabit hota hai.... to kabhi prerna banke hume apni jindagi mein har muskil ko paar kar aage badhne ko encourage karta hai......

" koi na hai sath tera... door hai manjil.... par ye fikar kyun, jab ye dost sath hai tere..."
Jaise aniket aur yash hai avi ke liye......
uska hath thamne ke liye, is muskil ghadi mein sath dene ke liye...
ek sikh bhi de diya un dono ne ushe ki muskil se koi cheej mile to uski ahmiyat zyada hoti hai... insaan kadar zyada katne lag jaata hai....
aur main bhi is baat se sure hun ki ab avi Training mein focus ke sath sath job mein hi zyada ekagrata ke sath mehnat karega ......

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Khair..... kaafi dilchasp aur emotions bharpur update tha
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills Adirshi

As kingkhankar said
Friendship above everything
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bahut dino baad Reps added dikha hai

 

[Adirshi]

Kayinmod aane ke baad... kuch khatti mithi nok jhok , mazak ke baad finally avi aur sanjana ki shaadi ho gayi....
ab bas suruaat karni hai to ek nayi khushnuma jindagi ki...
shaanadar kahani shaanadar lekhni shaanadar shabdon ka chayan....har shabd ek alag kahani bayaan kar raha tha mujhe har update padhte waqt.. aisa lage jaise likhe gaye har shabd jeevit ho uthe aur mujhe is kahani mein ghatit drishya dikha rahe hai....ek kahani ke pramukh kirdaar wo hote hai joh khud se pehle dusro ke bade mein soche . aur writer sahab ki kahaniyo ke lead characters sach mein ek nayak ya nayika ki soch rakhte hai.. Jaise aniket aur yash ya phir komal ..
Ek tarah dekha jaaye to avi aur sanjana ek karne in teeno ka yogdaan bahot aham hai...avi aur sanjana ke sapno ke duniya se andhkaar ko door karne wale roushni bhi ye teeno hi hai , jinka daaman pakad kar dono aaj ek ho paye hai..

aniket ar yash ke bagair avi ye safar nahi tay kar pata .

chaahe kahani ho ya vastavik jivan mein sachi dosti sachmein anmol hoti hai. Ye baat har baar sabit kiya in teeno ne.... Specially aniket ne....
Aniket ke sath sath yash ne bhi jis tarah ko sambhaala har waqt avi ko , har bure ho ya achhe doud mein...aur sath hi dosti ko ek salam...

mere hisab se saccha dost kisi tohfe se kam nahi hai

aur sabse aham baat ye ki insabhi pehlu ko itne kam shabdon mein jaise pesh ki hai.. is mamle mein ye kahani sarvashresth hai...

. Romance ho ya friendship ....kahani ye mann ko tarotaaja hone ka ahasaas dilata hai aur sath hi kayi sikh bhi de gaye.. (Aniket ke jariye)
ek reader ke liye sab se badi khushi ki baat yahin hoti hai ki aise kahani padhne ko mile .. bahut bahut dhanyavaad aapko jo itna achha sundar aur dilchasp baaton se bharpur kahani ko ham sab pathakon ke madhya rakhe... mein is kahani ko 5 mein se 5 ank deti hoon..(aniket , komal aur yash ke best positive performances ke liye)

Also.. Adirshi has done remarkable job in building the character of aniket . Mere favorite characters ki list ek aur kirdaar add ho Chuka hai aur wo koi aur nahi balki ye lead kirdaar aniket hai... meri nazar mein hamesha ye kirdaar aniket ek sammanit kirdaar ke roop mein rahenge. ..

The end of the story delivers a big social message . A big for that....
ki aniket ,komal aur yash dost ho to samajh jaao ki tum luckiest person ho..

well aniket mere one of the best characters me se ek hai, after him there is Omkar

Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills



meri nazar mein is kahani mein as a lead character aniket hi hai.... wo jaanta tha ki avi ke pehle pyar ke bare mein... Phir bhi chup raha..Kahi isske chalte avi ko thes na pahunche ya sharminda na hona pare.....apne dost ke dil ki baat bina bole jo samajh jaaye usse behtar sachha dost shayad hi koi aur ho...

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