Romance Uff! Ye Mohabbat ! (completed)

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Update 43​

Sanjana ke papa bole

Sangram- mai tumhe barbad kar dunga

Avi- mujhe manjur hai sir

Avi apni baat se hatne ko tayar nahi tha wo ada Hua tha

Sangram- tumhe to manjur hai par kabhi apni maa ke bare me socha hai ? Uska kya hoga tumhare baad ?

Is sawal ka jawab avi ke paas nahi tha, wo thoda vichalit hua aur sanjana me papa use uksate huye bole

Sangram- kyu? Kya hua ab ? Sara pyaar rafuchakker ho gaya ?

Avi- nahi sir, mai to ye soch raha hu ke mere sath kuch bura hone ke baad sanjana ki jo halat hogi use dekh ke aap apne aap se najre mila paoge kya ?

Ab sangram patil khawal gaye

Sangram- tu mere hi ghar me baith kar mujhe hi dhamki de raha hai ? Sanjana ka acha bura jo bhi hoga wo dekhne ko mai samarth hu

Avi- dhamki nahi de raha hu sir bas request kar raha hu, uska acha bura mat karo, karna hai to bas acha hi karo

Avi ne sangram patil ko shabdo me pakad liya tha fkr bhi wo bole

Sangram- aur tumhari maa ka kya ?

Avi- mere pitaji jab hame chhod kar gaye tab mai bahut chhota tha, fir bhi usne himmat nahi hari aur mujhe paal pos ke bada kiya, wo akeli jab mujhe sambhal sakti hai to apne aap ko bhi sambhal sakti hai, aur mai to hu hi, kyuki aap mujhe barbad jarur karoge par jaan se nahi maroge, par itna mai jarur kehta hu ke isse bhi mera sanjana par ka pyaar kam nahi hoga

Ab sangram patil thoda shant huye, avi ke u ke sare waar ache se jhele the, ab kuch bhi hua to wo ek beti ke baap the, ha wo ab avi aur sanjana ke pyaar ko samajh rahe the lekin unka chinta karna swabhavik tha, kuch samay shanti me beeta aur fir wo bole

Sangram- sirf pyaar se pet nahi bharta

Avi- barabar hai aapki baat sir

Sangram- to aage kya karna hai ?

Avi- sabse pehle mujhe mere pairo par khada hona hai, aur mujhe yakin hai ke aap mujhe utna waqt denge

Sangram- aur agar waisa nahi hua to ?

Avi- Mushkil hai par namumkin nahi hai

Fir sangram patil apni jagah par se uthe aur avi ke paas aaye, sanjana ke dil ki dhadkane badh gayi thi, avi bhi apni jagah par uth kar khada hua, unhone avi ke kandhe par hath rakha aur bole

Sangram- sanjana ne kya galti ko hai wo to tumne bataya hi nahi

Avi- usne kuch nahi kiya sir, mai apni marji se ghumne gaya tha

Wo hase aur bole

Sangram- bahut jiddi ho tum, college me bhi tumne nahi bataya tha ke sanjana ki galti kya thi aur aaj bhi nahi bata rahe, par ek baat batao, tumhe darr nahi laga ?

Avi- laga tha thoda sa, par fir socha ke aapko mere sath kuch galat karna hota to aap mujhe police station me bulate apne ghar par nahi

Aur isi ke sath avi ne kadmo ka istamal karte huye behtarin six jad diya tha, sangram patil hase aur bole

Sangram- aur agar police station me bulata to ?

Avi- to bhi mere jawab yahi hote.

Unhone avi ke galo par halki chapat lagate huye kaha

Sangram- all the best my boy

Avi bhi khush ho gaya aur usne jhuk kar unke pair chuye aur bola

Avi- bachpan se hamesha ek pita ki kami kayam thi, aaj wo puri ho gayi sir

Sangram- sir nahi papa

Sanjana bhi ye sun ke daud ke aayi aur apne papa ke gale lag gayi, use bahut kuch bolna tha par gala bhar aaya tha, aaj fir se ek baar ek police officer par ek baap bhari pada tha, avi jab jane laga to sanjana use chhodne bahar tak aayi

Uske maa baap bate karte huye baithe aur uski maa boli

Shakuntala- kya aap bhi ? Aapka ye interrogation se jaan jayegi kisi ki

Sangram- arey beti ka baap hu mai, bahut jatan se pala hai apni bacchi ko aise hi kisi ko bhi de dunga kya ? Beti ek baar ko bhavnao ke aaveg me galat kadam utha sakti hai par hame to vivek buddhi se sochna padega na ?

Shakuntala- sach keh rahe hai aap, par wo kaun hai kya hai ye to jaan lete pehle

Sangram- to hum kya police me jhak marne ko bharti huye hai kya

Shakuntala- matlab ?

Sangram- Matlab jab he ladka missing hai ye pata chala aur sanjana use dhundhne gayi tabhi mai sab samajh gaya tha, aapne to industrial visit ka bahana bana diya par bhul gayi ke aapke patidev police me hai, ye log yaha se nikle tabhi do police wale sadhe kapdo me inke piche laga diye the maine jo pal pal ki khabar mujhe de rahe the, billi aankh band karke dudh piti hai to use lagta hai koi dekh nahi raha aur tuk maa beti ke sath yahi hua, maine pehle ki ladke ki sari info nikal li hai, ladke ko baap nahi hai, akele maa hai, chota sa ghar hai, do bhainse aur thodi jamin hai, sar par Narayanrao jaise sammanit insan ka hath hai, ladka masti khor hai par ladkiyo ke mamle se ekdum clear hai, ache character wala hai, rishto ki kadar janta hai isiliye to aniket rane aur diamond king parekh ka damad yash iske ache dost hai aur sabse achi baat mujhe ye lagi ke har baar sanjana ko sambhal leta hai, uski galtiyo ko kabhi samne nahi aane deta, maine gusse se dhamka ke pyaar se bhi puch liya par pattha ek baar bhi nahi bola me sanjana kahi galat thi, pyaar karta hai hamari beti se par sath bhi apni jimmedari bhi samajhta hai, dimag se chalak hai, use pata tha ke mai uski pariksha ke raha hu, uski maa ki baat karke use bhadkane ki bhi koshish ki par usne sanyam nahi dhalne diya, kab kaha kya bolna hai iski bhi samajh hai use, koi aur hota to sidha shadi ki baat karta par isne pehle apne pairo par khada hone ki baat ki aur fir shadi aisa indirectly bola, sanjana ke liye yahi sahi ladka hai par ye baat use saaf saaf nahi bolni hai warna uska dhyan baki bato se hat jana hai

Wo aage kuch bolte isse pehle hi sanjana uske paas aayi aur baith gayi

Sanjana- Thank you papa, you are world's best papa

Sangram- ha ha theek hai par is galatfehmi me mat rehna ke mai maan gaya hu, sabse pehle use apne aap ko prove karna hoga aur tumhe bhi, fir aage ka dekhenge, abhi to delhi bahut door hai, ab bahut huyi ue baate ab jara college ki taraf dhyan ko, agar fail huye to bhul jana fir sab kuch aur sirf pass nahi hona hai balki tumhe bhi apne pairo par khada hona hai tumhe timepass ke liye nahi padhaya hai ye dhyan me rakhna

Sanjana- don't worry papa, aapne humpar viswas jataya hai to hum bhi use galat sabit nahi hone denge

Sangram- that's like my girl, aur ja ab jara apne gusse par control karna sikho, ye mat socho ke papa ko kuch pata nahi hai.

Sanjana- ok papa

Idhar waha se bahar aake avi ne sabse pehle aniket ko call kiya aur use aari baat batayi aur

aniket bhi khush ho gaya..

Aaj avi ko bahut bada yuddh jitne wali feeling aa rahi thi aur isi feeling ke sath jimmedari ka aabhas bhi ho raha tha, ab jald se jald use apni padhayi khatam karke apne pairo par khada hona tha, sanjana ka bhi wahi scene tha, avi ka ek saal ka collage aur bacha tha par sanjana ka ye last year tha, ab use mehnat karke exam paas karni thi aur apne pairo kar khada hona tha, uske papa ne jo uspar viswas jataya tha use sahi sabit karna tha.........

Ab toh susra bhi maan gaya hai...

Padhayi finish hote hi, pehle naukri aur fir chhokri !!

 

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Update 44​

Avi aur sanjana ko mehnat karke apne exams paas karne the aur apne pairo par khada hona tha aur sanjana ke papa ne jo unpar viswas jataya tha use sahi sabit karna tha

Dono me bahut jyada changes huye the pyaar to din ba din badh raha tha par uske sath sath dono ko jimmedari ka bhi ehsas tha aur fir aaya exams ka daur, dono ne apna pura dhyan exams par lagaya aur paas huye, sanjana ka education complete ho gaya tha par avi ka abhi ek saal bacha tha, sanjana to padhne me pehle se hoshiyar thi to use jyada dikkat nahi aayi

Ab sanjana ne college ki sunder duniya se nikal kar asal duniya me kadam rakha tha aur ab shuru huyi khoj naukri ki, sangram patil ko pehchan ke chalte sanjana ko jald hi job mil gayi aur dekhte hi dekhte ek saal beet gaya, ab avi ka bhi education complete ho chuka tha
Par kehte hai na, college ki life jitni khubsurat hoti hai utni hi college ke bahar ki duniya mushkil, avi ji jaan laga ke naukri dhundhne me laga hua tha par naukri milna itna aasan nahi tha.. aur dekhte hi dekhte chhe mahine aur gujar gaye, jaise jaise din beet rahe the avi ka tension badh raha tha, sanjana use samjha rahi thi ke aab theek hoga

Aniket ye sab dekh raha tha.. par for bhi wo shant tha aur ek din aniket avi ke ghar aaya aur use uthaya

Aniket- chal yaar bahut din ho gaye apni dhang se baat huye aur tekdi ke darshan huye

Dono apna stock leke tekdi par apni pasand ki jagah jakar baithe, avi shant tha aur aniket ne bolna suru kiya

Aniket- bol bhai Avinash Kanitkar, aaj bahut chup hai tu muh me dahi jamane ka karkhana khola kya

Avi- waisa nahi hai be anya, aajkal ke market ki halat dekhi hai na, jaan leva compitition hai bhai, sala ek chaprasi ke naukri ke liye bhi hajaro log apply karte hai, air hamare jaise fresher ko to koi khada bhi nahi karta bolne ko to sanjana ke papa ko mai bol aaya tha par ye itna bhi easy nahi hai bhai..

Aniket- shabash, chhe mahine me hi fat gayi teri ? Chinta mat kar sab theek hoga ab bata shadi me bare me kya socha hai ?

Avi- anya chadh gayi kya teko ? Mai yaha naukri ki baat kar raha aur tereko shadi sukh rahi ?

Aniket use aage samjhata ya batata itne me piche se awaj aaya

"Salo haramkhoro, hamesha mere ko jalti deke yaha aake party karte ho"

Piche yash haste huye khada tha

Avi- aaila yash tu idhar kaise ?

Yash- mai to idhar beer ko sunghte huye aa gaya mere ko malum tha ke tum yahi miloge, hamesha mere bagair party karte ho

Yash ne bhi unko join kiya aur bola

Yash- fir avi seth shadi kab kar raha ?

Avi- sala yaha sar pe baal nahi bach rahe aur ye maharaj puch rahe ke gajra loge kya

Yash- anya isko kya hua be

Aniket- devdas aaj pankaj udas hai, gum me hai apna majnu

Yash- kya hua be ? Aur hamare hote huye tu kyu udas hai ?

Avi ne bhi udas tone me jawab diya

Avi- wahi be naukari ka scene, naukri nahi to chokri bhi nahi

Yash- aisa hai kya, par beta iske liye tu khud jimmedar hai, sale post graduate ho gaya aur humko sadhi party bhi nahi di tune, bas bhi karmo ka phal hai ke ye tere

Aniket- ishq ne nakara bana diya ghalib warna aadmi tu bhi kaam ka tha

Aniket bhi yash ke sath mil ke avi ki maja lene laga

Yash- waah ustad kya sher mara hai

Aur avi chidhte huye bola

Avi- kamino le lo jitni maja leni hai..

Yash- ha to wo to hum lenge hi, aur agar teko aisa lagta hai ke hum maja na le to hamari baat maan

Avi- kya nalayak log ho be tum, yaha meri fati padi hai aur tumko maja sujh raha

Yash- to party de

Avi- ha bhi le liyo party bol kab chahiye teko party

Yash- yahi aaj ki party teri taraf se

Avi- nahi aaj nahi fir kabhi

Par aaj yash full from me tha aur avi ko aise nahi chhodne wala tha

Yash- fir kab dega ?

Avi- ye sunday ko karo done

Yash- na, tu Sunday ko party nahi dega pata hai mujhe

Avi- abe de dunga bhai

Yash- aur sunday ko tu yaha nahi raha to

Ab avi chidhne laga tha

Avi- yaha nahi rahunga to kaha jaunga

Yash- to surat ko tera baap jayega kya ?

Avi ko kuch samajh nahi aaya

Avi- mai surat ko kyu jaunga, aur waha jake karna kya hai ?

Yash- to training ke liye aapke pitaji ko bheju kya swarg lok se..

Avi- yash sidha sidha bol na bhai

Yash- abe gadhe mere sasur ke company me sales manager ki post khali hai, tu jane wala hoga to bata ?

Yash ki baat sun ke avi chauka aur uske kandhe ko pakad ke bola

Avi- jaunga bole to ? Abe pakka jaunga , yash mere liye baat kar na bhai..

Yash bhi nakhre karte huye bola

Yash- kar lunga baat par pehle do beer lagenge..

Avi- diye, do beer kya akkha beer me mehla dunga teko

Yash- theek hai fir

Avi ekdum edited hokar bola

Avi- kab karega baat

Yash ne fir apni jeb se ek letter nikala aur avi ke hath me rakhte huye bola

Yash- ye le joining letter, Friday ko surat me jake mar udhar training hai ek mahine ka

Avi ne jhat se wo letter khola to wo such me joining letter tha aur usme payment aur company ki taraf se ek flat ke bare me bataya gaya tha, avi ko to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha, uski aankhe bhar aayi thi usne yash ko gale laga liya

Avi- bhai yash tera ye upkar mai ni dagi bhar nahi bhulunga

Yash- oye hudd, upkar wagaire nahi hai ye teko naukri ki jarurat thi aur unko bharose ke aadmi ki bas baat khatam

Avi ne letter aniket ko dikhaya aur uske gale laga aur fir yash bola

Yash- ho gaya ? Sab khush hi gaye ? Ab nachne ka karyakram shuru kiya jaye

(Yede log bc bagair music ke hi nachne lagte hai )

Aur fir jab wo nach ke thak gaye to niche baith gaye aur avi bola

Avi- mai aaya jara ek minute me

Aniket- ha ha ja hamari bhabhi ko bhi de de khushkhabri

Avi ne sanjana ko call kiya, pehle to wo itni raat me avi ka call dekh ke chauki par fir jab avi ne use sari baat batayi to wo bhi khush ho gayi aur fir avi call karke apne dosto ke paas aaya

Avi- anya haramjade halkat tere ko ye sab pehle se malum tha na

Aniket kuch nahi bola bas apni battisi faad smile de di aur yash bola

Yash- waise to tu college se pass out hote hi ye offer dene wala tha tujhe par fir socha ke nahi pehle isko thoda dhakke khane do, aasani ne mili huyi naukri ki koi kimat nahi hoti, isiliye jaan ke tujhe chhe mahine latkaya, sorry..

Avi- abe sorry ki baat hi nahi hai yaha, mereko bhi to ye experience mila, waise sach batau to pata nahi gum log nahi hote to mera kya hota..

Yash- oye bas ho gaya ab Thank you puran.. aur ha mera sasur bahut danger aadmi hai, jitna paisa dega utna ragdega bhi, par mere ko yakin hai le tu sambhal lega, ab man laga ke training karne ka aur kaam pe lagne ka..

Aniket- aur training khatam hua ke fir bhai ki shadii.........

Naukri bhi Yash ke dwara lagwa di gayi hai...

Har step par dosto ki support hai...

 

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Update 45​

Yash ne avi ki naukri ka bandobast kar diya tha

Aur ab asal jindagi ki shuruwat ho chuki thi aur use sath tha pyaar ka.. aur lakshya samne ho to aadmi ki daudne se koi nahi rok sakta, avi ko bhi uska lakshya samne dikh raha tha, uske samne 3 uddeshya the, ek apne pairo par khada hona jiski shuruwat ho chuki thi dusra sanjana ke papa aniket aur yash ke uspar ke viswas ko sahi sabit karna aur teesra sanjana se shadi

Dekhte dekhte avi ki training ka ek mahina bhi nikal gaya aur ab bas ek din bacha tha uske lautne me aur bas ek din baad avi sanjana se milne wala tha, itne din to jaise taise nikal gaye the par ye aakhri ke 24 ghante bahut mushkil se beetne wale the, sanjana ka man adhir ho gaya tha wahi aasman se badal ghir aaye the aur barsat hone lagi thi, sanjana us din apne ghar par hi thi, usne badhiya coffee banayi aur cup lekar khidki ke paas aakar khadi ho gayi aur barish ko dekhne lagi

Hamesha barish ko dekh kar chidhne wali sanjana aaj shant thi, pata nahi kyu par aaj use ye pehli barish pasand aa rahi thi, pehle barish ki fuhar, wo mitti ki khushbu jiske samne to scent bhi fika pad jaye, wo khudke ke paas baith ke is khushbu ka anand le rahi thi.. wo soch rahi thi ke aajtak use kabhi barish itni pasand nahi aayi fir aaj kyu, aur agle hi pal uske dil ne use jawab de diya ke avi ko barish bahut pasand hai..
Barish me chalne wali to saaf aur thandi hawa sara vatavaran khushnuma bana rahi thi, beech me hi barish ki koi bauchar uske chehre par pani ke tushar uda deti aur sanjana usse khil uthti, use to aisa lag raha tha jaise avi pyaar se uspar pani fek raha hai, aur ye kalpana karte hi wo sharmayi aur uske galo par lali chha gayi, beech me hi hawa ka jhoka uske balo ki lat uda deta tha to use aisa lagta ke wo hawa na hokar mani avi ko jo uske balo se khel raha ho, use avi ki bahut yaad aa rahi thi

Man bechain ho gaya tha aur najar us barish me avi ko dhundh rahi thi, waise to dinbhar avi ka phone band hi rehta tha kyu jis factory me uska training chal raha tha waha phone allowed nahi tha aur ye pata hoke bhi sanjana se use call lagaya aur uska phone band aaya to wo phone ki taraf jhuthe gusse me dekh ke boli

Sanjana- bairi piya..

Use apne aap par hi hasi aane lagi.. aur wo khud se boli

Sanjana- ye chaubis ghante meri jaan le lenge, avi please jaldi aa jao ab duri sahi nahi jati, man tumse milne ko bechain hi raha hai aur be barish pagal bana rahi hai..

Use har jagah bas avi najar aa raha tha usne apni aankhe band ki aur apne dil ko samjhane lagi ke bas kuch ghante aur fir to avi aane hi wala hai

Fir sanjana ne aankhe kholi to barish me uske ghar ke bahar ek bike aakar khadi huyi aur us bike par baithe ladke ne sanjana ki taraf dekh kar apni dono bahe failayi, par helmet ki wajah se sanjana ko samjha nahi je wo kaun hai aur ye baat us ladke ke dhyan me aayi aur usne apna helmet utara, sanjana ko apni aankho par yakin nahi ho raha tha, wo avi tha, sanjana daud kar avi ke paas pahuchi aur bike par baithe avi ko gale laga liya

Virah, virah ke baad ki wo mulakat, wo lagav pyaar sab kuch tha us pal me , jo kuch bhi bolna tha wo dil ko dhadkan bol rahi thi, upar se megh baras rahe the aur niche ye premi pyaar me bheeg rahe the, hasi aansu sab tha us pal me, aaju baju ki building ke ladko ne ye scene se ke gaaliya seetiya baja dali aur chillane lage fir un dono ko hosh aaya, avi ne sanjana ko apne piche baithne kaha, sanjana ki maa khidki me se sab dekh rahi thi aur wo bhi muskura rahi thi, sanjana ne apni najro me jau kya aisa sawal liye apni maa ko dekha to unhone bhi gardan hila kar jane ki permission de di, sanjana ne ek flying kiss apni maa ko di aur jaldi se avi ke piche bike par baith gayi

Sanjana ne avi ki pith par halke se marte huye pucha
Sanjana- tum to kal aane wale the na ?

Avi gadi chalate huye haste huye bola

Avi- kal aata to jo maja abhi aaya hai wo kaise aata ? Socha chalo tumhe surprise de du, kaisa laga ?

Sanjana ne avi ko piche se gale lagaya aur boli

Sanjana- bahut bahut bahut pasand aaya, par hum ja kaha rahe hai itni barish me ?

Avi- just enjoy the ride, barish me ek mast long drive

Badhiya barish ho rahi thi, sanjana avi se chipki huyi thi Aur usne halke se apne hoth avi ki gardan par tika diye.. aur avi isse sihar utha.. usne gadi chalate huye hi sanjana ka ek hath jisse usne use gale lagaya tha wo pakda aur uski hatheli par apne hoth tika diye, kitna khubsurat pal tha wo, upar se barasta pani, thandi hawa aur ye dono pranay ka ufan uth raha tha, sanjana me apna wo hath avi ke hath se chhudaya aur jaha avi ne chuma tha wahi apne hoth tika diye aur fir se avi ko bilag gayi

Aaj un dono ko barish bahut bha rahi thi, unki gadi ab highway par daud rahi thi aur dono ko aaj apni khushi ke aage aasman chhota lag raha tha, sanjana ko to lag raha tha mano wo badlo me chal rahi ho, uski nachne ki icha ho rahi thi par chalti gadi me wo possible nahi tha wo chalti gadi par avi ke kandhe par hath rakh kar khadi huyi, avi has raha tha, sanjana ko lag raha tha ke mano wo koi panchi ho, wo aasman me udna chahti thi, fir usne aasman ki taraf dekhte huye apne dono hath failaye aur jor se chillaya

Sanjana- AVI... I LOVE YOU!!

Avi bhi helmet ka flap open karke jor se chillaya

Avi- I LOVE YOU TOO SANJU!!

Barish dono bhigaye ja rahi thi aur dono thoda aur aage gaye aur ab milan ki khumari kam hine lagi thi aur sanjana ko thand lagne lagi thi, bolte huye awaj tharthara raha tha, avi ne ek jagah gadi roki, highway par jhopdi numa shade me ek chota sa hotel bana hua tha aur waha ek vayask lady garam garam bhajiye tal rahi thi, dono jaldi se us shade me bhage aur waha rakhe bench par jakar baithe.. sanjana ke daat thand se katkata rahe the avi ne jhat apna jacket utar kar sanjana ko pehnaya aur hotel wale se ek towel lekar sanjana ka sir pochne laga , sanjana ab bhi thand se tharthara rahi thi, for avi ne ek chai li aur apne hath se sanjana ko chai pilane laga, us chai ki mithas sanjana sari jindagi nahi bhulne wali thi, avi ne sanjana ke chehre par aaye uske baal side hataye aur uski khubsurati ko niharne laga.. sanjana avi ki aankho me apne liye pyar saaf dekh rahi thi.. chai pine ke baad aur jacket pehenne se ab sanjana ko thoda acha laga aur ab wo theek hai aisa usne avi ko bataya aur fir barish me garma garam pakodo ko kaun gadha hai jo na bolega.. avi ne is hotel me se pakode liye aur sanjana se apne hath fold karke aisa bataya jaise use dobara thandi lag rahi ho, avi muskuraya, wo samajh gaya tha me sanjana kya kehna chah rahi hai , fir usne sanjana ko apne hath se pakode khilaye, us shade me aur bhi kuch log maujud the jo is prem kabutar ki jodi ko dekh ke muskura rahe the par unke kaha kisi se koi lena dena tha, un logo me ek couple bhi tha aur us lady ne jab avi sanjana ko apne hath se khila raha tha tab
Kohni maar ke aankho se ishara kiya aur boli, dekho ise kehte hai pyaar, aur wo bhi muskurane laga

Sanjana- to ab aage kya plan hai avinash rao

Avi- aage sabse pehle anya se milne jana hai aur uske baad sham ko tumhe ghar chhod dunga

Sanjana ne bhi ye baat phone karke apne ghar bata di

Barish ab kam ho chuki thi kar rim jhim shuru thi, dono wapis gaon aane ko nikle par avi ne gaon me na jate huye gadi dusri or mod di aur fir wo us jagah pahuche, sabse special jagah, avi ne gadi roki aur bola

Avi- tumhari icha thi na hamari tekdi dekhne ki, ye dekho...

Sanjana mantramugdh ho gayi thi, thoda uchayi par hone se aur abi abhi barish hone se uss aisa lag raha tha mano wo badlo ke beech hai.. har taraf kohra chaya hua tha aur upar aasman aur usme chaye huye megh us pal us kshan waha dharti ka swarg wali feeling aa rahi thi aur sanjana us vilobhaniya drishya ko apni aankho me kaid kar rahi thi itne me avi ne uska hath pakda

Sanjana ne mud ke dekha to avi apna ek ghutna niche tika ke baitha tha aur fir usne apni jeb se ek ring nikali aur sanjana ke samne karte huye bola

Avi- Sanju, will you marry me

Us tekdi ki khubsurti me khoyi sanjana ko jab ye sab hua to kuch samajh hi nahi aaya, uska gala bhar aaya aur wo jaise taise bas YES bol payi aur avi ne wo diamond ring sanjana ko ungli me pehna di

Sanjana ne jaldi se avi ko khada kiya aur use gale laga liya aur dono ekdusre ki bahi me sama gaye aur barish fir se shuru ho gayi.....

WoW...

Barish ke mausam me, Romantic Proposal aur wo bhi Tekdi pe !!

 

[vmvish]

Update 46​

Aur ab proposal ka khumar hata to sanjana hosh me aate huye boli

Sanjana- sharam nahi aati ? ek shadi shuda ladki ko shadi ke liye puch rahe ho

Avi- heein shadi shuda

Sanjana- ha, meri shadi ho chuki hai

Avi- aur ye kab hua ? aur mere ko nahi bulaya tumne shadi me

Sanjana- aaye to the tum choro jaise

Avi- sala mere ko kaise nai maul ye baat

Sanjana- dekho Mr. Avi meri shadi ho chuki hai aur wo bhi sakshat shri krishna ki sakshi me

Avi- aisa hai kya, to bolo bhi tumhare maa papa ko ke sasural bhej de tumko, aise shadi shuda ladkiyo ka jyada time mayke me rehna sahi baat nahi hai

Sanjana- fir uske liye tumhe pehle mujhe lene aana hoga na, permission leni padegi

Avi- meri biwi ko lane ke liye mujhe kisi ki permission thode hi chahiye, khair tum keh rahi ho to aata hu kal, company ke diye huye flat me tumhare hi hatho se rakhenge kalash

avi ki baat sunkar sanjana hasne lagi

sanjana- bas majak ho gaya ho to ab batao hum shadi kab karne wale hai ?

Avi- mai kal hi ghar par baat karta hu aur tumhare ghar aata hu, ab mujhe bhi nahi raha ja raha tumhare bagair, ye mahina kaise nikala hai bas mai hi janta hu3

Sanjana- ha jaise mai to yaha jhula jhul rahi thi na

Avi- to kal fix kare, mai maa aur anya ko leke aata hu

Aur fir avi ne sanjana ko uske ghar chhoda aur jaldi se apne ghar pahucha, itne dino baad maa bhi apne bete ko dekh ke khush ho gayi aur kuch idhar udhar ki baate karne ke baad avi ne jhat main mudde ko hath lagaya

Avi- maa ab apne ko meri company ke flat par shift hona hai

Shanta- ye to achi baat hai, par beta meri sari jindagi yaha isi ghar me biti hai, mera lagega waha ?

Avi- wo mai kaise bata sakta hu, bas itna hai ke ab tak bahut kaam kar liye tumne ab aaram karne ka time hai

Aur avi ke ye bolte hi uski maa samajh gayi ke isko kya bolne ka hai

Shanta- aaj tujhe achanak mere aaram ki chinta kaise hone lagi ? kya gadbad hai avya ?

Avi sharmanya

Avi- gadbad ? kaisi gadbad ?

Shanta- beta maine janam diya hai tujhe to mujhe mat sikha samjha aur baat kya hai sidhe sidhe bata

Fir avi jaise taise bola

Avi- wo tumhari bahu puch rahi thi ke usko lene kab aaunga to..

Shanta- acha aisa hai kya, mujhe laga hi tha, bol kab jana hai shadi ki baat karne

Avi- kal chale ?

Shanta- shabash, to sab pehle se hi thenra liya hai tune aur mujhe aise hi makkhan maar raha hai ? khair teri khushi me meri khushi hai, ab ja pehle ja ke aniket ko bata ye baat waise bhi uske bagair tera patta bhi nahi hilega, chalte hai kal

Avi ne khushi se maa ko gale lagaya aur sidha aniket ke ghar ki taraf bhaga

Is samay aniket ghar par hoga ye avi ko pata tha, wo uske ghar pahucha aur uske dekhte hi aniket uske paas aaya, ghar par narayanrao aur kaushalya bhi the, unkodekhte hi avi ne unke pair chuye, aur wo log apne room me chale gaye kyuki unko pata tha ye do dost kafi dino baad mile hai to dhingana to hoga hi

Unke jate hi aniket se apne pair aage kiye

Avi- arey hao bhai, tere pair to sabse pehle pakadne chahiye the, tu to mera ek importantkaam karne wala hai

Aniket- mai aur important kaam aaila meri bayi aankh fadak rahi hai re, o bhai tune koi naya lafda nahi kiya na ?

Avi- nahi re lafda wagaire kuch nahi bas ek chotasa kaam tha

Aniket chati ko hath lagate huye bola

Aniket- o bhai, tere chote kaam bahut danger hote hai, waise kaam kya hai wo bata

Avi- nahi kuch khas nahi tere ko bas mere sath ek jagah chalna hai

Avi ki baat sunkar aniket uske kandhe par hath marte huye bola

Aniket- bas itni si baat, arey dost ke liye to apan narak me bhi chale jaye, bol kaha jana hai

Avi- sanjana ke ghar meri shadi ki baat karne

Aur mano uske upar chipkali giri ho aise aniket chikha

Aniket- kyaaa ? shadi ki baat karne ? sanjana ke ghar ? aur mai ? nahi hoga

Avi use samjhate huye bola

Avi- bhai chal na yaar, tere bagair mera hai kaun

Aniket- kaun tu, mai nahi janta teko

Avi- acha beta dost ko bhul gaya, bas yahi hai teri dosti

Aniket avi ke pair pakadte huye bola

Aniket- o baba mai pair pakadta hu tere, mere ko mat maar re, mera record bahut kharab hai, yash ke time maine, uske sale, baap, maa, bodyguard sabka maar khaya aur mere time mere sasur ne pita tha, ye sab to theek tha be sanjana ka baap to policewala hai, wo pata nahi kaisa kaisa aur kaha kaha marega aur ab mera maar khane ka bilkul mood nahi hai, mere ko to tu maaf hi kar

Avi- ho gayi nautanki karke, tereko bataya tha na pichli baar unhone kya kaha tha to

Aniket- shadi ke liye ha kiya tha kya ?

Avi- nahi waisa nahi bola tha

Aniket- bas to fir baat cancel, policewale bahut bura maarte hai

Avi- yahi hai teri dosti hai na

Aniket- khadde me gayi be dosti, sala tum shadi karke maja karo aur maar mai khau, naat possible

Avi bhi jhuta natak karte huye gane laga

Avi- dost dost na raha, pyaar pyaar na raha

Aur aniket ne uske hath me rupaya rakhe jaisa kiya aur bola

Aniket- aage jao baba, sala nautanki, ek kaam karte hai mere bapu ko manate hai chalne ko fir koi tension nahi

Avi- ha ye idea sahi hai, waise bhi is kaam me bade hi sath chahiye aur kaka rahenge to sab sahi hoga

Fir aniket aur avi ne narayanrao aur kaushalya ko manaya aur unhone bhi unki baat maan li, agle din avi ki maa shanta, narayanrao aur kaushalya, avi aniket sab sanjana ke ghar pahuche, sanjana ke gharwalo ne bhi unka ache se swagat kiya aur sari baat chit khushi khushi sampann huyi aur is baar pehli baar aniket ke maar khaye bagair love story puri huyi thi aur akhir me fix huyi shadi ki tarikh

Avi ki maa ko chinta ho rahi thi ke ye sab kaise hoga aur unhone aniket se ye baat bhi ki

Aniket- arey kaki aap kyu tension le rahi hai mai hu na aur aapko pata nahi hai avi ke kitne dost hai, sab aayenge aur mai to hu hi sab dekhne ko, aap sab apne bete ki shadi enjoy karo aur sara tension mere pe chhod do

Yash aur aniket dono kaam pe lag gaye the aur ghar ke samne ke patangan me bada sa mandap bandha gaya jiske dekh ke avi ki maa ne pucha

Shanta- arey itna bada mandap kyu ?

Aniket- arey kaki ye bhi chhota padega itne log aayenge, aap dekho bas aur sara kaam mere jimme chhod do

Yash bhi chinta me tha

Yash- anya, tere dimag me kya hai be, itna sab karne se to shahar me ek marriage hall book kar lete na

Aniket- usme kya maja hai bhai, sara kaam mojke karna padta hai, yaha sara gaon apna hai jo karna hai bindass karna hai, tu dekh bas

Yash- arey par hum dono kya kya karenge

Aniket- tu avi koache se janta nahi bhai, bahut chahne wale hai uske

Itne me waha ek bus aake ruki aur usme se avi ke sare dost utarne lage aur dekhte hi dekhte sabne apne apne kaam bant liye the, aniket has raha tha aur yash samajh gaya tha ke aniket ne hi ye sari gang jama ki hai aur ab yash sure tha ke sare kaam jaldi jaldi ho jayenge

Udhar sanjana ke ghar me bhi shadi ki gadbad chal rahi thi uski sari sehaliya rishte daar sab pahuch gaye the aur sanjana ki dost uske mehndi aur haldi ke karyakran me busy ho gayi thim sanjana ko mehndi lag rahi thi, har taraf bas awaj hiawaj tha, koi beech me hi sanjana ko avi ka naam leke chhed deta, sab ne milke sanjana ko haldi lagayi jisse uska roop aur nikhar aaya tha

Udhar avi ko bhi haldi lagane ka karyakran shuru hua, priya aur komal ne to avi ko haldi me nehla diya tha aur isme priya ko najane kya sujha usne komal ko bhi haldi me rang diya, wahi yash aur aniket kuch kaam se waha se ja rahe the to komal aur priya ne unpar bhi hamla kar diya, yash to pakad me aa gaya par aniket bhagne laga to komal naraj ho gayi

Komal- ani jara si haldi se kya ho jayega, avi tum samjhao apne dost ko

Avi- usko aise thode hi haldi lagani hai

Itna bol ke avi ne apne dono hath failaye aur bola

Avi-anya bhai ko congrats nahi karega kya ?

Aniket- sala nautanki

Itna bol ke aniket ne avi ko gale laga liya, sham ko sangeet ka karyakran shuru hua aur ab bari thianiket bhi usne kisi ko nahi chhoda jise nachaya na ho, raat bhar bas dhamal hota raha

Agle din ki avi aturta se raah dekh raha tha, aur sanjana aur sab log waha aa gaye the, sanjana ke waha aate hi sab uske paas jama ho gaye, sanjana ne ek pile rang ki saree pehni thi aur sar par pallu liya hua tha, avi balcony me khade hokar sanjana ko dekh raha tha aur sanjana ki naja bhi avi ko dhundh rahi thi aur ye baat aniket ke dhyan me aa gayi wo avi ke sath balcony me khada tha aur usne waha se jordar siti bajayi, sanjana ne chauk ke upar dekha to dono ki najre mili, un najro me kitni aturta kitni tadap thi ye wo dono hi jante the, avi ne ek baar apni palke jhapkayi namo najrose keh raha ho bas thoda samay aur fir to hamesha ke liye ek hona hai… us pile saree me sanjana bahut khubsurat dikh rahi thi apni ne apna ek hah apne dil par rakha mano meh raha ho haayy ! kitni sunder dikh rahi hai meri dilruba, dono me smile kiya aur aage ki tayari me lag gaye..

Sare dosto ne mil ke avi ko tayar kiya, cream color ki sherwani aur cherry red color ki dhoti, sar par jari ka pheta, maa ne ek motiyo ki mala uske gale me pehnayi.. dulhe ke gateup me avi bahut badhiya lag raha tha..

Barat nikli, aniket ki beti annanya avi ke sath ghodi par bithi thi, kareeb kareeb gaya gaon aur aur mere sare XF wale bhi maujud the barat me, aniket to bhoot ker jaisa nach raha tha ghodi ke aage aur uske sath me yash priya komal aur yash ka peta prish bhi tha, itne me docter sunam aur docter siddharth bhi pahuch gaye aur unke sath nachne me shamil ho gaye.. narayanrao bechare inko sambhalte huye pareshan huye ja rahe the.. waise to m,andap tak ka rasta chota tha par waha pahuchne me inko do ghante lag gaye the aur akhir me aniket ne avi ko bhi nachaya..

Avi mandap me ab pandit ke paas baith kar shadi ki vidhi puri kar raha tha par uska pura dhyan entry par laga hua tha jaha se sanjana aane wali thi, ek ek pal use yugo jaisa lag raha tha aur aakhir me wo pal aaya, sanjana use aate huye dikhayi hi..avi ka dil mano dhadakna bhul gaya ho.. uske liye sari duniya ruk gayi thi, aaju baju ka sara awaj shant ho gaya tha, waha bahut se log the lekin avi ko bas sanjana dikh rahi thi..

Sanjana ne ek kashta padar ka pile rang ka shalu pehna hua tha.. aur jamuni rang ki kinar jispar jari ka wark tha.. pairo me najuk payal thi jiski madhur jhankar idhar avi ke man me uth rahi thi.. hatho me chudiya.. kamar par kamarpatta… hath par kohni tak nikali huyi mehndi j gore hatho par khul kar dikh rahi thi, gale me chandrahaar.., balo ka juda bana hua tha jisme mogre ke phulo ki veni lagi huyi thi, dando par bajubandh mohak dikh raha tha.. kano me jhumke aur naak me motiyo ki nath… halkasa makeup aur hotho par laal lipstick, aisa lag raha tha wo hoth na hokar gulab ki pankhudiya ho, chlte huye nath halke se hotho ko touch ho rahi thi.. avi paglo jaisa us sunderta ko nihar raha tha use to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ke ye sunderta ki murat kuch samay baad hamesha ke liye uski hone wali hai.. sanjana dheere dheere chalte huye uske paas aayi, avi sudh budh kho kar use dekh raha tha

Itne me aniket se use kohni mari aur bola

Aniket- malum hai teri hai aise kya dekh raha be..

Aniket ki baat sunkar avi hosh me aaya aur sanjana sharmayi aur wo pal aaya jiski dono chatak ke jaise raah dekh rahe the, saptapadi ke samay jab avi ne sanjana ka sath pakda to wo feeling hi alag thi, sab kisi sapne jaisa lag raha tha, mangalashtak huye dono ne ekdusre ko haar pehnaya.. aur isi ke sath dono hamesha hamesha ke liye ekdusre ke ho gaye…

Ho gayi avi ki shadi.. yash aur aniket ek jagah thak ke baithe the aur yash bhavuk ho gaya tha

Yash- anya aaj bahut bada kaam kar diya tune, avi ko settle kara diya

Aniket- wo to karna hi tha bhai

Yash- tere jaisa dost milna avi ke bhi bhagya hai, bachpan se use sambhala hai, gayab hua to dhundha hai, mere piche hath dho ke pada tha uski naukri ke liye aur ab shadi..

Aniket ne yash ko gaur se dekha aur gambhir awaj me bola

Aniket- ye tu bol raha hai yash ? ulta avi jaisa dost mujhe mila hai ye to mera bhagya hai aur ye baat tujhse achi tarah aur kaun janta hoga

Yash ghabraya aur kuch nahi bola, aniket hasa aur aage bola

Aniket- avi ne jo mere liye kiya hai uski to mai bharpayi bhi nahi kar sakta

Kuch bolne ke liye yash bola

Yash- tumhari baate tum dost jano..

Aniket- pata to tujhe bhi hai bas tu bola nahi kabhi aur mai tujhe uska dosh bhi nahi dunga..

An yash ke kaan khade ho gaye

Yash- tu kya bol raha hai ani sara samjhe aisa bol

Aniket ne ek lambi saas chhodi aur bola

Aniket- avi ka pehla pyaar komal hai na ?

Yash par to mano bijli giri ho, wo aniket se najar nahi mila pa raha tha fir bhi jaise taise bola

Yash- tu kuch bhi bol raha hai anya

Aniket- mujhe pata hai re, bahut si baate hai aisi, uske hath par ka AK ka tatoo, jab jab pyaar ki baat aayi avi ka hath us tatoo par jata hai.. is patthe ko dairy likhne ki adat thi, jab ye gayab hua aur mai iske ghar gaya na to mujhe iski ek dairy mili, uske baad maine mere shadi ki CD dekhi avi phero ke pehle tak tha fir gayab ho gaya tha, wo aansu bhari aanko se bas komal ko dekh raha tha, teri aur uski tekdi par ki mulakat usne dairy me likhi hai, usne dosti ke liye pyaar kurban kiya hai bhai uske aage maine jo kiya wo to kam hi hai..

Yash ko kya bole samajh nahi aa raha tha par ek sawal uske man me uth raha tha aur usne pucha

Yash- tujhe ye sab pata hai ye avi janta hai ?

Aniket hasa aur bola

Aniket- pagal hai kya ? use ye pata chala to mai janta hu fir hamare beech faltu me duriya aayengi, aaj use lagta hai ke mai kuch nahi jaanta isiliye wo bindass mere pas aata hai mere se freely baat karta hai ghar par aata hai, yahi agar use pata chala ke mai ye baat janta hu to wo utna freely mere se komal se baat nahi kar payega, mil nahi payega, jo hona tha ho gaya use hum nahi badal sakte, aaj avi ki life ki ek nayi shuruwat hai, aur mai janta hu ke tu agar dost ke liye bhai se ye baat chupa sakta hai to usi dost ke liye ye baat bhi kabhi apne hothopar nahi layega

Yash ki aankho me pani tha, usne aniket ko kas ke gale laga liya

Yash- tum dono dhanya ho ulta mai to aisa bolunga ke mai naseeb wala hu jo mujhe aisa dost aur bhai mile….



Samapt.

Bahut Bahut Dhanyawaad !
Adirshi

Ho gayi shaadi !!

Ani ko Avi ka patha thha !!

Aur Avi ki naukri bhi Ani ne Yash ke pichhe pad-pad ke lagwai...

Wah Adirshi bhai, kya mast story pesh kari hai aapne

Ab mai next Ek Qatra Ishq padhne wala hu...

Thanks !!

 

[Adirshi]

Ekdam dhansu beginning hai ye toh Adirshi Bhai

Aap na college life ke bare me kafi badhiya tarike se varnan karte ho. Bilkul hi realistic sa lagta hai.

Thanks !!

Wah bhai....

Toh story ka hero AK hai...

Ye Sanjana aur Rahul kyu AK ke pichhe hath dho ke (naha dho ke) pade hai ?

Kya sahi presence of mind hai...

Daaru ki bottle me pani !!

Arey Adirshi Bhai, ye kya gazab kar dala !!

Ye AK toh Kammo ka silent premi aur Ani ka bhai Avi nikla !!!

Aapne pichhli story ko hi continue kar dala hai !!!! Hateli Love Story ke bad ab Uff Ye Mohabbat !!!!!!!!!

Aur Sanjana ke dad Police me hai...

Aur ye Rahul ki izzat ka pura kachra kar dala KP bana ke...

Avi ne sabko rusticate hone se bacha liya...

Aur ye dono ki dosti ki shuruat ho rahi hai kya ??

Pathar utha kar dhaamki de kar zabardasti ki dosti ?

Ye aagli chaal hai kya Sanjana ki ??

Itni khurafati aur toofani ladki, aur college ki topper bhi ?

Aur uska hriday parivartan ho raha hai... ???

Ye toh ab Avi ne bhi same to same pathar utha ke hi Sanjana ki taraf dosti ka haath badha diya hai...

Sanjana ko Avi se pyaar ho gya hai...

Lekin kya Avi ne Komal ko bhula diya hai, kyuki Komal toh ab uski Babhi hai...

Aur ye story me Avi toh hai, lekin uski pichhli story wali mast-maula gang kaha hai ???

Yaha bhi Dosti-Pyaar ke balance pe hi kahani atak gayi hai...

Sanjana ko abb Avi ke bare me jan na hai
Aur Avi in sab chakkaro se dur hi rehna chahta hai

Sanjana meets Ani...
Lekin... Avi ne kabhi bhi Ani aur Komal ko toh kuchh bataya hi nahi thha...

Finally...

Ani ke sath-sath ab Komal ki bhi story me entry karwa hi di hai Adi bhai ne...

Sajana ab Komal ke hatho majboor ho ke bol hi gayi ke woh Avi ko pyaar karti hai !

Ye toh fir se "History Repeats Itself" ho raha hai...

Jaise Komal ne Ani se sachha pyar kiya (aur use ant me paya bhi).
Waise hi Avi ne Komal se pyar kiya aur apne bhai ke liye us pyar ko kurban kar dala

Ab Sanjana ko bhi Avi se waise hi pyar ho gaya hai, par Avi ke dil me abhi bhi sirf Komal hi hai...

Ab Ani lagta hai Avi ki watt lagayega !!

Ani ab Avi ko convince karne me laga hua hai...

Thank you so much bhai for investing your time reading this story, this really means a lot to me

 

[Adirshi]

Teen tarfa jung chhidi hui hai !!
Avi kabhi nahi chahega ki Komal ka naam bahar aye...
Aur ek Ani hai jo Sanjana ke liye Avi ko samjhane me laga hua hai...
Avi pukhta karna chahta hai ki Sanjana ko koi waqti attraction hai, ya saccha pyar hua hai...

Ye sari kahaniyo ke sare mamle tekdi pe ja ke daru peene se hi sulajh jate hai !!

Wah Ji Wah

Akhirkaar Avi maan hi gaya hai Sanjana ko propose karne ko...

Sanjana se milne ko dauda aya hai Avi !!

Next lagta hai ke propose hone hi wala hai !!!!

Ye kya kar dala Adirshi bhai...

Sanjana ko toh lagta hai sirf attraction hi hua tha (like shravni) na ki dil ki gehrai se sachha prem (like Komal)...

Avi ka dil fir se na todo yaar...

Please...

Ye ho kya raha hai interval ke bad...

Avi kaha hai ??

Sanjana ne Ani aur Komal se jhhut kyu bola, puri bat hi gol kar gayi ?

Kya woh nahi chahti ki Avi mil jaye ??

Dhanya hai Shakuntala devi, jinhone Sanjana ke dimag me akkal ki batti jalayi...

Ab jaldi se Avi ko dhundho...

Aur ab ja ke Sanjana ne puri sachhayi Ani aur Komal ko batayi hai.

Lagta hai ki jo bate Yash ne Ani ko boli hai, us me se hi age ki story open hogi...

Ye ek hi teer se kitne shikar ho rahe hai ??

Avi ko dhundhna hai
Sanjana ke mann me Avi ke liye pyar jagana hai
Ani aur Komal ki life me missing excitement ko fir se wapis lana hai
Ani aur Komal kabhi honeymoon hi nahi gaye, unko honeymoon ki sair karwani hai

The search is now underway !

The search is now underway !

So close, yet so far...
In search of love and in search of God...

Matlab ab sachhi ka hi lukka-chhuppi ka khel chalu ho gaya hai !

Aur Sanjana ne Avi ko har mayne me sweekar kar liya hai...

Jaldi mil jao yaar...

Ye kya ? Avi aya, ILU bola, haar pehnaya aur fir se gayab ??

Gnadharva Vivah !

woh bhi Radha-Krishnan ki upasthiti me !!

Kya-Kya soch ke likhte ho aap Adirshi Bhai !! Wah !!

Ye toh sab log hi ikathhe ho gaye hai...

Yash aur Priya bhi a chuke hai

Lekin Tajmehal me ab tak Avi Sanjana ke sanmne kyu nahi aya ?

Kahi Ani ne galat anuman toh nahi laga liya hai ??

Lo ji, finally mil hi gaye Avi aur Sanjana aur abb unki ILU-ILU jaari hai...

Hahahaha...
Bal-Gopal ke darshan karne par Komal ne Ani ko ek anmol gift announce kar diya hai...

Sataak



Hahahaha....

Sattaakkk !!!

Yash bhi Ani ki tarah hi Avi ka saccha dost hai...

Ye sab log hi dramebaz hai !

Ye sab log hi kitne dramebaz hai...

GF ka policia baap...

Interrogation chalu hai, 3rd degree treatment na chalu ho jaye !!

Ab toh susra bhi maan gaya hai...

Padhayi finish hote hi, pehle naukri aur fir chhokri !!

Naukri bhi Yash ke dwara lagwa di gayi hai...

Har step par dosto ki support hai...

WoW...

Barish ke mausam me, Romantic Proposal aur wo bhi Tekdi pe !!

Ho gayi shaadi !!

Ani ko Avi ka patha thha !!

Aur Avi ki naukri bhi Ani ne Yash ke pichhe pad-pad ke lagwai...

Wah Adirshi bhai, kya mast story pesh kari hai aapne

Ab mai next Ek Qatra Ishq padhne wala hu...

Thanks !!

Thank you so much bhai for investing your time reading this story, this really means a lot to me

 

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"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
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2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
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Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[Thakur]

Update 46​

Aur ab proposal ka khumar hata to sanjana hosh me aate huye boli

Sanjana- sharam nahi aati ? ek shadi shuda ladki ko shadi ke liye puch rahe ho

Avi- heein shadi shuda

Sanjana- ha, meri shadi ho chuki hai

Avi- aur ye kab hua ? aur mere ko nahi bulaya tumne shadi me

Sanjana- aaye to the tum choro jaise

Avi- sala mere ko kaise nai maul ye baat

Sanjana- dekho Mr. Avi meri shadi ho chuki hai aur wo bhi sakshat shri krishna ki sakshi me

Avi- aisa hai kya, to bolo bhi tumhare maa papa ko ke sasural bhej de tumko, aise shadi shuda ladkiyo ka jyada time mayke me rehna sahi baat nahi hai

Sanjana- fir uske liye tumhe pehle mujhe lene aana hoga na, permission leni padegi

Avi- meri biwi ko lane ke liye mujhe kisi ki permission thode hi chahiye, khair tum keh rahi ho to aata hu kal, company ke diye huye flat me tumhare hi hatho se rakhenge kalash

avi ki baat sunkar sanjana hasne lagi

sanjana- bas majak ho gaya ho to ab batao hum shadi kab karne wale hai ?

Avi- mai kal hi ghar par baat karta hu aur tumhare ghar aata hu, ab mujhe bhi nahi raha ja raha tumhare bagair, ye mahina kaise nikala hai bas mai hi janta hu3

Sanjana- ha jaise mai to yaha jhula jhul rahi thi na

Avi- to kal fix kare, mai maa aur anya ko leke aata hu

Aur fir avi ne sanjana ko uske ghar chhoda aur jaldi se apne ghar pahucha, itne dino baad maa bhi apne bete ko dekh ke khush ho gayi aur kuch idhar udhar ki baate karne ke baad avi ne jhat main mudde ko hath lagaya

Avi- maa ab apne ko meri company ke flat par shift hona hai

Shanta- ye to achi baat hai, par beta meri sari jindagi yaha isi ghar me biti hai, mera lagega waha ?

Avi- wo mai kaise bata sakta hu, bas itna hai ke ab tak bahut kaam kar liye tumne ab aaram karne ka time hai

Aur avi ke ye bolte hi uski maa samajh gayi ke isko kya bolne ka hai

Shanta- aaj tujhe achanak mere aaram ki chinta kaise hone lagi ? kya gadbad hai avya ?

Avi sharmanya

Avi- gadbad ? kaisi gadbad ?

Shanta- beta maine janam diya hai tujhe to mujhe mat sikha samjha aur baat kya hai sidhe sidhe bata

Fir avi jaise taise bola

Avi- wo tumhari bahu puch rahi thi ke usko lene kab aaunga to..

Shanta- acha aisa hai kya, mujhe laga hi tha, bol kab jana hai shadi ki baat karne

Avi- kal chale ?

Shanta- shabash, to sab pehle se hi thenra liya hai tune aur mujhe aise hi makkhan maar raha hai ? khair teri khushi me meri khushi hai, ab ja pehle ja ke aniket ko bata ye baat waise bhi uske bagair tera patta bhi nahi hilega, chalte hai kal

Avi ne khushi se maa ko gale lagaya aur sidha aniket ke ghar ki taraf bhaga

Is samay aniket ghar par hoga ye avi ko pata tha, wo uske ghar pahucha aur uske dekhte hi aniket uske paas aaya, ghar par narayanrao aur kaushalya bhi the, unkodekhte hi avi ne unke pair chuye, aur wo log apne room me chale gaye kyuki unko pata tha ye do dost kafi dino baad mile hai to dhingana to hoga hi

Unke jate hi aniket se apne pair aage kiye

Avi- arey hao bhai, tere pair to sabse pehle pakadne chahiye the, tu to mera ek importantkaam karne wala hai

Aniket- mai aur important kaam aaila meri bayi aankh fadak rahi hai re, o bhai tune koi naya lafda nahi kiya na ?

Avi- nahi re lafda wagaire kuch nahi bas ek chotasa kaam tha

Aniket chati ko hath lagate huye bola

Aniket- o bhai, tere chote kaam bahut danger hote hai, waise kaam kya hai wo bata

Avi- nahi kuch khas nahi tere ko bas mere sath ek jagah chalna hai

Avi ki baat sunkar aniket uske kandhe par hath marte huye bola

Aniket- bas itni si baat, arey dost ke liye to apan narak me bhi chale jaye, bol kaha jana hai

Avi- sanjana ke ghar meri shadi ki baat karne

Aur mano uske upar chipkali giri ho aise aniket chikha

Aniket- kyaaa ? shadi ki baat karne ? sanjana ke ghar ? aur mai ? nahi hoga

Avi use samjhate huye bola

Avi- bhai chal na yaar, tere bagair mera hai kaun

Aniket- kaun tu, mai nahi janta teko

Avi- acha beta dost ko bhul gaya, bas yahi hai teri dosti

Aniket avi ke pair pakadte huye bola

Aniket- o baba mai pair pakadta hu tere, mere ko mat maar re, mera record bahut kharab hai, yash ke time maine, uske sale, baap, maa, bodyguard sabka maar khaya aur mere time mere sasur ne pita tha, ye sab to theek tha be sanjana ka baap to policewala hai, wo pata nahi kaisa kaisa aur kaha kaha marega aur ab mera maar khane ka bilkul mood nahi hai, mere ko to tu maaf hi kar

Avi- ho gayi nautanki karke, tereko bataya tha na pichli baar unhone kya kaha tha to

Aniket- shadi ke liye ha kiya tha kya ?

Avi- nahi waisa nahi bola tha

Aniket- bas to fir baat cancel, policewale bahut bura maarte hai

Avi- yahi hai teri dosti hai na

Aniket- khadde me gayi be dosti, sala tum shadi karke maja karo aur maar mai khau, naat possible

Avi bhi jhuta natak karte huye gane laga

Avi- dost dost na raha, pyaar pyaar na raha

Aur aniket ne uske hath me rupaya rakhe jaisa kiya aur bola

Aniket- aage jao baba, sala nautanki, ek kaam karte hai mere bapu ko manate hai chalne ko fir koi tension nahi

Avi- ha ye idea sahi hai, waise bhi is kaam me bade hi sath chahiye aur kaka rahenge to sab sahi hoga

Fir aniket aur avi ne narayanrao aur kaushalya ko manaya aur unhone bhi unki baat maan li, agle din avi ki maa shanta, narayanrao aur kaushalya, avi aniket sab sanjana ke ghar pahuche, sanjana ke gharwalo ne bhi unka ache se swagat kiya aur sari baat chit khushi khushi sampann huyi aur is baar pehli baar aniket ke maar khaye bagair love story puri huyi thi aur akhir me fix huyi shadi ki tarikh

Avi ki maa ko chinta ho rahi thi ke ye sab kaise hoga aur unhone aniket se ye baat bhi ki

Aniket- arey kaki aap kyu tension le rahi hai mai hu na aur aapko pata nahi hai avi ke kitne dost hai, sab aayenge aur mai to hu hi sab dekhne ko, aap sab apne bete ki shadi enjoy karo aur sara tension mere pe chhod do

Yash aur aniket dono kaam pe lag gaye the aur ghar ke samne ke patangan me bada sa mandap bandha gaya jiske dekh ke avi ki maa ne pucha

Shanta- arey itna bada mandap kyu ?

Aniket- arey kaki ye bhi chhota padega itne log aayenge, aap dekho bas aur sara kaam mere jimme chhod do

Yash bhi chinta me tha

Yash- anya, tere dimag me kya hai be, itna sab karne se to shahar me ek marriage hall book kar lete na

Aniket- usme kya maja hai bhai, sara kaam mojke karna padta hai, yaha sara gaon apna hai jo karna hai bindass karna hai, tu dekh bas

Yash- arey par hum dono kya kya karenge

Aniket- tu avi koache se janta nahi bhai, bahut chahne wale hai uske

Itne me waha ek bus aake ruki aur usme se avi ke sare dost utarne lage aur dekhte hi dekhte sabne apne apne kaam bant liye the, aniket has raha tha aur yash samajh gaya tha ke aniket ne hi ye sari gang jama ki hai aur ab yash sure tha ke sare kaam jaldi jaldi ho jayenge

Udhar sanjana ke ghar me bhi shadi ki gadbad chal rahi thi uski sari sehaliya rishte daar sab pahuch gaye the aur sanjana ki dost uske mehndi aur haldi ke karyakran me busy ho gayi thim sanjana ko mehndi lag rahi thi, har taraf bas awaj hiawaj tha, koi beech me hi sanjana ko avi ka naam leke chhed deta, sab ne milke sanjana ko haldi lagayi jisse uska roop aur nikhar aaya tha

Udhar avi ko bhi haldi lagane ka karyakran shuru hua, priya aur komal ne to avi ko haldi me nehla diya tha aur isme priya ko najane kya sujha usne komal ko bhi haldi me rang diya, wahi yash aur aniket kuch kaam se waha se ja rahe the to komal aur priya ne unpar bhi hamla kar diya, yash to pakad me aa gaya par aniket bhagne laga to komal naraj ho gayi

Komal- ani jara si haldi se kya ho jayega, avi tum samjhao apne dost ko

Avi- usko aise thode hi haldi lagani hai

Itna bol ke avi ne apne dono hath failaye aur bola

Avi-anya bhai ko congrats nahi karega kya ?

Aniket- sala nautanki

Itna bol ke aniket ne avi ko gale laga liya, sham ko sangeet ka karyakran shuru hua aur ab bari thianiket bhi usne kisi ko nahi chhoda jise nachaya na ho, raat bhar bas dhamal hota raha

Agle din ki avi aturta se raah dekh raha tha, aur sanjana aur sab log waha aa gaye the, sanjana ke waha aate hi sab uske paas jama ho gaye, sanjana ne ek pile rang ki saree pehni thi aur sar par pallu liya hua tha, avi balcony me khade hokar sanjana ko dekh raha tha aur sanjana ki naja bhi avi ko dhundh rahi thi aur ye baat aniket ke dhyan me aa gayi wo avi ke sath balcony me khada tha aur usne waha se jordar siti bajayi, sanjana ne chauk ke upar dekha to dono ki najre mili, un najro me kitni aturta kitni tadap thi ye wo dono hi jante the, avi ne ek baar apni palke jhapkayi namo najrose keh raha ho bas thoda samay aur fir to hamesha ke liye ek hona hai… us pile saree me sanjana bahut khubsurat dikh rahi thi apni ne apna ek hah apne dil par rakha mano meh raha ho haayy ! kitni sunder dikh rahi hai meri dilruba, dono me smile kiya aur aage ki tayari me lag gaye..

Sare dosto ne mil ke avi ko tayar kiya, cream color ki sherwani aur cherry red color ki dhoti, sar par jari ka pheta, maa ne ek motiyo ki mala uske gale me pehnayi.. dulhe ke gateup me avi bahut badhiya lag raha tha..

Barat nikli, aniket ki beti annanya avi ke sath ghodi par bithi thi, kareeb kareeb gaya gaon aur aur mere sare XF wale bhi maujud the barat me, aniket to bhoot ker jaisa nach raha tha ghodi ke aage aur uske sath me yash priya komal aur yash ka peta prish bhi tha, itne me docter sunam aur docter siddharth bhi pahuch gaye aur unke sath nachne me shamil ho gaye.. narayanrao bechare inko sambhalte huye pareshan huye ja rahe the.. waise to m,andap tak ka rasta chota tha par waha pahuchne me inko do ghante lag gaye the aur akhir me aniket ne avi ko bhi nachaya..

Avi mandap me ab pandit ke paas baith kar shadi ki vidhi puri kar raha tha par uska pura dhyan entry par laga hua tha jaha se sanjana aane wali thi, ek ek pal use yugo jaisa lag raha tha aur aakhir me wo pal aaya, sanjana use aate huye dikhayi hi..avi ka dil mano dhadakna bhul gaya ho.. uske liye sari duniya ruk gayi thi, aaju baju ka sara awaj shant ho gaya tha, waha bahut se log the lekin avi ko bas sanjana dikh rahi thi..

Sanjana ne ek kashta padar ka pile rang ka shalu pehna hua tha.. aur jamuni rang ki kinar jispar jari ka wark tha.. pairo me najuk payal thi jiski madhur jhankar idhar avi ke man me uth rahi thi.. hatho me chudiya.. kamar par kamarpatta… hath par kohni tak nikali huyi mehndi j gore hatho par khul kar dikh rahi thi, gale me chandrahaar.., balo ka juda bana hua tha jisme mogre ke phulo ki veni lagi huyi thi, dando par bajubandh mohak dikh raha tha.. kano me jhumke aur naak me motiyo ki nath… halkasa makeup aur hotho par laal lipstick, aisa lag raha tha wo hoth na hokar gulab ki pankhudiya ho, chlte huye nath halke se hotho ko touch ho rahi thi.. avi paglo jaisa us sunderta ko nihar raha tha use to yakin hi nahi ho raha tha ke ye sunderta ki murat kuch samay baad hamesha ke liye uski hone wali hai.. sanjana dheere dheere chalte huye uske paas aayi, avi sudh budh kho kar use dekh raha tha

Itne me aniket se use kohni mari aur bola

Aniket- malum hai teri hai aise kya dekh raha be..

Aniket ki baat sunkar avi hosh me aaya aur sanjana sharmayi aur wo pal aaya jiski dono chatak ke jaise raah dekh rahe the, saptapadi ke samay jab avi ne sanjana ka sath pakda to wo feeling hi alag thi, sab kisi sapne jaisa lag raha tha, mangalashtak huye dono ne ekdusre ko haar pehnaya.. aur isi ke sath dono hamesha hamesha ke liye ekdusre ke ho gaye…

Ho gayi avi ki shadi.. yash aur aniket ek jagah thak ke baithe the aur yash bhavuk ho gaya tha

Yash- anya aaj bahut bada kaam kar diya tune, avi ko settle kara diya

Aniket- wo to karna hi tha bhai

Yash- tere jaisa dost milna avi ke bhi bhagya hai, bachpan se use sambhala hai, gayab hua to dhundha hai, mere piche hath dho ke pada tha uski naukri ke liye aur ab shadi..

Aniket ne yash ko gaur se dekha aur gambhir awaj me bola

Aniket- ye tu bol raha hai yash ? ulta avi jaisa dost mujhe mila hai ye to mera bhagya hai aur ye baat tujhse achi tarah aur kaun janta hoga

Yash ghabraya aur kuch nahi bola, aniket hasa aur aage bola

Aniket- avi ne jo mere liye kiya hai uski to mai bharpayi bhi nahi kar sakta

Kuch bolne ke liye yash bola

Yash- tumhari baate tum dost jano..

Aniket- pata to tujhe bhi hai bas tu bola nahi kabhi aur mai tujhe uska dosh bhi nahi dunga..

An yash ke kaan khade ho gaye

Yash- tu kya bol raha hai ani sara samjhe aisa bol

Aniket ne ek lambi saas chhodi aur bola

Aniket- avi ka pehla pyaar komal hai na ?

Yash par to mano bijli giri ho, wo aniket se najar nahi mila pa raha tha fir bhi jaise taise bola

Yash- tu kuch bhi bol raha hai anya

Aniket- mujhe pata hai re, bahut si baate hai aisi, uske hath par ka AK ka tatoo, jab jab pyaar ki baat aayi avi ka hath us tatoo par jata hai.. is patthe ko dairy likhne ki adat thi, jab ye gayab hua aur mai iske ghar gaya na to mujhe iski ek dairy mili, uske baad maine mere shadi ki CD dekhi avi phero ke pehle tak tha fir gayab ho gaya tha, wo aansu bhari aanko se bas komal ko dekh raha tha, teri aur uski tekdi par ki mulakat usne dairy me likhi hai, usne dosti ke liye pyaar kurban kiya hai bhai uske aage maine jo kiya wo to kam hi hai..

Yash ko kya bole samajh nahi aa raha tha par ek sawal uske man me uth raha tha aur usne pucha

Yash- tujhe ye sab pata hai ye avi janta hai ?

Aniket hasa aur bola

Aniket- pagal hai kya ? use ye pata chala to mai janta hu fir hamare beech faltu me duriya aayengi, aaj use lagta hai ke mai kuch nahi jaanta isiliye wo bindass mere pas aata hai mere se freely baat karta hai ghar par aata hai, yahi agar use pata chala ke mai ye baat janta hu to wo utna freely mere se komal se baat nahi kar payega, mil nahi payega, jo hona tha ho gaya use hum nahi badal sakte, aaj avi ki life ki ek nayi shuruwat hai, aur mai janta hu ke tu agar dost ke liye bhai se ye baat chupa sakta hai to usi dost ke liye ye baat bhi kabhi apne hothopar nahi layega

Yash ki aankho me pani tha, usne aniket ko kas ke gale laga liya

Yash- tum dono dhanya ho ulta mai to aisa bolunga ke mai naseeb wala hu jo mujhe aisa dost aur bhai mile….



Samapt.

Bahut Bahut Dhanyawaad !
Adirshi

Finally avi ki bhi naiya par hui
Ab reverse gear me Jake yash ki story padhni padegi

 

[Adirshi]

Finally avi ki bhi naiya par hui
Ab reverse gear me Jake yash ki story padhni padegi

Yash wali bhi jaldi aayegi

 

[Mking]

Main galti Sanjana ki hei,usko apni beauty,bap ki vardi,aur apni thora bahut martial art ki gun ka ghamand hei.Aur wo apni badle lene ke liye kisi vi level tak ja sakta hei,jo achhi character nehi hei.