Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

Schedule​

UPDATE#​	DATE​
Update 94​	27th October 11:30 PM​
Update 95​	30th October 11:30 PM​
Update 96​	3rd November 11:30 PM​
Update 97​	8th November 11:59 PM​

 

[achinsaha]

UPDATE 1 ~
[THE TUOTRIAL TOWER]

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Manali
Evening ~ 04:14

*Thud*

"Ye ho gya akhri Sofa" Single Sofe ko neeche rakhte huwe 1 admi ne bola phir usi sofe per baith ker saanse drust karne laga.

"Itne me thak gye Parth? abhi to aur bhi samaan nikalna hai Truck me se" Dusre Adhik umar ke Admi ne table ko rakhte huwe hans ker kaha.


Parth: (sigh) Pata hai pata hai! Ab saans lene to ruk he sakta hu.

"Arey Manohar bhai sahib! Aram se ker lo ap kaam koi baat nahi, Ap ki bhabhi ne chaye banayi hai ye pee lo phir ker lena baki kaam" Ek aur Admi ne haath me chaye pakre kamre ke andar ate huwe kaha.


Manohar: Arrey! Ashwin main ne kab kaha aram ne kare? per Aram karne jitna kaam bhi to kare na pehle akhir paise kis kaam ke leta hai?

Ashwin: Chale koi baat nahi bacha hai abhi wo, kaam to ho jaye ga chaye pee le pehle warna ap ki bhabhi Gussa kare gi.

Ashwin ne chaye ko table per rakhi aur Manohar ko Sofe per baitha dia, Manohar ne bhi aage kuch na kaha aur chup chap chaye peene laga.

Manohar ki umar 35 saal thi uss ka apna Furniture ka kaam tha aur iss waqt wo Furniture Deliver karne aya huwa, Wiase to manohar dukan me kaam karne wale larko ko bhej deta tha lekin ye furniture us ke purane dost Ashwin ke ghar ana tha iss liye wo khud bhi saath aya tha.

Us ke saath us ki dukan me kaam karne wala larka baitha tha Parth, Kaam to karta tha per nakhre bhi bohat the aksar Manohar se us ko daant bhi sun'ni parti thi

Ashwin: Bhai sahib Aarav ko bhi andar ane ko keh dete! Bechara kab se laga huwa hai wo bhi kuch der baith jaye, us ki halat bhi mujhe kuch sahi nahi lag rahi.

Ashwin ne khirki se bahir ek Jawan larke ko December ki thand me kaam karte daikhte huwe kaha

Manohar: (Sigh) Ap ko kia lagta hai? agar use bula sakta to main kiu na bulata? use agar kahe gye bhi to wo nahi aye ga, Yahan se uss ko jaldi kaam pura ker ke dusre kaam per nikalna hai, Iss liye yahan ka kaam wo jaldi niptana chahta hai.

Manohar ne chaya ka khali cup wapis Table per rakhte huwe kaha, Us ki ankho me Mayooshi jhalakne lagi thi maano wo bebas ho is mamle me.

Ashwin: (Frowns) Per iss halat me dusra kaam? Aise agar wo kaam karta raha to wo khud ko koi bara nuksaan pohancha baithe ga.


Manohar: kia kahu Ashwin! Bechare Bache ko kis muh se kahu ke wo aram ker le Maa Bachpan me dono behan bhai aur baap ko chorr gayi, Upar se jo baap tha wo zimedariyo ko nibhane ke kabil he nahi tha, aur akhir main 2 saal pehle wo bhi duniya se chala gaya bache ke sar per 18 saal ki umar me kanwari behan ki zimedari aa gayi iss liye School chorr ker kaam per lag gaya Zindagi itna sab us bache se le ker bhi khush na huwi ke kuch arsa pehle us ki behan ki medical report me Cancer dikh gaya, Sirf stage 2 hone ki wajha se cancer curable to hai lekin paise to us me bhi lagte hai na? ab ye bacha 18 ghante lagatar alag alag jagha per kaam ker ke paise ikathe ker raha hai apni behan ke liye.


Manohar ki baat sun Ashwin ki ankho me Aarav ke liye hamdardi jhalakne lagi, wo daikhne laga kis tarha bina kisi bhi cheez ki parwah kiye 1 jawan larka mehnat ker raha hai

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Wanhi bahir Aarav ek ek ker ke sab cheeze truck se bahir rakhne me laga huwa tha, Aarav 20 saal ka ek jawan larka tha us ke kapre purane the use daikh ker he pata lag sakta tha ke wo theek se khana nahi khata us ki ankho ke neeche dark circle ban rahe the der raat tak kaam karne ki wajha se.

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Sab cheeze bahir rakh ker Aarav Truck se neeche utarne ke liye truck ke kinare per aa gya, Aarav neechhe utarne he laga tha jab achanak us ka paon phisal gaya us ne khud ko bachane ke liye truck ki side ko pakar lia per wahan ek ek keel nikli huwi thi jo seedhi Aarav ke haath per lagi aur us ki hatheli cheer di.


Aarav neeche girte girte bacha lekin us ke haath se khoon behne laga tha, Us ne jaldi se apne haath ki muthi band ker li aur apne dusre haath se apni jeb me rakha romal nikalne laga,Romal nikal ker Aarav ne apne haath per lapait lia.

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Aarav ne dobara haath ki muthi bana li aur upar asman ki taraf daikhte huwe dard ko bardasht karne laga, December ka maheena tha aur Aarav ko mehsoos ho raha tha ke Snowfall hone wali hai.

*ring* *ring*


Abhi Aarav ko khare kuch der he huwi thi ke us ke phone per Call ane lagi Aarav ne apna keypad wala phone nikala jis ko type laga ker apas me jora huwa tha, Aarav ne screen daikhi aur thook nighal ker call attend ker li.


Aarav: Hello!


Caller: Kahan Reh gye larke? yahan hotel me customer ane shuru ho gye aur tumhara kuch pata he nahi hai, 1 ghante me mujhe tum yahan chahiye ho, warna kanhi aur daikh lena kaam.

Saamne se caller ne chilate huwe kaha jo us hotel ka malik tha jahan Aarav ne iss ke baad jana tha, Kaam se nikaalne ka sun ker Aarav ke chehre per pareshani ke bhav aa gye.

Aarav: Sorry! Main aa raha.


Caller ne jawab sun ker Call band ker di, Aarav ne ek lamba saans bhara aur dobara Chair ko uthane laga.


"Aarav" Ghar se bahir nikalte huwe Manohar ne Aarav ko awaz lagayi, Aarav ne saamne daikha to Manohar, Ashwin aur Parth teeno chalte huwe aa rahe the.


Manohar: (Frowns) Aarav ye tumhare haath per kia huwa hai?


Manohar ne aage barh Aarav ka haath pakra aur romal khol ker daikhne laga, Aarav ke haath se khoon lagatar beh raha tha Manohar ne gusse Aarav ki taraf daikha to Aarav ne apna sar jhuka lia.


Parth: Aarav Chal mere saath yanhi paas Clinic hai wahan se Dressing karwa ate hai.


Aarav: Us ki zaroorat nah....!

iss se pehle Aarav apni baat puri karta manohar ne use ghoor ke daikha to Aarav chup ker gaya, Aarav ko pata tha Manohar kabhi kisi per aise gussa nahi hota, Aarav ki use fikar thi wo Aarav ko apne bete ki tarha samajhta tha, iss liye wo Aarav per gussa ker jata tha jis ka Aarav ne bhi kabhi bura nahi mana, Waise bhi Manohar ne Aarav ki bohat madad bhi ki thi mushkil waqt me.


Manohar: Parth isse le ker ja! Aur tu fikar mat ker ye samaan hum rakh le gye Tere paise bhi nahi katu ga. Aur Aarav tere bhi nahi katu ga waise bhi tujhe jitna bhi rok lu to hotel me to jaye ga he? behtar ye he hai teri maram pati hone ke baad aram ker ke jaye

Aarav ko acha to nahi lagta tha aise Manohar se ehsaan lena per Manohar bhi apni jagha sahi tha, Parth ko saath iss liye bheja tha Manohar ne kiu ke agar akele Aarav ko bhejta to wo bina Clinic gye seedha hotel chala jata.


Paarth aur Aarav clinic ke liye nikalne lage jab achanak kale badalo ne pure Asman ko dhak lia, Tez hawa chalne lagi jo sab ke rongte khare ker rahi thi, Sab ne apne paas rakhi cheezo pakar lia.


Sab taraf shor sharaba mach gaya hawa se baraf urne lagi aur Paas ki cheeze dikhni bhi band ho gayi.


Ashwin: (Shouts) Sab ghar ki taraf chalo!


Ashwin ne chilate huwe kaha to sab ghar ki taraf bhaage, Hawaye sab ko peeche ki taraf push ker rahi thi, Sab apne gharo ki taraf bhaagna chah rahe the lekin hawa ki wajha se chalna bhi mushkil ho raha tha.


"Uncle!!!" Manohar ko peeche Aarav ki Awaz ayi


Manohar ne peeche ghoom ker daikha to Aarav ek jagha khara huwa tha, us ke gird ek circle bana huwa tha jis me peele rang ki roshni jagmagah rahi thi, sab kuch dhoondla tha per Aarav ke gird maano halki si hawa tak bhi nahi thi dheeme dheeme wo roshni aag lapto me badalne lagi.

Aarav: (Scared) Uncle me hil nahi pa raha apni jagha se!

Aarav ne chilaya Manohar bina kuch soche us ki taraf bhag gaya per jaise he wo Aarav ke kareeb gaya, Un lapto ne mano Manohar ko dhaka de ker peeche gira dia ho, Tabhi Aarav ke saamne hawa me kuch likha aa gaya.


[The tutorial tower can only be entered by certain player]


Lapte Aarav ke gird lipatne lagi, Per wo Aarav ko jala nahi rahi thi, Lekin Aarav tab bhi dar raha tha kiu ke wo bilkul bhi hil nahi pa raha tha, Aarav ki ankho me ansoo aa gye.


Aarav: (Crying) Uncle! main marna nahi chahta, Uncle please mujhe nikal lo yahan se, Please!!!!!!!


Aarav ke ye akhri Lafaz the jab wo aag ek dum se bharki aur khatam ho gayi wahan bachi to tooti huwi zameen, Wahan zameen thar tharane lagi, Manohar bhaag ker wahan gaya jahan Aarav tha lekin Wahan ab kuch nahi tha.


Manohar wanhi zameen per toote pathro ke idhar udhar phenkne laaga maano wahan un pathro ke beech Aarav ko dhoond raha ho, Abhi kuch pal pehle un ke saamne Aarav khara tha Lekin ab wahan us ka namu nishan nahi tha, zameen aur zor se thar tharane lagi to Parth ne aage barh manohar ko pakar ke uthaya to Manohar us se chutne ki koshis karne laga,


Parth: Uncle! khud ko sambhaliye, hume yahan se nikalna ho ga,


Manohar: Kahan jaye! Hum Aarav ko chorr ker kanhi nahi ja rahe, Aarav meri awaz sun raha hai na tu? kahan hai tu?


Manohar ki ankhe bheeg gayi us ki awaz rondhaya gayi, Parth bhi shock me tha lekin wahan ke halat daikh ker use apne emotions side per rakh ker soch samajh ker faisle lene parne the.


Parth Manohar ko kheenchte huwe ghar ke andar le gaya, Aur darwaza lock ker dia, Manohar us se chutne ki koshis karta raha, Aur cheekhte huwe Aarav ko pukarta raha.


Manohar: Aarav!!! Aarav!!!

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Charo taraf gehra andhera tha kuch nazar nahi aa raha tha, un lapto me se Aarav seedha iss andhere me aa dooba tha, us ke mann me ek he sawal tha?

"Kia Main Mar Gaya Hu?"

Ye soch ker he Aarav ko khud per gussa ata ja raha tha, use ye bhi nahi pata tha ke wo kaise mara hai? wo aag na to jala rahi thi na garam thi phir wo kaise mar gaya?Aarav ye sab soch he raha tha jab uss ke saamne dobara kuch likha aa gaya


[Welcome, Player]


Aarav: [Frowns] Player ye kia hai? Aur kahan Welcome?


[You must survive in this tower while trying to go back to your world]

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[Name- Aarav Arya
Level- 1
Rank- F
Title- None

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HP- 27
MP- 13
Strength- 22
Agility- 22
Endurance- 23
Stamina- 19
Intelligence- 17

(Stats Points: 0)

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Skill- 2
[Will to live] ~ [Slash (E)]

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[Weapon- None]



[New Quest Available]

[Quest: To complete the quest, you have to kill the orc king, The location of orc king will be given below


(Rewards)
(1) Orc king's Blood Axe
(2) 20 stats point (every party member)
(3) MVP will get Additonal 20 Stats Point
(4) You can go back to home

Time Limit: 7 Days
Quest Failure Penalty: (Death) ]


[You are now entering the Tutorial Tower]


[Good luck]
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[To ye tha pehla update, Start hamesha mushkil hota hai iss liye iss per bohat waqt laga, Umeed hai ap logo ka pyaar is update per daikhne ko mile ga, Saath bane rahiye ga, Aur like ker ke maze ke Reviews dena mat bhuliye ga, Next Update Wednesday ki shaam ko aa jaye ga tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!!!]

Superb beginning outstanding update

 

[Smith_15]

Update 2 please

 

[Damha]

Aarav: (Crying) Uncle! main marna nahi chahta, Uncle please mujhe nikal lo yahan se, Please!!!!!!!

Sach me ye line parh ker dard huwa....Kis tarha Aarav ko iss halat me bhi manohar per yaqeen tha ke wo use bachaye ga....Aur ye reaction bohat natural laga aisa nahi ke Aarav bahadur dikhane ki koshis ki gayi ho ap ne dikhaya ke chahe Aarav jutna bhi bahudar bane andar se uss ka mann ek bache jaisa hai

Manohar: Kahan jaye! Hum Aarav ko chorr ker kanhi nahi ja rahe, Aarav meri awaz sun raha hai na tu? kahan hai tu?

Iss update me Manohar mera sab se favorite character tha....Kaise wo Aarav ki parwah karta tha....Uss ke chot lagne per kaise us ne parth ko sab kuch chorr ker jane ko kaha aur kis tarha wo bina kuch soche aag me kud gaya.....Beshak Aarav ke liye wo Baap jaisa ho ga he.

[Quest: To complete the quest, you have to kill the orc king, The location of orc king will be given below


(Rewards)
(1) Orc king's Blood Axe
(2) 20 stats point (every party member)
(3) MVP will get Additonal 20 Stats Point
(4) You can go back to home

Time Limit: 7 Days
Quest Failure Penalty: (Death) ]


[You are now entering the Tutorial Tower]


[Good luck]

To Aarav ab ek Tutorial tower ke andar ja raha hai......Ap ne MVP likha hai matlab wahan aur bhi log ho gye jin ke saath Aarav team up kare ga ya compete kare ga.....Aur kia Aarav Orc king ko Maar ke wapis aa sake ga?

 

[Damha]

Sach me ap ne mehnat ki hai update per aur Cards bhi ap ne sahi edit kiye hai real manhwa lag rahi hai....Bus Rest lete huwe sakoon se story ko continue rakhna aur sirf iss storie ko likhna kisi aur ko start mat karna.... Mostly writers ek likhte huwe dusri bhi start ker dete hai aur phir dono beech me chorr jate hai....Update maze ka tha Agle Update ka besabri se intizaar rahe ga

 

[Damha]

Aur revo aur like ki fikar mat karna wo jaise jaise storie aage barhe gi revo aur likes khud barh jaye gye bus ap ek strong plot tayar karna.

 

[piredeep singh Meena]

Bro peli bat story keliye samey ho to aagla update dena bro or aapne sal bahar niji kama samey dekho fir story puri kar paoge nahi or kisi kam se bahar ya do sri kanatiri to ham se sampark kar 10 din kam 3 din jada lo bro par sampark batna bro

 

[KDM 1994]

congratulations bhai new threads ke liye or all the best

 

[kris123h]

Great update

 

[Smith_15]

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Bro peli bat story keliye samey ho to aagla update dena bro or aapne sal bahar niji kama samey dekho fir story puri kar paoge nahi or kisi kam se bahar ya do sri kanatiri to ham se sampark kar 10 din kam 3 din jada lo bro par sampark batna bro

Samajh nahi ap ne kia likha hai, Kia dobara bataye gye kia keh rahe hai ap?