Fantasy Vengeance ~ Revenge is sweet [ᏚᎩᏚᎢᎬᎷ]

[Salty~Otaku]

That's it for the Forged Bonds arc, everyone! This was the longest update of the arc, with over 9k words. Writing this one was definitely a challenge, but it’s been a rewarding experience

Some characters may have earned your hate, while others grew closer to your heart. Either way, I hope you enjoyed this journey as much as I did!

So, you know what time it is... vacation time! But don’t get excited too quickly....this time, I’m not going anywhere just yet. My exams are coming up, and it wouldn't be fair to take two breaks back-to-back, so I'm postponing my usual vacation

I also had to pause my part-time job temporarily to focus on studies, so things will be shifting a bit. Instead of our usual 2-3 updates per week, I'll be posting one updates every Saturday night at 11:59 PM. That'll be the schedule for this next arc

Speaking of which... get ready for the next arc: Carnival of Death! You might have some guesses about what’s coming, but let’s see what happens


If you want the next update by next Saturday, show this one some love with 160 likes. After that, the target will be 130 likes per update for this arc

Hope you all enjoy what's ahead. Love you guys, Sayonara!!!

*New Poster*

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[HONEY SINGH14]

Nice update bhai

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Awesome Start
Best of Luck for future
Story ka start tu acha hai
I hope so ke plot bhi acha hoga

Koshis puri hai ke ek achi storie ap ke saath share ker saku ga bus ap aise he saath nibhate rehna

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Congratulations for new thread bro keep going keep posting..

Thanks

 

[Munib]

UPDATE 2 ~
[THE PROMISE]
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Recap

[You must survive in this tower while trying to go back to your world]


[Name- Aarav Arya
Level- 1
Rank- F
Title- None
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HP- 27
MP- 13
Strength- 22
Agility- 22
Endurance- 23
Stamina- 19
Intelligence- 17
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Skill- 2
[Will to live] ~ [Slash (E)]
****
Weapon- None]

[New Quest Available]


[Quest: To complete the quest, you have to kill the orc king, The location of orc king will be given below


(Rewards)
(1) Orc king's Blood Axe
(2) 20 stats points (every party member)
(3) MVP will get Additonal 20 Stats Points
(4) You can go back to home

Time Limit: 7 Days
Quest Failure Penalty: (Death)]

[You are now entering the Tutorial Tower]

[Good luck]

Ab aage...

Manali
Night~ 11:46 PM

"Sorry Bhayia"

Aarav ke bazoo per sar rakhe leti uss ki behan Urvi ne halke se kaha, Us ki ankho me se ansoo nikalne ko the, Aarav apni socho me gum tha, lekin apni behan ki Runasi Awaz sun us ka dhayan apni behan ki taraf ho gya, Aarav ne us ko laite huwe side se gale laga lia.


Abhi dono hospital se wapis aye the, Urvi ki kuch dino se tabiyat kharab ho rahi thi, har waqt bukhar rehne laga tha jism me bewajah dard uthne laga tha, jis ke chalte Aarav us ko zabardasti hospital le gaya.


Doctor Aarav ke Purane dost ke Papa he the iss liye unho ne fees kam karwa di, Report me to time tha lekin Doctor Shirish ek kabil doctor the, unho ne pehle he apni raye dete huwe keh dia ke ye Cancer ke syptoms hai.


Ye sun Urvi ko khud se zada apni bhai ki fikar hone lagi, kiu ke agar ye sach tha to us ka bhai apni puri koshis karne wala tha apni behan ke ilaaj ke liye.


Pehle he us ki wajha se Aarav ne khud parhai chorr di aur kam ker ke Urvi ko parhane ke liye mehnat ker raha tha, Urvi ke laakh mana karne per bhi wo na maana aur zabardasti urvi ko School bhejta raha.


Urvi ko andaza tha ke us ke bhai ke paas Treatment ke liye paise nahi the, iss liye wo mann ne me dua mangti rahi ke Doctor sirish ka khayal galat sabit ho jaye, per aj jab wo report lene gye aur wahan stage 2 ke cancer ke bare me unhe pata laga to dono ke chehre ke rang Urr gye.


Urvi khud ko tab se sambhale huwi thi lekin apne bhai ke gale lag us ki himmat jawab de gayi aur wo rone lagi.


Urvi: (Crying) Sorry bhayia!


Urvi bus gale lagi roti rahi us ke muh se Sorry ke siwa koi aur lafz nahi nikal raha tha, Apni behan ko yun rota daikh Aarav ne us ko aur zor se baahon me bheench lia.


Aarav: Pagal ho gayi hai kia? Tu kis baat ki mafi maang rahi hai? Ab bimari puch ker thori ati hai.


Aarav khud buri tarha dara huwa tha apni Behan ki halat ke baare me sun ker lekin us ne kabhi apni kamzoor halat apni behan ko nahi dikhayi thi, uss ke liye wo hamesha ek mazboot bhai ki tarha bane rehne ki koshis karta jis ke agosh me us ki behan sab duniya ki takleefo se azad Aram ker sake.

Lekin aj apni behan ko yun rota daikh usse khud takleef ho rahi thi, Aarav ne ek lamba Saans bhara aur kuch pal shaant rehne ke baad chehre per halki muskurahat saja li.


Aarav: Urvi! Hum ne bohat se mushkil waqt ek saath daikhe hai, Maa ke bina zindagi guzarne ka mushkil waqt, Sharab ki aur juwe ki latt ki wajha se papa ke saath wo karze wale dino ke bure waqt, Phir Papa ke chale jane ke baad puri duniya se akele larte huwe waqt, Lekin tujhe pata hai? in sab waqto se main ne kia seekha hai?


Urvi apna sar uthaye apne bhai ki taraf daikhne lagi, Aarav in sab takleefo me bhi chehre per ek muskurahat sajaye baat ker raha tha, Us ka bhai hamesha se aisa he tha, chahe jo bhi ho jaye, Us ke chehre ki ye muskurahat se Urvi ke dil ko rahat mil jati thi.

Aarav: In sab palo me mujhe Ehsaas huwa! Waqt chahe jitna bhi bura kiu na ho us ne guzar he jana hota, jaise ache pal hamesha nahi rehte aur guzar jate hai waise he bure pal bhi guzar jate hai, Mujhe in dono palo me tujh se ek he cheez chahiye.

Us ke bhai ko us se kuch chahiye ye sun Urvi ne apne ansoo saaf kiye aur seedhe ho ker baith gayi, Maano puch rahi ho ke us ke bhai ko us se kia chahiye? Uss ki ye harkat daikh Aarav ki muskurahat aur gehri ho gayi.


Aarav: (sigh) Vishwas! Sirf tera Yaqeen chahiye mujhe, wo yaqeen jis me tere mann me sirf ek baat ho, "Cahahe Jaisa bhi waqt kiu na aa jaye mera bhai sab theek ker sakta hai".

Aarav ki baat sun Urvi ke Chehre per muskurahat aa gayi, kahan wo soch rahi thi us ka bhai pata nahi kia mange ga, per us ka jawab sun us ne khudh ke sar per he haath marr dia, Aarav ne apna haath Urvi ke kareeb ker dia.


Aarav: (Smiles) bata kare gi mujh per aisa Vishwas?

Urvi Apne banhe philaye aage barhi aur apne bhai ko dobara gale laga lia aur us ke gaalo ko chum lia.

Urvi: (Blush) Haan ji! Mujhe ap per pura Vishwas hai.


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[You are now entering the Tutorial Tower]

[Good luck]


"Ye sab kia ho raha hai?"


Aarav ne chilate huwe kaha, yun Achanak us ke saamne andhere me ye sab likha ane laga, pehle he wo khud ko mara huwa samajh ke dara huwa tha upar se ye us ke saath hone laga tha.


Aarav: (Scared) Koi mujhe bataye ga ye sab kia hai? Hello koi hai kia yahan?


Aarav awaz dene laga ke shayad koi sun le, per kisi ka jawab na sun Aarav mayoos ho gya, tabhi achanak us ko apne neeche wohi cirlcle dobara banta dikhayi dia.

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Aarav: (Frightened) Nahi Nahi! Dobara nahi.


Wo circle dobara chamakne laga aur us me se lapte nikli, Aarav ko un lapto ke ilawa kuch aur nazar nahi aya , Aarav ki body ek dum se dabao me aa gayi aur us ke saamne se lapte hatne lagi.


Lapte khatam hote he Aarav ne saamne Daikha to wo ek jungle me khara tha, Jungle jagha jagha se baraf se dhaka huwa tha, yani wo kisi barfile ilaqe me tha, Per Sawal ye tha ke konse barfile ilaqe me?


Aarav: (Frowns) Ye konsi jagh....!


"Where the Fuck I am?"

Iss se pehle Aarav apni baat puri karta us ko peeche se kis larke ki awaz ayi us ne ghoom ker daikha to us ke peeche use kuch log khare dikhayi diye, Aarav tezi se un ki taraf bhaag para.


Aarav: Oye! idhar daikho, main yahan hu.

Aarav bhaag ker un ke paas unhe bulate huwe jane laga, Unhe daikh ker Aarav ko ek umeed ki kiran nazar aa rahi thi, use khushi ho rahi thi wo yahan akela nahi hai, us ke haath se khoon abhi bhi beh raha tha jis ke dard se use khud ke zinda hone ka ehsaas ho raha tha.

"Ochitsuke!"

Un me se ek larke ne Aarav ko daikh ker kahan to Aarav uss ki shakal daikhne laga kiu ke us ka kaha kuch bhi Aarav ko samajh nahi aya tha.

Aarav: (confuse) konsa suke?


Aarav ne dhayan se daikha to wo larka dikhne me chinese lag raha tha, Aarav ne bakiyo ko daikha to baki bhi indian nahi lag rahe the, Wahan Aarav ko mila ker 6 log the 4 larke aur 2 larkiye,


Sab ke chehre per khoof tha waisa he khoof jo Aarav ke chehre per tha, Jis se Aarav ko ehsaas ho gya ke unhe bhi kuch nahi pata aur wo bhi Aarav ki tarha he yahan aye hai, Un sab me sirf wo chinese larka tha jo iss Situation me calm tha Per aisa kiu tha ye pata lagane ke liye us se baat karni zaroori thi, Aarav ne us larke ki taraf ishara karte huwe dheeme lehje me bola.


Aarav: Chinese?


Larka: No Chinese! Japan

[New Skill Available]

[Enhanced Language Understanding]

[Capabilities: The user has the ability to understand, decipher and translate any written and typed language into the user's own native tongue, or through subliminal intuition of what by physical communication means. This ability may even employ telepathic faculty, where the psychic energy is read (by hearing or sight) to understand what the message is meant to convey.]

[3 intelligence points will be deducted]

[(Accept)~(Cancel)]


Apne saamne dobara cheeze likhi daikh Aarav dar gaya, Aarav ne bohat kam parhai ki thi jis ke chalte use English samajh nahi ati thi, Us ne thori bohat jo English sikhi thi to wo Manali me ane wale tourist logo ko bolte sun seekhi thi.


"Accept"

Wo japanese larka ek dum se bola to sab ka dhayan us ki taraf chala gaya, Sab ke chehro per dar saaf daikha ja sakta tha, Us larke ne sab ki taraf nazre ghoomayi aur dobara bola.

Larka: Trust me guys! Just Click on Accept, I will Explain everything later.


Larke ki baat sun Sab ne ek dusre ki taraf daikha jaise ek dusre se puch rahe ho ke kia karna chahiye? Larke ki baat sun ye to sab ko pata chal gaya tha ke sab ke saamne Same cheez he likhi aa rahi hai.


Larka: I'll count to 3! After 3 let's do it together.


Larke ki baat sab ne haan me sar hila dia, kiu ke un ke paas koi aur Raasta bhi nahi tha, abhi tak jo un ke saath huwa tha us ke baare me kisi ko kuch nahi pata tha, Wanhi us japanese larke ki awaz me Confidence tha, to sab ne us per yaqeen karne ka faisla ker lia.

Larka: 3, 2, 1 click!

Larke ke 1 kehte he sab ne hawa me he Accept per ungli maar di, un ko daikh Aarav ne bhi wohi kia, click karte he.


*Aahhh!!*

Sab ke Sar me ek tez dard ki lehar uthi, Maano koi un ke sar ko kisi cheez se cheer raha ho, Sab ghutno ke bal gir gye, Wanhi Aarav seedha barf per gir gaya us ki naak se khoon behne laga, Ankho ke aage Andhera chaane laga.


[3 Intelligence points deducted]

[You have acquired the skill
(Enhanced Language Understanding)]

Ye Notification Aarav ki ankho ke saamne aya aur us ka pura sar ka dard khatam hone laga, Aarav ne apne haatho ko neeche rakha aur un per zor de ker uthna chaha, tabhi use us ke gale me se ulti upar ati mehsoos huwi, Jis ko us ne bahir udhel dia, aur wanhi ghutno ke bal baitha khanste huwe lambi lambi saanse bharne laga.


*Cough* *Cough*

*huh* *huh*


"Kuch behtar mehsoos huwa kia?"


Aarav ke kaano me awaz ayi to us ne sar utha ker daikha ye wohi Japanese larka tha, Lekin us ki hindi sun Aarav heran ho gya, Abhi kuch lamhe pehle is larke se English bhi nahi boli ja rahi thi, Lekin ab hindi aise bol raha tha mano Mumbai me he puri zindagi guzari ho us ne, Us larke ko bhi jaise Aarav ki herani ki wajha samajh aa gayi thi.


Larka: (Chuckle) Heran mat ho! Sab Samjhata hu pehle khare ho jao.


Larke ne apna haath aage barhaya to Aarav us ke haath ka sahara le ker khara ho gya, Sab logo ki halat Aarav se kuch khaas alag nahi thi, Sab lambi lambi saanse bhar rahe the unki ankhe laal ho rahi thi puri, Wanhi 1 larki ki halat un sab se behtar thi, sar me us ke bhi dard tha lekin bakiyo ki tarha us ne ulti nahi ki thi.


Japanese larka: Great! Lagta hai tumhari Intelligence bohat high hai, Kitne points hai Intelligence me tumhare?


Larke ne larki ki taraf haath barhate huwe kaha, jis ko us larki ne side per ker dia aur khud apne sahare khari ho gayi, aur garajti nazar larke per daal ke boli.


Larki: 72!


Larka: Damn! Koi shak nahi tum per itna faraq kiu nahi para.


Un ki baate sun baki sab jo khamoosh the un me se ek larka gusse se bol he para.


Larka 2: (annoyed) Agar tumhari baate ho gayi ho to batana chaho gye ke yahan ye sab kia chal raha hai?


Larka: Oops, Sorry! to main apne naam se shuru karta hu, mera naam Daisuke takahashi hai, main Japan PSIA (Public Security Intelligence Agency) Agent hu, Waise baki sab bhi agar apna naam bata dete to aage baat karna Easy hota.

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Sab ka muh Daisuke Ke PSIA agent hone se he khul gaya, Lekin un ke saath jo kuch ho chuka tha us ke saamne ye kuch nahi tha.


Koi bhi pehal nahi ker raha tha sab khamoosh khare ek dusre ko daikh rahe the, Jab kuch der koi kuch nahi bola to Aarav apna introduction dene ke liye aage ho gya.


Aarav: (Awkward) Hello! Mera Naam Aarav hai, Main India, Manali se hu, Aur mujhe kuch nahi pata yahan kia ho raha hai.

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"Andrew! Main nigeria se hu, Ek Army Officer, aur mujhe bhi nahi pata ye sab kia hai"

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Un me se ek aur Admi bola dikhne me wo kafi mazboot insaan lag raha tha 34 ke paas to lag rahi thi us ki age, us ke upar Army ki job sahi bhi lag rahi thi.


"Hi! Isabelle Adjani here, Main France se hu ek doctor."

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Dusri larki ne apna introduction dete huwe kaha, Isabelle ek Heart specalist thi Surgery Department me, Dikhne me khubsoorat thi.


"Seriously! Hum sach me iss waqt ye ker rahe hai, Hum nursery School me nahi hai jo introduction, Hume yahan se wapis jane ke baare me sochna chahiye, Agar Wapis jaane ka Raasta pata hai to batao? pata hai mujhe kitni mushkil ho rahi hai thand me?"


Daisuke: (Smirk) Got It! AP ke pita ji kisi Bari company ke owner hai right?


Larka: Wait! Tumhe kais....Wait Wait, Ye sab planning thi, Oh my god main kaise tumhari baato me aa gaya? *Huh* Batao kitne Paise chahiye tumhe, Mere Dad muh per maar de gye tumhare paise bus Keemat bolo, batao kitne chahiye? Bloody Cheap Bastards.


Daisuke: Beta ji baat suno, Sab se pehle to Baap ke paiso per itna nahi urte, Dusri baat hum yahan koi tumhe kidnap ker ke nahi laye, Saath rehna hai to raho warna Ja sakte ho jahan jana chaho.


Larka: Youuu!


Andrew: Kid! Abhi larne ka waqt nahi hai, Aur naam batane se tumhara koi nuksan nahi hone wala, Just trust us.


Larke ko gussa to aa raha tha per Andrew ki baat bhi sahi thi Naam batane se kisi ka nuksaan nahi ho raha tha.


Larka: (Tsk) Vansh Sayani.

Itna bol ker Vansh chup ho gya kisi aur ne bhi use cherna sahi nahi samjha, aur unho ne aage barhna he sahi samjha.


"Kim Yoo-Jung! 19 Years old,From south Korea, Student, Also in Archery team"


Yoo-Jung ne apna introduction dia aur dobara chup ker ke khari ho gayi, Abhi tak Unho ne Yoo-Jung ka chehra nahi daikha tha kiu ke us ne mask laga ke rakha tha, Us ke kandhe per Bow aur Arrows bhi the jaise wo yahan ane se pehle Shooting practice he ker rahi thi.

Daisuke: Good! Sab ka Inroduction ho gya ab mujhe bhi samjhane me Easy ho ga, to hum PSIA wale pichle 2 Saal se ek case per kaam ker rahe, balke ye kehna sahi ho ga pure world ki intelligence force ek case per kaam ker rahi hai,2 Saal pehle Achanak 6 Log alag alag countries se achanak gayab ho gye, Jaise hum sab Achanak gayab ho gye, After 29 Days un me se sirf 4 wapis aye, Un ke parents aur relatives ne police Report bhi karwayi Police ne simply Human Trafficking ka case samjha isse, But Intteligence ka dhayan un per tab gaya Jab baki 4 logo me achanak supernatural powers dikhi.


Vansh: What! matlab kuch bhi, Apni taraf se banate ja rahe ho sab kuch.


Daisuke: Exactly! Mujhe iss Reaction ki he umeed thi iss liye main ne sab ko pehle Skill Accept karne ko kaha, Tumhe khud experience karne ke baad bhi yaqeen nahi ho raha, khud Socho tum 6 Alag Countires ki language Achanak se kaise samajh pa rahe ho?

Daisuke ki baat sab ke mann Se shak khatam ho gya wanhi vansh ne sirf gusse se apna muh pherr liya.

Daisuke: Continuing! Un supernatural Powers ko daikh Intelligence ka Dhayan un per Gaya...........


*Grrrrr*


Iss se pehle ke daisuke apni baat aage barhata tez gurahat ne sab ke rongte khare ker diye, Awaz itni unchi thi ke dur se bhi us ko saaf sun sakte the.


Daisuke: (Frightened) Everyone! Please Calm down.


Daisuke ne kehte huwe halke se ghoomna shuru kia, Saamne ka nazara daikh Daisuke ke bhi pair kaanp uthe, Un ke saamne iss waqt 30 ke kareeb Wolves gura rahe the, Lekin ye cheez unhe dara rahi thi, Inhe dara raha tha un ka size, Ek ek Wolf size me Normal Wolf se Triple tha.

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Daisuke: (Gulp) Koi koshis bhi mat karna! Ye normal wolf nahi hai Demon Wolf hai, sirf 1 se larna he mushkil hai hamare liye.


Isabelle: (Scared) To....To....Toooo....Hum kia kare ab?


Daisuke: Wait! mere signal per sab bhaage gye.


Daisuke ne ishara de ker un sab ko roka, Wolf me se ek chalte huwe un ki taraf ane laga dheeme dheeme wo bhagne laga us ke saath baki sab bhi in sab ki taraf bhaage.

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*Kabooom*


Daisuke ne ek Gernade jis ko us ne pehle he unpin ker dia tha sahi waqt per wolf ki taraf phenk dia.


Daisuke: Runnnn!!!!


Daisuke ka ishara milte he sab dusri taraf bhagne lage, Wo sab kisi pahar ke upar the jis ki wajha se un ke peeche Dhalan aa gayi jis per wo Tezi se bhaag paa rahe the, per sirf Ek galti Aur wo usi Dhalan per ghoomate huwe Wolves ka shikar ban sakte the.


Daisuke: (Shouts) Sab log bina peeche daikhe seedhe bhaago!


Vansh: Hume aur kitni der bhaagna ho ga?


Daisuke: Pata nahi!!! Pehli baat to ye wolves yahan hone he nahi chahiye the, Map ke hisaab se in ka Den hum se bohat Distance per tha, Phir in wolves ko yahan konsi cheez kheench layi?


*Blood*


Aarav ke zehan me achanak click huwa, Aarav ke haath se khoon beh raha tha aur wolves khoon door se he soongh sakte the.


Aarav: Kia meri wajha se?


Aarav ko jaise he iss cheez ka ehsaas huwa use khud per gussa ane laga, Isse Confirm karne ka ek he raasta tha Aarav bhaagte huwe Bakiyo se alag hone laga aur jaisa uss ne socha tha waise he mostly Wolves bakiyo ko chorr ker us ki taraf bhaagne lage.


Daisuke: Aaaaarav!!!


Daisuke ne Aarav ko alag hote daikha to us ne us ko wapis bulana chaha per Aarav bina kuch sune bhaagta raha, Daisuke ne khud Aarav ke paas jana chaha per beech me bohat zada Wolves the jis wajha se wo us taraf na ja saka.


*Swish*


Achanak ek Arrow Daisuke ke saamne se hote Aarav ke peeche bhag rahe wolves ki taraf gaya jis ko wolves ne dodge ker lia, Daisuke ne Side per daikha to Yoo-Jung Bhaagte huwe lagatar Arrows Wolves ki taraf chalati ja rahi thi.


Daisuke ko us ki bhi fikar ho rahi thi aise Arrows chalate huwe bhaagna Khatrnak tha, Daisuke ko apni taraf daikhta daikh Us ne ankho se he ishara ker dia Maano keh rahi ho ke wo ye ker sakti hai, Jis per Daisuke bhi seedhe bhaagne laga.


Daisuke: I'll Freakin' Kill you if any of you die!


Wanhi Jab Aarav ne apni taraf Arrows ate daikhe to us ke chehre per halki si muskurahat aa gayi, Arrows ko dodge karne ki wajha se Wolves ki speed slow ho rahi thi jis se Aarav ko distance barhane ka moka mil raha tha.


Per ye khushi kuch palo ki he thi, bhaagte huwe Aarav ko apne saamne ek khayi dikhi, Khayi daikh ker Aarav apne Kadmo per zor dete huwe ruka.


*Grrrr*


Per Us ke rukte he ek wolf Aarav per kud para aur us ne Aarav ke kandhe per apne daant gara diye jis Aarav ka balance kharab huwa aur wo larkharate huwe seedhe khayi me gir gaya.


Aarav: i'm Sorry!!!!! Urvi.
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[Aj ke liye itna he guys, Umeed karta hu ap logo ko update pasand aye ga, Pichle update per ap logo ne bohat pyaar diya jis ke chalte main ne iss update ki length barha di hai, Umeed hai iss update per bhi ap logo ka Pyaar daikhne ko mile ga, Next Update Saturday Evening ko tab tak ke liye, Sayonara!]

Awesome Update
Second Update main hi Hero Gaya
Future main tu uske lagne hain sahi se phir

 

[Salty~Otaku]

(1)first regular update dena like aur review ki tension mat lena story regular Hogi to apne aap sab Kuchh ho jaega like bhi aaenge review bhi aaenge bus update regular hone chahie.

Brother zada Like aur Reviews ki itni parwah nahi hai mujhe, Lekin jo storie parh rahe hai un ke Reviews milte hai to khushi milti hai jis agla update likhne me aur bhi maza ata hai, Ap bus aise he saath nibhate jana, Aur jahan tak baat hai regular updates ki to brother mera Update ke beech 2 din break lene ka ye he maksad tha, Main chahta to har roz update de sakta tha, lekin kab tak roz roz deta, Kuch waqt ke baad main thak jata aur bahane banane lag jata ke ghar ke kaamo masroof hu ya kisi ki shadi hai, Iss liye iss storie ko main khud per bojh nahi banana chahta, Aur update pehle ki tarha daily na ata daikh readers bhi bura maan jate iss liye main, Iss liye main jaldbaazi me storie kharab nahi karu ga, Araam se 2 din ka break le le ker storie ko ache se chalau ga.

(2nd) Jyada sex repeat sex Mat Karna Ek ke sath Ek Bar dikha diya बार-बार uske sath mat dikhana

Brother storie Adventure aur Fantasy per zada chale gi Harem aur Adultery us ka ek part hai Sex ho ga zaroor per har update me sex nahi ho ga

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Congratulations for New Start, Jesa Tumne kaha story Response ke hisabh se chalegi to writer sahab aap bhi update diye huye time or ek achi length ka rakhenge to Q nahi tumhri story ko response milega.
Yaha par kuch writers acha response milne ke baad bhi story ko aevi adhar chhod ke or mahino mahino ke update dete, bas woh mat karna....

Ek silent readers...

Bilkul storie response per chale gi aur mujhe bohat acha response mila hai, Update bhi time per ate rahe gye, Aur jahan tak length ki baat hai, Brother Update ka start aur End pehle se decide ho ga koshis hai ke sab cheezo ko cleraly likho per Update lamba karne ke liye befazool cheeze nahi likhu ga, Normal Updates 2K se 5K words ke under ho gye aur Mega updates 5K+ words ke ho gye.


mere pyaar silent Reader ke liye!

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Best of luck brother.. ye genres ab tak sirf anime, manga ya novels me dekhne ko milta tha but ab khushi hui k ye genre ab yahan bhi barh raha hai.

Yup! All thanks to Werewolf

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Starting bohat achi thi.. time k sath mazeed jaan'ne ko milega characters k baare me.. system ka bhi pata chal gaya k kis tarah ka system hai.. so yahan 2 worlds dekhne ko milegi ek system wali or ek normal world.. or aarav ko ab khud ko upgrade karna hoga nayi skills or stats k sath.

Till then, Ganbatte!!!

Sahi guess kiye! Aage cheeze aur bhi interesting hoti jaye gi


Arigatou!!!

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Superb beginning outstanding update

Thanks

 

[Salty~Otaku]

Sach me ye line parh ker dard huwa....Kis tarha Aarav ko iss halat me bhi manohar per yaqeen tha ke wo use bachaye ga....Aur ye reaction bohat natural laga aisa nahi ke Aarav bahadur dikhane ki koshis ki gayi ho ap ne dikhaya ke chahe Aarav jutna bhi bahudar bane andar se uss ka mann ek bache jaisa hai


Iss update me Manohar mera sab se favorite character tha....Kaise wo Aarav ki parwah karta tha....Uss ke chot lagne per kaise us ne parth ko sab kuch chorr ker jane ko kaha aur kis tarha wo bina kuch soche aag me kud gaya.....Beshak Aarav ke liye wo Baap jaisa ho ga he.

To Aarav ab ek Tutorial tower ke andar ja raha hai......Ap ne MVP likha hai matlab wahan aur bhi log ho gye jin ke saath Aarav team up kare ga ya compete kare ga.....Aur kia Aarav Orc king ko Maar ke wapis aa sake ga?

Wow! Itne long review ki itni jaldi umeed nahi ki thi main ne, Aage daikhte rahiye cheeze aur bhi interesting hoti jaye gi

Sach me ap ne mehnat ki hai update per aur Cards bhi ap ne sahi edit kiye hai real manhwa lag rahi hai....Bus Rest lete huwe sakoon se story ko continue rakhna aur sirf iss storie ko likhna kisi aur ko start mat karna.... Mostly writers ek likhte huwe dusri bhi start ker dete hai aur phir dono beech me chorr jate hai....Update maze ka tha Agle Update ka besabri se intizaar rahe ga

Bhai dusra ka socha bhi nahi hai iss me he hawa tight huw huwi hai, Cards itne mushkil nahi hai lekin mehnat hai agar lagan ho to banane mushkil nahi lagte

Aur revo aur like ki fikar mat karna wo jaise jaise storie aage barhe gi revo aur likes khud barh jaye gye bus ap ek strong plot tayar karna.

Brother jitne mile hai wo he bohat hai mere liye zada ki khushi to hi gi lekin lalach nahi hai.