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Thriller Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - All Hell Broke Loose (Completed)

Part 3 kaa title kya hona caahiye?

  • Waah! Life Ho Toh Aisi - The Merchant Of Death

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Bhai review kaise du review k layak update to do. Normal update dete to kuch likhta v tarif me but ye out of the world hai. Iski tarif k lie words hi nahi mil rahe. Puri story ka sbse best part laga 2.0 ki jo story sunayi gayi h issi se pta lagta h ki 3rd part story ka kitna bhayanak hoga. Bhai sach bolu to apki story ab iss level pe pahunch gayi h ki iski tarif k lie mujhe kuch smjh nahi aa raha h. Anaa k sath ka scene kaafi sahi h. Jis tarah se wo rone ko ho gyi thi usi se pta lagta hai ki wo AP se bahut pyar karti h. Sath hi kaafi sensitive v hai. Aage chal k isse problem v aa sakti h kyunki AP ki lyf m problem aur khoon kharaba na ho ye sambhav hi nahi upar se 2.0 k aane k baad to aur v tabahi machegi. Wo ladkiyon se chipakta nahi to Anaa k case m bhi use mushkil ayegi bahut sari. Ek baat to hai Hari jaise cases k lie 1.0 hi sahi h agr 2.0 hota to laakh mana karne k bawjud sbke samne un gundon ko hadd se jyada buri maut deta wo sunta hi nahi kisi ki aur isse sab students ki fat jati. Chahta to mai hun ki Anaa k sath relationship bana rahe but story m aage kucg v ho sakta h writer kya karega bhagwan jane. But still av tak dekhne se lag raha h ki Anaa AP ko le k really serious h aur jis tarah se AP Ki chot pe uska reaction h kaafi sahi tha sab.
Raha uske baad k update ki baat to bhai wo wo wo kamal h. Isse phle v fight scene likhi h aapne ek se ek fight scene but kisi m itna bhayanak chehra nahi dikha AP ka. Iss wale ne to aapne kamal kar diya. Bina fight scene dikhaye kya darr dikhaya h. Rongte khade ho gaye. Merchant of Death bilkul sahi naam pada h. Jis type ka dar h usse ek baat to saaf h ki league se koii av AP se panga nahi lega but aisa mujhe v lagta h ki bahut logo ki baddua lag chuki h 1st m hospital m jo mara uske family ki(kaali k tym uske ghar enquiry huyi thi), uske baad Av isne c bola ki League ye sb mil k maar dalenge tujhe. 2.0 kitna v kaabil ho but insbse ek sath to wo lad nahi payega kahi islie apni gang khadi kar raha ho. Kya hota h ye dejhne layak hoga. Pls post asap.


Eagerly waiting for next update brother
 

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Update-217(Destruction)




Gudla Ek choti si district hai just humaari city k bagal mein I don't know tumlog ko yaad hai ki nahi but thoda flashback mein jaao jab Deva Bhai ne bataaya Tha ki woh kaise politics mein aaye kaise ek baahubali leader tha Jagdish Bhati usko maara and then Haryana mein sarkaar banaai.. Darsall Jagdish Bhatti bahot bada Baahubali neta tha or apne area k logon kaa bhagwaan tha woh.. I mean uske area mein mostly gandu log he they.. Cheat, steal, and snatch.. Mostly log gundey he they 20% population he theek hogi uske raaj k under woh bhi uss mahool se tang Aake chale gaye area chhodke toh filhaal Ye Gudla kaa Mla hai Jagdish Bhatti ka beta naam mereko bhi nahi maalum uska lekin bhaari gandu maanussh hai or utana he gandu uska area or yahaan k log hain.. Or filhaal mere pass time nahi tha in par waste karne ko...

Aadmi-Kya hua darr gaya...? Chinta naa kar koi nahi aaega yahaan tujhe bachaane.. Gudla hai ye Tumhaare pariwar se puraana naata hai humaara..


Main-I don't know tum kon ho yaa tu kiske liye kaam karta hai blah blah lekin loud and clear boldun tujhe abhi, itani buri mout dunga ki teri aane waali nashalein bhi iss mout k darr se so nahi paayengi... Yaad rakh main saamne waale kaa picha paataal takk karta hun Ye toh keval Gudla he hai .. Gudla mein baithke khudko gunda samjh raha hai tu...

Aadmi- Pehle toh mera Naam hai Sunder Bhatti.. Jigra toh hai tujhmein sabko pata hai lekin Kitano ko maarega haann? Yahaan kaa bacha-2 Rajnish Bhai k sath khadda hai..

Haan Rajnish naam hai uss Jagdish k betey ka jo MLa hai..

Main-Rajnish ko bhi maarunga 30 seconds deta hun side hoja uske baad main todna suru karunga tujhe or mujhe ghanta farak nahi padta tum kon ho kon nahi.. Maanta hun sabko nahi maar paaunga lekin yahaan se nikal jarur jaaunga or main agar nikal gaya toh fir waapis aaunga ek ek ko ghar mein ghuss ke maarunga.. Yaar rakhna bus..

Sunder-Pehli baat toh tu jaaega he nahi yahaan se tu kya teri laash bhi naa jaaegi..

Main-15 seconds... Dhyaan rakhna Tere saare khaandaan ko jallaaunga jinda woh bhi teri aankhon k saamne saale bache budhe kissi ko bhi nahi chodunga.. Gudla mein ho China mein nahi ghar mein ghuss ke maarunga ek ek ko...


Sunder - ahahahaha.. Chal dekhletey hain..

Ab woh sab gunde uske sath aake khaddey hogaye they Main akela or mere saamne Atleast 20 bandey they with hathyaar or main tha injured.. Ab unmein se sabse pehle aage aaye 2 jaanwar type bandey jinke pass talwaar thi main hua ready ab injured tha main bhi bc or main dikkat ye thi mere pass time nahi tha i mean high chances they ki Ami samjh jaaegi uss driver ka plan lekin still mujhe risk nahi lena tha.. Ab woh dono aae meri taraf apni muchon ko taanv detey hue wohlog mere pass aae he they or waar kartey usase pehle pata nahi kya hua lekin mujhe undono ki khopaddi niche ludakti hui dikhi.. Bhenchod bahot he violent scene tha un dono k sir dhadd se alag hoke niche aa girrey they wahaan mojjud logon k munh se toh cheekhein nikal rahi thi.. Woh dono niche girre toh maine dekha unke piche Ek banda khadda tha full black Ninja type outfit mein uske cehre par bhi black mask tha uske hath mein ek "KATANA" thi or aapki jaankaari k liye bataadun ki un dono gundon ki mundi ek he waar mein unke sareer se alag kardi gayi thi.. Or uss outfit ko dekhtey he main samjh gaya tha ye kon hai.. Aise bhayanak kaam Chang k alaawa koi nahi kar shakta uppar se uski Ninja outfit ko kaise bhull shakta hun main uske liye ye outfit maano super power hai jaise he woh ye outfit pehanta hai toh samjho he means business and only business..

Woh scene dekh k wahaan 90% dukaano k shutter down hogaye or saari bheed uss galli se saaf hoke gharon mein dukaano mein even public toilet takk mein jaa ghussi..

Main-I gotta go very fast very very fast..

Chang - I can take care of them mouka dekhtey he nikal lena lekin filhaal fight karo..

Main-Oh hell yeah...

Maine niche paddey ek bandey ki talwaar uthaai..

Main-Talwaar exchange karega bhenchod ye jhant baraabar talwaar k sath mujhe maarne aarahe they ye..

Chang-Nope.. Lets go..

Ab wohlog shock se nikaltey he humaari taraf badhe Chang unki taraf badha main piche he rukka... Pehle 2 ko Chàng ne meri taraf aane diya or baaki 2 k sath fight karne laga.. Or woh 2 rod le le k aaye meri side... Jaanwar ki tarah rod idhar udhar ghumaai lekin mere aas pass takk nahi pohanchi woh rod isase acha durr se faink k maardetey... Or jaise he uska waar miss hua Maine woh talwar ghonp di uske pait mein aar paar nikaal di bhenchod.. Uske hath se rod chutti or woh apne ghutnon par aagira maine talwaar nikaali itane mein dusare ne mujhe laat di jisase main thoda piche hogaya lekin girra nahi or jaise he woh doobara maarne ko aaya maine wahi talwaar uske bhi pait mein ghonp di.. Bam dono down.. Tabtak Chang un dono ko sulaa chuka tha or aage 3 se lad raha tha maine talwaar uthaai or bhaaga aage ki taraf Woh sablog bikhar gaye they ab lekin unki sankhyaa kam hone ki bajaae badh rahi thi kyunki bandey aatey he jaarahe they ikka dukka.. Ab main Chang ki taraf bhaaga or Chang jin 3 se fight kar raha tha unmein se ek k pith mein talwaar ghonp di woh banda niche girra...

Chang - Mouka hai nikal jaao abhi Main sabko nahi harra shakta main bhi nikal lunga tumhaare Jaane k baad..

Main-Sure..?


Chang-100% sure..

Main-Jaldi nikal Jaana no need to take risk call karunga main..

Ye bolke main bhaaga wahaan se saamne keval ek he banda tha or usko bhi bhaagte bhaagte he maine woh talwaar maari faink k jisase woh bacha lekin main uske pass se nikal gaya or fir naa rukka main bhayanak bhaaga sab injuries ko bhullke bhaaga or seedha gaadi k pass he Aake rukka or turant Gaadi mein aaya phone uthaaya or Ami ko call kiya Toh ussne pick nahi kiya issliye maine turant gaadi ghumaai or full speed se nikala like crazy fast.. Anaa kaa phone switch off tha issliye ab maine doobara phone nahi try kiya balki apni driving par focus kiya.. Main full speed se Anaa k ghar k saamne pohancha toh Van bahaar khaddi thi issliye main uttartey he andar bhaaga toh lawn mein he mujhe Mere saare sawaalon k jawaab mill gaye kyunki lawn mein Ami or woh Driver fight kar rahe they.. And frankly speaking Ami easily jeet rahi thi.. Wahin Dusari taraf Anaa or uski family unke bungalow k first floor k ek room ki khidki se woh sab dekh rahe they...

Main aage badha or main bilkul nahi caahta tha Ami yaa koi or mere alaawa John k Bandon ko maare or John usko apna Target banaae issliye main aage badha or Aatey he pehle Toh ek Punch Ami ko diya jisase woh niche girri Ami ko fighting se roukanney kaa yahi ekmaatar tareeka hai kyunki woh puri tarah khojaati hai fighting k time.. Uss bandey kaa ulta hath tutt chuka tha munh khoon se lathpath tha.. Woh puri tarah ladkhadda raha tha..

Main-- Haanji sir kaise ho...?

Aadmi-Y. Y. Ye kya cheej hai...?

Main-Ye meri friend hai Ami She is good haina??

Aadmi-Jaaaaanwar hai ye..

Main--Time nahi waste kar ek sawaal kuch bataaega John k baare mein..?

Aadmi-. Nnnaahi..

Main-Great..

Ye boltey he maine dono hathon se ek jhatke mein uski mundi ghumaa di.. Or agle second uski body niche girri and the end..

Ami-Why the fuck you hit me..?

Main-Uske Bandon ko keval main he maarunga no one else...

Ami-What happened to you..? Oh my god.. What the fuck.. Itni injuries..?

Main-yep woh banda kaafi tej Tha but dead.. Uske baad ek or situation hogayi thi But last moment par Chang ne bachaa liya warna most probably single peice mein nahi hota main.

Ye bolke maine Chang ko call kiya toh ussne pick nahi kiya..mujhe laga Bhaag raha hoga.. Mujhe 100% Vishwaash tha ki woh aaram se nikal lega..

Tab Raajan or Mandeep bahaar aaye unke sath Anaa bhi thi..

Main-You are safe now Raajan ji..

Raajan-You saved my life twice in a single day..

Main-That's our job all thanks to Ami..

Main aage kuch bolta usase pehle mera phone baja jo Chang kaa tha maine uthaaya...

Main-Nikal gaya kya be..?

Chang-behinnnddd theeee templeee near the sameeee Area..

Main-Chang? You ok??

Chang ki awaaj se woh bahot jyaada pain mein lag raha tha like bahot jyaada...

Chang-fassssttt....

Main-I am coming... Right now..

Chang- this mmmmight beee my End Bbooss...

Main-No No no you can't left me...i am coming hang on there please Chang...

Ye bolke main bahaar ki taraf bhaaga...

Main-Ami you stay here...

Or uska jawaab sune bina he main gaadi mein aaya or gaadi waapis ghumaa di..

Main-Chang you there..?

Chang-It was him... It was ss himm..


Main-Kon Tha??

Chang - Hault and his Team....

Main-No fucking way... No way..

Chang-Yeah ussne bhheed meein gghusske waar kiya and afttter that his team attacked me.. I... Somehow escaped... Pleaseee quickklkkk..


Uske baad phone silent hogaya koi awaaj nahi aai..

Main-Chang..? Chang..??

"Chang" Main chilaa ya..




Gaadi jitani tejj ho shake utani tejj chal rahi thi Hault bhenchod ye kyun aaya mere kaam k bich mein woh bhi.. No Fucking way.. HAULT actually ROW kaa Indonesian Assassin hai bahot khatarnaak ..... Or Chang kaa dushman bhi.. Uski ek team bhi hai same ussi ki tarah khatarnaak...


Main baar baar phone mein chilla rhaa tha lekin kuch awaaj nahi aai saamne se.. Life mein Pehli baar pareshaani hui thi mujhe.. Chang filhaal mera sabse bada hathyaar tha or usase kahin jyaada mera sathi tha agar usko kuch bhi hua toh main pure Row or Gudla ko jalaa dunga.. Or mujhe ghanta farak nahi padta High Command kya kahega yaa fir Mujhe waapis he kyun naa Jaana pandey.. I will kill each and every fucking one of them.. I promise you that.. I fucking Promise you that..


Continued...
Behad hi shandar or jabardast update
 

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Mujhe maalum tha woh mandir kidhar tha jiske baare mein Chang bol raha tha.. thodi derr pehle dekha tha maine uss Mandir ko jab aaya tha jidhar humaari fight hui thi uss galli mein nahi Jaana tha mujhe .. Issliye main seedha wahaan pohancha gaadi mandir k piche leke gaya jo puri sunshaan galli thi... Maine idhar udhar dekha toh mujhe Chang kaa koi Clue naa Milla issliye maine Chang ko doobara phone kiya or jaise he phone k bajne ki awaaj aai main turant uss taraf gaya toh ek kachre kaa bada saa dumpster type tha udhar or ussi k piche ki taraf chang tha unconscious..bahot saare ghaav they uske sareer par Talwaaron k chaaku k... Pura sareer khoon se latpath tha uska .... Uski haalat dekh main chakra gaya bahot buri haalat thi uski.. Maine pulse check ki toh bahot slow thi yaani condition critical thi uski.. Maine usse turant uthaaya or gaadi mein daala.. Normal hospital nahi lejaa shakta tha usko main High Command k he hospital lejaana tha usko.. Jo iss city mein ek he tha... Issliye maine wahin se gaadi douda di.. Chang fully unconscious tha 0 moment thi uski body mein...

Main-Hang on buddy I got you.. Don't you fucking die on me..

City k bichon bich Jaana tha mereko wahi ek hotel tha jiski underground parking mein se High Command k hospital kaa raasta tha.. Maine seedhi gaadi parking mein daali toh woh parking mein ikka dukka cars thi kyunki ye normal logon k liye hai nahi parking.. Main jaise he gaadi mein se uttara mere chaaron taraf se 6 guards aaye gun taane..

Guard-show me your hands.. Hands up..

Maine turant Chang k hath mein se uski Ring nikaali or unki taraf kardi... Woh Rimg basically I card he thi ussi se Chang ki Rank and position pata chalti thi Underground Mein...


Guards dekhtey he samjh gaye or mujhe side mein hatta unhone Chang ko gaadi se nikaala or ek lift ki taraf chal diye... Lift kaa button press kiya ek guard ne uske fingerprints se lift khulli toh lift ki jagah ek door open hua or wahaan se hum andar enter hue toh scene he alag tha wahaan par kaafi saare cabins they..
single floor kaa hospital he tha woh...mujhe wahin gate par roukk diya unlog ne maine andar aana caaha toh guns taan di gayi mere uppar... Main koi scene create nahi karna caahta tha Hospitals k rules bahot strict hotey hain.. Mujhe bahot jyaada gussa aaraaha tha like bahot jyaada.. Lekin Rules always comes first..

2 guards ne chang ko stretcher par letaaya or aage chal diye..

Guard1- Doctor doctor... Doctor..


Or agle he minute Chang k chaaron taraf doctors ki puri team thi..

Main-Mereko Jaana Hai uske sath member hun main bhi..

Guard3-Ring kahaan hai tumhaari...

Main-Mujhe jarurat nahi padti ring ki I am too big to carry a ring...

Guard3-tu toh Deva kaa bhai haina tera or HC Kaa kya connection...?

Main-Mera connection HC se bhi uppar hai..

Guard3-Ok humein koi matlab nahi hai uska ilaaj hum dekhlenge tum jaa shaktey ho...

Tabhi wahaan ek lady aai 30-32 ki age hogi Jeans t-shirt pehni thi ussne.. Medium height halka Gora rang... Kull milaake kaafi sahi thi dikhne mein..

Lady-What's the situation lads..?

Guard3-Madam ye patient ko leke aaein hain Bataa rahe hain Member hain lekin Ring hai nahi inke pass..

Main-Tum manager ho..

Lady-Yes..Name is Sonali... Aapki taareef???

Main-Jaake Scanner laao taareef khud pata lagjaaegi..

Ye sunke ussne ek guard ki taraf ishaara kiya toh woh turant gaya wahaan se.. Scanner laane shayad...

Sonali-So kya hua patient ko..

Main-Row attacked.. Hault and his team..

Hault kaa naam sunke uski bhi body language change hui.. Ofcourse sab jaantey they Hault ko ROW k top 20 Logon mein aata hai woh.. Jo bahot badi baat hai..


Sonali-Row, Hault lagta hai kaafi kuch jaantey ho tum.. Tumhaare boss ne kaafi information di hai mujhe..

Main--Main uska boss hun..

Ye sunke woh hanspaddi..

Sonali- sure sure.. Maanleti hun ki Tum Rank 5 se uppar ho..

Main-Yes i am..

Sonali-Oh please shut up Patient Rank 5 k hain or tum Usase uppar ho he nahi shaktey... Isko bahaar nikaalo guards he is delusional. ..

Main-Let The scanner come in..

Woh guard scanner le aaya basically ek Fingerprint scanner machine thi jo ek lappy se connected thi.. Maine uspar apna Right Hand rakha... Woh lappy uss Sonali k hath mein tha yaani results woh dekhne waali thi or most probably uske hath se pehle toh ye Laptop niche girrega dekh k..

Maine apna hath uthaaya.. Or agle he second Uss Sonali k hath se woh laptop or Uss guard k hath se woh scanner niche girra... Or agli he second woh dono mere saamne jukh k apne ghutano par baith gaye... Ye dekh baaki guards bhi jukh gaye...mujhe pata tha ki ye Laptop girrega kyunki isko Jukhana tha mere saamne..

Main-Up...

Ye sun woh khaddey hue...

Sonali-I.. I. I. I. I. I. Ii. Am so so...

Main-It's ok..Patient ki condition kya hai..

Sonali-Not sure at the moment bahot saari injuries hain critical condition hain abhi toh keh nahi shaktey... Uske alawa doctors ne bataaya ki blood loss bahot hua hai toh not sure..

Main- let me tell you something andar jo patient haina woh bahot close hai merese issliye doctors ko bolo jo lagta hai woh karre jaise karna hai waise kare kyunki agar usko kuch bhi hua naa toh main tum sabko maardunga... And believe me Tumhaari mout uski mout se bhi painful hogi..

Ye bolke main wahaan se mudda or gaadi mein aaya... Meri puri shirt khoon se latpath thi.. Or first time iss form mein mujhe gussa aaraha tha bahot jyaada gussa like 90% gussa..kyunki mere andar 1.0 ko bhi gussa aaraha hoga for sure Chang K relations hum dono k sath he bahot close hain or usko koi hath lagaake bachjaae naa naa na.. . Mujhe meri injuries se koi matlab nahi tha.. Sabse important cheej thi ki Chang Naa toh akele Gudla waalon se haarta or Naa he Hault or uski team usse saamne se harra shakti thi kyunki Woh Escape master hai woh situation k hissab se gayab hojaata hai.. . Hault usse harra shakta Hai for sure lekin woh tab jab dono 1 on 1 ladein woh bhi ek bandh kamre mein.. Kyunki agar space jyaada hai toh Chang gayab hojaaega dhyaan bhatkaa k saamne waale kaa... Lekin yahaan Space tha lekin woh time se escape kar nahi paaya thoda late hogaya lekin kyun??? iska matlab woh dono k bich fans gaya tha hua ye ki Chang Gudla waalon se fight kar raha tha tab Hault or uski team bichmein aai silently or apna attack karke nikal liye yahi kaam Hai Hault kaa woh Hidden attack karta hai most of times.. Or uss attack k baad baaki injuries Gudla waalon ne di.. Ab Gudla Jallega or Jallaunga Main.... Gaadi mein Mera phone Ring kar raha tha maine dekha toh bhai kaa tha...

Deva-Kahan hai tu..? Phone kyun nahi utha raha hai.. Ami ne bataya Injured tha tu or nikal gaya.. Or yahaan takk ki mujhe khabar milli tu Gudla mein tha..

Main- I am good but Let me tell you something Gudla good nahi rahega.. Ready the forces I will burn that whole fucking district...

Deva-Kya??? Kyun??? Gudla mein kya hua..?

Main-Kyun..?? Kyunki maine kahaa hai.. I want every fucking person on This.. Saare A + bandey haweli par caahiye... Wahin aaraha hun main..

Call disconnected...

Ye bolke main haweli ki taraf nikala... Sunder bhatti wahi tha uss Gudla Gang kaa leader uss time par ab Uski wajah se najaane kitane log marenge lekin ye guaranteed hai bahot jyaada marrenge..

Main haweli pohancha bahaar gaadi roukki toh Anjali wagairaah ki gaadiyaan thi wahaan.. Main andar aaya mere pair mein kaafi Dard tha lekin filhaal meri khopaddi mein jyaada Dard tha... Hault ko toh aaj nahi toh kal dhund lunga main lekin filhaal woh Sunder kaa number tha..


Main langdaatey hue andar aaya mera khoon or uppar se Chang kaa khoon meri puri body khoon se bhari thi.... Guards ne mujhe sahaara dene ki koshish ki lekin unko durr se he ishaara kardiya maine.. Main andar enter hua toh wahaan sablog mojjud they... Literally sablog..

Bhai, Babhi, Abeer, Mangal, Rishi, Sam, Ravi, Rohit , Ami, Anjali and puri team....

Main-Bandey kahaan hain???

Ye sun unsabka dhyaan meri taraf gaya toh unke thobadey khulle k khulle rehgaye..

Babhi-AP... Oh my god.. Kya hua tujhe..

Main-Bandey kahaan hain...?

Anjali- tu baith ek baar..

Main-(chillaake) I fucking said bandey kahaan hain..

Main chillaaya toh sablog 4 kadam piche hatt gaye.. Or uss time wohlog samjh gaye ki main Rage mode mein hun...


Deva-Bandey aarahe hain..

Main-Tumlog bhi ready hojaao.. Rishi Bandon ko fully ready hone ko bol... I want Whole Gudla to feel main kon hun..

Deva-Hua kya Woh toh bata...


Main-Hua ye ki main Gudla gaya tha John k bandey k piche usko maara then unhone ghatiya harkat ki I was so close to death I almost died ... Or Ab Main Pure Gudla ko 2 choices deta hun yaa toh mujhe Sunder Bhatti dedo yaa fir uss Mla k saare bandey marrenge..

Deva-Sunder bhatti..? Woh Rajnish bhatti kaa bhai hai usse nhi dega woh..

Main-Toh woh bhi marrega..

Deva- Lekin sun...

Main-Bhai look me in my eyes kya lagta hai mujhe filhaal farak padega aap kya kahoge..? 1% bhi nahi yaa Sunder marrega yaa pura Gudla Jallega fainsla uss MLa Rajnish kaa hai..

Deva-Rajnish MLa Nahi hai uski behen Hai Devika Bhatti..Rajnish Or Sunder wahaan k gundey hain MLa unki behen hain...

OH Toh uski behen hai MLa.. Koi naa Ladka ladki ko baraabar samjhta hun main baraabar adhikar deta hun dono ko toh moutt bhi baraabar hogi..

Deva-Main phone karleta hun Rajnish ko..

Ye bolke Bhai ne phone kiya usko.. Speaker par daala mobile..

Rajnish-Hahaha.. Aaj Kaise yaad karliya Deva..?

Deva-Sun...

Rajnish-Pehle meri sun.. Woh tera bhai bahot Lucky hai bachgaya aaj.. Bhaag gaya saala warna uski laash takk nahi milti tumhe antim sanskaar k liye..hero hoga Duniya waalon k liye Gudla mein woh ek kuttey k maafik hai..

Maine bhai se Phone chinna..

Main-AP bolraha hun tujhe 30 minute deta hun Yaa toh mujhe Sunder Bhatti dede wrna.


Rajnish-Warna kya be..?

Main-Warna tu bhi marrega or sathmein tera Saara pareewar or teri puri gang....


Rajnish-Paagal waagal hai kya be Mere bhai ko tujhe dedun?? Drugs se dimag theek nahi hua hai tera.. Tu doobara aa toh sahi...A Deva samjhaa usko..

Main-30 minute uske baad aaunga main bhi or dhyaan rahe main ek baar maarne lagunga toh tabtak nahi rukkunga jabtak tere saare bandey Marr naa jaaein..

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Deva-Sun Sunder ko toh hum baadmein pakkad lenge fir jo caahe woh karna uske sath...

Main-Sunder marrega aaj he marrega mere hathon se marrega.. Koi usse bacha shakta Hai toh woh main khud hun...


Prepare Yourself Gudla The Death Is Coming..

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Main - Bhai Woh pura ilaaka samjh jaaega Humse uppar naa koi hai naa koi hoga.. Ek kaam karo Police waali armoured Gaadi haina jo uske uppar speakers lagwaao or ye ghossana karwaao Gudla k Uss ilaake mein curfew lagne waala hai uske baad jo koi bhi Apne ghar se bahaar dikhega usse Turant goli maar di jaaegi shoot on sight.. For real..

Deva-Lekin AP media ko kya bolenge logon ko kya jawaab denge.. Uppar waalon ko kya jawaab dunga..

Main-Woh bhi main bataaun?? Toh suno bolna Governor k uppar jo attack hua tha usme Sunder bhatti bhi shaamil tha uske alaawa woh John k aadmiyon k sath millke Ek bada blast plan kar raha tha apni city mein..issiliye ussne John k 3 aadmiyon ko apne area mein chuppa rakha tha.. Raajypaal khud sign karke dega unka death Warrent...uppar waalon ko bhi jawaab dene ki jarurat nahi Raajypaal ki security kaa sawaal hai.. Or i am sure unko tapkaane k baad humein wahaan bahot saa aisa samaan mill jaaega jisase unpar shakk hoga..


Deva-Lekin fir bhi AP jaruri Hai ye sab..? Bahot log marrenge..

Main-Tabhi toh baaki sudharenge.. Ye toh saala humaare raaj mein he khudka ek Alag he raaj chala rahe hain aise kabtak chalega aaj Gudla mein Hain kal yahaan aaenge..

Babhi-Toh theek hai jo karna hai ye sab karlenge tu hospital chal...

Main-Naa naa naa.. Main jaaunga sabse aage uske baad hospital... Lets get ready guys.. Main kapdey change karke aaata hun...

Ye bolke main un sabko confused chhodke uppar room mein aaya or apne kapdey nikaal ke shower mein khadda hogaya bhenchod Saara khoon Paani k sath niche aagaya behke bathroom kaa pura farsh laal hogaya khoon se... Main nahaake nikala toh room mein Abeer or Ami khadey they...

Abeer-You can't just kill hundreds of people like this..

Main-Yes i can and i fucking will.. Do not try to stop me I am not in the right mood..

Abeer-They beat you that doesn't mean tu unsabko maarega..

Main-Beat me?? No one fucking beats me bitch.. Mujhe hath takk nahi lagaa paaye wohlog haraana toh durr ki baat hai..

Then Maine unhe bataaya ki kya hua tha...

Abeee-Oh my god.. Chang theek hai??

Main-mujhe nahi maalum but jo mujhe maalum woh ye hai ki Uski ye haalat karne mein ek hath Gudla waalon kaa bhi hai so woh marrenge or jo unka sath dega woh bhi marrega.. Thats it..

Ami-I am with you on this one..


Abeer-Same let's fuck some shit up..


Ye bolke Wohlog niche challe gaye Maine kapdey change kiye and niche aaya.. Dard mujhe abhi bhi feel horaha tha lekin jo sabse jyaada feel horaha tha mujhe filhaal woh tha Revenge... Oh i love taking revenge i live for Revenge... Log Kehtey hain "Revenge is a dish better served Cold".. Lekin mere liye Revenge ek dish nahi aadat hai latt hai meri or woh bhi aisi waisi nahi bahot buri latt hai ye..

Main niche aaya toh bandey aachuke they bahaar lawn mein... Uske alaawa humein police caahiye thi cover up k liye.. Or woh Anjali Ready karwaa rahi thi....


Deva-Main fir bolraha hun abhi chhod de usko...baadmein dekhlenge..

Maine bhai ki baat suni unhe ghurra or bahaar aagaya.. Bahaar 40 bandey ready they high class woh bhi.. Unko lead kar raha tha Vinny.. Vinny again bataadun Jack kaa bhai.. sabke pass M4 rifles or pistols vests wagairaah they.. Or police outfit mein they taaki baadmein kuch bakchodi naa ho.. Anjali and team nikal gayi thi wahaan se Wohlog humein Gudla k entrance par he millenge.. Police force k sath...

Main-Ek bhi gunda dikhe seedhi goli maarna koi camera waala dikhe gand par goli maaro phone yaa camera chinno... Koi shyaanpatti kare toh seedha taang mein or jyaadaa kare toh khopadi mein.. I don't care kon marrega kon nahi...

Sab-Yes sir...

Ye bolke woh sab gaadiyon mein baithey gaadiyaan bhi full black thi windows par black tints they toh andar kya hai kya nahi kissi ko nahi dikhne waala tha...

Main Abeer Mangal Or Ami RR mein aae or humlog bhi nikale..

Mangal-Bahot badi film banegi agar humlog fail hue toh.. Successful hue toh kissi ko ghanta farak nahi paddega...


Main-Fail nahi honge hum.. Unke pass kuch bhi nahi hai dandey talwaar leke ghumtey hain wohlog.. Uppar se unki guns aisi hain ki vest helmet ko paar naa karengi unki bullets..

Mangal-Ek baar or sochle bc..

Main-niche uttar bhosdk.. Niche uttar.. Abeer faink toh usko niche..

Mangal - Sorry bc.. Ab naa bolunga..

Humlog 20 minutes mein exact spot par pohanch gaye jahaan woh Van rukki thi killer ki or fir maine paidal picha kiya tha.. Police k 3 armoured vehicles k uppar hindi, haryanvi dono languages mein full volume par curfew k instructions chal rahe they.. Bahot hogaye they instructions... Police ne wahaan se sab ko clear karwaadiya tha ek hissa force kaa chaaron taraf ghumraha tha uss basti k koi Media waala wagairaah nahi caahiye the udhar... Lekin main kaam iss basti k bich mein tha.. Bahaar kuch naa Tha.. Bahaar waale ghar k andar he rahenge.. Police ne 4on taraf se basti ko gherr liya tha or bandey bus mera wait kar rahe they... Main bhi deagle use nahi karna caahta tha ab faad dene kaa time tha issliye maine mask lagaaya or guards ki gaadi mein se uthaai ek SG-550 Assault Rifle.. Kaafi behtreen gun hai effective range bhi kaafi sahi hai iski uppar se scope bhi hota hai so apne hissab se adjustable Hai fully.. . 30 rounds mag.. Uske sath sath maine carrying Belt lagaai jisme 4 extra mags meri deagle or chaaku taange... Uske baad main ready tha.. Ready for war...


Main-Andar Bandon k Sath keval main Abeer or Ami he jaaenge..

Mangal-Wait what..?

Anjali-What???

Main-Haan humaari image already bahot kharaab hai Tumhaari nahi hai.. Logon kaa vishwaash nahi todana mereko or itana load ki jarurat bhi nahi hai sab Bluetooth se connected rahenge toh Jaise he jarurat padegi humlog bullalenge.. Bus tumlog 4on taraf se cover karo iss basti ko... Befaltu discussion nahi caahiye mujhe.. Police or baaki tum sab bahaar he rahoge...

Anjali-OK ye Map samjhlo fir..

Ye sun hum 3no or sab guards Ne Anjali ko gherr liya..

Anjali-Ye area hai outside kaa yahaan tumhe koi khatra hai nahi.. Snipers k liye dekho 4 spots hain ekdum best.. Toh snipers in 4 points par honge jahaan se almost Sab cover hoga high ground hoga Snipers k pass... Or hidden bhi rahenge.. Then entry ki baat aati hai toh entry or exit k 2 he raastey hain. Baaki bahaar humlog khadey he hain.. Issliye tumlog ye raastey se jaaoge kyunki dusare se humlog cover kar he rahe hain.. Yahaan ye 10-12 makaan hain jo dikkat denge.. Lekin makaan koi bade nahi hain.. Kache makaan hain single floor k... 2 yaa 3 room musqill se honge. Yahaan in gharon mein koi family nahi millegi tumhe Sab Rajnish k bandey millenge... Lekin inke alaawa piche ki side kuch families bhi hain toh unka dhyaan rakhna padega... Or jaldi se jaldi waapis aajana jyaada derr media yaa log andar nahi rahenge..

Main-Done... Map dekhlo guys... snipers nikalo..

Snipers kaa head tha Vinny.. Toh woh baaki 3 snipers ko leke nikal gaya..

Humlog hue ready.. Abeer Maine or Ami ne vest pehni helmet ki jarurat thi nahi..

Hum uss galli k entering point Parr khadey they... Hum 3 aage or piche 25 bandey they sab ready to kill...

Main-Let's move guys..


Humlog aage badhe toh sab ghar dukaanein bandh thi log khidkiyon mein se bhi nahi jhaank rahe they bc.. Humlog wahaan pohanchey jahaan Meri or Chang ki fight hui thi.. Toh wahaan se dead bodies hatta di gayi thi lekin chappal juttey dandey rods wagairaah paddi thi or khoon tha bahot Saara khoon... Chang ne gand maar di thi inki.. Or infact sabko maardeta woh Agar Hault and team bich mein nahi aati.. Chaltey chaltey main Hault or Uske sathiyon ki death bhi imagine kar raha tha ki kaise ab woh Chippey honge kaise main unhe dhundunga kaise woh gidgidaaenge... Kaise unko maarunga main.. Ye khayaal takk mereko excited kar rahe they.. Sablog gun aim karke chal rahe they harr khidki darwaje ko check karke he aage badh rahe they... Humlog ne left liya main hisse mein ghussne k liye toh saamne 20-30 log jinmein ladies bhi thi budhey bhi they wohlog wahaan galli k bichon bich baithey they.. Unke hath mein kaagaj they jinmein bakchod slogans likhe they jo 80% galat likhe they jaldbaaji k kaaran.. Unke saamne 3 bandey they jo 100% yaad they mujhe abhi thodi derr pehle jab meri fight hui toh yelog unke sath they.. Woh 3 unke leader they ofcourse..

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Ab humein dekh woh 3 bane neta..

Aadmi1-Ye dekho bhaiyo ye aagaye chain n...


Woh aage kuch bol paata usase pehle maine meri gun taani uski taraf red dot uske khopaddi par set ki or trigger dabaadiya.. Uska bheja khul gaya bhenchod.. Itani power thi iss gun mein.. Woh piche ki taraf padda or baaki 2 kuch samjh paatey usase pehle maine 2no ko itani goliyaan maardi ki bc dance kartey hue niche girre... Ye dekh k logon ki gand fatt gayi.. Auratein chilaatey hue wahaan se bhaagi jisko jahaan jagah milli woh uss taraf bhaaga.. Jo Bhaag nahi paae wohlog wahin sadak par niche munh karke lait gaye... Maine reload ki gun.. Ami or Abeer mujhe ghurr rahe they..

Main-Haanji chalein???


Ami-Wait what??

Main-Yelog last fight mein they talwaar leke..dont worry lets move..

Humlog aagey badhe toh bluetooth mein awaaj aai..

Vinny-Sir ye ghar cross Matt karna next ghar ki roof par 3 bandey hain.. 35-40 age hattey kattey log hain.. Koi weapons nahi dikhrahe unke pass ek baar confirm hojaae toh hum shot letey hain..

Main-Thokde Agar open mein Hain or ek sath hain toh thok de.. Pehle ko maar agar baaki 2 bhaagein toh unko bhi thokdo agar hath uppar karlein toh chhod dena..

Vinny-Agar innocent hue toh sir...

Main-Idhar koi innocent nahi hai.. Take the fucking shot...

Vinny- Sir..

Humlog cover mein aaye..

Uske 20 seconds baad woh fir bola.

Vinny - all 3 down sir.. Sahi kaha tha aapne unke pass guns thi wait kar rahe they.. Sniper 1,2,3ne shot leliya..

Bc silencer lagaake snipping Kar rahe hain.. Pubg waale log bc..

Main-Brilliant... Humaara route cover kartey chalo koi chippa hua ho yaa roof par ho.. Niche waale ko hum dekhlenge..


Vinny- Clear sir..

Ye bolke humlog aage badhe un house ko cross kartey hue humlog nikale aage suru hui unki basti..

Vinny-Almost Sab chatton par log hain sir.. Sabke pass Desi kattey, dunali, talwaar even petrol ki bottlein bhi hain sir toh Backfoot par rehna padega aap sabko.. Humlog shot lenge toh unko niche kuddana padega yaa marrna hoga aaplog ready raho.. Jo Humse bacha woh aapke left or right mein kuddega...

Main-OK..


Vinny-on 3,2,1...

Uske baad humaare saamne or left mein log kuddaney lage... Snipers se bachke woh niche aarahe they toh bc humlog niche ready they.. Maine Ami or Abeer ne left cover kiya or baaki Bandon ne right... Bhenchod challni Banaa diya.. Koi nahi bacha naa uppar waale or naa he kuddaney waale..kaafi saare log roofs par snipers se he marre or baaki sab niche kuddke marre.. Goliyon ki awaaj se Saara mahoop gunj utha tha bc chaaron taraf laashein he laashein paddi thi.. Lekin Iss bich ek petrol bomb 2 guards par jaa girra.. Fire ko turant control kar liya baaki guards ne lekin woh 2no injured hogaye theek thaak...

Main-2 bandey Inko uthaao 4 backup k liye jaao Ambulance aajaaegi bahaar pohanchoge tabtak..

Uske baad 8 bandey or kam hue.. Actually matter nahi karta tha ye, hum 3 or snipers he kaafi they Insab k liye.. Unhe koi idea tha nahi ki Sniper bhi honge.. Unhe laga bhenchod hum dandey le le k aaenge police ki tarah... Chutiya log.. Khair humaare sath abhi bhi 17 bandey they.. Ab unke sathi hurt hue toh woh or jyaada form mein they..roofs kaa toh pata nahi lekin niche galli mein Atleast 15-18 laashein thi.. Humlog ko ab harr ghar check kartey hue aage badhna tha issliye humlog 3 teams mein divide hogaye.. Main Ami or Abeer 3no teams ko lead kar rahe they... Humlog faill gaye har jagah.. Sab Ghar check karne lage.. Ek aadh jagah goliyaan challi lekin maine jitane ghar check kiye sab khaali they unki chatton par laashein jarur thi..


Main-OK guys ghar clear hain jo bache they woh dead hain ab bus aage ye chownk hain isme 4 se 6 ghar hain or ek bungalow hai jo apna target hai..


Vinny - Sir aage ek he raasta jaaraha hai uss chownk mein lekin usko 2 tractors lagaake bandh kar rakha hai or uske Dusari taraf humein dikhaai nahi deraha I am sure wohlog nishaana lagaake aapka wait kar rahe honge..

Main-Toh kya karna hai..?

Vinny-Agar aap 2 minutes dein toh main apni position change karlun shayad wahaan se koi angel mill jaae...

Main-Sure.. Rukk teri location par 5 guards bhej raha hun akela nahi nikalna..

Vinny-Sure sir..

Main-Sablog cover mein aao or tum 5 nikalo Vinny k pass..

Guards-Ji sir...

3-4 minutes takk wahaan koi shorr Sharaaba nahi hua.. Uske baad Vinny ki awaaj aai..

Vinny-Sir wohlog wait he kar rahe hain Dusari taraf.. Right side waalon ko main dekhlunga lekin i dont know left mein kitane bandey hain.. Risk hain sir kaafi..

Abeer-Ab kya karein bc..?

Main-easy hai kitane he idea lele bc.. Left ko smoke kardenge..or seedha right mein push karenge.. Indonesia waala case yaad hai bc?? Jo single floor 2 ghar they ek ghar ko puri tarah smoke kardiya tha then dusare mein jaake usko clear kiya and then pehle waale ko...

Abeer - Yep.. Great idea bc great..but dikkat ye hai ki agar smoke karenge toh snipers k pass angel naa hoga toh sab humein he karna hoga..

Main-Koi dikkat he nahi hai.. Vinny sun Smoke kar rahe hain humlog tu bus koi dikhe toh he goli Chalaana..

Vinny-Got it boss.

Main-Guys..

Ye suntey he 5 bandey aage aaye apne smoke grenades nikaale or ek he sath left side mein smokes fainke... Humne 10 seconds di or uske baad sabse aage main gaya dono tractors k uppar se uske baad baaki sab.. Humlog ne unhe sahi time par pakkada kyunki wohlog samjh he naa paae they kya hua... Or maine jaatey he left side mein firing suru kardi or tabtak naa rukka jabtak puri magazine khaali naa hogayi Atleast 7 yaa 8 bandey bhaagte hue maare gaye mere hathon uske baad main reload karne laga toh baaki log aage aaye or fir hui dhana dhan firing... Smoke mein ghuss ghuss k maara... 1 minute 30 seconds mein woh pura chownk khaali kardiya humne.. Bhenchod laashein he laashein dikh rahi thi harr taraf.. Gudla ko samsaan Banaa diya tha bhenchod...


Ab humaare saamne tha Rajnish kaa ghar jo puri tarah bandh tha bc khidki darwaje sab bandh they.. Uske alawa idhar udhar kuch Chotey motey ghar they jinhe team ek ek kar k clear kar rahe they.. Uske baad main aaya Uss Ghar k saamne Ami leke aai ek chair tutti futti lekin theek thaak... Main woh Chair Rajnish k bungalow k just saamne lagaa k baitha Bandon ne Bungalow chaaron taraf se gherra snipers ne position Lee... Maine gun side mein daali or mast pair par pair rakh k baitha..


Main-(Chilaake) Sun be lawde... Ek or mouka deta hun..agle 2 minutes mein Tere uss bhai ko bahaar leke aaja kyunki agar main andar aagaya toh andar mojjud harr shaks ko maarunga.. Chota bada sabka number aaega... Issliye agar jindagi caahta hai toh Apne bhai ki balli chadha de warna tum sabki balli main chhadhaaunga...

Maine jaise he bolna bandh Kiya uss Bungalow kaa gate khulla or Sunder apne hath uppar kiye bahaar aaya uske piche piche Uske family members bhi aae jinmein do ladies or ek Woh Rajnish...


Sunder- Main aagaya hun Maaro mujhe or ye sab khatam karo....

Main-Oh Khudki balli.. I love it I fucking love it..

Woh scene se mere badan mein maano current doud gaya.. I love killing people I surely do.. Lekin ek aadh tareeke aise hain jinmein mujhe or bhi jyaada nasha hota hai like bahot jyaada...

Main apni chair se khadda hua.. Mera mood he badal gaya tha meri khopaddi ekdum se khull gayi thi..

Abeer-No No no.. We are not doing this.. Main maarke khatam karta hun isko..

Ye bolke Abeer ne uski taraf gun taani woh samjh gaya tha ki kya horaha tha mujhe or woh nahi caahta tha ki ye sab ho issliye woh usse jaldi se jaldi maarna caahta tha.. Lekin Woh trigger dabaata usase pehle maine di ek kick uske chest mein jisase woh piche jaake girra...

Main-Aise kaise maardega I kill my own prey bitch.. Oh I am going to have lots of fun with you little guy..

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