Fantasy WHITE VS BLACK (CLOSED)

[Nevil singh]

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Vishesh

 

[Nevil singh]

ADDITIONAL INFORMATION​

Ok mitr

 

[Nevil singh]

Update 1​

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(Kahani Hero ki jubani chalegi)​

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Hi mera naam Raj hai, aur mai kal 18 saal ka hone wala hun, isi liye behed dukhi hun kyun ki anath ashram ke rule ke hisab se mujhe parso hi anath ashram chodna padega, na mera paas paise hai na hi mere paas koi job isiliye aaj mai bahut pareshan hoke library mai betha hua tha.​

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Library mai bethke padhna mujhe bahut acha lagta tha, isliye mai hamesha anath ashram ke paas mai bane library mai aata jata rehta tha aur har wo kitab padhta tha jo mujhe acha lagta tha.​

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Jese ki apne suna ki mai anath ashram mai rehta hun to basically mai ek anath ladka hun, aur head bolte hai ki jaab mai muskil se 1 ya 2 mahine ka hounga taab hi kisi ne mujhe anath ashram ke bahar chod ke chala gaya tha, aur sath mai kuch nahi tha baas ek locket ko chod ke per aaj tak maine na hi kisine wo locket ko khola hai kyun ki wo khulta hi nahi hai, aur mujhe nahi pata ki ye locket kis chiz ka hai.​

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Mai hamesha har kisi ke sath hash ke, khul ke milta tha, aur mere sath bich bich mai bacho ko kayi parents aate thy aur adopt kar lete thy per mujhe koyi nahi kiya pata nahi kyun, sayad mera sakal surat unhe pasand nahi aaya, fir bhi mujhe koyi gham nahi tha.​

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Aur mera hasmukh nature aur sabhi se milna julna nature ke liye har koyi anath ashram mai mera dost hai to mujhe kabhi akelapan mehsus hi nahi hua. Per kal saab badle ne wala tha.​

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At present…..​

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Mai Raj har roj ki tarah aaj bhi library mai ghum raha tha aur ek acha kitab ki talash kar raha tha jisse mai padh saku. Har koyi mujhe baas ek hi naam se janta hai “KITABI KIDA”, aur mujhe bulate bhi hai iss naam se per mai sunke baas hass deta hun. ​

Yese hi kitab dhundte dhundte mujhe ek kitab mil jati hai, ye kitab ke upar black leather se wrapping ki gayi thy aur bilkul new bhi dikh rahi thy, per pata nahi kyun mujhe wo intresting laga isiliye maine usko utha liya, aur aake table pe beth gaya, aur kitab khulne hi wala tha ki ek bacha mere paas aagaya.​

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Bacha : Raj bhai, head apko bula rahe hai.​

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Raj : thik hai tu chal mai aaya.​

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Mera itna kehna tha ki wo bacha wanha se chala gaya aur mai bhi uthke wanha se wo kitab ko le liya aur wanha se anath ashram wapas aagaya. Aur wapas aate hi sidhe head ke cabin ke aur chal pada unse milne kitab ko apne room mai rakh ke.​

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Cabin ke bahar jake…..​

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Raj : may I come in head sir….​

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Head sir : yes yes come in Raj….​

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Fir ander gaya aur unke samne jake khada ho gaya, unke samne ek sakhs bethe huye thy dikhne mai yanhi koyi 40-45 saal ke lag rahe thy. To maine bhi unko hello kaha to unhone bhi mujhe hello kiya. Fir mai chup chap khada ho gaya.​

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Head sir : Raj inse milo ye hai Mr. Max ye TSM school se hai, aur inko tumhara koyi project acha laga to ye tumse kuch akele mai baat karna chahte hai to jake inse baat karlo.​

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Head ki baate sunke mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya aur head sir ye kiss project ki baat kar rahe hai mai wanhi soch raha tha, yanhi soch ke mai head sir ko kuch jawab deta,​

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Max bol padte hai,​

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Max : Raj apse kuch bate karni hai aur aap jo project ke bare mai soch rahe hai wo 4 mahine pehle diya tha wanhi project ke bare, to kya ham baas 10 minutes baat kar sakte hai akele mai.​

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Mujhe kuch samajh hi nahi aaraha tha ki ye konsa project hai jab ki maine koyi project diya hi nahi kahi pe, fir bhi mai raji ho gaya pata nahi kyun unki ankho mai kuch tha jesse ki kuch jaruri baat batane wale thy mujhe,​

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Raj : thik hai….chaliye….​

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Fir mai aur Max chal dete hai wanhi anath ashram mai bane ek talab ke aur wanha aam tour pe koyi aata jata nahi tha. Wanha pahunch ne ke baad,​

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Raj : mister Max aap kis project ke bare mai baat kar rahe hai, aur maine to koyi TSM school ke bare mai kabhi suna bhi nahi hai.​

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Max : wo baate baad mai jo bataunga pehle usake upar dhyaan do aur mai jo puchunga uska jawab do….​

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Kuch der soch ke….​

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Raj : thik hai boliye….​

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Max : kya tumhe kabhi yesa laga tum khash ho….​

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Raj : nahi….​

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Max : mera matlab nahi samajh pa rahe ho tum kuch yesa jo tum unexpected samajh rahe ho ki wo nahi hoga fir bhi wo ho pa raha hai….aur kuch unusual jo ki sirf tum khud jante ho.​

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Raj : kabhi kabhi per bahut si baate hai….​

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Max : mujhe bata sakte ho….​

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Raj : thik hai, ​

Pehli baat mai ek kitab baas kuch hi ghante mai pura padh sakta hun each and every word ko yaad karke yesa lagta hai ki mera memory power bahut jyada strong hai.​

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Dusri baat jaab gussa hota hun to yesa lagta hai ki koyi chiz mere ander se bahar ana chahti hai per wo apne aap normal bhi ho jati hai.​

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Tisri ye baate kisiko bhi nahi bataya hai mai janwaro se baat kar sakta hun pata nahi kesse har tarah ke animal language bhi bol sakta hun.​

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Kabhi kabhi mere hatho se kuch saman gayab bhi ho jate hai per baad mai wo wapas bhi aajate hai. Yese bahut si baate hoti hai, per usse iska kya lena dena hai.​

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Max Raj ki sari baate sunke….​

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Max : thik hai, tumhe aaj kuch anokhi chiz mili jisse tum attract huye ho….​

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Raj : han ek kitab mili….​

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Max : thik hai ye kehke uske samne apna hath kar deta hai aur ek chota sa fire ball create kar deta hai,​

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Fir Raj ko dekh ke ye pata hai kya hai,​

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Raj ye dekh ke darne lagta hai, aur piche hatne lagta hai…..​

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Raj : dur raho tum mujhse….dur raho……​

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Max : daro nahi Raj, ye kehke fire ball withdraw kar leta hai, mai tumhe darane ke liye wo nahi dikhaya balki jo bate mai bolu usse tumhe yakin aaye issliye bataya.​

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Raj abhi bhi dar raha tha fir bhi himmat juta ke puch leta hai kya….​

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Max : mai ek wizard hun, aur mai iss duniya se nahi magical land se belong karta hun, aaj jo kitab mili hai tumhe wo koyi kitab nahi ek invitation letter hai TRIDENT SCHOOL OF MAGIC se hai. Jisme tum select huye ho aage ki padhayi ke liye jisse tum tumhara magic and weapon skill aur behetar kar sako. To mai baas tumahara jawab lene aaya hun agar han hua to tum mere sath chaloge aur na hua to mai wapas chala jaunga.​

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Raj Max ki baate badi hi dhyaan se sun raha hota hai, aur use shock bhi lagta hai ki ye kya hai aaj ki science ki duniya mai bhi magic mai believe karte hai wagera wagera….​

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Raj : aap kya kehna chahte hai…..​

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Max : mai ye kehna chahta hun ki tum wo school chalo aur magic sikho…..​

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Raj : per mere paas to koyi magic nahi hai….​

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Max :tum kya ho ye tum khud bhi nahi jante ho…​

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Raj : matlab…..​

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Max (mann mai) : ye mai kya bol gaya abhi sahi samay nahi aaya hai Raj saab kuch batane ka….​

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Max : kuch nahi Raj yanhi ki tum ek ache wizard ban sakte ho, mai tumhe force nahi karunga invitation ko ache se padh lena fir invitation ke akhir mai yes or no likhne ke liye space hai usme apna answer likh dena mujhe pata chal jayega….​

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Ye keh ke Wanha se gayab ho jata hai max, Raj ko shock mai chod ke….fir Raj thodi der wanhi khada rehta hai aur fir apne room ke aur chal padta hai. ​

Shaandaar update dost

 

[Nevil singh]

First update posted next update post on Tuesday, till then keep waiting.​

Ok mitr

 

[Nevil singh]

Need help!!!!!​

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aap sabhi mujhe apka suggestions dijiye iske upar. Apko jo bhi spell yaad aata hai uske bare mai likhiye comment mai, ​

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example : fire : fire ball​

Wind : wind strike​

Lighting : lighting strike​

Aur bahut se element hai jesse ki water, earth, dark/black, Etc.......​

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aap jo bhi comments denge agar acha lagega to mai usse mere stroy mai attack ya defence magic ke tour pe add kar dunga.​

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aap baas itna kijiye, jo bhi yaad aaye apko pehle aap element likhiye uske baad "-" deke attack ya defence magic likhiye.​

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Thank you​

Adbhut parshan

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Update 3​

chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.​

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.​

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,​

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.​

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.​

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.​

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.​

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.​

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.​

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.​

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.​

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.​

Princess : ji pita ji....​

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,​

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.

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Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.​

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.​

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.​

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.​

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.​

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.​

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....​

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....​

Raj : kuch nahi sir....​

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....​

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.​

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.​

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.​

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Update posted agar kuch galti huyi hai to ​

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Nayi rachna ki badhai ho mitr

Badhiya hai

Sunahere bhaivshye ki aur

Thank you brother

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Shaandaar update dost

Thank you

 

[SHADOWKILLER]

Friends aap yanhi soch rahe honge ki fight to huyi hi nahi to uske liye sorry mai ye story ko abhi kd liye fast likhna chahta hun ki kyun ki isme ek galti huyi hai jisko correct karna hai isliye uss point tak jald se jald jana hai mujhe, aur uss point se story slow chalegi aur ek new way mai bhi, per uss point tak pahunchne se pehle bhi apko story achi lagegi ye mera sochna hai. ​

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Aab aap ye sochiye ki galti kanha pe huyi hai agar pata nahi chalta to koyi nahi wait kijiye.​

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Thank you​