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Xabhi

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chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.

Princess : ji pita ji....

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.


Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....

Raj : kuch nahi sir....

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.

To vah rajkumari ka ek test tha jo unki teacher or pita-raja ji ne liya tha Jisme vo pass ho gyi or apna saman pack kr TSM Jane ko nikal jati hai vhi apna Raj abhi bhi Duvidha me hai jisko dur karne ke liye principal ne warden ko bheja hai dekhte hai kya Nairnay leta hai Raj...

Superb update bhai sandar

dakuo ka Sardar to mar gya pr uske aadmi kaid kr liye gye hai dekhte hai kya pta lagta hai unse
 

SameerK

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Update 3

chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.

Princess : ji pita ji....

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.


Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....

Raj : kuch nahi sir....

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.

Behtarin update bhai
 

SHADOWKILLER

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To vah rajkumari ka ek test tha jo unki teacher or pita-raja ji ne liya tha Jisme vo pass ho gyi or apna saman pack kr TSM Jane ko nikal jati hai vhi apna Raj abhi bhi Duvidha me hai jisko dur karne ke liye principal ne warden ko bheja hai dekhte hai kya Nairnay leta hai Raj...

Superb update bhai sandar

dakuo ka Sardar to mar gya pr uske aadmi kaid kr liye gye hai dekhte hai kya pta lagta hai unse
Behtarin update bhai
Awesome update
Thank you guys
 

andyking302

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Update 3

chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.

Princess : ji pita ji....

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.

Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....

Raj : kuch nahi sir....

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.
शानदार bhai
 

Nevil singh

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Raj wanha se apne kamre mai ane ke baad baas Mr. Max ke bare mai hi soch raha tha, aur uske hath wanhi invitation card moujud tha baas soch raha tha ki khole ya khole. Sach keh Raj bahut jyada shock tha kyun ki usko bahut kuch pata chala (jesse magic, dusri world, etc...) per ye baat to baas aam baat hai aage usse jo pata chalega wo to kabhi wo expect bhi nahi kiya hoga, aage usko uski jindegi ki sabse badi raaz ke bare mai pata chalega, ye baat to aage pata chalega mai baas flow flow mai likh gaya😋.

bahut soch bichar ke baad Raj ne wo Invitation letter kholta hai, to uske front page pe bade size se school ka naam likha gaya tha aur thik naam ke upar ek angel bani huyi thy jiske hath upar thy aur uske hath ke upar ek flags tha, 4 colour thy uss flag mai ek deep red, ek deep blue, ek deep green and ek black (ye flag Trident school ke flag tha). Per asal mai in charo colour ke ander agar dhyaan se dekhe to uske ander bhi logo thy har ek colour ka ek logo jo ki Trident school ke 4 branch ko show karte hai.

Raj usko ache se dekhta hai fir page palat deta hai, usme ek admi jo lagbhad 60-65 saal ka lag raha tha uska photo tha aur uske niche likha tha, JOHN DANIEL Principal of Trident school of magic. Raj unko ache se dekhne lagta hai, uss admi ke photo se bhi ye andaja nahi laga sakta ki wo kitne powerful honge kyun ki photo mai bhi unke face pe jo pride, arrogance, clam, etc... thy wo saaf dekha ja sakta hai. Raj unko ache se dekhne ke baad page palat deta hai. Usme pe ek letter likha gaya tha.

Letter......

Dear Mr. Raj

We are pleased to inform you that you have a place at Trident School of Magic. Please find enclosed a list of all necessary books and equipment.

Term begins on *********. We awaiting you. If you accept this invitation please sign on the mark of candidates.

Yours Sincerely,

Deputy Headmistress

SUSSANNE DEL

baas itna hi likha tha aur akhir mai Candidate ka naam likha tha aur uss naam ke upar kuch space choda gaya tha janha candidate ko sign karna tha, aur niche ek note bhi likha tha,

Note : aagar aap agree hote ho magic school mai ane ke liye to hi sign kijiye ye apka invitation ke sath sath registration form bhi hai, agar nahi to kuch bhi mat kijiye isse jala (burn) dijiye. Aur jalane ke baad aap saab kuch bhul jayenge aapko jo bhi bataya hoga ya phir dikhaya gaya hoga magic ke bare mai wo sari baate.

fir last page mai thoda bahut school ke bare mai bataya gaya hai, jesse ki.....

School 800 saal pehle bana tha kitne founder hai, jinka hath tha ye school banane mai, abhi principal kitne no. Ke hai etc.....(ye baate agar aage jaruri huyi to bata dunga).

Raj sara kuch padhta hai per abhi tak kuch decide nahi kar pata hai ki wo jaye ya na jaye, isiliye wo uth ke wapas uss lake ke taraf chal deta hai, kyun ki usko thodi shanti chahiye thy jisse ki wo kuch soch sake aur ek acha sa decision le sake.

chaliye Raj ko sochne dete hai ham kahi aur chalte hai....

Ek rajya jo pure safed hi dikh raha tha usme har din ki tarah aaj bhi shanti thy, per iss shanti ke bicho bich bhi kuch ghatna ghat ti thy to uss rajya ke raja aur uske sathi mil ke samadhan kar dete thy.

Aare yaar mai rajya ka naam hi nahi likha, iss rajya ka naam hai Snow Country kyun ki pure saal baraf (snow) se Dhaka hua rehta hai. Isiliye uska naam Snow country rakh diya tha iska founder ne.

Iss country ke side mai ek Ghana jungle tha jisme daku rehte thy unka thikana kanha hai ye koi bhi nahi janta hai kyun ki wo bich bich mai apna thikana badal lete thy jisse inka asli thikane ke bare mai raja aur mantri mandal kabhi pata bhi nahi laga paye.

Wese iss rajya to bahut se market hai per ek main market bhi hai jo har din chahal pahal se bhara hota hai, aaj bhi tha,wanhi market mai ek ladki jo dikhne kafi khubsurat thy, white skin, choti patli si naak, red lip, kale baal, badi badi blue eye jo usko bahut jyada khubsurat aur cute bana rahi thy aur sath mai white dress, yese lag rahi thy ki koi pari niche dharti pe utar aayi ho. Wo aaj ghum rahi thy, wo abhi ek dukan mai jane hi wali thy ki aaj phir se dakuo ne hamla kar diya tha market mai. Aur dhire dhire market ko loot rahe thy. Har baat ki tarah iss baar bhi yanhi koyi 10-12 daku honge sabhi ke hath mai koyi na koyi hatiyaar tha, jesse ki bhale, talwar, etc....

jaab sare daku wo dukan ko lutne aaye janha pe wo ladki thy to ek daku ki nazar uss ladki ke pad jati hai, to usne jake ek admi ke kaan mai kuch kaha, wo admi inn dakuo ka sardar tha. Usne bhi sunke uss ladki ko dekha aur fir uss admi ko kuch kaha, to wo admi apne sath 3 aur daku ko leke uss ladki ke taraf badhne lagta hai, aur sardar baki sabhi ko leke aage nikal gaya.

Idhar wo ladki bhi samajh juki thy ki ye daku kis bare mai baat kar rahe hai aur aage kya hoga, uske liye wo bhi bilkul ready ho gayi thy.

Jaab wo 4 daku iss ladki ke samne aagaye to....

Daku 1 : ye ladki hamare sath chal, hamara sardar ka dil tujh pe aagaya hai sath chalegi to tu rani banke rahegi warna....

ye kehte huye apna hath bhi badha raha tha wo daku uss ladki ko pakad ne ke liye. Per daku 1 uss ladki wo pakad pata usse pehle ek chikh charo aur gunj uthi.....

aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh......

ye chikh wanhi daku 1 ka tha kyun ki wo ladki ne iska hath hi kat diya tha. Aab uss ladki ke hath mai ek talwaar thy jo kafi had tak ek snow ki tarah dikh rahi thy, (iss talwar ke bare mai baad mai baat karenge). Per aab wo khun se sani huyi thy.

jaab baki 3 ye dekhte hai to wo aage badh jate hai apne sathi ka badla lene ke liye, per wo pahunch pate unka sar niche jamin pe pada hua tha.

Aab baas daku 1 hi bacha tha unn charo mai se...wo ladki apni talwaar ko paas mai padi ek kapde se pochte huye uss daku 1 ke samne aake khadi ho jati hai.

Ladki : tu soch raha hoga ki tu bach gaya.....per nahi.....bacha iss liye ki tu ek kaam karega mera uske baad tujhe mai mukti dila dungi.....

daku 1 darte huye : kyyyyaaaaaa!!! Kaaaaam!!!!

ladki : baas jake apne sardar ko bol de ek baar mai sabhi aajaye mere paas jyada time nahi hai ek hi baar mai hisab kitab kar denge.....

Chal bhag yanha se abhi.....

wo sardar aur uske sath baki 7 daku dusre aur gaye thy lootne ke liye isiliye ye kand ke bare mai unko kuch pata nahi hai.

ladki ki baat sunke wo daku 1 apna kata hua hath leke bhag gaya sardar ke paas khabar dene ke liye.

aage ek choti si ladhayi dekhenge uske baad wapas Raj ke paas chalenge ki Raj kya decision leta hai.
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Nevil singh

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Update 3

chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.

Princess : ji pita ji....

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.

Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....

Raj : kuch nahi sir....

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.
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Nevil singh

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Friends aap yanhi soch rahe honge ki fight to huyi hi nahi to uske liye sorry mai ye story ko abhi kd liye fast likhna chahta hun ki kyun ki isme ek galti huyi hai jisko correct karna hai isliye uss point tak jald se jald jana hai mujhe, aur uss point se story slow chalegi aur ek new way mai bhi, per uss point tak pahunchne se pehle bhi apko story achi lagegi ye mera sochna hai.
Aab aap ye sochiye ki galti kanha pe huyi hai agar pata nahi chalta to koyi nahi wait kijiye.
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