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Fantasy WHITE VS BLACK (CLOSED)

Naik

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Update 3

chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.

Princess : ji pita ji....

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.


Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....

Raj : kuch nahi sir....

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Update 3

chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.

Princess : ji pita ji....

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.


Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....

Raj : kuch nahi sir....

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.

Superb update
 

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Update 3

chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.

Princess : ji pita ji....

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.


Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....

Raj : kuch nahi sir....

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.
ek maharani banne ke liye jo khoobiya chahiye usme Princess khadi utri...
So Princess bhi aa rahi usi magic school mein padhne jaha Raj bhi hoga...
intezar hai bas us moment ke liye jab dono aamne saamne honge....
Are yaar ye Raj abhi tak soch hi raha hai.. mana ki behad kathin faisla hai.. Phir bhi haan kar diyo... taaki aage ki adventure se bhari journey padhne ko mile...
Update ke suruwati daud mein thodi bahot action scenes add huye hai..
baaki jis tarah se aap paristhitiyon ka varnan karte hain, weh bahut aakarshaneey aur adbhut hai..
sath hi rachantmak aur kaavyatmak kathan aur paatron ke bich batacheet bhi paathakon ke aanand aur utsaah ko badhati hai...
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills writer sahab :applause: :applause:
 

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Update 3

chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.

Princess : ji pita ji....

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.


Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....

Raj : kuch nahi sir....

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.
Nice update bhai lekin itni achha story ko kiu kharab karnaa chaahateho? Aap ko patahe story bahut achha he lekin 1 sapta me baas 2 update istara to aap ki story ki band bajjayeka thoda dyanse bhai.
 

Luffy

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Update 3

chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.

Princess : ji pita ji....

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.


Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....

Raj : kuch nahi sir....

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.

Fantastic update
 

aalu

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waise rajya kee princess aayee hain lekin wahan ke logo ne samman mein sar nahin jhukaya... akhir koi mamuli insan aise hi princess ko ankh utha ke dekh tak le toh usse saja mil jaati hain... khair yeh dakuo se larai lagta hain raajmahal se aadesh le ke aayee thee... idhar soldiers ne bakhubi achha kaam kiya lekin us group ke sardar ko pakar nahin paaye... khair inke doosre saathio ko jaroor maloom hoga unke thikane ka raaz jahan se yeh aaye hain aur jahan jaa shakte hain...

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princess hi bhawi maharani banengi kya raja kee aur koi santaan nahin hain ya unke bhai... jahir hain tab kahani kuchh dosori hogi... khair yeh ek test tha unke liye... lekin jin daakuo ne naak mein dum kar rakhha tha usse bari aasani se princess ne pakar liya... yahee shabit karta hain kee wo kitna khatarnak hain... aur yeh bhi TRIDENT SCHOOL OF MAGIC jaa rahi hain... ab raj babu aur inki mulakat kaisi rahti hain... akhir princess ka larne ka kshamta hamne jana lekin wo dil se kaisi hain yeh maloom nahin... kaheen princess hone ka ghamand toh na dikhayegi...

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principal ne warden ko thori baate batane ko kahee kya warden iss magic kee duniya ke baare mein janta hain... kya wo bhi ussi duniya se aaya hain... to phir idhar kyun rah raha hain... kya raj kee suraksha ke liye unhe idhar rakhha gaya tha... khair raj abhi bhi asmanjas mein hain...
 

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chaliye suru karte hai Jessa ki pichli baar apne padha tha ki wo daku wanha se chala gaya tha, ye kehna sahi hoga ki wo wanha se bhag gaya tha, apne leader ke paas iss baat ko batane ke liye jo usko wo talwar wali ladki ne batayi thy.

Uss daku ke jane ke baad wo ladki bhi wanhi paas mai ek bench ke upar beth jati hai jo uss dukan mai thy, wo dukan ka malik aur jo log wanha thy wo saab bhi baas uss ladki ko hi dekhe ja rahe thy, aur har koyi behed khush bhi tha, khush kyun na ho, khud princess ne hi unhe bachaya hai, aur khush hone ke ye wajah bhi hai ki future mai iss country ka bhar ek ache sache princess ke upar aayegi, jisse unki County ko growth karne mai ashani hogi.

abhi kuch hi der hua tha ki khuch soldiers jo uss country ke thy wo aajate hai, aur sidhe aake princess ke samne khade ho jate hai aur princess ko salute marte hai, princess bhi unka salute ka jawab deti hai, fir ek soldier aage aake,

Soldier : my princess, apko king aur apke teacher ne yaad kiya hai, aur ye bhi message hai ki apko jo bola gaya tha karne ke liye usko ham pura karenge, aap abhi rajmahal lout jaye.

Kya bola gaya tha wo baad mai pata chalega, princess ne bhi wo baate sunke apne sar ko han mai hila deti hai fir wanha se khadi ho jati hai jane ke liye per jane se pehle, apne space bag se kuch array jo defence ke liye thy wo nikal leti hai unko soldiers ko de deti hai.

princess : isko ache se set karlo, ye mere teacher ka banaya hua level 2 ice capture array hai, iske madat se tum sare dakuo ko kamse kam 10 minutes tak freez kar sakte ho jisse ki tum sabhi ko unn sabhi dakuo ko bandi bana mai madat milegi.

ye kehke wo array kesse active hota hai wo bhi samjha deti hai fir wanha se kisi hawa ki jhoke ki tarah chali jati hai, asal mai wo hawa ka jhoka nahi tha, princess air fly magic use kar rahi thy aur wo abhi intermediate level 1 (yanha 1 matlab jo inner star 1 hai) pe hai Air magic mai fir bhi wo kafi fast move kar rahi thy aur usko sabse jyada help kar raha tha uski shoe jo ki air shoe thy ye ek yesa shoe tha jiske madat se aap badi tezi se fly kar sakte ho, jaab wo air ke madat se fly karte ho.

princess ke jane ke baad, Jessa Jessa princess ne bola tha sare soldiers wo array ko set kar dete hai aur chup jate hai, sabhi dakuo ko capture karne ke liye.

Aur idhar wo sare daku nikal padte hai uss ladki se revenge lene ke liye per unhe kya pata tha ki unke sath kya hone wala hai, wo sabhi ek line mai aarahe thy, sabse aage 8 daku thy aur sabse akhir mai unka leader tha, sayad leader ka luck acha tha, jesse hi aage ke 8 daku wo array ke ander gaye, to snow country ke soldiers uss array ko active kar dete hai, jiska impact se wo sare 8 daku ice mai jaam (freez) jate hai, per leader bach jata hai, agar wo soldiers aur thodi der wait karte to wo leader bhi array ke ander hota per kya kar sakte hai soldiers ki baadkisamti.

Jaab yesa dekhte hai to sare soldiers nikal aate hai jaha janha chupe huye thy aur aake leader ko gher ke khade ho jate hai, bhale hi leader array mai nahi fasha ho per aab wo snow country ke soldiers se ghera hua tha ye sare soldiers intermediate level 4 pe thy, wo khud intermediate level 5 pe tha fir bhi wo akela itne sare soldiers ko hara nahi sakta tha, isliye wo unke hatho mai lagke tourcher sehne ke wajaye wo marna pasand karta hai, isliye apne danto mai rakha hua poison ko break karke kha leta hai, jisse wo immediately wanhi apna dam tod deta hai, leader ke marne ke baad sare soldiers baki dakuo ko jo ice freez ho gaye thy unko leke jail mai dal dete hai.

Idhar princess sidhe rajmahal mai chali jati hai, janha iss waqt king, aur uski teacher intezar kar rahe thy, princess jake uske pita aur teacher respect deti hai. To uska jawab bhi king aur teacher de dete hai.

King : princess hame pata hai apke mann mai abhi kya chal raha hai ki jo kaam ke liye maine aur apke teacher ne uss market mai bheja hua tha uss kaam ke bich mai ham tumhe kyun bula liye hai hamne yanhi chal raha hai na apke dimag mai.

Princess : ji pita ji....

Teacher : apko to pata hai ki wo apka baas test tha, jo aaj tak apne sikha hai usko dikhane ke liye,

pehla reason aap bina dare hi un 12 dakuo ko challenge kar diya, kadki aap unke level mai kam hai taab bhi.

dusra reason jaab aap yanha ke liye nikli taab bhi aap apne soldiers ke safety ko dekha isse ye sabit hota hai ki aap ek achi maharani ban sakti hai future mai.


Isiliye aap hamre test mai paas huyi hai, aur mujhe bhi khusi huyi hai ki apke Jessa student mujhe mila hai.

king : aur apko hamne iss liye bulaya hai kyun ki apko Trident school of magic jana hai jiske liye apko abhi ke abhi nikalna hoga, wanha jake apko aage ki padhayi karni hai.

Teacher : aur mujhe asha hai ki aap bahut aage jaogi aur snow country ka naam bahut uncha karengi wanha se padhke.

princess : kya sach mai.....aur apne teacher ko thank you teacher mai puri kossis karungi.

fir kuch khas hua nahi princess nikal gayi apne kamre ke aur apne teacher aur pita ko wish karke, wanha pahunch ke apni saman pack karti hai aur thodi der baad princess nikal padti hai apni journey ke liye.

Per jane se pehle king ne usko kuch baat batate hai jo ki usko TSM mai jake karna hai ki wo kya hai wo to aage pata chalega.

Chaliye hero ke paas yani ki Raj ke paas jo iss waqt uss lake ke paas betha hua tha apni tasveer ko pani mai reflect ho raha tha usse dekh raha tha, ki uske piche se koyi aata hai jaab uska awaj aati hai to Raj piche ghum ke dekhta hai to unka anath ashram ka warden samne tha.

warden bina kuch bole hi Raj ke paas jake beth jata hai, aur Raj ko dekhne lagta hai.....

Warden : kya soch rahe ho Raj....

Raj : kuch nahi sir....

Raj unko batana nahi chahata tha ki uske sath kya hua tha, ya fir Max kon tha kya tha, kis liye aaya tha, agar wo batata to kya kya batata, etc....

Asal mai warden apne aap nahi aaye tha unko bheja gaya tha, aur bhejne wala aur koyi nahi principal John Daniel thy. Kyun aayiye jante hai.

Jaab Max ke munh baat nikalte nikalte rahi to wo jaab wapas school gaye to unko achi khasi dant padti hai principal aur vice-principal dono se, fir principal apne magic ke madat se Raj ko dekhne lagte hai, wo subha se hi Raj ko dekhe ja rahe thy, aur unko bhi tension ho rahi thy ki Raj kya decision lega, to wo warden se sampark karte hai aur Raj ke paas bhej dete hai aur usko thoda bahut baate batane ke liye kehte hai jisse ki wo TSM aane ke liye rahi ho jaye.

Warden kya baat karega wo next update mai pata chalega. Next update posted on Sunday.

Nice fantastic update
waiting sunday update bro
 
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