Incest WO ANOKHA HAI

[riya singh]

Waise bhagwan se ek prarthna karunga kabhi jeevan me ek baar mulakat jarur ho ap se meri

BHAGWAAN [RATHNAYE JARUR SUNTA H, HO SAKTA H HUMARI KABHI MULAKAT KARWA DI HO AUR AAPKO PATA BHI NA CHALA HO

 

[riya singh]

That creates a huge discontinuity in your story. A major loophole.

Pichli kahani ke ant me tushar gayab ho gaya tha aur uske baad kuch 20 saal beet gaye the. Tab tak harday ke liye uski maa Deepa thi. Is kahani me jab harday ka scene aaya to usne apni maa anjali ko bataya, jab woh tushar, ruchi aur alka ko dhundhne nikla hai.

Is kahani ke hisab se ansh ki umra kuch 20-22 saal hogi. Aur harday jab unse mila to woh bhi usi umra ka hoga. Agar ansh aur tushar ek umra ke hai to harday kaise ansh se mil sakta hai apne baap ko dhundhne ke liye.

You created a mess here.

YE SAB SOCH KR HI CHALI HU MAIN, ISKA JAWAB AAPKO PHELE UPDATE ME HI MIL JAYEGA,

 

[riya singh]

intezaar rahega....

THANKU JI

 

[riya singh]

Dekhte h riya ji aapke hatho ke jadu ko aap kisse rosni ka bhala krawayegi or kitna kamuk hoga

INTEJAR KIJIYE

 

[riya singh]

Aapke liye pyar har taraf se milta h neeche se laker upr tk

BAHUT BAHUT DHNYAWAAD JI

 

[riya singh]

Aap dhundonge to mil jayega jaan

USKE LIYE AFRICA JANA PADEGA

 

[riya singh]

Nayi kahani kab aayegi Riya ji

MONDAY KO PHELA UPDATE DUNGI

 

[Ajay Rathor]

Besabri se intejar rahega ..new update ke liye

MONDAY KO PHELA UPDATE DUNGI

 

[kvrana]

USKE LIYE AFRICA JANA PADEGA

rutland county humane society iske liye africa kyu jana janeman

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

well done, perfect ending for a new beginning