Romance Ye kaisi Mohabbat

[kingkhankar]

on reaching 100 pages.

One of the twisted love stories in this forum.

Amazing writer, but sadly no more active in this forum.

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-44

Kuch dino ke baad

Daksh har roj ki tarah aaj bhi bahar gum ke aaya aur vaha se fish vagra pakad ke laya

Vapas aakar saman kitchen me rakh ke computer room me chala gaya, jaha sab check karta tha vo

Abhi vo apne bando ko dekhne laga lekin vaha kuch dikh nahi raha tha
Fir dusre ko try kiya to vaha bhi kuch nahi, same with other guys too

Ye dekh ke usse thodi tension hone lagi

Fir usne apne ghar me check kiya to sab thik laga

Lekin ghar ke bahar bhasad dikhne lagi

Vo bahar jo door door alag alag log bathe the unhe dekh ke vo samjh gaya ki kuch to gadbad hai

Daksh ne turant phone nikala lekin sala kisi ka phone hi nahi lag raha tha

Ab uska dimag gumne laga ki bc ye kya bhasad ho gaye

Vo city me ja nahi sakta tha aur yaha se usse information milne ke raste band ho gaye the

Daksh ke pass ab sirf na matar ke options rah gaye the jisme
Wait karna aur city jana bas do hi bache the

Aur vo na to city ja sakta tha aur na wait kar sakta tha

To usne ghar ke bahar jo bande the unki detail nikalne ki sochi

Lekin yaha bhi bhasad thi kyuki kisi ko Daksh ke bare me pata hi nahi tha

Sabko to yehi lagta tha ki Daksh mar chuka hai aur na Daksh kisi ko phone karke kuch bol sakta tha

Ab bichara galat hi fas chuka tha daksh

Usne jaldi se ek joint nikala aur fukta hu dusre room me bhaga

Vaha se jacket aur gun nikali aur car leke nikal gaya

Daksh in his mind
Daksh gun use nahi karni, aur khoon nahi chahiye life me
But agar family ke upar baat aae to

Daksh teri khud se respect khatam ho jaegi
Lekin agar family khatam ho gaye to

To kya tu firse usse raste par chala jaega
Agar jarurat padi to

Fir badalne ka nataak kyu kiya

Sayad yehi kismat me tha

Kismat me nahi ye tu chahta tha, humesha se tu hi chahta tha
Kismat ko dhosh mat de

Meri ijjat,meri self respect aur mere khud se bhad kar hai meri family
Agar unko kuch hua to mere jeene ka fayda hi kya hai
Aur vaise bhi agar problem aae hai matlab reason to main hi hunga na

To utha hathiyar aur kaat daal sabko

Agar jarurat padi to peeche nahi hatunga

Hahahahahahahahaha Daksh Singh raichand jo apne aapko sarif banane ki kosis kar raha tha, aaj firse apne roop me aagaya

Calm down daksh
Just calm down
Koe kuch bhi bole tujhe pata hai tujhe kya karna hai
Ja aur bacha apni family ko

Daksh bechara apne hi aapse lad raha tha aur car dodaye ja raha tha
tabhi usse kuch yaad aaya aur ek number dial kiya

Samne se hello
Daksh- hello

**** kon?
Daksh- Daksh bol raha hu

**** kon Daksh?
Daksh-
Daksh Singh raichand

****kyaaaaa
omg Dakshhhhh
Tum jinda ho?
Daksh- ha main jinda hu
Roy kaha hai?

Rashmi- bhaiya to hongkong gaye hai kisi kaam se
Daksh- fuckk

Rashmi- kuch problem hai kya daksh?
Daksh- uska sabse trust worthy banda kon hai yaha?

Rashmi- main?
Daksh- jo bina palak jhapkaye goli chala sake

Rashmi- ye mujhe nahi pata
Hua kya ye bataoge?
Daksh- mere ghar ka address pata hai tumhe?

Rashmi- ha Priya Didi se mili bhi thi
Daksh- to abhi ke abhi mere ghar jao
Aur ha gun leke jana

Rashmi- gun ka kya karungi main
Aur mere pas nahi hai gun
Daksh- Roy ke room me check karo
Vaha mil jaegi
Aur
Priya ko dedena
Usse hi karna hai jo karna hai

Rashmi- Daksh tum mujhe dara rahe ho?
Daksh- tumhe sirf ghar jana hai
Priya ko gun deni hai
Aur usko bolna ki Roy ka phone aaya tha aur usne kaha hai ki yaha khatara hai so turant niklo

Rashmi- but bhaiya ka to koe phone nahi aaya
Daksh- jitna bola hai utna karo
Yaad rakhna ki mera naam nahi aana chahiye

Rashmi- mujhe kuch samjh me nahi aa raha
Daksh- tumhe ye sab bata ke turant vaha se nikal ke **** es jagah chale jana
Vaha ke Guard ko mera naam lena aur under chali jana
Yaad rahe jab tak main na bolu tab tak vaha se nikalna nahi

Rashmi- aur agar mere us jagah pahuchne se pehle kuch hogya to
Daksh- to sochna ki Daksh ke liye saheed ho gaye tum

Rashmi- kyaaaaaaaa
Daksh- kuch nahi hoga tumhe
Bas jaise tum ho bilkul vaisa hi react karna aur baki main dekh lunga

Rashmi- ye to bata do ki ho kya raha hai
Daksh- aakar batata hu

Rashmi- wow tum vapas aa rahe ho?
Daksh- why the fuck you are happy?

Rashmi- aise hi
Daksh- pehle jake jo kaam bola hai vo karo
Aur yaad rakhna mera naam nahi aana chahiye

Rashmi- thik hai
Aur phone cut gaya

Daksh ne bhi accelerator par pair rakha aur hava me udda di ghadi

Vo khud teji se city ki taraf ja raha tha kyuki ab Rashmi ki bhi to tension thi usse

Aur bechare ke pas koe backup bhi nahi tha

Usse laga agar Roy vaha hoga to thodi help mil jaegi but vo bhi kahi aur hi gand mara raha tha

City jane ke alava Daksh ke pass aur koe chara bhi nahi bacha tha

Aur vo bhi ye sochte hue chala ja raha tha ki sala jo bhi hoga dekha jaega


*** future ***

Do sareer khoon se lathpath jamin par gire hue the aur kuch log unki taraf bhag rahe the

"Daksh Daksh please open your eyes, please Daksh open your eyes

I want you back Daksh, I love you Daksh
Please open your eyes

Ek baar bas Ek baar apni ankhen khol lo Daksh please

I'm sorry na, I'm so sorry babu but you know na ki meri majburi thi

Bahut pyaar karti hu main tumse aur bahut dard diya na tumhe

I know but babu please ek baar maaf kardo uske baad dekhna kabhi koe sikayat nahi hogi

Dekh teri gudia ki ankhon me aashon hai daksh

Vo bhi tujhse kitna pyaar karti hai
Tu usse bhi rula raha hai

Uth ja na kyu hum sabko pareshan kar raha hai

" Maa bolo na esse uthne ko, meri to baat hi nahi sun raha
Bolo na maa esse"

" beta sambhalo apne aapko"

" par Maa ye meri baat kyu nahi sun raha
Humesha to sunta tha na
Aap bolo na esse uthne ko

Main to sorry bhi bol diya

Le kaan bhi pakad liya ab to uth ja

Maa- beta vo nahi uthega, vo hume chhod ke ja chuka hai
Sambhal apne aapko

" nahi vo mujhe chhod ke nahi ja sakta
Vo bahut pyaar karta hai mujhse
Dekhna abhi uthega vo aur mujhe galle laga lega

Uth na Daksh
Dekh Maa kya bol rahi hai
Uthja na please

Aur jor jor se rone lag gaye......

lovely update dost

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-45

Maa- dekha kiya na kaam
Priya- but Maa kahi Rashmi sach to nahi bol rahi thi
Ho sakta hai ki Daksh ne Roy ko bol rakha Ho humare upar dhayan rakhne ko

Maa- don't be stupid sweetheart
Daksh apni family ki safety ke sath kabhi compromise nahi karega
Ye gun Daksh ke kahne par hi mili hai
Aur dekhna jaldi hi Daksh bhi mil jaega
Priya- lekin agar humare pata lagne se pehle hi Daksh ne sabhi ko maar diya to

Maa- to vo vaha to jaega hi jaha abhi Rashmi gayi hai
Priya- matlab?

Maa- logo se door hokar sayad tumhra dimag kaam karna band kar diya hai
Matlab ye ki Daksh ne Rashmi ko bejha hai to usse ye bhi maloom hogya hoga ki ab Rashmi bhi safe nahi hai
To jarur Daksh ne Rashmi ko kisi safe jagah jane ko bola hoga
Priya- fir to hume Rashmi par najar rakhni chahiye

Maa- vo maine pehle hi bande bejh diye hai
Priya- ab kya kare?

Maa- intzaar
Priya- kis chhij ka

Maa-Daksh aaega to sehar me tufan sath leke aaega
Aur hume us tufaan ka peecha karna hai
Priya- lekn agar Daksh ko thoda bhi shak hua to sab ulta pad sakta hai

Maa- esliye to sab kuch bahut savdhani se karna padega
Aisa mokka baar baar nahi milega hume
Priya- main to aapko follow kar rahi hu
Jaisa aap bologi vaisa hi hoga

Maa- kyuki maine usse pala hai
Mana ki Rashmi se jada pyaar karta hai
Lekin Rashmi se jada main janti hu usse
Priya- Maa Maa hoti hai

Maa- ab vo din door nahi beti jab Daksh humare sath hoga
Aur tum meri bahu
Priya thodi sarma jati hai

Maa- sarmana mat
Tu meri beti hai
Aur tujhe beti aur bahu dono ka pyaar milega
Lekin usse pehle Daksh ko vapas lana hai
Priya- ha maa
Aage kya karna hai?

Maa- abhi vo city nahi pahucha hai
Kyuki bahut shanti hai
Jaise hi thodi khalbali hone lagi vaise hi hum active ho jaenge
Priya- Maa Daksh trained hai
Usse samjhte der nahi lagegi

Maa- ek to tum negative bahut hoti ho
Dusra usse pata hone se pehle hi usse pakad lena hai
Priya- ha Maa ab ye duria bardast nahi hoti
Priya follow follow me bol jati hai

Maa- koe baat nahi
Teri sari duria khatam ho jaegi
Bas ab waqt aa gaya hai

Tabhi Maa ka phone bajane lagta hai

Maa- hello
Samne se
He is in the town

Maa- kaha pe?
**** ye nahi pata
Lekin etna confirm ho gaya hai ki Daksh city aa chuka hai

Maa- kaise pata chala?
**** vo bahut sare phone aa rahe hai

Maa- kiske?
**** ye pata karne ke liye ki abhi konsi gang ke bande city me active hai

Maa- okay
Tum sab thodi doori bana ke rahna aur mujhe pal pal ki khabar chahiye
Aur phone kaat deti hai

Priya- kya hua maa?
Maa- game start
Chalo

Priya- kaha?
Maa- gumne

Priya- es time?
Maa- ghar me Daksh kahi se bhi najar rakh sakta hai
Agar bahar jaenge to humare piche rahega aur uske piche humare log

Priya- aap sabki maa hai sach me
Priya haste hue bolti hai
Maa- vo to main hu hi
Ab chalo

Priya aur Maa car nikal ke ghar ke bahar chale jate hai

Vahi Daksh city pahuch chuka tha aur usne local gang se phone kar karke information leni suru kardi

Ha bina naam bataye aur sabne usse bataya bhi kyuki Daksh ke pas sabke secrets the jiski vajah se sabko batana pada

Fir Daksh ne sabse pehle apne ghar ko check karne ki socha ki pehle vaha sab confirm kar leta hu uske baad baki ka dekha jaega

Vo shadow me ghar ke aas pass pahucha aur vaha jake pata chala ki ghar par to koe hai hi nahi

Ab usse tension hone lagi aur usne Priya ke phone ko track kar diya aur khud bhi unke piche pahuch gaya

Ek to Maa bahut dheere chala rahi thi aur dusra Daksh high speed me aaya tha to jada time nahi laga Daksh ko unke aas pass pahuchne me

Maa- piche dekhte rahna
Priya- kya

Maa- jo bhi black color ki car dikhe uspar
Priya- Daksh ka favorite color

Maa- ha
Aur phone on rakhna
Priya- vo track kar rahe honge

Maa- good
Ab chalne laga na tumhra dimag

Priya- vaise hum ja kaha rahe hai?
Maa- city se thoda door
Kyuki mujhe mere sehar se pyaar hai

Priya- fir to vo rasta use karo jispar traffic bilkul kam ho
Kyuki vaha pata lagana easy hoga
Maa- traffic kam nahi , aisi jagah par jaenge jaha traffic hoga hi nahi

Priya- bas ab vo waqt door nahi jab Daksh humare sath hoga
Maa- pehle mujhe mil lene dena
Uske baad jo tum karo, akele me jake karna

Priya- maaaaaaa
Priya sarmate hue boli
Maa- to kya besarmo ki tarah humare samne hi suru ho jaoge?

Priya- Maa bas bhi karo
Maa- poonam kab aa rahi hai
Usse bhi to uske jija se milna hoga

Priya- ek do din me aaajegi
Maa- uske aate hi tum dono ki shadi kara dungi

Priya bas muskura di
Usse pata tha ki agar vo kuch boli to aur tang khichi jaegi esliye usne chup rahna hi sahi laga


Vahi Daksh unke piche yehi soch raha tha ki ye log ja kaha rahe hai

Usse etna to pata chal gaya tha ki Maa aur Priya ko ye shak hogya hoga ki Rashmi ko maine bejha hai

Aur yehi reason tha ki Daksh aaj black color use nahi kar raha tha kyuki ye sabko pata tha ki Daksh black ke alava koe color ki chij nahi pahnta aur na chalata hai

Usse ab Maa ki planning ke bare me bhi shak ho gaya tha esliye usne car ki speed ko increase kiya aur Priya ki car ko overtake karke aage chala gaya

Aur aage se najar rakhne laga tabhi uska phone bajne laga

Daksh- hello
Rashmi- aagaye kya aap sehar me

Daksh- hmm
Rashmi- mujhe na ek baat batani thi aapko

Daksh- bolo
Rashmi- mujhe lagta hai aapko Maa aur Priya se mil lena chahiye
Kyuki jab maine unhe gun di to vo dono bahut gabra gaye thi
Aisi situation me aapko unke pass rahna chahiye

Daksh- tension mat lo
Main sab sambhal lunga
Rashmi- mujhse kab miloge?

Daksh- jane se pehle
Rashmi- tum vapas chale jaoge?

Daksh- ha
Rashmi- yaha kyu nahi rah sakte

Daksh- hai kuch baatein
Tum pahuch gaye jaha bola tha?
Rashmi- ha vahi hu

Daksh- jab tak main na bolu kahi nikalna nahi
Rashmi- thik hai

Daksh- okay I will call you later
Aur Daksh phone rakh deta hai
Aur piche dekhta hai to Maa ki car u turn maar rahi thi

Daksh sidha hi chalta raha kyuki usse pata tha ki vo log vapas city me nahi jaenge
Aur ye turn sirf esliye liya gaya hai ki ye pata chal sake ki koe unka picha to nahi kar raha hai

Maa phone me
Muda vo?
**** nahi Maam sidhe nikal gaye
Sayad koe galatfami hue hogi hume
Maa- thik hai dhayan rakho

Priya- vo nahi the?
Maa- abhi kuch nahi bol sakte
Daksh naya nahi hai es khel me

Priya- car bhi to black nahi thi
Maa- vohi bola main
Daksh naya nahi hai es khel me
Usne vo bhi soch rakha hoga jo hum agle mahine sochenge

Priya- ab kya?
Maa- ab vapas jaenge to usse shak ho jaega
Dusra rasta lete hai
Agar vaha bhi mila to samjh jaenge

Priya- thik hai
Aur car ko nahi modti

Daksh bhi kafi aage ja chuka tha aur vapas to vo bhi nahi aa sakta tha

Usne location to dekh hi li thi to usne opposite rasta liya jisse vo aur maa ek dusre ko raste me cross karenge

Lekin usse pehle usne car change ki aur ek aur ajeeb se chamakte hue color ki car leke aagae chal diya
Hath me joint, ankhon ke samne ek satik Lakshay aur dil me pyaar liye Daksh nikal to gaya tha lekin usse kya pata tha ki ye sayad uska aakhiri safar hoga

Lekin sayad hi usse es baat ka kuch regret ho kyuki usne uski life uski apni sartoo par jee hai

Jo chaha vo kiya, kabhi ye tak nahi socha ki vo galat kar raha hai ya sahi

Uska ek hi usool tha jo karo vo etni sidaat se karo ki agar fail bhi ho gaye to log kahe ki ab to eski kismat hi kharab thi varna mahnat me ladke ne koe kami nahi chhodi thi.....

Just two three more updates to go....

pretty update mitr

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-46
Kafi der picha karne ke baad Daksh pareshaan hogya tha kyuki usse abhi tak kuch bhi unusual nahi dikha

Vo sochne laga ki agar vo log uski family ko nuksaan pahuchane ke liye aaye hote to unka picha kar rahe hote lekin abhi tak aisa kuch nahi hua tha

Daksh man me
Kahi maine yaha aake galti to nahi kardi
Aisa bhi to ho sakta hai ki main overprotective hokar sab soch liya hu

Lekin fir ek khayal aaya ki agar aisa hai to fir uske aadmi kaha gaye, uske ek bhi camera kaam kyu nahi kar raha hai

Vo log professional hai to matlab dhokha dene ki to baat hi nahi hai
Yaha kuch aur hi chal raha hai

Lekin kya?

Kahi Priya ki to planning nahi hai mujhe vapas bulane ki?

Nahi nahi, Priya etna sab nahi soch sakti
Vo us halaat me nahi hai ki etna sab soch sake

Fir kya ho sakta hai, kon ho sakta hai

Mere sare dusman bhi mare ja chuke hai aur mujhe yaha se gaye bhi bahut waqt ho gaye fir ye sab ek dam se kya hone laga

Kuch to gadbaad hai
Mujhe pata karna padega

Daksh kuch soch ke ek number dial kar deta hai

Samne se awaz aati hai
Hello
Daksh- Daksh bol raha hu

**** kya baat hai murda log bhi aajkal phone karne lag gaye
Daksh- city me kon naye bande aaye hai

**** koe nahi aaye bhai
Kya hua?
Daksh- tumhre sehar me bande hathiyaar leke gum rahe hai aur tumhe ye bhi nahi pata

**** apne hi log honge bhai
Agar koe bahar ka aata to pata chal jata
Daksh- aaya hai esliye puch raha hu

**** agar aisa hai to vapas sidhe bhagwan ke pass hi jaenge
Daksh- mujhe sab jinda chahiye

**** Daksh Bhai daldal se door jane ke baad jamin ki aadat to nahi pad gaye
Daksh- ek baar jo daldal me gus jata hai fir usse nikal pana namumkin hai

**** baat to thik hai
Aap batao kya madad kar sakta hu aapki?
Daksh- mujhe jo bhi naye bande aaye hai unki history chahiye puri ki puri

**** thik hai
Abhi pata karata hu
Aur kuch?
Daksh- kuch logo ko mere ghar ke bahar bej de
Vaha jo bhi ajeeb lage unhe utha lo
Aur kuch bande ko ghar ke pass dhyan rakhne ke liye chhod do

**** thik hai bhai
Aur Daksh phone kaat deta hai

To ye banda tha Malik ka beta
Malik to yaad hai na jisne Daksh ko martial arts sikhae thi
Aur ye vo hai jiske pass Daksh Roy ko leke gaya tha

Phone katane ke baad Daksh sochne lag jata hai ki aage kya karna hai

Kyuki abhi vo Priya Aur Maa ka picha nahi karna chahta tha lekin man me ek dar bhi tha ki agar kuch hogya to

Bechara buri duvidha me fas chuka tha aur uske pass jada raste nahi the

Family ke mamle me vo compromise bhi nahi kar sakta tha

Esliye usne socha jab tak vo ghar na pahuche tab tak unka dhayan rakhunga aur uske baad baki ka kaam dekhunga

Ye soch kar vo firse unka picha karne laga lekin Priya aur Maa ek farmhouse type jagah par ruk gaye aur dono andar chali gaye aur unke hath me bahut bada beg tha jisse dekh ke hi Daksh samjh gaya ki usme paise hai

Vaha bahut se farmhouse bane hue the lekin Daksh apni car se nahi utar sakta tha kyuki agar koe usse dekh leta to problem ho jati

Aur vo na vaha se andar ka pata kar sakta tha ki andar chal raha hai esliye vahi chhup ke car me hi batha raha

Lekin pura tayar thi ki agar kuch hua to agle hi second yaha lashe bicha dega

Daksh sochne laga ki etne sare paise leke Maa aur Priya yaha kya karne aaye hai
Kya koe unhe blackmail to nahi kar raha hai?

Daksh bahut time tak unka intzaar karne laga lekin vaha se koe bahar nahi aaya
Ab usse bhi thodi thodi tension hone lagi thi

Ab Daksh ne andar jane ki soch li lekin usse bahar ka bhi dhayan rakhna tha esliye usne Malik ke bete ko phone kiya aur aadmi bula liye

Unhe bahar khada karke khud chhup chhup ke andar jane laga

Daksh ko apni to koe parvah thi nahi lekin andar uski Maa aur uska pyaar tha esliye vo thodi savdhani barat raha tha

Ek window se andar kuda aur gate par khade bande ko sabse pehle latkaya

Body vahi chhod nahi sakta tha esliye ek kamre me daal ke band kar diya

Fir edar udhar dekhte hue aage jane laga lekin usse pehle gun par silencer laga liya tha

Daksh etna trained tha ki logo ki najaro se bach ke kaise nikalna hai ye usse bahut ache se pata tha

Esliye usse andar gusne me jada problem nahi hue lekin es bich do teen gunde latak gaye the bechare

Daksh first floor par pahucha aur vaha se niche dekhne laga jaha Priya Maa aur kuch log usse saaf saaf dikh rahe the lekin vo unki baat samjh nahi pa raha tha

Vo log aamne samne bathe the aur kuch baatein kar rahe the aur unke side me hi bahut sara paisa pada hua tha

Chalo dusri taraf ki baatein sunte hai

Maa dheere se
Vo aagya hai ab acting start karo

Aadmi Priya aur Maa par gun tante hue chhila chhila ke baat karne laga

Tujhe jab 10 khokhe ki bola tha to tu kam kyu laye
Jindagi pyaari nahi hai kya tujhe

Ab tu dogune degi nahi to teri ye sundar si beti ko yahiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Bas etni hi aawaz nikal pae aur uska sir tarbuzz ki tarah fat gaya

Vaha jitne bhi log the unki vaise hi fat gaye kyuki sabko Daksh ke bare me pata chal chuka tha

Vo to esliye kaam karne ko raji hue the ki Maa ne Unhe promise kiya ki unhe kuch nahi hoga

Lekin apne boss ka sar udne ke baad sabki gand faat chuki thi


Kuch hi second baad vaha goliyon ki bochaar hone lagi aur Priya Maa ko chhod ke vahi jamin par bikhar gaye

Priya aur Maa Bas aankh phade logo ko marte hue dekh rahi thi

Thodi der baad sab kuch ek dam shant hogya

Priya bahar ki taraf bhagi kyuki usse pata tha Daksh unse nahi milega vahi maa under ki taraf ki usse ander hi pakad le

Daksh vahi chhup chhap shanti se nikalne laga usse laga ki Priya aur Maa ko normal hone me thoda time lagega tab tak vo nikal jaega

Priya- daksssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh
Bahut pyaar aur bahut dard bhari aawaz Daksh ke kano me padi

Daksh ko ek second bhi nahi laga ye pahchane me ki ye kiski aawaz hai

Agle hi second uski aur Priya ki moments flashback ki tarah uski ankhon ke samne gujarne lagi

Aur dheere dheere uska chehra apne aap piche mudne laga

Aur jaise hi Priya aur Daksh ki najar mili

Priya ki ankhon me se samundar nikalne laga

Vo Bas ek tak apne pyaar ko dekhti rahi aur aashon bahati rahi

Ab aur intzaar karna dono se namumkin tha esliye ek dusre ki taraf bhagne lage

Lekin tabhi kahi se ek goli chalti hai jo sidha Daksh ke sarir me gus jati hai

Aur Daksh jo bhag raha tha vo sidha Priya ki god me jake gira

Samne se dusri goli chalne se pehle Priya ki gun se Goli nikali aur samne wale ke dil me gus gaye......

Flashback

Priya- lekin maa plan kya hai?
Maa- dekho, Daksh ne pakka kuch camera vagra lagaye honge aur kuch log bhi hire kar rakhe honge jinki help se vo hum par najar rakh paye
To mera plan ye hai ki hum un bando ko pehle pakde

Priya- aur unse Daksh ka pata
Brilliant idea
Maa- unko Daksh ke bare me kuch nahi pata hoga

Priya- to fir hum unko pakad hi kyu rahe hai?
Maa- jab Daksh ke pas koe Intel nahi bachega
Aur usse ye bhi nahi pata chalega ki uske bande ek dam se kaha gayab ho gaye to vo bhaga bhaga yaha aaega

Priya- lekin ye bhi to ho sakta hai ki vo aur logo ko hier karke bej de
Maa- bilkul ho sakta hai lekin jab usse uske ghar ke bahar gang ke log dikhenge to vo khud aaega

Priya- matlab?
Maa- matlab ye ki hum kuch gunde heir karenge jo humare ghar ke bahar humari hi jasusi kare
Taki jab Daksh ke log gayab ho aur vo hume check karke to usse kuch galat dikhe
Usse aisa lage ki hum problem me hai

Priya- fir to usse vapas aana hi padega
Lekin vo sabko door se hi marke chala gaya to
Maa- possibility hai
Lekin jab ye sab hoga tab hum paise leke ek anjaan jagah jaenge aur mujhe pura yakin hai ki Daksh humara picha karega

Priya- lekin hum paise leke kaha jaenge
Maa- sirf usse dikhane ke liye ki koe hume blackmail kar raha hai aur hum problem me hai
Fir jab vo hume dekhega to thori acting karenge
Mujhe yakin hai vo sabko maar dega
Aur ussi time hume usse gayab hone se pehle pakadna hai

Priya- bahut muskil kaam hai
Maa- aur koe rasta nahi hai humare pas

Priya- mujhe pata hai maa
Aap tension mat lo
Humara Daksh vapas aaega
Maa- humara Daksh vapas aaega.....

nice update dost

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-47

Rashmi- betu ye kya hogya tujhe
Please mujhe chhod ke mat jana
Main fir tujhse alag nahi ho sakti

Rashmi- please aankh khol na betu
Dekh Teri Didu tujhe bula rahi hai
Dekh ro rahi hai vo

"Tujhe to bilkul pasand nahi tha na meri ankhon me aashon fir kyu mujhe rula raha hai?
Bata na betu, kyu rula raha hai apni Didu ko

Dekh main sorry bol rahi hu
Main maafi mangti hu tujhse ki main door chali gaye the tere se
Lekin meri majburi thi bhai
Main tujhe vaisi halaat me nahi dekh sakti thi
Mujhe laga agar main door ho gaye to sayad tu vo pagalpan chhod ke Maa ke pass aa jaye aur unhe sambhale

Fir jab sab thik ho jaega tab main vapas aa jaungi

Lekin sab kuch ulta hogya
Jo maine aur Maa ne socha tha sab ulta ho gaya

Tu pehle se bhi jada khatarnaak ho gaya aur ye humne socha hi nahi ki mere jane ke baad to tu toot hi jaega

Fir kon sambhalega tujhe?
Kon tujhe pyaar karega
Kon tera acha bhala tujhe batega

Lekin Bhai Jo humne kiya vo sab tere ache ke liye hi kiya tha

Phir bhi main tujhe maafi maang rahi hu

Maaf Kapde na apni didu ko
Laga le na ek baar mujhe apne galle se

Ro lene de na mujhe teri bahoo me
Ek baar maafi maang lene de na teri bahoo me
Ek baar maaf bhi karde na teri bahoo me

Main bhi tujhse bahut pyaar karti hu na bhai
Tu bhi to karta hai to uth ja na ab

Kitna rulaega apni Didu ko

Maa- beta bas kar ab
Vo sogya hai
Usse jo chahiye tha usse vo mil gaya

Priya- ye aise nahi ja sakta maa
Enhe uthna hoga
Mere liye, didi ke liye aapke liye aur es gudia ke liye
Enhe uthna hi hoga

Ye dara rahe hai hume
Humesha bhi to aise hi karte hai na
Hume pareshan karte hai fir rota dekh vapas aashon puchne aate hai

Abhi bhi dekhna uthenge aur hum sabko galle laga lenge

Priya- hai na didi
Ye uthenge na
Mujhe bahut kuch batana hai enhe
Mujhe bahut kuch puchna hai ense

Rashmi- ha esse uthna hi padega
Eske pass aur koe rasta nahi hai
Esse uthna hi hai

Priya- uth jao na
Aankh khol ke ek baar meri taraf dekho na
Bahut pyaar karti hu main aapse
Bahut
Aapke bina jinda main bhi nahi rah paungi


" chhod kar agar rasto me hi jana tha
To
Manjil ke sapne hi kyu dikhaye"


Maa apni dono betiyo ko aisa bekharte dekh kar khud bhi aashon bahane lagi thi

Dukh unko bhi bahut tha lekin ab vohi ek matar aisi thi jo situation ko thoda bahut sambhal sakti thi

Na to es time Priya apne hosh me thi aur na rashmi

Vo dono to paglo ki tarah Daksh ke mare hue sarir me jaan jhokne ki nakaam kosis kar rahi thi

Pata un dono ko tha ki Daksh ab nahi uthne wala
Vo ab so chuka hai

Unhe ye bhi pata tha ki Daksh in the end chahta bhi to yehi tha

Jabse uspar bhoot sawaar hua tha badla ka tabse hi usne bolta rahta tha jab uska makshad khatam ho jaega tab vo aaram se ek gehri nind me so jaega

Usse aur kuch chahiye bhi to nahi tha apni jindagi me

Priya ko vo uske baap se chhuda hi laya tha
Jo ki uska ultimate goal tha

Vo ab uske maa ke sath rahti thi
Malab uske maa ko ek aur beti ka pyaar aur support mil raha tha

Rashmi ka to usse kuch idea hi nahi tha ki kaise uski maa aur behan ne ek game khel rakha tha uske sath

Ek plastic surgery kara ke koe dusri ladki ko uske samne laya gaya tha jisse vo bechara apni behan samjhne laga tha

Jiski maut par vo etna toot gaya tha ki usne charo taraf tabhai macha di thi

Kya soch kar ye sab planning ki gae thi aur kya ho gaya tha

Agar ye sab nahi hota aur Rashmi uske sath hoti to sayad aaj situation bhi kuch aur hoti

Kyuki sirf Rashmi ki hi to baat sunta tha vo aur Rashmi usse bilkul sahi advice bhi deti thi esliye sayad, SAYAD aaj baat kuch aur hoti

Lekin sala ye hi to hai SAYAD

Bahut chhota lekin fir bhi bahut bada word hai

Abhi mujhe pata hai ki bahut galiya padni wali hai mujhe

Jaisi ki ek dost ne comment bhi kiya ki writer ke pass jarur koe argument hoga Daksh ko marne ke liye aur sad ending dene ke liye

To chalo argument karte hai

First
Daksh ne aisa kya kiya hai jiski vajah se vo jinda rakha jaye except ki usne Priya ko apne baap ke chungal se nikala?

Dosto usne ye kiye lekin kya ek jaan ki kimat etni sari jaan ho sakti hai?

Mana ki daksh ki family thi lekin jin jin logo ko Daksh ne mara tha kya unki family nahi thi?

Dusra point
Daksh ka ultimate goal kya tha?

Usse starting se hi apne baap se badla lena tha to usne le liya
Usse Priya ko bahar nikalna tha usne nikal diya

Ab uske pass bacha kya tha karne ko

Jo uska Lakshay tha vo to pura ho chuka hai na

Tisra point
Rashmi ja chuki hai uski life se(jitna usse pata hai)
Maa ne pehle hi usse apne samne na aane ki warning de rakhi hai
Priya ke sath vo relationship rakh kaise sakta hai
Aur agar rakha to apni Maa se najar kaise utha ke dekhega?

Last but most important
Sab bolte hai ki bhai happy ending honi chahiye kyuki in the end hume ye dikhana jaruri hota hai ki sahi person ki galat par jeet hue hai
Lekin yaha kon sahi hai?

Mujhe to koe nahi lag raha
Na Daksh hai aur na priya
Baap ko to chalo chhod hi do

To actually me ye ending bahut kuch bataegi ki agar main galat raste par gaye chahe apni family ya pyaar ke liye hi

Fir bhi end me hum apne liye acha expect nahi kar sakte

May be Daksh ko Rashmi se baat karni chahiye thi
May be Daksh aur Rashmi ko Priya se baat karni chahiye thi
Ya fir Daksh ko sidha baap par attack karna tha, usse Priya ko bich me lana hi nahi chahiye tha

Bahut sari possibilities thi lekin kiya kya?

Back to story

Priya aur Rashmi ka ro roke bura haal tha aur kuch vaisa hi Maa ka bhi tha lekin vo kisi tarah se apne aapko sambhale hue the kyuki usse hi Priya aur Rashmi ko sambhalna tha

Maa- beta hume Daksh ko ghar leke jana hoga
Rashmi rote hue
Nahi ye khud uth ke jaega
Pehle mujhse pyaar karega, mujhe maaf karega
Fir hum sab sath jaenge jaha eski shadi hogi

Maa bade pyaar se ek taraf Priya ko apni bahoo me leke samjha rahi thi aur dusri taraf Rashmi ko

Ek Maa ki halaat samjhne ki kosis karo jiska jawan beta uski aankhon ke samne mara pada hai uske dil par kya gujar rahi hogi

Ek behan aur ek premika jinhone usse had se jada muhobaat ki thi aaj vo unhe chhod ke ja chuka tha

**** mumma don't cry na
I will wake him up
Don't worry
But first you have to stop crying
Ek pyaari si aawaz kahi se aae.....

beautiful update dost

 

[Nevil singh]

Update-48

*** mamu utho
Dekho mamma bhi ro rahi hai aur maami bhi
Now get up bahut so liye aap
Aur vo pyaari se gudia apne chhote chhote hatho se Daksh ka hath pakad ke uthane lagti hai

*** ohhh mamu, you are so heavy
Mujhse nahi ho raha
Bechari puri takaat laga ke kosis karti hai

**** aap aise nahi manoge
Ek to mujhse aaj tak mile nahi ho aur jab mile to etne so rahe ho
Aur vo Daksh ke pet par bath jati hai

Sabse pehle to Daksh ke gallo par kiss karti hai aur fir
Uska sar pakad ke usse uthane ki kosis karti hai

Sab uska bachpana dekh ke aashon bahate hue smile karne lagte hai

**** hahhh maammmuuuu
Main aapppkoo uthha kkee rahhungii
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Aap aise nahi manoge
Aur vo Daksh ko gudgudi karne lagti hai

**** aaya majja mamu
Ye lo aur lo
Aur fir jor jor se usse gud gudi karne lagti hai

Lekin Daksh jab bhi nahi uthata to vo thodi mayush ho jati hai

**** mamma ye bahut jiddi hai
Uth hi nahe rahe
Rashmi- beta ye sach me bahut jidi hai
Rashmi rote hue boli aur gudia ko apne Galle laga liya

Lekin gudia ka hath Daksh ke hath me hi raha kyuki vo usse chhodna bhul gaye

Rashmi- ye chala gaya beta tumhe aur hum sabko chhod ke
Gudia- kaha chale gaye mumma
Hum bhi vahi chalte hai
Vo masumiyat se boli

Rashmi- fir kabhi jaenge beta
Lekin ek din jarur jaenge
Vo bahut badi baat bol gaye thi
Agar kisi ke samjh me aaye to

Lekin gudia to abhi bachi thi
Usse kaha kuch samjh me aa raha tha

Priya- main car leke aati hu
Daksh ko Ghar leke jana hai
Vo himmat karke boli

Rashmi- beta aap mami ke sath jao
Rashmi gudia se boli kyuki vo Priya ko akele nahi jane dena chahti thi

Gudia rahti to uska mood thoda thik rahega

Gudia jaise hi Priya ke taraf badhne lagi uske pair vahi ke vahi jam gaye

Gudia- mumma aap mera hath chhodoge tabhi to main jaungi
Usne bina piche dekhe badi masumayat se kaha

Rashmi- Maine kaha.....
Bolte Bolte ruk gaye aur Daksh ki taraf dekhne lagi
Jiske hath me Gudia ka hath tha lekin uski aankhen abhi bhi band thi

Rashmi- betu betu
Karte hue Daksh se lipat gaye

Gudia- mumma mujhe dekhne de
Vo aage aae aur Daksh ke dil ke pas apne kaan laga ke sunene lagi

Gudia- mumma
Ye bol rahe Hai lekin mujhe samjh nahi aa raha
Bas dhak dhak ki aawaz aa rahi hai

Priya, Rashmi aur Maa ne ye sunte hi kisi taraf jaldi se Daksh ko uthaya aur usse bahar le jane lage

Vahi raste me dusri Rashmi ki lash padi thi jisko unhone abhi cross Kiya tha

Ab Usne Daksh par goli kyu chalae ya fir nisana koe aur tha aur lagi kisi par
Ye sare raaj uske sath hi khatam ho gaye

Ye ho sakta hai ki vo Daksh ko pasand karne lagi ho aur Daksh Priya ko pasand karta tha

To sayad nisana Priya bhi ho shakti thi lekin kuch bhi pakka nahi bol sakte
Ab vo ja chuki hai

Daksh ko hospital le jaya gaya

Jaha bahut ghanto tak uska operation chala

Doctors ne bol diya tha ki blood bahut jada nikal chuka hai esliye kuch bhi nahi bol sakte

Bach bhi sakta hai aur nahi bhi

Nahi bachne ke chance jada hai
Lekin jaise hi Priya ki gun unke dimag ke samne aae aur unki gand se 75 tarike ke pasine nikalne lage

Tab unke muh se sirf yehi nikla

Hum usse bachaenge, kisi bhi kimat par bachaenge

Do din ho gaye the Daksh ko hospital laye gaye

Rashmi ke husband ne sabko sambhala hua tha

Vo ek behad sarif, caring aur honest civil servants tha

Rashmi ki bhi mulakat uske kisi ngo me hi hue the jab Rashmi unher ground thi

Vahi se unke pyaar ki suruvaat hue aur fir shadi bhi

Rashmi Daksh ko bina bataye kuch nahi karna chahti thi lekin Maa ke samjhane par aur Daksh ke halaat ko dekhte hue usse karni padi

Kyuki us waqt Daksh ka vapas aana behad muskil tha aur agar us waqt usse Rashmi ke bare me Pata chalta to tabhai ke alava aur kuch nahi hota

Esliye usse kuch nahi bataya gaya aur en dono ne chupke se shadi karli

Uska naam adhitya tha
Extra h lagata tha pata nahi kyu

Yaha hospital me vo sabka bilkul apni family ki tarah khayal rakh raha tha

Kisko kitna time hogya hai, kisne Kab khana khaya ,Kisko ab ghar jana chahiye

Ye sab usko pata tha

Lekin vo sab to thik tha lekin Daksh to nahi uth raha tha na

Uski Goli bhi nikal di gaye the aur operation hue bhi kafi waqt bit gaya tha

Agar vo 12 din ke andar nahi utha to fir comma me jane ka khatra ho jaega aur uske sahi hone ke probability bilkul kam

Esliye usse uthane ki puri kosis ki ja rahi thi

Har koe apne apne tarike se usse uthane ki kosis karta

Gudia apne bachpane se to Rashmi apne behan ke pyaar se

Maa to bas jab bhi Daksh ke paas aati sirf aashon hi bahati thi esliye usse kam hi Daksh ke paas aane diya jata tha

Ek din yuhi Rashmi Daksh ke baat kar rahi thi matlab sirf vohi bol rahi thi

Daksh to chhup chhap pada tha

Rashmi- pata hai Daksh main apne dad ke bare me sab kuch janti thi
Mujhe ache se maloom tha ki vo kaise aadmi hai
Lekin maine kabhi kuch nahi kiya kyuki sirf vohi to bache the meri jindagi me
Vo kaise bhi the mujhe pyaar karte the
Lekin mujhe meri Maa ya tumhri Maa ke sath unhone kya kiya ye nahi pata tha

Fir tum aaye
Tumhe to main pehle se hi janti thi
Mujhe pata tha ki tum don ho
Hum businessman logo ke pas gundo ki khabar pehle pahuch jati hai

Maine socha yaha aae ho to pehle apna kaam nikalva leti hu
Uske baad jo hoga dekha jaega

Main sirf apne business me tumhe use karna chahti thi

Lekin kab business ke bahane tumse pyaar hogya mujhe pata hi nahi chala

Tumhri har ek baatein aise flashback ki tarah meri ankon ke samne gumti rahti

Pata hai jab tum ek baar kuch dino ke liye gayab ho gaye the to main kitna roe thi

Do dino tak to kuch khaya bhi nahi tha
Mujhe laga tum ab kabhi lout ke nahi aaoge
Aur main tumhe vapas chahti thi apni life me

Ha maine pehle izhaar nahi kiya tha lekin muhobaat to tumse tumse pehle hi ho gaye the

Ladki hu na pehle kaise bol deti
Lekin tum bhi thehre mote dimag ke kuch samjh me hi nahi aaya tumhe
Ya fir na samjhne ki acting karte rahe

Jab finally tumhe bataya aur tumne dusri Ladki ke bare me mujhe bataya to ek second ke liye to aisa laga jaise sab kuch yahi tham sa gaya hai
Meri to life hi khatam ho gaye the

Lekin fir pagalpan me vo sari harkate kardi

Dekho main ye nahi kah rahi ki aage se aisa kuch nahi hoga
Main aisa hi karungi aur tumhe meri har baat manani padegi
Ache husband ke jaise

Aur hum shadi ke baad Maa ko leke pahado par chale jaenge, jaisa tum humesha chahte the

Lekin no drugs
Okay?

Jab bhi tumhe nasha karna ho mere pyaar ka kar lena lekin no drugs

Hum vahi shanti se rahenge aur ek dusre ko khub pyaar karenge

Lekin usse pehle tumhe uthna hoga na babu

Uth jao na ab
Kitna ruloge
Tum bahut gande ho
Humesha mujhe rulate rahte ho

Ab uth jao aur mere aashon.....
Vo rote hue Daksh ke bahoo me sar rakh leti hai

Aur vahi subakiya leti rahti hai

Main tumhe dobara nahi khona chahti Daksh
Dobara nahi khona chahti

Beintaah muhobaat hai tumse

Ek last time vapas aajao aur fir kabhi tumhre paas koe problem nahi aane dungi

Main ek protection layer ki tarah tumhra khayal rakhungi

I love you daksh
I love you so so much

Aur vo firse rone lagti hai
Kafi der ro ro ke usne Daksh ke sare kapde geele kar diye the

Vo ab bahar jana chahti thi kyuki Daksh ki aisi halaat usse dekhi nahi Ja rahi thi

Lekin vo bahar nikal nahi paa rahi thi kyuki
DO MAJBUT HATHO NE USSE APNI BAHOO ME BHAR LIYA THA


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jordaar update ke sath mitr ne ek shaandaar kathanak ka bemishaal andaj me samapan kiya sarahniye hai bandhu.

 

[Siraj Patel]

4 completing 100 pages on your thread.
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[Lone survivor]

on reaching 100 pages.

One of the twisted love stories in this forum.

Amazing writer, but sadly no more active in this forum.

I'm still here mate.

 

[Dev rathor]

I'm still here mate.

Bhai pls aap uss story ko dubara likhna start kar do plz

 

[Lone survivor]

jordaar update ke sath mitr ne ek shaandaar kathanak ka bemishaal andaj me samapan kiya sarahniye hai bandhu.

thank you for your love and thank you for gulam too
Appreciate that