Romance Yeh bhi Muhabat hi hai (COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

waiting new story

In fews days to come it will b started biradar

 

[Rahul]

In fews days to come it will b started biradar

thanks for keeping the promise you made, the new story is here now, the chawla family

 

[Rowdywa]

This was the first story of yours which i read at exbii Casi. remember?
going to read it from the start once again.

 

[Rowdywa]

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Yeh bhi muhabat hi hai​

Vijay ek teyiss saal ka larka tha. Woh bahot hi sentimental kissam ka tha aur ziada hi jazbaati tha. Lekin dimaagh ka bahot garam bhi tha woh. Lamba kad, 6ft2inches, gora rang, mazboot jism, taakatwar, aur khubsurat bhi tha woh. Bilkool hero. Teyis saal ke har larkon ka koyi na koyi ishk ka chakar to hote hai. To kia Vijay ke zindagi mein koyi tha?

Chalo dekhtey hein.

Vijay ke pita ke do bhai the. Ek bara aur ek uske pita se chota. Jahan Vijay rehta tha, uss ke donon chacha uss ke paroshi bhi the. Vijay ka ghar bich mein tha aur donon taraf, bagal mein do chacha ke ghar the. Voh sheher ke kuch hi doorie par rehta tha. Jahan who rehta tha uss ke donon taraf do cities the, ek uss ke purab mein aur ek paschim mein. Purab wale sheher sirf 10 kms ki doorie par tha aur paschim wale sheher sirf 3 kms ki doorie par.

Ab jahan who rehta tha, wahan ka mukhya raasta bahot hi vyast raha kartey the kyuke wahin se guzar kar donon taraf ke shehron tak saari motar gadi, bus, trucks, motor cycles vaghaira guzartey the. Main ek sketch banata hoon jiss se aap logon ko vistaal purvak samajh mein ayega.

Sketch yeh raha:


Ab iss sketch se aap logon ko pata chalega ke kaun kahan rehta hai. Sketch ko dekh kar aap logon ko pata chalega ke uss ke dayein taraf uss ka bara chacha ka ghar hai, lekin bayein taraf ki makaan par likha hai ‘Aisha’s house’ Hai nah? To yeh Aisha kaun hai bhai?

Chalo ye bhi dekh lete hein.

Yeh Aisha, Vijay ka chota chacha ki beti hai. Ab aap log sketch par yeh bhi dekheinguey, ke kitna vyast main road hai, uss main road se hokar weh log apni lane mein atey hein phir apney apney ghar mein. Uss lane ka naam hai Ranvheer lane kyunke Ranvheer Vijay ka family name hai, yani uss ka surname hai. So, Aisha ka bhi surname Ranvheer hi hai.

Ab in teenon bhaiyon mein bahot pyar tha, teenon ek doosre ke yahan atey jatey the, aur teenon ghar ke bachchey bhi aya jaya kartey the, jeise ke teenon ghar teenon family ke liye ho. Ek ke yahan kabhie koyi kaam ho to teenon pariwaar ke sabhi sadasya ek hi kaam waley ghar mein jamaa ho jatey the. Jeise ke kabhi koyi pooja vidhi ka kaam ho, ya mangni, ya vivah, ya kuch bhi ho, sab ek saath juth jatey the.

Ab yeh jo Vijay tha, jab woh....... saal ka tha, tab Aisha .......ki thi. Hamesha ki tarah, school se waapas aney ke baad, Vijay turanth Aisha ke ghar pohonch jata tha uss se cher chani karney, uss ki chachi ki bilkool aadat thi ke Vijay har roz ata hai aur bachon ke sath khelta hai. Aur yeh uske chacha ko bhi maloom tha. Bachpan se Vijay wahan jata tha aur apne chacha ke bachon ke sath khelta tha. Aisha ka ek bada bhai aur ek choti behen bhi the. Aur Vijay ka ek bada bhai aur 2 choti behnein thiin. Yani Vijay apne paraviwaar ka dusra awlad tha.

Ab bachpan se har tarah ke khel, cher chani houwa karta tha…kabhi kabhi to larayi bhi hotey the bachchon mein, aapas mein jhagartey bhi the, aur maa baap se report bhi kartey the. Lekin sab se bada chacha jo tha uss ne sabhi awraton se, aur bhaiyon se yeh ganbhirta ke saath hukm diya tha ke kabhi bhi bachchon ki vajah se apnon mein koyi bhi anban nahin honi chahiye. Bachchey to bachchey hotey hein aaj jhagrey to kal phir ek ho jatey hein.

Ab jab Vijay ...... saal ka huwa tha, to uss ka mann, Aisha ki taraf kuch ziada hi khincha jata tha. Who uss ko bachpan se hi bahot passand karta tha, aur ussi ke saath ziada waqt guzaarta tha. Yeh sabhi ko pata tha ke Vijay aur Aisha ek dusrey ke bina kabhi nahin rehtey. Yeh baat teenon gharon mein mashoor tha. Aur teenon gharon ke bachchey aur parents bhi iss baat se waakif the. Lekin kabhi kissi ne na toka na danta, to Vijay araam se aguey bahrta gaya. Bus ek shaam ko who Aisha ke saath homeworks mein help kar raha tha, aur usney Aisha ke kamar par apna hath rakha, sehlaya, aur dhirey se apna hath Aisha ki chaati par phehra. Aisha khadi hokar Vijay ko bahot zor se do thappar uske gaal par marey. Vijay kharey ke kharey rehgaya, aur usske enkhon se ensoo behney lage…… phir who apney sar nichey kiye huwe dhirey se apney ghar ko chal diye. Aisha sirf ..... saal kit hi yeh tab ki batein hein. Main aap logon ko shuruwaat se kahani ko samjha raha hoon. Abhi to Vijay teyiss saal ki hein aur main aap logon ko tab ki baton se suna raha hoon.

To uss din Vijay rotey huwe chup chap wahan se chala gaya. Aisha khari reh gayi aur usko afsos huwa ke usney Vijay ko kyun mara… who bhi baith kar roney lagi. Maa ne pucha kia huwa to kuch na boli, bas roti hi gayi. Udhar Vijay apney kamrey mein bandh tha……

Aisha .... saal ki baali umr mein bahot hi sundar nikhri huwi thi. Uss ke bahot hi khub surat baal the, jism to abhi abhi jawani ko hawa de rahi thi. Khub gori thi. Aur Vijay to usko bachpan se chahta tha. Lekin Aisha ko pata nahin tah ke Vijay uss se pyar karta hai, who to har kissi ki tarah jeise khelti thi, batein karti thi veise hi Vijay se bhi karti thi.


To be continued……….

Started reading this again casi. Again getting the same feel bro. You hv an electrical attraction in ur writing. This is such a sweet love STORY. Its the BEST.

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 3



Uss din ke baad donon Aisha aur Vijay ek doosre ke aur bhi kareeb hogaye aur donon ek doosrey ka intezaar kartey rahe ke kab ek doosrey ka deedaar hoga.

Aisha ko jahan bhi jana tha sirf Vijay ko hi dhunta saath janey ke liye, shops, walks, cinema, restaurants, kahin bhi Aisha ko jana hota to sirf Vijay ko hi saath leke jati thi. Zara sa sadak ke uss paar bhi jana hota to woh Vijay ke baghair nahin jaati thi.

Bas sirf school akeli jaati thi kyunke woh girl’s school mein pahrti thi aur Vijay boys school mein. Phir bhi woh donon schools ek hi sheher mein the, paschim wale sheher mein. Aur har sham ko school khatam honey ke baad donon ek doosrey ka intezaar kartey aur sath saath wapas ghar ko atey the. Kabhi bus mein kabhie paidal bhi.

Agar koyi ladka kabhie Aisha ko cherta to Vijay uss ladkey se jhagad parta tha. Weise hi ek din donon paidal wapas aarahe the, aur do teen larkon ne raastey mein Aisha ko chera, to zabardast larayi huwi Vijay aur unn ladkon ke bich. Vijay ghayal hogaya tha aur usske danyi enhon ke nichey se, aur hath se, khoon behraha tha.

Aisaha bahot royi aur Vijay ko thaamtey huwe ghar wapas ayi aur, uss ka khub dekh bhaal kiya. Zakhmon par Aisha ne patti lagayi aur Vijay ke saath raat der tak saath guzaari. Donon ke maa baap ko pata chala ke kia maamla tha, to kissi ne kuch bura nahin kaha, balke bada chacha ne Vijay ko badhayi di ke uss ne Aisha ki raksha ki.

Uss raat ko Aisha Vijay ke ghar hi sogayi, ussi ke kamrey mein aur donon ek doosrey ko bahon mein lekar soye. Lekin kuch bhi ghalat nahin huwa. Bilkool pavitra the donon.


Donon, Aisha aur Vijay ek doosrey ke baghair ab nahin reh paate the. Koyi bhi subha eisi nahin thi jab donon savere savere ek saath nahi paaye jatey, koyi bhi sham eisi nahin thi jab dono ek saath school se wapas ate huwe na dikhtey, koyi bhi eisi raat nahin thi jab dono ek saath ek kamrey mein na ho.

Homeworks bhi saath kartey kabhie Vijay Aisha ke yahan to kabhi Aisha Vijay ke ghar. TV serials bhi saath saaath hi dekhtey, khana bhi saath saath hi khatey, ghumney bhi ek saath hi jatey, cinema bhi jana ho to, sabhi cousins ek saath jatey par Vijay aur Aisha sabhi ke bich mein lekin ek saath hotey. Baaki sabhi cousins ko pata tha ke inn donon mein gehra pyar tha, aur kiisi ko koyi objections nahin tha. Lekin ghar waley ko kia yeh pata tha ke inn donon ke bich pyar hai? Kia ghar waley iss rishtey ko manzoor kartey?

Yehto waqt hi batayega dosto.


Jab Aisha 16 saal ki huwi to Vijay 18 ko ponhchey. Donon tab bhi college jate the aur woh bhi ek saath aur wapas bhi saath saath. Tab bhi donon ek saath homeworks kartey, aur aksar Vijay ko Aisha ki madad karni parti kyunke Vijay bahot hi honshyaar tha studies mein.

Har roz Aisha jo cakes school mein khati to uss mein se ek tukda Vijay ke liye bacha kat rakti, aur sham ko ghar lawthtey waqt usko khilati. Vijay bhi yehi karta har roz apni bachayi huwi cakes se.


To be continued.......................

read till 3rd update bro, its such a lovely emotional love story that i read it again and again.
you have the art of writing man. you treat and portray emotion and love so intensely that the reader just get glued to your writing.
its wonderful

 

[Casinar]

This was the first story of yours which i read at exbii Casi. remember?
going to read it from the start once again.

Thanks my friend

 

[Casinar]

Started reading this again casi. Again getting the same feel bro. You hv an electrical attraction in ur writing. This is such a sweet love STORY. Its the BEST.

thanks very much appreciate it

 

[Casinar]

read till 3rd update bro, its such a lovely emotional love story that i read it again and again.
you have the art of writing man. you treat and portray emotion and love so intensely that the reader just get glued to your writing.
its wonderful

thanks for the appreciation

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 5​

Vijay aur Aisha ka yeh pyar ka sislsila chalta raha.


Din guzartey gaye, Mahinon ne kayi karwatein li, saal biitey, mawsam apna rang badalta gaya, lekin Inn donon ki pyar mein koyi badlaav nahin aya. Balkey inn ka pyar aur hi bahrta gaya, bahrta gaya, junoon ki had tak. Donon pyar mein doobtey gaye, doobtey gaye, doosri dunya mein khotey gaye, khotey gaye....


Vijay 20 saal ka huwa aur Aisha 19 ko honey ki thi(18 and a half huwi thi)


Har raaton ko inn ka milna, bandh kamrey mein pyar bhari batein karna, muhabat ki aghosh mein khojana.... yeh sab aadat ban gayi thi aur donon mein se kissi ko bhi ek dusrey ke baghair zindagi bilkool hi adhuri lagti thi. Har raat ishk ke gehrey lamhon mein donon bilkool khojatey the. Kabhi jism kiska kiss ke upar hai pata hi nahin chalta tha, donon itne ek dusrey mein khojatey the. Ishk ki gehri, gambhir aalam mein donon jismani taalukaat ki had paar kar chuke the thik jab Aisha 18 saal ki huwi thi.... Aisha ne apne badan saath apne aap ko Vijay so samarpan kar diya tha apni athaarwiin saalgirah ki raat ko. Yeh Vijay ke liye tohfa tha Aisha ki saalgirah ki mawke par Vijay ke liye. Jism ki milaap honey par donon ek doosrey ke aur ziada hi kareeb ho gaye aur jeise jurwa bachchey ek hi badan mein kabhi paida hotey hein, weise hi ye donon jeise ke do jism aur ek jaan ho gaye.

Uss ke baad to Aisha ka pyar Vijay ke liye hazaar guna ziada bahr gaya. Uss ne Vijay ko apni sab se badi dawlat jo uski pavitra thi, Vijay ko de chuki thi. Lekin woh bahot khush thi uss jismaani taalukaat se, kyun ke tab woh samajhney lagi thi ke weise taalukaat se pyar aur kashish aur ziada bahrti hai. Aisha apni jism ke har rag rag mein Vijay ko bassa chuki thi aur udhar Vijay to bachchpan se hi Aisha ko apni rouh mein samaa chukka tha.

Vijay aksar kaha karta tha Aisha se ke “Aisha tum mere lahu mein bassi ho, mere dil ke har dharkan mein mawjood ho, mere senson mein rehti ho aur mere jism ke har hissey ka ek tukda ho.

Jismani taalukaat ke baad Aisha ko pata chala ke Vijay weisa kyun kehta tha. Matlab ke woh uss se sachcha pyar karta tha aur Aisha ne uss ko utney dinon tak tarpaya tha intezaaar karwake.


To ab jab ek 20 aur ek 19 ke lag bhag ki umar ke the, to iss ek saal ke jismaani taalukaat ke dawraan, ek bhi raat dono ek doosre se milaap ke baghair nahin soye..... sona namumkin tha kissi ke liye bhi........donon taraf se ek gehra tarap unthta tha aur donon kissi bhi haalat mein mil hi lete the.

Ek baar to eisa bhi huwa tha ke Aisha ke yahan raat ko rehney ke liye kuch door ke rishtedaar aye huwe the, aur unn donon ka milna akele mein mushkil hi nahin par namumkin tha. Lekin uss raat ko, subha 4 bajeh tak donon apne apne ghar main jaag rahe the aur light ko on/off kiye jaa rahe the subha 4 bajeh tak...... Aisha ro pari yeh dekh kar ke Vijay so nahin raha tha, aur uss se milney ke liye tarap raha tha, to uss ne apni kamre ki khirki bahar kholi aur Vijay ko andar daakhil kiya, Vijay andar gaya to jeise sukhey banjar zameen par paani parney ke baad, uss zameen ko sukoon milta hai, weise hi apna Vijay ne sukoon mehsoos ki Aisha se humbistar honey ke baad. Donon jism, nanguey, bistar pe ek doosrey ke bahon mein, donon ki garm sensein ek doosrey ke badan par phoonk martey huwe subha ki pehli kiran ka swagat kiya uss raat, ya uss subha bhi keh saktey hein.......


To apney biswiinsaal mein hi Vijay management ki degree ka course follow kar raha tha University mein. Aur Aisha college ki aakhri saal mein thi, kyun ke agley saal woh bhi university mein daakhila lene wali thi jahan Vijay jata tha. Yeh donon ne apney aap mein faisla kar liya tha, taake tab donon ek saath ghar se nikleinguey, ek saath din bahr raheinguey aur ek saath sham ko wapas lawteinguey.......

Jab Aisha ke results aye tab Vijay Aisha ke liye university mein admission ki bandobass ki. Vijay ko abhi aur 3 saal course karni thi. Aisha sirf B.A. tak karna chahti thi, so yeh teen saal Vijay ke saath reh paati.

Usske baad donon pati patni ki tarah ghar se nikaltey aur university jatey aur wapas atey. Didn bhar jiss jiss din course nahin huwa kartey to donon khub mauj masti kartey. Ek doosrey ka saath paakar donon behad khush the jeise ke unko saari dunya ki khushi milgayi ho.


Aur Aisha ki ubharti jawani ko dekh kar, bahot saarey nawjawan, aur buzrug log bhi diwane hotey.... woh itni khusurat thi ke bas kuch poochna mat. Rang, roop, jism ki lambayi, chawrayi, chaati ki naap, pichey ka tan, sab ek dum diwana banane wale the.....


Mohalley mein to teen ya char nawjawan ne propose bhi kar di thi Aisha ko, aur Vijay se maar bhi pari thi. Ek ladkey ne ek din mall mein Aisha ki pichey wale hisse par apna haath phera tha, aur jab aisha chonhki thi to Vijay samajhney par uss ladke ko bhaga ke pita tha saarey logon ke saamney, aur security walon se lafda bhi huwa tha..... kuch nawjawan log Aisha se najayiz taalukaat rakhna chahtey the, aur Vijay se us ski mang karte the! Vijay ne unn logon ko bhi khub pita tha..... weise bahot saare haadsaat pesh aye the Aisha ki jawani aur khubsurti ko lekar.... har baar Vijay hi ne sab sambhala tha... yahan tak ke kabhi kabhi jab Aisha ghar aakar shikayat karti to uss ke pita hi Vijay ko bhejta tha gundon ko dekhney ke liye..aur Vijay baaki male cousins ko lekar ek dada ki tarah gundon ko Pitney ke liye chal parta tha......


To be continued........................

and here read up to here
yaar you are a wonderful writer mate
the way you describe signle things , the way you portray emotions and feelings is just out of the world. you are just an amazing writer casi. hats off, bow to you man

in this update each and every line is fantastic and wish t re and re read again and again.

 

[Casinar]

and here read up to here
yaar you are a wonderful writer mate
the way you describe signle things , the way you portray emotions and feelings is just out of the world. you are just an amazing writer casi. hats off, bow to you man

in this update each and every line is fantastic and wish t re and re read again and again.

Thanks my friend