Romance Yeh bhi Muhabat hi hai (COMPLETED)

[Rowdywa]

Update 17​

Uss din jab Kaajal Aisha ke yahan se wapas aya to Vijay ne poocha kia kaha Aisha ne to Kaajal ne jawab diya, “Vijay tum ab uss ko bhool hi jawo to achcha hoga yaar” Vijay ne phir bhi kaha ke woh kahein ke Aisha ne kia kaha. To Kaajal boli, “Uss ne buss itna kaha ke ab usska tumse koyi wasta nahin.” Vijay ye sunkar bilkool khamosh baith gaya apney bistar par apney sar ko haathon mein liye huwe. Kaajal kitna kuch kehti rahi lekin Vijay kissi aur dunya mein khoya huwa tha. Aakhir Kaajal ko wapas lawtna para.

Vijay ghanton tak apney kamrey mein bandh tha. Usski donon behnein uss ko dekhney ko gaye kayi baar, woh buss leta huwa tha bistar par aur bilkool ghamgeen chehra tha usska.


Shaam tak woh weise hi bandh raha ghar ke andar. Aur raat ko achaanak baahar gaya. Kaha ke club ja raha hai. Usski maa ne socha chalo thik hai kuch doston ke saath baahar rahega to behtar hoga uss ke liye.


Chaar ghantey baad woh wapas aya to nashey mein dhuth tha. Aur ro raha tha. Zubaan se kia baatein keh raha tha kuch samajh mein nahin araha tha, kyunke uss ne kuch ziada pi rakhi tha. Usski behen uska woh haal dekh kar roney lagi. Pooja Vijay ko bahot pyar karta tha. Donon behnon mein Pooja Vijay ke ziada kareeb tha aur, woh uss ke dekh bhaal mein lag gayi. Dant bhi rahi thi ke “itna kyun piya, piney se kia Aisha tumharey paas ajayegi?” Aur usski dant par Vijay hans raha tha. Pooja ne Vijay ko bistar par letaya, uss ke kapde nikale, pyjamah pehnayi, aur bistar ko arrange kar ke Vijay ko sulaya uss ne, bilkool jeise ek maa apney bête ko dekhti hai. Thori der baad Vijay ne ulti karna shuru kiya…. Pooja ne sab saaf kiya aur ek tub ko uss ke sirhaney rakha taake agar woh phir ulti kare to uss tub mein karey. Aur Pooja ne thori tel lekar Vijay ke sar par lagaya aur maalish ki kyunke uss ko pata tha ke uss ka sar dard kar raha hoga, iss liye pata tha kyunkey naye saal ke dawraan ek baar Vijay ne eise hi piya tha aur tab uss ka sar bahot dukha tha aur Pooja ne uss ka khayaal eise hi rakha tha.


Beech raat mein Vijay utha tha jab sab so rahe the aur apney light ko on aur off kiya tha 7 baar jeise woh har raat ko karta tha Aisha ke liye…yeh kartey waqt woh ensoo bhari enkhon se Aisha ke kamrey ki taraf dekh raha tha aur sochta tha ke kaash Aisha dekhe aur light on off karke jawaab de!!! Lekin eisa kuch bhi nah huwa aur Vijay ko tanha, akela sona para….. lekin tab neendh kahan….woh jaagta raha subha tak…. Subha chaar bajey woh uth kar Tiger ke paas gaya, uss ko khol diya chain se aur jaaney ko kaha…. Tiger nahin ja raha tha balkey Vijay ke saath khel raha tha aur zor se bhonk raha tha….. ab Aisha ka kamra to bilkool uss taraf tha, jeise ke main ne pehley bataya hai ke Vijay aur Aisha ke kamron ke bilkool beech mein Tiger ka chota sa ghar hai. To Tiger jab bhi bhonkta hai to Aisha ko bilkool sunayi deta hai. To ab jab woh itna zor se subha subha bhonk raha tha to ye nishchint tha ke Aisha ko sunayi degi…. Aur Vijay usski kamrey ki taraf dekh raha tha…. Bilkool subha tha, aur abhi abhi thora sa ujala ho hi raha tha…. Tab thori der ke baad, Vijay ne dekha ke, Aisha ki kamrey ki parda thora sa hata, aur Vijay ne dekha ke apni enkhon ko masaltey huwe Aisha usski taraf aur Tiger ki taraf dekh rahi thi. Jeise hi ussne Vijay ko dekha to jaldi hi uss ne parda wapas khinch liya, uss ne shayad socha tha ke Tiger yunhi bhonk raha hai, uss ne bilkool nahin socha hoga ke Vijay utney saverey jag gaya hoga kyunke Vijay to bahot der uthta tha, woh to Aisha uss ko har subha uthaney ko jati thi….. To Vijay ki dil bus thora sa khush huwa Aisha ki ek choti si jhalak dekh kar, par, bahot dukh huwa uss ko yeh dekh kar ke kiss tarah uss ko dekhney par Aisha ne parda khinchli…. Vikay ko ek bhaari cheez jeise usske dil par rakha ho, eisa lag raha tha ussko… sans lene mein takliff ho rahi thi…roney ko dil kar raha tha…. Uss ko bilkool samajh mein nahin araha tha ke woh kia karein……


Ussne Tiger ko janey ke liye kaha…. Tiger nahin ja raha tha…to Vijay ko ghussa aya aur ek danda lekar uss ne Tiger ko mara zor zor se…. Tiger chilaya aur dadtey huwe wahan se bhaga….. Ab har roz khulney ke baad Tiger ki aadat thi ke woh jaakar Aisha ke khirki ke paas, bhonkta tha, teen chaar baar, jeise ussko jagata ho…har roz woh weisa karta tha, aur Vijay aur Aisha ko ye pata tha…. Iss ke baarey mein sabhi family members ne pehley hi baat ki thi ke Tiger sirf Vijay aur Aisha ko maanta hai…. To phir weisa hi kiya Tiger ne, woh Aisha ke khirki ke paas kharey hohar zor se bhonka, aur Vijay uss ko dekh raha tha, iss umeed se ke Aisha phir se parda hatayegi aur Tiger ko kuch kahegi…… aur yeh sochkar ke woh wahan hai Aisha nahin dekhe gi, iss liye Vijat pichey hat gaya ye dekhney ke liye ke, kia Aisha Tiger se kuch kahegi bhi….Vijay chhupa huwa tha ek peyr ke pichey aur intezaar kar raha tha….. Tiger bhonk raha tha Aisha ke khirki ke nichey aur apna sar upar uthaye huwe Aisha ke khirki ko dekh raha tha, jeise ke woh ek insaan ho aur kuch batein kar raha ho ghar ke andar waley insaan se…lagta tha ke woh keh raha ho,”Khirki kholo, main yahan hoon, subha hogayi”….. Vijay ussko, bheeguey huwe enkhon se dekh raha tha…aur Aisha ne khirki kholi, parda hataya, Vijay ke kamrey ki taraf dekha ke kahin woh dekh to nahin raha….jab uss ne dekha ke koyi nahin hai, to Aisha ne Tiger se kaha,”Kia hai? Kyun bhonk raha hai? Main jaag gayi hoon, chal bhaag yahan se…” aur Tiger wahan se chala gaya…..


Vijay ko lagta tha barson baad uss ney Aisha ki awaaz suni… woh awaaz jiss se woh bahot passand karta tha, woh awaaz jiss ki taarif woh har roz karta tha, woh awaaz jiss ke suntey hi uss ka dil khushi se jhoom uthta tha, aaj woh uss awaz ko chup kar sunn raha tha…….


To be continued…………………

last night reached here
this is my favourite story regarding romance written by you. i just love each and every update of this thread.
Aisha is too cute and i love Pooja a lot. she has such a lovely character.

 

[Casinar]

have reached here casi
its still remains green this story and the updtes
still get the same feeling i had in 2010 weh i read it the first time

thanks bro

 

[Rowdywa]

Will read here also from where i had reached

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 18​

Vijay kaafi der tak Aisha ki khayalon mein dooba raha. Unn dinon ki yadein uss ke dimagh mein ghum rahe the aur yaadon ki kashmakash ne ussko bechain kiya huwa tha. Upar se Aisha ki awaaz usske kanon mein goonjh rahi thi…… Vijay ne socha ‘ab to kutta bhi mujhse behtar hai, kuttey se baat ki AISHA NE LEKIN MUJHSE NAHIN!’


Vijay ko bilkool chain nahin tha Aisha ki berukhi se. Woh sochta tha ke donon ko kum se kum ek baar to milna chahiye aur kuch faisley leni chahiye, kuch batein karni bahot zaroori tha uss ke liye. Eisa Vijay ka sochna tha. Lekin kia Aisha eisa sochta tha? Kaun janey…..


Ghamgiin chahra liye woh ghar ke andar gaya aur Pooja ne kaha,”Arey wah bhai, aaj to tum mujhse pehley uth gaye! Kia baat hai?” Vijay ne ek jhooti muskaan mein kaha, “Nahin bus woh Tiger ko kholney gaya tha, aur kal ke liye I am sorry Pooja” Pooja hanstey huwe boli, “Koyi baat nahin bhai, tumko serve karney mein bahot peace milta hai mujhey, lekin utna ziada mat pina please. Achcha nahin lagta bhai. Okay?”


Shower leney ke baad jab Vijay kitchen mein gaya breakfast ke liye to usski maa ne kaha, “University jana hai ab …kia lejawoge bread mein Vijay?” Vijay ko jab University ka naam sunayi diya to dil mein ek ghabrahat si huwi, yeh sochkar ke Aisha saath nahin jaegi…. Phir uss ne socha ke shayad uss ne apne papa se baat ki ho aur uss ka papa hi ussko chorney ko jaega, aur wapas lene ko bhi jaega….apney dil mein Vijay yehi pray kar raha tha ke eisa hi ho, to kum se kum campus mein to woh Aish se baatein kar sakega…..


Aakhir woh tayaar huwa aur University janey ke liye ghar se nikla Tiger ko bandhney ke baad. Jab Tiger ko bandh raha tha to usski nazar sirf Aisha ki khirki par tha aur dekha ke Aisha ki khirki khuli huwi to thi magar parda khincha huwa tha…hawa se parda andar jaa raha tha, lekin koyi andar dikhayi nahin di….

Aur jab Vijay jaa raha tha, to Rhanveer lane mein se murkar pichey Aisha ke ghar ke taraf baar baar dekh raha tha, ke kahin Aisha na nikley jaaney ke liye… lekin eisa kuch bhi nahin huwa aur woh udaas chala gaya….


Raastey mein chaltey waqt ussko ajeeb sa lag raha tha kyunke woh kabhi bhi akela to nahin jata tha nah… aur raastey mein log bhi ussko dekh raha tha kyunke saarey mohaley mein yeh maloom ho gaya tha ke Aisha aur Vijay ki separation ho gayi hai….. sab log jo unn donon ko pyar bhari nazron se dekha kartey the ab udaasi ke saath dekhtey the, aur jo log buri nazar se dekhtey the ab khushi ki nazar se dekhney lage…. Jeise ke woh gunde log jiss ne Aisha ko chera tha, weh to bahot khush the ke ab Vijay akela hai…unn ki nazron mein to Aisha ek female object hai, aur woh log to sirf lust ki nazar se donon ko dekhtey the aur sochtey the ke inn donon ke beech sirf affair tha, yeh to nahin jaantey the ke donon sach much kitna pyar kartey the…. Aur weise logon ko dil ke dard ke baarey mein kuch bhi pata na tha….. woh log Aisha se sirf sex ki umeed rakhtey the aur weh log ab yeh sochtey the ke ab jo Vijay alag ho gaya hai to unn logon ko Aisha sex ke liye haasil hoga…. Unn logon ne taanaa mara Vijay par jab Vijay bus stop par khara tha bus ke liye… lekin Vijay chup raha aur ek taraf dekhta raha….. jab tak bus bahin aya weh log tarah tarah ki batein suna rahey the Vijay ko galiyan ke saath…Aisha ka naam bhi le rahe the, lekin phir bhi Vijay apna knoon pita raha aur kuch bhi nahin kaha aur bus aya to chala bhi gaya…


Jab University ponhcha to aur bhi bahot dukh huwa Vijay ko….. har koyi uss se poochta ke Aisha kahan hai, kyun woh nahin ayi…. Woh jawab dete dete thak gaya, roya bhi doston ko apna haal sunatey sunatey…. Course ko follow nahin kar pata tha, sirf Aisha ki yadein satati thi… woh bahot bechain tha, gham ke andherey mein ghira huwa tha…. Break mein campus mein har woh jagah jahan woh Aisha ke saath baithta tha, Vijay ki nazron ko kaatta tha…. Uss ko sirf Aisha dikhayi de rahi thi har ladki mein…. Charon taraf campus mein Aisha ki yadein bassi huwi thi…peyr ke nichey, bench par, cafe mein, gym mein, har jagah sirf Aisha bassi hui tha….aur Vijay ko jeise chakkar sa aya aur, enkhon ke saamney andhera sa chaya, aur woh girr para……


Doston ne ussko uthaya aur ek peyr ke nichey araam karney ke liye letaya, aur paani chirkey usske chehrey par……. jab uss ko hosh aya to woh roney laga aur kaha ke woh ab course nahin follow kar paega……


Ussne kaha ke woh wapas ghar ja raha hai aur wahan se chal para….. ghar kahan gaya woh ek bar mein gaya aur pina shuru kiya, thora beer, thora rum piya aur bus lekar wapas mohaley mein ponhcha…. Ghar janey se pehley woh jewelry dukaan ke paas ek restaurant tha, wahan gaya aur pina chaalu rakha…… woh pita gaya, pita gaya…. Sham hogaya, phir raat honey ko ayi, aur tab tak to Vijay bilkool nashey mein dhuth tha….. Raat ko 8 bajey wahan se nikla aur larkharatey huwe ghar ponhcha……


Ghar mein maa, baap se kaha , “Aaj ke baad mera university jana bandh! Bahot parhaayi karli main ne, ab ghunda gardi karunga, piyunga aur jiyunga…..” usske maa, baap ko usske haalat ka pata tha to unhon ne uss ko kuch nahin kaha, Pooja to ro rahi thi usska haal dekh kar… Vijay ne pooja ke kandhon par haath rakh kar hanstey huwe bilkool nashey ki haalat mein kaha, “Ari Pooja, tu kyun ro rahi hai ri? Tujhey kaun sa gham hai? Hmm? Tera kaun alag huwa hai tum se re? hey Pooja, kabhi kissi se pyar mat karna hein? Suna nah? Kabhi bhi pyar mat karna, bahot buri cheez hai yeh pyar..dekho, mujhko dekho, sharabi bana diya saala iss pyar ne..hahahahaha!!” Pooja aur zor zor se roney lagi…..


Vijay aguey barha, larkharatey huwe…deewaar ko thamtey huwe, kabhi ek peir idhar parta to kabhi ek peir udhar, kuch pata nahin tha ke woh keise chal raha hai….. woh baahar gaya Tiger ke ghar ke paas, aur zor se kaha, “Arey Tiger mere yaar, mera dost, wafadaar dost, I am sorry..(uss ka zubaan bhi larkhara raha tha, bilkool saaf nahin bol raha tha) I am sorry tujhey kholney mein der ki main ne yaar, chal yaar, aja, kholta hoon tujhey…jaa….” Kuttey ko khol diya, Tiger ne poonch hilaya khushi ke maarey, zor se chalang lagaya, apni do aguey wala paon Vijay ke kandhey tak ponchaya, aur Vijay ki gaalon ko lick kiya aur daudtey chala gaya…Vijay kuch der khara raha, aur Aisha ke khirki ki taraf dekhta raha…. Aur wahin deewaar par peeth laga kar khara huwa yeh gana zor zor se ganaa shuru kiya:


Koyi humdum na raha, koyi sahara na raha

hum kissike na rahe koyi hamara na rahaa

koyi humdum na raha koyi sahara ha raha


Shaam tanhayi ki hai, ayegi manzil keise...

Shaam tanhayi ki hai, ayegi manzil keise

Jo mujhe raah dikhaye, wohi taara na rahaa

Koyi humdaun na rahaa, koyi sahara na raha...


(Beech mein ruka roya, naak se behtey paani ko poncha,

Phir gaaney ko continue kiya Aisha ko sunatey huwe….)


Ey nazaaro na hasso, mil na sakunga tumse

Ey nazaaro na hasso, mil na sakunga tumse

Woh mere ho na sake, main bhi tumhara na raha(yahan bhi khub roya)

Koyi humdum na rahaa, koyi sahara na rahaa


Kia batawoon main kahan, yunhi chala jataa hoon

Kia batawoon main kahan, yunhi chala jataa hoon

Jo mujhe phir se bulale, woh ishara na raha (yahan bhi roya)

koyi humdam na rahaa, koyi sahara na rahaa

hum kissi ke na rahe, koyi hamara na raha.


To be continued……………………………

very painful update bro....
the way you have described and narrated vija's pain is wonderful and i can feel his pain deep inside
bravo casi bro

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 19​

Ab agley din se Vijay ne sach much University jana bandh kar diya. Subha ko utha to sir phat raha tha dard se, Pooja se ussne nimboo paani mangwaya aur piya, phir bhi sar ka dard weise ke weisa hi tha….


Vijay ki maa ne uss se baat ki ke yeh aakhri saal hai usska university ka, to patience lekar yeh baaki ke 8 mahinon ko finish karlein…lekin Vijay kuch sunna nahin chahta tha aur naha dho kar kahin chala gaya saverey saverey.


Ghar par usski maa aur Pooja bahot pareshan the ke woh phir se pee kar ayega ya kahin kuch kar baithega…raat ko jab woh ro ro kar gana gaa raha tha to Pooja andar bahot ro rahi thi. Pooja ne apni maa se kaha ke woh Aisha se baat karney jayegi lekin usski maa ne ussko mana kiya. Aur kaha ke woh Vijay ke liye ek ladki dhundegi. Pooja ne kaha ke Vijay kabhi bhi kissi aur ko apna nahin banayega, woh apney bhai ko achchi tarah se jaanti thi. Woh janti thi ke Vijay Aisha se sachcha pyar karta hai aur kabhi bhi kissi aur ko pyar nahin kar payega.


Lekin usski maa ka kehna tha ke Vijay ki zindagi mein agar koyi dusri ladki ayegi to woh Aisha ko bhuladega. Lekin Pooja ne kaha ke kabhi bhi eisa nahin hoga, agar kissi khubsurti ki rani ko bhi agar Vijay ke liye laya jaye to bhi woh Aisha ko nahin bhoolega, aur kissi rani ko bhi pyar nahin kar payega.


Pooja bilkool thik kehti thi. Vijay sach mein kissi ko bhi kabhi bhi apna nahin payega kyun ke uss ke liye Aisha hi uss ka sab kuch tha. Usska pyar sachcha tha aur uss ke dil mein koyi aur bhi nahin bass sakti thi. Pooja sach mein apney bhai ko bahot achchi tarah se janti thi.


Vijay sheher mein thoda ghumney ke baad din ke barah bajney ke baad bina kuch khaye piye, jewelry ker pass waley restaurant mein gaya aur pina shuru kiya…. Usski nazron ke saamney sirf Aisha ki tasveer dikhayi de rahi thi…. Woh pitey pitey gungunaney laga aur roney laga restaurant mein hi…. Log ussko dekh kar hans rahe the…. Restaurant ki maalik ne ussko baahar janey ko kaha kyunke aur bhi customers the wahan, awratein bhi the, aur Vijay uss mahaul ko bigaar raha tha rokar…. To uss ko baahar nikaal diya gaya…. Woh ab baahar raastey mein rotey huwe gana gaa raha tha din daharey…. Mohaley ke logon ne dekha aur uss ke ghar tak khabar pohonch gaya…. Pooja aur usski maa main road par nikley uss ko dekhney ke liye….


Wahan to Vijay ki larayi ho rahi thi uss gundon se jinhon ne Vijay ko bura bhala kaha aur kaha ke ab Aisha ko woh log rappe kareinguey… unhon ne kaha ke ab to har roz woh log Aisha se mazaaa karney jatey hein..iss wajay se nashey hi ke haalat mein Vijay ne un logon se larayi ki aur lahu lohaan hogaya…. Nashey mein tha iss liye woh larr nahin paya aur unn logon ne Vijay ki khub pitayi ki, badla liya unn logon ne pichley baar ki, jab Vijay ne unn logon ko pita tha usske….


Jab Pooja ne dekha kuch door se ke larayi horahi hai to woh dawdtey huwe wahan ponhchi, tab woh gundey larkey bhag gaye aur Pooja Vijay ko sahara dekar ghar ki taraf wapas layi… Vijay ke chehrey se bahot khoon beh raha tha, honth, jabra, aur enkh ke nichey ke chamri phat gaye the ghunsey lagney se, aur bahot khoon beh raha tha, yahan tak ke Pooja ke dress mein bhi khoon lag gaye……


Usski maa aur Pooja ne uss ko sambhaltey huwe ghar ke andar legaye. Kaajal ne ghar ke andar se dekha to jaldi se woh bhi Vijay ke yahan gayi… phir thori der baad Vijay ki badi chachi aur usski badi bahu bhi Vijay ke ghar ko gaye, unn logon ka ghar to main road ke nasdik hai nah, to koyi bhi jab Rhanveer lane ki shuru mein khara hota hai to unn ke ghar ke andar se sab dikhayi deta hai, (aap log pehla page par sketch par dekh saktey hein)……. To jab yeh sab log Vijay ke yahan ja rahe the to Aisha ki maa ne notice kiya aur uss ko heirani huwi ke kia huwa jo bade chacha yahan ke saarey log Vijay ke ghar ko jaa rahe hein, to ussne Aisha ko kaha aur donon maa beti Aisha ke kamrey wali khirki se Vijay ke ghar ke taraf dekh rahe the…


Lekin Vijay ke yahan to sab log Lounge mein the, Vijay ko ek sofe par letaya gaya tha aur, Pooja khoon ponch rahi thi, aur patti kar rahi thi….


Aisha ki maa wapas kitchen mein chali gayi aur Aisha ko kaha ke kuch nazar aye to uss ko bulana…Aisha wahin khari rahi apni khirki ke paas aur Tiger ko cherr rahi thi, Tiger uss ko dekh kar apna poonch hila raha tha aur kudd raha tha……


Vijay ne Pooja se kaha ke woh ab apney bistar par jayega, lekin Pooja ne kaha, “Bhai, mujhey lagta hai ke hospital jana chahiye, stitches lagana chahiye, ghaw gehrey hein, khoon ruk nahin raha hai…. Vijay larkharatey huwe utha aur apney kamrey ke taraf janey laga, lekin ussko saaf dikhayi nahin de raha tha kyun ke enkhon par chot lagney ki vajay se enkhen soojh gaye the aur motey ho gaye the…. Woh apney kamrey mein ghustey hi bistar par girr para…. Pooja usske pichey pichey gaya, aur uss ne dekha ke Aisha apni khirki ke paas khari issi taraf dekh rahi hai….to Pooja, Vijay ki khirki ke paas gayi aur Aisha se bahot zor se ghussey mein kaha, “ Ab tumhari kalejey ko thandak ponchi? Khush huwi ab tu? Dekh mere bhai ka kia haalat hogayi hai tumharey waja se…..” Aisha ki samajh mein kuch nahin araha tha aur poocha, “Kia huwa?” Jab Vijay ne Aisha ki awaaz suni to jaldi se bistar se utha, yeh kehtey huwe Pooja ko, “Kiss se batein kar rahi hai tu? Kiss ko itni zor se dant rahi hai tu Pooja? » Tab tak Vijay Khirki ke paas poncha aur usske saamney Aisha khari huwi dikhayi di… Vijay ka bolna bilkool bandh hogaya aur ussko saaf to nazar nahin dikh raha tha, iss liye ek enkh ko bandh karke sirf ek enkh se Aisha ko dekh raha tha, lekin jeise Aisha ne Vijay ke chehrey ko khoon se laal dekha to chonhki aur apni haath ko apni munh par dabakar andar bhaag gayi…


Pooja bahot ghusse mein Aisha ke khirki ke taraf dekhti rahi… Vijay bhi udhar dekhta raha ke shayad woh phir ayegi….. Pooja soch rahi thi ab woh darwaze se baahar nikal kar Vijay ko dekhney ko ayegi… Vijay bhi eisa hi soch raha tha…..


Lekin wahan to Aisha ko bilkool pata nahin tha ke Vijay ghar par hai, woh soch rahi thi ke uss waqt to woh university mein hoga, aur woh khirki ke paas iss liye khari thi ke woh Kissi se puchey ke kia huwa ke bade chacha ke sab log wahan aye hein…. Aur Vijay ko uss haalat mein dekhney ke baad Aisha ne apni maa ko kaha, to woh ayi khirki ke paas Aisha ke kamrey mein….. Vijay ne ussko dekha to larkharatey huwe zubaan mein kaha, « Chachi, Aisha ko bulawo nah please main uss se kuch kehna chahta hoon.. » Chachi ne phukara Aisha ko, ek baar, do baar, teen baar…woh Aisha ka naam phukaarti gayi lekin Aisha nahin ayi…. Pooja ko ziada ghussa aya aur kaha, « Kyun ayegi woh ab ? uss ko khushi ho rahi hogai Vijay ke ye haal dekh kar… » Vijay ne Pooja ke munh par apna haath rakha aur dhirey se kaha, « Shuuuuuut ! chup kar. Meri Aisha ko kuch eisi weisi batein nahin kehna hai, chup kar ! »….. Aur Vijay ki chachi afsos ke saath Vijay ko dard bhari enkhon se dekhta raha…phir Vijay bistar par letgaya….. baaki ke log jo bade chacha ke yaha se aye huwe the, sab kamrey ke andar aye aur khirki se Aisha ki maa se kuch batein karne laguey….. Vijay ko achcha nahin laga aur sab ko janey ke liye kaha….. to sab chale gaye…..


Vijay ne enkhen bandh ki aur uss ko neendh agayi………


To be continued…………………..

superb casi bro
you have emphasised so well on pooja and aisha in this update without of course leavimg vijay.
i loved the love of a sister for her brother who fights with aisha believing that the state his brother is in is due to her
very very well written update bro

 

[Casinar]

last night reached here
this is my favourite story regarding romance written by you. i just love each and every update of this thread.
Aisha is too cute and i love Pooja a lot. she has such a lovely character.

thanks very much rowdy bro

 

[Casinar]

very painful update bro....
the way you have described and narrated vija's pain is wonderful and i can feel his pain deep inside
bravo casi bro

thanks bro

 

[Indian001]

Update 2



Doosrey din, School se aney ke baad Aisha ghar par har roz ki tarah Vijay ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Weise to har sham ko, school ke wapas atey hi Vijay Aisha ke yahan dawrta huwa jata tha, lekin iss din Aisha intezaar karti rahi par Vijay ka pata nahin tha.

Vijay ki choti behnon ka naam Pooja aur Anu the. Aisha ne Pooja ko apney yahan bulwaya aur Vijay ki khabar puchchi. To Pooja ne kaha ke Vijay ghar par hi hai aur homeworks kar raha hai.

Tab Aisha roney lagi. Pooja ko taahjub huwa ke Aisha kyun ro rahi hai aur jaakar apni chachi se kaha. Jab Aisha ki maa uss se puchney gayi ke woh kyun ro rahai hai to Aisha ne zor zor se rotey huwe jawab diya ke Vijay uss se khafa hai issi liye woh wahan nahin aya. Aur uss ne batayi ke kal donon mein jhagra huwa tha. To Aisha ki maa ne kaha agar Vijay nahin ayaa to tum uss ke ghar chaley jawo aur apna rona dhona uss ko dikhawo. Phir Pooja Aisha ki haath pakar kar ussko khinchtey huwe apney ghar ki or lejaney lagi. Aisha rotey huwe Vijay ke yahan ponhchi Pooja ke saath. Usske pyari pyari enkhon se moti moti ensoo tapak rahe the. Aur who siskiyan le rahi thi.


Vijay apney kamrey mein chup chap baithe huwa tha, apney homeworks ke saath. Pooja Vijay ke kamrey mein daakhil huwi aur kaha, “Bhaiya dekho to kaun aya hai!” Pichey murke Vijay ne dekha to Aisha sissakti huwi Khari thi. Vijay jaldi se daur kar uss ke paas gaya aur usko bahon mein lekar pucha, “Kia huwa? Kyun ro rahi ho iss tarah? Kissi ne mara tumko?” To Aisha aur zor zor se roney lagi. Vijay ne uss ke gaalon par apna haath phertey huwe, ensoowon ko ponchtey huwe kaha, « Arey meri pyari si gudya ko kiss ne mara ? Main abhi usska khabar leta hoon. Kaun hai woh jiss ne meri rani ko rulaya ? » Aisha ko ziada zor se rota huwa dekh kar Pooja hansney lagi aur wahan se chali gayi.


Vijay, Aisha ko apney god mein bithaya aur, ussko sehlatey huwe poocha, « Bolo nah ? kia baat hai ? » To Aisha sisakti huwi boli, “Tum kyun aaj mere yahan nahin aye ?” To muskuratey huwe Vijay ne jawab diya ,”Dekho kitna homeworks para hai! Buss issi liye” Phir Aisha siskiyan ko sambhaltey huwe kaha, “Nahin, mujhey maloom hai, tum mujhse khafa ho nah, iss liye ke kal main ne tum ko thapad mara tha?” To Vijay ne kaha, “Ab choro kal ki baton ko, jo ho gaya so ho gaya.” To Aisha ne kaha, “Nahin pehley tum bolo ke tum ne mujhey maaf kiya tab uss baat ko chorungi.” Phir Vijay ne ek lambi saans lekar kaha, “To tum ne kyun mujhey thapad mara tha? Who bhi ek nahin do zordaar thapad?” Aisha simat kar dhimi awaaz mein boli, “To tum ne kyun mujhey weise chuwa tha? Mujhey bilkool achca nahin laga aur socha ke tumharey vichaar gandey hein issi liye mere hath uth gaye tumpar.”

Uss waqt Aisha apni school uniform mein thi, aur woh Vijay ki god mein baithi thi, aur uss ka skirt ghutney ki upar tak thi, aur Vijay ka haath, uski thik ghutney par tha. To Vijay ne kaha, “Iss waqt mera haath tumharey ghutnon par hai, aur tumhare Jangh ki shuruwaat bhi dekh raha hoon, to kia tumko bura lag raha hai, aur mere vichaar gandey lag rahe hein?” Tab Aisha, sar jhuka kar boli, “Nahin” To Vijay ne kaha, “Dekho Aisha, main tumko sabhi cousins mein sub se ziada chata hoon, pyar karta hoon tum se, uss waqt se jab tum bilkool choti thi. Aur kabhi bhi mere vichaar tumharey or gandey nahin ho saktey. Kyun ke mera pyar tumharey liye sachcha hai aur pavitra hai.”

Yeh sunkar Aisha ki hriday zor se dharka aur, woh laal hogayi aur sharma si gayi aur Vijay ko ek chota sa chumband uske gaalon par dekar usske god se uthkar dawdtey huwe apni ghar waapas chali gayi.

Vijay muskuraya aur khamosh baithey reh gaye, yeh sochtey huwe ke ab Aisha ko uss ke pyar ka pata chala aur samajh mein aya.


To be continued………..

bhut hi pyar kahani lag rha hai
love it

 

[Indian001]

Update 3



Uss din ke baad donon Aisha aur Vijay ek doosre ke aur bhi kareeb hogaye aur donon ek doosrey ka intezaar kartey rahe ke kab ek doosrey ka deedaar hoga.

Aisha ko jahan bhi jana tha sirf Vijay ko hi dhunta saath janey ke liye, shops, walks, cinema, restaurants, kahin bhi Aisha ko jana hota to sirf Vijay ko hi saath leke jati thi. Zara sa sadak ke uss paar bhi jana hota to woh Vijay ke baghair nahin jaati thi.

Bas sirf school akeli jaati thi kyunke woh girl’s school mein pahrti thi aur Vijay boys school mein. Phir bhi woh donon schools ek hi sheher mein the, paschim wale sheher mein. Aur har sham ko school khatam honey ke baad donon ek doosrey ka intezaar kartey aur sath saath wapas ghar ko atey the. Kabhi bus mein kabhie paidal bhi.

Agar koyi ladka kabhie Aisha ko cherta to Vijay uss ladkey se jhagad parta tha. Weise hi ek din donon paidal wapas aarahe the, aur do teen larkon ne raastey mein Aisha ko chera, to zabardast larayi huwi Vijay aur unn ladkon ke bich. Vijay ghayal hogaya tha aur usske danyi enhon ke nichey se, aur hath se, khoon behraha tha.

Aisaha bahot royi aur Vijay ko thaamtey huwe ghar wapas ayi aur, uss ka khub dekh bhaal kiya. Zakhmon par Aisha ne patti lagayi aur Vijay ke saath raat der tak saath guzaari. Donon ke maa baap ko pata chala ke kia maamla tha, to kissi ne kuch bura nahin kaha, balke bada chacha ne Vijay ko badhayi di ke uss ne Aisha ki raksha ki.

Uss raat ko Aisha Vijay ke ghar hi sogayi, ussi ke kamrey mein aur donon ek doosrey ko bahon mein lekar soye. Lekin kuch bhi ghalat nahin huwa. Bilkool pavitra the donon.


Donon, Aisha aur Vijay ek doosrey ke baghair ab nahin reh paate the. Koyi bhi subha eisi nahin thi jab donon savere savere ek saath nahi paaye jatey, koyi bhi sham eisi nahin thi jab dono ek saath school se wapas ate huwe na dikhtey, koyi bhi eisi raat nahin thi jab dono ek saath ek kamrey mein na ho.

Homeworks bhi saath kartey kabhie Vijay Aisha ke yahan to kabhi Aisha Vijay ke ghar. TV serials bhi saath saaath hi dekhtey, khana bhi saath saath hi khatey, ghumney bhi ek saath hi jatey, cinema bhi jana ho to, sabhi cousins ek saath jatey par Vijay aur Aisha sabhi ke bich mein lekin ek saath hotey. Baaki sabhi cousins ko pata tha ke inn donon mein gehra pyar tha, aur kiisi ko koyi objections nahin tha. Lekin ghar waley ko kia yeh pata tha ke inn donon ke bich pyar hai? Kia ghar waley iss rishtey ko manzoor kartey?

Yehto waqt hi batayega dosto.


Jab Aisha 16 saal ki huwi to Vijay 18 ko ponhchey. Donon tab bhi college jate the aur woh bhi ek saath aur wapas bhi saath saath. Tab bhi donon ek saath homeworks kartey, aur aksar Vijay ko Aisha ki madad karni parti kyunke Vijay bahot hi honshyaar tha studies mein.

Har roz Aisha jo cakes school mein khati to uss mein se ek tukda Vijay ke liye bacha kat rakti, aur sham ko ghar lawthtey waqt usko khilati. Vijay bhi yehi karta har roz apni bachayi huwi cakes se.


To be continued.......................

bahut hi pyari love it

 

[Indian001]

Update 4​

Ek raat jab donon kamrey mein batein kar rahe the, Vijay Aisha ko nihaar raha tha. Woh 16 saal ki bahot hi ziada khubsurat si ladki keise Vijay ki zindagi ka hissa ban chukka tha, yeh baat Vijay ki dimagh mein kashmakash si phehla rahi thi. Aisha ek choti si dress pehni huwi thi, jo uski ghutnon ke upar the aur woh Vijay ke thik saamney kursi par baithi huwi thi. Vijay ki nazrein Aisha ki ghutnon ki upar waley hisse par jammi huwi thi.... Aisha ne mehsoos kiya ke woh usko ghur rahi hai to uss ne apni hathon ko apney peir par rakh diya aur muskurakar kahi, “Kia dekh rahe ho jaan?” Vijay muskuraya aur kaha, “Kyun tum ne apne jangh par apna haath rakhdiya? Main thoda hi use kha jawoonga?” Aisha apni ungli ko danton mein dabati huwi, aur muskuraati huwi boli, “Tum ab bahot hi shararati hotey ja rahe ho!” Vijay ki nazar phir Aisha ki chaati par gayi, jahan, 4 buttons lagey huwe the aur Aisha ki chati upar aur nichey uth baith rahi thi usski gehri leti huwi senson ki zarye. Vijay dekhta raha aur uss mein ek ajib si leher daura, jo uss ka pura badan mein ek shola jeisa bharkaya....... Jab Aisha ne dekha Vijay ki nazar usski chaati par hai to usne apni lambi baalon ko pichey se aguey apni chaati par pher diya. Vijay yeh dekh kar ke Aisha kiss tarah se apni yawan ko chupa rahi thi, hansa aur bola, “Arey yaar, main aashik hoon tumhara, kuch to inn enkhon par taras khawo!” Aisha apni honton ko dento se dabatey huwe kaha, “Aaashik ho to aashik jeisa himmat to karo bhi!”

Yeh sunkar Vijay jhat se utha aur Aisha ke thik saamney, ghutnon ke bal baith kar apna sar Aisha ke god mein rakh diya aur dhirey awaaz mein kaha, “Ab mujhse aur intezaar nahin hota jaan, tum mujhko apney aap mein sametlo nah.” Yeh kehtey huwe, Vijay ne apna honth, Aisha ke thik, ghutnon ki upar waley hisse par, jahan jangh ki shuruwaat hoti hai, wahan par phera. Aur apni bahon mein Aisha ki kamar ko zor se jakra.

Aisha ki badan mein jeise bijli si daud gayi aur angrayi ke saath Vijay ke sar ko apney janghon par dabate huwe kaha, « Mujhey tum paagal kardoguey ek din ! Utho yahan se, mujhey kuch ho raha hai, Vijay, please utho, mujhse sehen nahin hoga ! » Phir ahista ahista Vijay apna sar, uthate huwe, apni honton ko Aisha ki chati ke or pherta gaya, aur Aisha, ghabra si gayi aur uth khari huwi, to Vijay bhi khara huwa aur Aisha ko apni bahon mein zor se pakadh kar uski honton ko apney hoton se chumma. Aisha kamptey huwe jism aur awaaz mein boli, “Ab tum ghar wapas jawo nah! Koyi agaya to musibat khadi ho jayegi. Please baba jawo tum…..” Lekin Vijay ki mounh ne Aisha ki mounh bandh kar di kyun ke uss ne Aisha ke mounh par apne jeeb se kiss kiya aur Aisha ki meethe jeeb ki ras ko piya. Aisha jeise andhooni si mehsoos kar rahi thi aur uss ko laga jeise who behosh honey wali ho….

Yeh unn donon ka pehla kiss tha.


Aisha ne jab apna hosh sambhala to woh Vijay ki bahon mein hi thi, aur boli, “Vijay yeh thik nahin hai jo hum kar rahe hein. Yeh paap hai.” Vijay tha to bahot ziada intelligent aur bade bade batein bhi karta tha, lekin usski baton mein hamesha sachayi chalakti thi. Kyun ke woh apni umr ke hisaab se bahot ziada mature tha, aur unn ke pita aur bade chacha aksar kaha kartey the ke ye Vijay ek din bahot bada aadmi banega. Aur aksar Vijay ki batein sab baron ko achcha lagta tha aur Vijay ko hamesah sab ghar ke bade side kartey the.

To Vijay ne Aisha ko jawaab diya, “Kia paap? Keisa paap? Jab main ne tumko apne dil se apna manaa hai, aur kissi bhi ladki ko nahin choowa hai, aur naa hi kabhi bure nazar se dekha hai to tum ko kiss karna keise paap hogaya jaan? Abhi upar se Bhagwan bhi dekhta hoga to khush huwa hoga ke hum donon ne apna pyar ka shuruwaat ek naye tarike se ki.” Uss par Aisha ne sharmatey huwe kaha, “Tum aur tumhari badi badi batein tum janon! Main kuch nahin samajhti inn baton ko. Bas ab tum ghar jawo kaafi raat ho gayi hai, subah ko uthney mein takliff hogi, aur mujhey hi aakar tumko uthana padega.”

Vijay ne usko kaske pakra aur usski maathey par ek kiss kiya aur donon gaalon par phir aakhri ek kiss hothon par. Aur kaha, “ab tum bhi mujhko weisi hi kiss karo jeise main ne kiya.” Aisha ko apni peiron ki ungliyon par khada hona pada Vijay ko weise kiss karney ke liye, aur uss ne bhi, pehley Vijay ki maathey par, phir donon gaalon par aur jaldi se hothon par ek kiss kiyye aur ussko, halka sa dhakka detey huwe kaha “Ab jawo bhi nah!” Phir jatey jatey Vijay ne kaha,”Ab hum donon har roz subha ko, aur raat ko eise hi 3 kisses ek dusrey ko kareinguey, yeh hamari milney ki aur bicharney ki nishani hogi har roz. Okay?” Aisha ne kaha,”Han baba! Okay, okay, ab jaldi niklo yahan se!”

Aur phir Vijay nikla, Aisha ne darwaza bandh kartey huwe apni jeeb bahar nikal kar Vijay ko mock kiya aur hanstey huwe darwaza lock kartey huwe Vijay ko wave kiya. Apney ghar ke chawkat par se Vijay bhi Aisha ko wave kar raha tha.

Aur jeise hi Vijay apne kamre mein ponhcha, bistar par lethney se pahley apni room ki light ko 7 baar switch off aur on kiya, udhar se Aisha ne bhi apni kamrey se 7 baar light off aur on kiya, yeh unn donon ki goodnight thi jo bistar par janey se pehley har roz kiya kartey the.


To be continued………………..

bahut bahut bahut hi pyari. pehla kiss. jiss trah se vijay aisa ko pya rkarta superb