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Romance Yeh bhi Muhabat hi hai (COMPLETED)

Casinar

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superb writing casi bro. wonderful. fantastic. amazing.
the email he wrote is just magnificent. no doubt that would make Aisha cry if there was any bit of love for him in her heart...
now when Vijay has got positive vibes to face life its Aisha who is sad and wondering why and how Vijay is happy... asif she wants him to be always sad and stay with a heartbreak......
the moment vijay was playing with tiger and theway aisha replied him is cute, very cute... and it was funy to read how aisha's father got to stop in the middle of the lane when Tiger started barking a him and vijay called tiger for him to go home....
awesome update, wonderful love story casi bro. you are a fantastic writer my friend. hats off.

thanks so very very much bro for the appreciation
 

Casinar

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you have very very beautifully shown the love between a brother and sistr who love each other so dearly.
i love this pooja character since the very begining. thats a true sister and their love is pure and bonding strong.
the misunderstanding she had by her mother's word could have had serious difference in their relationship but thanks that vijay knew how to handle and solve it.
lovely update bro. :thumbup:


thanks very much bro
 

Casinar

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very very heartbreaking situation and update.
i can deeply feel the pain of vijay.
the mail he wrote is pieces of his heart sent to Aisha.
such mental trauma, emotional drain, that is a terrible situation which all lovers will very well understand
you have written this update so well that its only a true lover can do
bow to you casi bro
fantastic.

thanks very much bro
 

Casinar

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woooooooooooow
this update brought tears to my eyes. i can relate to vijay and his pain.
i feel proud to see him having a sister like pooja who is so so much supportive
his elder broter also supported vijay so much.
the pain of Vijay is too crude and really needs support..
very emotional and tearful update bro superbly written.

thanks for the appreciation bro
 

Casinar

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fantastic update bro.... what a bro sis pure love...
this update deserves to be praised the way you have developped it.
and the way you found out a way for the sister to now learn that Aisha have had sexual encounter with her brother and now Pooja starts to have feelings for Aisha too. the hatred she had for her transform into love as she is a girl and she understands her.
how casi bro how on earth do you create such wonderful situations to make them fit so perfectly in your stories? you never end amazing me my frined, yes i repeat u r a gem of a writer my dear.
:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:


thanks very much rowdy bro... have you stopped reading now? you were to read all in a day nah?
 

Casinar

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wonderful and lovely update bro
last night i wanted to complete the reading, but i felt asleep. this story remained in my mind all night,
i am still glued to this thread, such a wonderful story bro, fantastic.....
this update is awesome. i admire Pooja a lot, hv fallen in love of her, she is such a sweet supportive sister may all brothers get such a sis!
reading the nest one bro

thanks very much bro continue the rad bro
 

Casinar

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wonderful, fantastic update bro.
how beautifully you have written about a bro and sis relationship and each other talking about love and emotion. you used wonderful words put in vijay's mouth to reply Pooja who does not understand the feeling of each other when they are in love.....
now vijays wants to meet Aisha will he succeed? i will read when i am fre..
:yourock:

thanks very much rowdy bro
 

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Update 38

Yeh sab sochney ke baad ab Vijay kahan se study karta, ab to uss par ek junoon sa sawaar huwa ke woh Aisha se milega hi milega aur woh bhi akele usski bedroom main bistar par…. Ab yeh sab soch soch kar usska sex drive bahr raha tha aur kehney ki zaroorat nahin ke usske dick ka kia haal tha uss waqt…woh bechara pant mein se baahar nikalna chahta tha aur Vijay ussko zoron ke apne haathon se daba raha tha, aur sehla bhi raha tha Aisha ki sexy body ki image apne khayaaalon mein liye…. har unn jismaani taalukaat ko yaad karney laga aur Aisha ki garam sesein, usski narm honth ki thandak, usski angrayiyan, usski madhur siskiyan, usski dhirey se kaanon mein honton ko pherna, usski naazuk kalayian Vijay ke peeth par seheltey huwe…… yeh sab Vijay ki dimaagh mein kashmakash macha rahe thai….

Vijay ne mann mein Aisha ki jeeb ka rass ko feel karney ki koshish ki, uss ko ab bhi woh meethe rass ki lazat mehsoos hota tha… sab kuch Vijay ke dimaagh mein ab bhi taaza tha… woh kuch bhi nahin bhoola tha…. Aur Vijay sochney laga kia Aisha ko kabhi bhi eise ehsasaat nahin hoti hogi? Kia ussko sexual encounter ki zaroorat nahin parti hogi? Kia woh Vijay ko rok payegi jab Vijay ussko apni bahon mein jakrega? Kia Vijay kaamyaab hoga bhi uss ke kamre tak pohonchney ki? Kia hoga? Keise hoga… sab kuch ek sapna sa lag raha tha…

Vijay apney kamre se nikla aur time dekh raha tha, sham ke 4 baj chuke thai aur uss ka baap kaam se wapas aya aur uss ke pichey Vimal bhi aya. Vimal ne kaha ke woh bhi jaega raat ko kyun ke Aisha ke bhai ne uss ko chalney ko kaha. Tab Anu ne zid ki ke woh bhi jaegi…. Magar Pooja ne kaha ke agar woh bhi chali gayi to Vijay akela reh jaega iss liye woh nahin jaegi. Vijay ke papa ne ek Taxi ki bandobas ki aur Aisha ke papa ko khabar diya ke chaar log jaeinguey uss ke yahan se, tab Anirud chacha ka phone aya aur Vijay ne phone uthaya. Magar Anirud chacha ne Vijay ke papa ko manga phone par aur Vijay ko apney ghar bulaya….

Vijay Anirud chacha ke yahan ponhcha to chacha ne kaha, « Tum ho kahan aaj kal Vijay tum to eid ka chand ho gaye ho yaar ! » Vijay ne jawab diya ke aaj kal exams hai aur ziada studies mein masroof rehta hai. Anirud chacha ne ek plan kiya tha ke woh Vijay ko apney saath le jaye raat ko doctor ko dekhney ke liye. Ussne plan kiya tha ke woh aur Vijay uss doctor ko bula kar ussko bata deinguey ke woh aguey na bahrhein kyun ke Vijay uss ka pyar hai. Yeh sunkar to Vijay ko samajh mein nahin aya ke kia karein ab !! ek taraf Anirud chacha ka plan bahot achchah tha aur dusre taraf woh Aisha se milna chahta tha…to ab woh kia kare?

Anirud chacha se batein karne ke baad Vijay ne yeh decide kiya ke agar woh jaega to Vinod chacha bharkega aur problems khadi ho sakti hai, to behtar hai ke woh nahin jaye aur jo kismat mein hona hai woh to hokar hi rahega….. Magar Anirud chacha ne kaha ke woh uss sale doctor ko mawka paakar bata dega ke woh Aisha ke raaste se hath jayein !!

Vijay raat ka intezaar karne laga. Ghar mein hulchul tha, Anu yahan se wahan daud rahi thi dress ko select kar rahi thi kabhi Pooja iss dress ko deti to kabhi Anu kissi aur dress ko passand karti, kabhi donon jhagartey, kabhi Anu Vimal ko ek dress dikhati aur poochti ke kia woh dress thik rahegi, ya apni mummy se bhi jaakar poochti…phir dress ko stree karne lagi, phir Vimal ke dress ko bhi stree karni thi, woh Pooja ne kiya, baad mein apni mummy ki sari aur papa ke suit bhi stree kiya Pooja ne, Vimal udhar bathroom mein time laga raha tha, baahar Anu chila rahi thi ke woh jaldi se bathroom se nikle, uss ko bhi nahana tha…. Ekdum hulchul aur shor machi huwi thi ghar mein….

Magar Vijay apne kamre mein akele bistar par leta sirf Aisha ko soch raha tha ke kab raat ho aur woh wahan jaye….. aur uss ne mehsoos kiya ke uss ka undewrwear bhiga huwa tha precum se….. uss se intezaar nahin ho paa raha tha… woh ekdum bechain tha….. aur leyte leyte usski enkh lag gayi……. Aur sapney mein uss ne dekha ke woh Aisha ki baahon mein tha aur Aisha ne ussi sexy choti si skirt ko pehni huwi thi jo har raat ko pehenti thi Vijay ke liye jiss mein uss ka jang khub nazar aye kyun ke Vijay ko usski jang bahot passand tha….. aur Vijay ne dekha ke woh ghutnon par para Aisha ki donon janghon ke beech apna sar daley usski jeeb Aisha ki unn naazuk janghon ke beech pher raha tha aur haathon se Aisha ki boobs masal raha tha aur Aisha Vijay ke haaton ko apni chaati par dabaye thandi sensein le rahi thi apna sar pichey ki taraf mudh kar…… Viay dhirey dhirey upar charta gaya yahan tak ke usska munh Aisha ki panty par pohonch gaya aur Aisha apne aap bistar par leth jati hai peeth ke balk aur Vijay uss ke upar chadta hai…. Jab Vijay ka munh Aisha ki honthon tak reach huwa to Aisha ne kaha, “Kyun itney din lagaye aney mein jaan?”

Yeh sunkar Vijay chohonk kar utha aur sapney ke dunya se baahar nikal kar khud par hansney laga. Tab tak ghar ke sab jane waley tayyaar the jaane ke liye, baahar ek taxi khadi this Rhanveer lane mein.

Aakhir sab log terasse par nikley jane ko, do taxi aur bhi the lane mein, aur sab log gadi mein charhe…Vijay ne Aisha ke ghar ke taraf dekha to usski nazar Aisha par padi…. Woh bhi apni parents ko jaatey dekh rahi thi….. magar Vijay ne note kiya ke Aisha ki choti behen Aasha uss ke saath thi..usski do choti behen, aruna aur asha mein se sirf Aruna jaarahi thi…… Ab Vijay sochney laga ke kia Aisha apni kamre mein akele hogi…kia agar Aasha usske saath kamre mein hogi to???

To be continued………………………

very very intersting update bro
wow how clearly and neatly you have written all this my friend...
while reading the dream piece i thought what was happening, how he was with aisha suddenly...
too good bro, i want to know if will meet aisah when everybody is gone let me read the nest one.....
 
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