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Chapter 1 :Ulajhte Raaste
Chapter 1 :Ulajhte Raaste
Chapter 2: Wo Ladki Kaun Hai?
Chapter 3: Shayad
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Hmmmm toh yeh plan banaya hain L_M.. Naina... aur Vampire Queen ne mil ke....
Kai kab kyo ye sab puchhana bematalab hai kyoki insan yaha kathputali hai ..unhe niyantrit karke sanchalit koi aur karte hai...aur Jo kuchh bhi hota hai wo akaran nhi hota..isme aap ,ham ,lekhika ji ,kuchh nhi karte ..samay bahut balwan hota hai..wo aapke har sawalo ka jabab jarur dega...isiliye aap uss wakt Tak ka I tejar Kare...kyoki Jo koi bhi samay se pahale sabkuchh pane chaha uska vinash hi hua hai..( ye sab mere line hai ek great reader ne ye Sab kahi thi ek masoom aalu )..kamdev99008 saheb chaliye aaj phir xp ki style hum is story ko khangalte hai... wohi sawalon daud suru karte hai....
Kyun kaise kab..... har ek line ko leke aalochana karte hai...
यहां सबसे मासूम तो इस समय फिलहाल हम ही हैं।hum to aise karing baatein...kyunki mein masoom reader hu na
Yakin na ho to SANJU ( V. R. ), 11 ster fan aalu Mahi Maurya harshit1890, nain11ster se puch lijiye
Btw colour matlab rang badal badal ke to chalak reader logis baat karte hai
Update pasand karne ka shukriya scodash...Great update.. pichhe ke update read karne ke baad ye too pata chal gya inn dono ki ekk kahani h..Lekin sab Kabir ko hi galat samajh rahe h ..aur usse suspend bhi kar diya..Ye Aditya kahi isaka aur Smriti ka kuch...
Khair jane do ..Yaar Kabir ek emotional character h itna pata chal gya..
Intezaar rahega next update ka..
Haan mera bhi plan wahi hai... Ekdum se flashback utna interesting nahi lagta... Par ye meri ray hai... Baki ap readers decide karenge...Mast update,
Aise hi vartman aur pichhali jindagi ek saath thoda thoda karke dikhana.
is story ko bhi padhke apna bahumulya sameeksha dene Ki kripa kare...English section me kuchh stories hi padhi hain yahan....
English stories 2 other forums par padhta hu...
Haan!
ek English story bhi post ki hai meine...
Vaise sabhi forums aur social media par same id hai meri....
Mai chaunk kar utha aur uth te hi pet aur seene me ajeeb sa hone laga... Maine floor par ulti kar di...
"Fuck dude... Are you out of your mind!!!"
Kisi ladki ne chhidhte huye kaha... Maine dekha mere ghar me do ladkiyan mere sir par khadi thi... Ek ko to mai janta tha... Suman... Dusri ladki kaale suit boot me mujhe nafrat bhari nazron se dekh rahi thi... Kyunki meri ulti se thodi der pehle uske joote kharab ho gaye the!!!
Ok sir... Nice to meet you!English section me kuchh stories hi padhi hain yahan....
English stories 2 other forums par padhta hu...
Haan!
ek English story bhi post ki hai meine...
Vaise sabhi forums aur social media par same id hai meri....
So, kabir has turned himself to the last resort, alcohol. Which gives temperary releif from permanent pain.
And kabir in the painful Situation, tends to remember the good old college, full of life memories. That is life.
I think, some good news will come knocking on kabirs door, Either in terms of fate or in terms of necessity.
Great playful update, loved the ending on the funny note. Awesome skills.
Waiting for more updates, keep going
Yeah, i also love how you write character's persona. Can't help it, as a reader i also dive in in the story with you.
I am loving your updates. Can't wait for more updates