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KING DEVIL

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Chapter - 2


The Father and son



"Beta kyu karte ho aisa" vo aadmi kahta hai "kyu jate ho vaha par tum jante ho ki jab bhi tum vaha par jate ho jaha sab log tumhe pareshaan karte hai"

"Mujhe aap jaisa banna hai baba" vo ladka us aadmi ko dekhte hue kahta hai "mujhe apna sapna pura karna jai"

"Hahaha…… mujh jaisa bankar kya karoge beta" vo aadmi haste hue kahta hai "mujh jaise aphaij se aise hi tum aache ho"

"Lekin mai tumhe ab aur aisi halat me nhi dekh sakta" vo aadmi thoda sad hokar kahta hai "sayad kismat bhi tumhare sath nhi hai isliye tumhe ab ye koshish chod deni chahiye"

"Dad aap hi kahte ho na ki ' koshish karne valo ki kabhi haar nhi hoti' aur humhe apni kismat ke samne jhukna nhi chahiye balki hume apni kismat khud banani chahiye" vo ladka apne pita ke sad face ko dekhte hue kahta hai "isliye mai kabhi bhi apni kismat ke samne haar nhi maanuga na hi mai kabhi koshish karna chodunga mai apna sapna pura karke hi rahunga isliye mai apni kismat apne haatho se likhunga"

Ye sunkar vo aadmi Khush Ho jata hai aur uske face par ek smile aajati hai vo aadmi kahta hai "sahi ka tumne ki hume kabhi bhi kismat ke samne jhukna nhi hai chahe hum kitni hi musibat me kyo na ho bas tum apne upar bharosa rakhna"

Ye sunkar vo ladka bhi muskura deta hai aur apne pita ke gale lag jata hai aur vo aadmi bhi apne bete ko gale laga leta hai aur uske sar par hath pherne lagta hai

"Jairam"

Tabhi bahar se kisi aadmi ki awaj aati hai jisse sunkar vo aadmi yani Jairam apne bete se alag hota hai aur bahar nikal kar dekhta hai bahar ek middle age aadmi khada tha ye gaon ka hi ek aadmi tha

"Are hariya ( us aadmi ka naam ) tum yaha koi kaam tha kya" Jairam us aadmi se puchta hai

"Vo mai tumhe ye batane aaya tha ki kal hume town jana hai isliye subhe jaldi gaon ke gate par aajana" hariya kahta hai

"Ok" Jairam usse jawab deta hai aur kuch der baate karte hai aur hariya wapas chalta jata hai

Jairam bhi andar chala jata hai aur apne bete se kahta hai "beta subah jaldi uth jana hume town jana hai"

"Ok dad" veer jawab deta hai

Kuch hi der me saam ho jati hai tabtak Jairam bhi khana bana leta hai khane me jyadatar dishes meat ki thi kyuki yaha par jyada meat hi khaya jata hai phir khana kha kar dono baap-beta sone chale jate hai

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Agli subah dono suraj nikalne se pahle hi uth jate hai aur taiyar hone lagte hai kuch der baad unhe nikalna tha tabhi Jairam apne kamre se nikalta hai aur veer ko awaj deta hai

Veer awaj sunkar apne pita ke paas aata hai aur dekhta hai ki uske pita ke hatho me kuch hai

Jairam jab dekhta hai ki veer aagaya hai to vo apne hath me liya hua saman veer ke hatho me rakh deta hai ye ek simple as dagger tha



"Ye tumhari safety ke liye ise humesha apne paas rakhna" Jairam kahta hai

Ye sunkar veer bahut khush ho jata hai kyuki ye uske dad ka tha jisse Jairam humesha apne pass rakhta tha aur kuch samay pahle jab veer Jairam ke sath forest me gaya tha to uspar ek jungli janwar ( wild beast ) ne humla kar diya tha ye ek wild boar tha veer achanak hue us humle se dar gaya tha lekin tabhi Jairam ne is dagger se us boar ka sar ek strike me hi kaat diya tha bas tabhi se veer is dagger ko lena chata hai aur aaj uski ye khawaish puri ho gayi isliye vo khush tha

Kuch der baad dono ghar se bahar aate hai aur ek ghoda baggi jo pahle se hi bahar khadi thi usse lekar gaon ke gate ki aur chal dete hai

Gaon ke bahar pahle se hi kuch log ghoda baggi ke sath khada hue in dono ka hi intezar kar rahe the

Hariya dono ko aata hua dekhkar Jairam se kahta hai "yaar hum kitni der se tumhara intezar kar rahe hai aur tum ab aa rahe ho chalo ab jaldi chalo hum raat se pahle town jana hai"

Ye sunkar sabhi log apni apni ghode baggi me baith jate hai aur chal dete hai 10 ghode baggi gaon se town ki chal deti hai
 

Asif khan

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Wawooooo amazing maiend blowing excellent birrilant fantastic good update

Behad shandar lajawab
Ye town akhir ja q Rahe hain
Let's see what happend
 

Ng_TheViper

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Very short update..
Updates m scene kitne h ye imp h phir chahe koi usko kitna bi short krke dikha de but aaj k update m bs 2 hi scene tha usme bi 1st wale m bs baap bete ka conversation tha aur 2nd wala town Jane k liye ready hona bs...

Also , conversation ko aap smartly likh sakte h taki apko baar baar na likhna pade ki kisne kya bola like :
Dad- ________
Veer - _______

Is format m likhenge to aap kafi words ko ignore kr sakte h jisse apko mehnat kam lagegi sath m asani rahegi hame ( readers ) ko padhne m..

Abtk k plot m itna to clear h ki veer bodywise to kamjor h par uske sapne aur irade majboot h .. apne dad ki tarah banna chahta h but wo disabled person h but still apne bete ka ache s khyal rakh rahe h..

Let's see kya hota h aage...
 
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Chapter - 2


The Father and son



"Beta kyu karte ho aisa" vo aadmi kahta hai "kyu jate ho vaha par tum jante ho ki jab bhi tum vaha par jate ho jaha sab log tumhe pareshaan karte hai"

"Mujhe aap jaisa banna hai baba" vo ladka us aadmi ko dekhte hue kahta hai "mujhe apna sapna pura karna jai"

"Hahaha…… mujh jaisa bankar kya karoge beta" vo aadmi haste hue kahta hai "mujh jaise aphaij se aise hi tum aache ho"

"Lekin mai tumhe ab aur aisi halat me nhi dekh sakta" vo aadmi thoda sad hokar kahta hai "sayad kismat bhi tumhare sath nhi hai isliye tumhe ab ye koshish chod deni chahiye"

"Dad aap hi kahte ho na ki ' koshish karne valo ki kabhi haar nhi hoti' aur humhe apni kismat ke samne jhukna nhi chahiye balki hume apni kismat khud banani chahiye" vo ladka apne pita ke sad face ko dekhte hue kahta hai "isliye mai kabhi bhi apni kismat ke samne haar nhi maanuga na hi mai kabhi koshish karna chodunga mai apna sapna pura karke hi rahunga isliye mai apni kismat apne haatho se likhunga"

Ye sunkar vo aadmi Khush Ho jata hai aur uske face par ek smile aajati hai vo aadmi kahta hai "sahi ka tumne ki hume kabhi bhi kismat ke samne jhukna nhi hai chahe hum kitni hi musibat me kyo na ho bas tum apne upar bharosa rakhna"

Ye sunkar vo ladka bhi muskura deta hai aur apne pita ke gale lag jata hai aur vo aadmi bhi apne bete ko gale laga leta hai aur uske sar par hath pherne lagta hai

"Jairam"

Tabhi bahar se kisi aadmi ki awaj aati hai jisse sunkar vo aadmi yani Jairam apne bete se alag hota hai aur bahar nikal kar dekhta hai bahar ek middle age aadmi khada tha ye gaon ka hi ek aadmi tha

"Are hariya ( us aadmi ka naam ) tum yaha koi kaam tha kya" Jairam us aadmi se puchta hai

"Vo mai tumhe ye batane aaya tha ki kal hume town jana hai isliye subhe jaldi gaon ke gate par aajana" hariya kahta hai

"Ok" Jairam usse jawab deta hai aur kuch der baate karte hai aur hariya wapas chalta jata hai

Jairam bhi andar chala jata hai aur apne bete se kahta hai "beta subah jaldi uth jana hume town jana hai"

"Ok dad" veer jawab deta hai

Kuch hi der me saam ho jati hai tabtak Jairam bhi khana bana leta hai khane me jyadatar dishes meat ki thi kyuki yaha par jyada meat hi khaya jata hai phir khana kha kar dono baap-beta sone chale jate hai

______________________

Agli subah dono suraj nikalne se pahle hi uth jate hai aur taiyar hone lagte hai kuch der baad unhe nikalna tha tabhi Jairam apne kamre se nikalta hai aur veer ko awaj deta hai

Veer awaj sunkar apne pita ke paas aata hai aur dekhta hai ki uske pita ke hatho me kuch hai

Jairam jab dekhta hai ki veer aagaya hai to vo apne hath me liya hua saman veer ke hatho me rakh deta hai ye ek simple as dagger tha



"Ye tumhari safety ke liye ise humesha apne paas rakhna" Jairam kahta hai

Ye sunkar veer bahut khush ho jata hai kyuki ye uske dad ka tha jisse Jairam humesha apne pass rakhta tha aur kuch samay pahle jab veer Jairam ke sath forest me gaya tha to uspar ek jungli janwar ( wild beast ) ne humla kar diya tha ye ek wild boar tha veer achanak hue us humle se dar gaya tha lekin tabhi Jairam ne is dagger se us boar ka sar ek strike me hi kaat diya tha bas tabhi se veer is dagger ko lena chata hai aur aaj uski ye khawaish puri ho gayi isliye vo khush tha

Kuch der baad dono ghar se bahar aate hai aur ek ghoda baggi jo pahle se hi bahar khadi thi usse lekar gaon ke gate ki aur chal dete hai

Gaon ke bahar pahle se hi kuch log ghoda baggi ke sath khada hue in dono ka hi intezar kar rahe the

Hariya dono ko aata hua dekhkar Jairam se kahta hai "yaar hum kitni der se tumhara intezar kar rahe hai aur tum ab aa rahe ho chalo ab jaldi chalo hum raat se pahle town jana hai"

Ye sunkar sabhi log apni apni ghode baggi me baith jate hai aur chal dete hai 10 ghode baggi gaon se town ki chal deti hai
Nice Update Bro...
Apne jo kaha bilkul sahi hai ki kabhi kosis karne walon ki haar nahi hoti...
To Jairam ne apna khanjar Veer ko de diya...
Ab dekhte hain aage kya hoga...
Waiting for next update
 
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