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Fantasy The Almighty VEER

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KING DEVIL

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Ng_TheViper said:
Very short update..
Updates m scene kitne h ye imp h phir chahe koi usko kitna bi short krke dikha de but aaj k update m bs 2 hi scene tha usme bi 1st wale m bs baap bete ka conversation tha aur 2nd wala town Jane k liye ready hona bs...

Also , conversation ko aap smartly likh sakte h taki apko baar baar na likhna pade ki kisne kya bola like :
Dad- ________
Veer - _______

Is format m likhenge to aap kafi words ko ignore kr sakte h jisse apko mehnat kam lagegi sath m asani rahegi hame ( readers ) ko padhne m..

Abtk k plot m itna to clear h ki veer bodywise to kamjor h par uske sapne aur irade majboot h .. apne dad ki tarah banna chahta h but wo disabled person h but still apne bete ka ache s khyal rakh rahe h..

Let's see kya hota h aage...
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Thanks bro

Bhai
meri ye first story hai aur abhi abhi mai likhna suru kiya hai aur agle kuch update me story ka turning point aane wala hai isliye mai chahta hu ki use acchi tarike se likh saku jis wajah se mai waha par apna time laga raha hu jiski wajah se update chote aa rahe hai asli story to uske baad hi suru hogi

Aur bhai mai us format me comfortably nhi likh paunga isliye mai likh raha hu aur conversation ke liye mai ( "_____" ) ka use kar raha hu

And thanks once again
 
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