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Bhuat hi sandar apdet Bhai
Nice update
Bahut hi badhiya or shandar update
1. Jamal ki niyat me mujhe khot najar aa rahi ha jaise wo shabhay se bat kar raha tha or uski baton ko nahi man raha tha shayad isliye sukant ne shabhay ko chuna kyonki shayad use jamal pe shak ho gaya ho ki kya lata ye bhi kharad si mila ho
2. Idhar rupali or meena pahunch gayi ha kamal ke ghar kamal ko invitation dene or use ane ke liye bhi kaha kamal ko jana to tha hi use karan ne jo kaha ha idhar shital kamal ke ane se khush ho rahi ha wo soch rahi ha ki kamal ko kisi tarah mana legi use ahsas ho gaya ha ki usne kya kiya ha kamal ke sath lekin use ye nahi oata ha ki kamal inki wajah se nahi kisi or wajah se aa raha ha or inke wahan to wo katai nahi rukega engagement me dhamal hone wala ha shayad
3. Idhar kharad ka kahar jari ha jo amrit lok ke kisi ganv ke mukhiya ko dhamki dene pahunch gaya ha kyonki use apna dar bethana ha sabke age kya villIain ha pure evil villain ko aisa hi hona chhahiye kher mukhiya bechara apne ghar ki ijjat ir bachho ko bachane ke liye surrender kar diya
4. Idhar pehli bar shweta ke dil me kamal ke liye feelings jagi ha kaise bhai ab tak kishar thi ye idhar guddi bhi as usual apne dusre bhai behnon ki tarah nikli use bhi kamal me koi khas interest nahi ha or kamal ko un dono vishal or sunil se compare kar kar rahi ha kamal kya ha jab ise pata padega to iski ankhen fati rah jayengi shweta dekhte han engagement me kamal se bat kar pati ha ya nahi
5. Idhar kamal ko pritam sapne me apne hatiya Chāyāvrtt ke bare me bata raha ha ki ao uska ha jo ki abhi kharad ke pas ha agar wo hatiyar pritam ka ha to shayad jald hi wo kamal ke pas hoga kyonki uska asli hakdar to kamal ha or lagta ha use pane ke bad kamal ki power or badh jayegi
Kher ham to yahi chahten han ki kamal engagement me dhum macha de apne pariwar walon ko sach ka ayna dikha de or ho sake to thodi powers bhi show kara de ki jisse uske pariwar wale dekhte rah jaye or han mafi kisi ko bhi nahi abhi to chhahe koi kitna hi pyar se mana le ya bat kar le sabki ignore mar de kamal
Waiting for next update bro
Nice update
Shital ,Meena aur rupali ko lag raha hai kamal Maan Gaya Saadi me aane ke liye
Baaki dekhte hai kamal kya kerta hai Meena ki engagement me ,aur kaisa vaivhaar kerte hai kamal ke ghar waale khass ker maa bahen aur bhai
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awesome update bro
Zabardast update bhai keep posting.
Reply to de raha na bhai
Excellent update waiting for next
Sab kuchh bahut shi Jaa rha h bhai abhi tk toh,,, bss me ek chiz khna chahunga,,, tumko bhi apni studies wgrh me dhyan dena hota h aur pta ni tum college me ho ya internship pr,,, pr haa, story k lie ek time limit bna Lena ki kitne time me end kroge uss hisab se expansion ya contraction Krna story ka... Ek complete story ki baat he alag hoti h,,, baki tumne bhut achha landscape taiyar kiya h,,, aur sb characters se attachment feel hoti h,,,
Shandar update
Nice and superb update....
Damakedar aur Jabardast Update️
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Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai hemya bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
Jabardast update bhai![]()
.ye kharad abhi bhi apna kahar gaav waalo per dhaa rha hai ab to usne Amrit lok ke kisi gaav per dhawa bol diya hai waha ke logo ko pareshaan laga hai
Aur yaha kamal ke ghar me abhi bhi kamal ke baare me koi jyada interest nhi le rha hai wahi uski maa shital ko lag rha hai kamal bahut assani me Meena ki engagement me aane ke liye Maan gya hai ab shital jaldi se kamal ko mana legi .........
Khair dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Bhai ek baat bolni thi
Ab 2,3 update me only kamal aur uske ghar walon ka hi scene dikhao jab tak meena ka engagement nhi ho jata hai
kharad aur Amrit lok ka scene thoda side ker do ,jab Kamal apne ghar jaaye aur wah se jab wapas aaye uske baap kharat aur Amrit lok aur baaki sab scene add kijiye update me
Baaki aapki marzi
Bahut hi lajawab update
Mast update.
Weekly update hogi toh mze hi mze.
UPDATEDAwesome update
Waah bhai jabardast updateUPDATE 29
Mujhe jabse vo sapna aaya tabse, pura man bechen sa rahne laga.maine niche baitha upar samne Abby ki taraf sar upar kar dekh raha tha.Abby mere aankho me aankhe daal apne hatho se ishara kar mujhe samjha rahi thi.
"Kamal, kya hua main kabse tumse baat kar rahi hu, dhyan kaha hai tumhara."
Abby ki jor se chillati aavaj sun Mai jaise nind se jaaga, Amrita meri taraf chinta ki najaro se dekh rahi thi.
" Kuch nahi,tum batao vo 'families' ka kya?"
"To main kah rahi thi ki, Mathews hame kuchh families se milayega shayad un sab se tum pahle bhi mile ho,Vo families bhi Amrit lok se yaha bhag kar aayi hai, kyuki unke samarthak Amrit lok me hai to kharad se bhagkar vo yaha aaye hai."
" Kharad to unhe yaha bhi aa kar maar sakta hai."
"Maar sakta hai, lekin Mathews aur mere pita se mujhe jitna Kharad ke baare me pata chala, usase ye jarur pata hai ki vo logo ko todna chahta hai,use apni takat dikhana pasand hai.Aur upar se jab tak use unse khatre naa mahsoos ho tab tak unhe darta hua dekh use achha lagta hai."
Main Abby ki baat soch raha tha, Lekin kyu to mujhe Kharad se khatra mahsus nahi ho raha tha, bura to kisi aur baat ki vajah se lag raha tha. ye darasal mujhe jab bhi Karan aur Abby baat karte to Ajib sa lagta pahle bhi tha lekin jab se vo Chāyāvrtt sapne me aaya hai.vo ajib si bhavna kuch Naya roop le chuki thi.
Ye bhavana aisa nahi tha ki ye pahle mere andar nahi thi, ye thi jo mere parivar ne mere andar bachpan se ujagar kar di thi lekin ab vo asli taklif de rahi thi.
Kyoki kya tha Chāyāvrtt me? Jo ki Andhakaar aur praja swamitv ka pratik tha.vo mene banaya tha.To phir kyu mujhe mahsoos nahi hota ki main un sab ke layak nahi hu.
Is sabke pichhe mere parivar ka bahot bada hath tha. Us sapne ne kuch sikhaya ki main Amrit lok ko kharad se chudaye bina mar nahi sakta. Aur vo mujhe hi in sab ka masiha banana hoga.
Lekin phir bhi mujhme vishwas ki kami thi, ki main sachme karne layak hu.
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"Dekhne do kaha chhot lagi hai."
"Kuch nahi chachi,thik ho jayega."
Shweta ne Natasha ko Kaha.
" Nahi lekin mujhe dekhne do main jald hi use thik kar dungi." Natasha ne kuch naa sunkar Shweta ke kandho par hath chalaya.
Kach jis par gilapan ho us tarah fislan uske sharir par thi ye dekh Natasha bhi thodi hairan hui.
Natasha dikhne khubsurat thi,shadi shuda hone ki vajah se sharir thoda bhari ho gaya tha.lekin apne bade se kulho ki vajah se use bura bhi lagta tha.bhalehi uski Sharda didi itne bade nahi the lekin Shweta ko dekh thodi jalan usme jarur Hui. Shweta ka komal aur aakarshak sharir kuch alag hi dhaa raha tha.
"Vaise aapne Amrit lok ke baare me kya suna hai."
Natasha achanak is sawal se ruk gayi.
"Khubsurat hai bass Kharad hote hue vo khubsurati mahsoos hoti kaha hai."
"Kya?"
Natasha ko is tarah Amrit lok ka varnan karta dekh use laga ki jaise vo Amrit lok jaa chuki hai, balki usne apni aadhi jindagi Amrit lok me nikali thi ye baat Shweta aur baaki parivar vaalo ko nahi pata tha.
Natasha ne apne oth katate hue.
" Mene yahi baate suni hai,bujurgo se."
"Achha mujhe laga, vaise ye kharad sach me itna bura hai, ki dadaji to naam sunte hi dar jaate hai, jaise vo saamne khada ho."
Natasha Kharad ka khauf jaanti thi.
Jab Amrita paida hui thi to usne Kharad ka kahar apne aankho ke samne dekha tha , uske saamne uske sago ko kharad ne maara tha.
"Lekin hame un sab se darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai ham yaha surakshit hai."
Natasha ye baat khud ko samjha rahi thi, kyuki jab se vo yaha aayi thi to ummid bhi jaagi thi ki Pritam Ke hone par unhe kuch nahi hoga.
Natasha darasal Amrit lok me pali badi hone ki vajah se, uske sanskar bhi usi tarah se hue the ki Pritam unhe bachayega. Vahi vaha ka asli raaja hai.
Khudki duniya ki suraksha uske hatho me hai.
Shweta ne Natasha ki baat par haami bhari,use kaha pata tha ki khatra kitna bada hai.
Vo apni hi alag duniya me thi. uske sharir par hue jakhmo ko mitata dekh rahi thi.
Ye jakhm jise vo pyar maanti thi usne kiye the,sarthak ne. Sarthak to usase pyar karta hi nahi tha. Shweta hi uske pichhe pagal thi. Lekin Sarthak uska fayda uthana chahta tha isiliye usne us din Shweta ko apne Ghar bulaya.kyuki shweta ne kaha tha ki vo Sarthak ki jindagi ka hissa hone ke liye kuch bhi karegi kyuki pyar jo karti thi usase.
Lekin Ghar jaane par use bahot bada jhatka laga.
Uske Ghar jaate hi,use sarthak apni bahan ko ghodi bana uspar sawar dhakke maar Raha tha.
Shweta dono sage bhai bahanon ko is tarah karta dekh chauk gayi.
Shweta ko aata dekh dono ne aavaj lagayi.
Shweta gusse me Sarthak ki taraf badh hi rahi thi ki sarthak ki bahan tange kholkar l
Sidhe let gayi.
"Shweta aao, tumhe agar Sarthak ki jindagi me rahna hai to mujhe bhi apnana hoga."
Shweta baat sun puri tarah stabdh thi ki koi aisa bol bhi kaise sakta hai. Tabhi Sarthak bol pada.
"Shweta, meri bahan jaisa bol rahi hai vaisa karo. Main use naraj nahi karna chahta. Bahut pyaar jo karta hu na usase."
Shweta ke aankho me ye baat sun aansu aa gaye. Vo jo shabd apne liye sunana chahti thi Sarthak ke muh se vo Apni bahan ke liye bol raha tha. Upar se Shweta koi un dono ka khilona ho is tarah ki baate vo dono kar rahe the.
Shweta ne rote hue bahar ki taraf bhagi tabhi, Sarthak aur uski bahan shweta par jhapat pade.
Un dono bhai bahano ki bhidant me use chot lagi lekin sath hi Shweta ne dono ko achhe se kut diya tha.
Usi vajah se Shweta ko kuch chote lagi thi, jise uski maa ne dekhkar Natasha se thik karvane ko kaha.
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Shital apne dimag me.
Bhalehi mera bartav Kamal ki taraf thik nahi tha. Maine us par jyada dhyan nahi diya. Shayad koi kahta ki mujhe sabse jyada us par dhyan dena chahiye kyuki usi ke pass shaktiya nahi thi. Lekin Main Vishal aur Payal ko bhi bada hota dekhna chahti thi.
Vishal ke janme ke baad Mene kahi saal uski dekhbhaal me laga diye.
Kamal ke janm ke baad aisa nahi tha ki maine use pyar nahi kiya shayad maine jitna pyar bachpan me us par lutaya vo kisi bhi bachhe par nahi lutaya. Payal bhi chhoti thi, uski ki bhi dekhabhal vo karti thi. Lekin baaki Parivar vaale Kamal se itna pyaar nahi karte the kyuki unhe usme kuch Naya nahi dikhata tha.
Bachpan se Sabhi ke pass shaktiya thi, sabhi ko ekdusre ki shaktiyo ki tarif karna aur pradarshan karna pasand tha. Isi vajah se jab mere bachhe apni Shaktiya dikhane lage to mujhe garv hota. Khaskar Vishal jo ki sabse majboot tha. Jis vajah se ghar me sabhi uski tarifo ke pull bandhte the. Mujhe naseeb vaan kahte the. Isiliye jyadatar dhyan Vishal aur Payal ki taraf hi gaya jo khud bhi ek kam umra se badi kalakar thi. Apne sapno me Jo bhi dekha vo mere saamne prastut karti. Ghar me sabhi ka dhyan us par hi tha.
Vishwas ko bhi apne bete par garv tha. In sadharan manushyon ki duniya me aisi Shaktiya aapko behad bada bana deti hai vahi baat thi. Jisne bachpan se khudki tarife suni ho vo apne bachho ki bhi tarif sunna chahti the. Vahi mera bhi haal tha.
Lekin Iska Matlab bilkul bhi nahi hai ki main mere bete se pyaar nahi karti. Vo mere liye vahi chhota sa Kamal tha lekin mujhe kya hoga ya tha ki main itni badi bhul kar baithi ki use
Kya Kamal sachme mujhse baat karega. Ashu jabse ghar aayi hai vo apni maa ke sath ghul milakar rah rahi hai. Use bhi to Nirmala didi ne khud se alag rakha. Lekin Ashu to unhe nafrat nahi karti.
Mene to use hamesha apne pass rakha phir bhi vo mujhse nafrat karata hai. Main jarur use samjha paungi. Haa, Ashu se vo pyar karta hai mujhe use manana hoga.
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Vahi dusri taraf Engagement ki tayari chal rahi thi. is sab ki jimmedari Dono parivaaro ne uthayi thi kyuki unke jyada koi rishtedar nahi the. Ashu bhi ek tarah se khush hi thi kyuki uske Bhai ki sagai thi. Tejaswini aur shital ne milkar Sari mithaiyaa aur tofe khareed liye the kyuki ye dulhan ki taraf se thi. Bhalehi vo sab log khudko ek hi family maante the lekin unke surname alag alag the.
Shyam ho chuki thi. Bahut se jaan-pahchhan vaale log jo dost unhone banaye the vahi, ghar ke bade se garden me kursiyo par baithe hue the.
Kuch log Natasha aur sharada se mil rahe the kyuki pahli baar unhe kabhi mile the.
Door ke rishtedaar hai ye kahkar, dada nana ne logon bata diya.
Sabka kuch na kuch tamjham chalu tha.
Sagai ki rasme chalu hone vaali thi.
Shital ke sath sath rupali bhi Kamal ke aane ki raah dekh rahi thi.
"Are vishal tumhari kab sagayi hogi, sunil to kar raha hai."Arjun Sari sathiyo ke sath Aa hua tha vo bola.
"Ab mujhse bada hai, vo uski shadi hogi."
" Haa tum dono ki family vaise bhi close hai, Meena ki tumse shadi tumse karvayenge tumhe lagta hai."
" Bilkul mujhse hi hogi aur vo Meena bhi mujhse pyar bhi karti hai."
" Tumhara thik hai, kuch kiya hai kya tumne uske sath." Arjun ki baat par sabhi hasne lage.
"Vo vaisi ladki nahi hai."
" Achha phir vo nayi aurat kaisi hai, vo karne degi kya?"
Vishal ne dono ko ishara kiya aur thode piche ho gaye chhat par Asmita kuch aurato se baat kar rahi thi.
" Are yaar ye to kamal ki hai, ye agar mere muh pe baith jaye to bhi mana nahi karunga ise."
Arjun ki is gandi baat par sabhi hasne lage phir ek ladke ne kaha.
" Iska to pati bhi nahi hai, ye kahe to gulam hi jau iska."
" Kon nahi hona chahega" arjun uske dost ki baat par haami bharte hue kaha.
" Ye to kuch bhi nahi hai, aur bhi do ladkiya aayi Hui hai, usme se ek ladki itni khubsurat hai ki tumne sapne me bhi itni khubsurat ladki Sochi nahi hogi."
"Bhai, kaha hai vo, kisi ke sath to jama de mera tere sath to baat karti hi hongi."
"vo ghar pe nahi rahti jyada lekin mujhe nahi lagta vo tum jaiso ke bass ki hai use to main hi pataunga."
" Phir Meena ka kya?"
" Tumhe nahi lagta ki main do ladkiya deserve karta hu."
Sab ne uski haa me haa milayi kyuki unke liye Vishal koi supreme being ki tarah tha.
Tabhi Vishal ko Mathews dikhayi diya aur vo uske pass chala gaya jo ki Sunil ki taraf jaa raha tha.
Baate karke vo sab bahar aaye ab rasme chalu hi hone vaali thi.
Amrita bhi vaha khadi thi vo Kamal ki raah dekh rahi thi.
Pragati aur baaki ladkiya jo payal ki dost thi vo bhi aayi Hui thi.
Vishal aur Sunil ke sath sabki najare Amrita ki taraf thi.
Arjun bhi jaan gaya tha ki baate kiski ho rahi thi jab Vishal ne itni tarif ki thi.
Tabhi vaha par Kamal aa gaya. Amrita ne ek kshan naa gavate hue uske pass aa gayi. Shital ki najare uski taraf gayi lekin vo rasmo me busy thi. Use aas thi ki khane khane jarur rukega. Tab baat karenge, Bufffet tha.
Kamal bhi use dekh muskuraya. Tabhi Amrita ne Kamal ke kaano me kuch kaha.
Kamal naa me sar hilane vaala tha lekin Tabhi Amrita Amrita boli.
"Aapne kaha tha ki main Jo bolungi aap vo karenge varna main isase bhi bura kuch karne ko bolungi. Aur main Amrita hu mujhe aap ke siva kisise farak nahi padta. Agar aapko ye baat buri lagti hai to thik hai."
Ye sab baate dhire se chalu thi.
Vishal aur Arjun un dono ki khuspusahat dekh samjhne ki koshish karne laga ki Kamal ko itna kaise jaanti hai.
Vahi Asmita khush thi aur thodi narvas bhi kyuki use Amrita aur Ashu ko bataya tha ki kya karne vaali hai Amrita.
Bhid me ab jyada tr logo ki najare Sunil aur Rupali ki taraf thi. Achanak khuspusahat badh gayi Sunil aur rupali samajh nahi paaye, sab dhire dhire Mud gaye.
Lekin Kamal aur Amrita ne kuch Aisa Kiya ki sabki najare un taraf ho gayi.
Kyuki tabhi dono ke oth ek dusre se lage hue the. Amrita ka hath Kamal ke kandho par tha.
Dono ek dusre ko baaho me the.
Bahut se log sharma rahe the bahot se gussa the. Kuch log naraj the
Mathew , Karan aur Abby ye dekh muskuraye. Ashu ko thoda bura laga lekin use Amrita ne pahle hi bata diya tha, vo use mana nahi kar paayi. Kyuki ab sab log kya sawal uthayenge isase vo Darr rahi thi.
to ye rahi update like kar do aur apni apni raay dete raho. Agla part majedar hoga .
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai hemya bhai....UPDATE 29
Mujhe jabse vo sapna aaya tabse, pura man bechen sa rahne laga.maine niche baitha upar samne Abby ki taraf sar upar kar dekh raha tha.Abby mere aankho me aankhe daal apne hatho se ishara kar mujhe samjha rahi thi.
"Kamal, kya hua main kabse tumse baat kar rahi hu, dhyan kaha hai tumhara."
Abby ki jor se chillati aavaj sun Mai jaise nind se jaaga, Amrita meri taraf chinta ki najaro se dekh rahi thi.
" Kuch nahi,tum batao vo 'families' ka kya?"
"To main kah rahi thi ki, Mathews hame kuchh families se milayega shayad un sab se tum pahle bhi mile ho,Vo families bhi Amrit lok se yaha bhag kar aayi hai, kyuki unke samarthak Amrit lok me hai to kharad se bhagkar vo yaha aaye hai."
" Kharad to unhe yaha bhi aa kar maar sakta hai."
"Maar sakta hai, lekin Mathews aur mere pita se mujhe jitna Kharad ke baare me pata chala, usase ye jarur pata hai ki vo logo ko todna chahta hai,use apni takat dikhana pasand hai.Aur upar se jab tak use unse khatre naa mahsoos ho tab tak unhe darta hua dekh use achha lagta hai."
Main Abby ki baat soch raha tha, Lekin kyu to mujhe Kharad se khatra mahsus nahi ho raha tha, bura to kisi aur baat ki vajah se lag raha tha. ye darasal mujhe jab bhi Karan aur Abby baat karte to Ajib sa lagta pahle bhi tha lekin jab se vo Chāyāvrtt sapne me aaya hai.vo ajib si bhavna kuch Naya roop le chuki thi.
Ye bhavana aisa nahi tha ki ye pahle mere andar nahi thi, ye thi jo mere parivar ne mere andar bachpan se ujagar kar di thi lekin ab vo asli taklif de rahi thi.
Kyoki kya tha Chāyāvrtt me? Jo ki Andhakaar aur praja swamitv ka pratik tha.vo mene banaya tha.To phir kyu mujhe mahsoos nahi hota ki main un sab ke layak nahi hu.
Is sabke pichhe mere parivar ka bahot bada hath tha. Us sapne ne kuch sikhaya ki main Amrit lok ko kharad se chudaye bina mar nahi sakta. Aur vo mujhe hi in sab ka masiha banana hoga.
Lekin phir bhi mujhme vishwas ki kami thi, ki main sachme karne layak hu.
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"Dekhne do kaha chhot lagi hai."
"Kuch nahi chachi,thik ho jayega."
Shweta ne Natasha ko Kaha.
" Nahi lekin mujhe dekhne do main jald hi use thik kar dungi." Natasha ne kuch naa sunkar Shweta ke kandho par hath chalaya.
Kach jis par gilapan ho us tarah fislan uske sharir par thi ye dekh Natasha bhi thodi hairan hui.
Natasha dikhne khubsurat thi,shadi shuda hone ki vajah se sharir thoda bhari ho gaya tha.lekin apne bade se kulho ki vajah se use bura bhi lagta tha.bhalehi uski Sharda didi itne bade nahi the lekin Shweta ko dekh thodi jalan usme jarur Hui. Shweta ka komal aur aakarshak sharir kuch alag hi dhaa raha tha.
"Vaise aapne Amrit lok ke baare me kya suna hai."
Natasha achanak is sawal se ruk gayi.
"Khubsurat hai bass Kharad hote hue vo khubsurati mahsoos hoti kaha hai."
"Kya?"
Natasha ko is tarah Amrit lok ka varnan karta dekh use laga ki jaise vo Amrit lok jaa chuki hai, balki usne apni aadhi jindagi Amrit lok me nikali thi ye baat Shweta aur baaki parivar vaalo ko nahi pata tha.
Natasha ne apne oth katate hue.
" Mene yahi baate suni hai,bujurgo se."
"Achha mujhe laga, vaise ye kharad sach me itna bura hai, ki dadaji to naam sunte hi dar jaate hai, jaise vo saamne khada ho."
Natasha Kharad ka khauf jaanti thi.
Jab Amrita paida hui thi to usne Kharad ka kahar apne aankho ke samne dekha tha , uske saamne uske sago ko kharad ne maara tha.
"Lekin hame un sab se darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai ham yaha surakshit hai."
Natasha ye baat khud ko samjha rahi thi, kyuki jab se vo yaha aayi thi to ummid bhi jaagi thi ki Pritam Ke hone par unhe kuch nahi hoga.
Natasha darasal Amrit lok me pali badi hone ki vajah se, uske sanskar bhi usi tarah se hue the ki Pritam unhe bachayega. Vahi vaha ka asli raaja hai.
Khudki duniya ki suraksha uske hatho me hai.
Shweta ne Natasha ki baat par haami bhari,use kaha pata tha ki khatra kitna bada hai.
Vo apni hi alag duniya me thi. uske sharir par hue jakhmo ko mitata dekh rahi thi.
Ye jakhm jise vo pyar maanti thi usne kiye the,sarthak ne. Sarthak to usase pyar karta hi nahi tha. Shweta hi uske pichhe pagal thi. Lekin Sarthak uska fayda uthana chahta tha isiliye usne us din Shweta ko apne Ghar bulaya.kyuki shweta ne kaha tha ki vo Sarthak ki jindagi ka hissa hone ke liye kuch bhi karegi kyuki pyar jo karti thi usase.
Lekin Ghar jaane par use bahot bada jhatka laga.
Uske Ghar jaate hi,use sarthak apni bahan ko ghodi bana uspar sawar dhakke maar Raha tha.
Shweta dono sage bhai bahanon ko is tarah karta dekh chauk gayi.
Shweta ko aata dekh dono ne aavaj lagayi.
Shweta gusse me Sarthak ki taraf badh hi rahi thi ki sarthak ki bahan tange kholkar l
Sidhe let gayi.
"Shweta aao, tumhe agar Sarthak ki jindagi me rahna hai to mujhe bhi apnana hoga."
Shweta baat sun puri tarah stabdh thi ki koi aisa bol bhi kaise sakta hai. Tabhi Sarthak bol pada.
"Shweta, meri bahan jaisa bol rahi hai vaisa karo. Main use naraj nahi karna chahta. Bahut pyaar jo karta hu na usase."
Shweta ke aankho me ye baat sun aansu aa gaye. Vo jo shabd apne liye sunana chahti thi Sarthak ke muh se vo Apni bahan ke liye bol raha tha. Upar se Shweta koi un dono ka khilona ho is tarah ki baate vo dono kar rahe the.
Shweta ne rote hue bahar ki taraf bhagi tabhi, Sarthak aur uski bahan shweta par jhapat pade.
Un dono bhai bahano ki bhidant me use chot lagi lekin sath hi Shweta ne dono ko achhe se kut diya tha.
Usi vajah se Shweta ko kuch chote lagi thi, jise uski maa ne dekhkar Natasha se thik karvane ko kaha.
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Shital apne dimag me.
Bhalehi mera bartav Kamal ki taraf thik nahi tha. Maine us par jyada dhyan nahi diya. Shayad koi kahta ki mujhe sabse jyada us par dhyan dena chahiye kyuki usi ke pass shaktiya nahi thi. Lekin Main Vishal aur Payal ko bhi bada hota dekhna chahti thi.
Vishal ke janme ke baad Mene kahi saal uski dekhbhaal me laga diye.
Kamal ke janm ke baad aisa nahi tha ki maine use pyar nahi kiya shayad maine jitna pyar bachpan me us par lutaya vo kisi bhi bachhe par nahi lutaya. Payal bhi chhoti thi, uski ki bhi dekhabhal vo karti thi. Lekin baaki Parivar vaale Kamal se itna pyaar nahi karte the kyuki unhe usme kuch Naya nahi dikhata tha.
Bachpan se Sabhi ke pass shaktiya thi, sabhi ko ekdusre ki shaktiyo ki tarif karna aur pradarshan karna pasand tha. Isi vajah se jab mere bachhe apni Shaktiya dikhane lage to mujhe garv hota. Khaskar Vishal jo ki sabse majboot tha. Jis vajah se ghar me sabhi uski tarifo ke pull bandhte the. Mujhe naseeb vaan kahte the. Isiliye jyadatar dhyan Vishal aur Payal ki taraf hi gaya jo khud bhi ek kam umra se badi kalakar thi. Apne sapno me Jo bhi dekha vo mere saamne prastut karti. Ghar me sabhi ka dhyan us par hi tha.
Vishwas ko bhi apne bete par garv tha. In sadharan manushyon ki duniya me aisi Shaktiya aapko behad bada bana deti hai vahi baat thi. Jisne bachpan se khudki tarife suni ho vo apne bachho ki bhi tarif sunna chahti the. Vahi mera bhi haal tha.
Lekin Iska Matlab bilkul bhi nahi hai ki main mere bete se pyaar nahi karti. Vo mere liye vahi chhota sa Kamal tha lekin mujhe kya hoga ya tha ki main itni badi bhul kar baithi ki use
Kya Kamal sachme mujhse baat karega. Ashu jabse ghar aayi hai vo apni maa ke sath ghul milakar rah rahi hai. Use bhi to Nirmala didi ne khud se alag rakha. Lekin Ashu to unhe nafrat nahi karti.
Mene to use hamesha apne pass rakha phir bhi vo mujhse nafrat karata hai. Main jarur use samjha paungi. Haa, Ashu se vo pyar karta hai mujhe use manana hoga.
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Vahi dusri taraf Engagement ki tayari chal rahi thi. is sab ki jimmedari Dono parivaaro ne uthayi thi kyuki unke jyada koi rishtedar nahi the. Ashu bhi ek tarah se khush hi thi kyuki uske Bhai ki sagai thi. Tejaswini aur shital ne milkar Sari mithaiyaa aur tofe khareed liye the kyuki ye dulhan ki taraf se thi. Bhalehi vo sab log khudko ek hi family maante the lekin unke surname alag alag the.
Shyam ho chuki thi. Bahut se jaan-pahchhan vaale log jo dost unhone banaye the vahi, ghar ke bade se garden me kursiyo par baithe hue the.
Kuch log Natasha aur sharada se mil rahe the kyuki pahli baar unhe kabhi mile the.
Door ke rishtedaar hai ye kahkar, dada nana ne logon bata diya.
Sabka kuch na kuch tamjham chalu tha.
Sagai ki rasme chalu hone vaali thi.
Shital ke sath sath rupali bhi Kamal ke aane ki raah dekh rahi thi.
"Are vishal tumhari kab sagayi hogi, sunil to kar raha hai."Arjun Sari sathiyo ke sath Aa hua tha vo bola.
"Ab mujhse bada hai, vo uski shadi hogi."
" Haa tum dono ki family vaise bhi close hai, Meena ki tumse shadi tumse karvayenge tumhe lagta hai."
" Bilkul mujhse hi hogi aur vo Meena bhi mujhse pyar bhi karti hai."
" Tumhara thik hai, kuch kiya hai kya tumne uske sath." Arjun ki baat par sabhi hasne lage.
"Vo vaisi ladki nahi hai."
" Achha phir vo nayi aurat kaisi hai, vo karne degi kya?"
Vishal ne dono ko ishara kiya aur thode piche ho gaye chhat par Asmita kuch aurato se baat kar rahi thi.
" Are yaar ye to kamal ki hai, ye agar mere muh pe baith jaye to bhi mana nahi karunga ise."
Arjun ki is gandi baat par sabhi hasne lage phir ek ladke ne kaha.
" Iska to pati bhi nahi hai, ye kahe to gulam hi jau iska."
" Kon nahi hona chahega" arjun uske dost ki baat par haami bharte hue kaha.
" Ye to kuch bhi nahi hai, aur bhi do ladkiya aayi Hui hai, usme se ek ladki itni khubsurat hai ki tumne sapne me bhi itni khubsurat ladki Sochi nahi hogi."
"Bhai, kaha hai vo, kisi ke sath to jama de mera tere sath to baat karti hi hongi."
"vo ghar pe nahi rahti jyada lekin mujhe nahi lagta vo tum jaiso ke bass ki hai use to main hi pataunga."
" Phir Meena ka kya?"
" Tumhe nahi lagta ki main do ladkiya deserve karta hu."
Sab ne uski haa me haa milayi kyuki unke liye Vishal koi supreme being ki tarah tha.
Tabhi Vishal ko Mathews dikhayi diya aur vo uske pass chala gaya jo ki Sunil ki taraf jaa raha tha.
Baate karke vo sab bahar aaye ab rasme chalu hi hone vaali thi.
Amrita bhi vaha khadi thi vo Kamal ki raah dekh rahi thi.
Pragati aur baaki ladkiya jo payal ki dost thi vo bhi aayi Hui thi.
Vishal aur Sunil ke sath sabki najare Amrita ki taraf thi.
Arjun bhi jaan gaya tha ki baate kiski ho rahi thi jab Vishal ne itni tarif ki thi.
Tabhi vaha par Kamal aa gaya. Amrita ne ek kshan naa gavate hue uske pass aa gayi. Shital ki najare uski taraf gayi lekin vo rasmo me busy thi. Use aas thi ki khane khane jarur rukega. Tab baat karenge, Bufffet tha.
Kamal bhi use dekh muskuraya. Tabhi Amrita ne Kamal ke kaano me kuch kaha.
Kamal naa me sar hilane vaala tha lekin Tabhi Amrita Amrita boli.
"Aapne kaha tha ki main Jo bolungi aap vo karenge varna main isase bhi bura kuch karne ko bolungi. Aur main Amrita hu mujhe aap ke siva kisise farak nahi padta. Agar aapko ye baat buri lagti hai to thik hai."
Ye sab baate dhire se chalu thi.
Vishal aur Arjun un dono ki khuspusahat dekh samjhne ki koshish karne laga ki Kamal ko itna kaise jaanti hai.
Vahi Asmita khush thi aur thodi narvas bhi kyuki use Amrita aur Ashu ko bataya tha ki kya karne vaali hai Amrita.
Bhid me ab jyada tr logo ki najare Sunil aur Rupali ki taraf thi. Achanak khuspusahat badh gayi Sunil aur rupali samajh nahi paaye, sab dhire dhire Mud gaye.
Lekin Kamal aur Amrita ne kuch Aisa Kiya ki sabki najare un taraf ho gayi.
Kyuki tabhi dono ke oth ek dusre se lage hue the. Amrita ka hath Kamal ke kandho par tha.
Dono ek dusre ko baaho me the.
Bahut se log sharma rahe the bahot se gussa the. Kuch log naraj the
Mathew , Karan aur Abby ye dekh muskuraye. Ashu ko thoda bura laga lekin use Amrita ne pahle hi bata diya tha, vo use mana nahi kar paayi. Kyuki ab sab log kya sawal uthayenge isase vo Darr rahi thi.
to ye rahi update like kar do aur apni apni raay dete raho. Agla part majedar hoga .
Shandar jabardast updateUPDATE 29
Mujhe jabse vo sapna aaya tabse, pura man bechen sa rahne laga.maine niche baitha upar samne Abby ki taraf sar upar kar dekh raha tha.Abby mere aankho me aankhe daal apne hatho se ishara kar mujhe samjha rahi thi.
"Kamal, kya hua main kabse tumse baat kar rahi hu, dhyan kaha hai tumhara."
Abby ki jor se chillati aavaj sun Mai jaise nind se jaaga, Amrita meri taraf chinta ki najaro se dekh rahi thi.
" Kuch nahi,tum batao vo 'families' ka kya?"
"To main kah rahi thi ki, Mathews hame kuchh families se milayega shayad un sab se tum pahle bhi mile ho,Vo families bhi Amrit lok se yaha bhag kar aayi hai, kyuki unke samarthak Amrit lok me hai to kharad se bhagkar vo yaha aaye hai."
" Kharad to unhe yaha bhi aa kar maar sakta hai."
"Maar sakta hai, lekin Mathews aur mere pita se mujhe jitna Kharad ke baare me pata chala, usase ye jarur pata hai ki vo logo ko todna chahta hai,use apni takat dikhana pasand hai.Aur upar se jab tak use unse khatre naa mahsoos ho tab tak unhe darta hua dekh use achha lagta hai."
Main Abby ki baat soch raha tha, Lekin kyu to mujhe Kharad se khatra mahsus nahi ho raha tha, bura to kisi aur baat ki vajah se lag raha tha. ye darasal mujhe jab bhi Karan aur Abby baat karte to Ajib sa lagta pahle bhi tha lekin jab se vo Chāyāvrtt sapne me aaya hai.vo ajib si bhavna kuch Naya roop le chuki thi.
Ye bhavana aisa nahi tha ki ye pahle mere andar nahi thi, ye thi jo mere parivar ne mere andar bachpan se ujagar kar di thi lekin ab vo asli taklif de rahi thi.
Kyoki kya tha Chāyāvrtt me? Jo ki Andhakaar aur praja swamitv ka pratik tha.vo mene banaya tha.To phir kyu mujhe mahsoos nahi hota ki main un sab ke layak nahi hu.
Is sabke pichhe mere parivar ka bahot bada hath tha. Us sapne ne kuch sikhaya ki main Amrit lok ko kharad se chudaye bina mar nahi sakta. Aur vo mujhe hi in sab ka masiha banana hoga.
Lekin phir bhi mujhme vishwas ki kami thi, ki main sachme karne layak hu.
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"Dekhne do kaha chhot lagi hai."
"Kuch nahi chachi,thik ho jayega."
Shweta ne Natasha ko Kaha.
" Nahi lekin mujhe dekhne do main jald hi use thik kar dungi." Natasha ne kuch naa sunkar Shweta ke kandho par hath chalaya.
Kach jis par gilapan ho us tarah fislan uske sharir par thi ye dekh Natasha bhi thodi hairan hui.
Natasha dikhne khubsurat thi,shadi shuda hone ki vajah se sharir thoda bhari ho gaya tha.lekin apne bade se kulho ki vajah se use bura bhi lagta tha.bhalehi uski Sharda didi itne bade nahi the lekin Shweta ko dekh thodi jalan usme jarur Hui. Shweta ka komal aur aakarshak sharir kuch alag hi dhaa raha tha.
"Vaise aapne Amrit lok ke baare me kya suna hai."
Natasha achanak is sawal se ruk gayi.
"Khubsurat hai bass Kharad hote hue vo khubsurati mahsoos hoti kaha hai."
"Kya?"
Natasha ko is tarah Amrit lok ka varnan karta dekh use laga ki jaise vo Amrit lok jaa chuki hai, balki usne apni aadhi jindagi Amrit lok me nikali thi ye baat Shweta aur baaki parivar vaalo ko nahi pata tha.
Natasha ne apne oth katate hue.
" Mene yahi baate suni hai,bujurgo se."
"Achha mujhe laga, vaise ye kharad sach me itna bura hai, ki dadaji to naam sunte hi dar jaate hai, jaise vo saamne khada ho."
Natasha Kharad ka khauf jaanti thi.
Jab Amrita paida hui thi to usne Kharad ka kahar apne aankho ke samne dekha tha , uske saamne uske sago ko kharad ne maara tha.
"Lekin hame un sab se darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai ham yaha surakshit hai."
Natasha ye baat khud ko samjha rahi thi, kyuki jab se vo yaha aayi thi to ummid bhi jaagi thi ki Pritam Ke hone par unhe kuch nahi hoga.
Natasha darasal Amrit lok me pali badi hone ki vajah se, uske sanskar bhi usi tarah se hue the ki Pritam unhe bachayega. Vahi vaha ka asli raaja hai.
Khudki duniya ki suraksha uske hatho me hai.
Shweta ne Natasha ki baat par haami bhari,use kaha pata tha ki khatra kitna bada hai.
Vo apni hi alag duniya me thi. uske sharir par hue jakhmo ko mitata dekh rahi thi.
Ye jakhm jise vo pyar maanti thi usne kiye the,sarthak ne. Sarthak to usase pyar karta hi nahi tha. Shweta hi uske pichhe pagal thi. Lekin Sarthak uska fayda uthana chahta tha isiliye usne us din Shweta ko apne Ghar bulaya.kyuki shweta ne kaha tha ki vo Sarthak ki jindagi ka hissa hone ke liye kuch bhi karegi kyuki pyar jo karti thi usase.
Lekin Ghar jaane par use bahot bada jhatka laga.
Uske Ghar jaate hi,use sarthak apni bahan ko ghodi bana uspar sawar dhakke maar Raha tha.
Shweta dono sage bhai bahanon ko is tarah karta dekh chauk gayi.
Shweta ko aata dekh dono ne aavaj lagayi.
Shweta gusse me Sarthak ki taraf badh hi rahi thi ki sarthak ki bahan tange kholkar l
Sidhe let gayi.
"Shweta aao, tumhe agar Sarthak ki jindagi me rahna hai to mujhe bhi apnana hoga."
Shweta baat sun puri tarah stabdh thi ki koi aisa bol bhi kaise sakta hai. Tabhi Sarthak bol pada.
"Shweta, meri bahan jaisa bol rahi hai vaisa karo. Main use naraj nahi karna chahta. Bahut pyaar jo karta hu na usase."
Shweta ke aankho me ye baat sun aansu aa gaye. Vo jo shabd apne liye sunana chahti thi Sarthak ke muh se vo Apni bahan ke liye bol raha tha. Upar se Shweta koi un dono ka khilona ho is tarah ki baate vo dono kar rahe the.
Shweta ne rote hue bahar ki taraf bhagi tabhi, Sarthak aur uski bahan shweta par jhapat pade.
Un dono bhai bahano ki bhidant me use chot lagi lekin sath hi Shweta ne dono ko achhe se kut diya tha.
Usi vajah se Shweta ko kuch chote lagi thi, jise uski maa ne dekhkar Natasha se thik karvane ko kaha.
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Shital apne dimag me.
Bhalehi mera bartav Kamal ki taraf thik nahi tha. Maine us par jyada dhyan nahi diya. Shayad koi kahta ki mujhe sabse jyada us par dhyan dena chahiye kyuki usi ke pass shaktiya nahi thi. Lekin Main Vishal aur Payal ko bhi bada hota dekhna chahti thi.
Vishal ke janme ke baad Mene kahi saal uski dekhbhaal me laga diye.
Kamal ke janm ke baad aisa nahi tha ki maine use pyar nahi kiya shayad maine jitna pyar bachpan me us par lutaya vo kisi bhi bachhe par nahi lutaya. Payal bhi chhoti thi, uski ki bhi dekhabhal vo karti thi. Lekin baaki Parivar vaale Kamal se itna pyaar nahi karte the kyuki unhe usme kuch Naya nahi dikhata tha.
Bachpan se Sabhi ke pass shaktiya thi, sabhi ko ekdusre ki shaktiyo ki tarif karna aur pradarshan karna pasand tha. Isi vajah se jab mere bachhe apni Shaktiya dikhane lage to mujhe garv hota. Khaskar Vishal jo ki sabse majboot tha. Jis vajah se ghar me sabhi uski tarifo ke pull bandhte the. Mujhe naseeb vaan kahte the. Isiliye jyadatar dhyan Vishal aur Payal ki taraf hi gaya jo khud bhi ek kam umra se badi kalakar thi. Apne sapno me Jo bhi dekha vo mere saamne prastut karti. Ghar me sabhi ka dhyan us par hi tha.
Vishwas ko bhi apne bete par garv tha. In sadharan manushyon ki duniya me aisi Shaktiya aapko behad bada bana deti hai vahi baat thi. Jisne bachpan se khudki tarife suni ho vo apne bachho ki bhi tarif sunna chahti the. Vahi mera bhi haal tha.
Lekin Iska Matlab bilkul bhi nahi hai ki main mere bete se pyaar nahi karti. Vo mere liye vahi chhota sa Kamal tha lekin mujhe kya hoga ya tha ki main itni badi bhul kar baithi ki use
Kya Kamal sachme mujhse baat karega. Ashu jabse ghar aayi hai vo apni maa ke sath ghul milakar rah rahi hai. Use bhi to Nirmala didi ne khud se alag rakha. Lekin Ashu to unhe nafrat nahi karti.
Mene to use hamesha apne pass rakha phir bhi vo mujhse nafrat karata hai. Main jarur use samjha paungi. Haa, Ashu se vo pyar karta hai mujhe use manana hoga.
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Vahi dusri taraf Engagement ki tayari chal rahi thi. is sab ki jimmedari Dono parivaaro ne uthayi thi kyuki unke jyada koi rishtedar nahi the. Ashu bhi ek tarah se khush hi thi kyuki uske Bhai ki sagai thi. Tejaswini aur shital ne milkar Sari mithaiyaa aur tofe khareed liye the kyuki ye dulhan ki taraf se thi. Bhalehi vo sab log khudko ek hi family maante the lekin unke surname alag alag the.
Shyam ho chuki thi. Bahut se jaan-pahchhan vaale log jo dost unhone banaye the vahi, ghar ke bade se garden me kursiyo par baithe hue the.
Kuch log Natasha aur sharada se mil rahe the kyuki pahli baar unhe kabhi mile the.
Door ke rishtedaar hai ye kahkar, dada nana ne logon bata diya.
Sabka kuch na kuch tamjham chalu tha.
Sagai ki rasme chalu hone vaali thi.
Shital ke sath sath rupali bhi Kamal ke aane ki raah dekh rahi thi.
"Are vishal tumhari kab sagayi hogi, sunil to kar raha hai."Arjun Sari sathiyo ke sath Aa hua tha vo bola.
"Ab mujhse bada hai, vo uski shadi hogi."
" Haa tum dono ki family vaise bhi close hai, Meena ki tumse shadi tumse karvayenge tumhe lagta hai."
" Bilkul mujhse hi hogi aur vo Meena bhi mujhse pyar bhi karti hai."
" Tumhara thik hai, kuch kiya hai kya tumne uske sath." Arjun ki baat par sabhi hasne lage.
"Vo vaisi ladki nahi hai."
" Achha phir vo nayi aurat kaisi hai, vo karne degi kya?"
Vishal ne dono ko ishara kiya aur thode piche ho gaye chhat par Asmita kuch aurato se baat kar rahi thi.
" Are yaar ye to kamal ki hai, ye agar mere muh pe baith jaye to bhi mana nahi karunga ise."
Arjun ki is gandi baat par sabhi hasne lage phir ek ladke ne kaha.
" Iska to pati bhi nahi hai, ye kahe to gulam hi jau iska."
" Kon nahi hona chahega" arjun uske dost ki baat par haami bharte hue kaha.
" Ye to kuch bhi nahi hai, aur bhi do ladkiya aayi Hui hai, usme se ek ladki itni khubsurat hai ki tumne sapne me bhi itni khubsurat ladki Sochi nahi hogi."
"Bhai, kaha hai vo, kisi ke sath to jama de mera tere sath to baat karti hi hongi."
"vo ghar pe nahi rahti jyada lekin mujhe nahi lagta vo tum jaiso ke bass ki hai use to main hi pataunga."
" Phir Meena ka kya?"
" Tumhe nahi lagta ki main do ladkiya deserve karta hu."
Sab ne uski haa me haa milayi kyuki unke liye Vishal koi supreme being ki tarah tha.
Tabhi Vishal ko Mathews dikhayi diya aur vo uske pass chala gaya jo ki Sunil ki taraf jaa raha tha.
Baate karke vo sab bahar aaye ab rasme chalu hi hone vaali thi.
Amrita bhi vaha khadi thi vo Kamal ki raah dekh rahi thi.
Pragati aur baaki ladkiya jo payal ki dost thi vo bhi aayi Hui thi.
Vishal aur Sunil ke sath sabki najare Amrita ki taraf thi.
Arjun bhi jaan gaya tha ki baate kiski ho rahi thi jab Vishal ne itni tarif ki thi.
Tabhi vaha par Kamal aa gaya. Amrita ne ek kshan naa gavate hue uske pass aa gayi. Shital ki najare uski taraf gayi lekin vo rasmo me busy thi. Use aas thi ki khane khane jarur rukega. Tab baat karenge, Bufffet tha.
Kamal bhi use dekh muskuraya. Tabhi Amrita ne Kamal ke kaano me kuch kaha.
Kamal naa me sar hilane vaala tha lekin Tabhi Amrita Amrita boli.
"Aapne kaha tha ki main Jo bolungi aap vo karenge varna main isase bhi bura kuch karne ko bolungi. Aur main Amrita hu mujhe aap ke siva kisise farak nahi padta. Agar aapko ye baat buri lagti hai to thik hai."
Ye sab baate dhire se chalu thi.
Vishal aur Arjun un dono ki khuspusahat dekh samjhne ki koshish karne laga ki Kamal ko itna kaise jaanti hai.
Vahi Asmita khush thi aur thodi narvas bhi kyuki use Amrita aur Ashu ko bataya tha ki kya karne vaali hai Amrita.
Bhid me ab jyada tr logo ki najare Sunil aur Rupali ki taraf thi. Achanak khuspusahat badh gayi Sunil aur rupali samajh nahi paaye, sab dhire dhire Mud gaye.
Lekin Kamal aur Amrita ne kuch Aisa Kiya ki sabki najare un taraf ho gayi.
Kyuki tabhi dono ke oth ek dusre se lage hue the. Amrita ka hath Kamal ke kandho par tha.
Dono ek dusre ko baaho me the.
Bahut se log sharma rahe the bahot se gussa the. Kuch log naraj the
Mathew , Karan aur Abby ye dekh muskuraye. Ashu ko thoda bura laga lekin use Amrita ne pahle hi bata diya tha, vo use mana nahi kar paayi. Kyuki ab sab log kya sawal uthayenge isase vo Darr rahi thi.
to ye rahi update like kar do aur apni apni raay dete raho. Agla part majedar hoga .
Amrita aur Asmita uski Ghar ki aurate nahi hai vo to Amrit lok se hai isiliye Dadaji ke kahne par rah Rahi hai , aur ye baat shuruvat se Maine clear kar di thi ki Vishal ke uski Ghar ki aurato ke prati vichar kaise hai.Waah bhai jabardast update![]()
Ab aayega maja, dekhte hai kamal aur Amrita ke aise kerne se kis kis ko takleef hoti aur kaun kya kya bolta hai ,phir kamal ka palatwar bhi dekhna hai ,kamal kya kerta hai ........ Per Vishal ke dost ,Vishal ke ghar ki aurato aur ladkiyon ke baare me aisi baate ker rahe hai aur Vishal kuch nhi bol raha hai
Khair dekhte hai aage kya hota hai ,
Bhai next update jaldi Dena
Haa bhai wo dono Amrit lok se hai but kamal ke ghar me hi to rah rahi haiAmrita aur Asmita uski Ghar ki aurate nahi hai vo to Amrit lok se hai isiliye Dadaji ke kahne par rah Rahi hai , aur ye baat shuruvat se Maine clear kar di thi ki Vishal ke uski Ghar ki aurato ke prati vichar kaise hai.
Baaki dhanyawad. Aise hi bane rahiye.
UPDATE 29
Mujhe jabse vo sapna aaya tabse, pura man bechen sa rahne laga.maine niche baitha upar samne Abby ki taraf sar upar kar dekh raha tha.Abby mere aankho me aankhe daal apne hatho se ishara kar mujhe samjha rahi thi.
"Kamal, kya hua main kabse tumse baat kar rahi hu, dhyan kaha hai tumhara."
Abby ki jor se chillati aavaj sun Mai jaise nind se jaaga, Amrita meri taraf chinta ki najaro se dekh rahi thi.
" Kuch nahi,tum batao vo 'families' ka kya?"
"To main kah rahi thi ki, Mathews hame kuchh families se milayega shayad un sab se tum pahle bhi mile ho,Vo families bhi Amrit lok se yaha bhag kar aayi hai, kyuki unke samarthak Amrit lok me hai to kharad se bhagkar vo yaha aaye hai."
" Kharad to unhe yaha bhi aa kar maar sakta hai."
"Maar sakta hai, lekin Mathews aur mere pita se mujhe jitna Kharad ke baare me pata chala, usase ye jarur pata hai ki vo logo ko todna chahta hai,use apni takat dikhana pasand hai.Aur upar se jab tak use unse khatre naa mahsoos ho tab tak unhe darta hua dekh use achha lagta hai."
Main Abby ki baat soch raha tha, Lekin kyu to mujhe Kharad se khatra mahsus nahi ho raha tha, bura to kisi aur baat ki vajah se lag raha tha. ye darasal mujhe jab bhi Karan aur Abby baat karte to Ajib sa lagta pahle bhi tha lekin jab se vo Chāyāvrtt sapne me aaya hai.vo ajib si bhavna kuch Naya roop le chuki thi.
Ye bhavana aisa nahi tha ki ye pahle mere andar nahi thi, ye thi jo mere parivar ne mere andar bachpan se ujagar kar di thi lekin ab vo asli taklif de rahi thi.
Kyoki kya tha Chāyāvrtt me? Jo ki Andhakaar aur praja swamitv ka pratik tha.vo mene banaya tha.To phir kyu mujhe mahsoos nahi hota ki main un sab ke layak nahi hu.
Is sabke pichhe mere parivar ka bahot bada hath tha. Us sapne ne kuch sikhaya ki main Amrit lok ko kharad se chudaye bina mar nahi sakta. Aur vo mujhe hi in sab ka masiha banana hoga.
Lekin phir bhi mujhme vishwas ki kami thi, ki main sachme karne layak hu.
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"Dekhne do kaha chhot lagi hai."
"Kuch nahi chachi,thik ho jayega."
Shweta ne Natasha ko Kaha.
" Nahi lekin mujhe dekhne do main jald hi use thik kar dungi." Natasha ne kuch naa sunkar Shweta ke kandho par hath chalaya.
Kach jis par gilapan ho us tarah fislan uske sharir par thi ye dekh Natasha bhi thodi hairan hui.
Natasha dikhne khubsurat thi,shadi shuda hone ki vajah se sharir thoda bhari ho gaya tha.lekin apne bade se kulho ki vajah se use bura bhi lagta tha.bhalehi uski Sharda didi itne bade nahi the lekin Shweta ko dekh thodi jalan usme jarur Hui. Shweta ka komal aur aakarshak sharir kuch alag hi dhaa raha tha.
"Vaise aapne Amrit lok ke baare me kya suna hai."
Natasha achanak is sawal se ruk gayi.
"Khubsurat hai bass Kharad hote hue vo khubsurati mahsoos hoti kaha hai."
"Kya?"
Natasha ko is tarah Amrit lok ka varnan karta dekh use laga ki jaise vo Amrit lok jaa chuki hai, balki usne apni aadhi jindagi Amrit lok me nikali thi ye baat Shweta aur baaki parivar vaalo ko nahi pata tha.
Natasha ne apne oth katate hue.
" Mene yahi baate suni hai,bujurgo se."
"Achha mujhe laga, vaise ye kharad sach me itna bura hai, ki dadaji to naam sunte hi dar jaate hai, jaise vo saamne khada ho."
Natasha Kharad ka khauf jaanti thi.
Jab Amrita paida hui thi to usne Kharad ka kahar apne aankho ke samne dekha tha , uske saamne uske sago ko kharad ne maara tha.
"Lekin hame un sab se darne ki koi jarurat nahi hai ham yaha surakshit hai."
Natasha ye baat khud ko samjha rahi thi, kyuki jab se vo yaha aayi thi to ummid bhi jaagi thi ki Pritam Ke hone par unhe kuch nahi hoga.
Natasha darasal Amrit lok me pali badi hone ki vajah se, uske sanskar bhi usi tarah se hue the ki Pritam unhe bachayega. Vahi vaha ka asli raaja hai.
Khudki duniya ki suraksha uske hatho me hai.
Shweta ne Natasha ki baat par haami bhari,use kaha pata tha ki khatra kitna bada hai.
Vo apni hi alag duniya me thi. uske sharir par hue jakhmo ko mitata dekh rahi thi.
Ye jakhm jise vo pyar maanti thi usne kiye the,sarthak ne. Sarthak to usase pyar karta hi nahi tha. Shweta hi uske pichhe pagal thi. Lekin Sarthak uska fayda uthana chahta tha isiliye usne us din Shweta ko apne Ghar bulaya.kyuki shweta ne kaha tha ki vo Sarthak ki jindagi ka hissa hone ke liye kuch bhi karegi kyuki pyar jo karti thi usase.
Lekin Ghar jaane par use bahot bada jhatka laga.
Uske Ghar jaate hi,use sarthak apni bahan ko ghodi bana uspar sawar dhakke maar Raha tha.
Shweta dono sage bhai bahanon ko is tarah karta dekh chauk gayi.
Shweta ko aata dekh dono ne aavaj lagayi.
Shweta gusse me Sarthak ki taraf badh hi rahi thi ki sarthak ki bahan tange kholkar l
Sidhe let gayi.
"Shweta aao, tumhe agar Sarthak ki jindagi me rahna hai to mujhe bhi apnana hoga."
Shweta baat sun puri tarah stabdh thi ki koi aisa bol bhi kaise sakta hai. Tabhi Sarthak bol pada.
"Shweta, meri bahan jaisa bol rahi hai vaisa karo. Main use naraj nahi karna chahta. Bahut pyaar jo karta hu na usase."
Shweta ke aankho me ye baat sun aansu aa gaye. Vo jo shabd apne liye sunana chahti thi Sarthak ke muh se vo Apni bahan ke liye bol raha tha. Upar se Shweta koi un dono ka khilona ho is tarah ki baate vo dono kar rahe the.
Shweta ne rote hue bahar ki taraf bhagi tabhi, Sarthak aur uski bahan shweta par jhapat pade.
Un dono bhai bahano ki bhidant me use chot lagi lekin sath hi Shweta ne dono ko achhe se kut diya tha.
Usi vajah se Shweta ko kuch chote lagi thi, jise uski maa ne dekhkar Natasha se thik karvane ko kaha.
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Shital apne dimag me.
Bhalehi mera bartav Kamal ki taraf thik nahi tha. Maine us par jyada dhyan nahi diya. Shayad koi kahta ki mujhe sabse jyada us par dhyan dena chahiye kyuki usi ke pass shaktiya nahi thi. Lekin Main Vishal aur Payal ko bhi bada hota dekhna chahti thi.
Vishal ke janme ke baad Mene kahi saal uski dekhbhaal me laga diye.
Kamal ke janm ke baad aisa nahi tha ki maine use pyar nahi kiya shayad maine jitna pyar bachpan me us par lutaya vo kisi bhi bachhe par nahi lutaya. Payal bhi chhoti thi, uski ki bhi dekhabhal vo karti thi. Lekin baaki Parivar vaale Kamal se itna pyaar nahi karte the kyuki unhe usme kuch Naya nahi dikhata tha.
Bachpan se Sabhi ke pass shaktiya thi, sabhi ko ekdusre ki shaktiyo ki tarif karna aur pradarshan karna pasand tha. Isi vajah se jab mere bachhe apni Shaktiya dikhane lage to mujhe garv hota. Khaskar Vishal jo ki sabse majboot tha. Jis vajah se ghar me sabhi uski tarifo ke pull bandhte the. Mujhe naseeb vaan kahte the. Isiliye jyadatar dhyan Vishal aur Payal ki taraf hi gaya jo khud bhi ek kam umra se badi kalakar thi. Apne sapno me Jo bhi dekha vo mere saamne prastut karti. Ghar me sabhi ka dhyan us par hi tha.
Vishwas ko bhi apne bete par garv tha. In sadharan manushyon ki duniya me aisi Shaktiya aapko behad bada bana deti hai vahi baat thi. Jisne bachpan se khudki tarife suni ho vo apne bachho ki bhi tarif sunna chahti the. Vahi mera bhi haal tha.
Lekin Iska Matlab bilkul bhi nahi hai ki main mere bete se pyaar nahi karti. Vo mere liye vahi chhota sa Kamal tha lekin mujhe kya hoga ya tha ki main itni badi bhul kar baithi ki use
Kya Kamal sachme mujhse baat karega. Ashu jabse ghar aayi hai vo apni maa ke sath ghul milakar rah rahi hai. Use bhi to Nirmala didi ne khud se alag rakha. Lekin Ashu to unhe nafrat nahi karti.
Mene to use hamesha apne pass rakha phir bhi vo mujhse nafrat karata hai. Main jarur use samjha paungi. Haa, Ashu se vo pyar karta hai mujhe use manana hoga.
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Vahi dusri taraf Engagement ki tayari chal rahi thi. is sab ki jimmedari Dono parivaaro ne uthayi thi kyuki unke jyada koi rishtedar nahi the. Ashu bhi ek tarah se khush hi thi kyuki uske Bhai ki sagai thi. Tejaswini aur shital ne milkar Sari mithaiyaa aur tofe khareed liye the kyuki ye dulhan ki taraf se thi. Bhalehi vo sab log khudko ek hi family maante the lekin unke surname alag alag the.
Shyam ho chuki thi. Bahut se jaan-pahchhan vaale log jo dost unhone banaye the vahi, ghar ke bade se garden me kursiyo par baithe hue the.
Kuch log Natasha aur sharada se mil rahe the kyuki pahli baar unhe kabhi mile the.
Door ke rishtedaar hai ye kahkar, dada nana ne logon bata diya.
Sabka kuch na kuch tamjham chalu tha.
Sagai ki rasme chalu hone vaali thi.
Shital ke sath sath rupali bhi Kamal ke aane ki raah dekh rahi thi.
"Are vishal tumhari kab sagayi hogi, sunil to kar raha hai."Arjun Sari sathiyo ke sath Aa hua tha vo bola.
"Ab mujhse bada hai, vo uski shadi hogi."
" Haa tum dono ki family vaise bhi close hai, Meena ki tumse shadi tumse karvayenge tumhe lagta hai."
" Bilkul mujhse hi hogi aur vo Meena bhi mujhse pyar bhi karti hai."
" Tumhara thik hai, kuch kiya hai kya tumne uske sath." Arjun ki baat par sabhi hasne lage.
"Vo vaisi ladki nahi hai."
" Achha phir vo nayi aurat kaisi hai, vo karne degi kya?"
Vishal ne dono ko ishara kiya aur thode piche ho gaye chhat par Asmita kuch aurato se baat kar rahi thi.
" Are yaar ye to kamal ki hai, ye agar mere muh pe baith jaye to bhi mana nahi karunga ise."
Arjun ki is gandi baat par sabhi hasne lage phir ek ladke ne kaha.
" Iska to pati bhi nahi hai, ye kahe to gulam hi jau iska."
" Kon nahi hona chahega" arjun uske dost ki baat par haami bharte hue kaha.
" Ye to kuch bhi nahi hai, aur bhi do ladkiya aayi Hui hai, usme se ek ladki itni khubsurat hai ki tumne sapne me bhi itni khubsurat ladki Sochi nahi hogi."
"Bhai, kaha hai vo, kisi ke sath to jama de mera tere sath to baat karti hi hongi."
"vo ghar pe nahi rahti jyada lekin mujhe nahi lagta vo tum jaiso ke bass ki hai use to main hi pataunga."
" Phir Meena ka kya?"
" Tumhe nahi lagta ki main do ladkiya deserve karta hu."
Sab ne uski haa me haa milayi kyuki unke liye Vishal koi supreme being ki tarah tha.
Tabhi Vishal ko Mathews dikhayi diya aur vo uske pass chala gaya jo ki Sunil ki taraf jaa raha tha.
Baate karke vo sab bahar aaye ab rasme chalu hi hone vaali thi.
Amrita bhi vaha khadi thi vo Kamal ki raah dekh rahi thi.
Pragati aur baaki ladkiya jo payal ki dost thi vo bhi aayi Hui thi.
Vishal aur Sunil ke sath sabki najare Amrita ki taraf thi.
Arjun bhi jaan gaya tha ki baate kiski ho rahi thi jab Vishal ne itni tarif ki thi.
Tabhi vaha par Kamal aa gaya. Amrita ne ek kshan naa gavate hue uske pass aa gayi. Shital ki najare uski taraf gayi lekin vo rasmo me busy thi. Use aas thi ki khane khane jarur rukega. Tab baat karenge, Bufffet tha.
Kamal bhi use dekh muskuraya. Tabhi Amrita ne Kamal ke kaano me kuch kaha.
Kamal naa me sar hilane vaala tha lekin Tabhi Amrita Amrita boli.
"Aapne kaha tha ki main Jo bolungi aap vo karenge varna main isase bhi bura kuch karne ko bolungi. Aur main Amrita hu mujhe aap ke siva kisise farak nahi padta. Agar aapko ye baat buri lagti hai to thik hai."
Ye sab baate dhire se chalu thi.
Vishal aur Arjun un dono ki khuspusahat dekh samjhne ki koshish karne laga ki Kamal ko itna kaise jaanti hai.
Vahi Asmita khush thi aur thodi narvas bhi kyuki use Amrita aur Ashu ko bataya tha ki kya karne vaali hai Amrita.
Bhid me ab jyada tr logo ki najare Sunil aur Rupali ki taraf thi. Achanak khuspusahat badh gayi Sunil aur rupali samajh nahi paaye, sab dhire dhire Mud gaye.
Lekin Kamal aur Amrita ne kuch Aisa Kiya ki sabki najare un taraf ho gayi.
Kyuki tabhi dono ke oth ek dusre se lage hue the. Amrita ka hath Kamal ke kandho par tha.
Dono ek dusre ko baaho me the.
Bahut se log sharma rahe the bahot se gussa the. Kuch log naraj the
Mathew , Karan aur Abby ye dekh muskuraye. Ashu ko thoda bura laga lekin use Amrita ne pahle hi bata diya tha, vo use mana nahi kar paayi. Kyuki ab sab log kya sawal uthayenge isase vo Darr rahi thi.
to ye rahi update like kar do aur apni apni raay dete raho. Agla part majedar hoga .