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BEAUTIFUL NARATION, GREAT GOING, CARRY ON

IT WAS COMING UP SO WELL , WHY DO YOU HAVE TO KILL IT. WHAT A LOSS

FABULOUS , GOOD PLOT AND GOOD ELABORATION, KEEP IT UP.

SAHI JAA RAHE HO , KAHANI AAGE BADHAO, LATKAO MT

BADHIYA HAI CHALTE RHO. BHAI KO BHI MJE DILWA DENA

jhaantu

YOUR STORIES ARE SHORT INCREDIBLY HOT AND ENTERTAINING. WRITE MORE SUCH STORIES

GURU SAHI JAA RHE HO BAS KAHANI BND MT KR DENA.

PLEASAE RESTART THIS STORY THIS IS AMONGST THE BEST PLOTS I HAVE COMEACROSS.

FANTASTIC PLOT AND TERRIFIC FLOW JUST DO NOT LET IT DIE. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS PLOT.

FANTASTIC FLOW, HOWEVER JUST ONE ASPECT MISSING, THERE WAS NO REFERENCE TO THE PSYCHE OF PRAMILA THAT GOT HER CLOSER TO THE SON, NEVERTHELESS AS STORY FLOWS SMOOTHLY FORWARD IT IS NOT MISSED.

YOU ARE MASTER OF SLOW SEDUCTION, IT KEEPS THE DESIRE BURNING . LOVELY STYLE OF WRITING.

YOU CAN VERY WELL CONTINUE, YOU HAVE THIS UNCANNY STYLE TO CARRY ON WITH OUT BORING READERS. ADD MORE PLAYERS , FROM WITH IN FAMILY AND OUTSIDE LIKE RENA'S MOTHER, PADMINI'S RELATIVE AND AN OCCASIONAL STANGER FOR THE FUN OF IT.

YOOU DID A GREAT WORK TO COMPLETE THIS , HOWEVER THIS THREAD MUST GO ON AND ON. IF YOU AGREE I WILL GIVE YOU SOME IDEAS FROM MY OWN INCESTUAL EXPERIENCES. YOU DID A GREAT JOB CONGRATS

COMING UP NICELY. CONTINUE

PROCEED FURTHER GENTLEMAN

BEEN LONG SINCE YOU HAD WRITTEN A STORY. BEEN WAITING CARRY ON.

ROHNY YOU ARE MASTER OF PLOTS. YOU CREATE FANTASTIC SITUATIONS, YOUR ART OF SLOW SEDUCTION IS GREAT. KEEP IT UP. YOU ARE MY FAVORITE ON XF

FABULOUS START, EVOKED MANY MEMORIES. CONTINUE PLEASE

GOOD ONE MATE. GOT ME IMAGINING MY MOTHER. FANTASTIC, CONTINUE