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Sahi name diya he nandiyo ko chhinal.edkdm kuch to sanskaar ka asar hoga
Sahi name diya he nandiyo ko chhinal.edkdm kuch to sanskaar ka asar hoga
Fir vo topic kuchh change kar ke bhi likhe to kuchh apna likhe. Koi aadhe adhure topic pe likhna unke lie badi bat to nahi. Lekin komalji ne ek alag hi lekhika ki img banai he. Uska kya??? Mere khatam se to sirf vo ray hi de to sahi he.Incest nhi madam cuck
Agar aap Joru ka Gullam padhengi to usmen samdhan samdhan ka mjaak, gaari aur bhi bahoot kuch milega,...aap Mohe rang de padh rahi hain naa usmen bhi samdhan ke prsang aayenge is kahani men us ki smbhavna nahi lagti par aapki baat 100 % sahi hai, ... aur dono stories men samdhan ki chhedkhani haiKomal ji smadhi samadhan ka bhi majak chalta he yaar kuchh karo. Is topic ka hi koi masti banao. Agar ho sake to???!
Mohe rang de to mene suru kar hi di he. Aap ko comments mil bhi rahe honge.Agar aap Joru ka Gullam padhengi to usmen samdhan samdhan ka mjaak, gaari aur bhi bahoot kuch milega,...aap Mohe rang de padh rahi hain naa usmen bhi samdhan ke prsang aayenge is kahani men us ki smbhavna nahi lagti par aapki baat 100 % sahi hai, ... aur dono stories men samdhan ki chhedkhani hai
An ho skaata hai later on isi kahani men aisi situation ban jaaye to aapke is sujhaav ka main istemaal bhi kar lun, par abhi agli 10-12 posts tak to INCEST ka hi kissa chalega , uske baad dekhingi, main ye kahani jaldi kahtma kar ke banars vaali kahani shuru karna chaati hun, jismen Tantra ka bhi touch hai , ... aur jiske kuch parts maine share bhi kiye the, par aap ka sujhaav sar maathe pe dkehti hun,... ek fellow writer ki baat ka lihaaj rkahna aur aap meri har story pe itta sath deti hai, i have no words to thank you,...Komal ji smadhi samadhan ka bhi majak chalta he yaar kuchh karo. Is topic ka hi koi masti banao. Agar ho sake to???!
Vese to me nahi chahti ki ye story khatam ho. Par agar next story jiske kuchh ans aapne dale vo mene bhi padhe he. Agar vashikaran ko bhi isme istamak karo to maza aa jaega.An ho skaata hai later on isi kahani men aisi situation ban jaaye to aapke is sujhaav ka main istemaal bhi kar lun, par abhi agli 10-12 posts tak to INCEST ka hi kissa chalega , uske baad dekhingi, main ye kahani jaldi kahtma kar ke banars vaali kahani shuru karna chaati hun, jismen Tantra ka bhi touch hai , ... aur jiske kuch parts maine share bhi kiye the, par aap ka sujhaav sar maathe pe dkehti hun,... ek fellow writer ki baat ka lihaaj rkahna aur aap meri har story pe itta sath deti hai, i have no words to thank you,...