Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

जोरू का गुलाम भाग २५६ पृष्ठ १६०७

अब मेरी बारी


अपडेट पोस्टेड, कृपया पढ़ें, लाइक करें और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[Mass]

JHC - Jamesh Headly Cheis,, shayad meri spelling galat h.

JHC - James Hadley Chase - ye correct naam hai...

rajkomal

 

[komaalrani]

Awesome suspense

Thanks so much, in this story and Phagun ke din chaar focus has been shifted to suspense and thriller. No words will be enough to thank you for coming hereand putting your stamp of approval on this story.

 

[Luckyloda]

Thanks so much, in this story and Phagun ke din chaar focus has been shifted to suspense and thriller. No words will be enough to thank you for coming hereand putting your stamp of approval on this story.

Good morning

 

[komaalrani]

Wonderful super suspense update Madam...
The "M" Theme was very good...jab tak maine last line nahi padha, mujhe us par dhyaan bhi nahi aaya ki every name start with M.
and the Food Truck as a surveillance unit..wow..that was super.
Now the story is on a completely different level (compared to what i had read few months back..and some which I couldnt which I hope you can understand).

All the same, lovely update!!
Sone pe Suhaga...i think after you posted this update..the view count crossed 38 L...

Great Going!!

komaalrani

Thanks so much, yes for the number of episodes, the story has moved to corporate espionage. It started with the battle in the share market, bugging and hacking and now it is being fought at a global level. The first part was Bhag 234, named Crisis (page 1410) followed by Share, mutual fund (1426), and now story has moved almost 125 pages following that theme, with very little sex and zero Incest, and more than 6 lakhs readers have read these parts.

As a writer to writer, it is an effort to write in an adult forum, without Incest and still grab some eyeballs and I am happy that you enjoyed it.

 

[komaalrani]

Good morning

Thanks aur koshish karungi ki aaj sach men good morning ho jaaye agali past aaj aa jaaye

 

[komaalrani]

Ek writer me itni khoobi, erotica, incest, romance, Thrill and suspense. Aapki knowledge bhi jabardast h. Yaha Read karne kuch aur aaye the aur maja JHC ke novel ka mil raha h.

Thanks so much will try to carry this forward in the next post and today itself.

 

[komaalrani]

JHC - James Hadley Chase - ye correct naam hai...

rajkomal

Yes aap ekdam sahi hain

 

[komaalrani]

जोरू का गुलाम अगला अपडेटड

२५० वां भाग

होगा तो ये अपडेट भी जासूसी से भरा, एम् का ही लेकिन जासूस जेम्स बांड की तरह भी तो हो सकता है, तो थोड़ा बहुत इरोटिका का तड़का भी

और सबसे बड़ी बात =एक मेगा अपडेट

८ भाग

करीब करीब ९,५०० शब्द ( दो भागों इतना बड़ा ) और वर्ड में २५ पेज

आज ही २५० वां भाग

 

[komaalrani]

JHC - Jamesh Headly Cheis,, shayad meri spelling galat h.

correct
thanks and next part soon

 

[komaalrani]

Next part

जोरू का गुलाम -भाग २५०

एम् -२

मिलिंद नवलकर, मुंतजिर खैराबादी, महेंद्र पांडेय