To all my friends,
It is a request to everybody who comes on the pages of this story,
1. Please follow the rules of forum, no political or religious posts, in case of doubt look at rules,
2. no personal attacks, at every post there is button marked with bell, saying report,... and do ' report' and anytime if you feel, somebody has crossed the line, do use that button, we are all here to enjoy and share pleasure, positive feelings,... so why generate rancor,
3. Umpteen times i have spoken about the genre of this story, light femdom ( although i will prefer SMTR- She makes the rule) and i have quoted a poem showing the spirit of SMTR, in post 85 and let me re post it
Would You Follow Me?
From the time the morning sun opens our eyes
Till darkness falls and cast its sleepy slumber
Would you serve the one who has taken you
And never waiver in your desire and dedication
When faced with all that life can give and take
And the daily grind seems to be too much
Would you look into my eyes as I do yours
And treasure our lasting loving bond
If obstacles are in your path of life
And you can clear or avoid them one by one
Would you crawl on hands and knees
To be closer to the one that is meant for you
Feel the draw of my desire for you my precious
And follow your mind and heart to me.
Would you give all of you there is to share
And let me take what truly belongs to me
Think about the pleasure and pain you ache for
And all you seek and have ever wanted
Would you allow your mind and body
To be released to one who knows how to use them
My desire is not only for your loyalty and service
And to use you as I please in every way
Would you follow me as if we were so close
That I held your beating heart in my hand.
4. so considering all that, story which was put on pause, i am going to restart, you are welcome to share your views, but do consider genre and theme. If somebody is writing a horror or science fiction, certainly treatment of characters will be different than say a romance or thriller so a story has to be seen in the framework of its genre and secondly dont attribute moralistic judgments. one can have views about aesthetics, my writing style, narration, i will accept with all my humility but dont be judgmental about characters , they play a part in narrative to create a particular mood or bhav
so let's begin again. .... and i will repost the last part and continue it will the next few,...
