Erotica जोरू का गुलाम उर्फ़ जे के जी

[komaalrani]

जोरू का गुलाम भाग २३६ - मंगलवार, दिल्ली

अपडेट पोस्टड, पृष्ठ १४३३ फायनेंसियल थ्रिलर का नया मोड़,

कृपया पढ़ें, आंनद लें और कमेंट जरूर करें

 

[komaalrani]

Nath kase utarati h komaal bhabhi,aap ki to utar chuki hogi,kuch tip do ham pathako pathikao ko bhi

kahate the naa

Melody khao khud jaan jaao, bas vahi

 

[komaalrani]

Chhutaki has garnered 3 lakh Views, thanks friends for love.

 

[Hunk1988]

kahate the naa

Melody khao khud jaan jaao, bas vahi

Nice reply,jawab nhi aapka

 

[Rajizexy]

Thanks so much, ... but my story MOHE RANGE DE did cross ONE million views long back and although the story has been closed long back. so if there is any such club to exist, ( one million viewership club ), i had got admittance long back. But to me what matters most is YOUR appreciation, keen desire to consistently support my sagging viewership but let me confess sis,

Your one comment as they come from the heart soaked in affection are worth more than a million view so i am a millionaire of your love and i matter it most.

Double congratulations then didi for becoming multi millionaire. Chalo jese bhi tum aye,aye to sahi sister, tum to aise gayab ho jate ho ekdam se
"Chithi na koi sandesh ,kahan tum chale gye" wale song ki tarah, hame akela chhod kar.

 

[Rajizexy]

Chhutaki has garnered 3 lakh Views, thanks friends for love.

Congratulations sis for getting 3 lakh plus viewership on Chhutki

 

[komaalrani]

Double congratulations then didi for becoming multi millionaire. Chalo jese bhi tum aye,aye to sahi sister, tum to aise gayab ho jate ho ekdam se
"Chithi na koi sandesh ,kahan tum chale gye" wale song ki tarah, hame akela chhod kar.

I told you in the message reply, it was Navratri and i desisted from the posting, It was only worship, Garba and a lot of engagemnets i had posted on my both stories applying for 9 day leave of absence, .... and i came back on Vijaydashmi, posted update in both the stories, but what i missed was GAON ka TOUR in your story which i read today and shared my opinion.

My real joy will be when my fav story, hassen badlva will cross 5 Millions and vie for the top spot in this forum

 

[komaalrani]

Congratulations sis for getting 3 lakh plus viewership on Chhutki

my stories always hanker for you approval, looks with longing eyes at the turn of door when you come to them and hug them with real affection

 

[motaalund]

And what I like about your stories is how you describes the mental as well physical condition of a young girl.And for in my personal opinion writing about first seduction and first touch,first kiss is difficult than writing adultery stories.In most stories the stories are all about Interfaith or adultery affairs without any seduction part.Where as you give much importance to seduction rather than sex.
You beautifully wrote journey of young girl in solvaa savan.I want you to write something different,may be story like mohalla mohbbat wala where you include lot of characters from different age group unlike from your previous stories where story happened between families.

Well said and gauged the caliber of the writer.

 

[motaalund]

thanks so much for reading so deeply. I wish, your tribe may increase.

Every one's taste differ but after reading your stories I too wish more footprints into these story is solicited by each writers/readers/visitors of this forum.

 

[motaalund]

Didi me kaha ki writer hu jo mujhse aap jesi well known ,majhi hui writer ko blessings dene ki baat kar rahi ho, please aise sharminda mat kiya kijiye apni chhoti ko.Aap par haq samjh kar Kai baar suggestion de deti hu.Fir kehti hu, readers writer ki speech se less kamuk hote hai chunki unhone to vahi kaam karna hota hai.Aur writer to unko ghass dalegi nahi,ye vo jante hai isiliye unme feelings nahi aati.Tum kisi na kisi method se apne ek male aur ek female character ka sexy samvad karao (10%space dekar)apni story me,90% me jo tum pehle karti ho vese hi kro.If u succeed in this, manzil will be there in less than a week.Ur younger assures u.Didi ye ek younger ki salah hai tum ko, please isko anaytha mat lena agar tum mujhse ruth gyi tab to mere writer jewan ka end hi ho jayega.

Your continuity and narration is also very good.