Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

[Rahul0087@]

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aap sabhi ke pyar ke sath hamari ye stori bhi aaj samapt hoti hai. Aap sabhi ke sath ke bina ye sambhav nahi ho pata. Aap sabhi ne meri pichhli dono story se jyada pyar ise dikhaya hai jiske liye me tahe dil se sabhi ka shukragujar hu. Or me aasha karta hu ki story ne kahi bhi Aapko nirash nahi kiya hoga. Baki aap sabhi ki isi ummid ko barkrar rakhte hue maine ek perfact end dene ki isko kosis ki hai. I hope ki aap sabhi ko ye end passand aayega. Or future me mouka Mila to iska next part bhi start karunga. Bas aap sabhi ka sath uvhi milta rahe. To kuch bhi impossible nahi rahega.


baki next story ke aane tak sabko alvida. ................

 

[Shahrukh]

Awesome story bhai waiting for next part

 

[Nevil singh]

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Medhavi ki mout dekhkar shukracharya ko behad gussa aane laga tha. Or unhone usi gusse se jal nikala or usper matra jaap karke chhod diya. Or aisa karte hi jo jal baha jameen per gira vo achanak se ek rup lene lag gya. Kisi vishal jeev ka rup. Jo pehle to samaj me nahi aaya lekin jab ban kar ready ho gya tab samaj me aaya. Ye ek dragon tha. Bahut hi vishal or udne wala dragon or muh se jwala nikalne wala bhi. Uski chamdi itni sakht thi ki meri talvar ko tut jayegi lekin iss kharoch tak nahi aayegi.ise shaktiyo se hi harana padega. Isliye meri talvar ko maine divyastra me badla or baha se udd gya.




Shukracharya- jao or servnash kar do uska.



Ye sunte hi dragon ne ek bahut hi bhayankar dahad mari or aone muh se itni bhayankar jwala nikali jisme pressure se me or dur ko udd gya. Maine peeche palat kar dekha to vo bhi ud kar mere pechhe aane laga tha. Isliye maine apni gati badai. To uski raftaar bhi tez hi gyi. Or hogi bhi kyu nahi. Mayabi ho tehra. Vo baar baar mujhper aag ugal raha tha. Or divystra mujhe us aag se theek samay per bacha le raha tha.




Maine peeche dekha to vo mere bahut karib aagya tha or apana muh pura khol kar mujhe nigalne ko kosis kar raha tha. Tabhi maine divyastra ka mukh uski taraf kiya or shakti ka prayog kiya jo seedhe uske khule mukh se uske dill me jake lagi. Or aisa hote hi Uska dill ka dhadakna kuch der ke liye ruk gya. Or vo jhatpatata hue neeche girne laga. Or isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar maine ruka or divyastra ko ek aisi talvar me badalne ko kaha jo aasani se iski chamdi ko cheer sake.




Mera aisa kehte hi divyastra baisi hi talvar me badal gya. Or me use leke neeche ki taraf tezi se jane laga. Ham kafi unchai per the isliye neeche jane me hame waqt lag raha tha. Dragon abhi bhi jhatpata raha tha. Isi mouke ka fayeda utha kar me tezi se uske bagal me gya. Or talval uske pet me ghusa di. Or bahi per ruk gya. Mere rukne se talvar bhi ruk gyi. Lekin dragon tezi se neeche hi ja raha tha. Or aise hi meri talvar use neeche se uper cheerti Hui nikal gyi. Or dragon ka kaam tamam hogya. Or me is baat ki kushi mana hi raha tha ki peeche se mere uper hamla hua or me tezi se udta hua thoda dur ja pahuncha or par kate pakshi ki tarah neeche gir gya. Jo ek khali maidan tha. Mere girte hi. Baha per charo taraf gehra gadda ban gya.





Me thodi der ke liye ek dum sunn ho gya. Mujhe kuch samaj me nahi aaya ki kya hua or kaise hua.



Or achanak se me hila. Jaise me ekdum neend se jaag gya hu. Or jaagne ke baad maine aaju baju dekha to me ek gadde me pada tha. Halat kharab ho gyi thi. Maine karbat badli or hatho ka prayog karke apne ghutno per aaya or baju me pade divystra ko utha liya. Tabhi mere kano me kuch aawaj padi. Jo kadmo ki thi bahut sare kadmo ki. Puri jameen hil rahi thi. Unke kadmo se. Bhayankar kampann utpann ho raha tha. Or ye aawaje mere right side se aarahi thi. Isliye maine us taraf mundi ko ghuma kar dekha. To me hairan reh gya. Mere samne karib 1 lakh se bhi jyada asur chale aarahe the. Kuch bahut hi bhadde the. Or kuch bahut hi bekaar. Dekhkar mujhe to ulti hone lagi thi. Or un sabke aage chal raha tha medhavi. Jise maine abhi kuch der pehle hi maar diya tha. Ek pal ko to mujhe Yakeen hi nahi hua ki ye jinda kaise ho gya. Fir mujhe yaad aaya ki mrit sanjeevni vidya.




Shukracharya ke pass ye vidya thi or vo kisi ko bhi jeevit kar sakte the. Jiska sarir sahi salamat bacha hai.





Ye yaad aate hi maine apna matha peet liya. Or socha iska ant kabhi hoga bhi ya nahi. Me soch raha tha or vo mere karib aate ja rahe the. Tabhi maine socha ki ye sab chhodo or khade ho. Inka mukabla karo. Inka ant ab alag tarike se karna padega. Jaise abhi tak karte aaya hu.




Ye sochkar me fir se khada hua or gadde se bahar nikla.



Me akela or mere samne lakho ki bheed. Soch hi sakte ho iska kya parinaam hone wala tha.





Tabhi mere peeche se aawaj aai.




Madad chahiye.




Ye aawaj sunke mere chehre per hasi aagyi. Kyuki ye aawaj Renu ki thi. Or me sure tha ki uske sathi baki sabhi bhi yaha aai hongi. Isliye me peeche muda jaha vo charo apne asli avtar me khadi hui thi hatho me hathiyar liye.





Prachi- tumhari halat to bakai me kharab ho gyi hai.




Main- ha mamla thoda hath se nikal gya tha. Verna Maine sab sambhal liya tha.




Aalia- vo to dikh hi raha hai. Ab ye batao ki hame bina sath liye tum yaha akele kyu aaye.





Main- filhaal ye matter chhod de to kaisa rahega. Kyuki samne bahut hi badi samasya hai.





Surbhi- isko baad me dekh lenge. Aalia. Don't worry pura hissab lenge ham.





Tabhi mujhe samne se medhavi ki aawaj aai.




Medhavi- abhi bhi mouka hai haar manlo or hame vo astra de do.




Main- ye sawal tab puchhna tha jab maine tujhe do hisso me baat diya tha abhi kuch der pehle.




Medhavi- dhoke se.





Prachi- kya ise maar diya tha tumne. Fir ye jinda kaise hua.




Main- sanjeevni vidya se kar diya hoga shukracharya ne.or samaj ko kisi ka bhi sarir salamat mat chhodna.




Renu- ok captain.



Main- bakwas band karo.



Vo charo mere bagal me aagyi.



Main- medhavi me tumhe ek aakhiri mouka deta hu. Chale jao apni sena ko leke. Verna iske baad jo anjaam hoga uske jimmedar tum khud hoge.





Medhavi- me tayyar hu anjaam bhugatne ko. Kya tum ho.




Main- hamesha se.




Ye kehke medhavi ne apni sena ko hamla karne ka aadesh de diya or vo sabhi jaanvar chillate hue hamari taraf badne lagi. Or yaha hamne bhi unki taraf Doud laga di.



Or jaise hi ham karib pahuche ham sabhi ek sath uchhal gye. Or dhadam se unki sena ke beech gire or hamari shaktiyo ka beg itna jyada tha ki aas pass ke asur to usi beg se udd gye. Tabhi Prachi ne Bayu ka bawandar banaya bahut hi tez. Or renu to apni talvar jisko bhi laga rahi thi vo usi samay rakh me badalta ja raha tha. Bahi aalia bhi apni chhadi ki shaktiyo ka bakhubi istemal kar rahi thi. Or surbhi apni talvar se barf nikaal kar jama rahi thi sabhi ko. Or aalia un jame hue logo ke tukde kar rahi thi. Prachi ka bawandar asuro ko apni chapet me lene laga tha. Tabhi maine divyastra ka istemaal karke us bawandar me bhayankar bijli utpann kar di. Or ab vo bawandar sabhi ko bhasm karta ja raha tha.



Bahi me apni shaktiyo ka kam or apne hatho ka istemaal jyada kar raha tha. Divyastra ko talvar me badal kar.


Tabhi medhavi me kuch kiya jisse vo bawandar turant hi band ho gya lekin usme se keval rakh hi nikli.uski sena ki.


Or isi gusse se vo meri taraf bada or me uski taraf.



Or vo uchhal gya or me bhi or hamari shaktiya hawa me takra gyi. Or aisa hote hi hawa me bhayankar beg utpann ho gya.



Medhavi- tera ant me karke hi rahunga.




Main- lekin aaj nahi.



Ye kehke maine apne hatho se aag nikalna suru kiya or maine jaha uska hath pakda hua tha baha use jalan hone lagi.



Medhavi- ye chal achhi hai lekin kaam ki nahi hai.



Main- to fir ye kaise hai.



Ye kehke maine hath ko thanda kar diya or jaha use pakda hua tha. Baha se use me barf me jamane laga. Barf kafi tezi se uske sarir per Chad gyi or vo bahi jam gya. Or uske jamte hi maine use neeche chhod diya. Or vo tezi se neeche girne laga. Mujhe laga girte hi ye tut jayega. Lekin sala girne se ek sec. Pehle hi pata nahi kaise uske sarir per jami barf pighal gyi. Or vi sahi salamat neeche gira. Ye dekhkar me tezi se neeche gya. Apni talvar ko seedha karke. Jo seedhe uske seene me dhasne wali thi. Lekin sala fir bach gya. Baju hat gya. Lekin ye dotarfa hamla tha. Jameen per talvaar lagte hi. Takvar se bhayankar bijli nikli like bahut hi bhayankar. Or charo taraf fail gyi. Medhavi ne khud ko kaise bachaya pata nahi. Lekin baki jitne bhi asur uski chapet me aaye vo nahi bacha paye khud ko Or jal kar rakh ho gye.





Ye dekhkar medhavi ka gussa bad gya. Or usne apna aakaar bada kar liya. Itna ki mujhe aasani se kuchal sake. Ye dekhkar ham sabki aankhe fati ki fati reh gyi.




Aalia- ye kya karne ko soch raha hai.




Main- sayad hame kuchalne ki.baise ye hamare kiye mouka hai.




Renu- me samaj gyi.



Ye kehke Renu speed se uski taraf badi or jor se talvaar uske pair me ghusa di. Tabhi main or Prachi udte hue gye or ek ek punch uske thobde per jad diya. Jisse vo neeche girne laga. Vo bhi usi ki sena per.




Main- hoshiyar hai per hai to bacha hi.




Surbhi- sahi kaha. Lekin yaha isi sena bache nahi hai. Ye khatm hone ka naam hi nahi le rahe hai.




Renu- dev kuch bada try karna chahiye. Taki ye sab jaldi khatm ho sake. Kyuki ham aise hi mahino tak lage rahenge tab bhi ye aise hi ladte rahenge.





Main- baise me bhi kuch aisa hi soch raha tha. Ek kaam karo tum sabhi mere peechhe aajao. Jara inko apni asli takat ka namuna dikhate hai.





Prachi- badiya hai.




Ye kehke sabhi mere peeche aagyi. Or maine apni aankho ko band kiy apne hatho ko joda or man me apne mantra ka jaap Kiya. Or aisa karte hi thirdeye khul gyi. Or ab samay tha inko batane ka ki meri takat ye divyastra se nahi hai.





Maine thirdeye se sabhi ko dekha lagbhag 50000 asuro ko jo is waqt baha ladai karne hamari taraf hi bad rahe the.


Aisa samajhiye ki me ek sath sabhi ko nishana bana raha tha. Ek hi baar me sari sena ko khatm karne ka plan. Or jaise hi sabhi per nishan lag gye. Maine apni aankh se bhayankar jwala nikali. Or jwala nikalte hi. Use matra kuch sec. Lage honge or hamare samne moujud sare asur pal bhar me rakh me badal gye.vo bhi ek sath.


Surbhi- agli baar isi se shuruwat karna. Khamakha itni energy waste karwa di.



Main- ha kyu nahi.

Or isi ke sath medhavi ki sari sena ka ant ho gya. Or ye seen dekhkar medhavi ki to halat hi kharab ho gyi use samaj me nahi aaya ki akhir ye konsi shakti hai. Kyuki ye thirdeye har kisi ko nahi dikhti hai. Medhavi ko jara bhi andaja nahi tha ki abhi yaha per kya hua. Use to bas itna pata tha ki meri shaktiyo ne ek hi baar me uski sena ka ant kar diya. Par kaise kiya iska pata keval shukracharya ko laga hoga baki kisi ko nahi.







Aisa karne ke baad maine apni aankho ko bapis se khol liya. Or samne ka najara bakai kafi darane wala tha. Dusro ko.



Or fir me medhavi ke pass gya.




Main- ab bhi ladna chahte ho.




Medhavi- ye kaise kiya tumne.




Main- bahut kuch hai jo tum abhi nahi jante ho. Or janne ki jarurat bhi nahi hai. Tum ek achhe insan ban sakte ho. Agar banna chahte ho to. Tumhare pass abhi samay hai.




Medhavi- me ye achhe se janta hu. Lekin me aisa nahi kar sakta. Is janm me to bilkul nahi.



Ye kehke usne talvar mere pair me ghusa di. Jisse mujhe bakai me dard hua.




Or ye sab dekhkar um charo ko gussa aagya. Or vo charo ek sath medhavi per tut padi. Vo pehle se thoda ghayal tha. Uske pair me chot lagi thi. Mere kai prahar usne sehan kare the. Lekin vo itna kamjor nahi tha ki itni jaldi haar maan jaye. Par
Mere samne Jo ho raha tha use bhi jhutlaya nahi ja sakta tha. Kyuki vo kisi bhi hamle ko rok nahi raha tha. Bas apne uper hone de raha tha. Or isi beeche Prachi ne uski garden ko uda diya Renu ne usi samay uske sarir me aag laga di or bas uska kaam ho gya.


Abki baar sachme ho gya iska kaam tamam.





Ab keval shukracharya bache hue the. Baki koi nahi kam se kam mujhe to yahi lag raha hai. Shaktiya kamjor hone ke bawajud kisi ne mujhe abhi tak marne ka prayas nahi kiya tha. Matlab ki aisi shakti ka prayog jisse bakai meri mout ho sake. Ye baat mujhe kuch ajeeb se lag rahi thi. Ye sena leke aana yudh karna. Ye sab alag baat hai lekin pran ghatak hamla abhi tak nahi hua tha mujhper. Isliye mujhe kuch doubt sa ho raha tha ki ye sab akhir kyu ho raha hai………….













To be countinue………………….

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aap sabhi ke pyar ke sath hamari ye stori bhi aaj samapt hoti hai. Aap sabhi ke sath ke bina ye sambhav nahi ho pata. Aap sabhi ne meri pichhli dono story se jyada pyar ise dikhaya hai jiske liye me tahe dil se sabhi ka shukragujar hu. Or me aasha karta hu ki story ne kahi bhi Aapko nirash nahi kiya hoga. Baki aap sabhi ki isi ummid ko barkrar rakhte hue maine ek perfact end dene ki isko kosis ki hai. I hope ki aap sabhi ko ye end passand aayega. Or future me mouka Mila to iska next part bhi start karunga. Bas aap sabhi ka sath uvhi milta rahe. To kuch bhi impossible nahi rahega.


baki next story ke aane tak sabko alvida. ................

Intezarrrrr rahega us din ka...

 

[Vickey1211]

So all my readers....




aap sabhi ke pyar ke sath hamari ye stori bhi aaj samapt hoti hai. Aap sabhi ke sath ke bina ye sambhav nahi ho pata. Aap sabhi ne meri pichhli dono story se jyada pyar ise dikhaya hai jiske liye me tahe dil se sabhi ka shukragujar hu. Or me aasha karta hu ki story ne kahi bhi Aapko nirash nahi kiya hoga. Baki aap sabhi ki isi ummid ko barkrar rakhte hue maine ek perfact end dene ki isko kosis ki hai. I hope ki aap sabhi ko ye end passand aayega. Or future me mouka Mila to iska next part bhi start karunga. Bas aap sabhi ka sath uvhi milta rahe. To kuch bhi impossible nahi rahega.


baki next story ke aane tak sabko alvida. ................

Maza aa gya bhai story padh k
Wakai m shaandar story h

 

[Anshu0Kraj]

Next part kab start hoga

 

[Raja thakur]

Awesome updates

 

[Vk248517]

Rahul bahi mazza aagya ending pdh k.

Bhai agli story jo aap start kijiyega wo SURYA KA KIJIYE .
SURYA K AGLE PART ka besbri se intezar me hai.