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Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

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Me yahi soch raha tha ki Prachi ne mujhe toka.




Prachi- kya hua kya soch me dub gye.




Main- yaar sochne ki baat hai. Abhi tak kisi bhi asur ne is prakar ka hamla nahi kiya mujhper jisse bakai meri jaan per ban aaye. Jabki ye baat jante hue bhi ki yaha meri jaan ja sakti hai. Sochne wali baat hai na. Ye sena ye sabki jarurat hi nahi padti.





Ye sunkar sabhi ke dimaag ki ghanti baji.



Prachi- achha hi hua na ki unhone aisa hamla nahi kiya or ham unhe parast karne me safal rahe.




Main- ye baat bhi theek hai lekin sochne wali Baat hai. Kahi koi or khichdi to nahi Pak rahi hai andar




Maine ye kaha hi tha ki pata nahi kya hua achanak se hamare charo taraf ek ghera sa ban gya. Jaise koi kavach. Or ham abhi soch hi rahe the ki ye kya hai tabhi shukracharya ki aawaj aai.




Shukracharya- bahut khub achha dimaag ladaya lekin afsos ki thodi der ho gyi ye samajhne me. Abhi tak hamne tumper kisi bhi ghatak shakti ka prayog is liye nahi kiya kyuki ye tumhare sathi tumhare sath nahi the. Ye seniko ko bhejna to bas ik chara tha in sabhi ko yaha bulane ka. Or dekho sabhi aagye yaha per. Or maine aisa isliye Kiya kyuki tum sabki shaktiya judi hui hai. Or tum yaha the lekin tumhare sathi nahi. Isliye meri shaktiyo ka asar tumper jyada nahi ho raha tha. Kyuki ye charo ek santulit vatavarn me upasthit thi. Or ab ye yaha aachuki hai jaha tum sabki shaktiya kamjor ho gyi hai. Isliye mere har prahaar ka tum sabhi per asar padega. Agar me yaha dev ko hani bhi pahuchata tab bhi ye aasani se bach nikalta. Kyuki tum charo ki shaktiya iski raksha kar deti. Lekin ab jab sab sath me ho to sabhi ko ek sath khatm karunga me.kyuki tum charo iski takat bhi ho or kamjori bhi.





Main- bahut khub lekin ab bacha kon hai. Ye shakti ka prayog kiske liye karoge. Tumhara raja tumhari sena sabhi to samapt ho chuke hai.





Shukracharya- ho jane do. Is astra se me sabhi ko punah jeevit kar lunga. Bas fir dekhna tum asuro ka qehar.





Main- aap abhi tak nahi sudhre. Jab shiv ji ne aapko nigal liya tha tab aapka hriday parivartit ho gya tha. Lekin kehte hai na. Ki bura insan chahe kitna hi Kyu na sudhar jaye. Burai ek na ek din use bapis apni taraf kheech hi leti hai.





Shukracharya- tumhe jo samaj na hai samaj lo.



Ye kehkar unhone mantra fook kar hamare uper chhod diya. Or aisa karte hi kuch bahut hi ghatak kala dhua us chakra me fail gya. Or chakra puri tarah se band ho gya. Is dhue me ham saas bhi nahi le pa rahe the.




Shukracharya- jante ho ye kya hai. Ye kaalkut se bhi jyada ghatak zehar hai. Jise maine khud banaya hai. Or iska parikshan bhi kiya hai. Me janta hu tumhare andar kaalkut hai. Lekin kaalkut is zehar ko katega nahi. Balki isme milke or zehreela ho jayega or jo pran tumhare bach gye the ab nahi bachenge. Or agar kisi tarah tum bach bhi gaye. Tab bhi tumhare ye sathi nahi bachenge.





Ye sunte hi mere kaam khade ho gye. Maine un charo ko dekha to vo lagbhag behsoh hone ki kagaar per hi thi. Or ye sab dekhkar mujhe lagne laga ki aaj ham sabhi ka antim samay aa hi gya hai. Me inhe kaise bacha paunga. Mom mami dadu or mama ko bhi nahi bacha paya me to. Tabhi mujhe divystra ka khayal aaya Maine socha ek baar try karke dekhta hi sayad kaam ban jaye.





Maine divyastra ko in charo ki raksha karne ko kaha. Inhe jeevit rakhne ko kaha.



Mere aisa kehte hi divyastra se ek roshni nikali or ek ek karke in charo ke sarir me sama gyi. Or fir vo baha kya karne lagi pata nahi. Lekin thodi hi der me vo roshni bilkul kali hole bahar nikal gyi. Halaki ham kavach me the iiye vo roshni bhi kavach me hi reh gyi. Uske baad maine khud ko bachane ko kaha. To divyastra ne fir se bahi kiya or roshni mere andar sama gyi. Or sayad vo sare zehar ko apne andar leke bahar nikaal rahi thi. Or unhi ke jaise mere andar se bhi vo roshni thodi hi der me bilkul kali hoke bahar nikal gyi.




Vo charo filhaal behosh hi thi. Lekin unki sase chal rahi thi. Jo achhi baat thi mere liye. Me bhi ek dum se dheela sa pad gya tha.




Shukracharya- kamal kar diya. Dekha ye hai divyastra ki asli takat. Ye sab dekhkar meri ikchha or bad gyi hai ise pane ki. Or ab sambhalo mere is baar ko.



Unhone fir se koi mantra pad ke us kavach me chhod diya. Or aisa karte hi.kavach le charo taraf se bhayankar bijli ke jhatke lagne lage.ham sabhi ko. Or isi jhatke ko bajah se roshni ne jo zehar hamare sarir se bahar nikala tha. Vo fir se aazad ho gya. Divyastra ki shaktiya kamjor hone ke kaaran. Or fir se vo hamare sarir me jane laga.



Maine socha aisa kaam nahi banega mujhe kuch or try karna hoga.


Yahi sochkar me bahi baith gya. Apni aankho ko band kiya or mantra ka jaap karne laga. Jaise hi thirdeye khuli Maine seedha prahaar Kiya unke kavach per. Meri sari shaktiya unke kavach se takra rahi thi jis bajah se unka kavach kamjor padne laga tha or vo khulne laga tha. Jaise kavach khula. Maine apni shakti ka prayog seedha is zehar per Kiya. Or ek chhote se hisse per prahar hote hi pura zehar uski madad karne ke liye ek sath aagya. Jaise ye jeevit ho or sab samajh raha hai. Zehar meri shaktiyo se ladne ki puri kosis kar raha tha. Lekin nakaam raha or bahi per uska bhi ant ho gya.




Ye sab dekhkar shukracharya ka dimaag fir gya. Unhe samaj me nahi aaya ki ab vo or kya prayog kare.



Me unhi ko dekh raha tha.



To unhone bhi apni anakho ko band kiya or pata nahi kya karne lage. Tabhi achanak se charo taraf se kaali shaktiya udd udd kar unke samne aane lagi vo bhi ekatha hone lagi. Sari shaktiya milkar ek jut hokar hamla karne ka plan tha shukracharya ka.




Jo pura bhi nahi hone diya maine. Or fir se thirdeye se hamla kiya unke us Kaali shakti ke ghere per. Or aisa hote hi vo shaktiya chillane lagi. Vo nark ki us aag me jalne lagi. Jiski kalpana bhi koi nahi karna chahta. Jitni bhi shaktiya baha aati ja rahi thi. Sabhi ko ye peeda hona start ho gya tha. Sayad shukracharya ko iska pata nahi chala or vo sari shaktiyo ko ikathha karne me lage hue the. Or yaha kaala dhua badta hi ja raha tha. Meri shaktiya unhe jalane ki kosis kar rahi thi. Lekin jaise jaise or shaktiya unke sath jud rahi thi. Meri shaktiyo ka asar unper kam hone laga tha. Fir bhi maine shakti ka prahaar jari rakha. Or dusre hath me divyastra ko uthaya or usko bhi bhayankar shakti prahaar karne ko kaha us kaale dhue per. Or maine use unki taraf kar diya. Divyastra ne bhi apni shaktiyo se usper prahaar karna suru kar diya.







Thodi der tak fir vo kamjor padne lagi. Lekin hairani ki baat thi Inka ant nahi ho raha tha. Meri dono shaktiya milkar bhi unko kam nahi kar pa rahi thi. Unki shaktiya badti hi ja rahi thi. Mere force me koi kami nahi thi lekin baha ka force out of control hota ja raha tha. Tabhi achanak se mere mathe per char hatheli rakha gyi. Jo kisi or ki un charo ki thi. Or aisa karte hi unki shaktiya bhi meri shaktiyo se mil gyi. Or ab pure force se ek baar fir hamla shuru hua. Or fir se vo kamjor padne lagi. Lekin again unka ant nahi ho raha tha. Me to ye dekhkar hairan tha ki aisi or kitni shaktiya hai jo khatm hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi hai. Sayad anginat.





Ham sabko shaktiya milkar bhi unko jara si chot nahi pahucha pa rahi thi. Jo bakai me chinta ka vishay tha.



Isliye maine filhaal shaktiyo ka istemaal karna band kar diya.



Renu- ye akhir konsi shakti hai jo khatm hi nahi ho rahi hai.





Main- ye vo burai hai jo har kisi ke andar kahi na kahi nibaas karti hi hai. Chahe vo kitna hi sajjan kyu na ho. Lekin ye burai uske andar bhi rehti hi hai. Kisi na kisi rup me. Jaise lalach jalan, hawas, etc. Shukracharya isi ko ek sath kar rahe hai. Or isi liye shaktiyo ka jyad asr in per nahi ho raha hai. Kyuki ye amar hai. Hamesha jeevit rehti hi hai. Inko keval bhagaya ja sakta hai. Vo bhi achhai se.





Aalia- ye kaise hoga.




Main- sabhi ek dusre ka hath pakad lo or ghera bana kar baith jao. Or mere sath dhyan lagao or gurudev ke dwara diye gye mantra ka puri bhakti se jaap karo.





Renu- isse kaam banega.




Main- viswas rakho. Sab kuch bhul jao. Khud ko bhi. Bas mantra ko yaad rakho or mahadev ke aakar ko. Baki sab bhula do.




Aisa kehke ham sabhi ne apni aankhe band kar li. Or mahadev ka naam lekar mantra ka uchharan suru kar diya hamne. Vo bhi jor jor se. Taki aathon dishao me is mantra ki gunj fail jaye. Ham sabhi coras me uchharan kar rahe the. Man me mahadev ka murti virajman thi. Or bahar unke naam ka mantra.


OM NAMAH SIVAAY………





ab hua ye ki ye mantra ki gunj charo taraf failne lagi. Or jab shukracharya ke kanon me baar inki gunj sunai di to unka dhyan tut gya. Or unhone dekha ki dev and parti hi mantra ka uchharan kar rahi hai. Or unke uchharan se unke uper hi ek safed roshni failti ja rahi hai. Or is roshni ko dekhte hi vo kala dhuan peeche hatne laga. Jaise dar kar sher ka sikaar peeche ko hota hai. sher ke badte har kadam ke sath.


Baise hi ye dhua bhi peeche ko hone laga. Or shukracharya ne ye dekhkar fir se dhayn lagane ki kosis ki lekin ab vo safal hi nahi ho pa rahe the. Isliye unhone in pancho ka dhyan todne ka faisla kiya or inke uper ek ke baad ek kai mantro ka jaap karke chhoda lekin kisi ka koi bhi asar nahi hai. Vo safed roshni unke har war ko nakam kar rahi thi. Jo haalat kuch der pehle dev ki thi. Ki unki shaktiya kaale dhue per asar nahi kar rahi thi. Baise hi halat ab shukracharya ki thi. Unka har war nakam ho raha tha. Roshni unhe hamare karib bhi nahi aane de rahi thi.




Or aise hi dekhte hi dekhte vo safed roshni us kaale dhue ko nigal gyi. Or baha per ab uska jara sa bhi ans na bacha. Or iske sath ek or achhi ghatna ye hui ki. Safed roshni ke padne se. Pataallok ka mahol ek dum se badal gya tha. Jaha pehle manhusiyat ki badbu aati thi charo taraf se. Bahi ab ek ummid ki nai kiran najar aane lagi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jaise is roshni ne yaha ki sari manhusiyat ka nash kar diya ho. Or ye dekhkar shukracharya ke dimaag ne kaam karna band kar diya. Unhe abhi bhi samaj nahi aaraha tha ki ise kaise roka jaye.





Tabhi unke dimaag ki batti jali or unhone apna rup badal liya. Or vo ban gye bhagwan persuram.




Puri tarah se. Inke pass ye kala bhi. Jisse ye kisi ka bhi rup le sakte the.



Guru persuram banne ke baad inhone jor se aawaj lagai


VATS AANKHE KHOLO.




ye aawaj mere kano se takrai. Or me ise pehchan gya vo bhi achhe se. Kam se kam mujhe to yahi lagta tha. Or bakio ko bhi.




Ye aawaj sunkar ham sabhi ne mantra ka ucharan band kar diya or apni aankho ko khol liya. To hamare samne gurudev khade hue the.



Ham sabhi ne unhe pranam Kiya.




Main- aap yaha gurudev. Or shukracharya kaha gye.




Gurudev- vats ye yudh samapt ho chuka hai. Or vo haar maan kar yaha se chale gye hai. Isiliye mujhe yaha ana pada tumhe badhai dene ke liye.





Main- ye sab to aapke aasirbaad se hi sambhav hua hai gurudev. Aapki hi di hui siksha hamare kaam aai hai.




Gurudev- me janta hu vats. Isiliye me tum sabhi ko ek ek tohfa dena chahta hu. Kyuki me bahut kush hu tum sabke koushal se.





Main- kya gurudev.




Gurudev- abhi batata hu.




Ye kehke unhone apna hath aage kiya or kuch karne lage. Or thodi hi der me unke hatho me koi astra jaisa kuch aagya. Jiska prabhav bahut hi tez tha. Aate charo taraf ka mahol badal sa gya tha.



Or tabhi mere man se aawaj aai.




Gurudev- vats vo me nahi hu. Balki ek chhal hai shukracharya ka. Bacho usse jaldi. Vo tum sabhi per brahmastra ka prayog karne ja rahe hai.




Ye sunte hi. Meri aankhe Chad gyi. Or mujhe khud per itni hairani Hui ki me samaj kyu nahi paya. Or maine bina koi samay gabaye divyastra ko hatho me le liya. Lekin bahut der ho gyi. Or unhone brahmastra ko hamper chhod diya. Aisa hote hi maine sabhi ko kaha ki apne hatho ko jod kar ise pranaam karo jaldi. Aone astra tyag do.

Maine to aisa turant hi kar liya. Lekin vo charo kuch samaj hi nahi pai. Or agle hi pal un per brahmastra ka bhayankar prahaar ho gya. Or pal bhar me hi un charo ke pran nikal gye. Or baha per ek visfot jaisa bhi hua jiske prabhav se me udta hua dur ja gira.




Vahi brahmastra apana karya karke bapis chala gya. Or baha per chhod gya un charo ki lasho ko. Jo puri Kaali pad gyi thi. Inke sarir nahi bhasm hue kyuki inke pass divyastra ki shaktiya moujud thi. Baki Jo sabse main cheez hoti hai vo jarur chali gyi thi. In sabhi ke pran.





Is dhamake me mere kaan ek dum se sunn ho gye the. Mujhe kuch bhi samaj me nahi aaraha tha ki kya hua abhi. Jo bhi hua kya vo satya tha. Ya koi sapna.




Tabhi shukracharya apne asli rup me aagye or meri taraf badne lage.


Mere hatho me divyastra nahi tha. Or mujhe uski jarurat thi jaise hi maine ye smaran Kiya vo turant hi mere hatho me aagya. Or me hilta dulta apne ghutno per baith gya. Mere samne shukracharya aachuke the.





Shukracharya- ab kya karoge tum vats. Tumhare sathi ab mare gaye hai or tumhari shaktiya pehle se bhi or kamjor ho gyi hai. Abhi bhi samay hai mujhe ye sop do. Ya fir apni mrityu ko swikaar karo. Uske baad bhi ye hoga to mera hi.





Main- aapne Mera sab kuch cheen liya mujhse. Or ab meri bari hai.


Ye kehke maine ek jordaar prahar Kiya divyastra se un per. Or vo uske prahar se thode dur ja gire.



Or maine apne dono hatho ko joda or bolna suru kiya.




Main- aap ek brahmin hai guru hai isliye me aapki hatya nahi karunga. Kyuki mujhe mere sir per aisa kalank nahi chahiye hai. Lekin aapko saza jarur dunga. Aapne jis shakti ko prapt karne ke liye ye sab Kiya hai. Ab vo aapki kabhi nahi ho payegi. Janna chahte hai kaise. To dekhiye.




Maine apni aankho ko band kiya or divyastra se baat karna shuru kiya.




Main- hey divyastra hey punchmahabhuto ke prateek. Unki sari shaktiyo ko aone andar samane wale hey pavitra divystra. Is samay me aapka swami hu or us hisaab se aapko mere har aadesh ka palan karna hi hoga. Or me aapko aadesh deta hu. Ki apne aap ko hamesha ke liye is brahmand me vileen kar leejiye sari shaktiyo ke sath. Or fir kabhi bhi jaagrit mat hoiyega. Chahe koi bhi aapka smaran kare. Kabhi bhi kisi ke bhi samne mat aaiyega. Aapane aap ko vibhajit kar leejiye. Or vileen ho jaiye is brahmand me.





Bahi ye sunke shukracharya ko aisa jhatka laga jiski kalpana bhi unhone nahi ki hogi. Or vo hor se nahi chilla uthe. Or khade hoke divyastra ki taraf doudne lage. Tabhi Divyastra me itna bhayankar visfot hua ki sara patalok usse kamp gya. Or me or shukracharya us dhamake se or dur Jake gire. Meri halat to baise hi kharab thi. Is dhamake ke baad or jyada kharab ho gyi. Bahi shukracharya bhi kuch der ke liye ek dum sunn ho gye.



Or divystra is dhamake se pancho anso me bat gya or dekhte hi dekhte baha se gayab ho gya. Or apne sath apni shaktiya bhi le gya Jo mere andar thi or un charo ke sarir me thi.



Or yaha divyastra ka ant ho gya. Or yahi vo plan tha jo dev sabse ant me karne wala tha jab sab uske hatho se nikal jane wala tha. Ha agar aisa kuch nahi hota to divyastra bhi salamat rehta.




Bahi shukracharya is jhatke ko sambhal hi nahi paye. Or dev ko kosne lage ki ye kya kar diya usne. Unke liye vo kahabat sahi ho gyi thi hath ko aaya parantu muh na laga.



Or is baat se jo gussa aaraha tha use nikalna bhi jaruri tha. Isliye vo khade hue or apne hatho me ek talvar le li. Or dev ki taraf bad gye. Bahi dev behosh ho chuka tha. Uska sarir ab pehle se bahut kamjor ho gya. In shaktiyo se jo sarir bajr ke saman tha ab vo ek aam insan ke sharir me badal gya tha. Shukracharya dev ke karib pahunche or talvar ko hawa me uthaya or jaise hi hamla kiya tabhi dev or un charo ke sarir baha se gayab ho gye. Or ye dekhkar shukracharya fir se apna matha pakad kar baith gye. Unke hath se ye mouka bhi chala gya. Or ab unke hath kuch nahi tha. Itna sab khone ke baad bhi. Unhone itne balidaan diye us astra ko prapt karne ke liye. Lekin un sabhi ke balidan bekar chale gye. Or divystra bhi hath nahi laga. Ye vo dard tha jo is samay keval shukracharya hi mehsus kar pa rahe the.



Isme dev ki jeet bhi hui or haar bhi. Usne divyastra ko galat hatho me nahi padne diya. Isse uski jeet hui. Lekin vo apno ko nahi bacha saka or is prakar uski haar hui.


Bahi shukracharya ke hatho me keval haar hi lagi. Unhone har tarah ke sadyantra rache lekin unka koi bhi sadyantra unhe divyastra nahi dila saka. Jis bajah se unka maansik aaghat pahucha tha. Or is aaghat ke sath vo jeevit hi nahi rehna chahte the. Isiliye unhone usi samay yogagni se khud ke pran le liye. Or ab unki rakh baha per padi hui thi. Jise hawa apne sath uda le ja rahi thi.

Baki


Ab dekhte hai ki kya hota hai…..dev or baki sabhi kaha gayab hue hai. Or is atra ke samapt hona per koi dusparinaam to nahi nikalte hai.












To be countinue………………….














Shabdkala ki ek aur sunder jhanki parstut ki hai mitr ne. Avaranniye!
 

Nevil singh

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Shukracharya or unke asuro kaam ho gya tha. Halaki sare asur samapt nahi hue the. Parantu shukracharya ke jane ke baad unhone apni haar swikaar kar li thi. Or patallok ka vatavarn bhi in pancho ki shaktiyo se badal gya tha. Jis bajah se jo burai baha nivaas karti thi vo ab kam ho gyi thi.





And dev or uska pariwar is waqt gehri neend me so rahe the. Sirf dev hi jeevit tha. Lekin vo koma me tha. Or vo koma se uthna hi nahi chahta tha.gurudev ne tamam kosis karke dekh li lekin dev hai ki uthne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.






Bahi man me dev ki aatma bahut takleef me thi. Uske sab apne ja chuke the. Jis bajah se vo brih ki peeda se gujar raha tha. Tabhi uski antaraatma me swayam mahadev ne use darshan diye. Jinhe dekhkar dev ne unhe pranaam kiya.




Mahadev- putra mujhe tumper bahut garv ho raha hai. Tumne jo karya kiya hai vo bakai me sadharan nahi hai.
Me bahut prasann hu tumse. Parantu tum jaag kyu nahi rahe ho.







Main- mahadev aap to jante hi hai. Bhale hi me apne karya me safal raha hu. Parantu me apna sab kuch kho chuka hu.or aise akele mujhe nahi jeena hai. Isliye me vinti karta hu Aapse ki mere prano ko har leejiye.






Mahadev- putra tumhare pariwar ka antim samay yahi tha. Unki kismat me jo likha tha vo hua. Parantu tum aise haar nahi maan sakte tumhe jeena hoga putra





Main- mahadev mujhe itni badi saja mat deejiye. Me nahi jee paunga. Kam se kam aise to bilkul nahi. Mera pariwar hi meri pehchan hai. Unke moh se me bimukh nahi ho sakta. Mujhe unki jarurat hai.






Mahadev- me samjhta hu putra tumhari manodasha.




Main- kya un sabhi ko bapis lane ka koi marg nahi hai. Me har sambhav chounotiyo ko paar kar jaunga. Bas aap unhen Jeevan daan de dijiye. Chahiye to mere pran le lijiye. Parantu un sabhi ko jeevan de dijiye prabhu.






Ye sunkar mahadev soch me pad gye. Vo aisa kar sakte the. Parantu isse prakriti ke chakra me badlav ho jayega ye baat bhi vo achhe se jante the. Filhal jo hua hai vo badal sakta tha. Parantu ek satya ye bhi tha ki vo ye sab swayam hi karna chahte the. Arnav unhi ka ans tha or vo usi ko itne dukh me nahi dekh sakte the. Abhi tak Hui sari parikshao me vo utrin raha hai. Usne apni sujh bujh ka badiya pradarshan kiya hai jis bajah se mahadev usper ati prasann the. Isliye unhone faisla kar liya dev or baki sabhi ko Jeevan daan dene ka.





Mahadev- putra tumhare dukh ne mujhe vivas kar diya hai. Tum mere ans ho or me tumhe dukh me kadapi nahi dekh sakta. Isliye tumhare ab tak ke liye gaye karyo ka fal me tumhe avashya hi dunga. Parantu aisa karne se kai badalav bhi aayenge prakriti me. Jinhe tumhe hi fir se vyavasthit karna hoga. Kya tum aisa karne ko tatpar ho.





Ye sunte hi dev ke chehre ki hasi bapis aagyi. Use aisa anubhav pehle kabhi nahi hua tha. Vo turant hi dandvat ho gya or mahadev ki istuti karne laga.




नमामीशमीशान निर्वाणरूपं । विभुं व्यापकं ब्रह्मवेदस्वरूपम् ॥

निजं निर्गुणं निर्विकल्पं निरीहं । चिदाकाशमाकाशवासं भजेऽहम् ॥


निराकारमोङ्कारमूलं तुरीयं । गिराज्ञानगोतीतमीशं गिरीशम् ।

करालं महाकालकालं कृपालं । गुणागारसंसारपारं नतोऽहम् ॥


तुषाराद्रिसंकाशगौरं गभीरं । मनोभूतकोटिप्रभाश्री शरीरम् ॥

स्फुरन्मौलिकल्लोलिनी चारुगङ्गा । लसद्भालबालेन्दु कण्ठे भुजङ्गा ॥


चलत्कुण्डलं भ्रूसुनेत्रं विशालं । प्रसन्नाननं नीलकण्ठं दयालम् ॥

मृगाधीशचर्माम्बरं मुण्डमालं । प्रियं शङ्करं सर्वनाथं भजामि ॥


प्रचण्डं प्रकृष्टं प्रगल्भं परेशं । अखण्डं अजं भानुकोटिप्रकाशं ॥

त्रय: शूलनिर्मूलनं शूलपाणिं । भजेऽहं भवानीपतिं भावगम्यम् ॥


कलातीतकल्याण कल्पान्तकारी । सदा सज्जनानन्ददाता पुरारी ॥

चिदानन्दसंदोह मोहापहारी । प्रसीद प्रसीद प्रभो मन्मथारी ॥


न यावद् उमानाथपादारविन्दं । भजन्तीह लोके परे वा नराणाम् ।

न तावत्सुखं शान्ति सन्तापनाशं । प्रसीद प्रभो सर्वभूताधिवासं ॥


न जानामि योगं जपं नैव पूजां । नतोऽहं सदा सर्वदा शम्भुतुभ्यम् ॥

जराजन्मदुःखौघ तातप्यमानं । प्रभो पाहि आपन्नमामीश शंभो ॥


रुद्राष्टकमिदं प्रोक्तं विप्रेण हरतोषये ॥।

ये पठन्ति नरा भक्त्या तेषां शम्भुः प्रसीदति ॥






Ye pura kehne ke baad fir se dev ne unhe pranaam Kiya. Or ye sampurn श्रीरुद्राष्टकं sunne ke baad mahadev ati prasann ho gye.




Mahadev- putra tumhari is stuti se me bahut prasann hua hu. Tumhari is bhakti or shraddha ke fal ke rup me tumhe vardaan swarup tumhe or tumhare pariwar ko jeevan pradaan karta hu. Parantu vats meri baat yaad rakhna tumhe is sansaar ka santulan fir se banana hoga.





Main- prabhu aapke aadesh ka me puri nistha se palan karunga. Jo bhi mere vash me hoga me use avashya hi karunga. Kripa kar mujhe bataye ki kis prakaar ke badlav honge.





Mahadev- putra ye tumhe jab sahi samay aayega tab tumhare gurudev tumhe avgat kara denge. Tab tak apna jeevan sadhram dhang se jeete raho or bhakti ke marg per chalte raho. Mera aasirbaad hai tumhare sath hai hamesha.





Main- ye sunkar me dhanya ho gya prabhu. Aapki kripa samast sansaar per banaye rakhe.





Ye sunne ke baad mahadev ne Tathastu bola or bo antardhyan ho gye. Bahi iske baad dev or uska samast parivar nidra se jaag gya. Unhe sab kuch yaad tha. Unhe aisa laga jaise vo so rahe the or pratah hote hi jaag gye.




Dev Prachi aalia Renu or Surbhi gurudev ke aashram me the or baki log ghar per.



Gurudev ne jab sabhi ko sahi salamat dekha to go mahadev ki leela samajh gye or unhe koti koti dhanyabaad diya. Bahi dev ke is kaarname per samast devtao ne un sabhi per phulo ki varsha ki or apne apne aasirbaad in sabhi ko pradaan kiye.



Bahi dev ne gurudev ko mahadev ke dwara kahe gye vachan sunaye ye bhi ki vo prakriti me badalaav ki baat kar rahe the.



Tab gurudev ne dev ki bato ko samjha or usse kaha.




Gurudev- vats. Mahadev ne kaha hai to satya hi hoga. Parantu abhi uska samay nahi aaya hai. Jab vo samay aayega tab me swayam hi tumhe iski suchna de dunga. Tab tak ke liye apna karm karte raho.



Or gurudev ne use aasirbaad diya.


Vo din nikal jane ke baad dev and party sabhi ko pranaam karke apne ghar lout gyi. In charo ko kuch pata hi nahi tha ki unhe kya hua tha. Tab dev ne unhe sari ghatna bigatbaar suna di. Or jab unhe pata chala ki divyastra fir se vilupt ho gya hai to sabhi ko tagda jhatka laga. Khaskar renu or surbhi ko. Kyuki unki vo shaktiya ja chuki Jo divyastra se unhe mili thi. Sirf unki hi nahi baki sabhi ki bhi divyastra wali shaktiya ja chuki thi. Lekin dev ke pass janm se mili shaktiya thi. Bahi aalia ek pari thi to uske pass bhi shaktiya thi. Prachi ko dev se virasat me shaktiya mili thi. Vo uske pass thi. Or rahi baat Renu or Surbhi ki to unke pass gurudev ke dwara diye gye mantra abhi bhi the. Jo unki soi hui janm se mili shaktiyo ko jaga dete the. Is prakaar sabhi ke pass unke janm se mili shaktiya already thi. Or yahi baat dev ne un charo ko batai to vo sabhi samaj gyi. Or kush bhi ho gyi.



Bahi ghar pahuchne per sabhi apne gharwalo se mile. Unhe dekhkar aisa laga jaise varso ke bichde aaj mil rahe ho. Or aisa swabhavik bhi tha. Aakhir apni mrityu ko parast karke jo aaye the sabhi. Uske baad sari kahani gharwalo ko sunai gyi. Jise suke sabhi dhanya ho gye. Or sabhi ne agle hi din ghar me ek badi puja ka aayojan Kiya. Samast devi devtao ko dhanyabaad dene ke liye.or ye puja swayam gurudev ne sampann karwai. Tridev or samast devi devtao ka aasirbaad baras pada iske baad sabhi per.



Or fir aise hi inki jindagi chalti rahi. Clg pura hone ke baad gurudev ne Renu or Surbhi ke liye shadi ke prastaav ko bheja un dono ke liye unhone bahut hi sundar or susil ladko ka chayan Kiya jise ek hi najar me dono pariwar ki majuri mil gyi. Akhir gurudev ke chayan kiye hue ladke the. Unme mana karne jaisa kuch tha hi nahi. Or badi Dhoom dham se un dono ka vivah sampann kara diya gya. Vo bhi gurudev ke dwara. Ye unhi ka farz tha. Jo unhone bakubhi nibhaya. Or dono ka vivah sampann ho gya. Jaha Renu pahuchi nasik or Surbhi pahuchi ujjain. Dono hi mahadev ki sharan me thi. Jaha unka sundar bhavisya unke liye tayyar baitha tha.




Bahi dev or Prachi ke clg hojane ke baad inke vivah ki baat chali. Or sabko keval ek hi tension thi ki Prachi ke perants kaise react karenge. Parantu mahadev or gurudev ke aasirbaad se aisa kuch nahi hua jo nahi hona tha. Prachi ke maa papa is shadi ko razi ho gye. Or unhe Aalia se koi aitraj bhi nahi tha. Unhe bas beti ki kushi pyari thi. Jab khud Prachi ne kaha ki use koi problem nahi hai tab unke liye koi prashn bacha hi nahi karne ko. Or bahi aalia ke maa papa ko bhi Aalia ne prithvi per bulaya or fir sabki sehmati or mujudgi me in teeno ka vivah bhi sampann karaya gya. Sabhi bahut kush the. Khaskar bade log. Kyuki unke bache ab settle Jo ho gye the.




Vivah ke baad kuch rashmi ko pura karne ke liye ye teeno Parilok gaye. Jaha ranipari ne apne jamai ka bahut hi bhavya swagat kiya. Or fir baha ke reeti ribazo karaye gaye teeno ko. Jise unhone puri shraddha se sampann kiya. Or fir kuch din vahi ruke or fir bapis prithvi loute aaye.




Bahi inki shaktiyo ke liye ye teeno roj hi dhyan lagate the. Or unhe jaagrit karte the. Halaki unke istemaal ka mouka inhe nahi milta tha. Parantu dev samaj ki burai ko saaf karne ke liye Inka istemaal karta rehta tha. Gunde badmasho ke safaye me. Police or kanun ki madad vo chhipkar karta tha.




Bahi chirag or lucky bhi settle the apni life me. Clg ke baad dono ne apni apni pasand se shadi kar li. Jise ye log clg me hi mile the. Or ye raaj aaj bhi unke seene me dafn hai ki dev or bakio ke pass powers hai. Or achhi baat ye thi ki lucky police me chala gya tha. Or kai mouko per vo dev ko suchana deta rehta tha madad ke liye. Khaskar bahut hi kathin paristhitiyon me. Jaha police jyada kuch nahi kar sakti thi.

Or chirag vo business minded tha isliye usne dev ki madad se ek chhota sa business shuru kar diya. Or dheere dheere vo patri per bhi chalne laga. Jisse in sabhi ki life's set ho chuki thi.





Bahi jaisa mahadev ne kaha tha kuch badlab honge prakriti me. Or aisa samay bhi najdeek aane laga tha. Jab kuch bhayankar sankat samast brahmand per aane ke aasar banne lage the. Jiske liye gurudev ne dev ko sachet kar diya tha.


Baki ab agle part me dekhenge ki ye sankat akhir kya hai. Or dev inse kaise niptega. Apni seemit shaktiyo ke sath……….


Tab tak ke liye…..


RADHE RADHE

TO ALL MY READERS……...





AND MAT BHULIYE….




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Shukracharya or unke asuro kaam ho gya tha. Halaki sare asur samapt nahi hue the. Parantu shukracharya ke jane ke baad unhone apni haar swikaar kar li thi. Or patallok ka vatavarn bhi in pancho ki shaktiyo se badal gya tha. Jis bajah se jo burai baha nivaas karti thi vo ab kam ho gyi thi.





And dev or uska pariwar is waqt gehri neend me so rahe the. Sirf dev hi jeevit tha. Lekin vo koma me tha. Or vo koma se uthna hi nahi chahta tha.gurudev ne tamam kosis karke dekh li lekin dev hai ki uthne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.






Bahi man me dev ki aatma bahut takleef me thi. Uske sab apne ja chuke the. Jis bajah se vo brih ki peeda se gujar raha tha. Tabhi uski antaraatma me swayam mahadev ne use darshan diye. Jinhe dekhkar dev ne unhe pranaam kiya.




Mahadev- putra mujhe tumper bahut garv ho raha hai. Tumne jo karya kiya hai vo bakai me sadharan nahi hai.
Me bahut prasann hu tumse. Parantu tum jaag kyu nahi rahe ho.







Main- mahadev aap to jante hi hai. Bhale hi me apne karya me safal raha hu. Parantu me apna sab kuch kho chuka hu.or aise akele mujhe nahi jeena hai. Isliye me vinti karta hu Aapse ki mere prano ko har leejiye.






Mahadev- putra tumhare pariwar ka antim samay yahi tha. Unki kismat me jo likha tha vo hua. Parantu tum aise haar nahi maan sakte tumhe jeena hoga putra





Main- mahadev mujhe itni badi saja mat deejiye. Me nahi jee paunga. Kam se kam aise to bilkul nahi. Mera pariwar hi meri pehchan hai. Unke moh se me bimukh nahi ho sakta. Mujhe unki jarurat hai.






Mahadev- me samjhta hu putra tumhari manodasha.




Main- kya un sabhi ko bapis lane ka koi marg nahi hai. Me har sambhav chounotiyo ko paar kar jaunga. Bas aap unhen Jeevan daan de dijiye. Chahiye to mere pran le lijiye. Parantu un sabhi ko jeevan de dijiye prabhu.






Ye sunkar mahadev soch me pad gye. Vo aisa kar sakte the. Parantu isse prakriti ke chakra me badlav ho jayega ye baat bhi vo achhe se jante the. Filhal jo hua hai vo badal sakta tha. Parantu ek satya ye bhi tha ki vo ye sab swayam hi karna chahte the. Arnav unhi ka ans tha or vo usi ko itne dukh me nahi dekh sakte the. Abhi tak Hui sari parikshao me vo utrin raha hai. Usne apni sujh bujh ka badiya pradarshan kiya hai jis bajah se mahadev usper ati prasann the. Isliye unhone faisla kar liya dev or baki sabhi ko Jeevan daan dene ka.





Mahadev- putra tumhare dukh ne mujhe vivas kar diya hai. Tum mere ans ho or me tumhe dukh me kadapi nahi dekh sakta. Isliye tumhare ab tak ke liye gaye karyo ka fal me tumhe avashya hi dunga. Parantu aisa karne se kai badalav bhi aayenge prakriti me. Jinhe tumhe hi fir se vyavasthit karna hoga. Kya tum aisa karne ko tatpar ho.





Ye sunte hi dev ke chehre ki hasi bapis aagyi. Use aisa anubhav pehle kabhi nahi hua tha. Vo turant hi dandvat ho gya or mahadev ki istuti karne laga.




नमामीशमीशान निर्वाणरूपं । विभुं व्यापकं ब्रह्मवेदस्वरूपम् ॥

निजं निर्गुणं निर्विकल्पं निरीहं । चिदाकाशमाकाशवासं भजेऽहम् ॥


निराकारमोङ्कारमूलं तुरीयं । गिराज्ञानगोतीतमीशं गिरीशम् ।

करालं महाकालकालं कृपालं । गुणागारसंसारपारं नतोऽहम् ॥


तुषाराद्रिसंकाशगौरं गभीरं । मनोभूतकोटिप्रभाश्री शरीरम् ॥

स्फुरन्मौलिकल्लोलिनी चारुगङ्गा । लसद्भालबालेन्दु कण्ठे भुजङ्गा ॥


चलत्कुण्डलं भ्रूसुनेत्रं विशालं । प्रसन्नाननं नीलकण्ठं दयालम् ॥

मृगाधीशचर्माम्बरं मुण्डमालं । प्रियं शङ्करं सर्वनाथं भजामि ॥


प्रचण्डं प्रकृष्टं प्रगल्भं परेशं । अखण्डं अजं भानुकोटिप्रकाशं ॥

त्रय: शूलनिर्मूलनं शूलपाणिं । भजेऽहं भवानीपतिं भावगम्यम् ॥


कलातीतकल्याण कल्पान्तकारी । सदा सज्जनानन्ददाता पुरारी ॥

चिदानन्दसंदोह मोहापहारी । प्रसीद प्रसीद प्रभो मन्मथारी ॥


न यावद् उमानाथपादारविन्दं । भजन्तीह लोके परे वा नराणाम् ।

न तावत्सुखं शान्ति सन्तापनाशं । प्रसीद प्रभो सर्वभूताधिवासं ॥


न जानामि योगं जपं नैव पूजां । नतोऽहं सदा सर्वदा शम्भुतुभ्यम् ॥

जराजन्मदुःखौघ तातप्यमानं । प्रभो पाहि आपन्नमामीश शंभो ॥


रुद्राष्टकमिदं प्रोक्तं विप्रेण हरतोषये ॥।

ये पठन्ति नरा भक्त्या तेषां शम्भुः प्रसीदति ॥






Ye pura kehne ke baad fir se dev ne unhe pranaam Kiya. Or ye sampurn श्रीरुद्राष्टकं sunne ke baad mahadev ati prasann ho gye.




Mahadev- putra tumhari is stuti se me bahut prasann hua hu. Tumhari is bhakti or shraddha ke fal ke rup me tumhe vardaan swarup tumhe or tumhare pariwar ko jeevan pradaan karta hu. Parantu vats meri baat yaad rakhna tumhe is sansaar ka santulan fir se banana hoga.





Main- prabhu aapke aadesh ka me puri nistha se palan karunga. Jo bhi mere vash me hoga me use avashya hi karunga. Kripa kar mujhe bataye ki kis prakaar ke badlav honge.





Mahadev- putra ye tumhe jab sahi samay aayega tab tumhare gurudev tumhe avgat kara denge. Tab tak apna jeevan sadhram dhang se jeete raho or bhakti ke marg per chalte raho. Mera aasirbaad hai tumhare sath hai hamesha.





Main- ye sunkar me dhanya ho gya prabhu. Aapki kripa samast sansaar per banaye rakhe.





Ye sunne ke baad mahadev ne Tathastu bola or bo antardhyan ho gye. Bahi iske baad dev or uska samast parivar nidra se jaag gya. Unhe sab kuch yaad tha. Unhe aisa laga jaise vo so rahe the or pratah hote hi jaag gye.




Dev Prachi aalia Renu or Surbhi gurudev ke aashram me the or baki log ghar per.



Gurudev ne jab sabhi ko sahi salamat dekha to go mahadev ki leela samajh gye or unhe koti koti dhanyabaad diya. Bahi dev ke is kaarname per samast devtao ne un sabhi per phulo ki varsha ki or apne apne aasirbaad in sabhi ko pradaan kiye.



Bahi dev ne gurudev ko mahadev ke dwara kahe gye vachan sunaye ye bhi ki vo prakriti me badalaav ki baat kar rahe the.



Tab gurudev ne dev ki bato ko samjha or usse kaha.




Gurudev- vats. Mahadev ne kaha hai to satya hi hoga. Parantu abhi uska samay nahi aaya hai. Jab vo samay aayega tab me swayam hi tumhe iski suchna de dunga. Tab tak ke liye apna karm karte raho.



Or gurudev ne use aasirbaad diya.


Vo din nikal jane ke baad dev and party sabhi ko pranaam karke apne ghar lout gyi. In charo ko kuch pata hi nahi tha ki unhe kya hua tha. Tab dev ne unhe sari ghatna bigatbaar suna di. Or jab unhe pata chala ki divyastra fir se vilupt ho gya hai to sabhi ko tagda jhatka laga. Khaskar renu or surbhi ko. Kyuki unki vo shaktiya ja chuki Jo divyastra se unhe mili thi. Sirf unki hi nahi baki sabhi ki bhi divyastra wali shaktiya ja chuki thi. Lekin dev ke pass janm se mili shaktiya thi. Bahi aalia ek pari thi to uske pass bhi shaktiya thi. Prachi ko dev se virasat me shaktiya mili thi. Vo uske pass thi. Or rahi baat Renu or Surbhi ki to unke pass gurudev ke dwara diye gye mantra abhi bhi the. Jo unki soi hui janm se mili shaktiyo ko jaga dete the. Is prakaar sabhi ke pass unke janm se mili shaktiya already thi. Or yahi baat dev ne un charo ko batai to vo sabhi samaj gyi. Or kush bhi ho gyi.



Bahi ghar pahuchne per sabhi apne gharwalo se mile. Unhe dekhkar aisa laga jaise varso ke bichde aaj mil rahe ho. Or aisa swabhavik bhi tha. Aakhir apni mrityu ko parast karke jo aaye the sabhi. Uske baad sari kahani gharwalo ko sunai gyi. Jise suke sabhi dhanya ho gye. Or sabhi ne agle hi din ghar me ek badi puja ka aayojan Kiya. Samast devi devtao ko dhanyabaad dene ke liye.or ye puja swayam gurudev ne sampann karwai. Tridev or samast devi devtao ka aasirbaad baras pada iske baad sabhi per.



Or fir aise hi inki jindagi chalti rahi. Clg pura hone ke baad gurudev ne Renu or Surbhi ke liye shadi ke prastaav ko bheja un dono ke liye unhone bahut hi sundar or susil ladko ka chayan Kiya jise ek hi najar me dono pariwar ki majuri mil gyi. Akhir gurudev ke chayan kiye hue ladke the. Unme mana karne jaisa kuch tha hi nahi. Or badi Dhoom dham se un dono ka vivah sampann kara diya gya. Vo bhi gurudev ke dwara. Ye unhi ka farz tha. Jo unhone bakubhi nibhaya. Or dono ka vivah sampann ho gya. Jaha Renu pahuchi nasik or Surbhi pahuchi ujjain. Dono hi mahadev ki sharan me thi. Jaha unka sundar bhavisya unke liye tayyar baitha tha.




Bahi dev or Prachi ke clg hojane ke baad inke vivah ki baat chali. Or sabko keval ek hi tension thi ki Prachi ke perants kaise react karenge. Parantu mahadev or gurudev ke aasirbaad se aisa kuch nahi hua jo nahi hona tha. Prachi ke maa papa is shadi ko razi ho gye. Or unhe Aalia se koi aitraj bhi nahi tha. Unhe bas beti ki kushi pyari thi. Jab khud Prachi ne kaha ki use koi problem nahi hai tab unke liye koi prashn bacha hi nahi karne ko. Or bahi aalia ke maa papa ko bhi Aalia ne prithvi per bulaya or fir sabki sehmati or mujudgi me in teeno ka vivah bhi sampann karaya gya. Sabhi bahut kush the. Khaskar bade log. Kyuki unke bache ab settle Jo ho gye the.




Vivah ke baad kuch rashmi ko pura karne ke liye ye teeno Parilok gaye. Jaha ranipari ne apne jamai ka bahut hi bhavya swagat kiya. Or fir baha ke reeti ribazo karaye gaye teeno ko. Jise unhone puri shraddha se sampann kiya. Or fir kuch din vahi ruke or fir bapis prithvi loute aaye.




Bahi inki shaktiyo ke liye ye teeno roj hi dhyan lagate the. Or unhe jaagrit karte the. Halaki unke istemaal ka mouka inhe nahi milta tha. Parantu dev samaj ki burai ko saaf karne ke liye Inka istemaal karta rehta tha. Gunde badmasho ke safaye me. Police or kanun ki madad vo chhipkar karta tha.




Bahi chirag or lucky bhi settle the apni life me. Clg ke baad dono ne apni apni pasand se shadi kar li. Jise ye log clg me hi mile the. Or ye raaj aaj bhi unke seene me dafn hai ki dev or bakio ke pass powers hai. Or achhi baat ye thi ki lucky police me chala gya tha. Or kai mouko per vo dev ko suchana deta rehta tha madad ke liye. Khaskar bahut hi kathin paristhitiyon me. Jaha police jyada kuch nahi kar sakti thi.

Or chirag vo business minded tha isliye usne dev ki madad se ek chhota sa business shuru kar diya. Or dheere dheere vo patri per bhi chalne laga. Jisse in sabhi ki life's set ho chuki thi.





Bahi jaisa mahadev ne kaha tha kuch badlab honge prakriti me. Or aisa samay bhi najdeek aane laga tha. Jab kuch bhayankar sankat samast brahmand per aane ke aasar banne lage the. Jiske liye gurudev ne dev ko sachet kar diya tha.


Baki ab agle part me dekhenge ki ye sankat akhir kya hai. Or dev inse kaise niptega. Apni seemit shaktiyo ke sath……….


Tab tak ke liye…..


RADHE RADHE

TO ALL MY READERS……...





AND MAT BHULIYE….




IT'S JUST A BEGINNING……….
Bahut hi shandar story likhi hai Bhai I think ye thoda jldi ant krdia divyastra Ka Dev lo rkhna hi Chahiye tha Apne pass but koi ni Aapne Kuch smjh ke Kia Hoga


Intejaar rahega second chapter ka
 

Akil

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Toh yeh ek chhal hi tha rishi shukr ka parantu dev and team ne apni soojhboojh aur achchhai se unki buraai ko bahut had tak maat di hai
Aur dev and team balidaan ki is pariksha mein bhi safal hi rahe hain
Dekhte hain next part kab aayega
Aur surya ke 3rd part ka bhi intazaar hi hai bro ?
And iska next part jab bhi aap shur'u karein uska link yahan bhej dijiyegaa bro
 
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Veraj

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Bhai bhot dhamal zabrdast update hai Bhai or hum sab ko intezar rahe ga part 2 Ka please jaldi waps update dejye ga Bhai bhot besabri se intezar rahe ga pls pls pls pls pls jaldhi wapas aye ga bhai
 
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