Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

[Vk248517]

Thanks Bhai log......




aap sabhi ka pyar mila or ye story bhi complete ho gyi. Ab next story surya ke part ki jaldi hi suru karne ki kosis karunga. Or ummid karunga ki aap sabhi ka pyar us story per bhi barsega.





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Aapka bahu bahut sukriya bhai ki hamsbki bato ko maan kr surya ki story start kr rhe hai.


Wating for surya story.

 

[Agrawal ji]

pichhali dono kahaniyon ki tarah ye kahani b kabile tarif thi balki is kahani ka plot bahut jyada badhiya tha aur aapki nirantarata aur lekhni ka koi sana nahi hai

 

[AAS]

Fantastic stroy

 

[The king]

Nice end bhai or jab aap koi dusari story suru karo to please mujhe masag karke bata dena waiting for next story

 

[Anky@123]

Wah wah bhai kya ant tha lajawab jitni tarif utni kam bhai aap ki 3 kahani padi aur tino hi lajawab ab apna sath bana hi rehega . Har kahani ke sath mera review bhi hamesha aata hi rehega . Ab surya ka 3rd part start kero then divyastra ka 2 part . Aap ko shubhkamnaye rahul bhai

 

[Raj_sharma]

Wah ati uttam
Sandaar lajabaab excellant super duper
Majedar update

 

[Ayush2017]

Awesome story

And lovely ending

Waiting for new one

 

[Rahul0087@]

Nice end bhai or jab aap koi dusari story suru karo to please mujhe masag karke bata dena waiting for next story

Awesome story

And lovely ending

Waiting for new one

Wah ati uttam
Sandaar lajabaab excellant super duper
Majedar update

Wah wah bhai kya ant tha lajawab jitni tarif utni kam bhai aap ki 3 kahani padi aur tino hi lajawab ab apna sath bana hi rehega . Har kahani ke sath mera review bhi hamesha aata hi rehega . Ab surya ka 3rd part start kero then divyastra ka 2 part . Aap ko shubhkamnaye rahul bhai

Fantastic stroy

pichhali dono kahaniyon ki tarah ye kahani b kabile tarif thi balki is kahani ka plot bahut jyada badhiya tha aur aapki nirantarata aur lekhni ka koi sana nahi hai

Aapka bahu bahut sukriya bhai ki hamsbki bato ko maan kr surya ki story start kr rhe hai.


Wating for surya story.

Thanks Bhai log.....






aap sabhi ka sath milta raha or ye story bhi complete ho hi gyi. Ab next story ke liye ready rahiye jald hi start karne ki kosis karunga. Tab tak aap sabhi ke liye ek kaam hai.

aap sabhi log mujhe suggest kare ki surya ki story me aap is baar kya dekhna chahte hai. Story ka plot kaisa hona chahiye.

aap sabhi ke suggestions se mujhe kafi madad milegi. Or aap sabhi ka bhi intrest bhi bana rahega. Kuch mere ideas or kuch aap sabhi ke Mila kar ek behatreen story pesh karne ki kosis karunga...

Is liye apne suggestions jarur bheje isi thread per....

thank you...






keep supporting.............

 

[John Cena]

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Thanks Bhai log.....






aap sabhi ka sath milta raha or ye story bhi complete ho hi gyi. Ab next story ke liye ready rahiye jald hi start karne ki kosis karunga. Tab tak aap sabhi ke liye ek kaam hai.

aap sabhi log mujhe suggest kare ki surya ki story me aap is baar kya dekhna chahte hai. Story ka plot kaisa hona chahiye.

aap sabhi ke suggestions se mujhe kafi madad milegi. Or aap sabhi ka bhi intrest bhi bana rahega. Kuch mere ideas or kuch aap sabhi ke Mila kar ek behatreen story pesh karne ki kosis karunga...

Is liye apne suggestions jarur bheje isi thread per....

thank you...






keep supporting.............

Agli story konsi wali story ka part hogi ya to btao

 

[Rahul0087@]

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Agli story konsi wali story ka part hogi ya to btao

Bro likha to hai. Surya ki story ka next part.

Surya the protector.