Azagar Dada
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Bhai story finish ho gayi.Man udas ho gaya.story se gahara lagav sa ho gaya hai.phir bhi aap ko bahut bara thank you itani sundar rachna ke liye.
Bhai story finish ho gayi.Man udas ho gaya.story se gahara lagav sa ho gaya hai.phir bhi aap ko bahut bara thank you itani sundar rachna ke liye.
Rahul0087@ Bhai next part kB kr rhe start waiting
बहुत शानदार
amazing story sir jee... nice ending
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For next part
नमामीशमीशान निर्वाणरूपं । विभुं व्यापकं ब्रह्मवेदस्वरूपम् ॥
निजं निर्गुणं निर्विकल्पं निरीहं । चिदाकाशमाकाशवासं भजेऽहम् ॥
निराकारमोङ्कारमूलं तुरीयं । गिराज्ञानगोतीतमीशं गिरीशम् ।
करालं महाकालकालं कृपालं । गुणागारसंसारपारं नतोऽहम् ॥
तुषाराद्रिसंकाशगौरं गभीरं । मनोभूतकोटिप्रभाश्री शरीरम् ॥
स्फुरन्मौलिकल्लोलिनी चारुगङ्गा । लसद्भालबालेन्दु कण्ठे भुजङ्गा ॥
चलत्कुण्डलं भ्रूसुनेत्रं विशालं । प्रसन्नाननं नीलकण्ठं दयालम् ॥
मृगाधीशचर्माम्बरं मुण्डमालं । प्रियं शङ्करं सर्वनाथं भजामि ॥
प्रचण्डं प्रकृष्टं प्रगल्भं परेशं । अखण्डं अजं भानुकोटिप्रकाशं ॥
त्रय: शूलनिर्मूलनं शूलपाणिं । भजेऽहं भवानीपतिं भावगम्यम् ॥
कलातीत कल्याण कल्पान्तकारी । सदा सज्जनानन्ददाता पुरारी ॥
चिदानन्दसंदोह मोहापहारी । प्रसीद प्रसीद प्रभो मन्मथारी ॥
न यावद् उमानाथपादारविन्दं । भजन्तीह लोके परे वा नराणाम् ।
न तावत्सुखं शान्ति सन्तापनाशं । प्रसीद प्रभो सर्वभूताधिवासं ॥
न जानामि योगं जपं नैव पूजां । नतोऽहं सदा सर्वदा शम्भुतुभ्यम् ॥
जराजन्मदुःखौघ तातप्यमानं । प्रभो पाहि आपन्नमामीश शंभो ॥
रुद्राष्टकमिदं प्रोक्तं विप्रेण हरतोषये ॥।
ये पठन्ति नरा भक्त्या तेषां शम्भुः प्रसीदति ॥
कोटि कोटि प्रणाम।
Bhai jab bhi next story start karo to msg kar dena
RADHE RADHE MAZA AAYA UPDATE READ KAR KE
EK BOLUGA KI AAP KI STORY LAZAVAB THI MAZA HI AA GYA AAISI BAHUT KAM HI STORY HOTI HAI JO ITNI JALDI COMPLETE HOTI HAI AUR ITNI ACCHI
USME SE AAP KI YE STORY HAI
WAITING FOR NEXT PART BATA DIJIYE GA KAB SE START KRE GE AAP
JISSE HAM FIR SE AAP KI STORY KO READ KAR SAKE AUR ITNERTN HOTI RAHE
super fantastic ending of the greatest story... Thanks for this great story... I will wait for next part
Jabardasttt updates bhai
N sandarrrr The End kiya pehle part ka
Superb Story h
Maja aa gya read kr k
Sbi updates kamaal k h
Super
Zabardast ending di ha is part ko yar mazaa a gya wah next part ka Besabri sa intzar rahega mujhe dost jaldi start karna
Nice story
Bahut behtareen story hai...
Bahut samay k baad aisi koi saaf suthari story mili padhne ko.... next part ka intezaar rhega
Shabdkala ki ek aur sunder jhanki parstut ki hai mitr ne. Avaranniye!
Dosti me dost Dost ka khuda hota hai,
Mahsush tab hota hai jab vo juda hota hai.
Bandhu Aap ki kahani di ko chune vali thi, Aapki har update niymit rupe se aayi aur sabhi ko aap ne apne priye vachno se v saneh ke bandhno me bandhe rakha jo ki ek ashadharan kritye hai. Aap ki rachnatmak shelly behtreen hai jo ki divye hai.Aap yuhi har dil aziz rahe aur apne mitro ko gaanvardhak, utsahvardhak v unki apekshao ke jaishi kahni ka lekhankan kare v sukhmaye palo ko vayteet kare.
Ant me shukriya sakha aapne itni sunder kahani ki rachna kar hamare man me ek alag hi pehchan banai hai jo amit hai.
!Phir milenge chalte-chalte!
Bhai bhot dhamal zabrdast update hai Bhai or hum sab ko intezar rahe ga part 2 Ka please jaldi waps update dejye ga Bhai bhot besabri se intezar rahe ga pls pls pls pls pls jaldhi wapas aye ga bhai
Shandaar story ko usse bhi shandaar tareeke se behtareen anzaam tak pahuchaya, congratulations and thanks a lot for great story.
Mast update bhai waiting for 2nd part
Mast update bhai waiting for 2nd part
बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई
Shaandar update bhai maza aa gaya hai.yaha to full to dhamaal ho gaya. Ab dekhte hai age kya badlav hone wala hai . waiting for second inning.
Bhai story ho to aisi ki dil ko chu jaya..keep writing ..keep it up.
Toh yeh ek chhal hi tha rishi shukr ka parantu dev and team ne apni soojhboojh aur achchhai se unki buraai ko bahut had tak maat di hai
Aur dev and team balidaan ki is pariksha mein bhi safal hi rahe hain
Dekhte hain next part kab aayega
Aur surya ke 3rd part ka bhi intazaar hi hai bro ?
And iska next part jab bhi aap shur'u karein uska link yahan bhej dijiyegaa bro
Waiting
Bahut hi shandar story likhi hai Bhai I think ye thoda jldi ant krdia divyastra Ka Dev lo rkhna hi Chahiye tha Apne pass but koi ni Aapne Kuch smjh ke Kia Hoga
Intejaar rahega second chapter ka
Awesome story bhai waiting for next part
Rahul bahi mazza aagya ending pdh k.
Bhai agli story jo aap start kijiyega wo SURYA KA KIJIYE .
SURYA K AGLE PART ka besbri se intezar me hai.
Awesome updates
Next part kab start hoga
Maza aa gya bhai story padh k
Wakai m shaandar story h
Intezarrrrr rahega us din ka...
Behatareen jabardast romanchak shandar update brother.....
shabd hi khatam ho gye kr bhala to ho bhala wahi hua dev ne sabka acha hit chaha isliye uske sath bhi ant mein acha hua...
keep writing....
keep posting......
Bahut behtreen akshro se alankrit ek divye anubhuti karvaie hai Arnav ne.
Fabulous story hai bhai.. bhai me shuru se apke sath tha or apke sare update padh rha tha but us time me silent reader tha abhi kuch time pehle hi I'd bnai h.. or apke saare update kamaal ke the ..
Jha dev ki shaktiya jagrit hona or bnagwan parshuram se shiksha dilwana , use apna lakshya btna or asura or nash krna ..fir pooja ko dev ki shakti milna ..fir alia ek pari ki entry hona..paristan jana wha asuro ka nash karna sath me divyaastra ko dhunda ..fir ek baad ek chunauti pe khadi utarna ..uske baad Surbhi or Renu ko dev ke baare me pta lgna or gurudev ke dwara unke bare me ki ye paancho divyaastra ke aang hai..or Surbhi or Renu ko shakti ka pta lgna..divyaastra hasil karna .. shukracharya or asura ka nash krwana .. fir mahadev ke dwara uski behno ka fir jeevit hona ..sarre update kamal ke the bhai..
I hope aap jaldi iska next part shuru krna..
And bhai apne ek story thriller likhi or ek fantasy or future me ek horror bhi shuru krna yaara..