Fantasy दिव्यास्त्र.[The power of five elements](action,advanture,fantasy,magic,thriller) ( Completed )

[Azagar Dada]

Bhai story finish ho gayi.Man udas ho gaya.story se gahara lagav sa ho gaya hai.phir bhi aap ko bahut bara thank you itani sundar rachna ke liye.

 

[Cooldude1986]

amazing story sir jee... nice ending

 

[Kapala69]

बहुत शानदार

 

[Hunterrrr69]

Rahul0087@ Bhai next part kB kr rhe start waiting

 

[Rahul0087@]

Bhai story finish ho gayi.Man udas ho gaya.story se gahara lagav sa ho gaya hai.phir bhi aap ko bahut bara thank you itani sundar rachna ke liye.

Rahul0087@ Bhai next part kB kr rhe start waiting

बहुत शानदार

amazing story sir jee... nice ending

Thanks Bhai log.


aapke is sath ke liye........



me jab bhi nai story start karunga tab link is story per daal dunga or mere signature me bhi. Or ummid karunga ki un story ko bhi aap sab ka sath or pyar milega....





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[Rahul0087@]

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For next part

नमामीशमीशान निर्वाणरूपं । विभुं व्यापकं ब्रह्मवेदस्वरूपम् ॥

निजं निर्गुणं निर्विकल्पं निरीहं । चिदाकाशमाकाशवासं भजेऽहम् ॥


निराकारमोङ्कारमूलं तुरीयं । गिराज्ञानगोतीतमीशं गिरीशम् ।

करालं महाकालकालं कृपालं । गुणागारसंसारपारं नतोऽहम् ॥


तुषाराद्रिसंकाशगौरं गभीरं । मनोभूतकोटिप्रभाश्री शरीरम् ॥

स्फुरन्मौलिकल्लोलिनी चारुगङ्गा । लसद्भालबालेन्दु कण्ठे भुजङ्गा ॥
चलत्कुण्डलं भ्रूसुनेत्रं विशालं । प्रसन्नाननं नीलकण्ठं दयालम् ॥

मृगाधीशचर्माम्बरं मुण्डमालं । प्रियं शङ्करं सर्वनाथं भजामि ॥


प्रचण्डं प्रकृष्टं प्रगल्भं परेशं । अखण्डं अजं भानुकोटिप्रकाशं ॥

त्रय: शूलनिर्मूलनं शूलपाणिं । भजेऽहं भवानीपतिं भावगम्यम् ॥


कलातीत कल्याण कल्पान्तकारी । सदा सज्जनानन्ददाता पुरारी ॥
चिदानन्दसंदोह मोहापहारी । प्रसीद प्रसीद प्रभो मन्मथारी ॥


न यावद् उमानाथपादारविन्दं । भजन्तीह लोके परे वा नराणाम् ।

न तावत्सुखं शान्ति सन्तापनाशं । प्रसीद प्रभो सर्वभूताधिवासं ॥


न जानामि योगं जपं नैव पूजां । नतोऽहं सदा सर्वदा शम्भुतुभ्यम् ॥

जराजन्मदुःखौघ तातप्यमानं । प्रभो पाहि आपन्नमामीश शंभो ॥


रुद्राष्टकमिदं प्रोक्तं विप्रेण हरतोषये ॥।

ये पठन्ति नरा भक्त्या तेषां शम्भुः प्रसीदति ॥


कोटि कोटि प्रणाम।

Bhai jab bhi next story start karo to msg kar dena

RADHE RADHE MAZA AAYA UPDATE READ KAR KE
EK BOLUGA KI AAP KI STORY LAZAVAB THI MAZA HI AA GYA AAISI BAHUT KAM HI STORY HOTI HAI JO ITNI JALDI COMPLETE HOTI HAI AUR ITNI ACCHI
USME SE AAP KI YE STORY HAI


WAITING FOR NEXT PART BATA DIJIYE GA KAB SE START KRE GE AAP

JISSE HAM FIR SE AAP KI STORY KO READ KAR SAKE AUR ITNERTN HOTI RAHE

super fantastic ending of the greatest story... Thanks for this great story... I will wait for next part

Jabardasttt updates bhai
N sandarrrr The End kiya pehle part ka

Superb Story h
Maja aa gya read kr k
Sbi updates kamaal k h

Super

Zabardast ending di ha is part ko yar mazaa a gya wah next part ka Besabri sa intzar rahega mujhe dost jaldi start karna

Nice story

Bahut behtareen story hai...
Bahut samay k baad aisi koi saaf suthari story mili padhne ko.... next part ka intezaar rhega

Thanks Bhai log......




aap sabke sath ke bina ye story kabhi complete nahi ho pati. Uske liye thanks. Next story jald se jald shuru karne ki kosis karunga. Me link yaha de dunga. Or ummid karunga ki us story ko bhi aap sabhi ka pyar u hi milega..




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[Rahul0087@]

Shabdkala ki ek aur sunder jhanki parstut ki hai mitr ne. Avaranniye!

Dosti me dost Dost ka khuda hota hai,
Mahsush tab hota hai jab vo juda hota hai.

Bandhu Aap ki kahani di ko chune vali thi, Aapki har update niymit rupe se aayi aur sabhi ko aap ne apne priye vachno se v saneh ke bandhno me bandhe rakha jo ki ek ashadharan kritye hai. Aap ki rachnatmak shelly behtreen hai jo ki divye hai.Aap yuhi har dil aziz rahe aur apne mitro ko gaanvardhak, utsahvardhak v unki apekshao ke jaishi kahni ka lekhankan kare v sukhmaye palo ko vayteet kare.
Ant me shukriya sakha aapne itni sunder kahani ki rachna kar hamare man me ek alag hi pehchan banai hai jo amit hai.
!Phir milenge chalte-chalte!

Bhai bhot dhamal zabrdast update hai Bhai or hum sab ko intezar rahe ga part 2 Ka please jaldi waps update dejye ga Bhai bhot besabri se intezar rahe ga pls pls pls pls pls jaldhi wapas aye ga bhai

Shandaar story ko usse bhi shandaar tareeke se behtareen anzaam tak pahuchaya, congratulations and thanks a lot for great story.

Mast update bhai waiting for 2nd part

Mast update bhai waiting for 2nd part

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

Shaandar update bhai maza aa gaya hai.yaha to full to dhamaal ho gaya. Ab dekhte hai age kya badlav hone wala hai . waiting for second inning.

Bhai story ho to aisi ki dil ko chu jaya..keep writing ..keep it up.

Toh yeh ek chhal hi tha rishi shukr ka parantu dev and team ne apni soojhboojh aur achchhai se unki buraai ko bahut had tak maat di hai
Aur dev and team balidaan ki is pariksha mein bhi safal hi rahe hain
Dekhte hain next part kab aayega
Aur surya ke 3rd part ka bhi intazaar hi hai bro ?
And iska next part jab bhi aap shur'u karein uska link yahan bhej dijiyegaa bro

Waiting

Bahut hi shandar story likhi hai Bhai I think ye thoda jldi ant krdia divyastra Ka Dev lo rkhna hi Chahiye tha Apne pass but koi ni Aapne Kuch smjh ke Kia Hoga


Intejaar rahega second chapter ka

Thanks Bhai log......




aap sabhi ka pyar mila or ye story bhi complete ho gyi. Ab next story surya ke part ki jaldi hi suru karne ki kosis karunga. Or ummid karunga ki aap sabhi ka pyar us story per bhi barsega.





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[Rahul0087@]

Awesome story bhai waiting for next part

Rahul bahi mazza aagya ending pdh k.

Bhai agli story jo aap start kijiyega wo SURYA KA KIJIYE .
SURYA K AGLE PART ka besbri se intezar me hai.

Awesome updates

Next part kab start hoga

Maza aa gya bhai story padh k
Wakai m shaandar story h

Intezarrrrr rahega us din ka...

Behatareen jabardast romanchak shandar update brother.....
shabd hi khatam ho gye kr bhala to ho bhala wahi hua dev ne sabka acha hit chaha isliye uske sath bhi ant mein acha hua...
keep writing....
keep posting......

Bahut behtreen akshro se alankrit ek divye anubhuti karvaie hai Arnav ne.

Thanks bhai log ........




aap sabhi ke sath or pyar ke liye...jo mujhe ye story likhne or use samay per end karne ke liye prerit karta hai ....
next story jaldi hi start karne ki kosis karunga. Or ummid karunga ki aap sabhi ka pyar kai guna bad kar meri us story per bhi barsega...





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[Punnu]

Fabulous story hai bhai.. bhai me shuru se apke sath tha or apke sare update padh rha tha but us time me silent reader tha abhi kuch time pehle hi I'd bnai h.. or apke saare update kamaal ke the ..
Jha dev ki shaktiya jagrit hona or bnagwan parshuram se shiksha dilwana , use apna lakshya btna or asura or nash krna ..fir pooja ko dev ki shakti milna ..fir alia ek pari ki entry hona..paristan jana wha asuro ka nash karna sath me divyaastra ko dhunda ..fir ek baad ek chunauti pe khadi utarna ..uske baad Surbhi or Renu ko dev ke baare me pta lgna or gurudev ke dwara unke bare me ki ye paancho divyaastra ke aang hai..or Surbhi or Renu ko shakti ka pta lgna..divyaastra hasil karna .. shukracharya or asura ka nash krwana .. fir mahadev ke dwara uski behno ka fir jeevit hona ..sarre update kamal ke the bhai..
I hope aap jaldi iska next part shuru krna..
And bhai apne ek story thriller likhi or ek fantasy or future me ek horror bhi shuru krna yaara..

 

[Rahul0087@]

Fabulous story hai bhai.. bhai me shuru se apke sath tha or apke sare update padh rha tha but us time me silent reader tha abhi kuch time pehle hi I'd bnai h.. or apke saare update kamaal ke the ..
Jha dev ki shaktiya jagrit hona or bnagwan parshuram se shiksha dilwana , use apna lakshya btna or asura or nash krna ..fir pooja ko dev ki shakti milna ..fir alia ek pari ki entry hona..paristan jana wha asuro ka nash karna sath me divyaastra ko dhunda ..fir ek baad ek chunauti pe khadi utarna ..uske baad Surbhi or Renu ko dev ke baare me pta lgna or gurudev ke dwara unke bare me ki ye paancho divyaastra ke aang hai..or Surbhi or Renu ko shakti ka pta lgna..divyaastra hasil karna .. shukracharya or asura ka nash krwana .. fir mahadev ke dwara uski behno ka fir jeevit hona ..sarre update kamal ke the bhai..
I hope aap jaldi iska next part shuru krna..
And bhai apne ek story thriller likhi or ek fantasy or future me ek horror bhi shuru krna yaara..

Thanks bhai....




aapko story pasand aai uske liye......and aapke sujhav per gour karunga horror story likhne ke liye. Baki kuch pakka nahi keh sakta hu. Ha lekin agar future me mouka Mila to is topic per bhi story jarur likhunga.. baki jald hi next story start karne ki kosis karunga ummid hai ab aap silent reader nahi rahenge. ....






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