Erotica फागुन के दिन चार

[Mass]

A very long but super update...as I mentioned before...the erotic teasing that you show in your updates...they are just mind blowing...
its a case of "so near...yet so far"...
the teasing reaches so far...that the reader might think about the next step (actual sex) will happen but you smartly pull back...
like the foreplay between Guddi and Anand Babu after she comes out of shower...
the "description" of bhoot....chudail Gunja very sexy though...
each section of the update was a "page turner" (I am sure you understand the meaning of it) dripping with pure erotica...
the erotica is superbly enhanced by the "matter of facts" dailogbaazi between the characters...Anand Babu, Gunja, Guddi, et al

For you to come up with such a super long update..focussing mostly on 2 characters..Gunja and Guddi...it takes special talent..
As I had appreciated you earlier also...reading the Holi updates, especially coming from you...one is really tempted to play Holi...you describe the proceedings/play in outstanding terms..truly super update...
Am tempted to post this pic once again..even though it might be "repeatable"..but truly worth it. I can go on and on..but this pic aptly describes the update and your effort...
Bravo!!

komaalrani

 

[Devilwar]

Waiting

 

[komaalrani]

Waiting

I am sure you must have read earlier parts, please do share a few words.

 

[komaalrani]

Waiting

as much as a reader waits for the next part, a writer waits for the comments. so please do comment

 

[Sutradhar]

as much as a reader waits for the next part, a writer waits for the comments. so please do comment

yes

I second.

Regards

 

[komaalrani]

Awesome update
संध्या भाभी को फाग का रस मिल गया है अपने देवर से ।एक बार पूरी फिल्म बनते बनते रह गई
चंदा भाभी और रीत में जबरदस्त मस्तियां चल रही है दोनो एक दूसरे पर भारी पड़ रही है

संध्या भाभी के साथ पूरी फिल्म भी बनेगी अगली पोस्ट में

 

[komaalrani]

Sirf honth hi kyon didi aapne to sab kuch bhigo dia,ab kese bataun.
Adbhut sexyyyyy update

सच में भीग गया क्या ?

इसी लिए तो लिखती हूँ।

Thanks so much.

 

[komaalrani]

फागुन के दिन चार भाग १९---गुंजा और गुड्डी

a mega update on page 255 please read, enjoy, like and comment.

 

[Rajizexy]

सच में भीग गया क्या ?

इसी लिए तो लिखती हूँ।

Thanks so much.

Koi aur puch ti to bta deti details
didi ab aap ko kese bataun mujhe sharm aati hai, itna to aap jaan hi gyi ho ke bheeg gyi thi meri.
"Rishton Me Haseen Badlav-part 2 started"
https://xforum.live/threads/rishton...:text=Rishton Me Haseen Badlav-part 2 started

 

[komaalrani]

बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब और मस्ती भरा अपडेट है लगता है आनन्द को एडवांस बुकिंग करवाके रहेगी

Thanks so much