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फागुन के दिन चार भाग २७
मैं, गुड्डी और होटल
is on Page 325, please do read, enjoy, like and comment.
मैं, गुड्डी और होटल
is on Page 325, please do read, enjoy, like and comment.
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Erotica फागुन के दिन चार
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रीत उस दहलीज पर है... जहाँ जवानी की उमंगें.. हर बार एक नया तराना छेड़ती है...
और मजा एक तरफा नहीं ... दोनों ओर से मजे की तान छेड़ी जाती है...
रगड़ने, मसलने और दबाने का काम दोनों ओर से किया जाता है....
खास कर जब एक टोली बनाकर ... धुन और लय के साथ पेश करने पर....
At the nick of the moment every character is special and his/her wittiest best to reply and counter reply..A very long but super update...as I mentioned before...the erotic teasing that you show in your updates...they are just mind blowing...
its a case of "so near...yet so far"...
the teasing reaches so far...that the reader might think about the next step (actual sex) will happen but you smartly pull back...
like the foreplay between Guddi and Anand Babu after she comes out of shower...
the "description" of bhoot....chudail Gunja very sexy though...
each section of the update was a "page turner" (I am sure you understand the meaning of it) dripping with pure erotica...
the erotica is superbly enhanced by the "matter of facts" dailogbaazi between the characters...Anand Babu, Gunja, Guddi, et al
For you to come up with such a super long update..focussing mostly on 2 characters..Gunja and Guddi...it takes special talent..
As I had appreciated you earlier also...reading the Holi updates, especially coming from you...one is really tempted to play Holi...you describe the proceedings/play in outstanding terms..truly super update...
Am tempted to post this pic once again..even though it might be "repeatable"..but truly worth it. I can go on and on..but this pic aptly describes the update and your effort...
Bravo!!
komaalrani
और वय की तरुणी/किशोरी/युवती के साथ एक अलग हीं समां और मजमा बांध देती है...
खासकर हाजिरजवाबी तो कमाल की है...