★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2019 ~ Reviews Thread ★☆★

[harshit1890]

Delusion by Hariya bhai aka mystery

Delusion... Word hee aisa hai ki story ka theme bheje me ghus jata hai... Par is case me delusion se jyada interesting story me kya ho raha hai , wo tha... Shuruat me laga ki accident ke baad sakham ko koyi superpower mil gayi hai and trust me , it wasn't bad at all... Yadi ye hua hota to coolest thing hota... Especially, death calculation... mere mann me bhi tha ek plot aisa hee , par .... Khair chhodo conversations were top notch aur doctor ki wo last line twist reveal hone ke baad bhi twist de gayi.... Didn't skip single line or single word... Awesome story harshit bhai...
P.s. delusion hata ke ek long story likho... Maja aa jayega

Apke pas to aise plot hamesha rahenge Thank you so much gyani bhai apko pasnd ayi ye bahut badi baat hai ab to apki istory ka intezar hai

 

[Mbindas]

Story = Ek Mukammal Mohabbat
Writer - Notebook

Behad hi lajawab update bhai.
Ek-ek shabdo ka prayog kiya hai aapne kabil-E-tarif hai. Aur jese ki aapne ek hero jo apni zubani suna raha hai uske har ek wakya me urdu ke shabdo ka upyog kiya hai ye bhi bohot hi sahi tha.

 

[Yug Purush]

Khwaab ek haqiqat by milan....

Usne dekha ki bache ne khana khatam kar liya hai toh usne apne bag se paani ki bottle nikali aur tiffin ko paani se bhar diya

Bc, itni achi laundi

Bahut hee meethi story thi bhai , itni meethi ki diabetes ho gaya... Kuch jyada hee....
Dialogues were dull... Sab jo sunte aa rahe hai wahi... Scenes ka bhi yhi haal tha... Story ka plot bahut badhia tha , par execution mere khyal se utne achchhe se nhi ho paya...
Title bahut jordar tha bhai... Khwab ? Wo bhi haqiqat ? Deep one ....

 

[The Immortal]

Bahut hi shandar story h Bhai .ek aisi kahani jisme pyaar jita kasss asli jindgi bhi aisi hoti

Sukriya Indrajeet Bhai . Mujhe Acha laga Apne MERI story padhi or apko story Pasand bhi aayi .

 

[The Immortal]

Review for - Khwaab-Ek Haqiqat
By Milan2010

First of all sukriya aisi ek kahani likhne ke liye jisme ek Sandesh bhi hai .
Kahani Ka flow bohat Acha hai . Padhte padhte story kab khatam ho Gayi pata hi Nahi Chala . Title bilkul Sahi fit hota hai story par . Bas ek baat thodi ajeeb lagi , jab shreyshi ne use MAAF Kar Diya tha to Arav Apne aap ko kyu doshi maan Raha tha .
Once again thank you for this lovely story .

 

[The Immortal]

Review for "Kal ho na ho"
By Suryaa

Ek bohat pyari aur simple si story hai ye , ek Achi kosis thi apki saagar Bhai, bas language ke chalte thoda padhne Mai problem aayi , agar language Sahi Hoti to ye ek bohat Achi story ho Sakti thi.
Sukriya for this story .

 

[Suryaa]

Review for "Kal ho na ho"
By Suryaa

Ek bohat pyari aur simple si story hai ye , ek Achi kosis thi apki saagar Bhai, bas language ke chalte thoda padhne Mai problem aayi , agar language Sahi Hoti to ye ek bohat Achi story ho Sakti thi.
Sukriya for this story .

The Immortal [/USER] bhai
thanks for comment

 

[The Immortal]

Review for वो कौन थी ??
By Chutiyadr

Pehle to bohat bohat sukriya Dr Sahab ek thriller story likhne ke .
hallucination ki ek Achi baat ya buri baat ye hai ki Jo hum dekhna chahte hai hame wahi dikhta hai . Jaisa ki Apne is story Mai dikhaya hai Madhu ke sath .
Puri story Ka flow bohat Acha tha , suspense last tak Raha or end Ka twist mujhe bohat Pasand aaya .
Ek Baar phir se sukriya is story ke liye .

 

[The Immortal]

Review for Adrishya bandhan...
Mr.raj1100

Ek Achi kosis thi Raj Bhai . Ladki ka thakur ke bete se sadi Hona , bete Ka namard Hona fir Bhai ko koi power type milna or fir sis saririk sukh dena . But last Mai romance Ko likhne mai kanjusi kyu ki thoda aur likhte .
Well thanx for this story .

 

[The Immortal]

Review for एक छोटी सी प्रेम गाथा
By Sanskari Larka

ye kya tha , itna jyada kyu Likha
Itni Achi story suru hone se pehle khatam Kar di .
Ek bohat pyari or simple love story . Jaisa name waisi story .
Sukriya sanskari Bhai is pyari si story ke liye .