★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2019 ~ Reviews Thread ★☆★

[Suryaa]

Emotional kar diya vire
Sach mai ....pde te pde thi
Rogte khade ho gae

Puri kahani meri aakho ki samne chlni lagi
Ki kesi ek maa baap ni apna sabe kuch apne bete ki leyi samarpite kar diya
Aur
Kesi uski
Nalayake ulade ni
Unka payda uthaya


Aur ha vire y khani aaj ki kadvi akekate hai
Meri khude ki gaawe mai esi 4 5 case ho gae hai
Jaha bahu aur bete nai melkar
Apni bhude maa baap aur sasur saas ko
Thile thile marne par majbur kar diya hai

Y kahani pde kar y sabhi baathie meri aakho ki aage ghum rahi thi


Ek baar mai sabe si kahuga
Y kahani pde kar ek baar
Veire ki leyi
Jor daar taliya baja do

Aur sabhi apne maa baap ko ute kar pranam kar ki aao
Kyuki
Hmari maa baap hi
Us vahi gutu ka vardan hai


Ahr aakhire mai vire
Esi hi kahaniya likhta rah
Mai dil si vahi guru si prathana karuga
Ki tu hi jeti
Vesi vire
Competetion ka nahi pata
Lekine hme sabe ka dile tuni jarur jet liya

Vahi guruji teri par y ....mahar banae rakhe

Sukuriya
Bhai
Mai apne puri kosis karuga

 

[Niks96]

REVIEW

STORY - JAD

WRITER- Niks96

LINK – https://xforum.live/threads/★☆★-xforum-ultimate-story-contest-2019-entry-thread-★☆★.6804/page-3#post-714416

PLOT – main pahle is story ka naam जद pad rha tha lekin iska naam जड़ hai,ye mujhe story padte padte samjh me aayi …

Story short and sweet type ki story hai ,jado se jude rahne ki bat kahi gai hai ,ek bujurg apni pidhi ke bare me kya sochta hai aur ganw se use itana lagaw kyo hai yahi batane ki ek koshis ki gai hai ..

Bhasha bahut hi achchi hai,lkhne ka style bhi mujhe bahut pasand aaya ..

Note for writer-niks bro aapki writing style mujhe bahut hi pasand aayi ,aapki bhasa aur shabdo me pakd bhi bahut achchi hai,iska ek hi matlb hai ki aap ek achche writer ho , jo chij pasand nahi aayi wo ye ki story bahut hi chhoti thi ,jab itani achchi writing style hai aapki aur itana achcha likhte ho to story ko thoda aage badha sakte the,sach me ager aap ise thoda aur lamba likhte to bhi reader bore nhi hote kyoki apki writing me logo ko bandh kar rkhne ki takt hai ..

Khair short and sweet wala formula bhi achcha hai ,aapne apni bat achche se kahi ye hi kaafi hota hai ek story ko complete karne ke liye…

Best of luck for contest….

Sabse phele to DR. saab ka shukriya unke itne ache review ke liye.

Dusra me aapka aabhar prakat karna chahunga meri writing style ki itni hausla afzai ke liye...me apke aur is forum par mazood aur digaz writers ke jaise to nhi likh pata.. par jo bhi thoda bhot likhta hu usme apna sarv-shresht dene ki koshis karta hu.

Aur teesri baat ye koi banai hui kahani nhi thi ek real incident tha jo mere saat hua...to bas usi incident ko seedhe-sache sabdo me pirone ki koshis ki hai isliye utna hi likha jitna mere saat gujra.

Baki ant me aapka ek aur bar dhanyewad karna chahunga aur saat hi aapko contest ke liye shumkamnaye deta hu.

Dhanyewad

 

[Niks96]

mere dimag ka to dahi ho gaya yar par story badhiya thi

Shukriya bhai apko kahani achi lgi...aur apke dimag ka dhi hua uske liye mafi chahunga

 

[Hellohoney]

" Ek Mukammal Mohabbat "

Spoiler

Har kisi ko kabhi na kabhi kisi na kisi se mohabbat jaroor hoti hai lekin har mohabbat mukammal ho aisa jaroori nahi hota hai lekin doston kabhi kabhi mohabbat ka mukammal na hona hi uska mukammal hona hota hai .

Kuchh aisi hi meri mohabbat bhi thi . Mai Arman Khan Vellon ka Shakespeare us wakt engineering ke 1st semester me tha jab uska deedar hua . Jab maine use pahli baar dekha to meri duniya ruk si gayi thi . Wo class ki first bench par akeli aur khamosh baithi thi . Na jane kyu koi uske sath nahi baitha tha . Aisa nahi tha ki wo badsurat ya khatarnaak dikhti thi balki wo to koyale ki khan ka eklauta heera thi . Wo sach me itni haseen thi ki aag ko bhi use dekh kar jalan hone lage . Uski neelmani jaisi chamakdaar aankhein aur chehre par faili bala ki khamoshi ek sukoon deti thi .


Uska pahnawa aur outer appearance use kisi Ambani ki aulaad sabit kar rahe the jo cheekh cheekh kar kah rahe the ki door raho mujhse . Tum is kabil bhi nahi ki mere khwab dekh sako . Lekin doston wo Ishq hi kya jisme ego na hurt ho . Maine apne baju me baithe ek drum jaise ladke se poonchha ,

" wo ladki Akeli kyu baithi hai ? "


" kyu ki wo Ajeeb hai . "


" Ajeeb matlab ? "


" khud dekh lena waise meri salaah ye hai ki door hi rahna usase . "


Wo Drum jaisa ladka mujhe muft ki warning dekar apne vishal chehre ko fer kar baith gaya lekin mujhe yakeen ho gaya tha ki yahi All India Radio mera best friend banega . Usase maine aur bhi maloomaat haasil ki us ladki ke baare me . Wo drum mujhse pahle aaya tha college me aur mai thoda late kyu ki mera admission thoda late hua tha . Wo kya hai na ki mai last counselling ki bachi khuchi seat ka malik bana tha isliye kisi se khas rabta nahi kar saka tha .

Ishq me insan jahil ho jata hai . Mere sath bhi yahi hua . Maine us ladke ki baat nahi mani aur kabhi chori chori to kabhi kisi bahane se us ladki ko tadne me laga raha jabki wo mujhse poori tarah anjan thi .


Use ghoorna mera roj ka kaam ho gaya tha . Mai jaan boojh kar sabse peechhe ki bench par is tareeke se baithta ki wo mujhe dikhti rahe . Mera haal kuchh is tarah ho gaya tha ki ,

" Is duniya ke shor me jab
Tum sa koi mil jata hai ,
Baatein ho ya na ho
Dil jaroor bahal jata hai "

Abb mai roj college jane laga tha . Ammi hairani se poonchh bhi leti thi ki aisa kaun sa karishma ho gaya hai ki mera man padhai me lagne laga hai . Mai ammi se mashroofiyat ka bahana kar ke khisak gaya wahan se par mujhe pata tha ki unki tajurbekaar aankhon se mera ye naya rang bach nahi paya hai aur apni chhoti bahan Ashana se to maine khud hi uske bare me sab bata diya tha . Kitna hasi thi wo .


Waise mashroof to mai ho gaya tha . Uski galiyon ke fere lagane me bhale uski colony ka guard danda lekar daudata tha . Sham ke time uski coaching ke samne ka tea stall mera fix adda hota tha . Wo mujhe kabhi notice bhi nahi karti thi par uski ek ek ada meri aankhon se nahi bachti thi .

Ek din lecture ke beech me hi uske peechhe baitne wali ladki ne us par fabti kasi ,

" kitni ajeeb hai na , egoist kahi ki , baap ke paise ka gurur hai , "

Sath baithi ladkiyon ne uski haan me haan milai par wo kuchh boli nahi balki lecture ke beech me hi uth kar bahar chali gayi aur apne ajeeb hone par ek aur mohar laga gayi . mai bhi bina kuchh soche samjhe uske peechhe nikal gaya is baat se bekhabar ki mai Khurana sir ko meri lene ka solid plot de raha tha .

Frankly speaking mechanical engineering ke char salon me waise bhi jane kinte Khurana aane wale the meri life ko jhand karne to unse dar kar mai apni pahli ashiqi ko thode hi sharm sar karne wala tha .


Wo teji se chalti huyi college ke garden ki ghas par baith gayi . Mai hamfta hua use door se hi dekh raha tha . Usne shayad hi mujhe notice kiya ho lekin meri aakhon ne itne door se hi uski aankhon ke moti ko uske gaalon par fisal kar dam todte notice kar liya tha . Mai use tab tak dekhta raha jab tak ki wo second lecture ke liye class me nahi chali gayi . Mai bhi seene ko chauda kiye ja kar apne kone me virajmaan ho gaya .

Last bench me baithne ka ek fayeda hua tha ki mai writer ban gaya tha . Us par Poetry likhne laga tha . Kabhi uski aankhon ki tarif to kabhi uski julfon ki tarif likhte Ek mahina kaise paar ho gaya pata hi nahi chala .

Student Union election sir par aa chuke the . Mujhe bhi jana pada kyu ki mera drum bhi khada tha election me . Parche par likhe dhamakedar slogans mere hote the . Ek din parche chipkate time samne wali party se panga ho gaya . Laat ghoose chalne lage . Wo bhi beed se dekh rahi thi . Ijjat ka sawal tha . Khoob mara maine aur usase bhi jyada maar khai . Haath toot gaya aur ek aankh fuse ho gayi par doston maine cheekhna to door uff tak nahi kiya kyu ki wo dekh rahi thi .


Jab laad faand ke ghar pahunchaya gaya to abba hujur ne baaton ka wo jahar ugla ki ek baar ko to mujhe check karna pada ki kya sach me kaan se khoon to nahi nikal raha hai lekin ammi ke sparsh ne chot aur abba ki baaton dono ke dard ko khatm kar diya tha . Ammi hamesha mere aur abba ke beech aa jati thi . Doston Abba aur mera rishta un unche pahadon jaisa tha jo door se to bahut khoobsurat najar aate hai par kareeb jane par unme darare najar aati hain aur Ammi us barish ki tarah thi jo apne sath sukoon aur thandak lati hai .


Ammi ne rote huye apne sir ki kasam de dali ki next 7 days college nahi jana hai . Doston dil fatt gaya tha ammi ki kasam se . yun laga ki sabse bada dard to ammi ne hi de dala lekin uski udti julfon se kahi jyada mujhe ammi ki num aankhon se pyaar tha . Uske Gucci perfume ki khushbu se jyada ammi ke aanchal se aati mamta ki khushbu se pyaar tha to mai ho gaya ammi ke kasam me kaid . Na don beet rahe the na raat kat rahi thi .


7 din baad jab college pahuncha to drum aur baki doston ne khule dil se swagat kiya mera yani vellon ke Shakespeare ka kyu ke Drum dar kar ne naam bhale wapas le liya tha par hamari dosti fevicol ka majboot jod ban chuki thi . Par wo nahi aayi thi . Poore din uska intejar karta raha par wo nahi aayi . Maine drum se poonchha par wo bhi kuchh nahi janta tha uske baare me . Sham ko coching gaya par wahan bhi nahi aayi thi wo . Mera dil baitha ja raha tha . Kaise raat kati mai hi janta hoon . Doosre din mai college jaldi pahuch gaya aur class ki hi ek ladki se uske baare me poonchha jisase wo kabhi kabhi baat karti thi .


" Hi Noor "


" Hello "


" mai Arman "


" sabhi jante hain aap ko "

Noor ne muskura kar kaha to mujhe yaad aaya ki bc mai isase poonchhun kya mai to apni muhobbat ka naam hi nahi janta hoon . Ya khuda , aaj pata chal gaya pyaar sirf andha hi nahi balki jahil bhi hota hai . mujhe apni muhobbat ka naam tak nahi pata tha . Khair kaise bhi kar ke maine poonchh hi liya ,


" wo tumhari seat ke aage jo gori si , badi badi aanhon aur bhoore balon wali khoobsurat si ladki baithti hai na , wo kyu nahi aa rahi ? Sab theek to hai na ? "

itna poonchhna tha ki Noor ne mujhe yun muh bana kar dekha jaise maine use karele ka joons pila diya ho . Wo mujhe khatarnak aankhon se ghoorti huyi wahan se chali gayi . Kya kusoor tha mera , sirf itna ki apni mohabbat ki khoobsurti ka bakhan karte samay ye bool gaya ki " ek ladki ke samne doosri ladki ki tareef swasthya ke liye hanikarak hoti hai ."

Mai hatash pareshan college ke garden me usi jagah ja baitha jahan wo baitha karti thi . Mere dimag me bhoochal macha hua tha ye janane ke liye ki wo kyu nahi aai . Mai apni soch me gum tha ki tabhi ek pahchani si khushbu mere ird gird fail gayi . Najar utha kar dekha to mere samne bilkul paas me wo khadi thi . Uska haseen chehra chand to julfe kali ghatayein lag rahi thi .


" kaise ho ? "

Uski khanakdar awaaj kaano me padi to dil tham liya maine .

Doston pahli baar mujhe ammi ke alawa kisi aur ne meri khairiyat poonchhi thi wo bhi formality me nahi . Mere dil ki khushi kab meri aankhon se chhalak uthi mujhe pata bhi nahi chala . Meri paneeli aankhon ko dekh uska raushan chehra udas ho gaya aur wo boli,


" mai baad me aaun ? "


" are nahi please baitho ."

Hamne pahli baar words exchange kiye . Meri dhadkane itni tej ho gayi ki mujhe dar lagne laga ki mere dhadkano ki awaaj kahi wo na sun le .


" tumhari aankhein geeli hain. "

Wo apni khusbudar gulabi chhoti si rumal meri ore badhate huye muskurayi .


" haan wo bas aise hi . "

Meri baat sun wo yun hasi jaise sab samjh gayi ho .


" Noor ne bataya tum mujhe poonchh rahe the ? "


H..haan.

Ya khuda itni jaldi usne ise bata bhi diya aur ye aa bhi gayi matlab aag dono taraf hai barabar lagi huyi .


" tumhara dard theek hai abb ? "



" aaj poori rahat mil gayi hai . "

Na jane ksise nikal gaya mere muh se par wo bhi muskura di shayad sab samjh rahi thi par ladkiyon ki wo jaanboojh kar anjaan banne ki adadt uff khuda bachaye katl bhi kar jati hain aur hall bhi poonchhti hain .

Thodi der ke liye ham dono ke beech khamoshi pasar gayi . Door se use taktaki laga kar dekhne wala mai uske samne aate hi bilkul jadd ho gaya tha .


" Mera naam Artika hai . "


" mai Arman hoon . "

Wo muskura di to meri ladkhadati himmat ko thodi himmat aayi .


" tum kyu nahi aayi thi kal ? "


" tum bhi to 7 dino se nahi aa rahe the ? " Usne apni zulfon ko ungliyon se kaan ke peechhe karte huye kaha .


Uski baat sun Mera dil kiya ki mai abhi uth kar nachne lagu lekin wo dar kar bhag jati isliye khud ko samhal liya .


" Dr ne bed rest bola to ammi ne seriously le liya ."

Meri baat sun wo khilkhila padi . Doston yun laga mano mere kaanon me sitar baj uthe ho . Jaise filmo me hota hai bilkul waise hi sara back ground pouse ho gaya sirf ham dono hi normal the . Muskurate , sharmate bas fark itna tha ki ham filmo ki tarah acting nahi kar rahe the .


" Coffee to peeti hongi na aap, yahan canteen me bahut achchhi coffee milti hai ?"

Maine himmat kar ke poonchha .


" tappari ki chai kabhi nahi pi maine . peene chale ?"

Ya khuda usne mujhe bahar chalne ke liye kaha matlab wo mere sath ghoomna chahti thi . Mai mare khushi ke kuchh bol bhi nahi paya sirf gawaron jaise battisi nikal kar rah gaya .


Bina ijhaar - ikraar ke hi ishq ka silsila chal pada . Class me Uske baju wali seat abb meri thi . Drum ki to wo bhabhi ban chuki thi . Canteen me ek plate me dono samose khate par chatni sari uski hoti use pasand thi na . Ghar me RO water se bani coffee pine wali wo mere sath ghoom ghoom kar golgappe khati .

Mall , pvr , shopping use kuchh bhi nahi pasand tha . Wo mere sath jheel ke kinare jati , door tak paidal chalti rahti . Park me bachon wale jhoole par baithti . Kulfi dilane ki jidd karti . Ghanto bina thake behisab baatein karti par achanak hi khamosh ho jati aur uske chehre par utar aata syah dard jo mujhe dara deta tha .

Ek din Usne jaise mere man ki baat padh li thi .


" Mai ajeeb hoon na . "


" Aise kyu bol rahi ho ? "


" sab to yahi bolte hain. "


" ajeeb nahi ho par tum alag ho . Tum shayad wo shant dariya ho jiske seene me bala ki halchal dabi huyi hai . Tum shayad wo dua ho jo bechain dilon ke rahat ke liye padhi gayi ho . "

Maine uske un anjan se jakhmo par apne alfaajon ka marham laga diya .


Khair mere pyaar ki khumari uss
Din thoda to kam huyi thi jab maine first semester exams ki notice dekhi .

" are exam bhi honge kya ? "

Mere sawal par poori class has padi thi par sach kahun to I was damn serious kyu ki college me ek padhai chhod sab kuchh kar liya tha maine .

Abb Wo mere liye bhi notes banati . Mujhe important chapters samjhati aur mai use dekhta rahta . Wo naraj bhi hoti thi lekin mai mana leta tha . First paper hi khurana ke subject ka tha jise dekh kar meri fat gayi kyu ki ye sare questions to mai dekh hi pahli baar raha tha .

Khurana sir mere samne baithe huye the . Unko class se koi matlab nahi tha . Unka to target mai tha . 2 hr nikal gaye aur meri sheet kori . Aaj sari class meri dushman thi jo yun sheet par sheet le rahe the jaise hod lagi ho . Wo bhi sir jhukaye likhe ja rahi thi . Sirf mai free tha . Saikdon ubasiyan aur jane kitne tarane gunguna chuka tha .

Tabhi wo uthi aur Khurana sir ke paas jakar boli ki uski pen band ho gayi . Khurana ne meri side dikha kar kaha " wo sahab formality ke liye aaye hain le lo unki pen " . wo aayi aur palak jhapkte hi uski aur meri sheet changed .( roll number alphabetical order me tha to wo mere just peechhe baithi thi ) Mai awaak tha par wo normal . Usne mera paper bhi solve kiya .

Par har paper me to aisa ho nahi sakta tha . Sirf ek do paper me pass tha mai baki me Back lag gayi par uske highest marks . Maine fail hone ke baad bhi uske top karne ki khushi manai to usne mujhse wada le liya ki aisa dobara nahi hona chahiye kyu ki hame kuchh ban kar ghar waalon ko bhi to face karna hai . Uske bina kahe mai samjh gaya ki wo hamari shadi ki baat kar rahi hai .


Ham dono par ek dooje ka rang bahut hi gahra chadha tha . Mai holi me rang khelne laga tha to wo eid me sewaiya banane lagi thi . Ham dono sath me diwali ke diye jalate aur ramjan me iftari bhi sath hoti thi . Maine uske liye dargaah me puja ki to usne mere liye mandir me namaaj padh dali . Mai uski mehndi me apna naam khojta to wo meri poetry me apna wajood .


Wo mujhse sirf apni baat karti aur mai usase duniya jahan ki . Mai jab apne ghar walon ki baatein karta to wo gaur se sunti par apne ghar waalon ka jikar kabhi nahi karti thi aur mera unconditional love uske jazbaaton ka samman karta tha .


Yun hi jhoomte ghoomte 4 saal beet gaye . Engineering complete ho chuki thi aur asali jaddojaht shuru ho gayi thi . Job hunting karne me ham dono hi jute the . Chahte the ki Jaipur se kahi bahar ek sath job lag jati to nikal jate yahan se lekin Sab kuchh hamari soch ke jitna asaan nahi hota hai .

Doston Mujhe samaj ki sabse buri baat ye lagti hai ki jaise hi ladki apna college poora karti hai sabhi haath dho kar uski shadi ke peechhe pad jate hain . Artika ke ghar me bhi same halat paida ho gaye . Mujhe yaad hai wo kitna chidhti thi ye baatein batate huye .


Ek din kadake ki thand me ham jheel ke kinare mile . Gunguni dhoop me uska saath bada pyara lag raha tha lekin wo khamosh aur udas thi . Roj ki tarah chahak nahi rahi thi .


" kya hua itni pareshan kyu ho ? "


" Arman mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai. "


" Kaisa dar ? "


" kal papa mummy se kah rahe the ki unhone mera rishta apne dost ke bete ke sath karne ka faisla kar liya hai . "

Mai sach me ghabara gaya tha Doston kyu ki Artika se shadi ke liye to koi gadha hi mana kar sakta tha .


" tumne to mujhe dara diya Artika "


" mai dara nahi rahi hoon tumko . Jante ho kyu mai apni family ki baat kabhi nahi karti tumse ? "



" Kyu "


" kyu ki mere papa bahut gusse wale hain . Unke liye unka paisa aur , jhoothi shan unki aulaad se bhi jyada ahamiyat rakhti hai . Unke liye pyaar ki koi ahmiyat nahi hai . Mujhe dar hai ki hamare bare me janne ke baad kahi wo ham dono ke sath .... unhone bhaiya ko ghar se nikal diya kyu ki unhune apni marji se ladki pasand ki thi jab ki ladki same cast ki thi . Un dono ka kusoor sirf itna tha ki ladki gareeb thi . Par ham dono ka to majhab hi alag hai . "

Bolte bolte chup ho gayi thi wo .


" majhab aur dharm ke thekedar hain kya wo ? "
Mujhe gussa aane lagi thi .


" nahi par Majhab aur dharm ke thekedaron ke sath utha baithna hai . Wo apne dost ke bete se meri shadi isliye fix kar rahe hain kyu ki unka dost unka partner bhi hai . "

Wo khoi si bolti ja rahi thi .


"Are ham adult hain . Educated hain . pyaar karte hain ek doosre se . Koi nahi jaan tumhare papa ko bhi dekh lenge . "

Us pal shayad kuchh aur bhi mangta to mil jata . Hamare samne ek 6 fit ka saand gusse me apne natune fula kar khada tha . Ye Artika ke chacha the jo apne bhai ke doosre tareeke wale kaam yani kale dhandhe samhalte the . Jab tak ham dono unke aane ke sadme se ubar pate unhone Artika ke gaalon par apni poori takat se jhapad raseed kar diya . Wo aisa giri jameen par ki uth hi nahi payi . Mai Artika ko samhalne dauda hi tha ki mere sir par peechhe se kisi bujdil ne war kar diya . Mai bhi gir gaya . Khoob tudai huyi meri . Haath , pair aur sir sab toot foot gaya tha .


Jab hosh aaya to ICU me tha . Ammi ro ro kar apni jaan dene par tuli huyi thi . Aisa nahi tha ki ammi ko meri gair majhabhi mohabbat sweekar thi par Mere hosh me aate hi duaon ki barish kar di unhone par abbu mujhse bahut naraj the . Unhone meri marnasann awstha me hi mujhe kosna shuru kar diya .

Abba ne mujhe khandan ke naam par cancer , kodh jane kin kin upadhiyon se nawaja . Un sab ko mere aur Artika ke bare me sab pata chal chuka tha . Khoob khari khote suna rahe the ya yun kahein ki Abba mere liye samaj ke majhabi thekedaron ki cheekhti huyi awaaj ban chuke the .

Maine khamoshi se samaj ki wo karkash awaaj sun li thi par mere andar jo jazbat the na unhone samaj ki wo bhaddi awaj suni aur na hi uski bandisho ko manne ke liye taiyar hua . Mai hospital ke bistar par khamosh pada tha par mera man cheekh cheekh kar kah raha tha ki " abba mai aap ka hi beta hoon naa ? Kyu mere sath sautela vyohar kar rahe hain ."

Doston khamoshi ki cheekh ki awaaj hoti to bahut unchi hai par use koi sun nahi sakta hai . Mera dam ghut raha tha wahan par mai asahay tha . Mera sharir mera sath dene ki halat me nahi tha lekin Artika ki fikar meri jaan lene par tuli hui thi par mai lachar tha .


Mai kya karu ? Kaise jaun us tak ? Wo kis haal me hogi ? Mere andar sawaalon ki jang chhidi huyi thi mere dimag se . Mujhe bilkul samjh nahi aa raha tha ki apno se kaise jang ladi jati hai aur bina unko haraye kaise jeeta jata hai . Mera hospital ke bed par lete rahna mushkil ho raha tha par mai majboor tha . Ek diljale Aashiq ki tarah apni yaadon par khach karne ke liye wakt khojta pada hua tha .


10 din baad jab discharge mila to kisi ki parwah kiye bina toote haath , pair aur sooje thopde ke sath mai Drum ki car par lad kar Artika ke ghar ja pahuncha .

Doobte suraj ki haar aur failte andhere ki jeet ka ehsas mujhe Artika ke dulhan jaise saje ghar ko dekh kar ho gaya tha . Himmat kar ke maine uske ghar se nikalte ek shakhs se poonchha .


" ghar kyu saja hai bhai ? "


" Kal Artika madam ki shadi thi "

Usne mujhe upar se neeche tak dekha aur chala gaya .

Yun laga mano mere kano me kisi ne pighla hua sheesha udel diya ho . Drum mujhe samhalne laga lekin jane jakhmo ki wajah se aayi kamjori thi ya Artika ki judai ka gam mai apne hosho hawas kho kar sadak par dher ho gaya . Drum mujhe mere ghar laya .

Jab mai hosh me aaya to Mere abba ne koi gussa nahi kiya mujh par shayad Drum ne un logon ko sabkuchh bata diya tha .

Badi lambi syah raat thi . Mere sapno ke moti bikhar chuke the jinko pirona abb asambhaw tha . Meri rooh ki cheekhein mere ammi abbu ko sunayi nahi pad rahi thi . Meri chhoti bahan ki siskiyan mere kaano ke parde faad rahi thi . Wo janti thi ki mai andar hi andar mar raha hoon . Meri aatma samaj ki darindgi ko sah nahi paa rahi thi .

Mai marna chahta tha lekin mar bhi nahi sakta tha kyu ki mai to thahra aashiq mar jaunga par mere ghar wale mere baad baar baar marenge . Sari raat meri room ki chhat par charmarata pankha aur paas pada ammi ka dupatta mujhe lalkaar rahe the lekin bahan ki masoom laal aankhein mujh par najar rakhe huye thi jaise wo janti thi ki mera kaal usi ki wajah se mere kamre me nahi ghus paa raha tha .


" hamare ishq ka safar aasan nahi tha par ise mukammal karne ke liye ham dono ki jarurat thi . Manta hoon ishq ka usool hai ki wo jaan ka jurmana leta hai isi liye maar dala apne andar ke arman ko maine aur apne khwabon ki raakh ko apne kaleje me samete mai pariwar ke sath jaipur chhod kar hamesha ke liye mumbai chala gaya ."


Taliyon ki gadgadahat ke sath Jaipur ke 5 star hotal ka hall goonj utha . Saikadon cameras ki chamkati flashlights samne baithe 35 varshiya sajeele naujwan ke roub ko badha rahi thi lekin uski aankhon ke khali pan ko nahi pakad pa rahi thi . Ye naujawan hajaron jawan dilon ki dhadkan famous novelist Arman khan the jinke pahle hi Novel ki jordar success ne use aaftaab par bitha diya .

Media ka tanta laga hua tha . Sawalon ki bauchhar ho rahi thi jo Novel se jyada uski niji jeewan me jhankne ki koshish thi.


" Arman sir kya ye Novel aap ki real story par based hai ? "

Jaan boojh kar jakhmo par namak dalne ki koshish shuru ho gayi .


" ji haan "


" sir aap ne us bewafa ladki ko sunaya kyu nahi ?


" wo bewafa nahi thi balki usase bewfayi karwai gayi thi . Usase mohabbat ka katl karwa kar apne khokhli pratishtha ka jashn manaya gaya tha ."

Arman ke dil me Artika ki mohabbat jas ki tas saanse lerahi thi , use majhabi fande apne jaal me nahi kas paye the .
" Drum ki kabhi yaad nahi aayi Arman ? "


Bheed ko cheerti ek awaaj Arman ke kano me padi . Ye awaj Drum ki thi . Arman bhagta hua Drum ke paas pahuncha . Drum shayad is mulakat ko media ka hissa nahi banana chahta tha isliye Arman ko lekar bahar nikal gaya bahar Noor khadi thi . Un dono ko dekh Arman ro pada . Yun to dard ke saye me jeena seekh liya tha usne lekin purane jakhmo ke Rajdaaron ko dekh toot gaya Arman . Teeno khob roye gale lag kar . Drum ne Arman ke aansu ponchhe ,


" Kaisa hai Arman ? "


" jinda hoon , ammi abbu naaj karte hain mujh par . Achchhi Job bhi hai . Kul mila kar khush hoon . "


" Maine poonchha kaisa hai tu "

Drum ne Arman ke kandhon ko jhinjhodte huye poonchha .


" kaisa ho sakta hoon uske bina . Jinda lash hoon mai . Apne ishq ki rakh hoon mai . 10 saal ho gaye par uski judai ka jakhm sookha nahi balki nasoor ban gaya hai . "

Arman apne aansuon ko rok nahi pa raha tha .


" Nikah kar liya ? "


" nahi aur na hi kabhi karoonga . Mai sirf uska hoon aur rahoonga ."


" ok chal tujhe kisi se milwana hai ? "


" kasase ? "


" Are chal to sahi "


Drum aur Noor Arman ko shahar ke doosre chhor par sthit ek mental Asylum me le gaye .


" yahan kaun hai Drum ? "


" Anarkali hai jise uske pariwar waalon ne Jinda yahan ki deewaron me chunwa diya hai . "


" k...kya bakwas kar raha hai ? "


Noor ne apni hand bag se ek pass nikala aur security aur doctor ko dikha kar aage badh gayi . Drum aur Arman khamosh uske peechhe chal diye . Arman ke seene me hahakar macha hua tha. Noor ek kamre ke samne ruk gayi . Arman teji se chalta hua us room me gus gaya .

Chhota sa khali room tha jiske ek kone me khidki ke paas ek bed rakha tha jis par ek aurat lambe baalon ko bikhere baithi huyi thi jo Khidki se bahar dekh rahi thi jaise kisi ki raah dekh rahi ho .

Kamre ki deewaron par na jane kya kya likha tha par ek line padh kar Arman teji se uss aurat ki ore bhaga .

" mai ajeeb nahi hoon balki sabse alag hoon . "

Ye Artika thi . Arman ki Artika . Sharir kankal ban chuka tha . Neelmani aankhein khokhli ho chuki thi . Sharir se badbu aa rahi thi . chehare par bala ki khamoshi thi . wahi khamoshi jo 10 saal pahle kabhi kabhi Arman ko pareshan kiya karti thi .

" Artika meri jaan ye kya ho gaya tumko . "

Arman baar baar uske sookhe kate fate honth aur chehre ko choomta hua dahade maar kar ro pada . Kafi der rota raha par Artika bhaw shunya si bahar dekhti rahi . Abb tak usne Arman ko ek najar dekha bhi nahi tha . Badi mushkil se Drum Arman ko room se bahar lekar aaya .


" Kya hua hai ise ?"
Arman ne rundhe gale se kaha .


" tumhare hospital jane ke baad iske papa ne ise bahut peeta . Iska khana aur pani tak band kar diya unhone aur jabran shadi karwane lage to mandap me hi isne chhuri se apne haath ki nas kaat li . Bahut gahra ghaw tha . Artika ka rishta toot gaya to iske papa ne bhi isase rishta tod liya yahan tak ki hospital bhi nahi le gaye . Padosi lekar gaye Asptal par tab tak Khoon bahut bah chuka tha . Badi mushkil se jaan bachi iski . Hospital se poori tarah theek bhi nahi huyi thi ki wahan se bhag kar tumhare ghar pahunchi . Par tum log hamesha ke liye jaipur chhod kar ja chuke the . Ye sadma bardasht nahi kar payi aur pagal ho gayi . Gharwale 10 saal pahle yahan chhod kar chale gaye aur aaj tak laut kar dekhne bhi nahi aaye . Sirf mai aur Drum aate hain isase milne . Jab tumhare yahan ki visit ka pata chala to socha tumko milwa dain . "

Noor sisak sisak kar bolti rahi aur Arman sunta raha . Bahut kathin samay tha uske liye . Artika use 10 saal baad is haal me mili thi jabki wo sochta tha ki Artika apni duniya me ram gayi hogi . Use koi bahut pyar karne wala mil gaya hoga jo uska hakdar hoga .

Lekin Majhabi keedon ne jis ishq ko deemak ki tarah chat dala tha wo aaj phir se saanse le raha tha . Aaj Arman wapas apni Artika ko pa chuka tha aur rokne wala koi nahi tha .

Arman Drum ke sath mental Asylum ke office ki ore chal pada aur Noor aansu ponchhti huyi Artika ko taiyar karne chal di . Aaj tamacha jad diya tha Arman - Artika ki mohabbat ne majhab ki aag par rotiya senkne walon ke muh par . ek baar fir ye sabit ho gaya ki Mohabbat ka koi majhab nahi hota hai .



Note - Arman Artika ki mohabbat ki dastan poori tarah kalpnik hai . Iska kisi bhi vyakti , samaj ya varg vishesh ki kisi ghatna se koi talluk nahi hai . Kahani ko likhte samay poora dhyan rakha gaya hai ki ye kisi bhi dharm sampraday ki bhawnaon ko thes na pahunchaye lekin agar kisi ki bhawnaon ko thes pahunchti hai to mujhe khed hai .

Bhai ye story kasam se ruladiya yar bhot hi behtarin story he

 

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JAD

BY: NIKS96

Language - Hinglish​

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Purani Delhi railway station hamesha ki trah bheed se khacha-khach bhara hua tha...us bheed me se rahta bhante hue me shaam wali Delhi-Sharanpur local train ki aur bhada ja rha tha...kyuki mujhe ek dost ki shadi me shamli jana tha...ye meri us route par pehli yatra thi...kher jaise bhi karke me train me chada...me waqt se shayad thoda pehle aa gya tha...kyuki local train me wo bhi shaam wali me bethne ke liye seat uplabd thi...jo ki ek adbhud ghatna thi...jo log is route se daily up-down karte he shayad wo meri baat ko behter smaj payenge...

Kher me side wali seat par beth gya aur kaan me earphone lga kar gane sunne lga...train me pal-pal bheed badhti ja rhi thi...tabhi mere samne wali seat par ek budhe uncle beth gye...dekhne se karib 70-75 ke lag rhe the aur hatho me bent tha...muche ek dum safed thi jo unke chere par aai jhuriyo ke saat ache se suit kar rhi thi...is waqt tak train ek dum khacha-khach bhar chuki thi...bheed ka ye alam tha ki ek ladke ne apni tasreef meri seat par tika di...yani ab ek ki seat par do bethe the...train ne rengna shuru kiya...hawa ke halke thande thapade muh par pad rhe the...me hawa ke in thapado ko mehsus karta ankhe band kiye hue apne gaano me khoya hua tha...ki train ne brake lgaye mene ankhe kholi to dekha train kisi Delhi ke outskirt ke station par ruki thi...wo samne wale budhe uncle ne meri aur dekhar kuch bolna shuru kiya...jo earphone ki wjah se mujhe sunai nhi diya...mene earphone nikal diye aur unki baate sunne lga...

"ye saab kuch jungle pda tha jab me tumhari umr ka tha" Uncle ne bola...me bas garden hila kar unki baato me sehmati jtai...tab tak train fir se aage chalne lgi thi...

"yehi en patriyo ke paar mere dost ka gaav hua karta tha...ab to wo nahi rha 2 saal pehle guzar gya" uncle ne btaya..."ab to uncle ji ye seher ban chuke hai gaav kha bache hai" mene bola...

"bhae ab tame bhi to bdal gya hai hmare tame me log gaav me rehna pasand karte the...mujhe khub yaad hai jab me chota tha mere gaav me ek baniya hua karta tha khub mota paisa tha uske paas dinbhar seher me baniyagiri karta par shaam ko apni bel-gadi me gaav aa jata...
logo ne khub samjhaya ki itni dur roz aane jane se tumhari sehat kharab ho jaye gi aur uper se umr ka tagaza bhi ha wahi seher me ek ghar le lo... par usne kisi ki na mani...hamesha bas ek hi baat kehta "jo ped apni JAD se ukhad gya uska sukhna teh hai... JAD se juda hai tab tak hi hra-bhara hai" mujhe uski baat us waqt betuki malum hoti thi... ab 72 saal ka ho chala hu ab jakar us baniye ke bato ka mtlb smaj paya...par aaj-kal ke nojawan gaav ke nam se hi bhagte hai... ha mana gaav me utni suvidhaye nhi milti jitni sehero me milti hai...par iska ye matlab ye to nhi ki apni Jado se hi kat jaye... mene bhi 35 saal school me nokri ki hai roz subha cycle se jata aur shaam ko ghar aa jata...mujhe to kabhi koi asuvidha nhi hui... kher ab time tum jaise nojawano ka hai...mere jaise budho ki baat to bas ab chopal ya bus-train ki bheed-bhad me koi tum jisa sun leta hai...hahaha " uncle ne bola...mene bas unki bato me hami bhari....

"ab mera ye jo dost mra hai ise hi le lo...yha peeche iske gaav me iske purkho ki bhot zameen thi...ek waqt tha jab iske pariwar ka khub rutba tha is ilake me...par apne bacho ki baato me aakar sari zameen bech di...aur gaav chodkar Dilli me ja bsa...mene use khub samjhaya tha isa na kre par meri ek na mani balko ke moh me aakar aur uske balak bhi itne nalayak nikle sara pesa daru aur jue me uda diye...ab bhala khula pesa bhi kabhi bach paya hai jab tak wo zamin ke roop me hai tab tak hi surakshit hai...ab do baras pehle mra tha wo ginti ke das barah log the...jis gaav ko chodkar chaudhary banne seher aaya tha us seher ne bhi use na apnaya...bas wohi halat ho gyi dhobi ka kutta na ghar ka na ghat ka...bhale hi gaav me sukh suvidha na ho par admi ka maan saman to hota hai...jab wo marta hai to 50-100 admi arthi ke saat to jate hai...isliye me to yhi kehta hu admi ko ant tak apni JADO se juda rehna chahiye" uncle ne bola...mene garden hilakar swikarti di...

Ab halka-halka andhera ho chala tha aur vatavaran me thodi thand bhi badh gyi thi...uncle ne chadar se apna sharir dakh liya...train apni raftar se aage badh rhi thi...

"mere teen ladke hai ek dilli rehta hai, ek Noida aur ek Meerut...5 saal pehle meri gharwali ki maut ho gyi thi...teeno ne khub kha mujse ki pitaji hmare sath chalo seher...wha khub sukh-suvida milegi...par me na mana...ha manta hu ab mera sharir budha ho chala hai...ankho se bhi kam dikhta hai aur sunta bhi thoda uncha hai aur sath hi ghutno me bhi dard rehta hai...par iska mtlb ye to nhi ki me apne gaav apni JADO se alag ho jau...aur yehi nhi mere uper ek aur bhi jimedari hai apne peedhi ko unki jado se jode rakhna...chalo man lo me unki baat manke unke saat seher chala bhi jau...to mujhe pta hai jaise hi me yha se gya mere balak aur pota-poti ka samband apne gaav apni jado se turat tut jayega...
ab mere lare teez-tyoharo pe to wo log gaav aa jate hai...ha bhale hi mere marne ke baad wo jaise chahe kre... par me is khushi ke saat to mar paunga ki meri peedhi mere rehte hue apni JADO se judi rhi " uncle ne bola...

Tabhi gadi ek station par ruki aur uncle khade ho gye..."chalo beta mera station aa gya... mujhe umeed hai mene tumhe jada nhi pakaya hoga wo kya kehte hai tum nojwano ki bhasha me BOR nhi kiya hahaha" Uncle ne kha... "ji nhi uncle mujhe acha lga apse baate karke" mene bola...uncle ne apna haat mere sar par rakhkar ashirvad diya... aur train se utr gaye...ye train ka safar meri ab tak ki zindagi ka sabse yadgar safar tha... un uncle ne mujhe apni jado se jude rehne ka ek jivan bhar ka sabak diya... ab me chahe kitna bhi busy kyu na rehta hu apni life me par saal me kamsekam ek ya do baar apne gaav apni jado me jarur jata hu...​

SMAPT... ​

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Bhai maine na ek baar maine inception bhi samjh liya tha par dimag ka chabutara ban gaya iss kahani se.... Par ek baat agar usne resign kardiya to phir bhi office flat maine kyun reh rahi thi... But nothing matter kya pata wo bhi reality na ho

My Sweet Sister​

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My name is Vicky from Hyderabad and this incident happened when me and my sis went to Bangalore. i m 6 feet height and fair in color and my sis id 36-28-32 now u can imagine her ok we were traveling to Bangalore by bus and after reaching there the incidence has occurred

Than she asked me can I hug u, I surprisingly said its ok. Than she hugged me and said I love you. I told her u know my past than to. She said that is u r past this is u r present. Than after thinking I said ok. Than she asked me can we celebrate today’s day I asked her what about office Than immediately she called her office and gave some excused for interview.

Than sis asked me why they are asking the same. I said her so many couples are coming hear for having sex and this peoples are providing them rooms. She asked me whether I also took the same for my ex gf I said her yes we had sex hear only. Than she ask me can u take the same room which u used for first time sex with u r ex. I told her please don’t do this remind me old day and it will heart me lot.

Than she told that is u r past and I am u r present u can not do this thing for you are girlfriend. I said ok. Than we went to that room owner and asked for the room which I used first time with my ex. We hired that room and went inside. After reaching inside she immediately hugged me and again said me I love you lot. Than we slept on bed. She slept beside me.

Suddenly she said I am feeling hot can I remove my top. After hearing this my tool immediately stud up. I said her its up to u. than she remover her top what a beautiful boobs she was having inside the black bra. I was just looking at her boobs. She asked me with smile what r u looking. Is my books are beautiful or you are ex gf.

I said u have very beautiful boobs and also very beautiful body. But I am not dared to touch them. After removing her top she told why don’t u remove u r T Shirt and she only removed my. Than she ask me can I come up on u. I said ok. Than she slept on me and whispered on my ear “Dear I am all urs do what ever you wanna do”

Hearing this I was excited and hugged her tightly. Than she told me she was in love with me and she want to have sex with me than her hubby Than I slowly remover her bra and started sucking her boobs. Her milky white boobs chocolate nipple become red. Than I slowly removed her jeans and panty also o my goodness she had a clean shaved milky white pussy. She removed my jean ans and underwear and said ohoo u have so big cook I seen same in blue movies.

Than she told me “I am Virgin this is my First Time do it gently” hearing this I told myself I am going to beak a seal of a beautiful girl today it’s a lucky day for me and told her don’t wary u will be very happy.Than I starter playing with her boobs and slowly came down to her pussy, her pussy is already wet. Than I started licking her pussy.

And asked her u seen cook sucking in blue film, she understood what I mean to say and she told me to come in 69 position, and she started sucking my cook, we did the same for 10 mins. Than I told her that I am going to put my cook into her pussy.

She that spread her leg showed way to her pussy and to me do it very gently as this is my first time. I said don’t wary only while entering into u r hole it will pain a little ad than after u will enjoy it, and I kept by cook near the entrance of pussy hole and started rubbing the same, her pussy is already lubricated with pussy juice, I slowly started pushing my cook into her pussy. She started crying with the pain, I slowly entered full cook inside her pussy and waited till she feel comfortable.

I asked her r u comfortable can I start know, she said go-ahead, than I started moving in and out and sucking & squeezing her boobs, after some time she hold me tightly I understood that she is cumming, I asked her how u r feeling she told me thank you for making me woman I love you, keep fucking me don’t stop I am in haven, by hearing this I started with full speed and I asked her whether she is in safe period, she said yes,

I increased my speed and after 30 mins time I told her I am going to cum she told cum inside I wan feel it inside me. By hearing this I cum inside her and she also cum along with me and hugged me tightly. I slept on her in same position with keeping my cook inside her pussy till it reduce its size. While removing my cock I found some blood in my cook.

Same day we had sex for 4 time I also fucked her on her beautiful ass. Than she asked me is u r ex is good or I. I told her after fucking I felt like I fucked Aiswarya Rai as her friend call as duplicate of Aishwarya Rai. So friends here I must end my story. I hope u all will enjoy.


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DOSTI , PYAR AUR JINDEGI
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Jindegi maine aise bohat se waqt aate haine jab ham wo kar dete haine jo hamein nahini karna chaiye hota hai. Wo pal hota hai ki ham khade ho ke samna karein aur bol sake ki jo ho raha hai wo galat hai par log kya kahenge ye soch ke ham chup ho jate haine .Par jindegi bhar hamare dimag main ye khayal aata hai ki kash uss din thoda himmat dikhaya hota .Ham duniya ko hamre najar se dekhte hain aur sochte haine duniya bhi wohi kare but duniya hamko ek apni alag hi najar se dekhti hai aur problem yeh hai ki hamein na chahte hue bhi duniya ka niyam ko maan na padta hai .Dosti yeh ek aisa word hai jisse describe nahini bas feel aur nibhaya jaat hai but hamare duniya aaj bhi dosti ko ek alag hi najar se dekhti hai . Ladka , ladka ya phir ladki ,ladki dosti kare to thik hai par janha pe ladka aur ladki ki dosti ki baat aati hai hamar duniya chahe jitna modern hone ki baat kare apna asli rang dikhana suru kar deta hai . Yeh story bhi aise hi do jindegi ke bare maine hai jo shayad kuch aur khwaisein paal rahe the par duniya ke isi ghatiya khel ne unka jindegi ko alag hi mod pe le aaya . Mera naam Vikas hai bachpan se apne hisab se duniya ko dekha hai chahe phir koi mujhe sahi kahe ya kharap . School maine mere bohat se dost the aur maine bhi sab se ghulmilkar rehta tha . Ladke dost mere jitney karib the utne hi ladkiyan. Maine kabhi farak nahini karta tha ki ye ladka yeh ladki hai ya phir log kya sochenge .maine toh school maine bhi ladkiyon se choti choti baton maine ladh jaata tha .Teachers aur log bhi kehte the ki ladkiyon se duri banake rakh unse ladka hoke kyun ladhta hai jhagadta hai .par maine kabhi iss baat pe dhyan nahin diya shayad mere dimag maine kabhi ye khayal hi nahini aaya tha ya phir maine uss time kuch jada hi bachkana tha yeh sab chiz samjhne ke liye .waise toh jada tar school ke ladkiyon se maine ache se rehta tha par ek ladkithi sonali .pata nahini shayad wo kis mitti ki bani thi ya phir bilkool meri jaise thi use bhi duniya ka koi fikar nahini thi ki koi kya bolega .shayad isiliye hamre bich ka jhagda aur ladhai pure school maine charcha pe the .matlab ek doosre se ham itna hate karte the ki ek bahana nahini chhod te the ek doosre ko beizzati karne ko .

Iska ko wajha nahini tha ki ham ek doosre se k yun itna nafrat karte the na hi ham donoko ye yaad tha ki ham sab se pehle kab ladhe the par han yeh jaroor yaad tha ki aisa shayad hi koi din gaya ho jab ham na ladhe ho .10th class ke ,mid term maine hi wo school change karliya koi family problem ke chal te . Kasam se pura din maine khusi se nacha tha jab ye khabar mujhe pata chala . Uske jaane k eek hafte tak toh doston ko maine jamke treat diya par dhire dhire mujhe uski kami satane lagi . Mujhe khud bhi pata nahini tha ki aisa kyun ho raha hai , mujhe toh khush hona tha ki sonali school chod ke chali gayee .par shayad ab meri yeh aadat ho chuki thi ki uss se ladhta rahun aaj uske na hone se maujhe akelapan mehsoos hone laga tha . School maine sab shock main the ki achanak mujhe kya ho gaya jo hamesha hasta khelta ur chilata rehta tha ab wo bilkool chup sant aur kisi se jada baat nakrne wala bacha ban gaya tha .kasam se jitna mera 1 dinmaine complain hoti thi school maine wo next dedh saal maine na hui .ab 12th khatam ho gaya ab results aaneke baad maine college maine admission bhi kar liya .Ab maine thoda thoda change raha tha logon se batein bhi dhang se karne laga tha aur milne julne laga tha .

Ab meri college life sahi chal rahi thi .bich bich maine sonali ki khabar liya karta thaw o apne mama ke gaon maine hii reh rahi thi aur wanhi pe ek college maine admission bhi le liya tha . College suru hue lag bhag 3 mahine ho gaye the ki ek din mujhe mere ek dost ne mujhe bataya ki sonali ne college change kar li hai aur hamare college maine admission le liya hai . Ab mera science stream tha aur sonali ki arts toh hhum kabhi mil hi nahini paye the . Kyun ki arts aur science ki timing hamare college maine thoda differ karta tha . Jab maine yeh khabar suna ki sonali isi college maine admission liya hai pata nahini mera pura body hil gaya . Mujhe pata nahini tha maine khush hun ya uske aajane gussa hun .but ek bohat hi strange feeling aa rahi thi uss se kaise milun bas ehi khayal tha dimag maine aa rah tha .

Aise hi ek din main ecollege se lot raha tha to meri bike puncture ho gaya to mujhe puncture thik karane jane pada toh maine kafi late ho gaya tha . Ab jab maine lot rah that oh mujhe ek jagah ek cycle khadi hui dikhi road pe ladies cycle thi aur collge bag bhi cycle maine rakha hua tha . Maine bike wanhi rok diya aur aass pass dekhne laga .Aur jo mujhe doubt tha wohi hua tha road se thode dur ek ladki khadi thi aur usse ghere 4 ladke ,aur wo log uss ladki ko pareshan kar rahe the .Maine ussi aur badhne laga .Mere awaj se do ladke meri aur aane lage aur do wanhi uss ladki pass reh gaye .jab wo log thoda pass aye to unmaine se ek ladke ko maine janta tha junior tha wo mera .

Vikas :- oye kya kar rahe ho be tum yanha

Ladke 1 :- oye nikal yanha se teri matalab ki baat nahini hai .

Ladka 2:- vikas bhai kuch nahini raju uss ladki se pyar karta hai to bas usse propose kar raha hai

Vikas:- han toh yeh jagha he propose karne ki .Ek toh sham ka waqt ha aur upar se wo ladki akeli kal usse

Propose karne ko bol de nahini to ladki se mera baat karwa de phir maine chala jaunga

Aur maine ussi aur badhhne lag jaata hun .wo dono mere piche bol rahe the ki main wapas chala jaun. Tabhimaine un logon ke pass ponhach jata hun to kasam se ek pal ke liye maine chonk jaata hun kyun ki mere samne sonali khadi thi .wo bhi mujhe dekh rahi thi .

Ladka3:- oye tu yanha kya kar rah he vikas.

Vikas:- vikram ,chal kya rah he yanha pe .

Ladka3(vikram):-tere matlab ki kuch nahini he tu jaa maine bass sonali ko propose kar rah tha .

Vikas:- par wo toh interested nahini lag rahi hai.

Vikram- wo abhi thodi naraj he mujh se tu ja maine usse mana loonga .

Mujhe bhi lagta hai ki chalo sonali aur iskimatter hai maine chal ajat hun .tabhi mujhe sonali ke aankhon maine aansoo dikhte haine aur wo mujhe hi dekh rahi thi uski annken mano mujhe bohat kuch keh rahi thi .uske kapde ke halt se saf pata chal rah tha ke ksi ne usko jabrdasti khich ke lay hai .pata nahini uss pal mere andar kya hua mujhe laga ki isse yanha se le ke jaana he che kuch bhi ho jaye .

Vikas :- sun vikram maine isse leke jaa rah hun tujhe jo baat karni he phone pe kar lena ya phir kal college maine abhi bohat late ho gaya hai.

Vikram:- dimag mat kharab kar ek baar bol diya na sunai nahini de raha hai.

Vikas:- maine usse leke jaa rah hun jo karna hai kar le .sonali chal mere sath .

Vikram:- bohat galat kar raha he bol raha hai tu .

,aine phir bhi uske baat nahini suntan hun aur sonali ke hath pakad ke chalne lagta hun .tabhi vikram mere gale ko pakad leta hai aur chehre pe kas k eek mukka marta hai .to maine bhi usse maarne lag jata hun .tab wo teen bhi aajate haine .. Aur hamare bich mara mari hone lagte haine .tabhi wanhi pass maine jaate kuch log wanha pe aajate haien aur sab sulta dete haine.phir maine sonali ko bolta hun ghar jaane ke liye .maine bhi uske pich epich ebike chalake uske ghar tak jaata hun phir usse chod ke maine wapas apne ghar aajata hun . Actually maine mujhe bohat maar padi thi mare chere se khun nikal raha tha . Ghar maine pooche to bol diya football field maine thoda hatapayee ho gaya.but raat ko sonali ke ghar wale hamare ghar aaye toh ghar maine pata chal gaya .par maine unse nahini mila jab wo log aaye maine chup chap nikal gaya . Bas aise hi uske baad kuch din beet gaye. Ham dono raste maine mil te to the par sirf ek doosre ko dekh ke chale jaate the .ek ajeeb si khamoshi aagayee thi hamari bich. Sonali ke ghar wale mujhe boaht baar mujhe phon ekarte the aur bulat ebhi the par maine avoid kar deta tha har baar .

Aise hi kuch din bit gaye or meri college maine abhi life sahi chal rahi thi . Maine jada tar sonali ke samne jaana avoid kar rah tha ,pata nahinikyun ek ajeeb si feeling aati thi .isss bich maine Ritu naam ki ek ladki ke sath relation maine tha .Iss bar kuch reason ke chal te collge sports ko cancel kar diya tha aur uske badle picnic ke liye association raji ho gayee thi .Nov ka mahina tha hamare college ke taraf se 2bus hue the ,ek sundar si waterfall ke pass ham jaa rahe the .subha ke 10 baje ke aass paass ham log ponhach gaye . Ab boys aur girls kea lag alag camp lag diye gaye aur teacher ne sab ko warning de diya ki koi akele ghumne nahini jaye . Par ham to waise bhi ladke log konsa teacher ke warning sun te the ,toh after non ke 4 baje ke aass pass maine akela nikal gaya ghoomne . Ab mujhe aise hi ghoomte ghoomte 1 ghanta ho gaya tha tab maine dekha aage hamare college girls ke ek group bridge ke pass khade hoke waterfall ko dekh rahe hain mujhe pyaas bohat lagi thi to maine socha unse pani maang leta hun . Jab maine unke pass ponhach ne wala hota hunt oh achanak wo sab chilane lagjate haine .Maine bhi bhag ke uss aur jaata hun ,chilane se mujhe pata lag gay tha ki koi ladki pani maine gir gayee hai.

Maine bhag ke wanha ponhch aur pani maine kood gaya jada pani nahini tha kamar tak tha par pani ka flow bohat jada tha .maine dekhta hun ki wo ladki koi aur nahini sonali hai . Wo bridge lakdi aur bamboo ka ban hua tha aur sonali piller se nikla hua ek lakdi ko pakde rakhha tha .kyun ko usko pani kamar se kafi jada upar tak aarah tha tohkhade hona musqeel tha .maine sonali ke pass ponhcha aur hath pakadke kheech laya aur ek hath se piller ko pakad ke usko pani se bahar ane ko sahar diya .Jab sonali bahar nikal aayee toh maine bhi bhar aane lag atabhi meri balance bigad gayee aur maine pani maine behne laga ,mujhe swimming ache se nahini aati thi par tab tak aur bhi ladke aagye the jinhon emujh ebachaya .Baad maine teacher se mujhe aur sonali ko bohat daant padi .baad maine jab sonali beth ke ro rahi thi toh aaj maine peheli baar himmat karke uske pass gaya aur uss se baat karna laga. Aaj pehli baar maine uss se bina ladhe baat kar rah tha . Jab hum ghar wapas aaye toh uske ghar walon ko pata chala iss bare maine toh wo log mujhe bohat shukriya kiya aur gali bhi diya ki agar swimming nahini aati thi to pani maine kuda kyun.

Ab mer asonali se milna julna badh gaya tha aur uske ghar aanajan bhi badh gay tha agle 1mahine ke andar ham dono ko ki kabham itne ache dost ban gaye ki ek dusre ki bina reh bhi nahini sakte the .kabhi kabhi ham dono ko soch ke bhi hasi aati thi ke bachpan se itna ladhne ke baad kaise ham achanak itne ache dost ban gaye .ab mujhe pat chala mere andar jo ajeeb feeling ho rahi thi isss liye ki maine aur sonali ladhte ladhte kab itne close ho gaye ki hamri dushmani ab dosti maine badal gayee .

Ek din sonali ni mujhe apne BF se bhi milaya , rajesh naam tha uska .Bohat hi acha banda tha wo . Dhire life aage badhti rehti hai ab mere aur Ritu ke bich jhagda badhne lag gay tha ,wo hamesha mere aur sonali ko dobt karti rehti thi ki hamare bich kuch seen chal raha hai . Maine usse samjh samjh ake thak chuka tha ki aisa kuch nahini hai. Par wo maan nahini rahi thi bohat mushqil ke baad maine usse man paya . Iss bich ek achi baat ye hui ki sonali ne apne ghar maine apne pyar ke bare maine bat diya .pehele to wo log maan nahini rahe the par bohat samjhaneke baad maan gaye . Uss din rat ko mujhe sonalika phone aaya .Usne mujhe batya ki ghar wale maan gay ehai uske aur rajesh ki pyar ko aur jaldi date fix karenge sagai ka . Aur usne y ebhi bataya ki uske ghar walon ko lag rah tha ki wo aur maine pyar karte haine isiliye wo iss shadi ke liye maan nahini rahe the .phir ussne bohat muskil se ghar walon ko manaya .maine bhi usse bataya ki Ritu bhi yehi bol rahi thi . Phir ham dono ne yeh thik kiya ki aage se ham kam mila karenge aur ek doosre ki life jada interference nahini karenge . Isi se ham dono ka love life v thik rahegi .

Hamre 7th semistar ke baad sonali ka shagai ho gaya rajesh se . Ab maine bhi thoda pressure maine aagya tha sonalika toh life set hoo gay ab mujhe apna bhi dekhna hai .maine Ritu se iss bare maine bat kit oh usne batay ki abhi time hai itni jaldi kya hai ghar walon ko batane maine .Mujhe laga ye bhi thik hai .Par mujhe dhire dhire asli baat pat chalne lagi ki Ritu ka kisi aur se affair tha iss liye wo mujhe ghar pe baat karne se rok liya tha .kuch din ken ok jhonk ke baad hamar breakup ho gaya . Uss time maine bohat pareshan rehne laga tha kyun ki ek to sar pe final 8th semistar tha usi time breakup ka pain aur shayd mujhe jo nahini karna tha maine wo karne lag tha .Ab iss time dost ki bohat jad need hoti hai jisse aap apne dil ki baten bata sako to maine phir se sonali se baaten karne laga .

Hamare college ka study trip jane wala tha aur sab final year ke student jaa bhi rah ethe kuch ruk gaye the exam ke pressure maine par mujhe sonali ne kaha ki mujhe jana chahiye . Toh maine bhi chal gaya ,jo shayd meri jindegi ka sabse galat decscion tha . Hamara grop jis hotel maine us maine kafi bhid hoti thi kyun ki paass mainehi ek acha tourist place bhi tha .Rat ko bahar ghoomte ghoomte meri najar Ritu pe pada wo apne bf ke sath make out kar rahi thi .shayd ye log bhi usi hotel maine stay kar rahe the .

Jis dukh aur gum ko bhoolne maine yanha aay tha wo ab kai guna badh chukka tha .maine wanhi ek ped ke pass beth gay aur fut fut ke rone laga . Tabhi mere kandhe pe ek hath mehsoosh hua maien palat ke dekh atoh wo sonali thi .wo mere pass beth ke mujhe samjhane lagi par maine uss halt maine nahini tha ki kuch samjh paun .Ritu se maine bohat pyar karta tha aur aaj ye sceen dekh ke maine khud ko control nahinikar pa eaha tha .tabhi sonali ne mujhe gale lagake chup karane laga dhire dhire maine ab normal hone lag sonali ke samjhane se ab maine chup ho gay tha .wo bilkool ek maa jaise apne bache ko samjhati thi waise hi mujhe samjha rahi thi . Aaj uss maine mujhe ek dost ke sath sath ek maa bhi najar aa rahi thi .usne mujhe samjhaya ki mujeh bhi ab Ritu ko bhul ke aag badhna hoga .maine bhi sonali ke liye iss baat pe raji ho gaya. Aur phir ham log wapas aagaye hotel iss baat se anjan ek anjana bawandar janam le chukka hai .

Vikram bhi aaya hua tha iss trip maine aur uss time sonali ko picha kar rah tha .jab usne mujhe aur sonali ko gale lagye hu edekha toh usne hamar photo le liya tha . Ab jab ham trip se wapas aake ponhache to bahamara wait kar rah tha .vikram ne wo photo rajesh ko bhej diya tha aur apne aur se jhooti batein jod ke bhi suna diya tha .Rajesh ne bohat hungama kiya mere aur sonali ke lakh samjhane ke baad bhi wo nahini maana . Ulta usne mujhe kah ki meri Ritu se isiliye break up hogay ki Ritu ko meri aur sonali ke bare maine pata chal gaya tha .haum dono aur hamare parivaaron ke lakh samjhane par rajesh nahini samjha aur shagai tod diya .ab ye baat bohat had tak badh gayee thi aura as pass main ebhi fail gayee thi .To ab sonali ke ghar wale mere ghar wale se baat karne lage ki ham bachon ka shagai kar lete haine ab logon ko kon itna samjhaye . Sonali ke gharwalo ka kehna tha ki unhe rajesh waise bhi pasand nahini tha . Aur iss baar na hi mere ghar wale nahi sonali ke ghar wale hamare ek bhi baten suni aur jabrdasti hamara shagai kar diya .ham dono toh mano jaise shock maine the ki aakhir ye hua toh hua kya .ham dono ko ye samjh nahini aarah tha ki galti kiski thi aur aakhir ham kyun logon ke kehne se ham kyun qurbaani dai.

Par dekhte dekhte kab hamari shagai bhi haogyee aur jadbaji maine unhone hamar shadi bhi 6 mahine baad rakh diya .Aaj ke time hamari shadi ho gaye hai ham dono ab thoda sambhal chuke haine .Ab ham donoki life bhi sahii cahl rahi hai lagbhag par aaj bhi hamdonoke bich ek anjana na baya kar sakne wala dard hai kya yehi hamar future tha .kuch logo ke sochne sa hamra life ka pura najariya hi badal gaya

Kya problem hamare duniya ki baat baat pe sab broad minded hone ka daba karte haine aise dikahte haine ki duniya ka sabse uch bichardhara wale ham hi hai par jab ladke aur ladki ki baat aati ahi to pura duniya aankh band karke purane khayalat ko saamne le aati thi .aare kam se kam dhang ke khayalaat to le aao hamre purano maine bhi kitne kahaniya hai janha pe ek ladka aur ladki kitne ache dost hua karte the kisi desh ke raja ur doosre desh ke rani apne shadi ke baad bhi dost hote the aur dosti ki mishalen pesh kiya karte the .par galti logonki nahini hai hamare ye bollywood industry ki hai “koi ladka aur ladki kabhi dost nahini ho sakte “kyun bhai kya sirf ahi ek rist bacha hai kya aankhon se wo parda uthao .bollywood maine ladka ur ladki ke dosti ke upar jitney bhi movie banaye haine sab maine donoko aakhir maine pyar ho jaat ahi .to kya kiya tumne wohi baaten prove kardiya na aakhir kaar jo duniya bol rahi thi .Log agsar kehte haine ki dosti ke naam pe pyar ko badnaaam mat karo par ye koi nahini bolt aki pyar ko dosti ke naam deke jo log duniya ke njar se bachne ki kosish karte haine unke chalet baki sabke dosti pe bhi duniya usinajar se dekhne lagti hai. Ki dosti kuch nahini ye sab pyar ko chupa ke rakh rahe haine .do movie ki aapko example de raha hun ek hai “maine pyar kiya “ aur doosra movie “Rudramahadevi” dono movie maine bhi ek lead actor tha aur ek lead actress thi ek maine dosti ko pyar maine badal ke dikah diya ki naji bhai log ye dosti kuch nahini hoti ek ladka ur ladki hamesha pyar karte haine .Aur doosre movie maine dikahya gaya ki ek ladka aur ladki ajeban dost hi rehte haine ..aisa kyun ,kabhi socha hai kyun ki ek story ham logon ne likah hai duniya ko achi lage iss najar se aur doosri actual life maine ghati hai. Par nahini ham to pyar ke naam pe dosti ko bhi kharap karenge .

Chalo ham sonali aur maine to sambhal gaye par najane kitne vikas aur sonali duniya ke dar se apne dosti ka ya toh gala ghot dete haien ya phir hamare tarha na chahte hue bhi riston ka aanchl odh lete haine takikoi sawal na uthaye .Kabhi sochna aaj ham har tarha se aage badhneaur hamare soch badalne ki baat kar rahe hain par kya iss soch ko ham badal nahini sakte . Ye sirf ek kahani nahini thi ye ek aaina hai ki sab log plz uss mindset maine mat raho ki “ek ladka aur ladki kabhi dost nahini ho sakte “ barna najane kitne dosti ka gal ghoot jaye ga . Agar ye kahani ek bhi logo ki jehanmaine thoda sa bhi badlab la paya ya logo ko mind set badal paya toh sab se jad aham khus honge

Aapke apne VIKAS aur SONALI .

bahut badhiya bhai.........aapne to shahi kaha ki dosty or pyaar ke. bich bada anter hota hai.... dono alag alag hai.......aapke ye post logo ke soch badal paayega ya nhi mujhe pata nhi....but apke kahi har ak word such hai....joh hum dono ke bich kya rishta hai jane bina bolte hai ki dono apas me bahut pyaarkarte hai......mein ik swal karna chahta hu ki storyke end likha hai vikash or sonali...to kya aap dono reall life husband wife ho.....apke answer ka intejar rehega......wise eshei ik kahani likhe jaha peyar ho action ho threaler, suspend or thoda romance ho......Thank You

 

[Yug Purush]

Delusion by Hariya bhai aka mystery

Delusion... Word hee aisa hai ki story ka theme bheje me ghus jata hai... Par is case me delusion se jyada interesting story me kya ho raha hai , wo tha... Shuruat me laga ki accident ke baad sakham ko koyi superpower mil gayi hai and trust me , it wasn't bad at all... Yadi ye hua hota to coolest thing hota... Especially, death calculation... mere mann me bhi tha ek plot aisa hee , par .... Khair chhodo conversations were top notch aur doctor ki wo last line twist reveal hone ke baad bhi twist de gayi.... Didn't skip single line or single word... Awesome story harshit bhai...
P.s. delusion hata ke ek long story likho... Maja aa jayega

 

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bahut badhiya bhai.........aapne to shahi kaha ki dosty or pyaar ke. bich bada anter hota hai.... dono alag alag hai.......aapke ye post logo ke soch badal paayega ya nhi mujhe pata nhi....but apke kahi har ak word such hai....joh hum dono ke bich kya rishta hai jane bina bolte hai ki dono apas me bahut pyaarkarte hai......mein ik swal karna chahta hu ki storyke end likha hai vikash or sonali...to kya aap dono reall life husband wife ho.....apke answer ka intejar rehega......wise eshei ik kahani likhe jaha peyar ho action ho threaler, suspend or thoda romance ho......Thank You

bahut badhiya bhai.........aapne to shahi kaha ki dosty or pyaar ke. bich bada anter hota hai.... dono alag alag hai.......aapke ye post logo ke soch badal paayega ya nhi mujhe pata nhi....but apke kahi har ak word such hai....joh hum dono ke bich kya rishta hai jane bina bolte hai ki dono apas me bahut pyaarkarte hai......mein ik swal karna chahta hu ki storyke end likha hai vikash or sonali...to kya aap dono reall life husband wife ho.....apke answer ka intejar rehega......wise eshei ik kahani likhe jaha peyar ho action ho threaler, suspend or thoda romance ho......Thank You

Bhai ye mera pehla story hai to thoda simple hi rakh aur ek acha sa plot tha dimag Maine par maine already ek thread start kardiya tha aur wo bada plot tha jo 6000ke word limit Maine nahini aayega to isiliye ye wali hi likh ke upload kardi...

 

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“ fir kahan chale gaye ….”

“ toilet me ho kya? Kitna time lete ho toilet me tum “


“ ek din ke liye mera job kar ke dekho fir pata chalega tumhe, kitna muskil hota hai”


“ subah paanch baje jago aur lag jao sare kamo me, pahle bachho ke school ki taiyaari …fir sahib ke office ki taiyari “


“ thak gayi hu main ye sab karte karte , bahut bari galti kar di maine job na karke”


“ job karti to kam se kam daily taiyaar hoke bahar jane ka mauka to milta mujhe”


“ are bahar nikaloge ki nahi chai thandi ho rahi hai”


Aur fir usne darbaja pitna suru kar diya, ab tak main uski baton ko sun kar muskura raha tha aur hath me pakre huye mobile pe apne whatsapp ke message check kar raha tha. Mere liye ye sab baten har din subah subah mil rahe nimbu pani ki tarah tha, jab tak sun na lo pressure nahi aata tha.


Maine mobile ko jeb me rakha aur pichhwara saaf karke door khola to samne meri dharmpatni ji khari thi aur unke hath me garam chai ki pyali thi.


“ kya mere upar chai dalne ke liye khari ho meri rani” maine uski taraf muskurate huye kaha.


“ chup karo aur chai pakro , mujhe aur bhi kaam hai…” usne gusse se mere hath me chai ka pyala thamaya aur rasoi ki taraf chali gayi.


“ saath me chai pite to kitna achha lagta hai ki nahi..tum to hamesha busy hi rehti ho shayad” maine use pyar se apne pass aane ko kaha


“ aur tumhara tiffin to tumhari amma aake pack kar dengi…tum pi lo, maine pi bhi liya” pata nahi kabhi kabhi usko kya ho jata hai mujhe kuchh samajh me nahi aata. Jis din uska aisa mood rehta hai us din agar us se jyada baat karu to mere pure khandaan ka naam leke mujhe kya se kya suna degi.


Maine chup rahne me hi bhalai samjhi aur chupchap se chai pine laga, uske hath ki chai ki baat hi alag thi. Main office jane se pahle aur office se aane ke baad uske hath ki chai jaroor pita tha.


Mnaju sharma, ji meri patni ka naam hai aur main Rakesh Sharma apne eklote bete ke saath Bangalore south ke ek multi-storey apartment ke tisre male pe apne 3 BHK flat me rahte hai.


Meri zindagi bikul samanya roop se hi chal rahi thi lekin jaisa college ke jamane me socha tha waisa nahi ho paya tha. Vo samay tha jab paise kamane ke saath saath zindagi me mauj masti ke liye bhi jagah banane ka plan tha lekin paisa to bahut kamaya lekin mauj masti ke liye abhi bhi intezaar kar raha hu. Aisa nahi hai ki life me kuchh bhi achha nahi chal raha hai aur main dukhi hu lekin khush bhi nahi hu.


“ aaj office jaoge ki nahi , dekho kitna time ho gaya...” Manju ki aawaj mere kano se takrai aur main jaise sapne se jaga.


“ haan bas ready ho raha hu, mujhe breakfast de do” maine chai ka cup table pe rakhte huye utha.


“ koi jaroorat to hai nahi tumhe gym jane ki, bas office , mobile or bed…dekho dusre log kaise gym ka use kar rahe hai..ghar lete time to bahut bol rahe the ki advance gym hai apartment me , swimming pool hai, har tarah ka sports facility hai..kitne din use kiye unka” manju mera tiffin pack karte huye tane marti rahi.


“ galti ho gayi maharani, ab main kya karu agar man nahi karta jane ka to “ main office ke liye ready hote huye bola.


“ tum aaj bhi nahi nahaoge kya? Sudhar jao ab, college me nahi ho tum..ek bachhe ke baap ho..tum aisa karoge to beta kya karega” manju ko mere nahi nahane pe hameha se aitraaz tha.


“ are uske liye aisa kyon sochti ho , hero jaisa hai mera beta …kuchh bhi pahne , kaise bhi rahe ..har ladkiyan uski dibani ho jati hai” maine manju ki taraf dekh ke muskurate huye kaha.


“ kuchh bhi, tumhe apne liye bhi galatfahmi thi aur ab apne bete ke liye bhi hai” manju ne ye bolte huye apna muh fer liya.


“ main sach keh raha hu, ladkiyan marti hai uspe, main last time jab uske school gaya tha to notice kiya maine” maine manju ko batana chaha.


“ tum ye dekhte ho lekin ye nahi dekhte ki uska es saal 12th ka board exam bhi hai aur use tumhari tarah IIT me bhi jana hai..kitna time de rahe ho uspe, bus coaching me daal diya aur kaam khatam” manju ne fir se mujhe datna suru kar diya.


“ are jisko IIT nikalna rehta hai na use khud pata hota hai ki kya jaroori hai, achha ye batao mujhe kisne bataya mere babuji to kisan the na..aur maine to dhang se coaching bhi nahi li thi” maine use samjhane ki koshish ki.


“ sab ek jaise nahi hote rakesh , tumhari baat alag thi..tum jaise intelligent nahi hote sab log..mera ravi tumhare jaisa nahi hai aur aaj kal bachhe bahut jyada mobile aur tv ki bajah se disturb hai” manju ne aaj pehli baar mujhe achha bola tha, man kar raha tha ki usko jake chum loo, lekin mujhe office ke liye late ho raha tha aur ab main ready tha office jane ke liye.


“ manju, tum tension mat lo …abhi time hai uske exam me , use coaching complete karne do uske baad main dekhunga” main ye bolte huye apne flat se nikalne laga.


“ tum talte ja rahe ho, samajh nahi rahe ..uska performance drop ho raha hai aur uska confidence bhi down hai aaj kal …dekho chale gaye, jab time nahi rahega tumhare hath me tab afasos karoge meri baat yaad rakhna” manju ko laga ki maine nahi suna lekin maine uski ye baat bhi sun li thi aur muskurate huye main lift ki taraf badh gaya.

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“ sir , aapne mail check kiya maine forward kiya tha” manish mere cabin ka door thoda sa khol ke mujhse bol raha tha. Main us samay ek mail ka hi reply kar raha tha , uski baat sunke main ruk gaya.


“ abhi dekhta hu, aao andar ..bas ye mail send karke dekhta hu” maine use andar aane ko kaha aur manish aake mere samne baith gaya.


Agle kuchh pal cabin me sannata chhaya raha aur jaise hi maine mail post kar di, main manish ki taraf dekhkar muskuraya. Manish mere age ka hi tha lekin office me mera junior tha. Hum log bahut hi pakke dost the saalo se aur use mere kamre me aane ke liye permission lene ki jaroorat nahi thi.


“ sale sir kisko bol raha hai, maine kaha hai tumhe office ho ya bahar hum dost hai ” main chair pe aaram se baithte huye bola.


“ ok , aage se dhyan rakhunga …waise kaisi kat rahi hai teri life..” usne muskurate huye kaha


“ poochh to aise raha hai jaise hum saalo baad mile ho” main uski taraf dekhte huye bola


“ are bhai, har din kuchh alag hota hai” manish bhi aaram se baat karna suru kiya


“ tere liye hota hoga , mere liye to same hai har din…wahi ghar aur wahi office” main ub gaya tha apne routine life se, lekin kisi ko batana nahi chahta tha, aaj uski baton se apne man ki bharash nikal raha tha.


“ abe aise kyon nirash hota hai vo bhi aaj ke yug me, jahan paisa hai to sab mangalmay hi hai” usne muskurate huye meri atarf dekha


“ kya bak raha hai, aisa kya hai aaj ke jamane me bhai…mujhe bhi bata” main samajh nahi paya ki vo kehna kya chahta hai.


“ tune tinder ke bare me suna hai kya? “ manish kya baat kar raha hai mujhe samajh me nahi aaya.


“ ye kya hota hai waise? “ mujhe sach me kuchh nahi pata tha eska.


“ ye dating app hai aur bahut popular hai” manisha ne mujhe bataya , lekin ye batate huye uske chehre pe ek alag si muskan thi.


“ matlab ki tum use kar rahe ho ye app right..tumne to love marriage kiya tha na phir bhi bahar date ki jaroorat parti hai tumhe” mujhe kuchh ajeeb laga , kisi achhi aurat ya ladki ko dekhne ka man karta tha lekin dating ya koi relation ke liye meri tarf se na hi tha.


“ to kya problem hai esme, ye casual type hai aur mostly one night stand type , lekin standard hai cheap prostitute type wali baat nahi hai esme” manish mujhe samjhane ki kosish kar raha tha. Pata nahi kyon mujhe uski baten achhi lag rahi thi.


“ tumne kisi ke sath date kiya hai kya? Pata to bahut jyada hai tumhe eske bare me” maine us se aur kuchh janne ki koshish ki.


“ ek nahi bahut ki hai, tabhi apne experience se bata raha hu…bas kisi celeb ka picture add kar do profile pic me aur achha sa bio likh do apne bare me ..apne interest ke bare me aur uske baad jo ladies tumhe achhi lage use like karte jao , like ke liye right swift karna or dislike ke liye swipe left…uske aage wait and watch ..agar tujhe bhi usne like kiya to match ho jayega uske baad tumhare upar hai us se baat aage kaise badhate ho” manish mujhe sab kuchh batata chala gaya aur main bhi uski baten bahut dhyan se sunta raha.


“ tere mobile me hai vo app , pahle mujhe dikhao kaise baat karte ho” maine us se uska mobile dikhane ko kaha.


Usne apne mobile me tinder ka app khol ke dikhaya , uske kuchh darjan bhar match huye the aur un sab se uski baten bhi huyi thi , usne kuchh aise bhi chat dikhaye jisme dusri taraf se sex ki baten openly kar rahi thi ladkiyan.


“ yaar mere se nahi hoga , kahi ye sab gale na par jaye baad me” maine uske chat ko dekhna band kar diya aur apne chair pe sahi se baitha.


“ tum darte bahut ho yaar, college me to bahut kaand kiya hai tumne sab pata hai mujhe aur bhabhi ko bhi pata hai..ab agar karoge to dikkat ho jayegi nahi..beta ye sab road type ladkiyan nahi hai..sab ke sab high class ladies hai…unko khusi chahiye bahar ke logon se aur tumhe bhi…dono ek dusre ko khus kar do aur phir apne apne raste …dono taraf se safe hai, esliye ye log aise kisi ko nahi mil jate, chat me ye sab jaan jati hai samne wale bande ke bare me phir jake milti hai..uske bhi naam ya pictures sahi nahi hote , jab whatapp number share karegi tab asaliyat batayegi” manish apne pure experience se mujhe samjhane ki koshish kar raha tha.


“ lekin yaar mujhe risky lagta hai, hum log ek settled aadmi hai, hasta khelta family hai fir ye sab kyo?” main apne aapko ko bhi samjhane ki koshish kar raha tha ye bolkar aur use bhi.


“ ek baar try karo, achha na lage ya risky lage to delete kar dena apna account” usne mujhe himmat di.


“ ok , ek baar try karunga…dekhte hai saalon baad bhi apna wahi jalba barkarar hai ki nahi” mujhme himmat aa rahi thi.


“ yaar kuchh to teenagers bhi hoti hai , aur unhe sugar daddy chahiye …western countries me to bahut chalta hai ye lekin Bangalore me bhi suru ho gaya hai…agar koi mil gayi to soch ki es age me bhi tumhe kachhi kali ko chakhne ka mauka mil jayega” manish ne bola aur jor jor se hasne laga.


“ sale tu mujhe etna neech samjha hai kya? “ maine usko aankh dikhate huye kaha , lekin uski hansi nahi ruki aur waise hi hasta raha.


“ abe esme neech wali baat kahan hai..tu abhi bhi smart hai, achhi baat karta hai , experienced hai aur saath me unke upar kharcha bhi kar sakta hai ..ye sab hi to chahiye enko…sala kal ka launda kahan se enke upar kharcha karega aur vo satisfaction kahan se denge jo hum de sakte hai unko…waise tinder me sabse jyada tumko unsatisfied bhabhi milegi , mujhe to unme hi jyada interest hai…mujhe mature ladies sabse jyada pasand hai” manish ye bolte huye aahen bharne laga.. uski baten sunke man lalcha bhi raha tha aur saath hi thoda atpata bhi lag raha ..maine soch liya ki main khud try karunga.


“ ok chalo dekhta hu main aaj profile bana ke ki kya hota hai…chal ab nikal , mujhe sare mail ka reply karna hai” maine manish ko bhagaya aur apne kaam me lag gaya.

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“ tumne socha ravi ke liye, ek ghanta roz tum apne saath leke baitho na use…aur koi kaam nahi aayega , bas tum hi kuchh kar sakte ho uske liye” manju ne mujhe samjhane ki koshish ki. Main mobile me tinder ka app khoj raha tha, lekin usko jabab dena bhi jaroori tha. Sone se pahle uska tone soft rahta tha aur main uski sari baat maan leta, fir unko chain ki neend aati thi aur main der raat tak mobile use karta.


Aaj mujhe tinder check karna tha aur meri koshish thi ki aaj manju jaldi so jaye.


“ main nahi dekhunga to kaun dekhega use , lekin use jaroorat hogi to aayega na mere pass…aur chinta mat karo vo nikal lega IIT” maine manju ko bharosa diya.


“ jaisa tum thik samjho, lekin main samay rahte tumhe bata rahi hu ..bas kuchh mahine rah raye hai uske” usne karbat liya aur apna muh dusri taraf karke so gayi aur main tab tak tinder me apna profile bana chukka tha aur Rahul dravid ka picture laga diya apne profile pic me aur saath hi achha sa bio bhi likh diya.


Maine ek saath bahut se profile ko swipe right kiya aur agle 10 minutes me hi mujhe do match mil gaye. Pahle ka naam tha monica aur uska age 30 years , usne bio me jyada kuchh nahi likha tha. Maine us se chat karne ki sochi.


rakesh : hey

monica: hello, are you from Bangalore?​

rakesh : yes , I am what abt you?

monica: I m from kerla​

rakesh : ohh, but your location shows nearby

monica: actually I came here to attend one meeting​

rakesh : good, what do you like?

monica: movies, tennis and chicken….and you ​

rakesh : cricket , football and beauty

monica: so funny…do you like beauty or
something else…why are you at tinder?​

rakesh : to get connected with
someone for something special

monica: special means … r you
interested in casual relation ?​

rakesh : why not? And you?

monica: may be ? r you married?​

rakesh : yes ..any problem?

monica: yeah, how can you cheat your wife ​

rakesh : r u interested in right or wrong ?

monica: why not? I cann’t make relation
with anyone who is not a trustworthy ​

rakesh : ohh….got it, but if I am here means
I m not a saint right

monica: sorry…I cann’t talk …I m
going to unmatch you..bye​

ohhh shit....K.L.P.D. , sala aaj tak college me mera kabhi nahi kata aur es age me aake main kya karne laga ki es chutiya aurat ne mujhe jaleel kar diya. Maine ek baar bagal me leti manju ko dekha aur socha ki chalo dusre match ko bhi dekh leta hu agar ye bhi aisa nikla to main delete kar dunga es app ko.


Dusre ka naam tha Nisha aur age 21, ek baar ko socha ki ye galat hai kahan main 42 years ka aur mere se aadhe umar ki ladki se kya baat karu. Lekin us samay main josh me aa gaya aur maine us se chat suru kar di.


rakesh : hey nisha

Nisha: hi​

rakesh : what r you doing right now?

Nisha: watching GOT​

rakesh :oh great, you like GOT

Nisha: why not? Its most popular series right,
you don’t like it​

rakesh : I have seen already..but many
of my female friends don’t like it

Nisha: I m big fan of it… shall we talk in hindi ​

rakesh : bilkul…tum north se ho kya?

Nisha: haan …main UP se hu​

rakesh : yahan kya kar rahi ho

Nisha: main MBBS kar rahi hu ​

rakesh : aur batao , GOT ke baad aur kya pasand hai tumhe

Nisha: sports , outing ​

rakesh : kaun sa sport pasand hai tumhe

Nisha: tennis aur football aur aapko​

rakesh : same , movie nahi dekhti

Nisha: dekhti hu…lekin bahut kam…
aap apne bare me batayiye, yahan kisliye?​

rakesh : sach me to main kisi partner ki
talash me aaya yahan

Nisha: life partner to nahi?​

rakesh : bilkul nahi, life partner to hai meri wife ..
married hu lekin jo life partner se
na mile vo sab chahte hai

Nisha: lekin ye sahi nahi hai na ..aap ek partner
ke rahte kaise dusre ko khoj rahe hai​

rakesh : har ek ki apni apni jaroorat hoti hai…
tum kisliye aayi ho yahan

Nisha: main to time paas ke liye​

rakesh : relation ke liye nahi

Nisha: haan agar koi waisa mil jaye to​

rakesh : tumhe casual relation se koi
problem nahi hai na

Nisha: bilkul nahi, lekin agar apne
pasand ka koi ho to​

rakesh : aur ye tum kaise decide karogi, chat me

Nisha: chat se nahi personally mil ke ​

rakesh : to kya mil sakte hai

Nisha: humne to abhi baat hi suru ki hai​

rakesh : jo baat aamne samne baith ke hogi vo
chat me nahi ho sakti na

Nisha: ye baat to hai, waise aap baten
bahut achhi karte hai​

rakesh : thanks

Nisha: main kal aapko batati hu, meeting ke liye​

rakesh : lekin apna whatsapp number to
share kar hi sakti ho

Nisha: vo kisliye..​

rakesh :main yahan uncomfortable feel karta hu,
main tumse whatsapp pe baat kar lunga

Nisha: aap bahut shatir ho​

rakesh :nahi ab nahi.. college ke dino me to tha

Nisha: aap abhi bhi kam nahi ho…
waise aap ko main apna number first
meeting ke baad hi dungi”​

rakesh : good

Nisha: kal baat karte hai, mujhe aaj GOT finish karni hai​

rakesh : ok , good night


Maine tinder ko logout kiya aur mobile side me rakhke so gaya, kuchh der tak neend nahi aayi soch raha tha ki kaise aasani se baat ho gayi meri aur ladki ready bhi ho gayi milne ko …sab kuchh etni jaldi me ho gaya jaisa usne sapne me bhi nahi socha tha. Use manish ki baat sach lagi aur man hi man use thanks bolne laga.

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HSR layout ke ek restaurant me wait kar raha tha nisha ke aane ka ,usne aaj meeting ka plan banaya tha. Hum dono pichhle ek week se tinder pe baten kar rahe the, main uske hobbies ke bare me janne ki koshish karta raha aur vo bhi mere bare me. Hum dono ne ek dusre ke pasand aur napasand ki puri jankari juta li thi.


Mera ek man mujhe yahan aane se rok raha tha, kyoki hum dono me age ka bahut gap tha to dusra man ye soch ke khus ho raha tha ki main abhi bhi kisi ko akarshit kar sakta hu. Shayad main galat tha lekin main apne dil ko nahi samjha sakta tha jo abhi bhi pyar karna chahta tha, phir se usme nayi umange pankh failane lagi thi. Ye soch kar ki ek 21 saal ki ladki , aaj bhi mere se milne ke liye aa rahi hai aur agar sab kuchh sahi raha to vo mere saath sex bhi kar sakti hai.


Main manish ko thanks bolna chahta tha lekin maine us se es bare me kuchh nahi kaha tha, main chahta tha ki pahle kuchh action ho jaye phir batayenge use.


Es samay mere man me ek baar ke liye bhi ravi ya manju ka khyal nahi aa raha tha, jaise we dono mere life ke part hi nahi hai..main bas nisha ke bare me soch raha thi ki kaisi dikhti hogi vo, profile picture me to bas uska face tha, pura body nahi dikhaya tha usne.


Main ye sab soch hi raha tha ki , maine nisha ki tarah hi ek ladki ko under aate huye dekha , kya lag rahi thi vo …kyamat dha rahi thi. Lambe kad ki ladki , tikhe nain naksh ….body ka har tukra aisa tha jo kisi ki dharkan ko tej karne ke liye bahut tha…uske bhare pure breast jo uske tight t-shirt ko puri tarah se khiche huye apna bharpur ehsaas kara rahi thi …uski moti janghe uski skin tight jeans me kehar dha rahi thi..use dekh ke maine hath hilaya aur vo mere paas aake samne bith gayi. Uske baithte huye maine ehsaas kiya ki uski sabse laajbaab part to uska backside tha , uski chaudi nitamb to jabardast thi aur main us part ka hamesha se diwana raha tha.


“ kya hua kahan khoye huye ho janab” usne meri aankho me dekhte huye kaha


“ ohh..sorry. tum etni sundar ho mujhe pata hi nahi tha, sorry again…baat karke hi pata tha ki tum bahut achhi ho lekin tumko personally dekh ke to main flat ho gaya bilkul” main sach me usko upar se lekar niche tak dekh ke flat ho gaya tha, man me galat se khwab bunne laga, sochne laga ki kab uske saath bed me honge aur uska ye body mere niche hoga.


“ achha aisa hai kya? Aap bhi es age me bahut smart lagte hai” usne muskurate huye mujhe dekha


“thanks…” main uski es baat se bahut khus hua, apne bare me aisa sunke kise achha nahi lagega


“ really , koi nahi keh sakta ki aap mere boyfriend nahi ho” usne mujhe bowled out karne ka hi soch liya tha


“ jab bhi time milta hai gym kar leta hu..shayad esliye maintain hai sab” main bhi nahle pe dahla marne se nahi chukna chata tha


“ aap to apne college me dhamal machaye honge..aapne bola bhi tha I think” mujhe uski baat se yaad aaya ki maine use bataya tha apne chat ke dauran


“ bahut purani baat hai , us time jyada time mil jata tha” main abhi koi kasar nahi chhorna chahta tha


“ aap chah le to aaj bhi time mil sakta hai…kuchh order kiya aapne” uski baat pe yaad aaya ki maine ko abhi tak koi order kiya hi nahi hai. Maine us se hi order karne ko kaha. “ tum bolo, kaun sa beer bolen “


“ Budweiser to abhi phir kuchh vodka manga lenge” uska faviriote beer tha ye usne bataya tha mujhe. Lekin usne bataya tha ki hard drink se parhej hai use “ tum hard drink bhi leti ho kya?”


“ haan jab mood achha ho to..aaj aapse milne pe bahut achha laga” lag raha tha vo aaj mood me thi aur main bhi mood banana chahta tha …usko dekh ke man bekabu ho raha tha


“ tumhe pata hai ki tumse thoda hi chhota mera ek beta hai” main use apne bare me sab kuchh bata dena chahta tha.


“ to kya hua, maine bhi apne se kam age ke ladke ke saath sex kiya hai..aap bura mat feel kariye” usne bina kisi hichak ke saath kaha


“ kitno ke saath tumhare sambandh reh chuke hai” main ye bolna nahi chahta tha lekin pata nahi kaise muh se nikal gaya.


“ kya farak parta hai, lekin agar aap janna chahte hai to main bata deti hu..abhi tak paanch logo ke saath sexual relation me reh chuki hu aur do char hai jinke saath baat aage nahi badhi” usne bina kisi hichak ke ye sab bata diya aur main soch me par gaya ki ye to khiladi lagti hai.


“ tumhare father kya karte hai waise” maine fir se galat baat keh dali.


“ vo businessman hai, paisa bahut hai lekin time nahi..mujhe yahan doctor banne ke liye bhej diya aur aaj tak milne bhi nahi aaye” vo khus nahi thi apne papa se mujhe afsos hua mere es baat ka.


“ sorry mujhe ye sab baat nahi karni chahiye thi” maine apne aapko sambhala


“ its ok , waise aap ko koi problem nahi hai na meri friendship me…main abhi tak ke relation me same age group ke saath rahi hu..ye first time hai mature ke saath” usne ye baat kahi aur beer pine lagi. Waiter ne hamara order serve kar diya tha.


“ mujhe koi problem nahi hai , specially for a girl like you …brain with beauty…koi pagal hi hoga jo tumko pana nahi chahega..sorry agar maine kuchh galat bol diya ho” maine abhi beer pini hi suru ki thi lekin shayad bahkane laga tha…darasal mujhe nisha ko dekh ke hi nasha ho gaya tha.


“ too fast…badhiya, to kab ka plan hai” usne khud hi signal de diya


“ mujhe to tumhe dekhte hi nasha sa ho gaya hai, lekin aaj kuchh important office work hai use nipta ke bolta hu…aaj raat , agar tumhe koi problem na ho to” main mauka khona nahi chahta tha.


“ ok, lekin kahan pe mile ….mere flat pe kaisa karega.” Usne apne flat pe hi bula liya, lekin mere hisab se vo hostel me rehti thi.“ tum hostel me nahi ho kya? “


“ final year hai to apne ek dost ke saath milkar flat le liya bahar hi” mujhe samajh me aaya Bangalore me freedom ke liye bahut se students aisa karte the.


“ lekin , tumhara friend fir” mujhe laga ki uska kya karna hai


“ vo apne ghar gayi hai ek week ke liye…hum chahe to pura week use kar sakte hai” usne muskurate huye mujhe aankh mari . waiter ne hamara khana bhi laga diya tha aur vodka ka do large peg bhi. Hum baten karte huye khane lage.

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Maine office ka kaam finish kar liya tha, manish mujhse aake mila tha lekin maine kuchh bataya nahi use, maine apna tinder chat dekha to nisha ne apna address bhej diya tha aur apna contact number bhi , maine uska screenshot le liya aur ghar call lagane laga ki office meeting hai aur main raat late aaunga.


Lekin main call lagata us se pahle hi manju ka call mere mobile pe aaya. Maine call receive kiya


“ kya hua? “ mujhe thoda ajeeb laga , manju mujhe call bahut kam karti thi.


“ kahan ho jaldi se fortis hospital aao” us ne bahut ghabrahat me bola


“ kya hua manju, sab thik hai na “ mujhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya ho gaya


“ tum aao yahan , phir pata chal jayega” usne kahan aur phone cut kar diya


Main mood bana hi raha tha, mere dimag me nisha ka nashila badan ghoom raha tha aur manju ke call ne sab kuchh mita diya achanak se.


Maine apni car nikali aur agle 20 minutes me fortis hospital pahuch gaya, mere office se paas me hi tha. Maine reception pe check kiya to unhone mujhe emergency me jane ko kaha.


Main emergency me pahucha to dekha ravi leta hua hai aur use glucose chadaya ja raha hai, manju uske paas hi baithi hai. Main manju ke paas pahucha.


“kya ho gaya ese?” maine manju ke kandhe pe hath rakhte huye kaha.


“ doctor bol rahe hai ki bahut jyada dipression me hai ye, school me chakkar khake gir gaya tha , tumhe call kar rahe the lekin tumne utaya nahi..school wale hi ese yahan admit kara ke gaye hai aur fir mujhe call kiya , yahan aane ko” manju ne subkate huye mujhe bataya…uski aankhe nam thi, use ravi ki bahut fikar thi , ho bhi kyo na eklota beta tha vo hamara.


Maine paas me pari huyi ek chair ko uske bed pe paas kheecha aur baith gaya aur ravi ke sar ke upar hath ferne laga. Ravi ko hosh aa gaya tha,usne apni aankhen kholi .


“ papa, aap aa gaye kya?” ravi ne meri taraf dekhte huye kaha.


“ haan beta , main tumhare paas hi hu..kya ho gaya aisa…kis baat ka dipression hai tumko” main us se janna chahta tha ki asal baat kya hai.


“ are papa, doctor aise hi bol rahen hai..mujhe bas aise hi chakkar aa gaya tha, main tension me tha mera coaching ka result down ho gaya tha na esliye”usne apni baat batai


“ are to kya ho gaya, tum agar achha nahi karoge ya IIT me nahi hoga to kya hoga, life means IIT nahi hai beta..kya hota hai waise IIT se paas hone pe aur nahi paas hone pe…main hu na IIT se to kya bara ukhad liya maine ..kya mere saath kaam karne wale sab IITians hi hai, nahi bilkul nahi…mera Boss IIT se nahi hai lekin mera Boss hai…life me aage jane ke liye dimag jaroori hai na ki tag jaroori hai…IIT ek tag hai jo tumko help karta hai upar jane me , bina jyada mehnat kiye huye bhi upar ja sakte ho agar ye tag hai to…lekin us se bhi jyada jaroori hai ki tum kya ho, tumhara dimag kaisa hai aur tum kya karna chahte ho…agar tumhara man lagta hai JEE ke liye prepration karne me to karo nahi to chhor do, bhagvan ne mujhe etna majboot rakha hai ki main tumne world ke kisi bhi top university me bhej sakta hu…bas tum tension chhoro aur uth khare ho jao..main hu na beta..kuchh bura nahi hoga tumhare saath” bolte huye meri aankhen bhi nam ho gayi thi.


Maine kisi ka hath apne kandhe pe mehsus kiya , dekha to manju mere pichhe thi..uski aankhe bhi nam thi. Ravi ke bhi aankho me aasoo the.


“ papa mujhe aapka sath chahiye, aap saath denge na mera” ravi ne apni nam aankho se kaha


“ kaisi baten kar rahe ho tum…maine janam diya hai tumhe main nahi saath dunga to kaun dega” main aage badh ke lipat gaya us se.


“ papa, mujhe JEE clear karne se koi nahi rok sakta agar aap mera saath do to, aap great hai papa…bas aap mera hath IITJEE exam tak mat chhorna” ravi ne mere sar ko chumte huye kaha.


“ main kabhi tumhara saath nahi chhorunga mere bachhe, promise…meri galti hai, maine edhar tumhe coaching ke bharose chhod diya lekin ab main kisi aur ke bharose nahi chhorunga tumhe” maine use kas ke pakar liya.


“ sach me rakesh, agar tumhara saath hume raha to kisi aur ki jaroorat nahi hai hum logon ko” manju ne bhi mere pichhe se bola aur maine mehsus kiya ki main galat hu ki parivaar me paisa lake de diye to unko sab kuchh de diya. Unko apna samay dena hai aur unke saath khare rehna hai. Maine kosish ki thi lekin maine apne office ke kaam aur apne aapko jyada time diya apne family ko nahi…meri galti thi , mujhe esko sudharna tha.


Maine payments kiya hospital ka aur doctor se sari jankari le li , unhone kuchh medicine bhi diye the. Main ravi aur manju ke saath ghar ke liye nikla. Hum log red light pe signal ka wait kar rahe the , mere phone me notification ki aawaj aayi aur maine dekha to nisha ka message tha, usne teen baar message bheja tha ki kab aa rahe ho ..maine time dekha , 9 pm ho rahe the….mere dimag me nisha ka body fir se najar aane laga.


“ papa bahar khana kha ke ghar chale kya?” ravi ne mere pichhe se kaha aur uski baat sunte hi nisha ka chehra mere dimag se gayab ho gaya aur maine tinder app me nisha ke chat ko unmatch kar diya ya ye kahiye ki maine usko swipe left kar diya aur apne family ko swipe right kar diya. Maine tinder ko apne mobile se delete kar diya tha.


Life me bahut se aise mauke aate hai jahan pata hi nahi rehta ki hume right jana hai ya left , kyoki hum sahi se samajh nahi pate apne maksad ko ..hum jaan hi nahi pate apne kartavay ko ..hum soch hi nahi apte ki kaun apna hai aur kaun paraya..hum kisi ko bhi swipe left kar dete hai aur kisi ko bhi swipe right. Mat kariye aisa bina soche huye…nahi to baad me pachhtaava hoga apne karni pe. Apne aap ko samajhiye aur apno ko samay rahte samajhiye kyoki unko aapki aur aapko unki jaroorat hai.

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khoobsurat kahani maza aa gaya padh ke....

Kahani ki shuruaat main mujhe laga ki ye koi family drama hoga lekin jaise jaise mai is kahani main aage badhta gaya meri utsukta badhti chali gayi...tindar pe mili us ladki se milne jab kahani ka hero jaata hai to ek baar to mujhe laga ki kahi uska beta hi waha naa pahunch jaaye....lekin aisa hua nahi or akhir main aapne life ko chuna or bacha liya khud ko or apne pariwar ko gart main jaane se.....
Bahut bahut shukriya ek behtarin kahani hum sab ke samne rakhne ke liye..
Main is kahani ko 5 m se 4.5 ank deta hu ... 0.5 ank isliye kam diya kyonki tinder ke baare main mujhe pura gyaan nahi diya