★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2019 ~ Reviews Thread ★☆★

[Naina]

Naina ji Ka review
First of all thank you for your wonderful review
Bas ek choti si kosis thi meri taraf se aur khusi hui apko meri peshkas Pasand aayi . Apka review bohat mayne rakhta hai mere liye.
Once again thank you for your wonderful review

Best writer ki award winning...... wishing you

 

[Naina]

Do do Immo friend... Immo ji aap do ki ek plz bata dijye

 

[Damha]

Kal ho na ho
By Suryaa


nice story bhai bus wording me pakar kamzor thi aur abhi ap ke pass bohat words limit thi ap story ko aur behtar bana sakte the lagta hai ap ne bohat jaldi me story likhi hai dailouge ko thora aur acha banaya ja sakta tha baki waqt ke saath ap behtar hote raho gye

 

[Mak]

सातवां टोना
By: Vijuu Kaka ( Vijay2309 )

Wow! That's some unique Story. Vijju kaka se jaisi aasha rahti hai, bilkul usi mutabik likha hai.. Hats off bhai. You always try something unique to write, and that's your specialty, hats off to that. Really glad to read something interesting after a long time. Everything was superb. Flow, Narration, Plot, Presentation. Everything was superb. You have a good grasp over the story right from the word go. Brilliant.

This should be in Top 3 for sure.
Best of luck for the contest.
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[Niks96]

Review for - REALITY?
By Niks96

First of all thank you for this lovely story.
Ek suspense se bhari bohat umda peshkas hai ye kahani , plot bohat Acha hai , narration too good. Padhte hue dhubne laga tha Mai is kahani Mai .
Mujhe apki ye peshkas Bohat Pasand aayi.
Best of luck for contest

Bhot-bhot shukriya Immortal bhai apke itne ache review ke liye...aur saat hi is baat ki khushi bhi hui ki aapko meri ye peshkas pasand aai...keep supporting

 

[Niks96]

Review for - JAD
By Niks96

First of all thank you for this lovely story.
Kahani Ka plot acha hai , aur narration bohat Acha hai.
Is kahani ko padhte padhte mujhe Apne hometown ki Yaad aa Gayi.
Ek Achi peshkas hai ye kahani .
Sukriya ek aisi kahani likhne ke liye .
Best of luck for contest

Ek bar aur bhot-bhot shukriya apke bhumuliye review ke liye...mujhe khushi hui meri is kahani ne apko apni jado ki yaad dila di...ye kissa meri life ka ek real incident hai...aur mere dil ke kaafi kareeb bhi...aur mujhe acha lga apne mere is kisse ko pasand kiya...keep supporting

 

[Niks96]

REALITY?
Hindi
Niks96
wowww...... everyone ....an illusion
even doctor, landlord too
your writting style is superb.........
kis bhram ko kahan tak dikhana hai aur kab raj kholna hai......

actually virtual era ki generation aisi hi hai........... jo unke aspas hote hain unki bajay jo unke dimag me virtually hote hain....unhein jyada mehsoos karti hai.................

is kahani ko 10 me se 8 ank

Sabse phele to bhot khusi hui kamdev bhai apka review pakar...aur saat hi is baat ki bhi khushi hui aapko meri writing style pasand aayi (jiska mujhe hi kabhi-kabhi doubt hota he...hahaha)...kher apne sahi bola virtual era me is trah ki baate aam hoti ja rhi hai...jisper log theek se dhyaan nahi dete...

Ek bar aur apka abhar prakat karta hu itne ache review ke liye

Aur apke is review ko me deta hu 10 me se 10 ank......keep supporting

 

[Niks96]

JAD

BY: NIKS96

Language - Hinglish
bahut badhiya kathanak.......... thode shabdo me badi baat

mein bachpan se india ke sabse bade shahar me raha .... mere father defense me the bad me delhi settle ho gaye...4 chhote bhaiyo ko bhi le gaye gaon se..... pata nahi kya anubhav rahe honge unke bachpan me gaon me rehne ke.... unki antim iksha thi ki mein kabhi gaon na jaun........
lekin unke bad aj se 10 sal pehle meine gaon me akar rehna shuru kiya........... jo humesha meri dili tamanna thi......
aur parivar me koi kitna bhi kama raha hai ya raees hai............ jo khushi aur sukoon mujhe meri patni-bachchon ko hai.......... uski barabari koi nahi kar sakta........ samman aur wajood ........ jo gaon me banta hai.......... wo shahar me kuchh bhi karke nahi bana sakte


khair........... apke review ki bajay apni kahani likhne laga........

apko 10 me se 8 ank

Ek bar aur shukriya bhai apke itne lajawab review ke liye...aur jo apne apni kahani batai wo mujhe bhot achi lagi...jo ye kissa mene JAD me bataya hai wo mere saat hui ek real ghatna hai 2014 ki...jisne mere jivan par gheri chaap chodi hai...aur aapne jo batay ki kaise aap 10 saal phele apne gao apni JADO me aaker rhene lge use mujhe aur motivation mili...meri bhi ye dili icha hai ki meri antim sans mere gao meri JADO me nikle...taki me apni mitti se hamesha ke liye jud jau...aur apke faisla ne mere irada aur paka kar diya hai ki kabhi na kabhi me sab jimedariyo ke farig hoker apne gao me jakar rahunga...

Ek bar aur shukriya aap ke lajawab review ke liye...keep supporting

 

[Niks96]

JAD

Niks96

Great story writing dear very closer to reality and shows true face of what's happening today in countryside

Kisaan zameen bechta hai fir shehar mein makaan aur mehngi cars aur jab paisa khtam to na fir zameen hai aur na hi vyapaar

Shukriya brego bhai index update na hone ki wajah se apka review der me dekh paya jiska mujhe kheed hai...aur saat hi aapke itne ache review ke liye dil me khusi bhi...apne sahi kha zamidar apni zameen bech kar khusiyo ki talash me sher aata hai...aur apna sabkuch kho deta hai...is bhetreen review ke liye ek bar aur dhanyewad...keep supporting

 

[Vijay2309]

सातवां टोना
By: Vijuu Kaka ( Vijay2309 )

Wow! That's some unique Story. Vijju kaka se jaisi aasha rahti hai, bilkul usi mutabik likha hai.. Hats off bhai. You always try something unique to write, and that's your specialty, hats off to that. Really glad to read something interesting after a long time. Everything was superb. Flow, Narration, Plot, Presentation. Everything was superb. You have a good grasp over the story right from the word go. Brilliant.

This should be in Top 3 for sure.
Best of luck for the contest.
________________

Thanks makku.....mujhe nahi pata maine ye story kaise likh di lekin bas likh di.....meri hamesha se koshish rahi hai ki main koi aisi story likhi jo baaki sab story se na sirf alag ho balki manoranjak bhi ho.....tumhara review padha sach mai accha laga......kaafi saari khaamiya thi story mai lekin ab unko bhulna hi uchit hoga.....reader ko jo pasand aaye wo sona....baaki agar pasand naa aaye to Heere moti bhi kankad saman......ye meri akhiri story hai yaha.....prize mile ya nahi mujhe parwah nahi kyonki mera shuru se usool raha hai.....jo bhi kiya wo doston ke liye kiya