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ससुराल के नए कायदे कानून को सीख कर या कहें देख कर दिशा उन सब चीजों को अपना लेती है और फिर उसी में रमने के लिए तैयार हो जाती है....
उसके ससुराल वाले ओपन रिलेशन में रहते हैं.... वँहा सब एक दूसरे के साथ सब कुछ कर सकते हैं.... जिसमे अब दिशा भी शामिल हो चुकी थी...
बढ़िया इमेजिनेशन है सर... बेस्ट ऑफ लक

धन्यवाद।
सात हजार शब्दों में पूरी कहानी लिखने का प्रयास किया है.

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Love With A Gangster - A Short Love Story​

Written by Qaatil ​

Spoiler: Love With A Gangster

Love With A Gangster - A Short Love Story

"Pyaar, Ishq or Mahobbat" na jane in lafzo ne kitno ki zindagi barbad ki he... Lekin ye pyaar kuch alag sa tha.


Diksha apne pariwar ke saath apne Cousin bhai ki shadi ke liye unke sheher me thi. Diksha or uske pariwar ko dekh kar, sab kafi khush the. Agle din sablog Haldi ki tayari me kafi mashruf the, aaj kafi sare Rishtedar ghar aye hue the. Diksha apni Cousin Behne or Bhaiyo ko gale laga kar milti he. Lekin is baar Diksha apni Cousin behen ki Devarani se pehli baar mil rahi thi. Ek bahot hi cute or pyari ladki Isha, Diksha ke Maa Baap Isha ke parents ko jante the, Isha Diksha ke Parents ke per chuti he.

Pata nahi kyu lekin Isha ko Diksha ki Personality kafi acchi lagi or wo pure din Diksha ke saath ghul mil chuki thi. Shaam ke jab Haldi ki rasm honi thi, tabb Diksha ne pile rang ka suit pehna tha, jisme wo bahot hi zyada jach rahi thi, Sare Rishtedaro ne Diksha ko uski khubsurti ke liye compliment kiya, or Diksha ki Maa ne Diksha ko ek kala tika kiya, jis se Diksha ko kisi ki nazar na lage, lekin Diksha ki Kismat me to shayad kuch or hi tha.

Sablog Ghar ke upar Tarace par chale jate he, jaha Haldi ki rasm shuru ho gayi. Kuch log Dulhe ke saath photos click kar rahe the, kuch apas me baate kar rahe the, or Diksha apni Cousin behen, or uski Devarani Isha ke saath ek corner me bethi hui thi, Diksha ki cousin behen apne bacche ko dudh pilana chahti thi, or usne dudh ki bottle ghar ke ground floor par bane kitchen me rakhi thi. Diksha uthkar niche chali jati he Dudh ki bottle lane ke liye. Jab wo niche pahochi to ghar bilkul khali tha, Diksha Kitchen me dekhti he ke bottle table par hi rakhi he, wo jaldi se bottle ko le kar waha se jane ke liye piche mudi, lekin tabhi wo kisi se takra jati he.

"Ahhh" Diksha ke muh se Shoulder par dard hone se awaz nikal jati he. Or tabhi ek damdar mard ki awaz ati he "Are You Okay"
Diksha upar ki taraf dekhti he to samne khada ek 24-25 saal ka ladka tha, jiske eyebrows or kaan me chandi ki baliya thi, haath me Silver Bracelet, ghani dadhi or chehre par ek ghav ka nishan. Waise to wo kafi Handsome tha, lekin saath hi kafi Arrogant sa bhi lagg raha tha.

"Ha... Ha.... Me thik hu, I'm Sorry mene jaldi jaldi me aapko dekha nahi" wo apne aap ko sambhalte hue kehti he. Wo ladka Emotionless nighao se Diksha ko dekhta he, or uske muh se sirf "Hmm" ki awaz nikalti he, Diksha turant waha se upar Tarace par chali jati he, Aise hi kuch der baad Haldi ki Rasm khatam ho chuki thi, Guests dhire dhire ghar jane lagte he. Sare Relatives is waqt ghar me bethe hue the, tabhi Diksha ki Maa Dulhe se puchti he "Beta Karan wo ladka jiske kaan or eyebrows pierced thi, kya wo Rishi tha?"

"Ha Mami, wo Rishi Hi tha" Karna jawab deta he.
"Kya? Uske bachpan me to wo kafi gentle tha or ab... Mujhe to pehle wo pehchan me hi nahi aya tha" Diksha ki Maa Herani se kehti he.
"Thik kaha Mami, wo kafi change ho chuka he, darasal ab wo kuch gunde type ke logo ke saath rehne laga he, uske Papa bhi ab us se koi rishta nahi rakhte, Rishi akele ek Flat me rehta he... Me bhi purane Rishi ko kafi Miss karta hu" Karan Diksha ki maa ki baat ka jawab dete hue kehta he. Diksha ke Parents ko Rishi ki present situation par kafi afsos hota he. Diksha ko bhi ab yaad ata he ke wo bachpan me ek baar wo or usje parents Rishi ke ghar gaye the. Lekin ab Diksha kafi thaki hui si thi, sare log ja kar so gaye.

Wahi Dusri taraf choti si ladki Isha, Jo ki Rishi ke choti behen thi, wo apne bhai ki itne waqt ke baad dekh kar kafi khush thi, wo ja kar Rishi se bahot si baate karti he, ha Rishi ek Gangster hi tha, jise log darr ke mare salam karte the, wahi Rishi apni choti behen ke saath kafi gently baat kar raha tha. Isha use batati he ke wo aaj Diksha se mili, or wo Diksha ke bare me hi Rishi se baate kar rahi hoti he, apni choti behen ke muh se kisi ladki ki itni baate sunkar Rishi heran sa tha, kyu ke Isha koi aisi ladki nahi thi, jo aise hi kisi se impress ho jaye, Isha Rishi se kehti he "Bhaiya, me agli baar Diksha Di se aapko milaungi, wo bahot acchi ladki he, mujhe to unke saath kafi maza aya"
Rishi bass muskurate hue Haa me apna sar hila deta he.


Aaj tha Mehendi wala din, Diksha or Isha balcony me ruk kar baate kar rahi hoti he, ke tabhi waha kuch ladke ajate he, jo the Diksha ke cousin or saath me Rishi. Isha Rishi ko dekh kar uski taraf Daud padti he, or Rishi ka haath pakad kar use Balcony me lati he, apna Promise pura karne ke liye. Diksha use dekh kar kafi embarrassed ho chuki thi, wahi Rishi bhi awkward si situation me tha.
"Isha jab se tumse mili he, wo tumhari hi baate kar rahi thi" Rishi baat ki Shuruwat karte hue kehta he.

"Isha bhi bahot pyari ladki he..." Diksha apni pyari awaz me kehti he, or bass itni hi baate un dono me hui. Diksha ne apne mann me socha ke Rishi utna bhi bura nahi he, jesa usne kal raat suna tha, wo apni behen ke saath kafi gentle he.

Bairehaal... Shadi ka din agaya tha, bade se hall me bahot se log aye hue the, nachgana, masti mazak, charo taraf khushiyo ka mahol tha, lekin Diksha in sabse alag piche ek chair par bethi hui thi. Tabhi Rishi uske bagal me padi chair par akar beth jata he, or us se kehta he "Tired?"
Diksha apne khayalo me khoyi hui thi, use Rishi ki awaz ate he wo apne khayalo se bahar ati he, or ek jhuti muskurahat ke saath use kehti he " uske baad dono ke aspaa bass shanti chaa jati he, jise Diksha todte hue Rishi se puchti he "umm... Tum kyu un sabko join nahi kar rahe?" Uske sawal par Rishi Diksha ko kuch seconds ek takk dekhta he or kehta he "me nahi chahta ke meri wajah se wo sab log darr ke mare waha se chale jaye"

"Or is liye tum mere samne bethe ho? Umm mean...."
Diksha uski taraf dekhte hue kuch keh rahi hoti he ke tabhi Rishi uski baat ko kaat te hue jawab deta he "me yaha is liye betha hu ke corner me koi mujhe notice nahi kar payega... or tum bhi ho sake to yaha se bhag matt jana, i mean out of fear"

Diksha kehti he "halake me is sheher me nahi rehti hu, or me tumhe janti nahi hu, lekin tum utne bhi bure nahi lagte, mene dekha tum apni behen se bahot kindness or pyaar se pesh ate ho, tum utne bhi bure nahi ho, jitna logo ne kaha" wo Ye sab Rishi ki akho me dekhte hue kaha. Lekin tabhi Diksha ko ek call ajata he, Diksha ne jese hi Mobile screen par call karne wale ka naam dekha to uske chehre par to jese khushiya chaa gayi. Wo jaldi se uthkar Rishi se dur ho kar call pick kar leti he. Darasal ye call Diksha ke Fiance ka tha. Yes, Diksha Engaged thi, or wo us ladke ko kareeb 4 saal se pyaar karti thi.

Yaha Rishi ko Diksha ki baat sunkar kafi accha laga, lekin jese hi wo call par baat karne ke liye dur gayi to Rishi thoda irritate ho gaya tha.

Wo khush tha, kyu ke use ek aisi ladki mili jo kafi honest thi, kyu ke Diksha ne uske andar ke ek positiveness dekhi, jo bakiyo ne kabhi nahi dekhi, ulta dusro ne Rishi ke andar sirf ek shaitan dekha tha. Or wo irritate tha, kyu ke agle hi pal Diksha use akela chhod gayi, usne Diksha ki sharm, uski akho me chamak, or honto par sharmili hasi notice kar li thi. Wo kuch nahi kar paya, siwaye mobile phone ke us taraf baat kar rahe insan ke bare me sochne ke. Akhir wo kyu bina wajah jealous feel kar raha tha? Kya wo Diksha par Attract ho gaya tha? Usne apne dil se pucha.

Diksha apni baat khatam kar ke wahi par wapis akar beth gayi, jaha kuch minutes pehle usne Rishi ko akela chhoda tha. Suddenly Diksha ke chehre par khushi nazar arahi thi.

"Kon tha call par" Rishi dhimi awaz me Diksha se puchta he. "Huh... Umm.. my Fiance" wo apni sharmayi awaz me kehti he. Rishi ki aakhe aag me jalne lagi thi, wo apni jagah se uthkar kahi chala jata he. Diksha soch me padd gayi ke Rishi aise achanak kyu chala gaya.

Bairehaal, Shadi puri hote hote kafi late ho chuka tha, sablog apne apne ghar pahoch gaye the, kal Reception party thi.

Reception me bhi kafi log aye hus the, bacche Dulha or Dulhan ke saath kuch khel khel rahe the. Rishi ne dekha ke waha Isha Diksha ki kamar ko hug karte hue us se baate kar rahi thi, or Rishi ki Maa bhi waha mojud thi. Rishi ki Maa ne use dekh liya or jaldi se Rishi ki taraf agayi. Rishi apni Maa ko apne paas ata dekh kar Muskurane lagta he.

"Mera Beta kesa he tu? Ha? Ghar ata nahi, call karta nahi, khana to thik se khate ho na?" Wo Rishi ke chehre se haath ferte hue kehti he. "Ha Maa... Me thik hu, P..... Papa... Thik he na?" Wo apni ladkhati awaz me puchta he. "Khud ghar akar puch nahi sakta?"

"Maa please ab tum firse shuru matt ho jana" wo Apni Maa ke haath thamkar kehta he. Kuch der tak dono ki baate hoti he.

Function khatam ho gaya tha, lekin isme kafi late ho chuka tha, parking lot me khadi almost sari cars chali gayi thi, or waha bass ek car mojud thi, Manav (Rishi ka chota bhai) Rishi ko zabardasti pakad kar us gadi me bitha deta he, halaki uska ghar jane ka mann nahi tha, uske to kuch or hi plans the. Rishi jab car me betha to usne paya ke piche ki seat par uske saath Diksha so rahi thi, or Isha uski godd me soyi thi. Rishi ke chehre par bass dono ko dekh kar muskurahat ajati he. Tabhi age ki seat par Manav ke saath uski patni ajati he.

"Uhhhh.... To itne din baad apne darshan de hi diye Devar ji aapne" wo ek badi si muskurahat ke saath Rishi se kehti he. "Ha.... Bass... Waise Manav tang to nahi kar raha? Aisa he to mujhe batana, me apne hisab se use sabak sikha dunga" uski baat par dono hasne lagte he. Raat ke 12 baje the, gadi pehle Dulhe ke ghar jani thi, jaha Diksha, Isha or Manav ki patni rukne wale the. Bahar ka mosam kafi thanda tha, car ki windows open thi, or tabhi barish shuru ho gayi. Rishi Manav ko gadi ki speed ko kam rakhne ko kehta he, or khud Diksha ki taraf ki Window close karne ke liye aage jhukta he. Lekin window close hote hi Rishi ki nazar soti hui Diksha par kafi nazdeek se padti he. Wo bass Diksha ko nihar raha tha, or tabhi "Ahhhhh" Diksha ke muh se dard bhari karah nikalti he, kyu ke Diksha ka sar Rishi ke sar se takra gaya tha.

"Manav" Rishi kafi gusse me uspar chillata he. Manav waise bhi Rishi se kafi darta tha. "Bhai, sorry... Wo mene Speed Breaker nahi dekha' wo gadi ki speed bilkul ka karte hue kehta he. Isha bhi bass girne wali thi, lekin Rishi ne use pakad liya tha, Diksha apna matha sehla rahi thi.

"Tum thik ho na" usne fikarmandi se Diksha se pucha.
"Ha... Ha, me thik hu" Diksha kehti he. Rishi uske liye fikarmand tha, jo Manav ki patni ne notice kar liya tha. Tino ladkiyo ko ghar chhod kar Manav Rishi ko apne ghar le jana chahta tha, lekin Rishi mana kar deta he, tabb Manav use uske ghar takk chhod deta he. Rishi puri raat so nahi paya, kyu ke jese hi wo aakhe band karta, uske samne Diksha ka chehra ajata.

Subah Diksha or uska pariwar apne ghar jane ke liye tayar tha, Isha to use jane nahi dena chah rahi thi, lekin fir wo samajh jati he. Diksha or uska pariwar apne ghar laut gaya tha. Raat me Rishi Isha or Manav ki patni ko lene agaya ye jane bina ke Diksha to subah hi ghar laut gayi he. Manav ki patni ne ye dekh liya tha ke Rishi ko Diksha ke liye feelings he, tabb wo Rishi se baat karti he ke ye possible nahi he, use Diksha ke bare me sochna chhod dena chahiye, kyu ke wo pehle se hi kisi se Engaged he. Lekin koi nahi janta tha ke Rishi kuch aisa karne wala he, jis se sabke hosh ud jane the.

Ha, hum baat kar rahe he Rishi ki, ek gangster, ek nirdayi or gusse wala insaan. Rishi katayi aisa insan nahi tha, jis se wo pyaar karne wali ladki ko apni life se dur jane de.

5 Months Later.....

Isha 5 mahine baad Rishi se baat kar rahi thi, baato baato me usne Rishi ki bataya ke wo parso Diksha ki shadi me ja rahi he. Ye sunkar Rishi ka khun khol chuka tha.

Haldi se ek din pehle, jab Diksha apni cousins ke saath parlour se ghar laut rahi thi, tabhi ek black car akar uski car ko rok deti he, jabtak Diksha ki cousins kuch kar pati, tabtak to wo black car Diksha ko le kar faraar ho gayi thi, ghar me shadi ka mahol matang me badal gaya tha. Dulhe ke ghar walo ko jab ye baat pata chali to wo log bhi Diksha ke ghar agaye the.

Pariwar ne Police me faryad likhwa di thi. Lekin Diksha ka kahi koi ata pata nahi tha. Wahi dusri taraf aas pados ke log apni apni tippaniya de rahe the. Koi kehta ke pakka Diksha ka kisi or ke saath chakkar tha, or wo usi ke saath bhag gayi he. To kuch log kehte ke nahi Diksha acchi ladki he, lekin agar wo mil bhi gayi to kon us se shad karega, pata nahi kitne logo ne uske saath kya kya kiya hoga.

Ye sab sunkar Dulhe ke pariwar ke dimag me alag alag bate ghum rahi thi, wo log apne ghar chale gaye yaha sirf Diksha ke family majud thi.

Wahi dusri taraf Diksha kafi dari hui thi, use nahi pata tha ke use kisne kidnap kiya he, or kyu? Lekin jese hi usne Kidnap karne wale ka chehra dekha wo heran reh gayi thi. Rishi, Isha ka bada bhai.... Halaki wo ek gangster tha, lekin Diksha ko pata tha ke usne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya jis se Rishi ne use kidnap kiya. Rishi ne use ek beach house me rakha tha, or Diksha ke mathe par Gun point kar ke, zabardasti use shadi karne ke liye majbur kiya, waha par ek pandit bhi majud tha, lekin us pandit ki bhi halat darr ke mare buri hui padi thi.

Rishi ne Diksha se kapde change kar ke, usne jo shadi ka joda laya tha, use pehen ne ke liye kaha, Diksha ne saaf mana kar diya, tabb Rishi ne Zabardasti uske kapde badalva hi diye. Diksha bass roye ja rahi thi.

"Please.... Mujhe jane do.... Mene tumhara kya bigada he? Mummy Papa, meri chinta kar rahe honge, or.... Or Anuj(Diksha ka Fiance) please mujhe jane do... Kal... Kal meri haldi he.... Mene....." Diksha aonw haath jod kar rote hue Rishi se keh rahi hoti he ke tabhi Rishi uske honto par ungli rakh kar use bolne se rok deta he, or gusse me Diksha se kehta he "Shhhhhh..... Tumhara pati yaha tumhare samne khada he, or tum kisi or mard ke bare me baat kar raho ho.... Bolo, tumhe kese saza du" Diksha ko Rishi ka touch karna bahot hi ghinona lagg raha tha. Wo jhatke se Rishi ka haath hatate hue kehti he "hum Shadi shuda nahi he... Tumne mujhpar zabardasti ki he...."

"Tum sirf meri ho.... Or ye me tumhe Samjha kar rahunga"
Or fir wo zabardasti Diksha se shadi kar leta he, or jo kuch raat me hona tha, wo to batane ki zarurat nahi thi. Diksha puri tarah se tuti hui thi, subah uski aakh khulti he, uske pure badan me dard ho raha tha. Lekin uska sirf badan hi dard nahi kar raha tha, uska Dil badan se zyada dard me tha. Wo janti thi ke ab ghar jana kafi late ho gaya he, uske dimag me kafi sari baate arahi thi, agar to Diksha yaha se bach bhi jaye to kya Anuj ek aisi ladki se shadi karega, jo Ek Gangster ke saath raat bita kar ayi he? Log uspar kitne sawal khade karenge? Lekin Diksha ko ye bhi pata tha ke agar wo yaha se Anuj ke paas chali bhi jaye to Rishi use jaan se maar dega, kisi dusre mard ke saath dekh kar.

Diksha washroom me ja kar nahane lagti he, or apne badan se Rishi ki smell ko dur karne ki puri koshish karti he, Diksha ek Strong ladki thi, wo aise hi kisi situation me haar maan ne wali nahi thi, lekin is waqt uska hosla puri tarah se tut chuka tha. Wo bahar akar kal pehni jeans me se apna mini purse nikalti he, jisme uske Maa Baap, or bhagwaan ki tasveer lagi hui thi. Diksha us Bhagwaan ki tasveer ko nikal kar apne haatho me rakhti he, or apne aakge band kare unse baate karne lagti he, ye baate shayad itni gehri ho gayi thi ke Diksha apne aap ko rone se rok na payi. Rishi bahar akar Diksha ko dekhta he, or uske nirdayi Dil me Diksha ko dekh dard sa hota he, use kal raat ke apne dwara kiye gaye saluk par pachtava ho raha tha. Lekin Diksha na to use dekhti he, or na hi uski baat ka jawab deti he jab Rishi ne us se pucha "me khane ke liye intezam kar raha hu, tum kya khana pasand karogi?"

Kya Diksha Gussa thi? Nahi, wo to bass apne aap ko calm rakhne ki koshish kar rahi thi, wo janti thi ke ab jo kuch hona he, use bhagwaan par hi chhod dena chahiye. Diksha khidki me bethe apni uljhi life ke sawal dhund rahi thi, tabhi Rishi uske samne akar beth jata he, or Diksha ko khane ke liye kehta he, lekin Diksha ne khane se mana kar diya.
Rishi apne chehre par hasi late hue Diksha se kehta he "to... Meri patni chahti he ke me use apne Haatho se khana khilau?" Uski baat par Diksha bahot gusse me Rishi ko dekhti he. Or Rishi kehta he
"Tum Gusse me or bhi zyada Khubsurat dikhti ho"

"Okay please ab khana kha lo.... Tumhara gussa mujhpar he, khane par gussa utarna thik nahi he..." Rishi ke kafi samjhane ke baad Diksha khana kha leti he.

"Meri patni cute he" wo muskurate hue Diksha se kehta he. Diksha kuch keh nahi rahi thi, lekin wo apne mann me soch rahi thi ke ye kesa insan he? Usne pehle to apna accha swabhav dikhaya, lekin kal raat uska voilent character bhi dikha diya. Wo arrogant tha, lekin wo flirt bhi kar raha tha?

"Jo kuch tumne mere saath kiya, maan lo agar koi tumhari......" Diksha Rishi ki aakho me dekhte hue kehne ja rahi thi, lekin wo aage kuch nahi bol payi, lekin Rishi uski baat samajh gaya, use apne aap par ghin arahi thi. "Thik he.... Me tumhe parso ghar le jaunga....."

Teen din baad......

Rishi ne Manav ki patni ko call kar ke bataya ke Diksha uske saath he. Or wo kal subah hi ghar arahe he. Ye baat sunkar wo kafi heran ho gayi thi, usne Rishi ko kaha ke use Diksha se baat karni he, usne phone Diksha ki maa ko de diya, jese hi Diksha ne ko apni Maa ki awaz ayi to wo bikhar kar rone lagi, kuch seconds baat karte hi, Rishi ne Diksha se phone chin kar kaat diya.

Raat ko Rishi or Diksha ghar jane ke liye nikal chuke the, Diksha pure raste bas yahi soche ja rahi thi ke wo kese apne parents se kahegi jo kuch uske saath hua, wo kese apne hone wali pati ko kahegi ke uski shadi zabardasti ho chuki he....

Subah ke 6 baje Diksha ki aakhe khuli, wo dono ghar pahoch chuke the. Rishi ek shawl Diksha par odh deta he, Diksha dod kar ghar me chali jati he, or apne Maa Baap ko gale laga kar rone lagti he, Rishi bhi andar agaya tha, usne paya ke uske Maa Baap bhi samne khade he. Ye sari baat Dulhe ke pariwar ko bhi bata di gayi thi, lekin afsos ki pichle 4 saal se Diksha ne jise chaha tha, usne ye shadi cancel kara di thi.

Rishi apna sar jhukaye aage badta he, or jese hi wo Kehne jata he "Papa.... Sorry....." Tabhi use kaskar ek thappad padta he. Sablog waha khade Rishi ko dekh rahi the. Rishi ke pita Police ko call karne ja rahe the apne criminal bete ko arrest karwane ke liye, lekin tabhi Rishi kehta he "hum dono ne shadi kar li he... Diksha mujhe nahi pasand karti, lekin wo ye bhi pasand nahi kar sakti ke me jail me jau"

"Dafa ho ja yaha se.... Warna....." Diksha ke Papa bade hi gusse me Rishi se kehte he, lekin Rishi unki baat bich me kaat te hue kehta he "me apni patni ko liye bina kahi nahi jaunga"

Waha khada har shaks janta tha ke Rishi sarfira insan he, wo apni baat par ada rahega. Tabb Diksha ke Parents Diksha ko andar kamre me le jate he.

"Beta tum batao tumhe kya karna he?" Uski Maa Diksha se puchti he.
"Mummy meri baat please Anuj se karaye.... Please" wo apne aakh me asu laye kehti he, lekin uski baat par dono hi apna sar jhuka lete he. Jab Diksha dono se puchti he to wo sabkuch Diksha ko bata dete he ke Anuj ne is shadi ko thukra diya he. Diksha ke pichle kuch din itne bure the, lekin ye silsila khatam nahi hua, Diksha ki to jese sari ummide khatam ho chuki thi, uske parents ab Diksha ko chup kara dete he, Diksha kafi gehri soch me thi. Kafi soch vichar karne ke baad Diksha ne faisla le liya tha. Use Rishi e ke saath apni zindagi bitana hi thik samajh liya tha. Uske parents to is baat ke bilkul khilaf the, lekin Diksha ne unhe samjhaya, ke agar jo insan use pichle 4 saal se pyaar kar raha tha, usne hi uska saath chhod diya he to wo dusre kis par bharosa kar sakti he? Or is baat ka jawab to dono ke paas nahi tha, Diksha apne parents ke Ashirwad le kar apni zindagi ki nayi Shuruwat karne ke liye tayar thi.

Diksha ka relation Rishi ke saath koi romantic sa nahi tha, lekin fir bhi wo apni patni hone ki zimmedari acche se nibhati, wo ab Rishi ke pariwar ke saath reh rahi thi, kyu ke unhe dar tha ke kahi Rishi Diksha ko koi nuksan na pahocha paye. Unhone Diksha ko jitna pyaar diya tha wo shayad kabhi apne sage baccho ko bhi nahi diya.

Rishi ke parents Diksha ke liye kafi pareshan the, unhone Diksha ko kuch din tak apne Maa Baap ke paas bhej diya, Rishi jab apne ghar aya to usne paya ke Diksha waha nahi he, or use waha par mojud na dekh kar wo pagla sa gaya tha. Isha use batati he ke Papa ne Bhabi ko apne ghar bhej diya he, kyu ke unki tabiyat kharab thi.

Rishi Diksha ko call kar raha tha, lekin Diksha uske phone ka jawab nahi de rahi thi. Ab Rishi kafi tensed ho gaya tha. Rishi ki Maa uske paas akar apne asu bahate hue Rishi se kehti he "kabtak tum aise rahoge? Ab tum Baap bann ne ja rahe ho.... Abhi bhi mauka he, apne bacche ke bare me or Diksha ke bare me to socho.... Upar wale ne Diksha jesi ladki tumhare naseeb me likhi he, to ab to ye gunda gardi chhod do beta...."

Rishi apni num aakho se apna sar haa me hilata he, or Diksha se milne uske ghar chala jata he. Diksha ke parents use Diksha ka kamra dikhate he, Rishi andar ja kar kamra band kar deta he or usne dekha ke Diksha kamre me bane chote se mandir ke samne bethe aakhe band kiye prarthana kar rahi thi. Usne paya ke Diksha kafi kamzor lagg rahi he, uski aakho ke niche dark circles aye hue the. Diksha apni prarthana puri karte hi Rishi ko waha dekhti he.

"Tum..... Tum yaha betho me tumhare liye khane ka intezam karti hu" ye kehkar wo bahar jane lagti he ke tabhi Rishi uska haath piche se pakad kar use rok deta he. Or Diksha ko kamar se pakad kar apne nazdeek le ata he "I'm Sorry..... Mujhe maaf kar dena un sab situation ke liye jisne tum guzri ho, wo bhi mujh jese Haiwan ke saath.... Mene tumhe bahot dukh diye he... Kabhi tumhe khushiyo ke pal nahi diye, tumhe apne haq nahi diye.... Fir bhi tum mere bacche ko janm dene ke liye tayar ho, Diksha mujhe maaf kar do....." Or wo asuo me beh kar rone lagta he, Diksha uski baato me sacchayi mehsus kar pa rahi thi. Uski bhi aakhe asuo se bhar chuki thi. Rishi ne Diksha se wada kiya ke wo ek nayi life ki Shuruwat karega, or usne apni eyebrows or kano me lagi baliya nikal di, apne haath se bracelet utar diya.

Rishi ne apna wada nibhaye rakha, usne apna flat bech diya, or wo Diksha ke saath is sheher ko chhod kar dusre shehre me chala gaya, Rishi nahi chahta tha ke uske bacche par uske beete kal ka saya pade. Rishi ne ek chota sa business shuru kar diya, kyu ke Rishi ko koi apne company ka employee nahi banana chahenge. Diksha ne ek ladki ko janm diya, or uska naam rakha "Risha" jo ki Rishi or Diksha ke naam ka mel tha.

Kuch saal beet chuke the, is baar Diksha ne ek ladke ko janm de diya tha, in char logo ki family kafi khush thi, ab Diksha Rishi se apne dil ki gehrayi se pyaar karne lagi thi, jese ki mene kaha tha, ye pyaar lafz ne na jane kitno ki zindagi barbad kar di he, lekin Diksha ke pyaar ne Rishi ki zindagi ko ek nayi Shuruwat di thi. Saalo beet chuke the, Diksha or Rishi ki beti 11 saak ki ho gayi thi, or beta 8 saal ka.


Ek din Rishi apna kuch zaruri kaam karne ke liye ja raha tha, usne ghar pe tino ko tayar ho kar uska intezar karne ke liye kaha tha, kyu aaj wo sab kahi jane wale the. Rishi pyaar se Diksha ke mathe par chumkar apne kaam ke liye nikal gaya. Diksha ne apne dono baccho ko tayar hone ke liye kaha, or khud bhi tayar ho gayi, wo tino Rishi ka intezar kar rahe the. Rishi ghar wapis lauta, lekin Zinda nahi, mara hua, mathe par goli kha kar. Kisi ne use maar diya, ye goli kisne chalayi ajatak pata nahi chala.

17 saal beet chuke the, sabne Diksha se kaha tha ke wo dusri shadi kar le, lekin usne kabhi dusri shadi nahi ki, or bass apne or Rishi ke kuch pyaar bhare lamhe yaa karte apni zindagi jine lagi.

To dosto kya Rishi or Diksha ka ye "Pyaar, Ishq ya Mahobbat" safal raha ya adhura? Is baat ka jawab mujhe Review thread me zarur dijiye. Kahani pasand ayi to like zarur karna, or apne kimti Review zarur post karna.

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[prkin]

धन्यवाद।
सात हजार शब्दों में पूरी कहानी लिखने का प्रयास किया है.

After the contest is over, may continue this saga for a few more chapters. May be another 8 to 10, no more.

 

[Seducer1-7]

RASHMI KA DARD

Spoiler

Rasmi ki musibat shayad uska picha chodna hi nahi chahti thi bachpan me maa ka hath sir se hat gya or shadi ke 1.5 saal baad uski goad me ek ladki dekar uska pati bhi chood kar chala gya pati ke jaate to maano dukho ka pahaad toot pada uske sir per jaha kuch din pehle tak sab uski tarieef karte the wahi aaj use manhos kalmui keh kar taane maarte the bahut muskil se bechari ke jeevan kat raha tha mayike me bus uske baapu hi the jo ki kheto me majduri karke apna pait bharta tha rashmi ye baat jaanti thi ki kitni muskilo se uske baap ne uski shaadi ki thi esliye vo unhe sab bta kar dukhi nahi karna chahti thi

kailash singh- ( rashmi ka baapu)

age- 42 ( majduri karne ki wajah se jism abhi bhi majboot hai)


lund- 6.5 /2.2


rashmi -

age- 22 ( rang gora )

hight- 5.6

fig- 34/32/36 ( kul mila kar kaam devi ka roop thi)

ab kahani per aate hai

rashmi ke pati ko mare 2 mahine ho gye the or ye 2 mahine saalo ki tarah kat the rashmi ke liye wahi kailash bhi apni beti ka haal chaal lene ke liye uske sasural ke liye nikal chuka tha

R saas- are kutiya mere bete ko to khaa gayi ab kya hume bhukha maar ne ka iraada hai kya suraj nikal gya hai nasta nahi bna abhi tak

R- nasta taiyaar hai maa ji abhi laayi bus gudiya ro rahi thi to use doodh pila kar aayi hu

Rsaas- tu or teri manhoos beti ko to bus free ka khane ko chahiye

R- lijiye maa ji aapka nasta

Rsaas- aaatthhhuuuuu ye nasta hai ,( baal pakad kar ghasit ne lagi)

kailash singh- samdhan ji ye kya kar rahi hai aap meri phool si bachi ke sath chodiye

Rsaas- ohhh phool si bachhi hai to ise apne sath hi leja na waise bhi hume es manhoss ki jarurat nahi hai

ka- haa le jaunga abhi zinda hu me ( chal beti apne ghar chal )

r- per baapu mein kaise jaa sakti hu

rsaas- tu kya ab hume bhi maar ke jayegi kalmuhi

ka- bus ab ek shabd nahi warna bhul jaunga ki aap rashmi ki saas hai or tu chal meri gudiya apne ghar abhi tera baap itna to kaamata hi hai ki tujhe or teri beti ko khila sake

uske baad rashmi bhi kucj nahi boli or apna samaan or apni gudiya ko lekar apne baapu ke sath chal di apne ghar
ghar pahuchte - 2 unhe raat ho gayi thi to kailash singh padoos ki maalti kaaki ke paas gya or use sab bataya( malti kaaki ne hi rashmi ko paala tha maa ke baad)
kailash ki baat sunkar maalti ne jaldi se khaana banaya or kailash ke sath uske ghar agyi

R- ram ram kaaki kaisi ho tum

malti- me thik hu bitiya la gudiya mujhe de or tu apne baapu ko khaana de or khud bhi khaa le

aise hi malti kaaki se baat karte hue rashmi ne or uske baapu ne khana khaaya or phir sone chale gaye

rashmi ke ghar me ek kamra tha jis me ek hi khatiya thi to rashmi ne apna bistar niche hi lga liya or apni beti ko khud se chipkaye so gayi

subah kailash singh ki aankh pehle khuli or jaise hi niche nazar gayi to kuch pal dekhne ke baad vo bahar chala gya darsal raat ko gudiya ko dudh pilaane ke baad rashmi apni moti chuchi ko bina dhake hi so gayi jise dekh kar kailash singh ko ek jhatka lga or lagta bhi kyu na kitne barso baad itni haseen chuchiyo ke darsan kiye the vo bhi khud ki beti ki per rishte ko yaad karke vo chup chaap bahar nikal gya lekin barso se bujhi apne baapu ki aag ko rashmi ki khuli chuchiyo ne ek dabi si chingari to dikha di thi
bahar nikal kar kailash singh apne ghar per bane chote se bathroom me nahane laga bahar se aati awaazo se rashmi ki aankh bhi khul gayi or apni halat ko dekh kar soch ne lagi ki baapu ne dekha hoga to kya soch rahe honge aage se dhyaan rakhna hoga mujhe yahi sab sochte hue vo bitiya ko khatiya per sula ke angan me bane nal per chal di jaha uska baapu naha raha tha waha pahuch kar jaise hi muh dhone ke al chalaya to nal per jami kayi pe fisal gyi or sidha apne baapu ki goad me giri wahi rashmi ko sambhal ne ke chakkar me jaise hi apne hath badahye to rashmi ke sakht or mote chuche uske haath me aagye jinka ehsaas hote hi kailash ka barso se soya hua lund angadai lene lga or us per ghee ka kaam rashmi ke hath ne kiya jo ki uthne ke chakkar me apne baapu ka lund pakad bethi

R- aaaahhhhR- aaaahhhh baabu maaf karna mein kaayi me fisal gayi ( baapu ki goad se uthate hue boli) thi

per kailash ki nazar to uske gehre gale ke blouse me se jhakti hui gori gori chuchi per tiki hui thi jis ka asar ye hua ki rashmi ke hath me dabe uske baapu ke lund ne thumka maara apne hath per lund ka ehsaas hote hi 2 mahine se shant rashmi ki chut me citiya rengne lagi thi wahi ab tak kailash ka hath un moti moti chuchiyo ko apni mutthi me bharne lga tha ye sab itni jaldi hua ki dono kuch samjh hi nahi paye per aag to lag chuki thi bus ab jal ne ke baari thi abhi kuch or hota ki bahar se malti ki awaaz aane lagi jo kisi se baat karte hue unke ghar hi aa rahi thi dono ne jaise hi malti ki awaaz suni to hadbada kar khade hue kailash kapde pehan ne lga to wahi rashmi apni saree ko pakde tezi se ghar me ghus gayi tez tez saansein lene lagi

R-( man me) uuuuufffff ye kya ho gya aaj aaaaahhh baabu ko vo kitna mota or garam tha or baabu ke bus chune se hi meri ye chut itni geeli kyu ho gayi aaaahhhhh kitna acha lag raha tha or shayad baapu bhi pyaase hai tabhi to kaise meri chuchiya masal rahe the kitna mja aaya chhiiiiiiii ye mein kya sochne lagi vo mere baapu hai aahhhhhhhh

wahi kapde pehan kar kailash bina chai piye hi kheto per chala gya or apni beti ke baare me soch ne laga

ka- kitni moti or shakt chuchi hai rashmi ki pure hath me bhi nahi aa rahi thi or uske hath se hi itna mja aaya to to uski chut me daal kar chod ne me kitna mja aayega uuffffff kya mast jawani chadhi hai usne to abhi dhang se chudai ka mja bhi nahi liya or apne baap ki tarah pyaasi ho gayi per ab or nahi
( per kailash vo teri beti hai ye galat hoga)
ka- kuch galat nahi agar jism ki aag me jalti rahi to khush bhi nahi reh payegi pehle hi itne dukh jhele hai ab or nahi agar vo sath degi to mein bhi piche nahi hatunga


yahi sab sochte hue shaam ho gayi or ghar aate 2 raat jaha rashmi apne baapu ka intzaar kar rahi thi kyuki vo subah se hi bhukha tha aaj or es waqt rashmi ko sirf yahi fikar thi
tabhi kailash aaya or sidha nal per jaa kar hath muh dhoke khaane ke liye baith gya

R- aap doupher me kyu nahi aaye baapu or subah bhi aise hi chale gaye

( subah ka zikar aate hi kailash singh ka lund angdai lene lga)

ka- kuch nahi vo kaam jayda tha na esliye nahi aaya bitiya so gayi

R- haaa baapu vo soo gayi hai

eske baad dono kuch nahi bole or chup chaap khaana khane ke apne 2 bistar per lait gaye lailtein ki roshni halki roshni us andhere me kaafi thi ye dekhne ke liye ki dono hi karwat badal rahe the per so koi nahi tha jaha rashmi ka hath apni chut ke upar tha wahi kailash subah ka darsya yaad karke apne lund ko masal raha tha ki achanak lailtain bujh gayi shayad tail khatam hone ki wajah se or kamre me ghor andhera ho gya ab bus dono ki saansein chalne ki awaaz gunz rahi thi hawas kailash ko majbur kar rahi thi ki vo chad jaye rashmi per lekin himmat nahi ho rahi thi kuch der yuhi kas makash me ghire rehne ke baad kailash utha or niche rashmi ki bagal me baith gya jiska ehsaas hote hi rashmi ki saanse tham si gayi wahi badi himmat karke kailash apni beti ki chuchi ko hath me thaame laita raha jab rashmi ki taraf se koi harkat nahi hui to ek hath se uski saree uthane laga rashmi ka to ye soch ke hi bura haal ho raha tha ki aage kya hoga saree jangho per aake aatak gayi kyuki baki uski moti gand ke niche dabi hui thi to kailash ne jor lagana thik nahi samjha or apna hath saree ke andar ghusa diya jo ki sidha rashmi ki baalo wali chut se takraya jo ki bahut ro rahi thi jiska ehsaas apne hath per hote hi kailash itna to samjh gya ki rashmi jaag rahi hai or vo bhi yahi chahti hai ye sab soch kar kailash khada hokar rashmi ki taango kee bich aaya or saree ko pakad kar kamar tak utha diya or apni dhoti khol ke apne lund ko apni beti ki chut pee ragad ne lga jis se rashmi pagal hoti jaa raahi thi per uski awaaz nahi nikal rahi thi wahi lund ko chut per ragadte hue

uske blouse ko khol ne lga or blouse kholte hi kailash ne dudh se bhare us kalash ko apne muh me bhar liya or rashmi ki taango ko hawa me utha kar ek jordar parhaar kiya uski chut per jis se uska musal lund rashmi ki chut ki dewaro ko chirta hua garbhshye tak pahuch gya or es jhatke ko sehte hue rashmi ne bina awaaz kiye apne baapu ko kas ke apne se chipka liya or pagalo ki tarh use chumne or noch ne lagi kailash bhi bina kuch bole chup chaap tezi se lund ko andar bahar karta raha rashmi ki halat kharab ho chuki thi vo to bus sharam se muh dabaye bus leti padi thi apne baapu ke niche or aise hi ye be awaaz chudai karib 20 min chali jiske baad kailash wahi side me ludak gya jabki rashmi thodi der yuhi laiite rehne ke baad rashmi khadi ho bathroom gayi or khud ko saaf karke chup chaap apni beti se chipak kar so gayi
aaj use kayi dino baad sakoon ki neend aayi

subah uski aankh jald hi khul gayi to nasta bna kar vo gate ki kundi lagai or parda lga ke nahane lagi kailash so kar utha to use raat ki saari ghtna yaad agyi to vo muskurta hua khada hua or bahar angan me jaha use pani girne ki awaaz aayi to vo usi taraf jaa ke parde me se dekhne lga jaha rashmi puri nangi hokar naha rahi thi es waqt uski peeth uske baapu ki taraf thi jis se kailash ki ankho ke samne uski gori gaand agayi thi jo ki kailash per qahar dha rahi thi jiske chalte vo dhoti khol kar andar ghush gya or piche se rashmi ko pakad chumne lga rashmi es achanak hamle se ghabra gayi thi per vo kuch samjhpaati us se pehle uske baapu ka lund uski chut me sma chuka tha lund ka ehsaas apni chut me hote hi pehli bar rashmi ki awaaz aayi

R- aaaaahhhhh baapu ye kya kar rahe ho uuuuffffff kisi ne dekh liya to gazab ho jayega agar apko karna hi hai hai to andar chal kar lo ab me apki hi to hu

kailash ko bhi rashmi ki baat sahi lagi or vo aise hi rashmi ko uthaye andar le gya or bistar per lita ke jor jor se chod ne lga

R- aaaaaahhhhhhhmaaaaaaaaa baapu araam se uuufffffff bahut mja aaraha hai aise hi chodo mujhe kal raat bahut dino baad itni achi neend aayi mujhe ohhhh mujhe hamesa aise hi pyar karna baapu me dobara dukhi nahi ho na chahti oooohhhhhh

Ka- aaa haa meri bachhi ab hum dono sath rahenge or aise hi pyar karunge hum ye gao bhi chodd denge uuuuufffffdd

R- aaaaahhhhhh baapu aise hi ooohhhhhhh me gayi uuuffffffffff

or kuch hi pal me sab shant ho gya or dono baap beti yuhi lete rahe

R- aaah baabu tum bahut ache ho tumne mujhe us narak se nikaal kar jo khushi di hai vo mein kabhi nahi bhulungi

ka- mein bhi bahut khush hu tumhe paa kar ab hum jald hi ye gaon chodd denge

aise hi baato me nasta khatam hua or dono baap beti apne kaam me lag gye

kuch mahino baad kailash ne vo gaon chodd diya or rashmi ke ke sath apna jeewan bitaane lga ek varsh baad rashmi ne ek ladke ko janam diya or apne baapu kam pati ke sath khushi 2 jeene lagi


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First Review :

Ek dard bhari kahani jo shuru hote hi chudai ki kahani me tabdeel ho gyi, kahani ke title se esa laga ki shayad rashmi ke baap ne rashmi ka guda dwar apne musal se khola hoga isiliye iska naam 'rashmi ka dard' rakha hoga lekin ye toh ek aam chudai gatha hi nikali jokes apart, kahani below average rahi shuru se leke end tak shayad words limit hone ki vajah se or fir kahani ka title se bilkul mel na khana overall meri taraf se is kahani ko 5 me se 1 points, extra ek point saxy gifs ke liye (5-2)
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[Naina]

Kahani ~ A LONER
Writer ~ Yug Purush ​

Kahani - kahani hai ek ladke ki . jiska naam hai Aakash.. akele pan se pehle se hi jujhta... kisi se zyada baat chit nahi karta.... apni maa ko khone ke baad kabhi na mita paane wali dard ke sath sath sampurn roop se akelapan ka shikar ho gaya.. uske liye sab kuch ya tak ki duniya nirah si ho gayi.. duniya ke bhid mein tanha mehsus karne laga... to usne ek decision liya ki wo ab dharti pe nahi balki space pe rahega... waise pehle se iski taiyari kar raha tha.. matlab saaf tha ki is rang birangi duniya se zyada ushe space ke andhkkaar zyada pasand aaya...
waise hota hai... kayio ke sath hota hai jab akele pan ka shikar hote hai... to bas jaise jindagi hi kaatne ko doudta hai...
ab space yani ki ISS par apne dost nic ke sath pahunch ke uski mulaakat hanshmukh, utshah se paripurn Aurora se huyi... hairani ki baat yeh hai ki uske jindagi mein uski mom k baad ek Aurora hi thi jo Akash ke bin bole uske mann ki baat samajh jaaye.. chehre ke bhav dekhke hi bol de ki kya pareshani hai usko..

Khair.. ab din gujare.. dono ke bich pehle dosti phir shayad pyar bhi ho gaya tha.. Aurora ki sang rahkar wo apni tanhaiyo ko bhool ne laga tha... ek pyaar ka ehsaas uske mann ko gudguda sa gaya tha... lekin honi ko koun taal sakta hai.... ISS pe huyi ek durghatna ke chalte aur us durghatna ke waqt apach mein huyi bahas baazi ya Aurora dwara liye galat faisla ke chalte jaha Aurora marne ki kagar tak pahunch gayi thi wohi aakash ki bhi maut nischit thi.. par aain mauke par apni jaan ka parwah na karte huye nic ne dono ko bacha liya... par us radiator - 1 pe ghate durghatna ke chalte aur helmet huyi depressurized wajah se radiation ka shikar bani wo...
uske baad to jaise uski haalat bigadti gayi udhar usko dekh aakash bhi tutta gaya andar hi andar....ishi bich waha ISS pe treatment thik se na ho pane ke wajah se Aurora ko space shuttle ke jariye wapis prithvi le aaye.. lekin afsos aate waqt shuttle mein huye bhari dabav ke kaaran maari gayi... lekin hairan kar dene wali baat yeh hai uski marne ki wajah kuch aur hi thi... pehle se ek bahot hi durlav genetic bimari se grast thi.. radiator ki dhamake aur radiation ke chalte wo bimari activate ho gayi... jo ant mein uski maut ki kaaran bani...
so Aurora k jaane ke baad phir se wohi tanhayi wali jinadgi jeene laga ISS par .. wohi akela pan wohi nirah si jivan wohi khamoshi wohi viraniya .. jaise jeeta hai A... LONER

ab aate hai sameeksha par - - sapne tut te hai to tutne do . unme se ek tukda chuno aur phir se sapne ko buno... ummid ka daaman kabhi mat chhodo aakhiri saans tak... jo ummid ki naav par savar hokar nikloge to sahil ka milna tay hai.. mushkilein kiske raashte mein nahi? pareshaniya kiske jivan ka hissa nahi akela pan se pidit sirf kiya aakash hai.. dukh kya sirf uske hisse mein hai.. dukh to sabhi ke hisse mein hota hai.. par aakash ne dukh baatne ki jagah apne andar samet rakha.... yeh ek weak point hai uske liye.. itna padha likha hai phir bhi is baat ehsaas nahi hai kya ki dukh baatne se kam hota, aur tanav bhi..
aur baant nahi paa raha hai to inse paar pa le.. kyunki dukh dard tanhaiyo pareshaniyo paar ushi ko mil sakta hai jo dar kar baitha nahi... jisne lagatar koshish ki, jisne nirasha ko, tanhaiyo ko, akele pan ko apne upor haavi hone nahi diya.. jo haar kar bhi kabhi nahi hara, saralata usiko har aurr se milti hai...
kehte hai ummid pe duniya kayam hai... yeh ummid ka hi karisma hai ki kal jo kaam asambhav lage the aaj nahi kal sakar ho sakte hai.. aasha gahri Andhri raat mein dipak ki jalti lo ki saman hai.... Agar ye sambhav hai to aakash ke liye kyun sambhav nahi akele pan ke un gehre andhkkaar galiyo se bahar nikal, apne jindagi ko ek nayi ujale ke aurr le jaane ki.. ..
har chij har baatein har mahol.. damn it.. yaha tak buri duniya hi uske duswar ho gayi... raat chaahe kitni bhi andheri ho, chaahe kitni bhi lambi kyun na ho.. lekin uske baad aisa bhi waqt aata hai jab suraj apni roushni ki kiran bikhre din ka ujala lata hai.. tufan bhi aate hai phir Tham bhi jaate hai.. lekin us waqt majboor hoke nahi balki kud ko tab tak ke liye mamboot banaye rakhe jab tak andheri raat ya tufan tal na jaaye...
kayi logo jinhe apne jivan se apne aash paas ke mahol se, paristhitiyo se, jo anchahe ghatana ghatit hua uske liye bhi hamesha se hi sikayat rahti hai.. nakaratmak un par haavi rahti hai, apni ashafalata ke haazar kaaran unke paas rehte hai.. kuch kehte hai sahi mauka na mila, kuch kehte hai unke paas sanshadhano ka kami hai.. koi kehta hai koi apna chhod gaya hamesha ke liye isliye wo akela par gaya... to koi kehta hai hai prerna dene wala protshahit karenge nahi hai, ya na mila.. Jaise ki is kahani ka nayak... mana ki Aakash ko ghum hai, dard hai lekin ye nahi ki is tarah se nirah si jindagi jiye.. tanhaiyo mein apni jindagi ko bhent de de...
wo ek baar Aurora ya nic ko kyun nahi dekhta...
unke sakaratmak dristikon ko kyun nahi mahsoos kiya ya nahi dekha.. Kya unke jindagi mein dukh nahi, pareshaniya nahi.. are Aurora ko hi dekh lijiye.. tanhai uske jivan mein aayi thi.. to kya bahana banake baith gayi thi... nahi na... Aurora wo thi jo raashte talaste nahi balki raashte taraste hai banate hai apne liye.. aur ye hunar thi usme.. Divorced ke baad bhi kya tut gayi ya wahan space mein mahino dar mahino waqt bitake tanhaiyo ka shikar huyi.. nahi na.. kya ye sab najar nahi aaya usko ya mahsoos nahi kiya.. bas jivan sathi banani hai, shaadi karni hai, pyaar karna hai kya yahi yaad raha usko.. ya phir apne tanhaiyo mein khota raha..
dusri taraf nic.... ummid tha ki bacha lega isliye usne Aurora aur aakash ko bachake le aaye sahi salamat ISS pe...itne mahine bitaye wahan kuch sikh leta nic se bhi...
aur sabse aham uski maa.... uske sapno ke duniya se andhkaar ko door karne wali roshani thi, jinka daaman pakad kar wo bada hua... unke aanchal ne jab usko thand lagi toh grami pradan ki aur jab wo khud se ya kisi baat se gussa hota toh unke aanchal ne ushe sheetalta pradan ki.... kya unki dwara di gayi prerna se bhari wo baatein bhi bhool gaya Aakash..
maybe wo har ek baat ka ehsaas tha... bas jaanke bhi nazar andaz karta raha....
thokor khake girte sabhi hai kabhi na kabhi hai par girke khada hona aana chahiye..

aapki pasandida kirdaar koun thi aur kyun?
kahani ke Nayak Aakash ki mom....
chaahe kahani ho ya vastavik jivan mein maa se anmol aur koi nahi...
jis tarah unhone aakash ko sambhaala har waqt, har bure ho ya achhe doud mein unko ek salam... yahan tak ki aakash astrond banne ke piche unki mehnat, tyaag aur balidaan hai...
kya kirdaar aapko vastavik lage?
Haan....kahani ke kirdaar space aur ISS se jude huye hai to vastavik hi lage?
aur baat aakash aur uski mom ki.... yahan pe koi do ray nahi ki vastavik lage ki nahi.... kyunki har maa ke liye uska bachha hi anmol hota hai..
nic..... duty aur dosti.... dono nibhaye aur I think agar wo ghatna real mein hoti to koi na koi nic jaisa jarur hota jo bachane jata...
Aurora... ek aham bhumika mein rahi. .. waise space shuttle ya space ISS isko leke bahot zyada jaankari to nahi hai par itna to pata hai ki aise space jo kaam ya duties hote hai wohi kahani mein Aurora bhi kar rahi thi..
waise ek baat hai writer sahab ne bahot mehnat ki hai story pe aur reaches ki hai ye space aur space shuttle aur ISS ke upor is kahani ke liye tabhi to itne vastavik lage kahani ke kirdaar ke saath saath ke har Kirdaar bhi..

sabse pasandida bhaag kya tha aur kyun...?

well sabse pasandida bhaag woh tha jab us samay barish mein muh fulake aakash bench par baitha hua tha aur Saare teachers haar maan chuke the Aakash ko andar bula-bula kar... kuch ne jabardasti pakad kar andar le jaane ka bhi prayas kiya, lekin wo wahi zameen mein lotne laga aur unke hath ko gusse se kaat bhi diya... jiske baad haarkar unhone uski Maa ko bulayaa.... jo aayi toh chhata lekar thi par mujhe bheegta dekh chhata kinare kar uske sath wahi bheegte hue us bench me uske sath baith gayi....
aur jab aakash ke mann mein base bure vichar ya dar ya asurkshit baav ko dur kar ke bol rahi thi ki
wo kamjor nahi hai, agar agli baar koi aapko kamjor bolta ya kamjor banane ki koshish kare to majbuti date rahna unke samne kabhi kamjor mat banna... aur wo bahot khas hai, shayad khas log hamesha se hi kuch alag hote hai.. isliye aise ulte sidhe vicharo ko mann mein na laye...
jis tarike samjha rahi thi, wo baatein aur wo situation wo dil ko chu gayi...

Kuch vishes prakar ke drishya - udaharan ke liye dukhad, tanavpurn drishya, rahasyamay?

sabse tanavpurn aur dukhad drishya wo jab us din uski maa Standford Center me apni aakhiri saanse le rahi thi aur fir wo pal bhi aaya jab unhone apni aakhiri saans li... jab aakash ek tak wahi unke paas baitha unhe ek tak dekhta raha...
aur jab apni maa ko pukarne par tab hamesha ki tarah dusari taraf se koyi jawab nahi aaya....
aur dusri... jab space shuttle se prithvi ki aurr jane pehle jo Aurora barbara ke bol rahi thi behoshi mein.. ki uski bhi khwahish thi aakash ke sath jindagi bitane ki lekin agle hi mod pe pata chale ki uski mrityu ho gayi.. bune huye Khwaab ye bhi adure hi reh gaye...
aur tanavpurn ki kya hoga ab.... jab Aurora ko leke Aakash ISS ki aurr aate waqt EMV - X band hone baad SAFER bhi band ho gaya tha...

Kya kahani ne hanshya ya rulaya?

hanshaya bas kuch palon ke liye jab nic ko kisi ne ek ajibo garib naam se sambodhit kiya tha... aur uska arth aakash se puch raha tha wo..
par jo drishya dikhaye gaye hai ya kirdaaro ke sath jo hua, khas aakash ki mom aur Aurora ke sath.... koi bhi reader padhke ro de......

kya kahani aapko ant tak jude rehne ke liye majboor kiya?

shat pratishat...... chaahe kitne bhi shadb jod lun sameeksha ke liye par wo bhi kam hi pade is epic story line ke liye...... jindagi ki ek karvi sachhai chupi hai.. jaha is kahani mein wohi aapko ek maa ki mamta bhi dekhne ko milegi... jahan bichhadne ka dard bhi hai.. to kisise milne ki aur ek adventure journey bhi dekhne ko milegi..jaha aapko ek akelapan se jujhta kirdaar dikhega wohi kisi tyaag aur balidaan bhi dekhne ko milengi....
naye readers se yahi request hai ki ek baar jarur padhe is kahani ko... kyunki kahani ne suruwat se hi ek gati li hai jo ant tak kayam hai....

shayad Writer sahab hume yeh batana chahte hai is kahani ke jariye ki hume paristhitiyo ko koshna nahi balki unhe swikar karna chahiye.. har haal mein mein khush rehna hai aur jo badlav jaruri hai, waha apni ummidon ke bal par, apne aatmvishvas ke bal par badlav lana hai... dukh ke kaanto ke bich hume sukh ke phool chun'ne hai . jaise Aurora ne dhund li thi .. ek raashta band ho jaaye to hume dusra rasta talashna chahiye.. jaise nic ne dhund liya tha Aurora aur Aakash ki jaan bachane ke liye.... aur chunotiya jo bhi samne chaahe akela pan aur ghor tanhayi hi kyun na aa jaaye jindagi mein unka samna saant mann aur ek sathik saant soch vichar ke sath samna karne ke liye taiyar rahna hai... jaise Aakash ki mom ne ushe sikh di thi... unki baaton ka ek arth bhi nikalta hai...upor wale ne jo aapko jindagi di hai ushe pyaar karna sikhe... yun jaya na hone de...
.... chaahe mushkilein ho tanhai ya akela pan Aakash k tarah nahi balki Aurora ki tarah muskuharaton ko lana hai apne jivan mein aur apne utshah ki kirano se hume sampurn vatavaran ko sajib aur mukorit banana hai... taaki isse na keval aap balki aapke aas paas walo ko ek nayi ummid ek nayi utshah mile...

aur akhir mein kuch shabd writer sahab ke liye.. Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchaspi banaye rakhi ... ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin thi...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe the ..
jindagi ki karvi sachhai ko realize kar dene wale drisya , thodi bahot suspense , heavy emotions ke sath sath thrill aur adventure ke bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ... ... kahani ki ghatana karm aise ki aankho ke samne hi ghat rahi ho... aur kirdaar... jo kahani mein jahan bhi jarurat padi wahan apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe the kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro ke bina multiple ya pramukh kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye

Oh haan...
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Yug Purush sahab

 

[Mahi Maurya]

कहानी- लव ट्राएंगल
रचनाकार- अभय स्मारटी

उनको भी तुमसे मोहब्बत थी मगर वो बता कर क्या करते।

दिल में उनके भी चाहत थी मगर वो बता कर क्या करते।।

जब तुमने उनको बेवफा साबित करके उनकी आंखों में नमी दे दी।

वो खुद रोते और तुम्हे अपना बताते ये हक जता कर क्या करते।।

कबीर एक लड़की से प्यार करता है और उसकी तस्वीर देखकर उसे याद करते हुए रो रहा है। वो लड़की उसके स्कूल समय का प्यार है। वो लड़की उसकी हर समय मदद करती थी। कबीर उसके दूर होने से डरता है इसलिए कभी अपने प्यार का इज़हार नहीं किया।

माँ के कहने पर कबीर ने दूसरी लड़की से शादी के लिए हां कर दी और ये शहर छोड़कर जा रहा है। और पार्क में जिस लड़की की आवाज़ सुनाई पड़ी शायद वो कबीर का 4 वर्ष पहले वाला प्यार हो।

बिल्कुल वो वही थी लेकिन किसी दूसरे लड़के के साथ। उस लड़की के चक्कर में कबीर क्षतिग्रत हो गया और सपना जो उससे इतना प्यार करती है उसे नजरअंदाज कर रहा है।

सपना ने बहुत ही अच्छा और सटीक सवाल किया कबीर से। क्या केवल तुमने ही प्यार किया है और में आंसू भी नहीं बहा सकती।

वैसे कहा जाता है कि शादी उससे मत करो जिससे आप प्यार करते हो बल्कि उससे करो जो आपसे प्यार करता है तो जिंदगी ज्यादा खुशहाल रहेगी।

अब यहां तो त्रिकोणीय प्रेम दिख गया। कबीर गया तो था सपना से मिलने मगर उसे मिल गई रानी। और तो और सपना के सामने ही कबीर को गले लगाया और चुम्मा भी ले लिए। इस कहते हैं आसमान से गिरे और खजूर पर अटके।

कबीर अब दोराहे पर आकर खड़ा हो गया है एक तरफ रानी है तो दूसरी तरफ सपना। उसे समझ नहीं आ रहा है कि वो किधर जाए।

इधर कबीर ने आंख बंद करके रानी को साफ साफ बोल दिया कि वो सिर्फ सपना से प्यार करता है और जब आंख खोलता है तो सामने सपना खड़ी होती है बातों बातों में पता चलता है कि सपना और रानी दोनों पक्के दोस्त हैं और दोनों ने मिलकर ये प्लान बनाया था।

कहानी वाकई बहुत अच्छी है।

 

[Yug Purush]

Kahani ~ A LONER
Writer ~ Yug Purush ​

Kahani - kahani hai ek ladke ki . jiska naam hai Aakash.. akele pan se pehle se hi jujhta... kisi se zyada baat chit nahi karta.... apni maa ko khone ke baad kabhi na mita paane wali dard ke sath sath sampurn roop se akelapan ka shikar ho gaya.. uske liye sab kuch ya tak ki duniya nirah si ho gayi.. duniya ke bhid mein tanha mehsus karne laga... to usne ek decision liya ki wo ab dharti pe nahi balki space pe rahega... waise pehle se iski taiyari kar raha tha.. matlab saaf tha ki is rang birangi duniya se zyada ushe space ke andhkkaar zyada pasand aaya...
waise hota hai... kayio ke sath hota hai jab akele pan ka shikar hote hai... to bas jaise jindagi hi kaatne ko doudta hai...
ab space yani ki ISS par apne dost nic ke sath pahunch ke uski mulaakat hanshmukh, utshah se paripurn Aurora se huyi... hairani ki baat yeh hai ki uske jindagi mein uski mom k baad ek Aurora hi thi jo Akash ke bin bole uske mann ki baat samajh jaaye.. chehre ke bhav dekhke hi bol de ki kya pareshani hai usko..

Khair.. ab din gujare.. dono ke bich pehle dosti phir shayad pyar bhi ho gaya tha.. Aurora ki sang rahkar wo apni tanhaiyo ko bhool ne laga tha... ek pyaar ka ehsaas uske mann ko gudguda sa gaya tha... lekin honi ko koun taal sakta hai.... ISS pe huyi ek durghatna ke chalte aur us durghatna ke waqt apach mein huyi bahas baazi ya Aurora dwara liye galat faisla ke chalte jaha Aurora marne ki kagar tak pahunch gayi thi wohi aakash ki bhi maut nischit thi.. par aain mauke par apni jaan ka parwah na karte huye nic ne dono ko bacha liya... par us radiator - 1 pe ghate durghatna ke chalte aur helmet huyi depressurized wajah se radiation ka shikar bani wo...
uske baad to jaise uski haalat bigadti gayi udhar usko dekh aakash bhi tutta gaya andar hi andar....ishi bich waha ISS pe treatment thik se na ho pane ke wajah se Aurora ko space shuttle ke jariye wapis prithvi le aaye.. lekin afsos aate waqt shuttle mein huye bhari dabav ke kaaran maari gayi... lekin hairan kar dene wali baat yeh hai uski marne ki wajah kuch aur hi thi... pehle se ek bahot hi durlav genetic bimari se grast thi.. radiator ki dhamake aur radiation ke chalte wo bimari activate ho gayi... jo ant mein uski maut ki kaaran bani...
so Aurora k jaane ke baad phir se wohi tanhayi wali jinadgi jeene laga ISS par .. wohi akela pan wohi nirah si jivan wohi khamoshi wohi viraniya .. jaise jeeta hai A... LONER

ab aate hai sameeksha par - - sapne tut te hai to tutne do . unme se ek tukda chuno aur phir se sapne ko buno... ummid ka daaman kabhi mat chhodo aakhiri saans tak... jo ummid ki naav par savar hokar nikloge to sahil ka milna tay hai.. mushkilein kiske raashte mein nahi? pareshaniya kiske jivan ka hissa nahi akela pan se pidit sirf kiya aakash hai.. dukh kya sirf uske hisse mein hai.. dukh to sabhi ke hisse mein hota hai.. par aakash ne dukh baatne ki jagah apne andar samet rakha.... yeh ek weak point hai uske liye.. itna padha likha hai phir bhi is baat ehsaas nahi hai kya ki dukh baatne se kam hota, aur tanav bhi..
aur baant nahi paa raha hai to inse paar pa le.. kyunki dukh dard tanhaiyo pareshaniyo paar ushi ko mil sakta hai jo dar kar baitha nahi... jisne lagatar koshish ki, jisne nirasha ko, tanhaiyo ko, akele pan ko apne upor haavi hone nahi diya.. jo haar kar bhi kabhi nahi hara, saralata usiko har aurr se milti hai...
kehte hai ummid pe duniya kayam hai... yeh ummid ka hi karisma hai ki kal jo kaam asambhav lage the aaj nahi kal sakar ho sakte hai.. aasha gahri Andhri raat mein dipak ki jalti lo ki saman hai.... Agar ye sambhav hai to aakash ke liye kyun sambhav nahi akele pan ke un gehre andhkkaar galiyo se bahar nikal, apne jindagi ko ek nayi ujale ke aurr le jaane ki.. ..
har chij har baatein har mahol.. damn it.. yaha tak buri duniya hi uske duswar ho gayi... raat chaahe kitni bhi andheri ho, chaahe kitni bhi lambi kyun na ho.. lekin uske baad aisa bhi waqt aata hai jab suraj apni roushni ki kiran bikhre din ka ujala lata hai.. tufan bhi aate hai phir Tham bhi jaate hai.. lekin us waqt majboor hoke nahi balki kud ko tab tak ke liye mamboot banaye rakhe jab tak andheri raat ya tufan tal na jaaye...
kayi logo jinhe apne jivan se apne aash paas ke mahol se, paristhitiyo se, jo anchahe ghatana ghatit hua uske liye bhi hamesha se hi sikayat rahti hai.. nakaratmak un par haavi rahti hai, apni ashafalata ke haazar kaaran unke paas rehte hai.. kuch kehte hai sahi mauka na mila, kuch kehte hai unke paas sanshadhano ka kami hai.. koi kehta hai koi apna chhod gaya hamesha ke liye isliye wo akela par gaya... to koi kehta hai hai prerna dene wala protshahit karenge nahi hai, ya na mila.. Jaise ki is kahani ka nayak... mana ki Aakash ko ghum hai, dard hai lekin ye nahi ki is tarah se nirah si jindagi jiye.. tanhaiyo mein apni jindagi ko bhent de de...
wo ek baar Aurora ya nic ko kyun nahi dekhta...
unke sakaratmak dristikon ko kyun nahi mahsoos kiya ya nahi dekha.. Kya unke jindagi mein dukh nahi, pareshaniya nahi.. are Aurora ko hi dekh lijiye.. tanhai uske jivan mein aayi thi.. to kya bahana banake baith gayi thi... nahi na... Aurora wo thi jo raashte talaste nahi balki raashte taraste hai banate hai apne liye.. aur ye hunar thi usme.. Divorced ke baad bhi kya tut gayi ya wahan space mein mahino dar mahino waqt bitake tanhaiyo ka shikar huyi.. nahi na.. kya ye sab najar nahi aaya usko ya mahsoos nahi kiya.. bas jivan sathi banani hai, shaadi karni hai, pyaar karna hai kya yahi yaad raha usko.. ya phir apne tanhaiyo mein khota raha..
dusri taraf nic.... ummid tha ki bacha lega isliye usne Aurora aur aakash ko bachake le aaye sahi salamat ISS pe...itne mahine bitaye wahan kuch sikh leta nic se bhi...
aur sabse aham uski maa.... uske sapno ke duniya se andhkaar ko door karne wali roshani thi, jinka daaman pakad kar wo bada hua... unke aanchal ne jab usko thand lagi toh grami pradan ki aur jab wo khud se ya kisi baat se gussa hota toh unke aanchal ne ushe sheetalta pradan ki.... kya unki dwara di gayi prerna se bhari wo baatein bhi bhool gaya Aakash..
maybe wo har ek baat ka ehsaas tha... bas jaanke bhi nazar andaz karta raha....
thokor khake girte sabhi hai kabhi na kabhi hai par girke khada hona aana chahiye..

aapki pasandida kirdaar koun thi aur kyun?
kahani ke Nayak Aakash ki mom....
chaahe kahani ho ya vastavik jivan mein maa se anmol aur koi nahi...
jis tarah unhone aakash ko sambhaala har waqt, har bure ho ya achhe doud mein unko ek salam... yahan tak ki aakash astrond banne ke piche unki mehnat, tyaag aur balidaan hai...
kya kirdaar aapko vastavik lage?
Haan....kahani ke kirdaar space aur ISS se jude huye hai to vastavik hi lage?
aur baat aakash aur uski mom ki.... yahan pe koi do ray nahi ki vastavik lage ki nahi.... kyunki har maa ke liye uska bachha hi anmol hota hai..
nic..... duty aur dosti.... dono nibhaye aur I think agar wo ghatna real mein hoti to koi na koi nic jaisa jarur hota jo bachane jata...
Aurora... ek aham bhumika mein rahi. .. waise space shuttle ya space ISS isko leke bahot zyada jaankari to nahi hai par itna to pata hai ki aise space jo kaam ya duties hote hai wohi kahani mein Aurora bhi kar rahi thi..
waise ek baat hai writer sahab ne bahot mehnat ki hai story pe aur reaches ki hai ye space aur space shuttle aur ISS ke upor is kahani ke liye tabhi to itne vastavik lage kahani ke kirdaar ke saath saath ke har Kirdaar bhi..

sabse pasandida bhaag kya tha aur kyun...?

well sabse pasandida bhaag woh tha jab us samay barish mein muh fulake aakash bench par baitha hua tha aur Saare teachers haar maan chuke the Aakash ko andar bula-bula kar... kuch ne jabardasti pakad kar andar le jaane ka bhi prayas kiya, lekin wo wahi zameen mein lotne laga aur unke hath ko gusse se kaat bhi diya... jiske baad haarkar unhone uski Maa ko bulayaa.... jo aayi toh chhata lekar thi par mujhe bheegta dekh chhata kinare kar uske sath wahi bheegte hue us bench me uske sath baith gayi....
aur jab aakash ke mann mein base bure vichar ya dar ya asurkshit baav ko dur kar ke bol rahi thi ki
wo kamjor nahi hai, agar agli baar koi aapko kamjor bolta ya kamjor banane ki koshish kare to majbuti date rahna unke samne kabhi kamjor mat banna... aur wo bahot khas hai, shayad khas log hamesha se hi kuch alag hote hai.. isliye aise ulte sidhe vicharo ko mann mein na laye...
jis tarike samjha rahi thi, wo baatein aur wo situation wo dil ko chu gayi...

Kuch vishes prakar ke drishya - udaharan ke liye dukhad, tanavpurn drishya, rahasyamay?

sabse tanavpurn aur dukhad drishya wo jab us din uski maa Standford Center me apni aakhiri saanse le rahi thi aur fir wo pal bhi aaya jab unhone apni aakhiri saans li... jab aakash ek tak wahi unke paas baitha unhe ek tak dekhta raha...
aur jab apni maa ko pukarne par tab hamesha ki tarah dusari taraf se koyi jawab nahi aaya....
aur dusri... jab space shuttle se prithvi ki aurr jane pehle jo Aurora barbara ke bol rahi thi behoshi mein.. ki uski bhi khwahish thi aakash ke sath jindagi bitane ki lekin agle hi mod pe pata chale ki uski mrityu ho gayi.. bune huye Khwaab ye bhi adure hi reh gaye...
aur tanavpurn ki kya hoga ab.... jab Aurora ko leke Aakash ISS ki aurr aate waqt EMV - X band hone baad SAFER bhi band ho gaya tha...

Kya kahani ne hanshya ya rulaya?

hanshaya bas kuch palon ke liye jab nic ko kisi ne ek ajibo garib naam se sambodhit kiya tha... aur uska arth aakash se puch raha tha wo..
par jo drishya dikhaye gaye hai ya kirdaaro ke sath jo hua, khas aakash ki mom aur Aurora ke sath.... koi bhi reader padhke ro de......

kya kahani aapko ant tak jude rehne ke liye majboor kiya?

shat pratishat...... chaahe kitne bhi shadb jod lun sameeksha ke liye par wo bhi kam hi pade is epic story line ke liye...... jindagi ki ek karvi sachhai chupi hai.. jaha is kahani mein wohi aapko ek maa ki mamta bhi dekhne ko milegi... jahan bichhadne ka dard bhi hai.. to kisise milne ki aur ek adventure journey bhi dekhne ko milegi..jaha aapko ek akelapan se jujhta kirdaar dikhega wohi kisi tyaag aur balidaan bhi dekhne ko milengi....
naye readers se yahi request hai ki ek baar jarur padhe is kahani ko... kyunki kahani ne suruwat se hi ek gati li hai jo ant tak kayam hai....

shayad Writer sahab hume yeh batana chahte hai is kahani ke jariye ki hume paristhitiyo ko koshna nahi balki unhe swikar karna chahiye.. har haal mein mein khush rehna hai aur jo badlav jaruri hai, waha apni ummidon ke bal par, apne aatmvishvas ke bal par badlav lana hai... dukh ke kaanto ke bich hume sukh ke phool chun'ne hai . jaise Aurora ne dhund li thi .. ek raashta band ho jaaye to hume dusra rasta talashna chahiye.. jaise nic ne dhund liya tha Aurora aur Aakash ki jaan bachane ke liye.... aur chunotiya jo bhi samne chaahe akela pan aur ghor tanhayi hi kyun na aa jaaye jindagi mein unka samna saant mann aur ek sathik saant soch vichar ke sath samna karne ke liye taiyar rahna hai... jaise Aakash ki mom ne ushe sikh di thi... unki baaton ka ek arth bhi nikalta hai...upor wale ne jo aapko jindagi di hai ushe pyaar karna sikhe... yun jaya na hone de...
.... chaahe mushkilein ho tanhai ya akela pan Aakash k tarah nahi balki Aurora ki tarah muskuharaton ko lana hai apne jivan mein aur apne utshah ki kirano se hume sampurn vatavaran ko sajib aur mukorit banana hai... taaki isse na keval aap balki aapke aas paas walo ko ek nayi ummid ek nayi utshah mile...

aur akhir mein kuch shabd writer sahab ke liye.. Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchaspi banaye rakhi ... ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin thi...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe the ..
jindagi ki karvi sachhai ko realize kar dene wale drisya , thodi bahot suspense , heavy emotions ke sath sath thrill aur adventure ke bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ... ... kahani ki ghatana karm aise ki aankho ke samne hi ghat rahi ho... aur kirdaar... jo kahani mein jahan bhi jarurat padi wahan apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe the kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro ke bina multiple ya pramukh kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye

Oh haan...
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Yug Purush sahab

Just speechlesss....
Aapke Kuch lines toh story ke dialogues se bhi heavy hai... Ya fir jinhe padhkar aisa laga ki ye lines pata hoti ya bheje me aayi hoti to jaroor main is story me add karta....
... Really....

 

[Naina]

Just speechlesss....
Aapke Kuch lines toh story ke dialogues se bhi heavy hai... Ya fir jinhe padhkar aisa laga ki ye lines pata hoti ya bheje me aayi hoti to jaroor main is story me add karta....
... Really....

kahani hi itni achhi thi..
Khair.. chaliye ishi khushi mein ss wali kahani pe do update dijiye aaj

 

[manikmittalme07]

BALATKARI SE MOHABBAT- EK CHHOTI SI PREM KAHANI​

WRITTEN BY- MAHI MAURYA​

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Raja, jaisa naam vaisa hi dil ka bhi raja. Ek maa baap jaise saput ki kamna karte hain. Raja waisa hi saput hai. Dil ka nek insan, Milansar aur sabki madad karne wala. Apne maa baap ki eklauti santan. Umar 25 varsh. Lower middle class se belong karta hai aur iron ki factory me cashier ka kaam karta hai. Bas ek kami hai ki gusse me sahi galt ka faisla nahi kar pata.

Hayaa, bahut hi khubsurat, upper middle class family se belong karti hai. Umar 22 varsh ki hai. M.Sc. Final years ki student hai. ek bada bhaai jaid hai. Pita ka naam haidar Aur maa ka naam Salma hai. Hayaa Khubsurat hone ke sath dimag ki tez padhai me thik aur acche sanskaron se paripurn ladki aur ghar me sabki ladki, haidar dharmik bhedbhav se door rahne wale selfi insan hain.

Hayaa ki ek best saheli hai Rani. Dono ki kad kathi lagbhag same hai. Dono alag alag society me rahti hain, lekin college sath sath jati hain. Hayaa ka ek BF tha Salim, jo bas uske jism ka pyasa tha, ek din usne Hayaa ke sath jabardasti karne ki koshish ki. Jiske karan Hayaa ne use thappad maar diya aur usase sabhi rishte khatm kar diye. Is karan wo ladkon se chidhti hai.

Ek din Rani aur Hayaa college se ghar aa rahi thi. Usi samay Raja bhi apni factory se kisi kaam ke liye bahar aaya tha. Hayaa kisi se phone par baat kar rahi thi wo baat karne me itni busy thi ki galti se jakar Raja se takra Gai.

Andhe ho kya. Dikhai nahi deta. Mera phone gira diya. Hayaa ne gusse se kaha.

Sorry madam, galti aapki hai. Aap hi galat direction me chal rahi thi. Raja ne kaha.

Achhe se janti hoon tum jaise ladko ko. Jahan koi ladki dikhi nahi lagte ho us par try karne. Lekin is baar tumne galat ladki se panga le liya hai. Hayaa ne gusse se kaha.

Dekhie madam waise to galti aapki hai. Fir bhi main aapse mafi mang raha hoon aur aap mujhpar galat aarop lagaye ja rahi hain. Raja chidhte huwe bola.

Ab jyada bano mat. Mujhe achhe se pata hai ki tum janboojhkar mujhse takraye the. Tum jaise majanuo ki fitrat hi yahi hai. Koi khoobsurat ladki dikhi nahi ki use chhune ka mauka dhoondhne lagte ho. Hayaa ne kaha.

Kya. Main aur tujhko touch karunga. Sakal dekhi hai apni aaine me. Ekdam bandariya lagti hai. Tune samajh kya rakha hai apne aapko. Tu koi hoor ki pari hai jo mera iman dol jaye. Raja ne apna aapa khote hue kaha.

Isi tarah dono me baat bahut jyada bigad gai. Jisko Rani ne bich bachav karke shant karwaya. Raja waha se chala gaya fir Rani ne kaha.

Tune bina matlab ke use bahut khuchh suna diya. Galti teri thi. Tu hi jakar usase takrai thi.

Ab tu jyada uski tarafdari mat kar. Mujhe achchhe se pata hai ki wo mujhse jaanboojhakar takraya tha. Hayaa ne kaha.

Rani ne baat ko aage na badhate huwe shant rahna hi behtar samjha aur uske sath aage badh gayi.

Isi tarah mahine bhar me Raja aur Hayaa kai baar aamne samne aaye. Lekin dono ke dil me ek doosre ke liye itni kadwahat bhar chuki thi ki dono ek dusre ko gusse se dekhkar najre ghuma lete the.

Raja ne ekbar fir se koshish ki apne nature ke hisab se sari kadwahat ko khatam karne ki, lekin iska natija bilkul ulta ho gaya. Hayaa ne iska galat matlab nikal liya aur usko bahut khari khoti suna di. Ab to dono me jaise dusmani ho gai thi. Dono ek dusre se nafrat karne lage the. Halanki wo dono abhi tak ek doosre ka naam nahi jante the.

Samay apni gati se chalta raha. Isi bich Hayaa ke liye ek rishta bhi aaya. Ladke wale ameer the. To Hayaa ke pita ne rishte ke liye haan kar di. Hayaa ne jab iska virodh kiya to use ye kahkar chup kara diya ki ladki jitni jaldi shadi/nikah kar ke apne ghar chali jaye utni jyada samaz me ijjat bani rahti hai. Hayaa ko majboori me is rishte ke liye haan karni padi.

Hayaa ne jab ye baat Rani ko batayi to use bhi achchha nahi laga, lekin wo kuchh kar nahin sakti thi.

Samay bitne ke sath hi Hayaa aur Rani ke exam ki date bhi final ho gai. Dono ke subject ek hi the isliye donon ke exam ki date ek hi din thi. Teen din baad exam shuru ho gaya.

Hayaa aur Rani sath jati exam deti aur sath hi wapas aati. Last paper ke din dono ne exam diya. Hayaa ko kuchh kam se market jana tha aur Rani ko ghar lautne ki jaldi thi.

Agar tumhe ghar jaldi jana hai to Tum aisa karo ghar chali jao mujhe kuchh kaam hai market me. Hayaa ne kaha.

Hayaa ko bye bolkar Rani ghar ke liye nikal padi. Udhar Hayaa ka BF Hayaa dwara mare gaye thappad se apne apko beizzat mahsoos kar raha tha aur apni beijjati ka badla lene ke liye tadap raha tha.

Exam ke baad wo ek khali khandhar numa jagah par baithkar apne kuchh doston ke sath sharab pi raha tha. Ye jagah Raja ke kaam wali jagah ke paas hi thi. Hayaa to market chali gai thi aur Rani ghar akele laut rahi thi. Tabhi achanak mausam kharab ho gaya aur jordar barish hone lagi. Jisase Rani poori tarah bheeg gai aur uske kapde jism se chipak gaye. Chunki Hayaa aur Rani ki kad kathi lagbhag same thi to jab wah us jagah se gujri to Salim ne Rani ko Hayaa Samajhkar wahshi nazaro se use dekhte huwe apne doston se kaha.

Is sali ne mujhe thappad mara tha aur mujhe beizzat kiya tha. Aaj sali ko batata hoon ki beizzat karna kisko kahte hain. Bahut ghamand hai ise apni khoobsurti par. Aaj iska rape karke iska sara ghamand tod doonga.

Salim ne itna bolkar bharish me bhigi hui Rani ka munh bandkar khandhar me kheech liya aur usko wahi jameen me patak diya Rani ne mudkar uski taraf dekha to salim ne apne doston se kaha.

Are ye to Rani hai aur ye bhi Hayaa se kisi bhi mamle me kam nahi hai. Hayaa nahi to Rani hi sahi. Ye bhi meri beizzati hone par han rahi thi. Aaj iska hi rape karunga. Hayaa ko to main baad me dekhunga.

Tum. Ye kya kar rahe ho mere sath. Nahin mujhe chhod do. Kutte agar tumne mujhe hanth bhi lagaya to munh mochi loongi tumhara. Rani ne kaha.

Lekin un sabhi ne sharab pi rakhi thi aur poore nashe me the, isliye Rani ki baaton ka unpar koi Asar Nahi huwa. Fir shuru huwa Rani ke Sath Salim aur uske doston ka darindagi ka khel. Sabhi ne milkar uska buri tarah se rape kiya. Uske jism ka ek ek ang noch dala. Rani cheekhti rahi aur dard se behosh ho gayi.

Are sale. Lagta hai ye mar gayi. Bhag lo yahan se. Agar pakde gaye to jaan se mare jaenge. Salim itna bolte huwe nashe me apne doston ke sath Rani ko wahi behoshi ki halat me chhodkar nikal gaya.

Udhar market me Hayaa ka kaam pura ho gaya to wo bhi ghar wapas aane lagi. Barish abhi bhi halki halki ho rahi thi. Wo teji se apne kadam badha rahi thi, jab tak wo us khandharnuma jagah pahuchati uske 2 minute pahle hi Raja apni factory se nikalkar bahar aaya aur peshab karne ke liye us khandhar ki taraf chala gaya.

Road aur khandar ke bich lagbhag 60-70 miters ka fasla tha. Raja ne khandhar ke pass peshab kiya aur Jaise hi wo wapas aane ko muda fisalkar gir gaya jisase uske kapdon aur hantho me gili mitty lag gai. Raja utha aur road ki taraf aane laga. thik usi samay Hayaa bhi us jagah pahuch chuki thi. Tabhi Hayaa ki nazar Rani ke bag par padi. Jo use andar ghasit-te samay Road ke bagal hi gir pada tha.

Hayaa ne use turant pahchan liya aur use utha liya. Tabhi uski Nazar Raja par padi. Jo uski taraf hi aa raha tha. Dono ne ekdusre ko nafrat se dekha fir Raja muskurate huwe aage nikal gaya.

Raja ke jane ke baad Hayaa bhi jane lagi. Tabhi uski nazar Rani ki sandel par padi jo kuchh dur khandhar ke pass padi hui thi. Hayaa ne waha jakar dekha to wo Rani ki sandel pahchan gai khandhar ke ekdam paas me uska dupatta pada hua tha. Hayaa ko kuchh anhoni ki aashanka hui to usne Rani ke no. Par call kiya jo uske bag me baja. Hayaa himmat karke khandhar me chali gayi to use waha Rani behoshi ki halat me dikhi.

Rani ke kapde puri tarah se fat chuke the. Uske jism par nakhoon ke nishan the. Hayaa kheekh markar daudakar uske paas gai aur apne dupatte se uske jism ko dhak diya aur rote huwe use aawaz lagai.

Rani uth ja. Kisne kiya ye sab. Use main chhodungi nahin Rani uth ja.

Lekin Rani ne koi harkat nahi ki to Hayaa ne apne bhaai ko phone karke waha bulaya aur Rani ko lekar hospital chali gayi. Police case hone par doctor ne police ko bula liya, Hayaa ne police ko sari baat batai.

To aapka kahna hai miss Hayaa ki apne balatkari ko dekha hai. Police ne poochha.

Haan Sir jab main waha pahuchi to wo meri saheli ka rape karke waha se bhag raha tha. Hayaa ne sisakte huwe kaha.

Kaun hai wo. Uska naam batao. Police ne kaha.

Mujhe uska naam to maloom nahin, lekin wo jahan kaam karta hai main aapko kal subah waha le chahungi. Wo wahi milega. Hayaa ne kaha.

Iske baad police chali gai. Hayaa ne Rani ke mummy papa ko bhi phone karke hospital bula liya aur unhe sari baat bata di. Hayaa ke pita haidar ko jab ye baat pata chali to wo bhi hospital pahuch gaye aur Hayaa ko ghar le aaye. Waha unhe ye bhi pata chala ki Hayaa is balatkar ki chasmdid gawah hai.

Hayaa ye kya kar rahi ho tum. Tumhe gawahi dene ki kya jaroorat. Ab jo hona tha wo ho gaya. Mamla police tak pahuchne se badnami hi milegi. Nahin tum uske khilaf gawahi nahi dogi. Haidar ne kaha.

Ye kaisi baate kar rahe hain aap abbu. Agar mere sath ye huwa hota aur Rani gawah hoti. Kya tab bhi aap yahi kahte. Hayaa ne haidar se kaha.

Tumhare sath huwa to nahi na. Lekin agar tumne apni jidd nahin chhodi to kal ko kuchh bhi ho sakte hai. Aur main nahin chahta ki tumhe kuchh ho. Uske abbu ne kaha.

Hayaa bhi jan gai ki uske abhu kisi kimat par use gawahi nahin dene denge, isliye usne baat yahi khatam kar dena hi behtar samjha. Aur bol diya ki wo gawahi nahin degi.

subah hui aur Hayaa Rani se milne ke bahane police station chali gai aur police ko lekar Raja ke paas chali gayi, kyonki khandhar ke pas usne aakhiri baar Raza ko hi dekha tha aur galatfahmi ki shikar ho usne Raza ko hi balatkari samajh liya tha. Wo Raza ke pass pahuchte hi ek jordar thappad uske gal par laga diya
Raza ke sath sath uske sath kam karne wale sabhi chakit rah gaye ki Hayaa ne thappad kyon lagaya.

Ye kya badtamiji hai. Tune mujhe thappad kyon mara. Raza ne apne gal sakate hue kaha.

Sir yahi hai wo jisne Rani ke sath balatkar kiya hai aur ab masoom banne ka natak kar raha hai. Hayaa ne police se kaha.

Sabhi ashcharyachakit the Raza ne balatkar kiya wali bat sunkar.

Ye kya bakwas kar rahi hai tu. Mana ki tu mujhse nafrat karti hai, lekin nafrat ke chalte tu mujhe balatkari bana rahi hai. Maine kisi ka balatkar nahin kiya hai. Tera dimag kharab ho gaya hai. Raja ne gusse se kaha.

Sir isi ne Rani ka rape kiya hai kyonki maine ise apni aankho se dekha hai khandhar se bahar nikalte huwe. Hayaa ne kaha.

Raza ne apni daleel rakhi lekin police ne uski ek na suni aur use giraftar karke le gayi. Hayaa iske baad Rani ko dekhne hospital pahuchi. Rani ki condition abhi bhi thik nahin hui thi. Raza ke mummy papa ko bhi uske giraftar hone ki baat pata chal gai. Unhe bharosha nahin hua ki unka beta aisa kar sakta hai. Wo bhi thane pahuche aur inspector se apne bete ko nirdosh bataya, lekin inspector ne unki baat nahi suni thak harkat wo bhi ghar wapas aa gaye.

Ab police ka torchar Raza par shuru ho gaya. Jab tak Rani ko hosh nahin aaya tabtak Raza ko torcher kiya jata raha. Raza ki halat bahut kharab ho gai thi. Rani ke hosh Aane ke baad Hayaa ne bataya ki balatkari pakda ja chuka hai aur use sakht saza milegi, Rani ne socha ki salim pakda gaya hai isliye wo Hayaa se lipatakar rone lagi. Rani ne Hayaa ko sabkuchh shuru se lekar aakhir tak bata diya, lekin usne bhi ek galti kar di ki kahi bhi salim ka naam nahi liya.

Rani ke hosh me aane ke 4 din baad court me sunwai thi. Raza mujrim ke katghare me khada tha aur wakil apni daleel pesh kar raha tha. Rani ko waha par laya gaya. Wo Raza ko mujrim ke roop me dekhkar bhauchakki rah gai.

Hayaa ko jab gawahi ke liye bulaya gaya to wah Pahle ki hi tarah apne bayan par kayam rahi. Rani Hayaa ki baat sunkar soch me bad gai ki jaroor Hayaa ko galatfahmi ho gai hai.

Main kuchh kahna chahti hoon judge sahab. Rani ne kaha.

Rani ko katghare me bulaya gaya. Fir rani ne kahna shuru kiya.

Judge sahab Samne khada ye shakhs bilkul nirdosh hai. Mere balatkar isne nahi balki Salim ne kiya hai.

Ab chaukne ki baari Hayaa ki thi. Use ab afsos ho raha tha ki usne anjane me bahut badi galti kar di hai. Rani ki gawahi ke baad salim ki giraftari ka aadesh court ne diya aur Raza ko ba-izzat bari kar diya gaya. Lekin ab Raza baizzat nahi raha. Uski sari izzat aur man maryada Hayaa ne taar taar kar di.

Raza pahle se hi gusse wala tha. Is ghatna ke baad Raza ka dimag hi fir gaya. Ab uski Hayaa ke prati nafrat ne badle ka roop le liye. Ab uske dimag me ye baat ghumne lagi ki jab us par ek balatkari ka tag lag hi gaya hai to ab wo Hayaa ko bataega ki Balatkar kise kahte hain.

Hayaa ke ghar wapas aane ke baad haidar ne use bahut data.

Jab maine tum se kaha tha Hayaa ki tum is case se door rahogi aur apni gawahi nahi dogi to tumne gawahi kyon di aur wo bhi ek nirdosh ke khilaf. Tumhe pata hai tumne kya kiya hai. pata nahi wo ladka ab kya karega.

Sorry Abbu. Maine usko hi waha aakhiri baar dekha tha aur galatfahmi ho gayi thi use lekar. Main jald hi usase milkar apne kiye ki maafi mang loongi. Mujhe ummeed hai ki wo meri baat samjhega.

Isi tarah din nikalte rahe. Ab Raza pahle wala Raza nahi raha. Ab uski zindagi ka ek hi maksad rah gaya tha Hayaa se badla lena. Hayaa ne bhi Maffi ke liye Raza ko bahut talash kiya, lekin Raza ne wahan kaam chhod diya tha. Ab wo bas mauke ki talash me tha aur bahut jald hi use wo mauka mil gaya.

Ek din Hayaa Market se akeli laut rahi thi. Tabhi ek van waha aakar ruki. Us van se Raza bahar nikla aur Hayaa ke munh par kapda rakh diya. Jisase Hayaa behosh ho gai. Raza behosh Hayaa ko van me dalkar faraar ho gaya.

Raza van lekar ek sunsan jagah par pahucha jaha koi bhi aata jata nahi tha. Raza ne van se Hayaa ko bahar nikala aur jameen par litakar uski kameez aur salwar utarkar fenk di aur uske hosh me aane ka wait karne laga. Kuchh der me Hayaa ko hosh aa gaya. Apni adhnangi halat aur samne Raza ko dekhkar use samajhte der na lagi ki aage kya hone wala hai.

Ye tum kya kar rahe ho mere sath plz aisa mat karo, mujhe jane do. Hayaa ne vinti karte huwe kaha.

Tujhe jane doon. Tune mujhe kahin ka nahi chhoda. Apni nafrat ka badla tune meri zindagi barbad karke liya. Tune mujhe wo dag diya hai. Jo main sari zindagi nahi bhool sakta. Tune mujhpar wo ilzam lagaya jo maine kiya hi nahi tha, lekin aaj main hakikat me wo sab karunga tere sath. Raza Gurraya.

Nahi. Aisa mat karo. Meri zindagi barbad mat karo. Main kisi ko munh dikhane layak nahi rahungi. Plz mujhe maaf kar do. Galatfahmi ke karan mujhse wo galti ho gai aur maine tumhe balatkari samajh liya. plz mujhe jane do. Hayaa ne gidgidate hue kaha.

Tujhe maff kar doon. Kabhi nahi. Tune kabhi socha hai ki maine ye bebuniyad ilzam lekar itne din kaise gujare hain. Are teri wajah se aaj main kisi se nazare nahi mila pa raha hoon. Log mujhe aise dekhte hain jaise maine sach me kisi ka balatkar kiya hai. Iski saza to main tujhe dunga. Ab jab balatkari na hote huwe bhi mujhpar balatkari ka ilzam lag hi gaya hai to aaj tera balatkar karke is ilzam sahi sabit karunga.Raza jor se bola.

Raza ke aisa kahne par Hayaa gidgidane lagi. Lekin Raza par to jaise badle ka bhoot sawar tha us samay. To usne Hayaa ki ek na suni aur uske jism se uski bra aur panti faadkar fenk di aur uske jism par pagal kutte ki tarah toot pada. Aur manmane tarike se uske jism se khela. Use raundta raha.

Hayaa uske niche tadapti rahi. Apni izzat ki bheekh mangti rahi, lekin Raza is samay kuchh bhi raham karne ke mood me nahi tha. 30 minute me Raza ne Hayaa ki asmat ko tar tar kar diya. Hayaa ka balatkar karne ke baad jab Raza ke sir se badle ka bhoot utra tab usko ehsas huwa ki usne gusse me aakar kya anarth kar diya hai.

Hayaa ek taraf nirvastr baithi hui ro rahi thi. Raza ne uske kapde diye pahanne ke liye. Haya ne rote rote apne bache khuche kapade pahan liye. Raza usase nazare nahin mila pa raha tha. Usne Hayaa ko pakadkar jabardasti van me baithaya aur use lakar wahi chhod diya jaha se wo roz college aati jati thi.
Hayaa luti piti awastha me ghar pahuchi. Uski haalat dekhkar uske abbu ne usse puchha.

Kya hua Hayaa. Ye kya halat bana rakhi hai tumne apni aur tumhare hantho me ye lal lal nishan kaisa.

Apne abbu ki baat sunkar Hayaa phoot phootakar rone lagi. Unse Abbu ko kuchh anhoni ko ashanka hui to unhone jor dekar haya se puchha to Hayaa ne rote huwe sara vrit-tant apne Abbu ko bata diya. Hayaa ki maa to rone lagi apni beti ki aap biti sunkar.

Main tumse pahle hi kaha tha. Ki tum gawahi mat dena aur in sab chakkar se door rahna, lekin tumne meri ek na suni. Naak kata kar rakh di aaj tumne meri. Hayaa ke abbu ne kaha.

Maine ye jaan boojhakar to nahin kiya na abbu. Main use chhodunhi nahin. Main abhi police station jati hoon aur police ko sab kuchh bata dungi. Hayaa ne apne abbu se kaha.

Tum kahi nahi jaogi. Bahut apne man ki kar li tumne. Kyon apne baap ki izzat sare bazar uchhalna chahti hai. Jab logo ko pata chalega to log mujhpar thookenge aur tujhe bhi chain se jeene nahi denge. Uske abbu ne kaha.

Ye aap kya kah rahe hain abbu. Main use saza dilakar rahoongi. Hayaa ne kaha.

Usase kya hoga. Sab kuchh thik ho jayega. Jab logo ko pata chalega ki tera balatkar huwa hai to tujhse shadi kaun karega. Ab to mujhe lagta hai ki teri sagai bhi tut jayegi agar unhe ye khabar mili to. Isliye tu ab kuchh bhi nahi karegi. Ise main apne tarike se handle karunga.

Apne abbu ki baat sunkar Hayaa ne turant apne hone wale shauhar ko phone kiya aur use poori baat bata di. Hayaa ke sath balatkar ki baat sunkar wo shadi se mukar gaya. Hayaa usse minnat karti rahi lekin wo apne phaisale par adig raha.

Apne hone wale damad ki baat sunkar Hayaa ke Abbu ne usse Raza ki purani company ka address lekar waha chale gaye. Waha par usne Raza ke baare me logon se baat ki, sabhi ne Raza ki tareef ki. Uski company se Raza ka address lekar wo Raza ke ghar chale gaye aur paas padoshi ke logo se puchhne par sabhi ne Raza ko nek aur achha bataya.

Jab Raza ke pita ko ye pata chala ki Raza ne Haidar ki beti ka balatkar kiya hai to unko Raza par bahut gussa aaya. Unhone Raza ko bulaya jo apne kamre me baitha huwa apne kiye par pachhta raha tha.

Ye main kya sun raha hoon Raza. Tumne ek masoom ladki ka balatkar kiya hai. Uske papa ne Raza se puchha.

Ji papa. Wo gusse me mujhe ye anchaha apradh ho gaya. Raza ne apne papa se apradhi ki tarah sir jhukakar kaha.

Chataakkkkkk. Tabhi pure kamre me ye shor ubhara. Raza ke papa ne ek jordar thappad uske galo par laga diya.

Nalayak. Ye kya kiya tune. Tujhe ek masoom ke sath aisa karte huwe sharam nahi aai. Yahi sankar diye hain maine tumhe. Maine tumhe maf karna sikhaya hai. Kisi se badla lena nahi. Aur tumne aaj mere sanskar ko gali di hai. Nikal ja mere ghar se abhi ke abhi. Raza ke papa ne gusse se kaha.

Dekhiye bhai sahab. Aap Raza ko ghar se mat nikaliye. Main ek prastav lekar aapke pasa ayaa hoon. Ummeed hai aap mana nahi karenge. Main ye chahta hoon ki Raza Meri beti se shadi kar le. Jisse meri badnami bhi nahi hogai aur meri beti ke upar laga kalank bhi mit jayega. Hayaa ke abbu ne kaha.

Ye kya kah rahe hain aap bhai sahab. Is nalayak ne jo kaam kiya hai uske liye to ise police me de dena chahiye. Aur aap shadi ke liye kah rahe hain. Ek to aap aur ham doosre dharam ke hain aur doosra Hamari haisiyat kuchh nahi hai apke samne.Raza ke Papa ne kaha.

Main taiyar hoon papa. Maine gusse me aakar jo galti ki hai usko main nakar nahi sakta. Main janta hoon ki meri galti mafi ke kabil nahi hai. Fir bhi main apni is galti ka prayashchitt karunga. Aap ek baar apni beti se bhi is bare me baat kar lijie.Raza ne kaha.

Raza ki baat sunkar Hayaa ke abbu ko thodi khusi mili. Wo wapas apne ghar ko laut gaye. Usne jane ke baad Raza ne kaha.

Papa plz mujhe maaf kar do. Mujhse gusse me ye galti ho gai aur main is galti ka prayashchitt karunga. Main aapko bharosha dilata hoon ki main aage aapko shikayat ka mauka nahin dunga.

Apne bete ki baat sunkar unhone Raza ko gale laga liya aur aane wale jeevan ke liye shubhkamnaye di.

Ghar lautkar jab haidar ne Hayaa ki shadi Raza se karne ki baat kahi to ghar me bawal ho gaya. Koi bhi is faisle se razi nahi hua.

Hayaa ki shadi Raza se hi hogi. Main samaz me apni badnami nahin hone dunga aur na hi Hayaa ki. Is shadi me hi sabki bhalai hai. Haidar ne kaha.

Kaafi samjhane ke baad bhi jab Hayaa is Shadi ke liye taiyar nahi hui to unhone apni jaan dene ki dhamki de di jiske karan Hayaa beman se is shadi ke liye taiyar hui.

Raza aur Hayaa ka ek nishchit din court marriage kara diya gaya. Hayaa ki taraf se uske maa aur abbu the. Hayaa ka bhaai is gair majhab shadi ke bahut khilaf tha isliye wo nahi aaya tha. Raza ki taraf se uske mata pita aaye huwe the.

Court me shadi ho jane ke baad Hayaa Raza ki dulhan bankar uske ghar aa gayi. Lekin uske dil me Raza ke liye bahut nafrat bhari thi. Raat me Raza kamre ke andar aaya aur bister par baith gaya.

Hayaa.. abhi Raza ne itna hi bola tha ki tabhi Hayaa gusse se boli.

Tumhaari himmat kaise hui mere saamne aane ki. Nikal jao mere samne se main tumhari shakl bhi nahi dekhna chahti.

Hayaa. Mujhe maaf kar do. Mujhse gusse me itna bada paap ho gaya. Main apne kiye par bahut sharminda hoon. Raza ne nazre jhukakar kaha.

Meri zindagi barbad karke mafi mang rahe ho. Mujhe tumse nafrat hai aur hamesha rahegi. Hayaa ne kaha.

Hayaa ki baat sunkar Raza ne use manane ke liye uska hanth pakad liya, lekin isase Hayaa aur bhadak gai.

Achha to tumhe mera jism chahiye. Mera balatkar karke tumhara man abhi nahi bhara. To ye lo ek baar aur mera balatkar kar lo. Itna bolte hi Hayaa ne apni sadi ka pallu niche kar diya.

Tumhara dimag kharaab ho gaya hai. Tum mere bare me itna ghatiya sochti ho. Raza itna bolkar kamare se bahar nikal gaya aur apni maa ke paas jakar let gaya. Maa ke puchhne par usne sari baat bata di.

Apne rishte ko thoda vakt de beta. Sab thik ho jayega. Bas bhagwan par bharosha rakh. Maa ne kaha.

Isi tarah din gujarte rahe aur Raza Hayaa ki nafrat aur kadwe shabdo ka ghoot pita raha.

Ek din Raza kisi kaam se bahar gaya tha aur use aane me der ho gayi. Jab wo ghar wapas aaya to Hayaa uspar barash padi.

Tum kaha Gaye the aur ye kaisi haalat bana Rakhi hai tumne Apni ekdam luti piti hui. Doosre ki izaat lootne wala aaj khud luta huwa ghar aa raha hai.

Hayaa ne gusse aur nafrat bhara tanz Raza par kiya. Jise sunkar Raza ko bahut gussa aaya. Lekin usne apne ko niyantrit kar gardan nichi kar bas itna hi keh paata hai.

Kuchh kam se bahar gaya tha waha par kuchh dost mila gaye isliye aane me der ho gayi.

Raza ne bahut dhire se ye baat kahi thi Usme ab itni himmat nahi thi ki Priya ke sawalo ka achhi aawaz me jawab de sake.

Maine socha tha ki aaj phir kisi ladki ki izzat lootne gaye the. Hayaa ne kaha.

Raza uski baato ko nazarandaz karta huwa rasoi me chala gaya aur khana nikal kar khane laga. Khana khakar wo apni maa ke pasa jakar so gaya.

Isi tarah kuchh din aur beet gaye. Hayaa bhale hi Raza se nafrat karti thi aur use mauka milte hi jaleel karne ki koshish karti thi, lekin Raza ke mummy papa ko wo pura samman deti thi. Unke khane pine nashte aur har jaroori kaam ka dhyan rakhti thi.

Kuchh din baad Raza ke kuchh dost usase milne aane wale the. Unke aane se ek din pahle Raza Hayaa ke paas gaya aur bola.

Hayaa. mere kuchh dost hai bachpan ke. jo bahar rahte hain. abhi wo sab ghar aaye huwe hain. Jab unhe maloom huwa ki meri shadi ho gayi hai to unhone tumse milne ki zid ki. To maine unhe kal bula liya hai. Kal tum achchhe se taiyar ho jana.

To main kya karu. Aur main tumhari koi bivi vibi nahi hoon. To tum mujhpar apna hukum chalana band karo. Mujhe tumse aur tumhare dosto se koi matlab nahi hai.Haya ne 2 took jawab diya.

Plz Hayaa aisa mat kaho. Maine unhe kal ke liye bol diya hai. Ab meri izzat tumhare hath me hai. Plz unke samne koi tamasha mat karna. Raza ne kaha

Tamasha main karungi. Tamasha to tumne bana diya hai meri zindagi ko. Tum bahut hi ghatiya aur behya insan ho. Jo meri zindagi kharab karke bhi besharmo ki tarah mujhse baat kar rahe ho. Hayaa ne gusse se kaha.

Raza ne ab tak bahut bardast kar liya tha Hayaa ki kadvi, jali kati baaton ko, lekin is baar uska sabr jawab de gaya. Wo bhi gusse se chillaya.

Maine zindagi barbaad ki hai tumhari. Zindagi to tumne meri barbaad kar di. Maine tumhara kya bigada tha jo tumne mujhe balatkari sabit kar diya. Usi gusse me aakar mujhse ek anchaha pap ho gaya. Jise main manta hoon aur pashchatap kar raha hoon. Lekin tum to din raat, uthate baithte mujhe jaleel kar rahi ho. Thik hai tumhara jo man ho wo karo.

Itna kahkar Raza kamre se bahar chala gaya. Hayaa aascharya se Raza ko jate hue dekhti rahi. Shadi ke itne din baad aaj pahli baar Raza ne Hayaa se itni uchhi aawaz me baat ki thi. Jo Hayaa ko achha nahi laga.

Agle din Raza ke kuchh dost Raza ke ghar aaye. Sab kuchh Hayaa ne hi banaya Chay nashta karne ke baad Sabhi logo ne Hayaa se milne ki farmaish kar di.

Baat ye hai ki Hayaa ki tabiyat kharab hai isliye wo aapse nahi mil sakti. Maaf karna mujhe dosto. Raza ne kaha

Kisne kaha ki main nahin mil sakti aur meri tabiyat kharab hai. Haan bas thodi si thakan hai. Jo aaram karne ke baad thik ho jayegi.

Hayaa ne aakar sabhi ko namaste kiya. Sabhi ne Hayaa ko namaste kiya. Sabhi doston ne Hayaa ki khoobsurti ki bahut tareef ki. Kuchh der rukne ke baad wo log chale gaye to Raza ne Hayaa ka shukriya adaa kiya.

Jyada khush hone ki jaroorat nahi hain. Maine tumhe maaf nahin kiya hai aur na kabhi karungi. Main nahi chahti thi ki jis baat ko dabane ke liye mere abbu ne meri tumhare sath jabran shadi karwai hai. Wo kisi ko pata chale, isliye main tumhare doston ke samne aai thi. Hayaa ne Raza ke shukriya ka jawab tanz bhare lehze me diya.

Aur haan. Mujhe apne Ammi se milne jana hai. To kal tum mujhe mere ghar le kar chalna. Hayaa ne kaha.

Raza ne uski baat ka koi jawab nahin diya aur ghar se bahar chala gaya. Raat me Raza ke mummy papa ne Hayaa ke apne ghar ghumne jane ki baat par apni manjuri de di.

Agle din Raza Hayaa ko liwakar apni sasural gaya. Hayaa ke abbu aur ammy apni beti se milkar bahut khush huwe, lekin Hayaa ka Bhai Jaid Raza se milne ke baad bola.

Ye tumne bilkul bhi thik nahi kiya meri bahan ke sath. Iska khamiyaza tumhe bhugatna padega.

Jaid ki baat sunkar uske abbu ne use data aur Raza se uske bartav ke liye maafi mangi. Sham ko Hayaa aur Raza vapas ghar aa gaye.

Kuchh din isi tarah gujre. Hayaa apni kadwahat Raza par ugalti rahti aur Raza apne gusse ko pite huwe prayashchitt ke karan sab sunta rahta.

Ek din Rani Hayaa se milne Raza ke ghar gayi. Us samay Raza bahar gaya huwa tha. Hayaa aur Rani baithe huwe baate kar rahe the. Kuchh der baad Raza ghar aaya. Rani ne Raza ko namaste kiya.

Aur bataiye jeeja ji sab kaisa hai aur kitna khyal rakh rahe hain meri dost ka.Rani ne poochha.

Wo to tum apni saheli se hi poochh lo. Waise kya bate ho rahi thi dono saheliyon mein.

Abhi rani kuchh bolti usse pahle hi Hayaa bol padi.

Tumhe ek baar me samajh nahi aata. Mere mamle me tang mat adaya karo. Kitne ghatiya insan ho tum jaha ladki dekhi wahi shuru ho jate ho.

Hayaa ki baat sunkar Raza ko bahut gussa aayaa. Aaj pahli baar kisi aur ke samne Hayaa ne Raza ki beijjati ki thi. Rani ko bhi Hayaa ka Raza ke liye aisa bartav achha nahi laga. Raza bina kuchh bole apna sir jhukakar waha se chala gaya. Raza ke jane ke baad Rani ne Hayaa se kaha.

Ye sab kya tha Hayaa.

Usne jo kuchh mere sath kiya. Uske liye ye to bahut kam hai. hayaa ne kaha.

Kya kiya usne tere sath. Aur tu kya kar rahi hai uske sath. Rani ne kaha.

Jaise Tujhe pata hi nahi ki isi ne mera balatkar kiya aur isi karan majbooran mujhe isase shadi karni padi.

Mujhe sab pata hai aur abhi ke tere bartav ko dekhkar mujhe lag raha hai ki tu roj Raza se aise hi baat karti hogi. Rani ne kaha.

Wo isi layak hai Rani. Isne meri zindagi barbad kar di. Hayaa ne kaha.

Dekh Hayaa ek baat kahungi tujhse. Tu uske sath bahut anyay kar rahi hai. Usne tera balatkar kyon kiya. Kyonki tune ek begunah aur sidhe sade insan ko balatkari sabit karne me koi kasar nahi chhodi. Rani ne kaha.

Haan mujhse galti ho gai thi anjane me. Hayaa ne kaha.

Aur tumne aaj tak us galti ke liye Raza se mafi nahi mangi. Upar se roj uske sath aisa bartav karti hai.usne gusse me aakar tere sath galat kiya, lekin usne apni galti sweekar ki aur apni galti ka prayashchitt kar raha hai.

Usne tere sath jabardasti to shadi ki nahin. Tere abbu khud aaye the usase shadi ke liye kahne. To tujhe apne abbu se bhi naraz hona chahiye. Acchaa ek baat bata. Shadi ke baad kya kabhi Raza ne tumhare sath jabardasti karne ki koshish ki, kya kabhi usne tumhe tumhari galti ka ehsas karaya. Kya kabhi tumhare sath galat bhasha aur unchi aawaz me baat ki. Rani ne Hayaa se puchha.

Nahi usne kabhi bhi aisa nahi kiya, balki main jo bhi usase kah deti hoon chupchap sunkar chala jata hai. Hayaa ne kaha.

To soch tu Hayaa. Jo insan apni galti ko mankar tumhara tana din raat sunta rahta hai. Tumhe palatkar jawab bhi nahi deta. Wo insan dil ka kitna achha hoga. Jo apni ek galti ke karan tumhari har jumlo sitam ko sir jhukakar sun aur sah raha hai. Kabhi tum apne aapko uski jagah par rakhkar dekho. Aur uski mano sthiti ke bare me socho. Ki wo kis daur aur pida se gujar raha hai. Meri ek baat maan le Hayaa. Sab kuchh bulakar use ek mauka de de. Wo bahut achha ladka hai.

Uske baad Rani aur Hayaa me kafi der batchit hui. Fir jab Rani jane lagi to usne ekbar fir kaha.

Hayaa. Tumhe Pati ke roop me ek achha insan mila hai. Raza hira hai. Uski chamak ko parakh. Aur apni zindagi ko ek mauka de. Kahi aisa na ho ki jab tak tumhe ye samajh me aaye tab tak bahut der ho jaye. Mujhko dekh maine to us hadse ko bhoolkar apni jindagi naye sire se shuru kar di hai. Achha ab main chalti hoon. Meri baato par ekbaar achhe se gaur karna. Baki teri marzi.

Itna bolkar Rani chali gayi, lekin Hayaa ko ek gahri soch me chhod gayi. Abhi tak Hayaa ne kabhi bhi poore ghatna kram par vichar hi nahin kiya tha, lekin Rani ke kahne par Hayaa ne shuru se lekar ab tak ki sthiti par gaur kiya. Use bhi realise huwa ki Agar Raza gunahgaar hai to usko gunahgaar banane wali wo khud hai, ab use khud par gussa aa raha tha ki usne Raza ke sath ab tak kitna bura bartav kiya. Isi soch vichar me aaj ka din bit gaya.

Agle din subah Hayaa ki tabiyat bahut jyada kharab ho gayi. Raza turant use lekar Hospital chala gaya. Janch karane par pata chala ki Wo Vidol positive hai. Raza ne turant usko admit karwaya aur apne aur Hayaa ke gharwalo ko inform kiya. Uske mata pita aur Hayaa ke Abbu aur Ammi hospital aa gaye. Rani bhi usse milne ke liye aai. Pure din hospital me rahne ke baad raat ko Raza ki mummy hospital me rukna chahti thi, lekin Raza ne sabhi ko ghar bhej diya aur khud hospital me ruk gaya.

Hayaa pure 5 Hospital me rahi aur Raza ne use ek minute bhi akela nahi chhoda. Hayaa bhi Raza ki apne liye itni care dekhkar bahut khush thi aur khud par gussa bhi aa raha tha. Use Rani ki baat yaad aa rahi thi ki Raza heera hai.

5 din baad Raza Hayaa ko discharge karakar apne ghar le aaya aur uski puri tarah se dekhbhaal ki. Ab Hayaa ke man me Raza ke liye Nafrat khatam ho gai thi aur wo Apni zindagi ko Raza ke sath ek mauka dena chahti thi.

Sadi se lekar Abhi tak usne Raza ke naam ka Sringar Nahi kiya tha. Wah apni nai zindagi Raza ke naam se shuru karna chahti thi. Wo Raza se apne kiye huwe dur-vyavhar ke liye Maffi mangna chahti thi. isliye jab Raja subah kaam par jane laga to Hayaa ne puchha.

Ho sake to tum aaj ghar jaldi aana. Mujhe kuchh jaroori baat karni hai tumse.

Raza haan mein sir hilakar kaam par chala gaya. Hayaa dophar baad se hi Raza ke naam ka solah sringar kiye uska intezar karne lagi, samay bit-ta gaya lekin Raza ghar nahi lauta. Hayaa kamre se bahar aa gayi aur Raza ka intezar karne lagi. Raza ke maa baap bahut khush huwe Hayaa ko is roop me dekhkar. Tabhi Hayaa ka phone baja. Call receive karke samne wale ki baat sunkar Hayaa ke hantho se phone chhutkara jameen par gir pada.

Mummy papa Raza ko goli lagi hai aur wo hospital me hai. Hayaa ne rote huwe kaha.

Maa baap ke hosh hi ud gaye ye sunkar. Sabhi turant hospital pahuche. Hayaa ne apne abbu Aur Rani ko phone karke ye bata diya. Uske abbu aur ammi bhi hospital pahuche. Raza ka ek mitr hospital me tha. Usne puri ghatna ki jankari gharwalon ko de di. Raza ka opration karke goli nikal di gai jo uske kandhe par lagi thi. Raza ko icu se ward me sift kar diya gaya tha. Sab gharwale Raza se milne ke liye gaye. Thodi der baad ek inspector Raza ka bayan lene ke liye aaya.

Hello Mr. Raza ab tabiyat kaisi hai aapki. Mujhe aapka bayan lena hai.

Thik hain sir. Puchhiye kya puchhna hai. Raza ne kaha.

Aap par jisne Goli Chalayi thi. Use Hamne ek chasmdid ki sinakht par giraftar kar liya hai. Uska naam jaid hai. Aur wo Mr. Haidar ka beta aur aapka sala hai. Kya aap par goli jaid ne chalai. Inspector ne puchha.

Inspector ki baat sunkar waha sab chauk gaye. Bahar baithi Hayaa aur Rani bhi chauk gai. Kisi ko vishwas hi nahi huwa ki jaid ne Raza ko goli mari hai.

Nahi inspector maine goli marne wale ko apni aankho se dekha hai. Wo jaid nahi tha dekhne wale ko jaroor kio galatfahmi hui hai. Raza ne apna bayan de diya.

Raza ke bayan ke baad jaid ko chhod diya gaya. Use bhi apni galti ka ehsas ho gaya aur wo hospital gaya. Uske abbu ne use kheech kar thappad mara Raza par goli chalane ke liye. Wo sir jhukakar Raza ke pairon par gir pada aur rote huwe bola.

Mujhe maaf kar do jeeja ji. Bahut badi bhool ho gayi mujhse. Main aapse gussa tha aur usi gusse me main apni bahan ka suhag ujadne chala tha.aap sab log mujhe maaf kar dijie.

Jaid ke maafi mangne ke baad sabhi ne use maaf kar diya.

Kya Hayaa nahi aai mujhse milne? Raza ne sawal kiya.

Raza ki baat sunkar Hayaa apne aapko rok na payi aur andar jakar Raza se lipatkar foot foot kar rone lagi aur boli.

Mujhe maaf kar do. Mujhse bahut badi galti ho gai. Maine jaan bujhkar tumhare sath bura bartav kiya. Tumse kabhi bhi pyaar se baat nahi ki. Hamesha tumhara dil dukhaya. Tumhare bare me jankar ki tum hospital me ho, meri to jaan hi nikal gai thi. Main tumhare bina nahi jee sakti Raza. Main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon.

I LOVE YOU Raza.

Hayaa ke itna bolne par pichhe taliyon ki gadgadahat sunai padi. Jab Hayaa ne pichhe mudkar dekha to sab use hi dekh rahe the. Ye dekhkar Hayaa ko bahut sharm aai aur usne sharmakar apna sir Raza ke sine me chhipa liya.

Iske baad Raza jab tak thik nahi ho gaya Hayaa ne man lagakar uski sewa ki. Uska khyal rakha.

Is tarah nafrat se shuru hui ye kahani pyaar par aakar khatam hui.

Chahe kuchh bhi ho jaye is baat ko kabhi bhi justify nahi kiya ja sakta ke koi apni beizzatti k badle mein kisi ka balatkaar kar daale. yeh bahut hi galat baat hai aur yeh bhi kahan ka insaaf hai ke aap bina soche samjhe kisi par balatkaar jaisa ghinauna ilzam laga do. raza aur hayaaa dono hi apni apni jagah bahut jyada galat the. udhar hayaa ke abbu ne in dono ki shadi ka jo faisla liya wo samay ki maang ke anusar bilkul sahi tha. par shadi hone ke baawjud hayaa ne kabhi bhi raza ko apna pati nahi maana balke wo to usse itni nafrat karti thi ke usse har wakt jaleel karti rehti thi.

Waise raza ko jaleel karna uska haq bhi tha. kyunki balatkaar jaise ghinaune jurm ki koi bhi maafi nahi honi chahiye. raza ko gussa tha hayaa ke saath gaali galauch kar leta usko chahe thappad maar deta ya fir uske khilaf maan haani ka dava kar deta wahan tak raza apni jagah sahi hota par usne to gusse mein aake wo kar daala jiski koi kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta tha. isliye hayaa jo kar rahi thi wo sahi kar rahi thi.

par wo bhi apni jagah galat thi uski galti ka ehsaas uski saheli raani ne karwaya. asli dost wahi hota hai jo hame hamare sahi galat dono realize karwaye. kahani mein mujhe kahin bhi koi bhi galti nazar nahi aayi. kahani aise flow mein chal rahi thi ke koi bhi ise ek baar start kar de to ise khatam kiye bina band nahi karega. bahut hi interesting story ek different topic par likhi gayi hai yeh story isliye bhi yeh interesting hai.

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