★☆★ Xforum | Ultimate Story Contest 2024 ~ Reviews Thread ★☆★

[Adirshi]

कब? क्यों? कैसे? by TheBlackBlood

paise ke lalach me insan rishte bhi bul jata hai aur lalach me kuch is kadar andha ho jata hai ke apno ki jaan lene se bhi baaz nahi aata, anand aur mina ne abhinav ko maarne ka plan bahut badhiya banaya tha lekin ye bhul gaye ke aise karmkand kitni hi chalaki se kar lo kahi na kahi kuch na kuch loophool chhut hi jata hai lekin us loophole ko dhundhne ke liye bhi dimag inspector shrikant jaisa chahiye hota hai , gajab engaging thriller story hai bhai vintage CID ka episode dekh raha aisa feel aa raha tha padhte huye, shrikant ka har baat ko dekhne ka najariya ekdum gajab likha hai, bas fark itna tha ke CID me mujrim khulasa karta hai yaha shrikant ne kiya, and btw inspector shrikant ka character pasand aaya apun ko, those witty dialogues are awesome and as a reader I request ke ho sake to dekho inspector shrikant pe koi long story likh sako to, baki ye kahani gajab thi, all the best for the contest.

 

[Adirshi]

दंश by Kala Nag

kam shabdo me apne plot se sath justice karti huyi ek outstanding story, karele ko kitna hi chachni me bhigo do lekin uski kadwahat waisi ki waisi rehti hai waise bhi bhale divya ne patnaik ki najayaz santan ko kitne hi acche sanskar kyu na diye ko aakhir usne wahi kiya jo uske khun me tha, gunah. jaisa ki maine pehle kaha ye outstanding story hai, simple plot kam shobo me likhi kahani lekin ek kafi effective kahani hai, and main ye bilkul keh sakta hu ke ye is USC ki one of the finest stories me se hai, all the best for contest.

 

[Adirshi]

Baat Ek Raat Ki by Samar_Singh

ye tumhari likhi pehli story hai? if yes then dude tum pehli hi ball pe sixer mare ho, what and amezing blend of horror and thriller gajab ekdum, aksar horror kahani ko padhte huye unme darr ki kami si lagti hai as kahani ko padh kar darr feel karwana kafi mushkil hai lekin my friend you have done it very well, kahani me jis daravne mahol ki jis thrill ki jarurat thi wo kahani me ekdum perfect tha, not gunna lie apun ko thodi jani dushman wali vibe aayi wo rape scene aur aatma ke badle se but halki si as ye kahani usse ekdum different hai aur sach kahu to better bhi hai. pehle hi serial killer ka khatra upar se jaan ki pyasi aatma jiske piche shilpa aur vinay responsible the bahut badhiya tarike se buni hai kahani. again story kafi sahi hai and I am hoping to read more such works from you all the best for contest.

 

[Adirshi]

An Artist by fountain_pen

ye story apne ko long form me chahiye, bahut umda plot hai lekin stort story me ye sahi se explore nahi hua hai, bahut si bate hai us case ke bare me aur janna hai jisne ekam ko decommission kiya, major kunal ke character ko aur explore karna hai ekam aur tulika ki relationship ko aur karib se padhna hai kahani me bahut si chize hi jo ki bahut badhiya thi lekin mujhe lagta hai word limit ki wajah se wo sahi se explore na ho payi so as a reader ise request samajhiye ki ispar ek bhale 10 update ki but sabhi angle ko sahi se explore karti story likhiye, aap ek bahut umda lekhak hai aur aapki bhasha par pakad bhi kafi sahi hai ye aapki dono kahaniyo ne bata diya hai bas narration aur better karne ki jarurat hai as dono hi kahaniya bich bich me flow se hat jati hai baki to kahani jabardast hai all the best for contest.

 

[Adirshi]

Writer by Hell Strom

Writer log ek alag hi sensitive prajati hote hai usme bhi kuch aise bhi hote hai jo kahani ke liye apne kirdaro me kuch is kadar ulajh jate hai ke uske liye kuch bhi kar jaye aur yaha to kahani hi live thi jisme jite jagte kirdar the, bahut badhiya thriller story likhe ho men har ek chiz bahut badhiya tarike se bune ho ek ek detail ek ek scene, twist aur turn se bhari kahani purane jasusi novels ki yaad dilati hai aur likha bhi waisa hai, ekdum on the edge ke padhte huye aage kya hoyga iski utsukta bani rehti hai, though for me keshav pandit ka character kuch jyada hi over the top likh diye ho tum aisa laga as aisa show hua ke usko sab pehle hi pata hai lekin wahi kahani ki demand bhi thi, mast story thi a very well written thriller, keep writing and keep us entertained all the best for contest.

 

[Adirshi]

~Queen~ by Damha

Aisi story jab staff ne nahi the tab kahe nahi likhe winner material hai ye horror thriller ka perfect combination start to end hook karke rahne wali story bole to dimag ghumane wali jabardast story. bhaisahab rongte khade kar diye story ne aur jo sound effect likh ke diyele hai wo kahani me char chand laga dete hai, everything every detail is well written choti se choti baat se leke ayush uska background, mohan, zara aur end twist matlab mere paas tarif ke shabd nahi hai, well done men amezing story.

 

[Black]

SAAJAN by Black

Yo Black garu apun finally tumhari sabhi paancho stories padh liya hai apart from the masterpiece battle of the earth mujhe ye kahani sabse jyada pasand aayi isiliye sabka to main review nahi likh raha , what I liked about this story is jis tarike se tumne apne style se hatke is old school romance ko likha hai wo gajab hai bole to kahani ko padhte huye tum us jamane ko imagine karte ho purani filmo ki kahani ki yaad dila di bhai ekdum aur sabse badhiya apne ko ye laga ke tumne dono point of view se kahani batayi hai isse dono main kirdaro ko unki bhavnao ko samajhna aasan hua, shadi ko uske prem ko kahani me bahut achi tarah bataya hai, agar paancho kahaniyo ko quality ke nisab se lagau to saajaan uske baad battle of earth uske baad jaanwar fir suraj aur end me raaz ka number ayega. Noice story men all the best for contest.

Thanks babaji
Saajan aur jaanwar emotions ke sath khelti hai
Beshak saajan maine dil se likha tha
Ek husband ko apni wife ko kaise treat karna chahiye woh dikhana chahta tha

 

[Adirshi]

Thanks babaji
Saajan aur jaanwar emotions ke sath khelti hai
Beshak saajan maine dil se likha tha
Ek husband ko apni wife ko kaise treat karna chahiye woh dikhana chahta tha

aur bahut khub likha tha

 

[Hell Strom]

Writer by Hell Strom

Writer log ek alag hi sensitive prajati hote hai usme bhi kuch aise bhi hote hai jo kahani ke liye apne kirdaro me kuch is kadar ulajh jate hai ke uske liye kuch bhi kar jaye aur yaha to kahani hi live thi jisme jite jagte kirdar the, bahut badhiya thriller story likhe ho men har ek chiz bahut badhiya tarike se bune ho ek ek detail ek ek scene, twist aur turn se bhari kahani purane jasusi novels ki yaad dilati hai aur likha bhi waisa hai, ekdum on the edge ke padhte huye aage kya hoyga iski utsukta bani rehti hai, though for me keshav pandit ka character kuch jyada hi over the top likh diye ho tum aisa laga as aisa show hua ke usko sab pehle hi pata hai lekin wahi kahani ki demand bhi thi, mast story thi a very well written thriller, keep writing and keep us entertained all the best for contest.

Thanku Thanku

 

[Damha]

Aisi story jab staff ne nahi the tab kahe nahi likhe winner material hai

Time ki kami Aur Performance pressure bhi rehta tha, Overthinking ke chakar me risky plots nahi uthaye the, Lekin ab ki baar sach me likhne ka mann ker raha tha

~Queen~ by Damha

Aisi story jab staff ne nahi the tab kahe nahi likhe winner material hai ye horror thriller ka perfect combination start to end hook karke rahne wali story bole to dimag ghumane wali jabardast story. bhaisahab rongte khade kar diye story ne aur jo sound effect likh ke diyele hai wo kahani me char chand laga dete hai, everything every detail is well written choti se choti baat se leke ayush uska background, mohan, zara aur end twist matlab mere paas tarif ke shabd nahi hai, well done men amezing story.

Ap ke jaise legendary writer ko story achi lagi to achi he likhi ho gi Laga nahi tha itni pasand aye gi sab ko lekin response daikh ker acha lag raha hai