Incest ♡ एक नया संसार ♡ (Completed)

[The_InnoCent]

Aapne apne vade ke anusar is kahani ko samapt kiya. Aap se aage bhi isi tarah rochak, romanchak kahani ki ummid lagaye baithe hai.

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया भाई आपकी इस खूबसूरत प्रतिक्रिया के लिए,,,,,,,,,,

कोशिश करूॅगा भाई,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

Sabse pahle late review Dene ke kiye sorry AAP ne apne Wade ke mutabik is part ka ant Kiya iski aapko lakh lakh wadaiyan .
Aur phir Mai ye kahna chahunga first part isliye kyunki aapne Jo bhi doubts is part me chode hai wo second part ka main plot hai khair Mai ye nahi kahta ki AAP second part aaj hi start karoge magar jab bhi karoge us part ka start aur end dhamakedar hoga .AAKHIR Mai upar wala AAP ki Dadi ko jaldi thik Kare aur aapko man ki Santi de taki AAP aage bhi update jari raken .aur AAP ki story itni acchi hai ki ham sab KE pas sabd hi nahi hai tarif karne ke

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया भाई आपकी इस खूबसूरत प्रतिक्रिया के लिए,,,,,,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

Shaandaar update Bhai Maza aa Gaya.i hope ki Kahani ka 2nd part bohut jald dekhne ko mile. Waiting for next part .

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया भाई आपकी इस खूबसूरत प्रतिक्रिया के लिए,,,,,,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

Nice and unexpected ending. Abhi bhi ending adhuri hi lag rahi hai but in real life that's the ending it always happens. Shuru se ant tak mostly story ko logical rakha and now in the end ending bhi waisi hi rakhi. Har bar happy ending nahi hoti. Kafi bar ending adhuri hi rah jati hai and its the true fact and you nailed on it. Hats off to you bro.

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया भाई आपकी इस खूबसूरत प्रतिक्रिया के लिए,,,,,,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

After reading the ending, there is high probability ki story ka second part bhi aayega but who knows except writer. hope unki person life achhi ho aur iska second part bhi likhe because kahani aise mod par khatam ki hai jahan se iske second part ya fir ye kahe ki the raj ki behano ke pyaar ki manzil aur badi maa aka pratima singh ki new life and dada dadi ka family life and raj ki love life kafi kuch shuru hona baki hai even abhay ke bete ki zindgi ko bhi sudharna hai as well as shiva ki zindagi ko bhi. So eagerly waiting for next part of the story.

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया भाई आपकी इस खूबसूरत प्रतिक्रिया और शानदार रिव्यू के लिए,,,,,,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

Awesome story ending puri tarah se nahi ho payi hai
Nidhi-Viraj ka love story adhuri
Ritu-Viraj ka love story adhuri
Nilam-Viraj ka love story adhuri
Partima v nahi mil payi

Kya is story ka next part bhi aayega???

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया भाई आपकी इस खूबसूरत प्रतिक्रिया के लिए,,,,,,,,,,

अधूरी एण्डिंग तो जानबूझ कर की गई है भाई, लेकिन आपने तो सिर्फ बहनों की लव स्टोरी को अधूरी कहा, जबकि कहानी में इसके अलावा भी बहुत कुछ अधूरा है। ख़ैर, इस कहानी का दूसरा भाग तो ज़रूर आएगा भाई, किन्तु उसके लिए समय लगेगा।

 

[The_InnoCent]

Super & Jabardast & Gajab & Very Nice last update bro

Kamaal ki ending thi kyoki agar next part m dekhane pr or maja aayega

To dono ko bacha liya jyada kuch nhi huaa time k sath vo dono b thik ho jayege

Gudiya ke bare m kya kahu sb mast uska y naraj hona ya ignore krna viraj ko samjh nhi aa rha or baki sbi ko aa rha h ab to ritu ko b pta chal gya sb ek dusre k liye apne love ko sacrifice kr rhe h superb

Vo dono mumbai wapas chali gyi h or yaha b pratibha ne sbi ko bada sok de diya itna kuch krk gajab


Waiting for next part

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया भाई आपकी इस खूबसूरत प्रतिक्रिया और शानदार रिव्यू के लिए,,,,,,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

Greattt shubham bro. Mind blowing update. Superbbb writing.

To aakhir is story ka the end ho hi gaya. But ending ke baad bhi abhi bahut kuchh baaki rah gaya hai bro jo shayad iske next part ke liye hai. Mujhe lagta hai iska next part bada hi intresting hoga.

Ritu sahi salamat hai ye bahut hua. Abhay singh ko agar kuch ho bhi jata to mujhe iska koi dukh nahi hota. Kyo ki ye character is story me kuchh khaas nahi tha.

Neelam to shayad ab apni maisi ke paas hi mumbai me rahegi. Usne apni badi bahan ke liye apne prem ka tyaag kiya hai. But kya wo apne dil se viraj ki mohabbat mita payegi? Is baat ka pata to shayad next part me hi chalega.

Nidhi ka behaviour kafi dilchasp hai. Jitna wo viraj se bach rahi hai wo utna hi khud ko taklif bhi de rahi hai. Ab dekhna ye hai ki ye jid aur sabr kab tak kaayam rahta hai.

Shiva ko umar kaid ho gayi hai. Maybe next part me iska koi role najar aaye. Sonam ke liye jo iske dil me prem hai wo kya rang layega agar ye umar kaid se bari ho jaye to.

Pratima ne to gajab kar diya bro. Jameen jaaydaad sab kuch lauta diya aur khud kahi chali gayi hai Apne paapo ka pashchataap karne ke liye. But mujhe shak hota hai ki kahi ye next part me koi rahasyamay kirdaar na ban kar aaye.

Is story ne apne end me bahut se sawaal chhode hain. Sab kuch waisa hi nahi hota jaisa ham chaahte hain. Story ke sheershak ke hisaab se story ka end behtar hai.

Iske next part ka besabri se intjaar rahega bro. Main janta hu ki is wakt aap behtar condition me nahi hain. Main dua karuga ki aapki dadi bahut jald theek ho jaye jisse aapka man shaant aur khushi se bhar jaye. Jab aisa hoga tabhi aap koi kaam behtar dhang se kar sakenge.

And for the complete your thread.

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया विक्रान्त भाई आपकी इस खूबसूरत प्रतिक्रिया और शानदार रिव्यू के लिए,,,,,,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

Waaah The_InnoCent bhai kya shandaar update diya hai. Really fantastic update____

Har kahani ka end hota hai wahi huwa bhai. Kamaal ki story thi aur kamaal ki writing skill thi. Aisi story aur aisi writing skill bahut kam padhne ko milti hai. Aapne shuru se last tak story ko baadhe rakha isse aapki kaabiliyat ka pata chalta hai but bhai Jaisi ending ki ummeed thi waisi story ki ending nahi huyi. Thoda nirasha huyi mujhe is baat ki____

Neelam ne kurbani di, nidhi ne bhi kinara kar rakha hai but mohabbat ki tapis se ye kab tak khud ko bachaye rakhenge ye dekhne wali baat hogi____

Ajay singh ki maut ke baad pratima ne sab kuch lauta diya aur khud apne paapo ka prayashchit karne ke liye ghar baar chhod diya. Viraj aditya & abhay singh uski khoj kar rahe hain but uska kahi pata nahi chal raha. Dekhte hain next part me kya hoga____

Story ka end to huwa but bahut sare sawaalo ko khada karne ke baad. Ye sare sawaal next part ke liye hain. Ab dekhte hain next part me in sab ke sath kya kya hota hai. Bhai main ye nahi kahta ki aap abhi is story ka next part start karo bcoz abhi aap apni dadi ke liye pareshan honge. Meri bhagwan se dua hai ki aapki dadi jaldi se theek ho jaye. Uske baad aap fresh mind me iska next part start kijiye_____

Thanks you so much bhai is behtareen story ko ham sabke beech lane ke liye. Meri dua hai aap aisi hi behtareen stories hamare beech laate rahe_____

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया भाई आपकी इस खूबसूरत प्रतिक्रिया और शानदार रिव्यू के लिए,,,,,,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

Aakhirkar es khani ka bhi ant ho gya . Very nice ending . Khani jo badla ke liye shuru hua tha badla lete hi smapt hua .
Pr bhoot swal chhor bhi gaye hain ummid hai jald hi agla part shuru hoga aur hme un swalo ke jwab bhi milenge

बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया भाई आपकी इस खूबसूरत प्रतिक्रिया के लिए,,,,,,,,,,