Incest ♡ एक नया संसार ♡ (Completed)

[Naina]

No one can interrupt you guys in story discussion thread, mods log un logo ko ban kar dete thread se i mean allow nahi karte hai jo log offtopic baat karte hai jaise ristrcted ko kiya tha virus ko kiya tha imyours ko kiya tha enigma bhai ki thread se

Par first post toh kar hi sakte hai na... chahe alias se aake kar de.... jalne wale ek hi post se writer ke dil pe aghaat karte hai... aur Shubham ji thehre emotional.... woh thread pe aana hi chhod de.... risk kahe le

 

[AK 24]

Par first post toh kar hi sakte hai na... chahe alias se aake kar de.... jalne wale ek hi post se writer ke dil pe aghaat karte hai... aur Shubham ji thehre emotional.... woh thread pe aana hi chhod de.... risk kahe le

I think you want a debate

But main itna soch ke bol nahi paunga becoz my head hurts, aap log baat kariye yaha pe

 

[firefox420]

Mera irada sharminda karne ka hargiz nahi tha bade bhaiya. Maine to aap teeno ki dil se taarif hi ki hai. Baaki aap kaddu me kitne teer maarte hain ye ham sab jaante hain. Is liye ye batane ka aapne bewajah hi kast kiya hai. Khair jane dijiye...moksh ki raah par fasa diye hain to meharbaani karke update bhi dijiye. Is tarah goli dena ab band kar dijiye,,,,,

ye ki asal mudde ki baat .. yaha sab ko makkhan laga kar 4 line ke comments likh diye aur update ke vishay mein koi baat nahi ki .. aise he nahi main inhe kukhyaat-vikhyaat Judge sahab kehta hu ...

 

[firefox420]

firefox420 masoom reader hai... aur yahin aakhiri sach bhi hai

Nainaaaa ji .. agar aap itne meete-meete shabdo ka prayog karengi to muzhe sugar ho jaayega ...

waise aaj kal aapse milna julana kam he ho pata hai .. ek to hamari raahe alag-alag ho gayi hai .. dusra kamdev99008 bhiya ne apna adda jamana chhod diya hai .. to aapse guft-e-goo nahi ho paati ...

 

[kamdev99008]

Nainaaaa ji .. agar aap itne meete-meete shabdo ka prayog karengi to muzhe sugar ho jaayega ...

waise aaj kal aapse milna julana kam he ho pata hai .. ek to hamari raahe alag-alag ho gayi hai .. dusra kamdev99008 bhiya ne apna adda jamana chhod diya hai .. to aapse guft-e-goo nahi ho paati ...

guft-e-goo to vaise bhi nahin ho sakti ab......................
modi ji ne swachchh bharat mission mein ghar-ghar shauchalay banwa diye hain........... jahan akele hi baithkar bore hona padta hai
pahle to khet mein baithkar guft-e-goo kar bhi lete the

 

[The_InnoCent]

कौन समझाए हमें के आख़िर ये बला क्या है।
दर्द में भी मुस्कुराऊॅ मैं, तो फिर सज़ा क्या है।।

हम जिस बात को लबों से कह नहीं सकते,
कोई उस बात को न समझे, इससे बुरा क्या है।।

रात दिन कुछ भी अच्छा नहीं लगता हमको,
इलाही ख़ैर हो, खुदा जाने ये माज़रा क्या है।।

समंदर में डूब कर भी हमारी तिश्नगी न जाए,
इस दुनियाॅ में इससे बढ़ कर बद्दुवा क्या है।।

अपनी तो बस एक ही आरज़ू है के किसी रोज़,
वो खुद आ कर कहे के बता तेरी रज़ा क्या है।।

______शुभम कुमार


Dosto ye aakhiri ghazal is story me maine likhi thi aur ritu ke dwara sunaya tha, aaj ise dekha to ek yaad taza ho gayi,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

Shubham bhai ye story to complete ho gai to kya ab aap apni dusri story..... ( rajrani badalte reshte )..... jo aduri chod rakhi hai usko star kab kar rhe ho bhai pleses comment me bta dejiya

Kalyansurya bhai, purani story bhi puri karuga magar usse pahle new story likhne ki ichha huyi is liye abhi new story post kar raha hu,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

The_InnoCent abhi story start ki hai padhana...
Congrats for completing this one and best of luck for new one...

Shukriya bhai, new story running par hai abhi,,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

shubham ji aapne bahut achhi tarah se kahani ko apne anjaam tak pahuchaya he ,bahut shandaar storyhe,ab aap iske dusre part ko likhna shuru kar dijiye ,ab aap viraj ka ritu ,nidhi ,or neelam ke sath sex karva dijiye .kahani me char chand lag jayenge ,mujhe pata he likhne wala jyada samay tak bina likhe nhi rah sakta he

Juhi ji aapke suggestion ke liye shukriya. Next part me zarur koshish karuga ki aapki ichha puri ho. Filhaal new story shuru ki hai. Dil kare to zarur padhiyega,,,,

 

[The_InnoCent]

Gajab bhai gajab

Kya mast ending ki hai re bhai natlab full to suspense bna dala aur excitement mai hi chhod diya sab ko

VIRAJ ne jiss NAYE SANSAR ka sapna dekha tha aaj vahi usse raas nhi aa rha hai kyunki uski DHADKAN uska sath nhi de rhi hai aur bas khud ko maar rhi hai uss se dur rakh kar

PRATIMA ka badal jana kaafi acha rha par uska gayab ho jana vajeeb tha but still usse VIRAJ se milkar jana chahiye tha but uss case mai vo VIRAJ ke samne se jane mai katra jati issliye chup chap chali gayi aur aisi jagah gayi hai jiska pta abhi tak VIRAJ nhi lga paya hai umeed hai agle part mai usse yeh pta chl jaye aur PRATIMA sakushal ho jahan bhi ho

NILAM ne apna pyaar kurban kar diya apni behan ke liye but na toh apna pyaar byaan kiya hai aur na hi RITU ne apna pyaar viraj se samne rakha hai halanki RITU ko pta hai ki NIDHI apne hi bhai se pyaar kar bhethi hai isme usse jyada achraj ki baat nhi lagi hogi usse kyunki vo khud bhi toh uske pyaar mai padi hai
Well usne koshish jarur ki hai NIDHI ke dil ka haal batane ki but VIRAJ samajh na ska hai abhi tak kyunki ja NIDHI ne usse propose kiya tha uss samay mai VIRAJ nashe mai tha issliye shayad vo uss vakya ko bhul gya hai

Well har chiz bikhri bikhri si lagi kahani ke ant mai koi apni khushi na hi bta pa rha hai na hi apna gum bat rha hai bas ghut ghut kar jeena chahta hai akela rehna chahta hai

Shayad iska agla bhag hume inn sab paristhitiyon se aajad hota dikhe

Well a beautiful ending in such a sensitive condition of your personal life

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR

Bahut bahut shukriya Mathur bhai aapke is khubsurat review ke liye,,,,,

Is story ka next part bhi likhuga magar usse pahle new story likhne ka khayaal aaya is liye new story ke baad old stories ko likhuga, ummid hai aapka sath hamesha ki tarah milega,,,,,