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Bahut hi umda story likhi hai black bhai aapna abhi tak 16 update padha hu magar
plot accha aage dhekhta hai kya hota hai
plot accha aage dhekhta hai kya hota hai
First story thi bhai...jitna ho sakta tha aur jitna soch sakta tha kiya. Baaki jo rah gaya wo iske next part me milega....Bahot badhiya... Thoda incest jyada hota to maza aa jaataa
Thanks bhai...Bahut hi umda story likhi hai black bhai aapna abhi tak 16 update padha hu magar
plot accha aage dhekhta hai kya hota hai
Muje aisi hi kahania pasand hai jismein sex sirf zarurat ka hisaab sein ho aur writer kahani par focus kareinThanks bhai...
Ye meri first story thi aise forum par.....starting me sex scene likhne se bahut katrata tha main aur yahi vajah hai incest prefix hote huye bhi maine isme zyada sex scenes nahi daale jiske liye kayi saare readers ne is kahani ko bekaar tak kaha. Well in chaar saalo me bahut badlaav hua mujh me jiske chalte ab jo new kahaniya likhta hu usme sex aur uski bhasha khul kar likhta hu. Ye alag baat hai ki sex bhi zarurat ke hisaab se hi daalta hu....mera maanna hai kahani me kahani honi chahiye naa ki sex....aur sex ho bhi to sirf zarurat ke hisaab se...
Khair, tasalli se padhiye bhai aur apne vichaar bhi khul kar pesh karna. Intzaar rahega ju ke dwara apni aur is kahani ki kamiyo se rubaru hone ka
Sabki apni apni soch aur apna apna test hai bhai...apne ko kahani me sex pasand hi nahi hai. Adult forum hai is liye sex daalna padta hai warna main to bilkul bhi nahi chaahta ki kahani me khule aam aur asheelta se bhara sex daalu. Anyways.....you continueMuje aisi hi kahania pasand hai jismein sex sirf zarurat ka hisaab sein ho aur writer kahani par focus karein
those small group of readers jina sirf sex scene mai intrest hai unhai porn dhekna chahiya woh zayda better hai unka liya
Jarurat bhi nahi hai sex scene kiThanks bhai...
Ye meri first story thi aise forum par.....starting me sex scene likhne se bahut katrata tha main aur yahi vajah hai incest prefix hote huye bhi maine isme zyada sex scenes nahi daale jiske liye kayi saare readers ne is kahani ko bekaar tak kaha. Well in chaar saalo me bahut badlaav hua mujh me jiske chalte ab jo new kahaniya likhta hu usme sex aur uski bhasha khul kar likhta hu. Ye alag baat hai ki sex bhi zarurat ke hisaab se hi daalta hu....mera maanna hai kahani me kahani honi chahiye naa ki sex....aur sex ho bhi to sirf zarurat ke hisaab se...
Khair, tasalli se padhiye bhai aur apne vichaar bhi khul kar pesh karna. Intzaar rahega ju ke dwara apni aur is kahani ki kamiyo se rubaru hone ka
Apan ki dusri story me ju ka review nahi aaya ab takJarurat bhi nahi hai sex scene ki
Pad raha huApan ki dusri story me ju ka review nahi aaya ab tak
It's okay...Pad raha hu
Lekin jadya time nahi milta
Thanks bhai....Update 19 is good
zabardast update bahut acchi tarreka sein explain Kiya apna