Romance 8TH SEMESTER ! (Completed)

[The Immortal]

I have seen writer comments on this thread and i know that he also read readers comments. And till today I didn't know that this story exist on Xforum and neither i was aware of it's actual writer Mr. CGP 2009, because which ever site i visited to thank and request it's actual writer for next part I only found they are all fake and impostors. I was so intrigued by this story that I just wanted to know what happens next.... I felt so baad for Sidar and also for Armaan but i fucking hated Divya and two timing bitch Deepika mam. Even Esha had her mind fried but she devised such a cunning plan and acted on it... I wanted some redemption from Esha, Gautam and his father.

I know bhai ke ye story aapne yaha readers ke entertainment ke liye writer se permission le kar hamaar samaksh pesh ki hai, par aapke maadhyam se main apna message writer tak pahuchane chahta hu. Writer ko reviews padhna accha lagta hai jaise ki humme update milne par khushi hoti hai.

muzhe ye story itni pasand aayi thi ke maine isko 2 din lagataar bina soye aur 2 time ka khana bhi nahi khaya tha, even jab toilet bhi jaana hota tha to bilkul emergency mein hi bhaagta tha. main science stream se nahi hu but mere kayi friends engg. students the aur main school mein khud hostel mein tha so i kind of lived this story.

this story was so much focused only on one Character 'Armaan' but there were other characters too, unke saath bhi thoda sa justice hona chahiye. abhi tak to sirf college life hi thi but ab aage professional life bhi hai aur ye Nisha wala bhi matter adhura chod diya.

Aur agar possible ho to 2nd part jo uncomplete hai utna hi post kar do... agar writer uske liye agree kare to.

Name correction - SGP ...

https://xforum.live/threads/atmakami-ability-or-disorder.1081/

Here is the 2nd part .

 

[Yug Purush]

I have seen writer comments on this thread and i know that he also read readers comments. And till today I didn't know that this story exist on Xforum and neither i was aware of it's actual writer Mr. SGP 2009, because which ever site i visited to thank and request it's actual writer for next part I only found they are all fake and impostors. I was so intrigued by this story that I just wanted to know what happens next.... I felt so baad for Sidar and also for Armaan but i fucking hated Divya and two timing bitch Deepika mam. Even Esha had her mind fried but she devised such a cunning plan and acted on it... I wanted some redemption from Esha, Gautam and his father.

I know bhai ke ye story aapne yaha readers ke entertainment ke liye writer se permission le kar hamaar samaksh pesh ki hai, par aapke maadhyam se main apna message writer tak pahuchane chahta hu. Writer ko reviews padhna accha lagta hai jaise ki humme update milne par khushi hoti hai.

muzhe ye story itni pasand aayi thi ke maine isko 2 din lagataar bina soye aur 2 time ka khana bhi nahi khaya tha, even jab toilet bhi jaana hota tha to bilkul emergency mein hi bhaagta tha. main science stream se nahi hu but mere kayi friends engg. students the aur main school mein khud hostel mein tha so i kind of lived this story.

this story was so much focused only on one Character 'Armaan' but there were other characters too, unke saath bhi thoda sa justice hona chahiye. abhi tak to sirf college life hi thi but ab aage professional life bhi hai aur ye Nisha wala bhi matter adhura chod diya.

Aur agar possible ho to 2nd part jo uncomplete hai utna hi post kar do... agar writer uske liye agree kare to.

Thanx a lot... Really, it means alot to receive such a review after 5 years .... Read ATMAKAMI... 2nd part...

 

[Yug Purush]

ye story maine 1 saal pehle padhi thi #### par 'Dil Dosti aur Daaru' ke naam se ........
it's one of my favourite story and my 2 favourite characters of this story are 'Angelina and Sidar' .

.. but iss story ka 2nd part bhi likhna chahiye thoda bahut revenge bhi to banta hai.....

Sidar ke liye justice revenge lena hai, Deepika mam ki bhi class lagani baaki hai jo usne Armaan ke saath kiya tha, jab ye 2 mahine coma mein raha. Aur sahi maayno mein to abhi Gautam aur Esha ke plan ka revarsal bhi to kuch hona chahiye, Armaan itna kameena character hai..... ye itni sharafat se sab kuch to bhula nahi sakta.



maine apne system mein sirf 2 hi stories ke back up banaye hai --- ek aapki story ka aur dusra 'pyaar - 100 baar'. maine bahut si stories padhi hai par abhi tak sirf ye hi 2 aise stories hai jo mere dil ke armaano ko choo saki hai. bhai agar possible ho to please iss story ka 2nd part bhi likh dalo.

aapki story ka content itna jabardast hai ke iske aage badhate hue aur bhi kayi kahani likhi jaa sakti hai.

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Thanks
GodFather

Thank you bhai... Story aage hai... TS se ATMAKAMI ka thread link mang lo

 

[Yug Purush]

Name correction - SGP ...

https://xforum.live/threads/atmakami-ability-or-disorder.1081/

Here is the 2nd part .

Thank you immo sir

 

[Mr. Perfect]

Immo bhai aatmkami 2nd part hai kya jo adhura hai____

1. Is story ke original writer Yug Purush hai , one of my favourite writer. So all thanx to him .

2 . Is story Ka 2nd part bhi hai but filhal adhura hai .

3. Kisi dusri site Ka name mentioned na kare .

 

[The Immortal]

Immo bhai aatmkami 2nd part hai kya jo adhura hai____

Yes .

 

[Lucky198]

This story I have ready it many times, even when I get bored I just open the pdf read it from anywhere its gives me a pleasure to mind and smile on face. The plot, dialogue, role play by character and many more are definitely unbelievable. Even I also don't know how The Gyani bhai thinks such a interesting plot. Hats off to his creative mind.
Even Atmakami is also interesting to read, but I don't know why do you have end the story in incomplete way.
By the way, from all the reader who are big fan of you(Gyani bhai) want to be read next level of adventurous story from you.

 

[Siraj Patel]

Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.



On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel

 

[pawankamdev123]

Bhai is story ka update 84 missing hai... koyi update kar sakta hai kya... update 83 tak padh liya... please immortal ji... update 84 de do... fir aage padhta hoon

 

[SKRawat]

Bhai 8th Semestar story ka PDF link do