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Fantasy ABHI - THE WARRIOR 2 (Completed)

Nevil singh

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ek toh seene ka dard aur yeh vaar ....Abhi badi mushkil se sambhalkar khada hua ....k tabhi Nebhru ki di hui anguthi phir chamak uthi aur Abhi ka sar ki saari pida pal bhar mein samapt ho gayi ....Abhi phir nayi sfurti k saath ....unn adrishya shaktiyo ka saamna karne k liye tayyar ho gaya .....

ek baar phir hawa ka ek zhaunka Abhi ki taraf badha ....jisse usne mehsus kar liya .....isske pahle k woh mayavi adrisya asur Abhi par vaar karta ...Abhi ..ne uski hriday ki gati aur swas ko mehsus karke apni talwar ka satik war kiya .....jo uss asur k hriday k paar ho gaya .....ek dardnaak cheekh k saath woh asur dharashayi ho gaya....mrityu k saath uska adrisya roop bhi chala gaya ....

Abhi ne ek nazar usspar dali ....aur apni indriyo ko poori tarah jaagrit karke aage badhne laga ....har choti se aawaj par dhyan deta hua poori satarkta se woh aage badh raha tha ....k tabhi ek khadag ...tezi se uski gardan ki taraf badha ....jisse usne mehsus kiya aur niche zhuk gaya .....jaise hi woh uss vaar se bacha ....tabhi alag alag disha se do shool uski taraf badhe ......Abhi ne tezi se talwar ghumayi ....aur ek shool ...ko kaat diya parantu ...dusra shool.....uske ..baaju par halka sa jakham dete hue nikal gaya ......

Abhi ab tak samaz chuka tha jab tak yeh asur pragat nahi hote ...tab tak unka saamna karna kathin hai ....ab tak k sangharsh poorna safar mein aadhe se jayad din bit gaya tha ......

Abhi ne ab jal tatva ka prayog karke apne charo tarf jal barsaaya .....gile hone k kaaran Abhi ko ab unn asuro ki aakritiya nazar aane lagi ...thi ...usse apni taraf badi tezi se aati hui do aakritiya nazar aai .....toh usne bhi apni ...talwar sambhali aur badi tezi se ghumata hua aage badne laga ...do aur asur Abhi ki talwar k bhent chad gaye..

ab aur asur baaki the unhone Abhi ko charo taraf se gher liya aur ek nischit duri banakar apna shtan badal badlkar ......uspar vaar karne lage .......jisase Abhi ko unki sahi disha ka bhan nahi ho raha tha ......Abhi ne ab ....dhul bhari aandhi chalana shuru kiya ....jisase un adrshya asuro par mitti ek ki ek parat si chad gayi ......aur woh pragat hogaye ......

jab tak woh asur apne upar ki mitti hatate ....tab tak Abhi ne budhe baba dwar doya hua maarak khanjar ....pragat kiya .....woh khanjar bijli ki bhanti chamak raha tha .....Abhi ne unn charo asuro sthiti ka dhyan karta hue uss khajar ko choda ....aur woh khanjar .....bijli ki si gati se unn charo k hriday ko bhedta hua ...wapas Abhi k haath mein aagaya ....unn charo ko cherkhne ka bhi awsar nahi mila ....khanjer k lagte hi ....woh pal bhar mein raakh mein badal ..gaye ......

Abhi ne aaj pahli baar uss khanjar ki maarak urja ka prabhav dekha tha .....Nebhru dwara usse iss khanjer ki kshamta k baare mein pata toh chal gaya tha ...paratu aaj dekha pahli baar tha ....

unn adrishya asuro ki baadha paar karke woh aage bada ......Abhi jungle paar kar chuka tha ......bas kuch chotii zhadiya bachi hui thi .....uske baad ek khula maidan ...aur amidan k ant mein khadan ....

Abhi ne zhadiyo mein chupkar dekha ......k maidan k atim chor jaha se khadan shuru hoti hai ....waha ......Sainiko ki ek tukdi ...tainat thi jo poori satarkta se pahra de rahi thi ......

Shundak se usse pata chala tha k lagbhag 1000 ki saknhya mein Darmen k sainik uss khadan mein tainat hai .......wahi ek aur unki sainik chavni bani hui thi ....jismein shayad uss sena ..k kissi adhikari k rahne ki vyastha thi .....

Suryasta hone hi wala tha ....Abhi zhadiyo k picche se waha tainat sainiko ka nirikshan karne laga .....

Yaha woh baune logo ne khadan tak jaane wale ...gupt marg ko dhund liya tha ....jo ek surang k roop mein tha ....kai varsho se uska prayog na hone k kaaran .....woh aage se band ho gaya tha ...

unn bauno ne uss tezi se waha ki khudayi ka kaam shuru kar diya ......

Yaha Abhi andhera hone ki pratiksha kar raha tha ......

surya paschim disha mein asth hone laga .....Aur poorna chandrama ka uday hua ....aaksh ek dum saaf tha ......Ab chandrama ka dudhiya prakaash charo or phail gaya tha ......

Khadan mei tainat sainiko ko kissi shatru k humle ki lesh maatra bhi aashanka nahi thi .....issiliye sab nischint the ......

Ab samay aagaya tha Abhi ka Arsalan k roop mein waha pravesh karne ka ......Arsalan k roop mein pravesh karne ki Nebhtu ne jo yojna banayi thi ussi k anusar Abhi ne Nebhru ki anghuthi ko aakash ki or uchala ....poorna chandrama k prakaash k saath sanyog hote hi ...uss anguthi mein chupi hui maaya pragat ho gayi ......

achanak aakash mein bhayankar bijliya kadakne lagi .....Aakash mein bhayankar kaale megh garjana karne lage ....achanak hue masum k badlv k kaaran ..jo sainik shivir mein baithe the woh sabhi bahar aaye .....

Aakash mein bhayankar kaale megh aur chamakti hui bijliya ....aur unki hriday ko kampit karne wali aawaje .....waha tainat sainiko k mann mein bhay utpanna kar rahe the ....tabhi unhone dekha ....k aakash se ek jagah bhayankar visfot k saath bijli giri aur waha ek prakash dwar pragat ho gaya .....unhone dekha k koi uss prakash dwar se bahar nikal raha ..hai ....jiske haath mein bijli ko si chamakti hui talwar hai ......

Visfot ki aawaj se sab sainiko ka dhyan uss disha mein gaya .....khadan k bhiter jo sainik the woh bhi uss visfot ki aawaj se aakarsht hokar uss taraf jaane lage ....

unmein se kuch sainik aur waha ki sena ka senapati ....Arsalan ko pehchante the ....

achanak itne varsho k baad Arsalan ko apne saamne dekhkar ..woh Chaunk gaye ....Senapati k muh se nikal hi gaya .....Arsalan .....Jeevit hai .....

Abhi - kyu aascharya hua muzhe jeevit dekhkar ....tumahre maalik Darmen k paas woh shakti nahi hai k jo Arsalan ko haani pahuncha sake .......tum logo ne mera saath chodkar ...mere saath vishwasghat kiya .......iska dand tum sab ko bhugatna hoga ....

ek baar toh woh senapati achanak apne saamne Arsalan ko dekhkar dar gaya tha ....parantu Darmen k 1000 mayavi astro se susajjit sainiko aur gupt roop se chupe hue daityo ka dhyan aate hi uska hosla badh gaya ......

Senapati - Maharaja Arsalan toh aap jeevit ho ....accha laga aapko dekhkar ....ab mein aapko bandi banakar .....Samrat Darmen ko upahar k roop mein bhent karunga .....
( sainiko ki taraf ishara karte hue .) aakramannn

Senapati ka aadesh milte hi sena ko woh tukdi Abhi ki or bade tezi se badi .....Abhi ne apni talwar lahrayi ....aur agni ki urja se ek bade se aag k gole ka nirman kiya aur uss sena par prahar kiya .....

jaha woh aag ka gola gira .....kai sainik uss aag ki chaoet mein aagye aur swaha ho gaye ......Abhi ne lagatar aag k gole barsaye .....aag se bachne k liye ..sena mein bhagdad mach gayi thi....

Apni sena ko aise titar biter hote hue dekhkar Senapati ne Sena ki suraksha ...k liye kaali shaktiyo ki ek diwar si bana di Abhi k agni golo k vaar uss adrishya kaali urja se bani hui deewar se takrakr bikharne lage .....

.Abhi ne ek k baad ek ..jal..vaayu ...aur prithvi tava ka prayog kiya ...parantu koi bhi vaar unn sainiko tak nahi pahunch raha tha ....tab woh sainik bhi ab tak sambhal chuke the ....

yaha ka shor sunkar khadan k baaki sainik bhi ussi disha mein apne shastra sambhalkar jaa rahe the ......

Yaha unn bauno ne bhi surang ka raasta poori tarah khol diya tha ......aur Vifot ka sanket milte hi ..woh uss khadan mein gupt rup se pravesh kar gaye ....Saare sanik ...khadan se bahar jaa chuke the ....kewal kuch hi gulamo k kaidkhane ki paheredari kar rahe the ...

yaha do bandigrih the ek mein bediyo se bandhe hue ....purushvarg ....aur dusre mein ardha nagna awastha mein kanya aur mahilaaye ....

sabke sahrir par jagah jagah choto k nishan the .......kam maatra mein bhojan aur jal ...milne k kaaran ...woh bhaut kamjor ho gaye the ......itni kamjori mein bhi unhe aapne prano ki raksha k liye ...kaam karna padta tha .....aur nahi kar paata tha ....usse sabke saamne .....sab k saane jinda jala diya jaata tha ......

Kanyaye aur mahilaye inn saniko k bhog ka sadhan thi ....unke shari par bhi jagah jagah daanto se bane hue ghav the ....jo ....sambhog k liye mana karti .....sabke saamne uske sharir k tukde kiye jaate the ....

kul milakar yeh jagah unn bandiyo k liye jite jee kissi narak se kam nahi thi .....

woh baune waha faile hue andhre aur apne vhote kad ka sahara lete hue ....bandigrih dund rahe the ....k ...dur se chamti hui mashal k orakash mein unhe aahir bandigrah mil hi gaya .....

kuch gine chune hi sainik waha oahra de rahe the .......unn bano ki sankhya 100 k karib thi ....unhone ne achanak unnsainiko par humla bola ....isase pahele woh sainik kuch samazte ..tab tak unka kaam tamam ho gaya tha ......

Unn bauno ne waha ka taala toda aur ....bandiyo ko mukt kiya .........waha unhe pata chala k aur bhi aise bandigrah hai ....yaha lagbhag 2000 log bandi hai .....

unn bauno k saath ab woh log bhi aage badhe aur ek ek karke sabhi bandigraho se unko mukt kiya .......

Yaha Abhi ka ghamasan Sainiko k saath chal raha tha ....

saare sainiko k ek jagah ekatrit hone se jaise Abhi k uppar mayavi astro ki barsat hone lagi ......Abhi ka ek bhi prahaar uss kaali shkti se bani hui deewar ko bhedkar unn tak nahi pahunch raha tha ........

Abhi ne panchtatva ki urja se ek dhal banayi aur apne upper hone wale vaar ko rokne laga ....aur saath hi saath uss kaali shakti ki deewar ko bhedne ka upay bhi sochne laga ......

tabhi Abhi ne apni or tezi se aarahe mayavi shool par dhal se jordar prahar kiya ...jisase uski disha badli aur woh wapas uss urja ki deewar ko paar karta hua sena ki taraf gir pada ...

Abhi samaz gaya k usse kya karne chahiye .......Abhi ne ek chakravat ka nirman kiya ...jo badi tezi se aarahe Darmen ki sena k astro ko apne bhiter sametne laga ...

ab Abhi ne uss chakravat ki gati viparit kar di .....jiske kaaran woh saare astra ......Kaali urja ki deewar ko bhedkar unn sainiko ka ant karne lage .....

vatavaran un sainiko ki cheeko se gunj utha ....aur ek hi vaar mein 100 k lagbhag sainik maare gaye .....senapati ne apni sena ki yeh dasha dekhkar .....usne apna bhayankar astra jo ek advance atomic laser wepon tha .....jo woh Arin se apne saath laaya tha ...

uski laser bim se Abhi par vaar kiya .....Abhi ne usase bachne k liye apni dhal aage ki parantu woh laser beam uss dhal ko bhedti hui Abhi k seene se takrai .....

uss beam ka prahar serne par hote hi ...Abhi ko phir seene ki jalan aur pida hone lagi ....Abhi ne apne jabde bhinch liye ...Aur apne maarak khanjar ko ......uss senapati ki taraf vaar kiya ...woh khanjar uss senapati ka seena chirkar wapas Abhi k haatho mein aagaya ....

Abhi ne apni pida ko sahte hue ...ek bada sa agni ka gola banaya ......aur unn sainoko par vaar kiya .....

Bahut se sainik ab uss aag mein swaha ho gaye .......

Darmen k sainiko ne ab Arin grah k aadhunik vigyan k dwara nirmit ....lesar gun se Abhi par prahar karne lage Abhi unn lesar ki ultra voilet kirno ko rokne ka prayas karne laga ......parantu woh kirne lagatar Abhi k sharir par padne lagi ......
Abhi ka dard ab apne charam par tha ....

tabhi ....ek aur laser kiran Abhi k seene par padi ......jisase Abhi ki jordar cheekh nikli ....aur saath hi ek laal prakash Abhi k seene se bahar nikala ...aur ek laal mani k roop mein parivartiti hokar ....jamin par girgaya ....woh mano ab khandit ho gaya tha ....

Yeh laal mani wahi suraksha kawach tha jo Nebhru ne diya tha .....

Abhi jamin par pada tha ......Sainik usse mara hua samazkar aage badhne lage ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ...

Agla update kal......
Abhi Arsalan ban kar Darmen ke senapati ko mritue deta hai v bahut saare sainiko ko khatam kar deta hai parntu Arin grah ki aadhunik vighyan se nirmit lejer gun dwara ush per jo humle ho rahe the ushe vah rokne me ashhay mahsush karta hai aur ek lejer beem ushke hridey me takra jaati hai jahan per Nebhru ka rakshakawach laal mani ke rupe me tha jo khandit ho jata hai aur Abhi behosh ho jata hai.
Bahut sunder veer rash se sarober ek aur shrinkhla le ke aaye hai Abhi bhai Yudhbhumi se.
 

Naik

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Nakab posh (NP) - tumhe apne jivan mein jo lakshya prapt karne hai uske liye tumhari shiksha jaruri hai ....haa yadi tum muzhe hara do toh tum kahi bhi jaane k liye mukt ho ......jara main bhi dekhu k aaj tak tumne kya kya sikha hai ......

NP ki chunauti sunkar Babaji ki Abhi ki chinta hone lagi .....

Babaji - muzhe kshama karna parantu yeh Abhi aapni chunauti sweekar karne yogya nahi hai ......

Babaji ki baatein sunkar Abhi k mann mein aaya k woh aisa kyu kah rahe hai .....usne ab tak ki kado mehnat se itni shaktiya haasil ki thi ...jo kissi ko bhi harane k liye paryapt thi ......

Aur astra vidya mein Praversen aur Karma bhi uska saamna nahi kar sakte the ...phir Babaji is NP se itna dar kyu rahe hai ....muzhe ab inhe apni yogyata sidh karni hi hogi .....

Abhi ne uss NP ki chunauti ko sweekar kar liya ......

NP - ( babaji se ) tum chinta mat karo tum jaante ho mein isse haani nahi pahuncha sakta...

ab Abhi aur NP donon aamne Samne the...........

NP - pahle dekhte hain ki tum Shastra Vidya mein kitne Nipun Ho aur ek Talwar Abhi ki taraf Bada Di .......Abhi bhi Talwar pakad kar NP Par war karne ke liye taiyar ho gaya .....

Abhi nay Talwar Ka 1 bharpur war NP ke sar ki taraf Kiya parantu NP bhi Badi Teji se vahan se hat Gaya aur Abhi ke haath per apne haath se Ek Prahar Kiya jisse Abhi ki Talwar chhut kar niche gir gai uski Teji Dekh Kar abhi ashcharyachakit Ho Gaya.....

Np ne phir Abhi ke Taraf Talwar Badhai .......

NP - bacche abhi aur acchi Tarah Se vaar karo ....yodha ko shastra ko apne hi sharir ka hissa samazna chahiye ......Abhi nay ab Talwar ka Ek Sidha war NP ke pet ki taraf Kiya parantu NP bhi bijli ki gati se .... ghoom kar Abhi Ke Piche aagaya aur ek Halka Sa war Abhi ke Peeth par Kiya jisse abhi girte girte bacha..

Abhi lagatar Talwar se war par war kar raha tha aur NP Uske Har War ko block kar raha tha ..
ab tak NP ne Talwar Nahin uthai Thi vah keval apne Hathon se Abhi ka Samna kar raha tha.....

NP - ab main Tumhen bataunga ke kaise Talwar ka upyog Kiya jata hai...... Itna kah kar NP ne Apne Talwar pragat kar di ...vah Ek Adbhut Talwar thi is Talwar ki Chamak aur is Ka Bana Hua Swarn ka Mooth ......Abhi Bus use Talwar ko dekhta Rah Gaya....usne kabhi aisi divya talwar nahi dekhi thi ..

NP Ne Hath Upar Karke apni Jaadui Vidya Ka prayog Karke Aakash mein badi badi Chattane pragat kar de ......Uske bad NP ne apni Talwar koMastak se lagakar pranam liya ....aur Aakash ko taraf dekha .....Aakash se Chattano ki varsha NP par hone lagi ......

NP ne apni Talwar ko Apne Charon Taraf tezi se ghumana Shuru kar diya ....vah Talwar Ek laybadh tarike se ghumte Hue NP K Charon Taraf urja tarango ka nirnan kar rahi thi ... Aakash se Girne wali chatane use Talwar Ko Chhu Kar choor choor ho rahi thi aur Dekhte hi Dekhte Pal Bhar Mein NP ne unn sari chattano ko samapt Kar Diya .....Abhi bus Muk darshak banaa hua NP ki Kala ko dekh raha tha

NP - ab apni shakti ka prayog karo usse bhi dekh Lete Hain Ki Tum Kitna Sikh Chuke Ho

Abhi ne ek ek Karke Apne Panch tatva ki Urja ka war NP par Kiya...... Jisse NP ne aapane ek hi Hath ke Ishare se rok Diya.....Abhi ka ek bhi prahar NP ko chu bhi nahi paaya tha...

aapane Kisi bhi Vaar K prayog ko safal na hote hue dekh kar abhi vyakul Ho gaya...... tabhi usse Babaji Ki Baat Yad aa gai .....ke Satya kabhi parajit Nahin Hota hai ......Abhi ne apni Satya ki Urja ko ekatrit Karke Ek Prahar NP per Kiya Jise NP rok Nahin Paya aur vah Prahar use jakar Laga Jiske Prabhav Se Uske Kadam ladkhada Gaye aur woh thoda picche hat gaya...

NP - wah puttra wah Tum shaktiyon ke sath Buddhi ka bhi prayog karna bakhubi Sikh gaye .

tumne apne shaktiyon k prayog se muzhe bhi picche hata diya ...
tumien jo bhi kamiyan hai Mujhe Vishwas hai ki vah shighra hi dur ho jayegi - ....aur tum apne lakshya ki or badne k yogya ho jaaoge....
toh kya tum apni Shiksha prapt karne ke liye taiyar ho

Abhi Hath Jod kar niche ghutne per baith Gaya......

Abhi - Meri abhi tak ki Drishtata ke liye mein aapka kshama prarthi hu ... aap mere Guru Ke Bhi Guru Ho .......isliye Aap sarvatha Mere liye pujniya ho ..
main aapko apna Guru swikar karta hun

NP - theek hai kal pratha se tumahari shiksha shuru ho jaayegi....tayar rahna

Abhi NP aur babaji ko pranam karke Mukhiya se milne chal pada ......

Abhi ne Apne Mantri Kirtisen Se Milkar Mukhiya Ji Ke Gaon ka punarnirman karne ki Yojana Banai gaon ke Ghas Phoos ke Makan ki jagah Apne Nagar Jaise Pakke Makan banane ke liye usne Kuchh acche Karigaron ko Chuna ......Mukhiya ji aur Kirti Singh se vichar vimarsh Karke gaon ke punarnirman ki yojna ko purna Roop Diya

Mukhiya ji Kirti Singh aur Karigaron aur nagar k kuch shramiko ko Sath Lekar gaon ke Nirman ke liye Nikal Pade

Abhi vahan se sona ko dhundhta hua uski Maa ke pass pahuncha ....Sona ki maa Apne Gaon Ke Kuchh mahilaon ke sath Baithi baten kar rahi thi unki Aankhon Mein dukh aur udasi saaf Jhalak rahi thi abhi ko dekh kar vah Sab chup ho gai..


Sona ki maa - aao beta kaise ho ....
Abhi - mein toh thik hu maa ji parantu aap sab thik nahi lag rahi ho kya baat hai ....

Sona ki maa ( Vaishali ) - Nahin beta Ham Sab yahan sakushal hai .......bas hriday k kuch ghav hai jo hume chain se rahne nahi de rahe hai ..Hum Aaj Bhi use din Ko Nahin Bula Pa rahe hain jab humne apna sab kuch kho diya tha ...Hummein se Sab ne apne Kisi Ne Kisi Ko Khoya Hai pata nahin Unka kya hua hoga ....wah sab sakushal se toh Honge ya nahin bus kahi unn dushton ne unko.....

iskr aage Vaishali kuch bol nahi paayi aur fut futkar rone lagi ....

Abhi - Dhayrya rakhe maaji ishwar itna nisthur nahi ho sakta ...mera mann kah rha hai woh sab sakushal se honge ....... main Apna pura Prayatna karunga unn Sab Ko dhundhne ki aap ishwar par Vishwas rakhen......

Vaishali - Beta parmatma tumahari baat satya karein ......

Abhi - maa ji Sona kaha hai woh dikh nahi rahi hai ...sakushal se toh jai na .......

Vaishali - haa beta woh thik hai ...bas abhi kuch der pahele jal laane k liye gayi hai ......

Abhi - thik hai maaji mein chalta hu ...

Abhi waha se nadi k raaste nikal gaya ......Abhi k nagar k paas hi ek nadi bahti thi jiske swach jal se waha ki jal ki aapurti hoti thi ......Sona ko dekhne ki iccha se Abhi k kadam apne aap hi nafi k raaste ki or chal pade .....

Abhi ne jab waha par dekha toh Sona nadi k kinare ek patter par baithi hui nadi k bahte hue ko dekhkar kinhi vicharo mein khoyi hui thi ....uske aankhon se ashrudhara bah rahi thi .......

Sona ki aankhon mein aansoo dekhkar na jaane kyu Abhi ka hriday bhi dukhi ho raha tha ...woh usse iss tarah dukhi nahi dekh sakta tha .....

Abhi aage bada aur apna ek haath uske kandhe par rakha ...apne kandhe par kisi ka haath mehsus karke Sona apne vicharo se bahar aayi aur usne piche mudkar dekha ......

Abhi ko apne itne paas dekhkar Sona hadbadakar khadi hogayi ...issi hadbadahat mein woh picvhe girne hi wali thi ...k Abhi ne usse tham liya ...Abhi ka ek haath sona ki kamar par tha aur ek hath mein sona ka haath tha .....

dono ki nazre mili ....dono ektak ek dusre ki aankhon mein dekhne lage .....maano dono ko janm janmanter se ek dusre ka intejar tha ......

Abhi - tum thik toh ho na ...tumhe koi chot toh nahi aayi ......

Abhi ki aawaj sunkar sona ko hosh aaya ...woh turant Abhi ka haath chudakar alag hikar khadi hogayi .......

Sharam k kaaran uski aankhien niche thi ......

yeh bhavnaaye bhi badi ajeeb hoti hai ....ek pal mein jin netro mein aansoo the ab unmein apne priyatam k saamne hone se sharam thi ......

Sona - aap ....yaha .....mmmmm....meinnnn....haa.....
uske shabd uska saath nahi de rahe the ...uska hriday Abhi ko apne itne paas paakar jor jorse dhadak raha tha .......

Abhi sona k paas jaakar - kya baat hai Sona tum yaha akele mein baithkar kya soch rahi ho .....

Sona - kkkuch bhi toh nahi ....woh ..toh mein bas aise hi .....

Abhi ne uski thudfi pakad kar uska chehra uthaya .....toh phir yeh aansoo tumahare netro mein kaise ....Abhi apne haaton se uske aasoo pochne lagta hai .....

Abhi k pyar aur apnepan se Sona pighal jaati hai ...aur Abhi k gale lagkar rone lagti hai ....uske hriday mein chippa hua dukh ashruo k jariye bahar aaraha tha ...Abhi bhi uski pith par halki si thapkiya dekar usse saantvana dene lagta hai.....

thodi der dono aise hi ek dusre ki baahon mein rahte hai ......dono mein mann mein koi buri bhavnaye nahi thi ......

Jaha Sona ko apne dukh mein kisi ka sahara mila tha jisase woh apna dukh baant sake ....wahi Abhi bas usse ek sacche mitra ki tarah santvana de raha tha .....

thodi der baad sona alag hui .....usse aur sharam aane lagi k anjaane mein wih Abhi k kitne karib chali gayi thi .....

Abhi - ab batao asona aise kya soch rahi thi k tumari inn aankhon mein aansoo aagaye the .....

Sona - woh muzhe Pitashri aur bhai ki bahut yaad aarahi thi ...pata nahi woh kaise honge ....maa k aage toh apna dukh vyakt nahi kar sakti issiliye mein yaha aagayi .....

Abhi - Sona mera hriday kahta hai k woh sakushal honge ...mein unhe shigra ho dhudkar tumahare saamne ke aaunga .....

Sona - woh log bahut krur aur shaktishali hai ....mein apne pitashri aur bhai ko kho hi chuki hu parantu ab aapko nahi khna chahti ....

Abhi - Sona k paas jaakar uski asnkhon mein dekhte hue .....accha ji ..itna prem karti ho muzhse ...
Sona - prem maine kab bola k mein prem parti hu ...main toh bas ......

Abhi - kyu apne prem ko chupa rahi ho Sona ...mein jaanta hu k tum bhi muzhse prem karti ho .....

Sona - Tum bhi ka kya arth hai ...kya aap muzhse prem karte ho ..

Abhi - Iss baat ka uttar mein ussi din dunga jis din mein tumahare pitashri aur bhai ko dhund kar laaunga ......abhi chalo bahut der hogayi hai tumahari maa chinta kar rahi hogi .....

Sona bhi ghade mein jal bhar leti hai aur Abhi k picche picche chal padti hai ....

Sona - ( mann mein ) ek taraf toh apna prem pragat bhi karte ho aur dusre tarf kahte ho k baad mein bataunga ...buddu ho bilkul ...aur uske chehre par halki si muskan aajaati hai .....

itne dukh mein bhi Abhi k prem ne Sona k chehre par muskurahat laa di .....tabhi toh kahte hai k prem mein itni shakti hai k registhan mein bhi phool khila de ....

woh din bhi bit gaya aur aaya naya savera jab Abhi ka prashikshan NP dwara shuru hona tha ....Abhi apne pratha k nitya karm karke ...Gurukul ki or chal pada ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ....

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ek toh seene ka dard aur yeh vaar ....Abhi badi mushkil se sambhalkar khada hua ....k tabhi Nebhru ki di hui anguthi phir chamak uthi aur Abhi ka sar ki saari pida pal bhar mein samapt ho gayi ....Abhi phir nayi sfurti k saath ....unn adrishya shaktiyo ka saamna karne k liye tayyar ho gaya .....

ek baar phir hawa ka ek zhaunka Abhi ki taraf badha ....jisse usne mehsus kar liya .....isske pahle k woh mayavi adrisya asur Abhi par vaar karta ...Abhi ..ne uski hriday ki gati aur swas ko mehsus karke apni talwar ka satik war kiya .....jo uss asur k hriday k paar ho gaya .....ek dardnaak cheekh k saath woh asur dharashayi ho gaya....mrityu k saath uska adrisya roop bhi chala gaya ....

Abhi ne ek nazar usspar dali ....aur apni indriyo ko poori tarah jaagrit karke aage badhne laga ....har choti se aawaj par dhyan deta hua poori satarkta se woh aage badh raha tha ....k tabhi ek khadag ...tezi se uski gardan ki taraf badha ....jisse usne mehsus kiya aur niche zhuk gaya .....jaise hi woh uss vaar se bacha ....tabhi alag alag disha se do shool uski taraf badhe ......Abhi ne tezi se talwar ghumayi ....aur ek shool ...ko kaat diya parantu ...dusra shool.....uske ..baaju par halka sa jakham dete hue nikal gaya ......

Abhi ab tak samaz chuka tha jab tak yeh asur pragat nahi hote ...tab tak unka saamna karna kathin hai ....ab tak k sangharsh poorna safar mein aadhe se jayad din bit gaya tha ......

Abhi ne ab jal tatva ka prayog karke apne charo tarf jal barsaaya .....gile hone k kaaran Abhi ko ab unn asuro ki aakritiya nazar aane lagi ...thi ...usse apni taraf badi tezi se aati hui do aakritiya nazar aai .....toh usne bhi apni ...talwar sambhali aur badi tezi se ghumata hua aage badne laga ...do aur asur Abhi ki talwar k bhent chad gaye..

ab aur asur baaki the unhone Abhi ko charo taraf se gher liya aur ek nischit duri banakar apna shtan badal badlkar ......uspar vaar karne lage .......jisase Abhi ko unki sahi disha ka bhan nahi ho raha tha ......Abhi ne ab ....dhul bhari aandhi chalana shuru kiya ....jisase un adrshya asuro par mitti ek ki ek parat si chad gayi ......aur woh pragat hogaye ......

jab tak woh asur apne upar ki mitti hatate ....tab tak Abhi ne budhe baba dwar doya hua maarak khanjar ....pragat kiya .....woh khanjar bijli ki bhanti chamak raha tha .....Abhi ne unn charo asuro sthiti ka dhyan karta hue uss khajar ko choda ....aur woh khanjar .....bijli ki si gati se unn charo k hriday ko bhedta hua ...wapas Abhi k haath mein aagaya ....unn charo ko cherkhne ka bhi awsar nahi mila ....khanjer k lagte hi ....woh pal bhar mein raakh mein badal ..gaye ......

Abhi ne aaj pahli baar uss khanjar ki maarak urja ka prabhav dekha tha .....Nebhru dwara usse iss khanjer ki kshamta k baare mein pata toh chal gaya tha ...paratu aaj dekha pahli baar tha ....

unn adrishya asuro ki baadha paar karke woh aage bada ......Abhi jungle paar kar chuka tha ......bas kuch chotii zhadiya bachi hui thi .....uske baad ek khula maidan ...aur amidan k ant mein khadan ....

Abhi ne zhadiyo mein chupkar dekha ......k maidan k atim chor jaha se khadan shuru hoti hai ....waha ......Sainiko ki ek tukdi ...tainat thi jo poori satarkta se pahra de rahi thi ......

Shundak se usse pata chala tha k lagbhag 1000 ki saknhya mein Darmen k sainik uss khadan mein tainat hai .......wahi ek aur unki sainik chavni bani hui thi ....jismein shayad uss sena ..k kissi adhikari k rahne ki vyastha thi .....

Suryasta hone hi wala tha ....Abhi zhadiyo k picche se waha tainat sainiko ka nirikshan karne laga .....

Yaha woh baune logo ne khadan tak jaane wale ...gupt marg ko dhund liya tha ....jo ek surang k roop mein tha ....kai varsho se uska prayog na hone k kaaran .....woh aage se band ho gaya tha ...

unn bauno ne uss tezi se waha ki khudayi ka kaam shuru kar diya ......

Yaha Abhi andhera hone ki pratiksha kar raha tha ......

surya paschim disha mein asth hone laga .....Aur poorna chandrama ka uday hua ....aaksh ek dum saaf tha ......Ab chandrama ka dudhiya prakaash charo or phail gaya tha ......

Khadan mei tainat sainiko ko kissi shatru k humle ki lesh maatra bhi aashanka nahi thi .....issiliye sab nischint the ......

Ab samay aagaya tha Abhi ka Arsalan k roop mein waha pravesh karne ka ......Arsalan k roop mein pravesh karne ki Nebhtu ne jo yojna banayi thi ussi k anusar Abhi ne Nebhru ki anghuthi ko aakash ki or uchala ....poorna chandrama k prakaash k saath sanyog hote hi ...uss anguthi mein chupi hui maaya pragat ho gayi ......

achanak aakash mein bhayankar bijliya kadakne lagi .....Aakash mein bhayankar kaale megh garjana karne lage ....achanak hue masum k badlv k kaaran ..jo sainik shivir mein baithe the woh sabhi bahar aaye .....

Aakash mein bhayankar kaale megh aur chamakti hui bijliya ....aur unki hriday ko kampit karne wali aawaje .....waha tainat sainiko k mann mein bhay utpanna kar rahe the ....tabhi unhone dekha ....k aakash se ek jagah bhayankar visfot k saath bijli giri aur waha ek prakash dwar pragat ho gaya .....unhone dekha k koi uss prakash dwar se bahar nikal raha ..hai ....jiske haath mein bijli ko si chamakti hui talwar hai ......

Visfot ki aawaj se sab sainiko ka dhyan uss disha mein gaya .....khadan k bhiter jo sainik the woh bhi uss visfot ki aawaj se aakarsht hokar uss taraf jaane lage ....

unmein se kuch sainik aur waha ki sena ka senapati ....Arsalan ko pehchante the ....

achanak itne varsho k baad Arsalan ko apne saamne dekhkar ..woh Chaunk gaye ....Senapati k muh se nikal hi gaya .....Arsalan .....Jeevit hai .....

Abhi - kyu aascharya hua muzhe jeevit dekhkar ....tumahre maalik Darmen k paas woh shakti nahi hai k jo Arsalan ko haani pahuncha sake .......tum logo ne mera saath chodkar ...mere saath vishwasghat kiya .......iska dand tum sab ko bhugatna hoga ....

ek baar toh woh senapati achanak apne saamne Arsalan ko dekhkar dar gaya tha ....parantu Darmen k 1000 mayavi astro se susajjit sainiko aur gupt roop se chupe hue daityo ka dhyan aate hi uska hosla badh gaya ......

Senapati - Maharaja Arsalan toh aap jeevit ho ....accha laga aapko dekhkar ....ab mein aapko bandi banakar .....Samrat Darmen ko upahar k roop mein bhent karunga .....
( sainiko ki taraf ishara karte hue .) aakramannn

Senapati ka aadesh milte hi sena ko woh tukdi Abhi ki or bade tezi se badi .....Abhi ne apni talwar lahrayi ....aur agni ki urja se ek bade se aag k gole ka nirman kiya aur uss sena par prahar kiya .....

jaha woh aag ka gola gira .....kai sainik uss aag ki chaoet mein aagye aur swaha ho gaye ......Abhi ne lagatar aag k gole barsaye .....aag se bachne k liye ..sena mein bhagdad mach gayi thi....

Apni sena ko aise titar biter hote hue dekhkar Senapati ne Sena ki suraksha ...k liye kaali shaktiyo ki ek diwar si bana di Abhi k agni golo k vaar uss adrishya kaali urja se bani hui deewar se takrakr bikharne lage .....

.Abhi ne ek k baad ek ..jal..vaayu ...aur prithvi tava ka prayog kiya ...parantu koi bhi vaar unn sainiko tak nahi pahunch raha tha ....tab woh sainik bhi ab tak sambhal chuke the ....

yaha ka shor sunkar khadan k baaki sainik bhi ussi disha mein apne shastra sambhalkar jaa rahe the ......

Yaha unn bauno ne bhi surang ka raasta poori tarah khol diya tha ......aur Vifot ka sanket milte hi ..woh uss khadan mein gupt rup se pravesh kar gaye ....Saare sanik ...khadan se bahar jaa chuke the ....kewal kuch hi gulamo k kaidkhane ki paheredari kar rahe the ...

yaha do bandigrih the ek mein bediyo se bandhe hue ....purushvarg ....aur dusre mein ardha nagna awastha mein kanya aur mahilaaye ....

sabke sahrir par jagah jagah choto k nishan the .......kam maatra mein bhojan aur jal ...milne k kaaran ...woh bhaut kamjor ho gaye the ......itni kamjori mein bhi unhe aapne prano ki raksha k liye ...kaam karna padta tha .....aur nahi kar paata tha ....usse sabke saamne .....sab k saane jinda jala diya jaata tha ......

Kanyaye aur mahilaye inn saniko k bhog ka sadhan thi ....unke shari par bhi jagah jagah daanto se bane hue ghav the ....jo ....sambhog k liye mana karti .....sabke saamne uske sharir k tukde kiye jaate the ....

kul milakar yeh jagah unn bandiyo k liye jite jee kissi narak se kam nahi thi .....

woh baune waha faile hue andhre aur apne vhote kad ka sahara lete hue ....bandigrih dund rahe the ....k ...dur se chamti hui mashal k orakash mein unhe aahir bandigrah mil hi gaya .....

kuch gine chune hi sainik waha oahra de rahe the .......unn bano ki sankhya 100 k karib thi ....unhone ne achanak unnsainiko par humla bola ....isase pahele woh sainik kuch samazte ..tab tak unka kaam tamam ho gaya tha ......

Unn bauno ne waha ka taala toda aur ....bandiyo ko mukt kiya .........waha unhe pata chala k aur bhi aise bandigrah hai ....yaha lagbhag 2000 log bandi hai .....

unn bauno k saath ab woh log bhi aage badhe aur ek ek karke sabhi bandigraho se unko mukt kiya .......

Yaha Abhi ka ghamasan Sainiko k saath chal raha tha ....

saare sainiko k ek jagah ekatrit hone se jaise Abhi k uppar mayavi astro ki barsat hone lagi ......Abhi ka ek bhi prahaar uss kaali shkti se bani hui deewar ko bhedkar unn tak nahi pahunch raha tha ........

Abhi ne panchtatva ki urja se ek dhal banayi aur apne upper hone wale vaar ko rokne laga ....aur saath hi saath uss kaali shakti ki deewar ko bhedne ka upay bhi sochne laga ......

tabhi Abhi ne apni or tezi se aarahe mayavi shool par dhal se jordar prahar kiya ...jisase uski disha badli aur woh wapas uss urja ki deewar ko paar karta hua sena ki taraf gir pada ...

Abhi samaz gaya k usse kya karne chahiye .......Abhi ne ek chakravat ka nirman kiya ...jo badi tezi se aarahe Darmen ki sena k astro ko apne bhiter sametne laga ...

ab Abhi ne uss chakravat ki gati viparit kar di .....jiske kaaran woh saare astra ......Kaali urja ki deewar ko bhedkar unn sainiko ka ant karne lage .....

vatavaran un sainiko ki cheeko se gunj utha ....aur ek hi vaar mein 100 k lagbhag sainik maare gaye .....senapati ne apni sena ki yeh dasha dekhkar .....usne apna bhayankar astra jo ek advance atomic laser wepon tha .....jo woh Arin se apne saath laaya tha ...

uski laser bim se Abhi par vaar kiya .....Abhi ne usase bachne k liye apni dhal aage ki parantu woh laser beam uss dhal ko bhedti hui Abhi k seene se takrai .....

uss beam ka prahar serne par hote hi ...Abhi ko phir seene ki jalan aur pida hone lagi ....Abhi ne apne jabde bhinch liye ...Aur apne maarak khanjar ko ......uss senapati ki taraf vaar kiya ...woh khanjar uss senapati ka seena chirkar wapas Abhi k haatho mein aagaya ....

Abhi ne apni pida ko sahte hue ...ek bada sa agni ka gola banaya ......aur unn sainoko par vaar kiya .....

Bahut se sainik ab uss aag mein swaha ho gaye .......

Darmen k sainiko ne ab Arin grah k aadhunik vigyan k dwara nirmit ....lesar gun se Abhi par prahar karne lage Abhi unn lesar ki ultra voilet kirno ko rokne ka prayas karne laga ......parantu woh kirne lagatar Abhi k sharir par padne lagi ......
Abhi ka dard ab apne charam par tha ....

tabhi ....ek aur laser kiran Abhi k seene par padi ......jisase Abhi ki jordar cheekh nikli ....aur saath hi ek laal prakash Abhi k seene se bahar nikala ...aur ek laal mani k roop mein parivartiti hokar ....jamin par girgaya ....woh mano ab khandit ho gaya tha ....

Yeh laal mani wahi suraksha kawach tha jo Nebhru ne diya tha .....

Abhi jamin par pada tha ......Sainik usse mara hua samazkar aage badhne lage ....

Abhi k liye itna hi ...

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Abhi apne prathah k nitya karm karke ...Gurukul ki or chal pada ....

Gurukul Mein pahunch kar Abhi sabse pahle Babaji Ki Kutiya Mein Gaya aur Baba Ji ko pranam Kiya

Babaji - toh beta Tum taiyar Ho apni Shiksha ke agale Charan ke liye

Abhi - Ji Gurudev ...parantu Mujhe aapse Kuchh Aur bhi baat karni hai ..... Abhi Ne Baba Ji ko Mukhiya Ji Ke Gaon Mein Ghati Hui ghatnaon ke bare mein bataya.........

Gurudev Maine unhe Vachan Diya Hai k unke Logon Ka Pata lagaunga...... parantu Mujhe yeh samajh Nahin aaraha Hai Ki Main Apni Khoj kahan se shuru karo...... Kya Main Apne Diye Hue Vachan ki Laaj Rakh bhi paunga ya nahi ...yeh bhi vichar mere mann ko Bar Bar udvigna kar raha hai

Babaji - Putra tumhe abhi apne Prashikshan per pura Dhyan dena hai .......inn Sab Baton Ko Tum Samay per Chhod Do....... iss Samay Sansar Mein Kai aisi Rahasyamayi ghatnae ghat rahi hai ke unhein rok pana abhi Tumhare Bus Mein Nahin Hai...... uske liye apne aap ko aur Sabal aur Shuddridh Banana hoga

Abhi - parantu Gurudev itne Samay Mein yadi unn Logon Ko kuch bhi hua toh main Gaon Walon Ko kis Prakar Apna mukh dikhaunga

Babaji - Tum vyarth Ki Chinta Mein apna Apna Samay mat Gawa o putra....aapne Prashikshan par purn Dhyan kendrit karo .......aur haa Mujhe Pata Hai k Un Logon Ko Kuchh Nahin hoga......

Baba Ji Ne yeh Baat itne Vishwas ke sath Kahi thi ke abhi Ko aabhas Ho Gaya Baba ji is bare mein Jarur Kuchh Na Kuchh Jante Hain .......parantu vah abhi Ko Kisi Vivashta k kaarn spasht roop se nahin Bata Pa rahe hain....... aur Abhi ne bhi iss samay unhe puchna uchit Nahin Samjha

Abhi Kuchh aur Kahta Ke Baba Ne usse chup hone ka Ishara Kiya aur apni aankhon k ishare se Piche dekhne ko kaha ....Abhi ne Jab Piche Mud Ke Dekha To vahan NP ko Khada Paya

use Aascharya hua ...Kyu ki Jab usne uss kaksh Mein Pravesh kiya tha tab to waha babaji k siwa aur koi nahin tha aur na hi Abhi ne NP ko usse bhitar aate hue dekha.....

NP - Toh Chale Tumhari Aaj Ki Prashikshan... prarambh Karen

NP ki Baat sunkar Abhi aur Babaji donon khade ho gaye aur phele NP ko pranam Kiya aur phir teenon kaksh se bahar Aashram ki Vaatika mein aa gaye

NP - toh sabse pahle Hum Tumhari dhyan yog ki shaktiyo ka prashikshan aarambh karte hai....

Tumne abhi tak Manduk ( yeh Manduk babaji ka asli naam hai ) se Sharir ke Panch kosh dwara panchatattva ki shaktiyon Ka prayog Karna Sikha ......parantu inki urja ka prayog kar ne tumhare sharir k kosho ki urja ka vyay ho jaata hai .... aur issi kaaran iske prayog se tum kamjor pad jaate ho ....

.ab Tumhen Urja ke strot..... Sharir Mein sthit Chakro Ka Dhyan karna hoga...... ismein sabse pahle merudand ke sabse Niche Muladhar Chakra hai ...

...Jo Prithvi tatva ki Urja ka srot hai Tumhen usse jagrit karna hoga............

Itna Keh kar NP ne abhi ko Muladhar Chakra ka Bij Mantra Diya aur Dhyan ki vidhi batai aur ati shighra Abhi ki shaktiyan jagrit karne hetu Apna Hath Abhi ke Sar per rakhkar shaktipat Diksha Di ....

Muladhar Chakra Char pankhudiyon wale Kamal Dal Ke Saman Hota Hai Jahan iski sakaratmak Urja furti ....Utsaha..... aur sharirik Bal.... ko badata hai Vahi iski nakaratmak Urja hinsa aur Kamvasna ko Bal pradan karti hai

Muladhar Chakra Hamare antahkaran se sambandhit hai Jahan Se Hamare mann ..
Buddhi ....chitt....aur Ahankar sanchalit Hote Hain .....iski mukhya Urja Hai prithvi tatva k Saat dhaatuo ki Shakti.....

Abhi muladhar Chakra ke Dhyan Mein gahan Utar Gaya......aur Dheere Dheere Uske Samne Chakra ka swarup pragat Ho Gaya ......muladhar Chakra ke dikhte he Abhi k Sharir Se ....
Sapt dhaatu k Saat Rang ki Urja pragat Hone Lagi ......Dhyan Karte Karte use Kareeb 8 ghante ho gaye the

NP dwara Diye Gaye Gyan aur shaktipat Diksha Ke Karan Abhi ne Ek Hi Din Mein Muladhar Chakra ko jagrit kar diya tha.... ab usmein Prithvi tatva ke sab dhaatu ki Urja kriyanvit Ho Gai thi

Prithvi tatva ki Urja ke prayog ke sath sath ......ab woh Kisi bhi prithvi k kissi bhi Jagah ko Sparsh Karke waha ghatni hui apni icchit ghatnao ko ghatnao ko pratyaksh Roop se dekh sakta tha

Abhi Ka Dhyan Jab pura Hua to usne apni Aankhen kholie....NP tab tak Ja chuka tha vah Kareeb 8 ghante Dhyan Mein Baitha tha itne der tak Pehli Baar usne Dhyan kiya tha .....dhyan karte hue usse samay Ka Pata bhi nahin chala...

Abhi vahan se Babaji ki aagya Lekar Apne Ghar a Gaya ......Karma ...Mukhiya ji k gaon ka punarnirman k karya ka nirikshan karne gaye hue the .....jo Neeru dwara usse pata chala ...

Maa k haathon se bhojan karke usne kuch Samay usne apni maa Neeru ke sath bitaya ......Neeru Ki Godi Mein Sir Rakh kar letate hi Abhi ki sari Chinta hai ....saari thakan Chali jaati thi ki .....maa ki goad mein Abhi ki kab aankh kab Lag Gai usse pata hi nahin chala

Jab uski Aankhein Khuli to suryast Hone Ko tha ......Abhi Kisi kam se raat ko der se aane ka Kahkar waha se ...Sonu ki Shivir ki taraf chal Pada

Shivir pahunchkar Abhi Sonu ko dhundte hue .....chikitsalaya ...pahuncha .....waha .
.. Abhi ne Dekha k Sonu .....vaidya Kirti sen ke sath Milkar rogiyon ke upchar mein Lagi hui hai...... Abhi Sonu ki is niswarth Seva Bhav Ko Dekhkar bahut khush hua.......

Abhi waha khada bas Sonu ko niharne laga ....tabhi Kirtisen ki drishti Abhi par padi ......

Kirtisen - aao beta Abhi .....aaj bade din baad chikitsalay aaye ho .....

Abhi - kshma karna vaidji main Kuchh kam Mein Aisa vyast ho gaya tha ki mujhe Yahan aane ka Samay hi prapt nahin hua

Kirtisen - koi baat nahin Putra ....Tumhari Kami Yahan Sonu Puri kar di hai .....badi pyari bacchi hai ....poori tanmayta se sewa karti hai ....yah bhi aushadhiya aur dabav ke bare mein bahut Kuchh Janti Hai .....Iske banae hue lep se ine Logon ke ghav bahut jaldi thik ho rahe hain

Abhi - ( Sonu ki taraf dekh kar) Achcha ji Hamen to pata hi nahin tha ke aapmein yah bhi kala hai .......( phir vaid ji ki taraf Dekhte hue ) kakashri ab inn Sab Ka Swasthya kaisa hai

Kirtisen - pahle se bahut behtar hai ...kuch log toh poori tarah thik ho gaye hai ......kewal kuch jalne k nishan rah gaye hai ....aur jo abhi baaki hai woh bhi kuch dino mein swastha ho jaayenge ....

thodi der Abhi ne rogiyo k swastha k baate unka haal chaal pucha ....phir Sonu ko ishara karte hue waha se bahar nikal gaya ......Abhi Chikitsalaya k saamne bani hui choti si vatika mein Sonu ki pratiksha karne laga ......thodi hi der mein Sonu aagayi .....

Abhi usse aate hue dekhta hai ...Sonu ki dhimi dhimi chal balkhati kamar ...halki hawa k jhonko se uske baal ....aur uska anupam saundarya ......Abhi jaise mantra mugdha ho gaya tha .....usse toh hosh hi nahi tha k Sonu kab uske paas aagayi thi vah to taktaki lagaen Usi Raste ko dekh raha tha Jahan se usne Sonu ko aate hue dekha

Abhi ko aise khoya hua dekhkar Sonu Ne Abhi ki Samne jor se Tali Bajaye ..,.....jisse Abhi Ka dhyan tuta ..........tab use Pata Chala Jahan vah dekh raha tha ..... Sonu vahan se kab ki Uske pass a Gai thi

Sonu - Mujhe yaha bulakar Na Jaane aap kahan kho Gaye Lagta Hai Kisi Ke Khayalon Mein Kho Gaye the

Abhi ab kya batata Ki vah Kisi Aur Ke Nahin Usi ke Khayalon Mein Khoya hua tha

vah to main bus aise hi Kuchh Soch Raha Tha vaise Tumne bataya nahin tha ki tum davaiyon ke bare mein itna Kuchh janti ho Achcha Laga Tumhen Logon Ki Seva karte hue dekh kar

Sonu - kya aapane mujhe aapne Yahi sab baten batane ke liye Bulaya Hai

Abhi - Nahin main batane aaya tha .......Mein aaj se Tumhare Pita bhai aur Baki Logon Ka Pata karne ka karya Shuru kar raha hun ........isliye Socha jaane se pahle Tumse vahan ki Kuchh Jankari Le Lun

Sonu Ne Jab suna ke abhi Uske Pita ko dhundhne ke liye ja raha hai uski Man Ki Asha balwati ho gai ke bahut jald vah Apne Pita aur bhai se milegi ....... Apne Pita aur bhai ka Smaran hote hi Sonu Ki Aankhon Mein Aansu a gaye

Abhi Ne aage Badhkar Sonu ke Ashu Ponche

Abhi - Sonu inn Aankhon Mein Mujhe Ashru bilkul bhi acche Nahin lagte ....jaanta hu tumahare hriday ki dasha ....bas thoda aur dhairya rakho .....Mera Hriday Kah Raha Hai shighra hi Tumhare Pita aur bhai Tumhare Samne Honge .......Achcha Ab Mujhe ati shigra Jana Hoga....apna dhyan rakhna ......

Itna kah kar Abhi mudkar Jaane lagta hai Tu Sonu uska Hath pakad Leti Hai Sonu Ke Is Tarah Hath pakdane se Sonu ki aur Mud jata hai Abhi ke mudte hi Sonu Abhi ke Gale Lag Jati Hai

Sonu k iss tarah se gale lagne k kaaran Abhi k hriday ki dhadkan tez hojaati hai ...Sonu aur Abhi dono ek dusre ko kaskar bahon mein bhar lete hai ....dono ek dusre k hriday mein ataha prem ki gahraiyo ka anubhav karte ....

thodi der aise hi ek dusre ki baahon mein rahne k baad Sonu ekdum se Abhi se alag hoti hai .....aur Sharmakar chali jaati hai ...

Abhi bas usse jaate hue dekhta rah jaata hai ......
Suryaastha ho chuka tha Abhi nikal padta hai Sonu k gaon ko taraf ....

Abhi ne ab tak Sonu k gaon jaane ka ek chota marg dhund liya tha jo ek ghane jungle se hokar gujarta tha ......

Andhere mein ghane jingle k bich usse kuch dikhayi nahi de raha the toh usne agni pragat karke thoda se ujala kiya ....aur paas me padi ek sukhi si lakdi ki mashal banakar aage nikal gaya ......

raat k andhere mein kai jeev jantuo ki aawaje uss jungle ko aur bhayawah bana rahi thi ......abhi woh kuch dur hi aage bada tha ...k usse andhere mein chamkti hui do aankhien nazar aayi .....aur dekhte hi dekhte woh do aankhien zhadiyo k picche se saamne aagayi ......toh waha ek Vishalkaye sher Abhi ko dikhayi diya ....Abhi kuch sochta usse pahele hi usne Abhi par chalang lagai ......parantu utni hi furti se Abhi apne jagah se hat gaya .....Uss sher ne Abhi ko mudkar dekha aur gurraya .....Abhi woh chalang lagata ......k Abhi ko yaad aaya k jaanwar aag se darte hai ...toh ysne mashal wala haath aage karke Sher ko rokne ka prayas kiya .....

lekin woh sher agni se jara bhi vichlit nahi hua ...aur usne Abhi par chalang laga di ....Abhi ko pahele hi der ho rahi thi woh abhi aur der nahi karna chahta tha ......toh ussne apni urja dwara ek paash ka nirman kiya aur sher ki taraf phenka ...lekin Abhi k aascharaya ki koi seeema nahi rahi .....woh paash sher ko chute hi samapt ho gaya .......

Abhi samaz gaya k yeh koi sadharan sher nahi hai kuch aur hai jo uska maarg rok raha hai.....

Abhi - mein jaan chuka hu k tum koi sher nahi ho ....dekho tum jo koi bhi ho muzhe jaane do anyatha thik nahi hoga .......

Abhi ki baat sunkar Sher ne bhayankar garjana ki ...aur Abhi par chalang laga di ......

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Abhi ki baat sunkar Sher ne bhayankar garjana ki ...aur Abhi par chalang laga di ......
Chalang Itni tivra thi ki Abhi Ko sambhalne Ka mauka hi nahin mila jis kaaran Abhi niche Gir Pada .......ab sthiti yah thi k Abhi Niche aur Sher uske upar.... Sher ne Apna bhayankar jabda khola ....Mano woh Abhi ke Sir ko ek hi grass mein chaba jaega

Abhi ne bhi Apne ghutne ka jordar prahar usske pet per Kiya jis Karan vah Sher dur jaakar gira Abhi ke jabardust prahar Ke Karan sher jamin par leta hua lambi lambi saanse lene laga ....

Abhi Sher Ko vahin Chhod Kar Aage Raste per Nikal Gaya...... parantu Shayad wo Sher Abhi ko Aage Nahin Jaane dena Chahta tha isliye vah apni Puri sakti Jutha kar phir Khada hua aur ek chalang lagakar Abhi ka raasta rokkar dahadne laga...

Abhi Kisi Pashu ke Prati hinsa nahin karna chahta tha .......parantu abhi usse Apne Lakshya Tak pahunchne mein vilamb ho raha tha .....ab Abhi Ne use sher per chalang Lagayi aur usse jamin par gira diya ....uss sher ne Abhi ko apne pajo se rokna chaha toh Abhi ne uske donon tange pakad kar Puri takat ke sath Ghumakar Jameen per De mara....... jis Karan woh Sher Vahi murchit Ho Gaya

Abhi use Sher ko Hi Chhod Kar Apne Marg per Aage Nikal Gaya ......Raat Ka Ghana Andhera aur Jungle se Aati Hui bhayankar Awaze .... Mano Abhi ko Aage jaane ke liye rok rahi thi .....Abhi nay phir se Ek Masal banayi aur Badi Teji se Aage badhane Laga...... uss Ki manjil bahut nikat thi Jungle Apne antim Chor per tha .....Abhi ko dur Kuchh masale jalti hue Najar aane lagi .....

Abhi Jaan gaya k wah gaon pahunch gaya hai ..... Jungle Ki Kuchh Aakhiri Jadiya hi bachi hui thi

Abhi Ka Dhyan gaon ki taraf tha.... isiliye Raste Mein Aage Aane Wale Pathar per uska Dhyan Nahin Gaya aur Thokar lagne ke kaaran woh wahi zhadiyon mein Gir Pada ......Jaise hi Abhi ka hath ne vahan ki Jameen per Sparsh Kiya toh Abhi Ko Kisi bacche ki Rone ki awaaz spasht Sunai dene Lagi ......

Abhi ne apne Charon Taraf Dekha ......parantu se vahan usse Koi baccha Najar Nahin Aaya ....Jaise hi Abhi ne waha se hath uthaya to vah Awaaz Aane bhi band ho gai .......yah kis Prakar ki Maya Hai ....Abhi ko samajh Nahin aaraha tha usne Ek Bar phir Apna hath uss Jagah per Rakha to usse phir Kissi bacche ki Rone ki awaaz aane Iagi is bar abhi ko Uss Jagah per Ek Divya baccha Jameen per Pada Rota hua Dikhai Diya ....

Abhi ashcharyachakit hokar uss maasum bacche ko dekhne laga ...aur sochne laga k yeh baccha Yahan kahan se aa Gaya ......usne use bacche ko pakdane ke liye Apna Hath Jameen se uthaya To vah Baccha bhi gayab ho gaya......

Muladhar Chakra ke jagrit hone per prapt Hui Sidhi se Abhi is Samay unbhigya tha .....usne Dekha ki Samaya bhi bahut ho gaya hai .......aur usse Wapas Apne Ghar Bhi jana hai... Toh uss jagah ki maya ke bare mein baad Mein janne ka vichar Karke vah gaon ki or chal Pada......

vah apne aap ko iss samay Apne Pita ke samne pragat nahin karna chahta tha...... isliye Gaon Se Bahar Hi Raste Se Hote hue gaon ke Paschim Disha Mein Gaya

Sona ne bataya tha K woh log gaon ke Paschimi Raste ki or Gaye aur vahan se Achanak gayab ho gaye the ....... Sona dwara batai Gai Jagah Tak Abhi pahunch gaya ....K...tabhi use gaon ki or se Kisi Ke Aane Ki Aahat Aur Do mashale Najar aayi Abhi ne turant apni Hath ki Mashal Bujha di aur .....Vahi Ek ped per shighrata se Chadh Gaya

tab tak Mashal Lekar Aate Hue do log vahan pahunch gaye Abhi Ne Dekha ki inmein se ek Mukhiya ji hai aur dusra koi majdur.....

Majdoor - mainne Kisi Aur issi jagah..... mashal lekar aate hue dekha ....

Mukhiya - kya tumhe poora vishwas hai k woh mashal hi thi .....

Majdoor - dur se toh wah mashal hi lag rahi thi ....aisa lag raha tha k koi chupkar hamare gaon mein pravesh karne ka prayatna kar raha ho .......

Mukhiya ji - parantu yaha toh koi nahi hai ...tumhe bhram hua hoga ......

Majdoor - ho sakta hai ....parantu ek baar hume dekh lena chahiye ........

Mukhiya ji - thik hai ....chalo ...

dono aaspaas mashal k prakash mein dekhne lage ....Abhi ped ki ghane patto k bich chupa hua tha .....

unhone pedo k upar bhi dekha parantu unhe koi nazar nahi aaya ...aur woh dono wapas gaon ko or laut gaye .......

Abhi ne jab dekha k woh log dur chale gaye hai ....toh woh niche kud gaya .....

itni unchayi se kudne k kaaran uska haath waha ki jamin par pade toh usse logo ki cheekh pukar sunayi di aur saath hi kuch drishya ..bhi dikhayi diya ....usne jab apna haath waha se hataya toh sab kuch shaant tha .....usne phir uss jagah haath rakha toh phir wahi aawaje aur wahi drishya .....tab usse aabhas ho gaya k aaj k dhyan mein uski koi nayi shakti jagrit ho gayi hai jiske kaaran woh purva mein ghati hui ghatna ko dekh sakta hai ....

Abhi Ne FIR Apna hath uss Jagah per Rakha aur Apna Dhyan muladhara Chakra per kendrit Kiya jisse uska antahkaran jagrit Ho Gaya aur uske Samne Sare Drishya spasht Ho Gaye

Abhi ne Dekha ki Kareeb 20 se 25 log Kale Rang Ke kapde pahne hue unn sake vastro par Kuch Ajeeb Sa Nishan banaa hua tha...... woh kisi Janwar ki Peeth ( ghoda ) per Sawar the

( uss samay waha ghodo ka prayog abhi shuru nahi hua tha....Abhi ne bhi pahele kisi ghode ko ab tak nahi dekha tha )

Abhi ne dekha k bade bade Pinjra mein unhone bahut se Logon ke Hath per bandh kar Bandi Banaya hua tha unn pinjro mein lakdi k bane hue gol chakra ( pahiye ) se lage hue the woh pinjre rasiiyo ki sahyata se waise hi pashuo se bandhe hue the ......jaise pashuo par woh lag baithe hue the ....Abhi ne dekha k woh pashu unn pinjro ko yaha tak khinch lar laaye aur tabhi waha ek prakash dwar khula jismein woh sabhi sama gaye ....

Unn logo k kaale vastra kuch kuch NP k vastro jaise the .... pahle to Abhi ke man mein Aaya ke Kahin NP bhi to inner Ka Sath hi nahin hai phir socha k nahi yeh ek sanyog bhi ho sakta hai ....

kyuki babaji ne bataya tha k woh unke guru hai ...isiliye woh inn dusht logo k saathi nahi ho sakte ......

Abhi ne saari ghatnaye pratyaksha roop se dekh li ...phir woh wapas apni poori gati se apne nagar waapas aagaya ....aur ghar mein pravesh kiya ......

Neeru ussiki pratiksha kar rahi thi .....

Abhi - maa aap abhi tak soyi nahi ....kitni raat ho gayi hai .....

Neeru - kaise soti beta bookha pyasa ho aur maa chain ki nernd so jaaye .....

Abhi - iska arth yeh hai k aapne bhi abhi tak kuch nahi khaya hai ......
kya maa aap bhi yadi mein aaj bhi nahi aa paata tho ....iss prakar aapka swastha aur kharab ho jaayega .....

Maa aage aisa bhi samay aayega k muzhe kai kai dino k liye ghar se bahar jaana padega tab bhi aap aise hi karogi ....tab aap kya karogi ......yadi aap aise hi karogi toh mein apna karya kaise kar paaunga ....muzhe humesha aapki hi chinta lagi rahegi ......

Jis tarah pitashri ko kai dino tak bahar rahna padta hai ....ussi prakar muzhe bhi apne kartavyo ko poorna karne k liye ....jaana pad sakta hai ......

Neeru - mein kya karu beta humesha muzhe yehi dar laga rahta hai k kahi tu muzhse dur na ho jaaye aise lagta hai k koi tuzhe muzse chinkar le jaayega ......

Abhi - aisa kabhi nahi hoga maa ....koi muzhe kaise aapse alag kar sakta hai ...main aapka putra hu aur sada aapka hi rahunga ....( aur neeru ka haath pakadkar apne sir par rakhte hue ) aapko meri shapath hai maa k aage se aap aise nahi karengi ......

Neeru - yeh kya kiya beta tune apni shapath kyu di ....tu bada chalak ho gaya hai jaanta hai k mein teri shapath nahi tod sakti ......

Phir dono maa bete bhojan karte hai ....aur soo jaate hai ....aaj ki ghatnao ko sochte sochte Abhi soo jaata hai ......

Aaj sapne mein woh stri purush ussi bacche ko goad mein liye hue dekhta hai jisse usne jungle mein dekha tha......

phir ek nayi umang k saath naya savera hua ... abhi Apne nityakram se nivrut hokar phir Gurukul ki or chal Pada ......Abhi nay Dekha Ke Baba Ji Ki Kutiya ka Dwar band hai aur Kutiya ke brande mein NP ko Baithe hue dekha Abhi ne jakar NP ko Pranam Kiya .....Abhi ko aaj NP ke Aankhon Mein Ek Prakar ki narajagi si nazar aayi ..

Abhi - pranam gurudev ....
Abhi ka dhyan babaji k band kutiya k dwar par jaa raha tha ....

NP - (Thode rukhe swar mein )waha kya dekh rahe ho ....aaj tumahare baba ji ka swastha thik nahi hai ..isiliye woh vishram kar rahe hai ...

Abhi - kya hua hai unhen

NP - Tum vyarth Ki Baton per Jyada Dhyan de rahe ho .......aur apne prashkshan par kam.......Tumhen Maine pahle hi Kaha Tha k ..... Apna Dhyan aur Samay apne Prashikshan per purn Roop se lagao parantu lagta hai kya Tumhen Meri baten samajh Nahin aayi

Abhi - parantu maine kal aapke hi bataya anusar dhayan kiya tha aur usmein safal bhi hua tha .....

NP - chalo chodo .....aaj mein tumhe swadhisthan chakra mein apna dhyan kendrit karna hai jo jal tatva ko srot hai ......

Swadhisthan chakra 6 dal wale kamal ki bhanti hota hai iska sthan thik ling k piche merudand par hota hai .....iski 6 pankudiya hamare 6 vikaro k pratik hai ....jinpar hime vijay prapt karni hai ....

swadhisthan chakra mein jaltatva ki urja k saath saath ...kaamshakti ki urja hoti hai jiske sahi prayog se vyakti milan dwara kai sidfhiya prapt karta hai ....jiska upayog sahi tarah se bairavi tantra janane wale saadhak karte hai ...aur anek sidfhiyo ko prapt karte hai ....

aur iss kaam shakti ka durupayog vyakti ko vinash ki or bhi lejaata hai .....

NP ne swadhishthan chakra ka bij mantra aur waha dhayn ki mudra aur prakriya ka poora gyan diya .....

Abhi ne bhi poori tanmayta se NP k diye hue gyan ka prayog karte hue dhyan prambh kiya aaj bhi 8 ghante dhyan mein baitha .....aur Swadhisthan chakra ko jaagrit kar liya .......

jab uska dhyan samapt hua tab tak NP jaa chuka tha ......Abhi ko babaji ka swastha k baare mein janane ki iccha hui aur babaji ki kutiya ka dwar bhiter se band tha .....parantu usse babaji ki chinta hone lagi ...issiliye .usne halka sa jor lagakar dwar khol diya ......

jab Abhi ne babaji ki kutiya mein dekha toh ......

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Abhi ne babaji ki kutiya ka dwar dhakka dekar khola .....aur anadr dekha ......
andar babaji apne bister par soye hue the ....dwar khulne ki jor ki aawaj se bhi unki nidra bhang nahi hui .....Abhi babaji k bister k paas gaya aur unhe dekha .....

Unke chehra suja hua tha aur ek jagah se kaala pad gaya tha ..... nishan dekhkar Abhi samaz gaya k unhe koi rog nahi hua hai apitu unpar kissi ne aaghat kiya hai ......parantu kyu ..inki kissi se kya shatruta hai ......aur NP ne usse bataya kyu nahi ....uhone toh kewal itna hi kaha k Babaji aswastha hai ......

Abhi ne babaji ko aawaj lagai parantu unhe toh hosh hi nahi tha .....Abhi ne socha k unhe thodi der vishram karne deta hu .....woh jaane se pahele Babaji k charan chune k liye aage badha ...aur pairo par dhaki hui chadder hatayi .....toh usne kisi k panjo k nishan unke pairo par dekhe ......

toh Abhi ko laga k sirf chehre par nahi aur bhi jagah choto k nishan hai ....usne chadder hatakar dekha ....babji kewal langot pahna karte the ......unke chatti k nicche ki jagah bilkul kaali pad gayi thi jaise kisi ne jordar prahar kiya ho .....

itna hone par bhi babaji ki nidra nahi khuli toh Abhi ko kuch shanshay hua usne unhe hiladulakar dekha toh pata chala woh murchit hai ......

Abhi ne turant Babaji ko uthaya aur Chikitsalaya ki taraf chal pada .......waha Kirtisen ne unke nishano ka parikshan kiya .....

Kirtisen - lagta hai inhe kissi ne inhe bahut buri tarah maara hai .....don jagah ki chote jyada gahri hai ...ek seene k niche aur sir k piche ....prahar itna jordar tha k unhe bhiter tak kshati pahunchi hai ......uss jagah rakt ka sanchalan nahi ho raha hai ......

Abhi - vaid ji yeh thik toh ho jaayenge na ......

Kirti sen - iss samay mein kuch kah nahi sakta ...parantu mein apna poora prayatna karunga .....

Abhi - inhe kuch nahi hona chahiye vaid ji ...kyu k maa baba k baad yadi koi mere nikat raha hai yeh yahi hai .....kuch kijiye vaid ji ....inhone ne sada muzhe itna prem diya hai ....humesha muzhe apna putra hi mana hai ....apna sampurna gyan inohone muzhe diya ......yeh chota sa kabila aaj ek vishal nagar k roop mein parivartit hua hai ..yeh sab inhi k gyan k kaaran hua hai ....

itna kahte hue Abhi ki aankhien chalak aayi...

Kirtisen - Main jaanta hu putra yeh hamare rajya k liye kitne mahatva poorana hai ....mein apna poora prayatna karunga ....paratu kaun hai jisne aise devpurush ki aisi dasha ki ....

Abhi - iss baat ka pata toh mein laga hi lunga .......

Sonu bhi wahi chikitsalaya mein sewa kar rahi thi ....aur Abhi aur vaidji ki baatien sun rahi thi ....Abhi k netro mein ashru dekhkar uske netra bhi chalak aaye ......

Babaji ki aisi awashta k kaaran Abhi ka mann khinn ho gaya tha ...isiliye uska Sonu ki taraf dhyan nahi gaya .......Abhi waha se nikalkar .....nadi k kinare chal pada jaha woh aksar aata tha nadi ka bahta hua kal kal karta swacha jal ....hariyali ... uss par choti choti pahadi aur panchiyo ka madhur sangeet .....uske mann ko shanti pahunchata tha .....

Abhi vahan jakar Baitha aur kal Se Lekar ab tak ki Hui ghatnaon ke bare mein vichar Karne Laga
vah Divya Sher ke roop mein kaun tha jo uska Marg Rok raha tha ......aur jungle ki vah jagah Jahan usse nanha sa bachcha Dikhai diya tha .....uska uss Nanhe Se Shishu se kya sambandh aur phir gaon k woh humlawar jo Kale kapdon mein the ......jinhone Gaon Ke logo ko Bandi banaya tha..... vah Achanak kahan adrishya ho gaye the .....
aakhir unn Logon Ko Bandi Banane Ke Piche unka kya uddeshy ho sakta hai....... aur... aaj Babaji ki aisi awastha.... kaun ho sakta hai wah jisne babaji ki aisi dasha ki ...Kahi NP toh nahi ....nahi woh nahi ho sakte woh kyu aisa karenge ....

tabhi use Apne kandhe per kisi ke Hath ke hone ka aabhas hua toh woh apne vicharo se bahar aaya aur usne mudkar Dekha vahan Sonu Khadi Thi.......

Sonu ko dekhkar apni pareshani aur dukh chupate hue halki si muskurahat k saath ......

Abhi - wah kya baat hai ....ab tak mein hi tumhe khoja karta tha aur aaj tum muzhe khojte hue aayi ho ...kahi tumhe prem toh nahi ho gaya hai ......

Sonu Abhi k paas baithte hue - Aap apni inn baaton dwara apne mann ki awastha muzhse nahi chipa sakte .....Chikitsalaya mein aapke saamne hi thi ....isliye mein samaz sakti hu aapke mann ki awastha ....

Abhi sonu ka haath pakadkar apne paas bithata hai ....

Abhi - Sonu tum nahi jaanti babaji ka mere jiwan mein kya mahatva hai ....unki aisi dasha k kaaran ...mera mann khinn ho gaya tha ...iss kaaran mera dhyan waha tum par nahi gaya .....

Sonu - mein samaz sakti hu ....aap chinta na kare babaji ko kuch nahi hoga ....woh jaldi hi thik hi jaayenge .....

Abhi - Sonu ...mein kal tumahare gaon tumahari batayi hui jagah gaya tha ....aur phir Abhi ne jo drishya waha dekhe the woh Sonu ko bata diye ....
Sonu ab muzhe lagta hai main bahut hi jald un tak pahunch jaaunga .......

Sonu - muzhe aap par poorna vishwas hai ....

abhi bhi dono ne ek dusre ka haath pakda hua tha ......Sonu apna sir Abhi k kanfhe par rakh deti hai ......Abhi bhi apna sir uske sir se tika deta hai .....thodi der dono aise hi khamosh batihe nadi k bahte hue jal ko niharte hue ek dusre k perm ka anubhav karte hai ....

dono k honth bhale hi chup the parantu unke hriday khub baatien kar rahe the ....
Abhi - Sonu muzhe abhi chalna hoga maa pratiksha kar rahi hogi ......

Sonu - muzhe nahi milwaoge maa se .....

Abhi - milwaunga parantu abhi samay hai ......

Dono waha se uth jaate hai ...Abhi Sonu ko uske shivir tak chod deta hai phir apne ghar chala jaata hai ...ghar Pahunchkar apni maa k saath thoda samay vyatit karta hai ......aur nikal padta hai ....

Abhi jungal k ussi raaste par nikal pada jaha se woh kal nikla tha .......abhi din aadhe se jyada ho gaya tha suryast hone mein kaafi samay tha ......Aaj uska marg rokne wala koi nahi tha .......

raasta paar karke woh phir ussi gaon k paas pahuncha ......abhi bahut ujala tha woh bina kisi ki nazar mein aaye apna karya karna chahta tha ...issiliye ....woh wapas jungle mein aagaya ......

tab usse kal wali jagah dikhi jaha usse ek nanha sa shishu dikhayi diya tha ......Abhi uss jagah pahuncha ...aur niche baithkar apna haath ussi jagah par rakha aur Muladhar chakra par dhyan kendrit kiya .....ab uske antar man mein waha ghatit ghatna k drishya pragat hone lage ......

Usne dekha k ek nanha sa balak jungle mein ussi jagah pada ro raha tha ...uss baalak ki aankhien jaani pahchani lagi .......tab Abhi ne uss balak ko aur dhyan se dekha toh usse uss balak k hontho par ek til aur baajoo par ek chakra ka nishan jo janm se Abhi k bhi sharir par tha ..

Abhi - toh kya yeh main hu ...parantu maon yaha iss jungle mein kaise ...aur maa baba kaha hai ...

tabhi Abhi ne dekha k ek bada sa sher zhadiyo se nikalkar uss baalak ko ghur raha hai ......jisse dekhkar uss baalak ka rona band ho gaya ......woh ek tak sher ki taraf ghur raha tha .....uss sher ne achanak uss bacche par chalang lagayi lekin iske pagele woh bacche tak pahunchta ...ek shool aakar uss sher ki garden mein ghus gaya aur woh sher aawaj karta hua ek or ludak gaya ....

Abhi ne dekha k Karma apne saathiyo k saath waha pahuncha ......Karma ne uss bacvhe ko apni goad mein uthaya ......

Karma - kaun hai jo iss nanhe se shihu ko yaha iss bhayanak jungal mein chod gaya .......
( aur apne saahtiyo se ) jara dekho toh yaha aaspaas koi hai .....

Karma k kahne se uske saathi aaspaas talashne lage parantu unhe waha aur koi nazar nahi aaya .....

Karma - jaane kaun honge iske mata pita ....dekho toh kitna sunder aur tojomay baccha hai ...kitne nirdayi hai iske mata pita jo isse yaha chaod kar gaye ..yaa..aisa bhi hosakta hai kisi junglu pashu ka shikar ho gaye ho ......

( nanhe shishu ki taraf dekhte hue ) tu aaj se mera beta kahlaayega ....iswar ne muzhe tere roop mein vardan diya hai ...Neeru kitni khush hogi ..(.aur uss bacche ko hriday se laga liye) .....
chal beta apne ghar .....aur woh bacche lo lekar waha se apne saathiyo k saath chala gaya ......

yeh drishya dekhkar Abhi ki aankhon mein aansoo aagaye ...arthat ......jinko mein apna mata pita maankar bada hua hu ....jiss maa ki mamta ko chav ne humesha meri raksha ki hai ...jiss pita ki aankhon mein apne liye humesha prem aur garv dekha hai .....woh unka putra nahi hai .....

usse ab tak jiwan mein ek pal bhi aisa nahi laga tha k woh Karma aur Neeru ki santan nahi hai ....uski halki si chink par kaise uski maa pareshan ho jaati thi ......aaj tak bhi ek din yadi bina usse dekhe Neeru ko chain nahi aata tha .....kaise woh maan le k woh unka putra nahi hai ....parantu jo dhisya dikhe woh ....

Abhi ne ek baar phir haath rakha toh phir wahi sab drishya usse dikhayi diye .......

Abhi mann mein - kaun hai mere asli mata pita ....aur unhone kyu muzhe iss van mein chod diya .
kahin sapne mein dikhayi dene wale hi toh mere mata pita nahi ...haa yahi ho sakta hai ....tabhi bachpan se woh muzhe sapne mein dikhte aarahe hai ....parantu kaha honge woh ......

Abhi inhi khayalo mein kuch der wahi baitha rahta hai ......tabhi ek aawaj ne uska dhyan aakarshit kiya .....woh aawaj thi NP ki

NP - Kya kar rahe ho yaha maine mana kiya tha na k jab tak tumahara prashikshan poora nahi ho jaata tab tak tum kahi nahi jaaoge ......ayr yaha niche baithkar kyu ashru baha rahe ho ...kya hua ....

Abhi - (apne aansoo ponchte hue )ashru nahi toh mein kyu asru bahaunga ...mein toh bas aise hi baitha tha ...muzhe samaz nahi aaraha k aap muzhe kyu nagar k bahar jasne se rok rahe ho ...... prashikshan toh main aapke kahe anusar hi kar raha hu ...uske paschat toh mein kahi bhi jaa sakta hu.......isse aapko koi matlab nahi hona chahiye ...

NP - ( rukhe swar mein) maryada rakho mat bhulo k tum apne guru se baat kar rahe ho ...tumahare liye kya accha aur kya bura mein jaanta hu ...isiliye jitna kaha jaaye utna hi karo ....jaao laut jaao ..apne nagar ....

aur ek haath aage karte hue ek dhatu ki bani hui shishi dete hue iss aushadhi ko Manduk ko pila dena kal tak woh bilkul thik ho jaaye ga ....

Abhi NP se woh shishi le leta hai ...ab Abhi kya karta woh aise yaha se nahi jaana cahhta tha .....usne kuch socha ..k...kya kahe ..phir kuch sochte hue ......

Abhi - mere pita yahi pass k gaon mein navnirman karya mein lage hue hai ...mein bas unse milkar chala jaaunga .....

NP - thik hai dhyan rahe idhar udhar ki vyart chintao mein apna samay nasht na karo ....Chakra jagrit hone k baad bhi tumhe unki shatiyo ko samazne k liye aur adhik dhyan ki aawashykta hai issi loye mein tumhe aur kahi aane jaane k liye mana kar raha tha ...

haa ek baat aur apne mann ko aur sabal banao abhi aur bahut se rahasya hai jo tumhe pata nahi hai .....ab jaao .....

NP ki baat sunkar Abhi ko asisa lagne laga k NP uske baare mein bahut kuch jaanta hai ......aur iss samay usne jo dekha woh bhi .....parantu kaise kaun hai yeh ...Abhi jaane k liye gaon ki aur mud gaya ....phir kuch sochkar piche mudkar dekha toh dekha NP ek Prakash dwar mein pravesh kar k gayab ho gaya ...

NP ka iss tarah achanak pragat hona aur gayab hona usse aur jayada rahasyamayi bana raha tha .....

Abhi gaon ki taraf nikal pada ....suryaastha ho chuka tha ....andhera dhire dhire prakash ko nigalne laga tha ....

Abhi phir kal wali jaga gaya ......aur aap paas ki jagah ka acchi tarah se nirikshan kiya k kahi yaha se koi gupt marg toh nahi ....usne ek baar phir se uss jagah haath rakhkar saare drishya badi dhyan se dekhe .....toh usne dekha k woh log ek prakash dwar k bhiter pravesh karke gayab ho gaye the .....yeh prakash dwar bilkul waise hi tha jissmein NP gayab hua tha ......

usse kuch shanka hone lagi k NP unn logo se kuch na kuch sambandh jarur hoga ya woh unke baare mein jarur kuch na kuch jaante honge .....Ab usse gaon k khoye hue logo tak pahunchne ka maarg NP k roop mein nazar aane laga .......

Abhi ko apne janm ka satya pata chal chuka tha ...uske mann mein bhavnao ka tufan umad pada tha ......parantu uske liye apni bhavnao se jyada uska kartavya aur vachan ka mahatva tha ...aur Yahi hota hai ek WARROIR ka gun ....

Yaha ka kaam khatam ho gaya tha ......toh woh wapas jaane k liye muda ....
parantu woh phir gaon ki or mud gaya ....Aaj Abhi ka Karma se milne ka bada mann kar raha tha aur sath hi saath woh gaon ka nirman karya bhi dekhna chahta tha .... ....toh woh gaon mein lage hue unke shivir pahunch gaya ......

Karma ....Mukhiya ji ....aur kuch log baithkar kissi baat par charcha kar rahe the

Baat karte hue Karma ki Abhi par nazar padi ...toh woh khada hua ...

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Baat karte hue Karma ki Abhi par nazar padi ...toh woh khada hua ........

Karma - beta tum yaha iss samay ......nagar mein toh sakushal toh hai na ......

Abhi - woh pitashri muzhe aaj aapki yaad aarahi thi aur yaha k nirman ka kaam bhi dekhna tha toh chala aaya .....kahte hue Abhi Karma k pair chuta hai .......aur Karma bhi apne bete ko uthakar gale laga leta hai ......

Abhi bhi Apne Palak Pita Ke gale lag kar Bhav Vibhor ho jata hai Karma aur Neeru ke Prem ne use Kabhi Bhi yeh Ehsas Nahin hone Diya tha k woh unka Putra Nahin Hai

yadi uss Din Karma Abhi ko uss Jungle se uthakar nahin Laata ....Toh Na Jaane Uska Kya Hota Yahi Soch kar Karma ke liye Abhi ke man mein Aadhar Bhav aur badh jata hai

Karma - Chalo accha hi hua k tum aagaye ....muzhe bhi tumse milne ka bahut mann tha ....aur tumhe kuch dikhana bhi tha .....waise beta tumahari maa kaisi hai ...tum usse batakar aaye ho .....na nahi toh phir tahari chinta mein ann jal tyag degi ....

Abhi - maa bilkul thik hai pitashri ......yadi mein unhe yaha aane ka batata toh muzhe kabhi akele nahi aane deti ......

Karma - yeh tumne thik nahi kiya putra ...Neeru waha pareshan ho jaayegi ....tumhe pata hai ek din k liye tum gayab ho gaye the toh uska kya haal ho gaya tha ....

Abhi - pitashri kuch hi der mein main maa k paas pahunch jaaunga ......

Karama - kuch hi der mein kaise ....nagar yaha se bahut dur hai ....waha pahunchne mein aadhe din se bhi jyada samay chahiye ......

Abhi - nagar se yaha aane k liye ek aur chota rasta hai jo jungle se hokar gujarta hai ....jo ek ghadi ( dhai ghanta ) mein nagar tak pahunchata hai ......

Karma - yeh tumne bahut accha kiya beta ......ab mein bhi yaha k saath saath apne nagar ka karya bhar dekh sakunga .....

Abhi - waise pitashri aap muzhe kya dikhane wale the ......

Karma Abhi ko gaon ka nirman karya dikhata hua gaon k madhya mein le jaata hai ......unn gharo ka nirman nagar k gharo se bikul alag tha ....pratyak ghar ek suniyojit dhang se banaya jaa raha tha ....cahudi galiya .....aur jal nikasi k liye naaliya ....sunder shilpkala ....dekhte hue Abhi Karma k saath gaon k madhya pahuncha ......

Waha ek vishal bhawan ka nirman ho raha tha ...jo shilpkala ka adbhut namuna tha ....uske stambho par ...bani hui sunder aakritiya jaise sajeev dikh rahi thi ...Abhi ne kabhi itne sunder bhawan ki kalpana nahi ki thi .......

Karma - kaise laga putra ......

Abhi - pitashri yeh toh adbhut hai ....yaha k pratayk nirman ...humare nagar se kai guna sundar hai aur yeh bhawan toh ek dum adbhut ......parantu ..yeh sab toh hamare karigar nahi jaante ...toh phir kaun hai woh jo itne sundar bhawano ka aur nagar ka nirman kar raha hai ...woh bhi itni shighrata se .....

Karma - yahi toh mein tumhe dikhana chahta tha ..putra ...aao mein tumhe usse milvata hu .....

Karma ..wahi bane hue ek shivir k or Abhi ko le jaata hai ....jiske bahar ek vyakti khada tha ......Karma ne apna sandesh usse diya ....toh woh vyakti bhiter gaya Abhi ko kuch ajeeb laga ....k uske pita ko tarah aagya kyu leni pad rahi hai ....thodi hi der mein woh bahar aaya aur Karma ko bhiter jaane ka ishara kiya .....

Abhi karma k saatha bhiter pravesh kar gaya ....Ander ek adhed awastha ka vyakti ...Abhi ko ek aasan par baitha hua tha jo shudh swarn se bana hua tha ......

Karma - yeh hai Shundi yaha ka kaam inhi k dekh rekh mein ho raha hai ....aur yeh hai mera putra .

Jaisi hi Shundi ki nazar Abhi par padi ...maano woh stambhit ho gaya tha ....woh ektak Abhi ko dekh raha tha ...usse Abhi k roop mein koi aur hi nazar aaraha tha jisse dekhkar uski aankhien chalak aayi ....

Jisee chupane k liye Shundi thoda mud gaya aur aankhien ponch li .....jo Abhi ne dekh liya tha ....

Shundi turant khada ho gaya ......

Shundi - Accha toh yeh hai aapka putra ....jitna aapse suna tha usase badkar hi hai ....mizhe bahut khushi hui inse milkar ....mein toh kabse inhe milne ki pratiksha mein tha ....

Abhi - muzhe bhi aapse milkar badi prasannata hui ....aap ki kala adbhut hai issprakar ki kala maine kabhi nahi dekhi .......parantu aapne aisa kyu kaha k kabse pratiksha mein the ...

Shundi - main kahna chahta tha jab se aapke pita ne tumahare baare mein bataya ....tabse ...inhone ne aapke baare mein itna kuch bataya k muzhe aapse milne ki icvha hui .....aayiye baithiye .....

Abhi - kshama kare aaj nahi ...baatien toh muzhe bhi aapse bahut karni hai parantu abhi hume nikalna hoga .......

Shundi - aap iss tarah nahi jaa sakte ......pahli baar mile ho kuch toh grahan karna hoga ...aur Shundi aagrah purvak apne swarn aasan par Abhi ko bitha deta hai ....aur apne sewak se kahkar Abhi aur karma k saamne sharbat aur kuch phal prastut karta hai ......

Karma aur Abhi Shundi se vida lekar uske Shivir se nikal padte hai ......

Karma - waise putra iss shundi par tumne kya jaadoo kiya hai .....jiss swarn k aasan ko woh kisi ko sparsh bhi karne nahi deta uspar tumhe bithaya ....aur bade aadar bhav se sewa bhi ki ......

Abhi - muzhe kya pata ...pitashri ...mein toh pahli baar hi mil raha hu usase .....

Dono chalte hue Mukhiya ji k shivir tak pahunche ...

Abhi - accha pitashri muzhe ab chalna chahiye ....maa chinta kar rahi hogi .....

Karma - mein bhi tumahare saath chalta hu ....muzhe bhi nagar mein kuch kaam hai .....Phir Karma Mukhiya ji ko kal k kaam k baare mein samzhakar .....Abhi k saatha jungal k raaste gaon ki or nikal padta hai aur ek ghadi mein apne nagar pahunchta hai .....

Abhi ko NP dwara di hui aushadhi bhi babaji tak pahunchani thi .....babaji k baare mein batakar woh Karma ko pareshan nahi karna chahta tha ......

tabhi usse Vikas aata hua nazar aaya jo chikisalay se babaji ko dekhkar apne ghar jaa raha tha ..Abhi ko dekhkar woh ruk gaya ......

abhi woh kuch bolta k Abhi ne usse chup hone k ishara kiya .....aur usse chupke se aushadhi ko shishi dete hue babaji ko turant yeh aushadhi pilane ko kaha .....

Karma aage chal raha tha ...piche mudkar dekha k Abhi vikas se baat kar raha hai .....aushadhi dekar Abhi Karma k paas aajaata hai ........Aur saath apne ghar ki or chal padta hai ......

Neeru Karma ko dekhkar bahut khush ho jaati hai ......teeno ek saath bhojan karte hai ...aur kuch der baatein .....woh raat bhi bit jaati hai ......

aaj Abhi apne nitya karm niptakar suryoday hone se purva hi Gurukul pahunch jaata hai ....Usse prakash dwar ko dekhkar NP par sandeh ho gaya tha ....isiliye Gurukul aakar babaji ki kutiya k paas zhadiyo mein chip jaata hai ......

Kuch der ki pratiksha k baad usse kuch aawaj sunayi di toh usne zhadiyo se zhankar dekha.....k NP aur babaji kuch baat karte hue aarahe hai ....aur kutiya k baramde mein khade mein pravesh kar jaate hai ....Abhi chupte hue kutiya k piche jaakar bhiter chal rahi baaton ko sunane ka prayatna karta hai ......

Babaji - mein ab usse nahi rok sakta ...ek hi baar mein usne meri kya haalat kar di thi ...aap toh jaante ho ....

Np - tum jaante ho manduk yadi woh waha tak pahuncha toh kya hoga ...tumhe usse rokna hi hoga ....main nahi chahta k Darmen ki drishti usspar pade .....

Manduk - toh aap Darmen ka saath chod kyu nahi dete ...aapne socha hai ...yadi Abhi ko aapki sachayi pata chali toh kya hoga .....

NP - nahi chod sakta Manduk ......isiliye toh tumhe usse rokne ko kah raha hu ....tum samaz nahi sakte ho .......ek taraf toh ...Abhi jo kitne varaho ki pratiksha k baad mila hai ........jisse ...burai k saamna karne k liye muzhe sabal banana hai .....aur ...dusri taraf Darmen hai ....na chahte hue bhi muzhe ....uske paap mein bhagi hona pad raha hai ... ....

samay ka yeh kaisa chakra hai k saamne hote hue bhi main apne bhai ko gale bhi nahi laga sakta .....yeh itna aasan nahi hai Manduk...

Manduk - Parantu ab mein usse nahi rok sakta .....chahe aap muzhe kuch bhi dand de ......sher bankar gaya toh tha ...parantu ...

Tabhi unka dhyan kutiya k andar pravesh karte hue Abhi par pada ......

Abhi - parantu kya gurudev ....parantu kya .....toh woh sher aap hi the jo jungle mein mera marg rok rahe the parantu kyu ....aap muzhe satya tak nahi pahunchne dena chahte the ....yaha mein yeh sochkar pareshan tha ...k pata nahi kaun hai woh jisne aapki aisi haalat ki .thi ....ab pata chala k aapki uss haalat ka jimmedar mein hi hu ....

aapne aisa kyu kiya ...muzhe yadi apne mata pita k baad sabse jayada kissi par sabse jyada vishwas tha toh woh the aap .....aapne kyu kiya yeh vishwasghat mere saath ....

Abhi ki baatein sunkar Manduk kuch nahi kah paa raha tha .....

NP - Abhi...mat bhulo k jisase tum baat kar rahe ho unhone ab tak tumahare liye kya kiya hai ....apni maryada mat bhulo ...

Abhi - aap maryada ko baat karte ho ....main jaanta hu k unn gaon walo k apaharn k picche aapka bhi kahi na kahi haat hai .....kahi mein satya tak na pahunchu isiliye aapne Babaji ko muzhe rokne k liye bheja ....

ek taraf toh muzhe prashikshan de rahe ho aur dusri taraf mera hi marg rok tahe ho ...

Aakhir aap ho kaun ek taraf toh aapki baaton mein muzhe apne liye chinta dikhayi di ...aur dusri taraf kisi Darmen ka bhay ...kaun hai yeh Darmen .....

aap muzhe apna bhai kyu kah rahe the ......bataye ...aapse mera kya sambandh hai ......

NP - abhi innsab baaton ko janane ka samay nahi aaya hai ...tum pahele apna prashikshan poora karo ....

Abhi - uske liye mann ka shant hona aawshayk hai ...kya aapko lagta hai k aisi awastha mein mein dhyan kar sakta hu ....muzhe sacchayi janani hai ...


NP - iss tarah hat nahi karte ...isiliye maine tumhe pahele hi kaha tha k apne mann ko niyantrit karna sikho .......

Abhi - pahele muzhe apne utaar chahiye .....kya unn gaon walo k apaharan mein aapka haath hai ...aur hai toh woh sab kaha hai ......aur aapne aisa kyu kaha k aap meri kai varsho se talash kar rahe the .....mera aapse kya sambandh hai ....

NP - thik hai toh suno ...haa ..unn logo ka mere hi logo ne apharan kiya tha ...aur woh sab surakshit hai ......

Abhi - muzhe laga hi tha .....woh sab iss samay kaha ..hai .....

NP - woh mein tumhe nahi bata sakta ......tum unhe bhul jaao woh ab kabhi apne ghar nahi pahunch paayenge .....

Abhi - Aap nahi batana chahte toh koi baat nahi ......main bhi aapse prashikshan nahi le sakta ...kyuki mein aise kisi vyakti ko apna guru nahi bana sakta jo burai ka saath de ......

NP - Tum samazte kyu nahi ho iss tarah tum apne aapko hi haani pahuchaoge .......Mata pita aur tumahare khone k baad maine kai varsho tak ...khoj ki ....parantu ...tum teeno ka kahi pata nahi chal paa raha tha .....

Mera diya hua suraksha kawach jo meri urja se juda hua tha ....usase bhi mera sampark nahi ho paa raha tha .....parantu jab tum pritvi par jis kaal mein pahunche ......uss kaal tak pahunch the pahunchte hamare grah par 250 varsh bit chuke the ....

tabhi raksha kawach se mera sampark hua toh muzhe pritvi par tumahare hone ka pata chala itne varsho ki pratiksha k muzhe koi sanket mile ....toh maine Manduk ko yaha bheja usse muzhe tumahare jeevit hone ka pata chala .......mein chahkar bhi tumahari suraksha k kaaran pragat roop se tumse nahi mil paa raha tha ....mere bhai ......

tum mere chote bhai ho Abhi .....humare mata pita ek hi hai ....

Abhi k liye itna hi .....

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