Fantasy ABHI -- THE WARRIOR (Completed)
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ab tak aapne dekha....A1ki apne shastro ko prapt karne k liye yatra shuru ho gayi hai ...
aur abhi raat ko apne ghar mein ek nakab posh ko dekhta hai......aur fir uska chera dekhkar hairan ho jaata ha.....
ab aageee....
Raat mein apne papa ko iss tarah dekh kar mein bada hairan tha......
tabhi muzhe aawaj aayi.......Bete apne papa ko aise chup chup kar nahi dekha karte ......yaha saamne aao ..
mein papa k saamne jaakar
--- Papa aap inn ..kapdo ..mein ...kaise kya...kar rahe ho .....aur aise choro ki tarah apne hi ghar mein .....
aakir aap jaun hooo .....kya sachaayi hai aapki......
R.V.S - arre ...arre ...arre beta thoda saans toh le.....ek saath itne sawal
aao meri study mein chal hai wahi baat karenge .....
mein papa k saath unke study room mein pahunch gaya.....
papa - baitho beta ...tumahare saare sawalo ka jawab milega...
beta jab Parmatma kisi ko kuch shaktiya deta hai toh usska iss sansar k prati kuch kartaya banta hai
beta Shaktiyo k saath jimmedaari bhi aajati hai ....
mein - papa kaun si shaktiya aur kaisi jimmedariya...
Fir papa muzhe 5 pidio pahle hamare purvaj dwara ki hui tapasya aur vardan mien unke pariwar ko mili hui teen shaktiyo k baare mein batate hai
muzhe unki baatopar vishwas nahi hua toh Papa ne ne hawa mein haath uper kiya aur apni aankhien band ki aur unke haatho mein pragat hui ek badi si talwar
uss laal rang ki roshni se chamkti hui talwar ko dekhkar mein bada hairan hua......
Papa - Beta yeh hai Sangharak ki khooni talwar ....jo hamesha apradhiyo k khoon ki pyasi rahti hai
Mein - Sangaharak .... kahi yeh RAW ka wahi agent toh nahi ...jiske baare mein baare kuch log sirf kahani maante hai kuch log hakkikat
papa - Haa beta wahi hai
mein - toh papa yeh Talwar aapke k paas kya kar rahi hai.....
Papa - Kyu ki beta mein hi hu woh
apradhiyo ka Bhakshak aur acche logo ka Rakshak SANGHARAK
aur yahi baat tumhe batane k liye hi aaj tumahare saamne iss bhesh mein aaya hu ....kyu ki ab tumahari training ka dusra safar shuru karne ka samay aagaya hai ....
Ab chalo itna kahkar papa ne apni aankhein band ki aur phir Apne normal kapdo mein aagaye
Ab mein Papa k saath apne Ghar k bbasement mein Jaha hamari Cars aur bikes Rakhi jaati thi
mein - papa yaha garrage mein kya hai ..hum yaha kyu aaye hai..
Papa beta thoda ruk jaao bas dekhte raho...
Phir papa waha ek diwar k paas pahunch gaye aur mera haath pakadkar ho gaye deewar k aar paar
mein hairani se papa ki aur dekhta hu
papa hairan hone ki jarurat kahi yeh koi deewar nahi just image thi ki dekh walo ko yaha sirf deewar dikhe aur kuch nahi ...
saamne ek glass ki bani hui lift thi ...
mein uss lift mein papa k saath ander chala gaya aur , pahuch gaya ek corridor mein jisske dono taraf kamre bane hue the
beta yeh rooms yaha rahenewalo k liye aur kuch rooms storerooom aur weapon rooms k liye use hote hai
uss laambe corridor se chalte chalte meine andaja lagaya tha ki yaha kam se kam 1000 rooms k lagbhag honge
aur phir hum pahunch gaye ek bade se hall mein jaha 5000 log aaram se rah sakte ho, waha chaaro taraf screen mein kuch videos chal rahi thi aur ..kareeb kareeb 1000 log waha ki monitoring kar rahe the
apne ghar k niche itna bada control room dekhkar hairaan ho gayaa..
Papa - yeh hai yaha ka control room , yaha se poori State ki gatividhiyo par najar rakhi jaati hai ....aur humare Desh mein jitne bhi mere agents hai issi k jariye muzhse connected rahte hai .. aur yeh saara system meri iss watch se......
abhi mein yeh sab soch raha tha ki
papa - beta kaha kho gaye abhi toh bahut kuch baaki hai....ab papa ne apni watch mein kuch kiya tabhi waha ek aur lift aagayi aur uuke iariye hum pahunch gaye aur niche yaha ek bahut bada hall tha jaha kuch log....
advaced weapon aur fighting skills ki training kar rahe the....papa ko dekhkar sabhi ruk gaye .....aur unme se 5 ne aakar salute kiya ....
papa - beta yeh 5 hai yaha k best agents kal se yahi tumahari training shuru hogi....
mein - Par papa mein toh master se martial art ki training kar hi raha hu
papa - beta yaha tumhe fighting skills k saath saath computer programming aur hacking bhi sikhayi jaayegi...
tumne abhi tak kya sikha jara hum bhi dekhe ......toh jara ho jaaye do do haath innse.....
Mein - ji papa kyu nahi main bhi toh dekhu aapke top agents mein kitna dum hai
papa - toh bolo innmein se se kis ke saath lado ge
toh ussmein se ek ko meine chuna
jisski hieght 6.5ft k karreb thi
papa - Haaruk .... good choice....go on
ab shuru hua mukabla....
ab mein bhi savdhan ho gaya tabhi Haruk ne muzhe kisi bacche ki tarah kandhe par uthaya
aur patak diye ...jisse dekhkar Haruk woh 4 agents bahut khush hue....lekin abhi woh nahi jaante the kisse paala pada hai, tabhi maine mauka derkh kar ek jump maari aur Superman punch sidha Haruk k jabde par aur Aur Haruk dharashayi...
yeh sab itne jaldi hua k kisi ko bhi samz mein nahi aaya,
Papa - wah beta ..i am proud of you ...
Haruk ko ek punch mein dharashayi kar dena matlab ..ab tumhe martial art ke aage ki teaining ka samay aagaya hai......
aise hi ab papa muzhe ab khud hamare vansh ko virasat mein milne wali shaktiyon ko jagrit karne ka prashikshan de rahe the.......
aur computer science aur hacking bhi india k top most hackers se sikh raha tha.....
aap soch rahe honge k aise itne bade jagah ka ghar k niche nirman kaise hua ...toh bata du ...jo pahele bhi likh chuka hu ....jab hero ne Naina k garbh mein pravesh kiya tha toh mahaguru ne usski shaktiyo ka vibhajan kar diya tha...Iss mein jo Srijanatmak shakti
(creation power) Naina mien hi samahit ki gayi thi..... aur jab hero
5 yrs ka hua tha toh dheere Naina ki powers jaagne lag jaati hai jisse R.V.S aur mahaguru usse control karna sikhate hai.......aur issi power se iss basement ka nirman hua hai ....
yeh creation power aage kahani mein bahut kaam aayegi..
lekin abhi hero ko Apne mom k power k baare mein nahi pata...
ab din par din jaane kyu Meri aankon mein kuch badalne laga
aise hi ek din school k lunch time mein mein aur rimpy baithe baatein kar rahe the...
mein Accha rimpy aur baatao tumahari tech ki practice kaisi chal rahi hai ...
Rimpy -( man mein) haaye aaj kitba handsome lag raha hai lagta hai bas inn aankho mein kho jaau ....lekin yeh buddu toh kuch samazta hi nahi ...uff
nahi ..muzhe ye kya ho raha hai...
phir apni hi soch se sharmakar usne dono haatho se apna muh chupa liya..
mein sochne laga abhi iss pagal ladki ko kya ho gaya ...uff..hey ..bhagwan
innko samzna bhi bahut mushkil hai
tabhi muzhe kuch suzha ki yahi samay hai dekhne ka ki papa ki training kya rang laayi hai ..
Mein --Uff Rimpy jara dekho na meri aankon mein kuch chala gaya lagta hai.. ..dekho na vahut jal raha hai
meri baat sunkar woh jaldi se palti aur meri aankhon mein dekhkar funk maarne lagi..... tum bhi abhi kya karte ho ...dhyan nahi rakh sakte a...ab kaisa feel ho raha hai.
issi mauke ka fayda utha kar mien usski aakhon k jariye usske bhitar zhank k dekha toh sab jasn gaya jo woh soch rahi thi.......arre wah beta abhi chahat ka beej yaha bhi panaone laga hai.....abhi mein usski bhanavo ko padh hi rha tha ki ek sky blue colour ki roshni ne mere saamne aagayi......sochne laga ki yeh roshni Rimpy k bhiter kaise ...kaha se
tabhi Rimpy ne muzhe hilakr ...
Arre phir kho gaye.....Abhi tum apna ilaj karawo ....aaj kal baithe baithe jaane kaha kho jaate ho...
meine socha mera waham hoga baad mein papa se puch lunga,....tabhi mere dost log waha aagaye....
Bhanu -- kya baat hai yr aaj Lunch time k baad class mein kyu nahi aaye aur yaha akele baithe kya kar rahe the tum dono chalo abhi ghar bhi jasna hai ya yahi baithna hai...
Bhanu ki baat sunkar hum dono hairan ho gaye aur chal pade apne apne gahr...
Aise hi school..yoga...basement ..aur dosto k bich life chal rahi thi...kabhi kabhi Dadi dadi se milne aur mera dost aapko yaad hoga Vayau Ghoda se milne Gaon jaata tha....
Ritu di k kahne par abhi gaon mein bhi dadu ne college hospitals saari city jaisi saari suvidhaye kar di thi....
Virasat mein milne wali teen powers mein se do ko mein haasil kar chuka tha Mind- controlling aur wepon ...aur ab hacking mein bhi mein expert hone laga tha...
abhi k liye itna hi ..
agla update jald hi ---
Maza aa gya
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Brilliant update.... Great going
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Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update.... Great going
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ab tak aapne dekhna R.V.S ne kuch raaj Abhi k saamne khole,
Aur Abhi bhi apni training mein laga hua hai.......
Rimpy k ander dikhi urja ka kya raaz hai ......yeh aage pata chalega
abhi toh Abhi ko bahut jannana hai ...sikhna hai
Abhi tak ki powers dono A1 aur Abhi jaldi isiliye sikh paaya kyu ki woh janm se hi isske ander thi .....( bahut kathin hai dagar panghat ki)
aage raaste mein bahut kathinayia aayengi....
khair ab dekhte hai A1 kaha hai .....
Mahaguru k aashram se nikal kar A1 nikal gaya gandhmadan parvat ki aur
yaha virajte hai Sakal jagat k paalanhaar Bhagwan Badrinath
Abhi apne vayu tatva ki shaki k dwara Yaha tak toh pahuch gaya.....lekin aage ki yaatra usse paidal hi jana tha
kyuki wohi shaktiya hume jeewan mein saath deti hai jo hume kathin parishram se prapt hui ho........
aur Mahaguru ka bhi yahi nirdesh tha,
apni shaktiyo ka prayog tabhi karna jab aur koi raasta na ho....
Gandhmaadan parvat mein Narayan parvat par Bhagwan Badrinath aur chaaro taraf Barf k parvat ...kal..kal behti hui maa alaknanda ....sab kuch itna sunder aur divya tha ki yaha pahunch kar Abhi ko apne bhiter ek nayi urja aur divyata ka anubhav hua...
Waha pahuch kar Garam paani k kund mein snan kiya Aur Phir darshan karke nikal gaya Aage ki yaatra par..
Aage jab mein ..Manda gaon pahucha
kar toh waha bane mitti k ghar dekhe aur sidhe saral log.... kuch log waha aane walo ko khanne pine ki chije de rahe the
( mazedar baat yeh hai ki itni shaktiya hasil karne k baad bhi...hero ka vyavharik gyan shunya tha, usse jab woh Mahaguru se aagya lekar jaane laga tha toh unka bhi iss aur dhyan gaya, ...phir socha chalo bahari logo k sampark mein jab aayega toh apne aap hi sikh jaayega.....)
Abhi ko yeh bhi nahi pata tha ki yeh log khane ki chije aise hi nahi de rahe the bech rahe the....
aage ka haal A1 ki jubaani ...
ab muzhe bhi bhuk lagane lagi toh mein bhi ek jagah pahucha...
aur baithne k liye ek lakdi ka bench dekhkar baith gaya...
waha k log muzhe ghur ghur kar dekh rahe the ....muzhe kuch ajeeb bhi lag raha tha.....ki jab se mein yaha aaya hu aur jaha se bhi jaa raha hu log muzhe aise kyu dekh rahe hai....
maine socha ki chodo apna kaam karte hai.... maine jo admi sab ko khane pine ki chije de raha tha
Maine waha khade aadmi se jo logo ko khanne pine ki chije de rha tha usko bola.....Bhaiya muzhe bhi kuch khanne ko do... meri baat sunkar woh meri taraf ghur kar dekhne laga.....
aur hasne laga..... waha khde log bhi hasne lage ....
kyu bhai kaha se aaye ho pahle yeh toh bataao tumhe dekhkar toh aisa lag raha hai k sidhe mahabharat kaal se yaha aaye ho ...itna kah kar phir hasne laga .......tabhi waha ek bujurg vyakti aaya .....aur usne uss vyakti ko ghur ke dekha ..toh woh chup hogaya..
bujurg (Manda Gaon k Mukhiya)
- kya baat hai shambhu yahi tarika hai tumhara yaha aanewale logo k saath
kya tum bhul gaye hamre gaon ki parampara ko .....aise majak udate ho mehmano ka...
Shambhu - maaf karna Mukhiya ji lekin issne kapde hi .....
Mukhiya - bas chup ho jaao ......phir meri taraf ......aao beta mere saath aao ...
unke beta kahne mein muzhe bahut apnapan lagne laga tih chal diya mein unke saath....
ab saari baat muzhe samaj mein aagayi thi mere kapde wahi aashram k the aur baal bhi bade bade jo yaha k logo se kaafi alg the....
Mukhiya - Kaun ho beta tum ....kisi gaon ya shaher k toh lagte nahi ho,
dekho tum muzhe baata sakte ho ho sakta hai mein tumahri kuch madat kar saku.....
mein - Baba ...kya mein aapko baba kah sakta hu.....
mukhiya - kyu nahi bete jarur
mein - Baba jyada toh mein nahi bata sakta ...lekin itna hi ki mein apne Guru ki aagya se hi ...yaha par aaya hu aur muzhe aage nilkant parvat par jaana hai..
tab tak mukhiya ji ka ghar bhi aagaya tha ...jo purane jammane ka mitti se bana hua tha....
ghar mein pahuch kar unhone muzhe baithne k liye aasan diya......
arre Jaanki (mukhiya ki wife) jara dekho toh kaun aaya hai....aur haa pani aur gudh lete aana....
tabhi ek mahila paani aur gudh lekar waha aayi woh kuch udaas si lag rahi thi...
meine gudh khakar paani piya, ...
..dhnyawad maaji .....meri aawaj sunkar uhone ne meri traf dekha aur thoda muskuraya,.....maine unki aankhon mein ek alag hi udaasi dekhi
Mein - Baba maa ji ko kya hua ....yeh itni udaas kyu lag rahi hai....
Mukhiya ji - beta woh sab baad mein..
pahle tum muh haath dho lo aur apne kapde badal lo.... suno jaanki apne vishu k kapdo mein se kuch kapde le aao toh...ayr kuch khanne ka bhi prabandh ka do
Jaanki ji ne ek nazar mukiya k taraf dekha aur kuch bolna hi chaha rahi thi ki.....
mukhiya - arre aise kya dekh rahi ho jara isse dekho toh yeh bhi hamare vishu ki tarah lag raha hai...
tab unhone muzhe gaur se dekha toh unki aankhien chalak aayi....aur aage badhkar muzhe gale se lagaya ...
haa ji yeh toh kuch kuch hamre bete jaisa hi hi.....mere sir par pyar se haath pherte
hue....sirf isski naak aur aankhien kuch alag hai...aur baal bhi..
itna kahkar woh ander chali gayi
unka sneh paakar meri bhi aankhon mein aansoo aagaye kuch dhundli dhundli si tasveer dikhne lagi jasie koi mere sir par haath pherte hue sula raha hai .....tabhi mukhiya ji k awaaj se mera dhyan tuta.....
unke diye hue kapde meine pahen liye
mukhiya ji - Toh ab batao beta....tum kah rahe the ki tum apne guru ki aagya se aaye ho ....waise kya naam hai tumahare guru ka..
Mein - MAHAGURU YAGNESH
mukhiya ji ne jaise hi naam suna toh unke haath apne aap jud gaye...aur aankhol mein shradha suman aa gaye
Mukhiya --- Kya ....naam ...bataya..MAHAGURU YAGNESH....yani ki tum bhi mere guru ji k shishya ho...
mein - kya aap bhi Mahaguru ji k shishya ho...phir toh aapne unka aashram toh dekha bhi dekha hoga ...
mein wahi se aaya hu
mukhiya - nahi putra mera itna saubhagya kaha jo unka aasram dekh saku....woh toh yaha bahut pahele aaye the jab mein tumahari hi umar ka tha woh yaha kuch din vyas gufa k paas ruke toh tab unhone yogya paatra jankar muzhe Aayruved ka gyan diya tha ..
agar tumhe uhone bheja hai toh jarur koi visheh prayogen hoga.....unhone iss baat ka sanket bhi diya tha
mein - sanket kaisa ...baba
mukhiya - beta unhone muzhe ek anguthi di thi aur kaha tha samay aane par meri yeh amanat koi tumse lene aayega .....phir ander pooja room se angoothi laakar muzhe dete hai
.
woh anghuthi mere haath mein aakar chamkne lagi phir sadharan si ho gai
tab tak bhojan tayar ho chuka tha .phir hume bhojan kiya....
mukhiya ji - beta ab thoda aaram kar lo
mein - Mukhiya ji aapke Bete Vishu ka naam toh maine suna hai , lekin woh kahi dikha nahi , kaha hai woh
mukhiya ji (thoda udas hote hue)
beta muzhe kuch dawai baane k liye ek jadi ki jarurat padi thi toh kareeb ek mahine pahle neelkanth parvat ki aur gaya tha tab se lauta nahi hai...
maine usse savdhan bhi kiya tha ki Uss parvat k bhitar na jaaye...kyuki jo bhi ab tak uss parvat par gaya hai woh wapas nahi aaya...
mein - aap chinta na kare mukhiya ji aapka putr aap tak pahuch jaayega yeh mere mann kah raha hai.
phir woh din meine wahi gujara Vyas Gufa ,Bhimpul, aur Saraswati nadi k udgam sthan ka darshan karne k baad so gaya
phir subah 4 baje uthkar apna nitya kram kiya aur Mukhiya ji aur maaji ki aagya lekar chal pada apne lakshya ki taraf...
raaste k sunder najaare dekhkar aise lag raha tha ki swarg ki hi yatra kar raha hu.....aise hi chalte chalte vasudhara pahunch gaya jaha 8 jal ki dharao se niranter sheetal jal bethta rahta hai....kuch der waha vishraam kiya aur chal diya neelkanth parvat ki talhati par bada hi vishal barf se dhaka hua parvat abhi waha pahunchte pahunchte sham ho gayi thi toh wahi paas gufa mein raat ko aaram kiya ....suryaasta k samay ka adbhut nazaara pura parvat sone jaisa chamk raha tha.....
dusre din jaise hi suryodaya hua toh thodi der k liye phir woh parvat chamkne laga...aur maine pahla kadam raha parvat par , ...ki tabhi hawa tez chale lagi aur charo taraf jaise dhue ka badal ne muzhe gher liya aage ka raasta muzhe dikhna band ho gaya.....abhi mein soch hi raha tha ki kaise aage badu ki tabhi woh badal aur ghana hone laga... ki tabhi mere haath ki angoothi jo Mukhiya ji ne di thi chamakne lagi aur usme se ek tez neele rang ki roshni chamki ........aur dekhte hi dekhte saara dhua jaane kaha gyab ho gaya
phir maine jaise hi agla kadam uthaya
toh aise laga jaise kisi ne muzhe uthakar fek diya......mein phir uthkar aage badne laga .......
toh aayi ek aawaj.......Ruk jaao yaha se aage mat jaao laut jao jaha se aaye ho.....
abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update raat ko
ab tak aapne dekhna R.V.S ne kuch raaj Abhi k saamne khole,
Aur Abhi bhi apni training mein laga hua hai.......
Rimpy k ander dikhi urja ka kya raaz hai ......yeh aage pata chalega
abhi toh Abhi ko bahut jannana hai ...sikhna hai
Abhi tak ki powers dono A1 aur Abhi jaldi isiliye sikh paaya kyu ki woh janm se hi isske ander thi .....( bahut kathin hai dagar panghat ki)
aage raaste mein bahut kathinayia aayengi....
khair ab dekhte hai A1 kaha hai .....
Mahaguru k aashram se nikal kar A1 nikal gaya gandhmadan parvat ki aur
yaha virajte hai Sakal jagat k paalanhaar Bhagwan Badrinath
Abhi apne vayu tatva ki shaki k dwara Yaha tak toh pahuch gaya.....lekin aage ki yaatra usse paidal hi jana tha
kyuki wohi shaktiya hume jeewan mein saath deti hai jo hume kathin parishram se prapt hui ho........
aur Mahaguru ka bhi yahi nirdesh tha,
apni shaktiyo ka prayog tabhi karna jab aur koi raasta na ho....
Gandhmaadan parvat mein Narayan parvat par Bhagwan Badrinath aur chaaro taraf Barf k parvat ...kal..kal behti hui maa alaknanda ....sab kuch itna sunder aur divya tha ki yaha pahunch kar Abhi ko apne bhiter ek nayi urja aur divyata ka anubhav hua...
Waha pahuch kar Garam paani k kund mein snan kiya Aur Phir darshan karke nikal gaya Aage ki yaatra par..
Aage jab mein ..Manda gaon pahucha
kar toh waha bane mitti k ghar dekhe aur sidhe saral log.... kuch log waha aane walo ko khanne pine ki chije de rahe the
( mazedar baat yeh hai ki itni shaktiya hasil karne k baad bhi...hero ka vyavharik gyan shunya tha, usse jab woh Mahaguru se aagya lekar jaane laga tha toh unka bhi iss aur dhyan gaya, ...phir socha chalo bahari logo k sampark mein jab aayega toh apne aap hi sikh jaayega.....)
Abhi ko yeh bhi nahi pata tha ki yeh log khane ki chije aise hi nahi de rahe the bech rahe the....
aage ka haal A1 ki jubaani ...
ab muzhe bhi bhuk lagane lagi toh mein bhi ek jagah pahucha...
aur baithne k liye ek lakdi ka bench dekhkar baith gaya...
waha k log muzhe ghur ghur kar dekh rahe the ....muzhe kuch ajeeb bhi lag raha tha.....ki jab se mein yaha aaya hu aur jaha se bhi jaa raha hu log muzhe aise kyu dekh rahe hai....
maine socha ki chodo apna kaam karte hai.... maine jo admi sab ko khane pine ki chije de raha tha
Maine waha khade aadmi se jo logo ko khanne pine ki chije de rha tha usko bola.....Bhaiya muzhe bhi kuch khanne ko do... meri baat sunkar woh meri taraf ghur kar dekhne laga.....
aur hasne laga..... waha khde log bhi hasne lage ....
kyu bhai kaha se aaye ho pahle yeh toh bataao tumhe dekhkar toh aisa lag raha hai k sidhe mahabharat kaal se yaha aaye ho ...itna kah kar phir hasne laga .......tabhi waha ek bujurg vyakti aaya .....aur usne uss vyakti ko ghur ke dekha ..toh woh chup hogaya..
bujurg (Manda Gaon k Mukhiya)
- kya baat hai shambhu yahi tarika hai tumhara yaha aanewale logo k saath
kya tum bhul gaye hamre gaon ki parampara ko .....aise majak udate ho mehmano ka...
Shambhu - maaf karna Mukhiya ji lekin issne kapde hi .....
Mukhiya - bas chup ho jaao ......phir meri taraf ......aao beta mere saath aao ...
unke beta kahne mein muzhe bahut apnapan lagne laga tih chal diya mein unke saath....
ab saari baat muzhe samaj mein aagayi thi mere kapde wahi aashram k the aur baal bhi bade bade jo yaha k logo se kaafi alg the....
Mukhiya - Kaun ho beta tum ....kisi gaon ya shaher k toh lagte nahi ho,
dekho tum muzhe baata sakte ho ho sakta hai mein tumahri kuch madat kar saku.....
mein - Baba ...kya mein aapko baba kah sakta hu.....
mukhiya - kyu nahi bete jarur
mein - Baba jyada toh mein nahi bata sakta ...lekin itna hi ki mein apne Guru ki aagya se hi ...yaha par aaya hu aur muzhe aage nilkant parvat par jaana hai..
tab tak mukhiya ji ka ghar bhi aagaya tha ...jo purane jammane ka mitti se bana hua tha....
ghar mein pahuch kar unhone muzhe baithne k liye aasan diya......
arre Jaanki (mukhiya ki wife) jara dekho toh kaun aaya hai....aur haa pani aur gudh lete aana....
tabhi ek mahila paani aur gudh lekar waha aayi woh kuch udaas si lag rahi thi...
meine gudh khakar paani piya, ...
..dhnyawad maaji .....meri aawaj sunkar uhone ne meri traf dekha aur thoda muskuraya,.....maine unki aankhon mein ek alag hi udaasi dekhi
Mein - Baba maa ji ko kya hua ....yeh itni udaas kyu lag rahi hai....
Mukhiya ji - beta woh sab baad mein..
pahle tum muh haath dho lo aur apne kapde badal lo.... suno jaanki apne vishu k kapdo mein se kuch kapde le aao toh...ayr kuch khanne ka bhi prabandh ka do
Jaanki ji ne ek nazar mukiya k taraf dekha aur kuch bolna hi chaha rahi thi ki.....
mukhiya - arre aise kya dekh rahi ho jara isse dekho toh yeh bhi hamare vishu ki tarah lag raha hai...
tab unhone muzhe gaur se dekha toh unki aankhien chalak aayi....aur aage badhkar muzhe gale se lagaya ...
haa ji yeh toh kuch kuch hamre bete jaisa hi hi.....mere sir par pyar se haath pherte
hue....sirf isski naak aur aankhien kuch alag hai...aur baal bhi..
itna kahkar woh ander chali gayi
unka sneh paakar meri bhi aankhon mein aansoo aagaye kuch dhundli dhundli si tasveer dikhne lagi jasie koi mere sir par haath pherte hue sula raha hai .....tabhi mukhiya ji k awaaj se mera dhyan tuta.....
unke diye hue kapde meine pahen liye
mukhiya ji - Toh ab batao beta....tum kah rahe the ki tum apne guru ki aagya se aaye ho ....waise kya naam hai tumahare guru ka..
Mein - MAHAGURU YAGNESH
mukhiya ji ne jaise hi naam suna toh unke haath apne aap jud gaye...aur aankhol mein shradha suman aa gaye
Mukhiya --- Kya ....naam ...bataya..MAHAGURU YAGNESH....yani ki tum bhi mere guru ji k shishya ho...
mein - kya aap bhi Mahaguru ji k shishya ho...phir toh aapne unka aashram toh dekha bhi dekha hoga ...
mein wahi se aaya hu
mukhiya - nahi putra mera itna saubhagya kaha jo unka aasram dekh saku....woh toh yaha bahut pahele aaye the jab mein tumahari hi umar ka tha woh yaha kuch din vyas gufa k paas ruke toh tab unhone yogya paatra jankar muzhe Aayruved ka gyan diya tha ..
agar tumhe uhone bheja hai toh jarur koi visheh prayogen hoga.....unhone iss baat ka sanket bhi diya tha
mein - sanket kaisa ...baba
mukhiya - beta unhone muzhe ek anguthi di thi aur kaha tha samay aane par meri yeh amanat koi tumse lene aayega .....phir ander pooja room se angoothi laakar muzhe dete hai
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woh anghuthi mere haath mein aakar chamkne lagi phir sadharan si ho gai
tab tak bhojan tayar ho chuka tha .phir hume bhojan kiya....
mukhiya ji - beta ab thoda aaram kar lo
mein - Mukhiya ji aapke Bete Vishu ka naam toh maine suna hai , lekin woh kahi dikha nahi , kaha hai woh
mukhiya ji (thoda udas hote hue)
beta muzhe kuch dawai baane k liye ek jadi ki jarurat padi thi toh kareeb ek mahine pahle neelkanth parvat ki aur gaya tha tab se lauta nahi hai...
maine usse savdhan bhi kiya tha ki Uss parvat k bhitar na jaaye...kyuki jo bhi ab tak uss parvat par gaya hai woh wapas nahi aaya...
mein - aap chinta na kare mukhiya ji aapka putr aap tak pahuch jaayega yeh mere mann kah raha hai.
phir woh din meine wahi gujara Vyas Gufa ,Bhimpul, aur Saraswati nadi k udgam sthan ka darshan karne k baad so gaya
phir subah 4 baje uthkar apna nitya kram kiya aur Mukhiya ji aur maaji ki aagya lekar chal pada apne lakshya ki taraf...
raaste k sunder najaare dekhkar aise lag raha tha ki swarg ki hi yatra kar raha hu.....aise hi chalte chalte vasudhara pahunch gaya jaha 8 jal ki dharao se niranter sheetal jal bethta rahta hai....kuch der waha vishraam kiya aur chal diya neelkanth parvat ki talhati par bada hi vishal barf se dhaka hua parvat abhi waha pahunchte pahunchte sham ho gayi thi toh wahi paas gufa mein raat ko aaram kiya ....suryaasta k samay ka adbhut nazaara pura parvat sone jaisa chamk raha tha.....
dusre din jaise hi suryodaya hua toh thodi der k liye phir woh parvat chamkne laga...aur maine pahla kadam raha parvat par , ...ki tabhi hawa tez chale lagi aur charo taraf jaise dhue ka badal ne muzhe gher liya aage ka raasta muzhe dikhna band ho gaya.....abhi mein soch hi raha tha ki kaise aage badu ki tabhi woh badal aur ghana hone laga... ki tabhi mere haath ki angoothi jo Mukhiya ji ne di thi chamakne lagi aur usme se ek tez neele rang ki roshni chamki ........aur dekhte hi dekhte saara dhua jaane kaha gyab ho gaya
phir maine jaise hi agla kadam uthaya
toh aise laga jaise kisi ne muzhe uthakar fek diya......mein phir uthkar aage badne laga .......
toh aayi ek aawaj.......Ruk jaao yaha se aage mat jaao laut jao jaha se aaye ho.....
abhi k liye itna hi....
agla update raat ko
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Bahut bahut shukriya Naina ji saath bane rahne k liye...hmm... hero bahot jaldi jaldi sikh raha hain sari cheeje.....
So abhi ke dad ne raaz khol diye uske samne.....
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update.... Great going
Aapke shandar comment k liye bahut bahut dhnyawad ??
naina ji .. hero dono roop.. unhi chijo ko jaldi jaldi sikh raha hai jo powers janm se hi uske ander thi ..jinn powers ko mahaguru ne 14 loko mein chupaya tha unko paane k liye abhi bahut mehnat karni padegi....
haa hero k Dad ne kuch raaz hero ko bataye ...lekin abhi bahut se raaz baaki hai ..Naina
Ritu aur Adira ka raaj...
do roop ka raaj aur sabse bada usska apna bramand k maharakshak hone ka raaz..
Bas aise hi saath banaye rakhe
new update - 20 posted...
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waise gaon walo ka bhi koi dosh nahi..... kapde hi aise pehne hai usne...
I think a1 vishu ko dhund lega....
Ab yeh koun aa gaya..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update... Great going
I think a1 vishu ko dhund lega....
Ab yeh koun aa gaya..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update... Great going