Romance AMAR - KALPANA ( Depth of love )

[The Blue Prince]

macchi...

for the new thread immo bhai..

 

[The Immortal]

Update 2

At Aryan's house

"Good morning uncle , good morning aunty" ek three seater sofe par Aryan ke dad mom aur bich Mai Aryan baithe hue the , aur inke dono taraf Annie aur Ronny baithe the single seater sofe par Aryan ke Ghar mai. Kal ke kahe anusaar Ronny aur Annie aaj Sunday ko Aryan ke Ghar par Aaye hue the , aur samne Aryan ke mom dad ko baithe Dekha toh greetings karte hue baithe gaye ye dono .


"Haan to Aryan ab koi subh mahurat ka wait Kar Raha hai kya , jaldi se aur Jaise bhi tujhe pata hai wo love story suna " thodi der chup rehne ke baad Ronny apni curiosity rok Nahi paya aur usne puch hi liya jiske liye wo log Aaye the.


Kal se hi Annie aur Ronny dono bohat exited the is love story ke baare mai janne ke liye , dono Raat bhar yahi sochte rahe ki Aisa kya is story mai jo Aryan jaise deep thoughts rakhne wale writer ke liye bhi likhna muskil hai , Kuch toh khas hai isme , Jaise taise din bita , raat gujari aur ab Ronny ki sahan sakti jawab de gayi aur usne puch hi liya.


"Actually ye story mai nhi mare dad sunayenge" Aryan ne Apne dad ki taraf dekhte hue Kaha .


Kal saam ko hi Aryan ne Apne dad se baat Kar li thi annual function ke baare aur request ki is love story ko Apne friends ke sath share Karne ki . Aryan ke dad usse bohat jyada pyar karte the aur usme apna bachapan dekhte the , reason ye tha ki wo Apne bachpan ko Kabhi jee hi Nahi paye unhe pata hi nhi tha ki bachapan kitna khubsurt hota hai, unhone Kabhi Kisi cheez ke liye Aryan ko manaa nhi Kiya tha, toh Apne Bache ki is request ko wo bhala Kaise manaa Kar sakte the.


"Ok bachho ab mere bete ne request ki toh mujhe use Pura to Karna hi hai , Aryan ke dad ne Aryan ke baalo ko sehlate hue Kaha .


"Lekin usss pehle ek baat batao …" isse pehle ki Aryan ke dad aage Kuch bolte usse pehle Ronny jhatke se khada hua aur unke pair pakad liye .


"Bas uncle ab aur suspense create mat Karo aur jaldi suru Karo is love story ko , ye Dekho meri heartbeat kitni badhi hui hai " Ronny ki is harkat se sab ek dam chounk gaye aur fir sab ek sath hasne lage .


"Are Mai toh ye keh raha tha ki story First person sunoge ya 3rd person " , Aryan ke dad ne Ronny ko uthate hue Kaha .


"Aap bas suru Kar do uncle " Ronny ne apni seat par baithate hue Kaha .


"Theek hai but story suru Karne se pehle ek baat dhyan se suno " Aryan ke dad ne fir bolna suru Kiya , aur Ronny ne apna sir pit liya .


"Story ko samajhna hai toh dhyan se sun aur bich Mai mat boliyo Kuch " ye baat Aryan ne Kahi jab Ronny ko apna sir pit-te hue Dekha .


"Agar do Dil Milne ke liye bane hai , toh chahe Kitna bhi lamba intezaar kyu na ho ,chahe kitni bhi lambi doori kyu na ho , wo koi mayne nahi rakhte , humne bhale hi tay Kar liya ho , hum apni zindgi kiske sath bitayenge, lekin asal Mai hum apni zindgi jiske sath bitane wale hai , uska faisla koi taqdeer nhi Karti , ye hota hai Pure Love Jise log Magic Bolte hai and this is something unforgettable" ye bolne ke baad Aryan ke dad ne story suna-ni suru ki .

 

[The Immortal]

Nice waiting for next update

Thanx survivor Bhai
Update posted , thoda chhota update hai adjust Kar Lena , kal se bade update milenge .

 

[The Immortal]

Brilliant update with awesome writing skill......

Sukriya Naina ji
Update posted . Thoda chhota hai update , adjust Kar Lena , kal bade update dunga with some new flavour.

 

[The Immortal]

Isame unki pahli love story yaadast jaane se pahle ka bhi detail me batana,
Intzaar hai agale update ka

Dost agar story ke use part ko dikhaya toh story Ka main motive Nahi dikhega but kosis karunga jitna cover ho sakega utna jarur likhunga .

 

[The Immortal]

सबसे पहले तो बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया इमोर्टल भाई कि आपने हम चंद दोस्तों के आग्रह पर अपनी इस कहानी को शुरू किया।

जैसा कि मैने उस समय भी कहा था कि ये कहानी अगर विस्तार से लिखी जाएगी तो बेहतरीन कहानियों में से एक होगी। ख़ैर, अब आपने इसे उसी तरह शुरू किया है तो ये खुशी की बात है हम सब के लिए।

इमोर्टल भाई, कहानी शुरू करने के लिए बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया और आपको बहुत बहुत बॅधाई। आशा करता हूॅ कि इस कहानी के प्रति जिस तरह की छवि मेरे ज़हन में बनी थी ये कहानी ठीक वैसी ही मेरे तसव्वुर से निकल कर बाहर आएगी।

भाई, कहानी का अपडेट पढ़ने के बाद ही अपनी प्रतिक्रिया दूॅगा।

Kosis Puri rahegi shubham Bhai ki is Baar pehle se better likhu . Thanks for coming.

 

[The Immortal]

Nice update
Waiting for next

Update posted dear .
Thoda chhota hai update , adjust Kar Lena thoda , kal se bade update dunga .

 

[The Immortal]

I have read your story in the competition but it is a longer version of it. Some stories are actually such that it is very difficult to describe in words. The first update of the story was very good. Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...

Sukriya Aakash Bhai apke is bahumulya review ke liye .
Update posted . Thoda chhota hai adjust Kar Lena , kal se bade update dunga with new flavour.

 

[The Immortal]

Superb update bro

Thank you jutt bro .
Update posted.

 

[The Immortal]

bhai for new story

Thank you Gaavthi Bhai .
Update posted, thoda chhota hai update adjust Kar Lena kal se bade update dunga .