Romance BADLA

[Swaraj]

bhai story me bahot saare changes hai,
aage aane par poore kahani ka rukh hi badal jayega

Bohut logo ne story padhi hui hai bro,bohut logo ne nahi padhi
Isliye thoda twist de raha hoon.isse jisne padhi hui hai use bhi halka suspense milega aur kuch naya padhne ko milega

 

[Naina]

Itni achhi story but title itni dangerous... Why.... Appke story ke title dekhte hi South Indian film ki hi yaad ati hai... romantic story hai sir ji pyara sa naam dijiye... Baki writer sahab ki marji

 

[Swaraj]

Itni achhi story but title itni dangerous... Why.... Appke story ke title dekhte hi South Indian film ki hi yaad ati hai... romantic story hai sir ji pyara sa naam dijiye... Baki writer sahab ki marji

Ek pyare se review ke liye thanks madam
Is Story ka naam "badla"kyun hai wo aapko last me pata chalega
Revenge ya badla koi apne dil me aise paal ke rakhta ye aapko last me pata chal jaayega
Jab wo shaks saamne aayega
Keep reading and supporting

 

[Naina]

Arre

Ek pyare se review ke liye thanks madam
Is Story ka naam "badla"kyun hai wo aapko last me pata chalega
Revenge ya badla koi apne dil me aise paal ke rakhta ye aapko last me pata chal jaayega
Jab wo shaks saamne aayega
Keep reading and supporting

Arre Uffff ap log wirters bhi na kuch jyada hi wo hote ho... Har bat me suspense... Uffff yal.... Ab Der na kijie jaldi jaldi se 5-6 updates de dijiye....

 

[Mbindas]

Bhai ab aap bata hi dijiye ki or kitne new cherecter samne ayenge ab ek or lady aa gayi or us bechari ki entry bhi accident ke sath hi kardi.
Anyways update bohot achchha hai.

 

[RAAZ]

"sharon mujhe bohut dar lag raha hai"nivedita boli

"Aap bhi na bhabhi.vishal bhaiyya se to badi lad rahi thi,ab kya ho gaya??"sharon boli

"Wo baat alag thi,lekin tanya ko samjhana ....."sharon ne nivedita ko rok diya.

Tanya apna job khatam kar shift se wapas ja rahi thi

"Tanya wait."sharon chillai
Tanya ruki aur nivedita aur sharon ki aur dekhti rahi
Do din pehle yahi dono avinash ki news laye the

"Dekho mujhe pata hai aapke dimag Me kya chal raha ,mai sharon avinash bhaiyya ke bhai dhruv ki wife hoon,aur ye avinash bhaiyya ke bade bhai vishal bhaiyya ki wife hai"sharon boli

"Tanya dekho hame lagta hai avinash bhi tumhe utna chahte hai jitna ki tum.lekin problem ye hai ki wo ab kisi pe bharosa nahi karta.isliye tumhe ek chota sa natak karna hai"nivedita boli

"Dekhiye mujhe pata hai ki aap log meri fikar kar rahe hai,lekin trust me mai unka pyaar pana chahti hoon taras nahi,mai bechari nahi hoon,meri galti yahi thi ki mai ek galat aadmi se pyaar kar baithi.lekin wo pyaar nahi tha.jab sachhe pyaar ka ehsaas hua tab tak avinash mujhse nafrat karne lage the"tanya bol

"Wahi to,dekho tanya kuch galat fehmi ke wajah se mere aur vishal ke rishte toot gaye the,wo to bhala ho is bachhi ka ki mujhe mera pyaar wapas mil gaya,lekin tum wo galti mat karna"nivedita boli

Tanya chup ho gayi sunkar

"Tanya di aapko bas natak karna hai pyaar ka"sharon boli

"Lekin kisse sharon??"tanya ne poochha

Sab ek doosre ka muh dekhne laga

Tabhi ek car aakar saamne ruki ,aur darwaza kholne krish bahar nikla

"Bhabhi aap log bhi pata nahi kahan kahan ghoomti rehti hai,vishal bhaiyya ne ghar me ek satsang rakha hai.ghar shanti ke liye jaldi chaliye"krish bola

"Mil gaya tanya di aapka jhoota aashiq"sharon boli
To nivedita khilkhilakar has padi
Tanya bhi hasne lagi muh ghuma kar

Krish dono haath kamar par rakhe sab ko dekhta raha lekin use samajh me kuch bhi nahi a raha tha

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"Satsang ke baad hum kahan ja rahe hai dhruv??"sharon ne poochha

"Are bhai zamana ho gaye italian khaye hue,socha tumhe le chalun"dhruv haste hue bola

"Acha ji??aur wo kis khushi me janab??"sharon ne poochha

"Itni saari khushiyan ek saath laayi ho.isliye ek Shaam romantic italy ke naam"dhruv bola aur sharon ki aur jaane laga kiss karne

"Ye kya ho raha hai.mister??"sharon ne poochha

"Are bhai apni GF ko kiss hi to kar raha hoon"dhruv bola

"Aur is chakkar me fir waisa haadsa na ho jaaye jisme karan mila tha hame"sharon boli

Thodi der ke liye dono chup ho gaye

"Doctor ne kaha hai ki kuch keh nahi sakte kab hosh aayega,us harami gaurav ka kuch pata nahi.kambakht kahi fir tum par hamla na kar de.tum agar us din na bachati to usko mai maar deta "dhruv bola

"Relax babu,usko maarte to tumhe jail hoti ,aur fir mera kya hota??ab ye sab chodo aur ek pyaari si kiss ke liye taiyyar ho ja.......OH GOD DHRUV"sharon chilla uthi

BHADAAAAAAMMMMMM

do car ki zabardast takkar.

"Sharon tum thik to ho na??"dhruv ne poochha.uske sar se khoon nikal raha tha

"H haan dhruv,galti hamari nahi car driver ki thi,chalo dekhte hai ki thik hai ya nahi"sharon boli

Dhruv aur sharon car ke saamne aaye to ulti padi hui car ke darwaze ko khola dhruv ne

"Are??ye to koi mahila hai,indian lagti hai sharon,zinda hai chalo hospital le chalein"dhruv bola

48 varshiya mahila ki aankhen band thi aur muh aur naak se khoon nikal raha tha

Wow har baar khushiya aati hain magar sath me ek aur jhatka bhi de jaati hain aur is baar bhi yahi hua hain ab yah mahila kaun hain kia asar dale gi woh inki zindagiyo per.

 

[Swaraj]

Bhai ab aap bata hi dijiye ki or kitne new cherecter samne ayenge ab ek or lady aa gayi or us bechari ki entry bhi accident ke sath hi kardi.
Anyways update bohot achchha hai.

Dost yahi to maza hai story ka
Agar mai sab ko pehle se hi introduce karwata to kya aapko jhatka lagta??
Suspense rehte???
Mere har story me kabhi bhi na mai khud story ka kirdar banta hoon,na mere story me kirdaaro ka introduction hota hai aur na hi isme sex ya adult content hota hai
Enjoy kijiye aur thrilled rahiye
Keep supporting

 

[Swaraj]

Wow har baar khushiya aati hain magar sath me ek aur jhatka bhi de jaati hain aur is baar bhi yahi hua hain ab yah mahila kaun hain kia asar dale gi woh inki zindagiyo per.

Ek pyare se review ke liye thanks bro
Haan kirdaar to naya add hua hai.wo kirdaar kitna important hai aane wale waqt me pata chalega
Thanks for the support

 

[TAKSHAK]

ye kahani bhi bahut shandar hai.... isme bhi to update dalte chalo...

 

[Swaraj]

ye kahani bhi bahut shandar hai.... isme bhi to update dalte chalo...

Zaroor bhai