Incest Badshah ~ A Tale Of Useless Boy

[Neerav]

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komal jab surya ke saamne pohnchi.. surya gufa se bahar pathar ki bani ek chair par betha tha. komal rani ko apne karib paya. to nazar utha kar usay dekha. jaise hi surya ki nazar komal rani padi. wo ek jhatke me uth khada hua.. uska moh hairat se khula rah gaya ha.

wahin komal rani khud me simatne lagi.. komal rani ke sath aai ladkiyan ek dusri ko dekh khilkhila kar hasti hui wahan se jane lagi..

surya -- komal ji ye aap hi han.. maa kasam.. aap aise lag rahi han.. jaise akash se apsara dharti par utar aai ho.

surya kuchh der komal rani ka deedar karne ke bad khud par kabu pate hue komal rani se bola tha.. komal rani maare sharam ke gadhi ja rahi thi. woh dhire se boli

komal rani -- maine bohut mana kia.. lekin wo.. kisi ne meri ek nahi suni.. aur mujhe meri ichha anusar youn bana dia..

surya komal rani ko pairon se lekar upar tak dekhne laga.. komal rani kisi princess ke jaise dress me thi.. bada hi sundr aur chamakta hua light blue colout ka dress usne pahn rakha tha.. balon ko badi khubsoorti ke sath sanwara gaya tha.. upar se dunya ke anmol patharon se bana bada hi sundr necklace uske gale me tha.. sar par ek taj ke jaise heeron jada jaisa kuchh pahn rakha tha.. wahan pahadon me paye jane walun bohut hi sundr phoolon se banaye gaye gajre komal rani ki gori chitti kalaiyan me apni puri aab o taab ke sath maujud the..

surya ko apni saans rukti hui mahsus hone lagi.. wahin komal rani apni baat ka jawab na pa kar surya ko dekhne lagi. jaise hi uski nazar surya par padi. ghabra kar usne apni palken jhuka leen. uska dil zor zor se dhak dhak karne laga.. surya usay aise aashiqana andaz me dekh raha tha. komal rani taab na laa pai.. woh surya ki ankhon me nahi dekh saki.. sharam itni usay aane lagi.. sar utha pane ki kshamta kho bethi.. wo sharam se larzne lagi..

kahan woh barson apne parivar ke sath rahi thi. parivar ke khatam hone ke bad kothi me ek pheeki zindagi guzarti aai thi.. kahan kuchh hi ghanton me uska sab kuchh badal kar rah gaya tha.. woh surya ko dekh, uski baaten sun uspar bharosa karti uske sath aa gai thi.. surya ne uske liye aisi chahat aur iradon ka izhaar kia tha. chahat ko nakaar iradon ko jaan woh pure mann se uske sath in pahadon me chali aai thi.. uske dil ko koi rog nahi tha.. apni maa ke missing hone, apne parivar khatam hone ke bad dil me feelings jaisa uske andr kuchh rah hi nahi gaya tha..

lekin ab.. ab to surya ki jageer me thi woh.. jahan uska purana koi jaanne wala nahi tha. wahan thi.. jahan ka surya king tha.. aur sab ki nazron me woh is chhoti si saltanat ki queen....

surya ki uske liye chahat.. fir aisa banna sanwarna aur ab surya ka usay prem ki aisi shiddat ke sath taadna.. komal rani dil ki dhadkano me hazaron alag tarah ke saaz bajne lage.. kuch bhi tha. woh surya ki aisi nazron ko face nahi kar pa rahi thi... woh ladkhaane lagi.. woh girti.. usse pahle hi surya ne jaldi se usay thaam lia.. komal rani ko pathar ki seat par bitha kar khud side khada uske kadmon me beth gaya..

surya madhoshi me bola -- mai dunya walun ki nazar me badshah hon. ek aisa insan hon. jiski ankhon me dekh pana. uska saamna kar pana ksii ke liye mumkin nahi hai. lekin.. maa kasam.. mai aapko dekhne ki kashamta khud me nahi pata.. bhagwan ne aap ke jaisi koi bhi nahi banai.. itni sundr. itni haseen.. aisi saaf suthri.. nahi koi nahi ho sakti.. dunya me koi hai to woh aap han.. mai khush naseeb hon. bhagwan ne aap ko mere liye banaya..... aapki chahat mere dil me paida ki.

surya jazbat me dooba komal rani ka ek hath thaam gaya.. lekin komal rani kasmati hui door ladkiyon ko dekh apna hath chhudwa gai.. dhire se boli.. surya. plz surya.. hosh me aao.. dekho to sab dekh rahi han... mujhe ajib lag raha hai... plz uth jaao..

surya hosh me aaya.. khud ko komal ke pairon me dekh woh idhar udhar dekhne laga.. fir ek lambi gahri saans lekar chhodta hua bola..

surya -- sorry.. mai.. bahak gaya tha.. lekin apne shabdo par afsos ka izhaar nahi karunga.. ye shabd nahi the. mere dil ki sada the. sach kahta hon komal ji.. aap hi aap han meri zindagi me... lekin maine jo wada aap se kia tha. mai us par hamesha kayam rahunga.. mai lagi se khud ko nahi rok sakta.. haan par mai us din ka bechaini se intezar karta rahunga.. jab aap ke dil ki dhadkano me mai hi mai honga

komal dhire se -- lekin abhi mere dil ki dhadkano me tum nahi ho. plz uth jaao. mujhe ajib lag raha ha

surya uth khada hua.. wahan ek nahi do pathar ki chair thee.. lekin surya dusri par nahi betha. khada hi raha.. khamosh raha.. komal uske kuchh aur bolne ka intezar karti rahi. jab surya nahi bola to sar utha kar surya ko dekhne lagi.. surya sar jhukaye sochon me gum usay dikha..

komal rani -- surya.. ye tumhari rajdhani ha. tum khade ho mai bethi hon. le sahi nahi hai.. ya to tum bhi beth jaao. ya fir mai khadi ho jati hon

komal uth kar khadi hone lagi. surya jhat se bol pada -- nahi.. komal rani ji.. aap bethiye.. mai ab tak kuchh zayada hi kar chuka hon.. bina aap ki permission ke aap ke barabar beth nahi sakta..

komal muskura padi -- kyaa khayalon me gum yehi tum soch rahe the

surya -- nahi...

komal -- fir

surya dusri chair par bethta hua firse komal ko nihaarta hua bola -- woh.. mai ab tak aapke deedar ke nashe se nikal nahi paya hon

komal rani firse ghabra kar side dekhne lagi

komal rani -- tum bar bar ek si baaten kyu kiye ja rahe ho surya

surya -- kyaa karun.. barson aap se door raha hon. lekin ek pal ke liye bhi aap meri ankhon se ojhal nahi hui han. apka chahra kabhi meri ankhon se kabhi hata hi nahi. dil ki dhadkano me aap ke kothi me sune sare shabd aaj bhi roz e roshan ki tarah goonj rahe han..

komal rani badbadai.. kaise koi kisi ko itni shiddat se chah sakta hai

surya -- mai

komal rani firse chaunki. wo dhire se badbadai thi.. lekin surya ne sun lia tha.. komal ka moh aise ho gaya tha.. jaise uski chori pakdi gai ho

surya -- mai sargoshiyon me ki gai baaten bhi sun leta hon..

komal rani hairat se surya ko dekhne lagi... aisa kaise ho sakta ha

surya dhire se muskuraya -- meri zaat me bohut kuchh aisa hai.. aap vishwas nahi kar paayengi..

komal rani -- for example

surya -- aap se mai kuchh bhi kaise chhupa sakta hon.. bata dunga.. balki sab kuchh dikha dunga.. woh jo maine sari dunya se chhupa kar rakha hai.. aap to mere dil ki ek ek dhadkan me hann. kaise kuchh bhi aapse chhupa kar rakh sakta hon..

komal rani - to bata do na

komal rani badi ada se boli thi. aisa khud se bol gai thi. ab usne khud par dhayan dia. to hadbada kar chahra fer gai.. woh khud me sochne lagi. wo kyu surya se aise bol gai. woh kisi ke saamne aise to nahi aaya karti..

surya -- aap abhi aai han.. pahle aap ko nazuk si doll se pathar me tarasha jayega.. sath hi sath aap sab kuchh janti bhi jaayengi..

komal rani -- kab.. kab mujhe moam se pathar bana rahe ho..

surya -- komal ji aap mallika han.. mere dil ki bhi.. aur yahan maujud sabhi ki.. jab bhi aap ka hukam hoga.. agya ka palan shuru ho jayega..

komal rani surya ko ghoor kar dekhne lagi.. surya samjh rha tha. woh zayada komal ko dekhega.. to komal usay kam dekhegi.. wo khul kar na to bol payegi.. aur hi usay dekh payegi.. isliye surya ab idhar udhar dekh kar baat kar raha tha..

komal rani surya ko dekhti rahi.. uski nazar gahri hoti chali gai.. surya ka mardana chahra.. usay bohut bhaa rha tha. woh usse 5 baras chhota tha.. lekin woh khud ko usse chhota smajh rahi thi.. halat ke sard o garam ne surya ko umar se bohut bada bana dia tha..

komal rani - surya... mai yahan a gai hon to.. jab chahu moam se pathar me dhalna shuru ho jaaongi.. lekin maine aj se pahle tumpar kabhi dhayan nahi dia.. tum surya ho. dadi maa raj laxmi ke pote ho.. mai tumhare bare me isse zayada kuchh nahi janti.. mai tumhe shuru se jaanna chahti hon. tab se janna chahti hon. jab tum is dunya me aaye the.. hamare paas samay hi samay ha.. tum batao apne baare me..

komal rani ki baat sunkar surya ke chahre par jo pahle regular ek chamak thi. khushi ki tah ne chahre ke ek naqsh ko dhanp rakha tha.. komal rani ne surya ko uska guzara kal yaad karne ko kaha to surya ke chahre ke sare rang pheeke padne lage..

komal rani -- sorry maine tumhare purane zakham kured daale. kasam se mera aisa koi irada nahi tha..

surya ne komal ko dekha.. fir ankhen band karta hua khud ko relax karta.. ankhen khol gaya.. komal rani ne dekha.. kitni jaldi surya ne apni ankhon ke bhavo par kabu pa lia tha.. wo aur bhi hairan hui.. bhala itni jaldi koi khud par kaise kabu pa sakta hai


surya -- aap mujhse han ki nahi.. lekin mere seene me dhadak rahe dil ki har ek dhadkan aap ke dum se hai.. maine pahle bhi kaha tha. mai dunya se khud ko chhupa sakta hon. lekin aap se nahi.. mai to apna guzra ek ek lamha aapko khul kar bataonga.. sahi bhi aur galat bhi..

komal rani -- galat bhi.. matlab?

surya -- kon hai dunya me.. jisse sab kuchh theek hi hua ho.. har insan zindagi me kuch sahi karta hai kuchh galat... lekin matlab parast log dunya walun ke saamne sahi bayan karte han.. galat ko chhupa jate han.. lekin aap mere dil ki rani ho. mere sab sahi galat ka aap ko pata hona chahiye.. mai apna galat chhupa kar kabhi aap ko pa nahi sakunga.. aur aap ko pana meri zindagi ki sabse badi aarzo ha. kahen to mere jeene ki aarzo hi aapko pana hai.. ek baar aap ko pa lia.. fir maut bhi aa jaaye to koi gham nahi..

komal rani ne hath badha kar jhat se surya ke moh par rakh dia -- maren aap ke dushman.. fir kabhi mere saamne marne ki baat mat karna..

surya apne honto par komal rani ke narm hath ko pa kar firse madhosh hone laga tha. uski rag rag me nashe utarne laga tha.. surya ki ankhen band hoti chali gai.. komal rani ne pahle to dhayan nahi dia. jab dia to jhat se apna hath hata gai.. usay ajib si jalan ka ahsas apne hath me hone laga tha. surya ke garm honto ka sparsh jaise uske hath ki unglion se hota hua uske sharir me daudne laga. komal apne andr aise ahsas ke janam lete hi ghabra gai..

woh hairan thi. kitne kam samay me uske andr hulchal si machne lagi thi.. woh aisi ladki to nahi thi..

kuch der ki khamoshi ke bad komal rani ne darte darte surya ko dekha.. dekha to paya surya upar aakash me door talak dekh raha tha..

surya fir khawab ki si halat me bola -- jab mera janam hua to mai bhi parivar ke dusre bachhon ki tarah khush naseeb tha. dunya me sabse pahla sparsh jo maine paya.. wo sparsh maa ka tha.. dunya me sabse pahle kisi ko jana to woh maa thi..

lekin.....

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[Neni]

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surya fir khawab ki si halat me bola -- jab mera janam hua to mai bhi parivar ke dusre bachhon ki tarah khush naseeb tha. dunya me sabse pahla sparsh jo maine paya.. wo sparsh maa ka tha.. dunya me sabse pahle kisi ko jana to woh maa thi..

lekin.....


komal bade dhayan se surya ke bujhe hue chahre ko dekh rahi thi. soch rahi thi. kitna chamakdar chahra ha surya ka. lekin kaise bujh kar rah gaya ha. komal bade dhayan se surya ki jeevan kahani sun rahi thi.. surya "lekin" par a kar ruk gaya ha. jaise purani yaadon me doob gaya ho.. kamol rani ne surya ko nahi chhed. surya ko khud se apne hisab se apni kahani sunane ka moka dia..

surya ne sar utha kar komal ko nahi dekha. aise hi bola -- maa shabd aisa ha.. zuban par aaye to moh me mithas khul jati ha. dunya me koi shabd maa shabd se badhkar meetha nahi hai.. koi rishta maa ke rishte se badhkar nahi hai. koi ahsas maa ki mamta ke ahsas se badhkar nahi hai. mai maa ki aaghosh me tab rak raha. jab tak maa mujhe doodh pilati rahi. jaise hi maa ka doodh thama. mere liye maa ke doodh ke bad dusra doodh aur aise hi meri umar ke bachon ko khilai jane wali foods ka intezam kar dia gaya.. ye sab normal ha. har bachha maa ke doodh ke bad upare doodh aur dusri chizon ki orr chal padta ha. fir jaise jaise woh bada hota ha. uski zindagi me aur bohut kuchh si chizen shamil hone lagti ha..

dunya ke har bachhe ki tarah mere sath bhi hua.. lekin fir mere sath jo hua. wo dunya me bhi kai bachhon ke sath hota ha.. aur un bachhon ki qismat ka haal acha nahi hoa karta.. mere nasib bhi dunya ke un bachhon jaise ho gaye.. jo dunya me thode se hi the.. woh bachhey maa ke doodh ke bad jin bachhon se unki maaen door ho jaya karti han..

mai koi iklota nahi tha.. mai koi special beta nahi tha.. mujhse pahle bhi kai bete the mere maa ke. meri bahne bhi thi.. maa kis kis par dhayan deti.. aisa agar maa se poochaa jaaye to maa zarur aisa hi jawab deti.. lekin jab maa ne mujhpar kam aur dusre paanchon par apna dhayan badha dia to main jaise paraya ho gaya.. mai chhota tha.. aur sab bade the... isliye maa par unki zimmedari zayada thi. yahan maa galat bhi nahi thi.. shayad mujhse pahle mere bhai bahno ke sath bhi maa ne aisa hi kia tha... ek ke bad dusre aane wale ko doodh pilaya.. uska doodh chhoota to bade wale par dhayan badha dia.. kyunki woh bada ho raha tha.. usay samjhane aur dunya ki seekh dene ki zayada zarurat padti thi.. har maa aisa karti ha. so meri maa bhi aisa karne par majbur thi.

sab routine ke hisab se chal raha tha.. mai maa ke pass kam aur maid ke paas zayada rahne laga. maid ke bad mai dusre naukaron ke hathu me rahne laga. mai ajib tha. pata nahi dene wale ne mujhe kaisi surat thi. mere apne mujhse kam aur meri hi kothi ke naukar zayada pyar karne lage.

samay guzarta raha aur fir mai naukaron ke karib aur karib hota chala gaya. mai bhale hi maa ki god me nahi tha. lekin tha to maa ki nazron ke saamne. din me kai kai bar mujhe dekh leti thi. youn maa relax raha karti..

main panch saal ka hua.. tab sabne jaan lia.. mai mand buddhi hon. mere andr kashish ki kami hai.. aksar dekhne me ye aata ha.. un bachhon ko zayada pyar kia jata ha. jo roz nayi nayi harkaten karte han, shararten karte han. naye naye shabd moh se nikal apne parivar walun ko hasate han. lekin mai aisa nahi tha..

mai aisa nahi tha.. mere liye sabko chinta honi chahiye thi.. lekin maine pahle hi kaha aapse komal ji. mere ilawa bhi kai the.. maa aur sabke liye woh zaydada payare ho gaye the. wo padhne lage the. achi achi baaten karne lage the. unke andr parivarik rakh rakhao tha. baat karne ka dhang unke andr aa raha tha. mai shant bacha tha.

lekin koi nahi janta tha. mere chahre par bhav bhale hi nahi hua karte the. lekin mere andr vichar zarur janam lia karte the.

padhai me mera dimag kam nahi karta tha. pahle mujhe school me dakhal karwaya gaya.. lekin mere palle kuchh nahi pada.. mujhe doctor ko dikhaya gyaa. pata chala mai aisa dimag rakhta hon.. mere jaise dimag wale ke sath dimag khapaya to ja sakta ha. lekin usay zayada samjhaya nahi ja sakta.

youn mera school bhi band ho gaya. tab mujhe kothi me jaise azad chhod diya gaya. chahiye to ye tha. mujhse tawajju badha di jaati. mere liye desh bhar ke doctoro se meetings ki jaati. paise ki konsi kami thi.. lekin nahi.. sabne jaise ye maan lia.. mai ek bekaar purza hon.. kabhi samay ne mujhe kuchh daan karna hoga to kar dega..


maa bohut busy ho gai thi. bachhon ko sambhalna.. fr itni badi kothi ko sambhlna. dada ji the. woh apne maamlat me uljhe rahte the. papa aur chacha business me lujhe hue the. mere bhai, bahne aur chacha ke bachhe sab padh likh rahe the. main mand buddhi tha. unke kisi kam ka nahi tha. wo mujhse na to dosto jaisi baaten kar sakte the. na mujhse padhai ke silsilay me salah mashwara kar sakte the.

mai unki mahfil ka ladka nahi tha.. mere bhai bahno ne bhi mujhe nazar andaz karna shuru kar dia....

mai naukaron ka hokar rah gaya.. dhire dhire hi sahi lekin mujhe dunya ki samjh aane lagi. kisi baat ki samjh agar meri umar ke vyakti ko turant lag jaya karti thi to mujhe der se samjh me aati thi.. is sab me mera koi kasoor nahi tha.. main paida hi aise hua tha.. banane wale ne mujhe banaya tha. mai khud se ban kar dunya me nahi aaya tha. mai apne bhai bahno jaisa nahi tha. to isme mera koi kasoor nahi tha.

sab bethe baaten kar rahe hote. aise me mai chal kar maa ke paas ja pohnchta. maa ek nazar mujhe dekh sabse baaton me lag jaya karti. mai maa ke karib jata. kabhi maa ki god me bethta. to maa mere sar ke balon me hath chalane lagti.

kabhi mere bhai bahn bethe mastiyan kar rahe hote.. aise me mai maa ke paas jata aur agar maa ke paas mera koi bhai ya bahn hoti to maa mujhse kahti

maa -- surya tu apni didi ke paas ja

mai payal didi ke paas jata.. wo kahti -- kitna boring ha maa mera ye wala bhai.. surya tum chhoti ke paas jao.. mai chhoti didi priya ko dekhta. wo reserve rahne wali ladki thi..

priya -- nahi nahi mere pass na aana. aaj tum kitne gande ho rahe ho.

aise me kabhi kisi ne ye nahi kaha.. surya tum meri god me aa jaao. maa to maa dadi aur sab bhi mujhe aise hi haste hue door kar dia karte.. mai ronqi bachha nahi tha. kisi ki god me jata bhi to gum sum betha rah jata. aur gum sum bachhe kam hi kisi ko payare hua karte han

meri jaga koi aur hota to ro ro kar zid karke apne liye pyar pane lagta. lekin mai rone wala bachha nahi tha. sab ko sunta dekh wahan se chal padta.. tab bhi koi ye nahi kahta tha.. arre surya tum kahan ja rahe ho. idhar aao mere pass...

ye us samay ki baaten ha. jab maine attitude par dhayan dena nahi seekha tha. ye baaten meri memory me save rah gai thi. mujhe gila bhi nahi karna aata tha. pyar pana to mai seekh hi nahi saka tha. maid ya naukraniyan mujhe pyar deti thi. aur mai khush raha karta tha.. aise hi pyar ki chah mere mann me maa dadi aur apnu ke liye thi. lekin mai ziddi nahi tha..

mere dusre bhai aksar maa ki god me sar rakh kar apni daily ki baaten bataya karte. aur maa unki baaten sunkar khub hasa karti. unhe khub pyar dia karti.. mere andr aisi koi skill nahi thi.. mai kaise maa ko hasaya karta. agar aisa hota to maa bhi mujhe sun has dia karti aur mujhe pyar dia karti.

fir mera uthna bethna aur sona jaagna zayada tar naukaron ke gharon me hone laga..

ek baar maa ko main nahi dikha.. maa ne mujhe talash kia.. mai nahi mila to naukaron se kah kar mujhe talash karwaya.. ye maa ki woh mohabbat thi mere liye. jo ek bachhe ke dikhai na dene par umad aaya karti thi..

baad me talash karwane par maa ko pata chala. mai ek naukarani ki ghar me so gaya tha.. maa ko pata chala.. mai surakshit hon. isi kothi me hon.. maa santusht ho gai. maa ne tab narazgi ka izhaar nahi kia.. ye nahi kaha. arre kothi ka beta hokar naukaron ke ghar me kyu so raha ha.

ye pahli bar tha. tab maa sakhti karti aur mujhe naukaron ke gharon me sone se tok deti to shayad samay badal jata. mai wo na ban pata jo bad me ban gaya tha....

mai aaye din naukaron ke gharon me sone laga. sab ke liye mai maalikon ka beta tha. aur naukron ke liye ye badi baat thi. unke maalik ka beta unke ghar me so raha ho.. youn mere liye mere parivar me jaisi chahat ne janam nahi lia tha. naukron ke dilon me woh chahat mere liye janam lene lagi..

mai 8 saal ka hua.. tab mai apnu se bohut door ho gaya tha.. naukron ke karib ho gaya tha. aisa nahi tha. mai maa ya sab ke paas nahi jaya karta tha.. jata tha. lekin meri value aur bhi kam ho gai thi. mera bada bhai vijay ladkpan me dakhal ho chuka tha. uske shauk dekhne wale the. wo kothi ki boundry me hi rifle ki trainning karne laga.. aapne dekha hi hoga komal ji.. kothi kai acre ke area ke gird pheli hui hai. aise me kai roads banaye gaye han gadiyon ke aane jaane ke liye.. vijay un roads par bike chalata.. stunt marta..

maa aur sab usay dekh door se hi khushi ka izhaar karte.. vijay ke bad fir dusre bhai bahno ne bhi bike chalana shuru kar di. chacha ke beton ne bhi apne apne shauk shuru kar diye...


aise hi ek bar vijay ke kuchh dost usse milne aaye.. mai ek mali ke sath khada tha..

vijay -- oye surya idhar aa

mere bhai kabhi kabhi hi mujhe bulaya karte the.. mai bhagam bhag unke pass jaya karta tha..

mai -- ji bhaiya

vijay jo mujhse kuch kahne wala tha.. hasne laga. uske dost usay hasta dekh hasne lage. vijay ke andr rakh rakho bohut tha.. wo mere kandhe par hath maarta hasta hua apne dosto se bola

vijay -- ye mera bhai hai surya.. lekin nira buddhu ha.. chal surya bhaag kar woh uthaa ke laa

vijay ne apne dosto ko dikhane ke liye door padi ek plastic ki kursi utha kar lane ko kaha tha.. mai zayada na soch kar wahan se bhaga aur kursi utha laya.. vijay mera bhai tha. mai is kothi me uske jaisa hi power rakhne wala beta tha. vijay chair kisi naukar se bhi mangwa sakta tha. lekin usne apne dosto ko dikhane ke liye mujhe kursi laane ko bhej dia. so mai wo kursi uthaa laya. ek koi khas baat nahi thi. lekin vijay apni soch ke anusar mujhe useless samjhta hua apne dosto ko bhi samjha raha tha..

mai kursi le aaya..

vijay -- arre.. is ek kursi ka kyaa karna ha. mai aur mere kitne dost han. ja ja ke aur kursiyan utha laa.. mai to bas awen hi tha. bhagam bhag ek ek karke kuriyan utha lata.. ek naukar ne vijay se kaha. wo apne sath dusre naukaron ko sath mila kar kursiyan le aata ha.. lekin vijay ne usay jhidak dia..

maalik tha. maalik bankar rahne ke gur uske andr aa rahe the. naukron ko jhaad pilane laga. uske dosto me uski value badh rahi thi. wo kyu peeche rahta..

mai aisa nahi tha. mujhe unki baaton par, unke kahe kamon par gusa aata.. mujhe rona nahi ata tha. to gusa bhi nahi aata tha..

aise hi vijay ko dekh baki sare bhai bahno ne mujhse aise hi apne friends ke saamne dheron kam karwane shuru kar diye.. payal didi ke shauk khas ladkiyon wale the. wo bhi vijay ki tarah guns chalana seekhne lagi. wahan ek instrucre payal didi ke liye hire kiya gaya. didi chhoti umar me hi usse karate ki training lene lagi.. aur mai aise me payal didi ke order ke anusar usse karib rahta..


samay guzra. payal didi school trip par kahin bahar gai. jab wo laut kar aai to badi pyari dikh rahi thi.. bohut dino bad laut kar aai thi. uske sath uski friends bhi hamari kothi me aai thi.

ab mere andr apne bhai bahno ke liye pyar badhne laga tha.. mai bhagam bhag payal didi ki orr badha.. karib jate hi maine didi ko hug kar lia. mai bhul gaya tha mai pahle mali ke sath mil podo ko pani de raha tha. mere kapde geele the. aise me didi ke kapde geele ho gaye..

tab pahli baar payal didi ne mere moh par ek zor ka chanta maar dia. ye pahla aisa moka tha.. jab mere parivar me se kisi ne mujhe thappad mara tha.. chanta zor ka laga tha. meri ankhon me ansu utar aaye

payal didi mere ansuon ki parwa na karte hue zor se chillai..

payal didi -- ullu ki dum ho tum.. mere sare kapde kharab kar diye.

ek saheli ne kaha -- payal surya akhir tumhara bhai hai

payal ko mujhse zayada apne kapdo ki chinta thi. uski itni well look maine kharab kar di thi.. wo apne kapdo ko dekhti apni saheli se boli

payal -- pata nahi kaise ye mera bhai ban gya. kuch bhi is ke andr mere bhaiyo jaise nahi hai.. kameena sara din naukaron ke sath rahta ha. unki trah ganda rahta ha.. baaten ise karni aati nahi. manners ki ise kuch samjh nahi hai..

fir mujhe dekh boli -- ab khade khade ye tasve kyu baha ho. bhago yahan se

mai didi ko dekh apni ankh se ansu saaf karta wahan se jane laga.. pahli bar mere mann me ye ahsas jaga tha.. mujhe pyar nahi milta.. lekin aisi maar bhi mujhe kyu mili...

payal wo chanta mere liye shamat le aaya.. vijay ne door se ye chanta dekh lia tha. bass fir kyaa tha.. vijay chalte firte kabhi meri peeth par ek laga deta. kabhi sar par.. aise hi woh mujhse kaam ka bol deta..

mai ab aadi hone laga tha.. payal ka attitude ajib tha.. woh jaise kuch alag prakar ki ladki banna chahti thi.. mai uske shauk ke liye uska kama ban gaya.. payal didi ki dekha dekhi uski saheliyon ne bhi mujhe useless samjhna shuru kar dia.

priya didi.. aur parivar me sab hi mere sath same bartav karne lage the.. chante mujhe payal didi ya vijay bhaiya se hi nahi pade the.. ek ka hath khula to samay ke sath sath dusron ke bhi hath khulte chale gaye..

ek moke par maa ne bhi mujhe chanta maar dia. mera chahra maa ke zordar chante se laal pad gaya tha. hua ye tha... sardi ka mausam tha.. mujhe thand lag lgai. thand ke chalte nak bahne lagi. chheenken aane lagi. ek naukarni ne mujhe qahwa bana kar dia. sath hi kuchh dawa bhi di. kuchh aram mila mujhe. aise me mai maa ke paas gaya. us din maine achhe kapde pahn rakhe the..

maa se milne maa ki kuchh friends aai hui thi.. mera dil hua. jaise vijay aur dusre bhai bahan maa ki god me sar rakh kar let jaya karte han. mai bhi let jaaun.. mai maa ke paass gaya.. maa sofe par bethi thi. mujhe dekh smile karti apni freinds ke sath baat karne lagi.. sari friends janti thi mujhe..


jaise hi mai maa ke sath beth apna sar maa ki god me rakha. maa ne mera sar pakad lia.. kamre me ja kar sovo. mai baaten kar rahi hon yahan. aise me tumhara yahan koi kam nahi ha

lekin mai fir bhi wahn se nahi tala. maa ki god me sar nahi rakh saka tha. lekin wahi maa ke karib beth gaya.. maa baaton me lagi rahi. mai bari bari sabko dekhta raha. aur samjhne ki koshish karta raha. khair mujhe baton ki kya samjh aani thi...

aise hi achanak se mujhe ek zordar chheenk aai.. aur meri nak se pani uchhal kar maa ke kapdo par aa gira..

maa cheekhti hui jhatke se uth khadi hui. maa ki freinds hass padi.. maa ko badi subki hui..

maa -- suryaaaaaaaa... ye kyaaa kiya tumne

sath hi maa ne aisa chanta maara. mera pura jabda hil kar rah gaya.. maa aag bagole hui mujhe guse se ghoroti hui boli. tumhe zukam tha to dawa kyu nahi li.. haan batao mujhe.. kamre me aram kyu nahi karne gaye tum..

mai darr gaya.. lekin maa se mile chante ne mere dil me dard jaga dia tha.. maa ka gusa tha keh kam hone me hi nahi aa raha tha..

mai khada raha

maa -- tum to ziddi ho.. sunte hi nahi...

maa apni friends se sorry bolti kapde badal kar wahan jane lagi. mai bhi wahan se chal nikla..

ek baar papa bahar tour par gaye the. apne sath sheeshe ka bana koi gift laaye the.. papa ne sabse kah dia tha.. ye bohut keemati bhi ha aur nayab bhi. sab dhayan rakhna.. ye tootne na paaye..

meri shamat aana baki thi.. papa se bhi mujhe thappad padna tha.. jo mai ek naukar ke sath masti karta hua papa ki us nayab chiz ko tod betha...

us din papa ka thappad khaa kar mai ludakta hua door ja gira tha.. papa ne mujhe khub khari khoti sunaai thi.. jis ladke ke sath mai khel raha tha. uske pita ko papa ne bada zaleel kia......

samay aise hi pheeka pheeka guzarta raha.. fir komal ji aap hamari kothi me padhari.. mai ab askar gum sum raha karta tha. aise me maine aaj tak khud ke siva kisi dusre ko tanhaa nahi dekha tha.. lekin aap ko dekha.. tab maine jana mere bad bhi dunya me koi dukhi hai..

mai chupke chupke aap ko dekhne laga. pyar kya hota ha main anjan tha. lekin aap ka murjhaya chahra dekh mere dil me dard hone laga. bad me jab aap ke bare me ye jana. aapke parivar ke sare sadasy maare gaye han. tab pata nahi kyu mai ek naukar ke ghar ke kamre me chup chaap rone laga tha. komal ji woh meri zindagi ka rona pahli baar aapke liye tha..

haan komal ji main kothi me raha to kai baar aapke liye roya hon main.. tab mai samjh nahi paya tha. lekin aaj samjhta hon. mai apke pyar me roya karta tha.. mera dil chupke chupke aapke liye dhadakne laga tha..


surya itna bol khayalon se bahar aaya komal ko dekhne laga. surya ki nazar jaise hi komal rani ke chahre par padi. wo chaunk gaya..

surya -- arre komal ji aap ro kyu rahi han

komal bheegi awaz me boli -- surya tumhare sath sabne kitni zayadti kari hai na

surya -- ye to nahi pata.. lekin samay ne mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse keemati cheez daan bhi kari hai.. aap ho komal ji mere liye is dunya ki sabse keemati chiz. us kothi me mere apnu se mujhe kuchh nahi mila.. lekin us kothi me aap ke aane se mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi mil gai thi.... aap na aati to jaisa mai aaj badal gaya hon. aapko dekhe bina badal hota to shayad mai apne parivar ke har ek sadasy se nafrat karne lagta.. lekin komal ji.. maine nafrat karna seekha hi nahi hai. kabhi mere andr koi aisa ahsas jaga bhi hai to aap hi aap han mere andr.. mere andr se nafrat jaisa sab dho dia karti han... ye dunya sabhi ke liye jaisi bhi ho.. lekin mere liye aapke hone se haseen se bhi haseen ha ye dunya..

haan komal ji mujhe apne parivar walun se bohut si shikayen han.. lekin aap ko pa maine sab ki sabhi galatiyon ko maaf kar dia ha.. mujhe kisi se koi shikayat nahi hai komal ji..


komal apne ansu poohnchti hui surya ko dekh boli -- surya itna sab hone par bhi tum sab ko shama kar rahe ho.

surya muskura kar komal ko dekhne laga.. fir sar haan me hila dia

koaml rani -- mere dil ki kisi dhadkan me abhi bhi tum nahi utre ho surya.. lekin mai ye baat pure iman ke sath bol rahi hon. tumhara sath dunya me har ek sath se badhkar payara hoga mere liye..

surya khil utha.. chamakte chahre ke sath bola -- komal ji.. aap ne itna kah dia.. mujhe sab kuch mil gaya. aap sath rahne ki baat karti han. aap ki khushbu mere sath hai.. akhri saans tak mere sath rahegi.. kahte han lalach buri bala ha.. kisi ki ek ungli ko pakad kar pura ka pura pane ki icchhhaa kabhi insan ke andr se nahi jati.. mai bhi aakhri saans tak aapki aarzo karta rahunga.. lekin.. aap ke ye shabd bhi mere liye mujhe mile har inam se badhkar han..

komal rani -- aage ki kahani nahi sunaaoge tum surya

surya -- parivar ka attitude hi tha.. wo maine aapko bata dia komal ji. baki sari baaten aise kai incidents par adharit han. same sabhi ka reaction, ek ek karke mujhe sare thappadon ka haal batana padega.. pahle shayad mai bata bhi deta. lekin aapki ankhon me mai ansu nahi dekh sakta. pahle bohut dekh chuka hon komal ji. ab aur nahi..

ab pahle aap strong ban jaaiye.. maom se pathar ki ban jaaiye.. detail aapko mai batata rahunga.. saalon ki kahani minto me ya ghanto me to sunaai nahi ja sakti..

komal rani -- sahi kaha tumne surya.. aur fir tumhari kahani me dard hi dard ha.. tum youn karo.. kothi se jab tum nikle.. wahan se kahani sunaao... aisa kyaa hua tumhari zindagi me.. tum surya se badshah ban gaye..

surya uth khada hua -- komal ji aaj aap ko yahan ki kuch sair karwa dun. fir kuchh dikhaonga.. uske bad aapko kothi se nikalne ke bad ki kahani sunaaonga...


komal bhi uth khadi hui.. surya ne komal ko dekh apna hath badha dia.. komal surya ko dekh uske hath ko dekhti apna hath badha gai.. surya ne bade hi naram pakad ke sath komal ka hath pakad lia...


surya komal ko liye neeche utarne laga.

 

[Neni]

Super story nice update

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Mind Blowing Update Bro

Bhai Surya ke sath hua kya tha past me ye to aapne btaya hi nhi

Nice

Great start bro

Lajawaab update

Awesome update bro

Next update please

Fantastic Update bro

Lekinnn
......ke aage ki khni jaane ki ko utsuk h h hum sab so pls update de diya jaye

Msst update bhai

thank you guys

 

[Kuldipr99]

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surya fir khawab ki si halat me bola -- jab mera janam hua to mai bhi parivar ke dusre bachhon ki tarah khush naseeb tha. dunya me sabse pahla sparsh jo maine paya.. wo sparsh maa ka tha.. dunya me sabse pahle kisi ko jana to woh maa thi..

lekin.....


komal bade dhayan se surya ke bujhe hue chahre ko dekh rahi thi. soch rahi thi. kitna chamakdar chahra ha surya ka. lekin kaise bujh kar rah gaya ha. komal bade dhayan se surya ki jeevan kahani sun rahi thi.. surya "lekin" par a kar ruk gaya ha. jaise purani yaadon me doob gaya ho.. kamol rani ne surya ko nahi chhed. surya ko khud se apne hisab se apni kahani sunane ka moka dia..

surya ne sar utha kar komal ko nahi dekha. aise hi bola -- maa shabd aisa ha.. zuban par aaye to moh me mithas khul jati ha. dunya me koi shabd maa shabd se badhkar meetha nahi hai.. koi rishta maa ke rishte se badhkar nahi hai. koi ahsas maa ki mamta ke ahsas se badhkar nahi hai. mai maa ki aaghosh me tab rak raha. jab tak maa mujhe doodh pilati rahi. jaise hi maa ka doodh thama. mere liye maa ke doodh ke bad dusra doodh aur aise hi meri umar ke bachon ko khilai jane wali foods ka intezam kar dia gaya.. ye sab normal ha. har bachha maa ke doodh ke bad upare doodh aur dusri chizon ki orr chal padta ha. fir jaise jaise woh bada hota ha. uski zindagi me aur bohut kuchh si chizen shamil hone lagti ha..

dunya ke har bachhe ki tarah mere sath bhi hua.. lekin fir mere sath jo hua. wo dunya me bhi kai bachhon ke sath hota ha.. aur un bachhon ki qismat ka haal acha nahi hoa karta.. mere nasib bhi dunya ke un bachhon jaise ho gaye.. jo dunya me thode se hi the.. woh bachhey maa ke doodh ke bad jin bachhon se unki maaen door ho jaya karti han..

mai koi iklota nahi tha.. mai koi special beta nahi tha.. mujhse pahle bhi kai bete the mere maa ke. meri bahne bhi thi.. maa kis kis par dhayan deti.. aisa agar maa se poochaa jaaye to maa zarur aisa hi jawab deti.. lekin jab maa ne mujhpar kam aur dusre paanchon par apna dhayan badha dia to main jaise paraya ho gaya.. mai chhota tha.. aur sab bade the... isliye maa par unki zimmedari zayada thi. yahan maa galat bhi nahi thi.. shayad mujhse pahle mere bhai bahno ke sath bhi maa ne aisa hi kia tha... ek ke bad dusre aane wale ko doodh pilaya.. uska doodh chhoota to bade wale par dhayan badha dia.. kyunki woh bada ho raha tha.. usay samjhane aur dunya ki seekh dene ki zayada zarurat padti thi.. har maa aisa karti ha. so meri maa bhi aisa karne par majbur thi.

sab routine ke hisab se chal raha tha.. mai maa ke pass kam aur maid ke paas zayada rahne laga. maid ke bad mai dusre naukaron ke hathu me rahne laga. mai ajib tha. pata nahi dene wale ne mujhe kaisi surat thi. mere apne mujhse kam aur meri hi kothi ke naukar zayada pyar karne lage.

samay guzarta raha aur fir mai naukaron ke karib aur karib hota chala gaya. mai bhale hi maa ki god me nahi tha. lekin tha to maa ki nazron ke saamne. din me kai kai bar mujhe dekh leti thi. youn maa relax raha karti..

main panch saal ka hua.. tab sabne jaan lia.. mai mand buddhi hon. mere andr kashish ki kami hai.. aksar dekhne me ye aata ha.. un bachhon ko zayada pyar kia jata ha. jo roz nayi nayi harkaten karte han, shararten karte han. naye naye shabd moh se nikal apne parivar walun ko hasate han. lekin mai aisa nahi tha..

mai aisa nahi tha.. mere liye sabko chinta honi chahiye thi.. lekin maine pahle hi kaha aapse komal ji. mere ilawa bhi kai the.. maa aur sabke liye woh zaydada payare ho gaye the. wo padhne lage the. achi achi baaten karne lage the. unke andr parivarik rakh rakhao tha. baat karne ka dhang unke andr aa raha tha. mai shant bacha tha.

lekin koi nahi janta tha. mere chahre par bhav bhale hi nahi hua karte the. lekin mere andr vichar zarur janam lia karte the.

padhai me mera dimag kam nahi karta tha. pahle mujhe school me dakhal karwaya gaya.. lekin mere palle kuchh nahi pada.. mujhe doctor ko dikhaya gyaa. pata chala mai aisa dimag rakhta hon.. mere jaise dimag wale ke sath dimag khapaya to ja sakta ha. lekin usay zayada samjhaya nahi ja sakta.

youn mera school bhi band ho gaya. tab mujhe kothi me jaise azad chhod diya gaya. chahiye to ye tha. mujhse tawajju badha di jaati. mere liye desh bhar ke doctoro se meetings ki jaati. paise ki konsi kami thi.. lekin nahi.. sabne jaise ye maan lia.. mai ek bekaar purza hon.. kabhi samay ne mujhe kuchh daan karna hoga to kar dega..


maa bohut busy ho gai thi. bachhon ko sambhalna.. fr itni badi kothi ko sambhlna. dada ji the. woh apne maamlat me uljhe rahte the. papa aur chacha business me lujhe hue the. mere bhai, bahne aur chacha ke bachhe sab padh likh rahe the. main mand buddhi tha. unke kisi kam ka nahi tha. wo mujhse na to dosto jaisi baaten kar sakte the. na mujhse padhai ke silsilay me salah mashwara kar sakte the.

mai unki mahfil ka ladka nahi tha.. mere bhai bahno ne bhi mujhe nazar andaz karna shuru kar dia....

mai naukaron ka hokar rah gaya.. dhire dhire hi sahi lekin mujhe dunya ki samjh aane lagi. kisi baat ki samjh agar meri umar ke vyakti ko turant lag jaya karti thi to mujhe der se samjh me aati thi.. is sab me mera koi kasoor nahi tha.. main paida hi aise hua tha.. banane wale ne mujhe banaya tha. mai khud se ban kar dunya me nahi aaya tha. mai apne bhai bahno jaisa nahi tha. to isme mera koi kasoor nahi tha.

sab bethe baaten kar rahe hote. aise me mai chal kar maa ke paas ja pohnchta. maa ek nazar mujhe dekh sabse baaton me lag jaya karti. mai maa ke karib jata. kabhi maa ki god me bethta. to maa mere sar ke balon me hath chalane lagti.

kabhi mere bhai bahn bethe mastiyan kar rahe hote.. aise me mai maa ke paas jata aur agar maa ke paas mera koi bhai ya bahn hoti to maa mujhse kahti

maa -- surya tu apni didi ke paas ja

mai payal didi ke paas jata.. wo kahti -- kitna boring ha maa mera ye wala bhai.. surya tum chhoti ke paas jao.. mai chhoti didi priya ko dekhta. wo reserve rahne wali ladki thi..

priya -- nahi nahi mere pass na aana. aaj tum kitne gande ho rahe ho.

aise me kabhi kisi ne ye nahi kaha.. surya tum meri god me aa jaao. maa to maa dadi aur sab bhi mujhe aise hi haste hue door kar dia karte.. mai ronqi bachha nahi tha. kisi ki god me jata bhi to gum sum betha rah jata. aur gum sum bachhe kam hi kisi ko payare hua karte han

meri jaga koi aur hota to ro ro kar zid karke apne liye pyar pane lagta. lekin mai rone wala bachha nahi tha. sab ko sunta dekh wahan se chal padta.. tab bhi koi ye nahi kahta tha.. arre surya tum kahan ja rahe ho. idhar aao mere pass...

ye us samay ki baaten ha. jab maine attitude par dhayan dena nahi seekha tha. ye baaten meri memory me save rah gai thi. mujhe gila bhi nahi karna aata tha. pyar pana to mai seekh hi nahi saka tha. maid ya naukraniyan mujhe pyar deti thi. aur mai khush raha karta tha.. aise hi pyar ki chah mere mann me maa dadi aur apnu ke liye thi. lekin mai ziddi nahi tha..

mere dusre bhai aksar maa ki god me sar rakh kar apni daily ki baaten bataya karte. aur maa unki baaten sunkar khub hasa karti. unhe khub pyar dia karti.. mere andr aisi koi skill nahi thi.. mai kaise maa ko hasaya karta. agar aisa hota to maa bhi mujhe sun has dia karti aur mujhe pyar dia karti.

fir mera uthna bethna aur sona jaagna zayada tar naukaron ke gharon me hone laga..

ek baar maa ko main nahi dikha.. maa ne mujhe talash kia.. mai nahi mila to naukaron se kah kar mujhe talash karwaya.. ye maa ki woh mohabbat thi mere liye. jo ek bachhe ke dikhai na dene par umad aaya karti thi..

baad me talash karwane par maa ko pata chala. mai ek naukarani ki ghar me so gaya tha.. maa ko pata chala.. mai surakshit hon. isi kothi me hon.. maa santusht ho gai. maa ne tab narazgi ka izhaar nahi kia.. ye nahi kaha. arre kothi ka beta hokar naukaron ke ghar me kyu so raha ha.

ye pahli bar tha. tab maa sakhti karti aur mujhe naukaron ke gharon me sone se tok deti to shayad samay badal jata. mai wo na ban pata jo bad me ban gaya tha....

mai aaye din naukaron ke gharon me sone laga. sab ke liye mai maalikon ka beta tha. aur naukron ke liye ye badi baat thi. unke maalik ka beta unke ghar me so raha ho.. youn mere liye mere parivar me jaisi chahat ne janam nahi lia tha. naukron ke dilon me woh chahat mere liye janam lene lagi..

mai 8 saal ka hua.. tab mai apnu se bohut door ho gaya tha.. naukron ke karib ho gaya tha. aisa nahi tha. mai maa ya sab ke paas nahi jaya karta tha.. jata tha. lekin meri value aur bhi kam ho gai thi. mera bada bhai vijay ladkpan me dakhal ho chuka tha. uske shauk dekhne wale the. wo kothi ki boundry me hi rifle ki trainning karne laga.. aapne dekha hi hoga komal ji.. kothi kai acre ke area ke gird pheli hui hai. aise me kai roads banaye gaye han gadiyon ke aane jaane ke liye.. vijay un roads par bike chalata.. stunt marta..

maa aur sab usay dekh door se hi khushi ka izhaar karte.. vijay ke bad fir dusre bhai bahno ne bhi bike chalana shuru kar di. chacha ke beton ne bhi apne apne shauk shuru kar diye...


aise hi ek bar vijay ke kuchh dost usse milne aaye.. mai ek mali ke sath khada tha..

vijay -- oye surya idhar aa

mere bhai kabhi kabhi hi mujhe bulaya karte the.. mai bhagam bhag unke pass jaya karta tha..

mai -- ji bhaiya

vijay jo mujhse kuch kahne wala tha.. hasne laga. uske dost usay hasta dekh hasne lage. vijay ke andr rakh rakho bohut tha.. wo mere kandhe par hath maarta hasta hua apne dosto se bola

vijay -- ye mera bhai hai surya.. lekin nira buddhu ha.. chal surya bhaag kar woh uthaa ke laa

vijay ne apne dosto ko dikhane ke liye door padi ek plastic ki kursi utha kar lane ko kaha tha.. mai zayada na soch kar wahan se bhaga aur kursi utha laya.. vijay mera bhai tha. mai is kothi me uske jaisa hi power rakhne wala beta tha. vijay chair kisi naukar se bhi mangwa sakta tha. lekin usne apne dosto ko dikhane ke liye mujhe kursi laane ko bhej dia. so mai wo kursi uthaa laya. ek koi khas baat nahi thi. lekin vijay apni soch ke anusar mujhe useless samjhta hua apne dosto ko bhi samjha raha tha..

mai kursi le aaya..

vijay -- arre.. is ek kursi ka kyaa karna ha. mai aur mere kitne dost han. ja ja ke aur kursiyan utha laa.. mai to bas awen hi tha. bhagam bhag ek ek karke kuriyan utha lata.. ek naukar ne vijay se kaha. wo apne sath dusre naukaron ko sath mila kar kursiyan le aata ha.. lekin vijay ne usay jhidak dia..

maalik tha. maalik bankar rahne ke gur uske andr aa rahe the. naukron ko jhaad pilane laga. uske dosto me uski value badh rahi thi. wo kyu peeche rahta..

mai aisa nahi tha. mujhe unki baaton par, unke kahe kamon par gusa aata.. mujhe rona nahi ata tha. to gusa bhi nahi aata tha..

aise hi vijay ko dekh baki sare bhai bahno ne mujhse aise hi apne friends ke saamne dheron kam karwane shuru kar diye.. payal didi ke shauk khas ladkiyon wale the. wo bhi vijay ki tarah guns chalana seekhne lagi. wahan ek instrucre payal didi ke liye hire kiya gaya. didi chhoti umar me hi usse karate ki training lene lagi.. aur mai aise me payal didi ke order ke anusar usse karib rahta..


samay guzra. payal didi school trip par kahin bahar gai. jab wo laut kar aai to badi pyari dikh rahi thi.. bohut dino bad laut kar aai thi. uske sath uski friends bhi hamari kothi me aai thi.

ab mere andr apne bhai bahno ke liye pyar badhne laga tha.. mai bhagam bhag payal didi ki orr badha.. karib jate hi maine didi ko hug kar lia. mai bhul gaya tha mai pahle mali ke sath mil podo ko pani de raha tha. mere kapde geele the. aise me didi ke kapde geele ho gaye..

tab pahli baar payal didi ne mere moh par ek zor ka chanta maar dia. ye pahla aisa moka tha.. jab mere parivar me se kisi ne mujhe thappad mara tha.. chanta zor ka laga tha. meri ankhon me ansu utar aaye

payal didi mere ansuon ki parwa na karte hue zor se chillai..

payal didi -- ullu ki dum ho tum.. mere sare kapde kharab kar diye.

ek saheli ne kaha -- payal surya akhir tumhara bhai hai

payal ko mujhse zayada apne kapdo ki chinta thi. uski itni well look maine kharab kar di thi.. wo apne kapdo ko dekhti apni saheli se boli

payal -- pata nahi kaise ye mera bhai ban gya. kuch bhi is ke andr mere bhaiyo jaise nahi hai.. kameena sara din naukaron ke sath rahta ha. unki trah ganda rahta ha.. baaten ise karni aati nahi. manners ki ise kuch samjh nahi hai..

fir mujhe dekh boli -- ab khade khade ye tasve kyu baha ho. bhago yahan se

mai didi ko dekh apni ankh se ansu saaf karta wahan se jane laga.. pahli bar mere mann me ye ahsas jaga tha.. mujhe pyar nahi milta.. lekin aisi maar bhi mujhe kyu mili...

payal wo chanta mere liye shamat le aaya.. vijay ne door se ye chanta dekh lia tha. bass fir kyaa tha.. vijay chalte firte kabhi meri peeth par ek laga deta. kabhi sar par.. aise hi woh mujhse kaam ka bol deta..

mai ab aadi hone laga tha.. payal ka attitude ajib tha.. woh jaise kuch alag prakar ki ladki banna chahti thi.. mai uske shauk ke liye uska kama ban gaya.. payal didi ki dekha dekhi uski saheliyon ne bhi mujhe useless samjhna shuru kar dia.

priya didi.. aur parivar me sab hi mere sath same bartav karne lage the.. chante mujhe payal didi ya vijay bhaiya se hi nahi pade the.. ek ka hath khula to samay ke sath sath dusron ke bhi hath khulte chale gaye..

ek moke par maa ne bhi mujhe chanta maar dia. mera chahra maa ke zordar chante se laal pad gaya tha. hua ye tha... sardi ka mausam tha.. mujhe thand lag lgai. thand ke chalte nak bahne lagi. chheenken aane lagi. ek naukarni ne mujhe qahwa bana kar dia. sath hi kuchh dawa bhi di. kuchh aram mila mujhe. aise me mai maa ke paas gaya. us din maine achhe kapde pahn rakhe the..

maa se milne maa ki kuchh friends aai hui thi.. mera dil hua. jaise vijay aur dusre bhai bahan maa ki god me sar rakh kar let jaya karte han. mai bhi let jaaun.. mai maa ke paass gaya.. maa sofe par bethi thi. mujhe dekh smile karti apni freinds ke sath baat karne lagi.. sari friends janti thi mujhe..


jaise hi mai maa ke sath beth apna sar maa ki god me rakha. maa ne mera sar pakad lia.. kamre me ja kar sovo. mai baaten kar rahi hon yahan. aise me tumhara yahan koi kam nahi ha

lekin mai fir bhi wahn se nahi tala. maa ki god me sar nahi rakh saka tha. lekin wahi maa ke karib beth gaya.. maa baaton me lagi rahi. mai bari bari sabko dekhta raha. aur samjhne ki koshish karta raha. khair mujhe baton ki kya samjh aani thi...

aise hi achanak se mujhe ek zordar chheenk aai.. aur meri nak se pani uchhal kar maa ke kapdo par aa gira..

maa cheekhti hui jhatke se uth khadi hui. maa ki freinds hass padi.. maa ko badi subki hui..

maa -- suryaaaaaaaa... ye kyaaa kiya tumne

sath hi maa ne aisa chanta maara. mera pura jabda hil kar rah gaya.. maa aag bagole hui mujhe guse se ghoroti hui boli. tumhe zukam tha to dawa kyu nahi li.. haan batao mujhe.. kamre me aram kyu nahi karne gaye tum..

mai darr gaya.. lekin maa se mile chante ne mere dil me dard jaga dia tha.. maa ka gusa tha keh kam hone me hi nahi aa raha tha..

mai khada raha

maa -- tum to ziddi ho.. sunte hi nahi...

maa apni friends se sorry bolti kapde badal kar wahan jane lagi. mai bhi wahan se chal nikla..

ek baar papa bahar tour par gaye the. apne sath sheeshe ka bana koi gift laaye the.. papa ne sabse kah dia tha.. ye bohut keemati bhi ha aur nayab bhi. sab dhayan rakhna.. ye tootne na paaye..

meri shamat aana baki thi.. papa se bhi mujhe thappad padna tha.. jo mai ek naukar ke sath masti karta hua papa ki us nayab chiz ko tod betha...

us din papa ka thappad khaa kar mai ludakta hua door ja gira tha.. papa ne mujhe khub khari khoti sunaai thi.. jis ladke ke sath mai khel raha tha. uske pita ko papa ne bada zaleel kia......

samay aise hi pheeka pheeka guzarta raha.. fir komal ji aap hamari kothi me padhari.. mai ab askar gum sum raha karta tha. aise me maine aaj tak khud ke siva kisi dusre ko tanhaa nahi dekha tha.. lekin aap ko dekha.. tab maine jana mere bad bhi dunya me koi dukhi hai..

mai chupke chupke aap ko dekhne laga. pyar kya hota ha main anjan tha. lekin aap ka murjhaya chahra dekh mere dil me dard hone laga. bad me jab aap ke bare me ye jana. aapke parivar ke sare sadasy maare gaye han. tab pata nahi kyu mai ek naukar ke ghar ke kamre me chup chaap rone laga tha. komal ji woh meri zindagi ka rona pahli baar aapke liye tha..

haan komal ji main kothi me raha to kai baar aapke liye roya hon main.. tab mai samjh nahi paya tha. lekin aaj samjhta hon. mai apke pyar me roya karta tha.. mera dil chupke chupke aapke liye dhadakne laga tha..


surya itna bol khayalon se bahar aaya komal ko dekhne laga. surya ki nazar jaise hi komal rani ke chahre par padi. wo chaunk gaya..

surya -- arre komal ji aap ro kyu rahi han

komal bheegi awaz me boli -- surya tumhare sath sabne kitni zayadti kari hai na

surya -- ye to nahi pata.. lekin samay ne mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse keemati cheez daan bhi kari hai.. aap ho komal ji mere liye is dunya ki sabse keemati chiz. us kothi me mere apnu se mujhe kuchh nahi mila.. lekin us kothi me aap ke aane se mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi mil gai thi.... aap na aati to jaisa mai aaj badal gaya hon. aapko dekhe bina badal hota to shayad mai apne parivar ke har ek sadasy se nafrat karne lagta.. lekin komal ji.. maine nafrat karna seekha hi nahi hai. kabhi mere andr koi aisa ahsas jaga bhi hai to aap hi aap han mere andr.. mere andr se nafrat jaisa sab dho dia karti han... ye dunya sabhi ke liye jaisi bhi ho.. lekin mere liye aapke hone se haseen se bhi haseen ha ye dunya..

haan komal ji mujhe apne parivar walun se bohut si shikayen han.. lekin aap ko pa maine sab ki sabhi galatiyon ko maaf kar dia ha.. mujhe kisi se koi shikayat nahi hai komal ji..


komal apne ansu poohnchti hui surya ko dekh boli -- surya itna sab hone par bhi tum sab ko shama kar rahe ho.

surya muskura kar komal ko dekhne laga.. fir sar haan me hila dia

koaml rani -- mere dil ki kisi dhadkan me abhi bhi tum nahi utre ho surya.. lekin mai ye baat pure iman ke sath bol rahi hon. tumhara sath dunya me har ek sath se badhkar payara hoga mere liye..

surya khil utha.. chamakte chahre ke sath bola -- komal ji.. aap ne itna kah dia.. mujhe sab kuch mil gaya. aap sath rahne ki baat karti han. aap ki khushbu mere sath hai.. akhri saans tak mere sath rahegi.. kahte han lalach buri bala ha.. kisi ki ek ungli ko pakad kar pura ka pura pane ki icchhhaa kabhi insan ke andr se nahi jati.. mai bhi aakhri saans tak aapki aarzo karta rahunga.. lekin.. aap ke ye shabd bhi mere liye mujhe mile har inam se badhkar han..

komal rani -- aage ki kahani nahi sunaaoge tum surya

surya -- parivar ka attitude hi tha.. wo maine aapko bata dia komal ji. baki sari baaten aise kai incidents par adharit han. same sabhi ka reaction, ek ek karke mujhe sare thappadon ka haal batana padega.. pahle shayad mai bata bhi deta. lekin aapki ankhon me mai ansu nahi dekh sakta. pahle bohut dekh chuka hon komal ji. ab aur nahi..

ab pahle aap strong ban jaaiye.. maom se pathar ki ban jaaiye.. detail aapko mai batata rahunga.. saalon ki kahani minto me ya ghanto me to sunaai nahi ja sakti..

komal rani -- sahi kaha tumne surya.. aur fir tumhari kahani me dard hi dard ha.. tum youn karo.. kothi se jab tum nikle.. wahan se kahani sunaao... aisa kyaa hua tumhari zindagi me.. tum surya se badshah ban gaye..

surya uth khada hua -- komal ji aaj aap ko yahan ki kuch sair karwa dun. fir kuchh dikhaonga.. uske bad aapko kothi se nikalne ke bad ki kahani sunaaonga...


komal bhi uth khadi hui.. surya ne komal ko dekh apna hath badha dia.. komal surya ko dekh uske hath ko dekhti apna hath badha gai.. surya ne bade hi naram pakad ke sath komal ka hath pakad lia...


surya komal ko liye neeche utarne laga.

lajawaab ek dum mast update hai....
keep gooing....

 

[King78]

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surya fir khawab ki si halat me bola -- jab mera janam hua to mai bhi parivar ke dusre bachhon ki tarah khush naseeb tha. dunya me sabse pahla sparsh jo maine paya.. wo sparsh maa ka tha.. dunya me sabse pahle kisi ko jana to woh maa thi..

lekin.....


komal bade dhayan se surya ke bujhe hue chahre ko dekh rahi thi. soch rahi thi. kitna chamakdar chahra ha surya ka. lekin kaise bujh kar rah gaya ha. komal bade dhayan se surya ki jeevan kahani sun rahi thi.. surya "lekin" par a kar ruk gaya ha. jaise purani yaadon me doob gaya ho.. kamol rani ne surya ko nahi chhed. surya ko khud se apne hisab se apni kahani sunane ka moka dia..

surya ne sar utha kar komal ko nahi dekha. aise hi bola -- maa shabd aisa ha.. zuban par aaye to moh me mithas khul jati ha. dunya me koi shabd maa shabd se badhkar meetha nahi hai.. koi rishta maa ke rishte se badhkar nahi hai. koi ahsas maa ki mamta ke ahsas se badhkar nahi hai. mai maa ki aaghosh me tab rak raha. jab tak maa mujhe doodh pilati rahi. jaise hi maa ka doodh thama. mere liye maa ke doodh ke bad dusra doodh aur aise hi meri umar ke bachon ko khilai jane wali foods ka intezam kar dia gaya.. ye sab normal ha. har bachha maa ke doodh ke bad upare doodh aur dusri chizon ki orr chal padta ha. fir jaise jaise woh bada hota ha. uski zindagi me aur bohut kuchh si chizen shamil hone lagti ha..

dunya ke har bachhe ki tarah mere sath bhi hua.. lekin fir mere sath jo hua. wo dunya me bhi kai bachhon ke sath hota ha.. aur un bachhon ki qismat ka haal acha nahi hoa karta.. mere nasib bhi dunya ke un bachhon jaise ho gaye.. jo dunya me thode se hi the.. woh bachhey maa ke doodh ke bad jin bachhon se unki maaen door ho jaya karti han..

mai koi iklota nahi tha.. mai koi special beta nahi tha.. mujhse pahle bhi kai bete the mere maa ke. meri bahne bhi thi.. maa kis kis par dhayan deti.. aisa agar maa se poochaa jaaye to maa zarur aisa hi jawab deti.. lekin jab maa ne mujhpar kam aur dusre paanchon par apna dhayan badha dia to main jaise paraya ho gaya.. mai chhota tha.. aur sab bade the... isliye maa par unki zimmedari zayada thi. yahan maa galat bhi nahi thi.. shayad mujhse pahle mere bhai bahno ke sath bhi maa ne aisa hi kia tha... ek ke bad dusre aane wale ko doodh pilaya.. uska doodh chhoota to bade wale par dhayan badha dia.. kyunki woh bada ho raha tha.. usay samjhane aur dunya ki seekh dene ki zayada zarurat padti thi.. har maa aisa karti ha. so meri maa bhi aisa karne par majbur thi.

sab routine ke hisab se chal raha tha.. mai maa ke pass kam aur maid ke paas zayada rahne laga. maid ke bad mai dusre naukaron ke hathu me rahne laga. mai ajib tha. pata nahi dene wale ne mujhe kaisi surat thi. mere apne mujhse kam aur meri hi kothi ke naukar zayada pyar karne lage.

samay guzarta raha aur fir mai naukaron ke karib aur karib hota chala gaya. mai bhale hi maa ki god me nahi tha. lekin tha to maa ki nazron ke saamne. din me kai kai bar mujhe dekh leti thi. youn maa relax raha karti..

main panch saal ka hua.. tab sabne jaan lia.. mai mand buddhi hon. mere andr kashish ki kami hai.. aksar dekhne me ye aata ha.. un bachhon ko zayada pyar kia jata ha. jo roz nayi nayi harkaten karte han, shararten karte han. naye naye shabd moh se nikal apne parivar walun ko hasate han. lekin mai aisa nahi tha..

mai aisa nahi tha.. mere liye sabko chinta honi chahiye thi.. lekin maine pahle hi kaha aapse komal ji. mere ilawa bhi kai the.. maa aur sabke liye woh zaydada payare ho gaye the. wo padhne lage the. achi achi baaten karne lage the. unke andr parivarik rakh rakhao tha. baat karne ka dhang unke andr aa raha tha. mai shant bacha tha.

lekin koi nahi janta tha. mere chahre par bhav bhale hi nahi hua karte the. lekin mere andr vichar zarur janam lia karte the.

padhai me mera dimag kam nahi karta tha. pahle mujhe school me dakhal karwaya gaya.. lekin mere palle kuchh nahi pada.. mujhe doctor ko dikhaya gyaa. pata chala mai aisa dimag rakhta hon.. mere jaise dimag wale ke sath dimag khapaya to ja sakta ha. lekin usay zayada samjhaya nahi ja sakta.

youn mera school bhi band ho gaya. tab mujhe kothi me jaise azad chhod diya gaya. chahiye to ye tha. mujhse tawajju badha di jaati. mere liye desh bhar ke doctoro se meetings ki jaati. paise ki konsi kami thi.. lekin nahi.. sabne jaise ye maan lia.. mai ek bekaar purza hon.. kabhi samay ne mujhe kuchh daan karna hoga to kar dega..


maa bohut busy ho gai thi. bachhon ko sambhalna.. fr itni badi kothi ko sambhlna. dada ji the. woh apne maamlat me uljhe rahte the. papa aur chacha business me lujhe hue the. mere bhai, bahne aur chacha ke bachhe sab padh likh rahe the. main mand buddhi tha. unke kisi kam ka nahi tha. wo mujhse na to dosto jaisi baaten kar sakte the. na mujhse padhai ke silsilay me salah mashwara kar sakte the.

mai unki mahfil ka ladka nahi tha.. mere bhai bahno ne bhi mujhe nazar andaz karna shuru kar dia....

mai naukaron ka hokar rah gaya.. dhire dhire hi sahi lekin mujhe dunya ki samjh aane lagi. kisi baat ki samjh agar meri umar ke vyakti ko turant lag jaya karti thi to mujhe der se samjh me aati thi.. is sab me mera koi kasoor nahi tha.. main paida hi aise hua tha.. banane wale ne mujhe banaya tha. mai khud se ban kar dunya me nahi aaya tha. mai apne bhai bahno jaisa nahi tha. to isme mera koi kasoor nahi tha.

sab bethe baaten kar rahe hote. aise me mai chal kar maa ke paas ja pohnchta. maa ek nazar mujhe dekh sabse baaton me lag jaya karti. mai maa ke karib jata. kabhi maa ki god me bethta. to maa mere sar ke balon me hath chalane lagti.

kabhi mere bhai bahn bethe mastiyan kar rahe hote.. aise me mai maa ke paas jata aur agar maa ke paas mera koi bhai ya bahn hoti to maa mujhse kahti

maa -- surya tu apni didi ke paas ja

mai payal didi ke paas jata.. wo kahti -- kitna boring ha maa mera ye wala bhai.. surya tum chhoti ke paas jao.. mai chhoti didi priya ko dekhta. wo reserve rahne wali ladki thi..

priya -- nahi nahi mere pass na aana. aaj tum kitne gande ho rahe ho.

aise me kabhi kisi ne ye nahi kaha.. surya tum meri god me aa jaao. maa to maa dadi aur sab bhi mujhe aise hi haste hue door kar dia karte.. mai ronqi bachha nahi tha. kisi ki god me jata bhi to gum sum betha rah jata. aur gum sum bachhe kam hi kisi ko payare hua karte han

meri jaga koi aur hota to ro ro kar zid karke apne liye pyar pane lagta. lekin mai rone wala bachha nahi tha. sab ko sunta dekh wahan se chal padta.. tab bhi koi ye nahi kahta tha.. arre surya tum kahan ja rahe ho. idhar aao mere pass...

ye us samay ki baaten ha. jab maine attitude par dhayan dena nahi seekha tha. ye baaten meri memory me save rah gai thi. mujhe gila bhi nahi karna aata tha. pyar pana to mai seekh hi nahi saka tha. maid ya naukraniyan mujhe pyar deti thi. aur mai khush raha karta tha.. aise hi pyar ki chah mere mann me maa dadi aur apnu ke liye thi. lekin mai ziddi nahi tha..

mere dusre bhai aksar maa ki god me sar rakh kar apni daily ki baaten bataya karte. aur maa unki baaten sunkar khub hasa karti. unhe khub pyar dia karti.. mere andr aisi koi skill nahi thi.. mai kaise maa ko hasaya karta. agar aisa hota to maa bhi mujhe sun has dia karti aur mujhe pyar dia karti.

fir mera uthna bethna aur sona jaagna zayada tar naukaron ke gharon me hone laga..

ek baar maa ko main nahi dikha.. maa ne mujhe talash kia.. mai nahi mila to naukaron se kah kar mujhe talash karwaya.. ye maa ki woh mohabbat thi mere liye. jo ek bachhe ke dikhai na dene par umad aaya karti thi..

baad me talash karwane par maa ko pata chala. mai ek naukarani ki ghar me so gaya tha.. maa ko pata chala.. mai surakshit hon. isi kothi me hon.. maa santusht ho gai. maa ne tab narazgi ka izhaar nahi kia.. ye nahi kaha. arre kothi ka beta hokar naukaron ke ghar me kyu so raha ha.

ye pahli bar tha. tab maa sakhti karti aur mujhe naukaron ke gharon me sone se tok deti to shayad samay badal jata. mai wo na ban pata jo bad me ban gaya tha....

mai aaye din naukaron ke gharon me sone laga. sab ke liye mai maalikon ka beta tha. aur naukron ke liye ye badi baat thi. unke maalik ka beta unke ghar me so raha ho.. youn mere liye mere parivar me jaisi chahat ne janam nahi lia tha. naukron ke dilon me woh chahat mere liye janam lene lagi..

mai 8 saal ka hua.. tab mai apnu se bohut door ho gaya tha.. naukron ke karib ho gaya tha. aisa nahi tha. mai maa ya sab ke paas nahi jaya karta tha.. jata tha. lekin meri value aur bhi kam ho gai thi. mera bada bhai vijay ladkpan me dakhal ho chuka tha. uske shauk dekhne wale the. wo kothi ki boundry me hi rifle ki trainning karne laga.. aapne dekha hi hoga komal ji.. kothi kai acre ke area ke gird pheli hui hai. aise me kai roads banaye gaye han gadiyon ke aane jaane ke liye.. vijay un roads par bike chalata.. stunt marta..

maa aur sab usay dekh door se hi khushi ka izhaar karte.. vijay ke bad fir dusre bhai bahno ne bhi bike chalana shuru kar di. chacha ke beton ne bhi apne apne shauk shuru kar diye...


aise hi ek bar vijay ke kuchh dost usse milne aaye.. mai ek mali ke sath khada tha..

vijay -- oye surya idhar aa

mere bhai kabhi kabhi hi mujhe bulaya karte the.. mai bhagam bhag unke pass jaya karta tha..

mai -- ji bhaiya

vijay jo mujhse kuch kahne wala tha.. hasne laga. uske dost usay hasta dekh hasne lage. vijay ke andr rakh rakho bohut tha.. wo mere kandhe par hath maarta hasta hua apne dosto se bola

vijay -- ye mera bhai hai surya.. lekin nira buddhu ha.. chal surya bhaag kar woh uthaa ke laa

vijay ne apne dosto ko dikhane ke liye door padi ek plastic ki kursi utha kar lane ko kaha tha.. mai zayada na soch kar wahan se bhaga aur kursi utha laya.. vijay mera bhai tha. mai is kothi me uske jaisa hi power rakhne wala beta tha. vijay chair kisi naukar se bhi mangwa sakta tha. lekin usne apne dosto ko dikhane ke liye mujhe kursi laane ko bhej dia. so mai wo kursi uthaa laya. ek koi khas baat nahi thi. lekin vijay apni soch ke anusar mujhe useless samjhta hua apne dosto ko bhi samjha raha tha..

mai kursi le aaya..

vijay -- arre.. is ek kursi ka kyaa karna ha. mai aur mere kitne dost han. ja ja ke aur kursiyan utha laa.. mai to bas awen hi tha. bhagam bhag ek ek karke kuriyan utha lata.. ek naukar ne vijay se kaha. wo apne sath dusre naukaron ko sath mila kar kursiyan le aata ha.. lekin vijay ne usay jhidak dia..

maalik tha. maalik bankar rahne ke gur uske andr aa rahe the. naukron ko jhaad pilane laga. uske dosto me uski value badh rahi thi. wo kyu peeche rahta..

mai aisa nahi tha. mujhe unki baaton par, unke kahe kamon par gusa aata.. mujhe rona nahi ata tha. to gusa bhi nahi aata tha..

aise hi vijay ko dekh baki sare bhai bahno ne mujhse aise hi apne friends ke saamne dheron kam karwane shuru kar diye.. payal didi ke shauk khas ladkiyon wale the. wo bhi vijay ki tarah guns chalana seekhne lagi. wahan ek instrucre payal didi ke liye hire kiya gaya. didi chhoti umar me hi usse karate ki training lene lagi.. aur mai aise me payal didi ke order ke anusar usse karib rahta..


samay guzra. payal didi school trip par kahin bahar gai. jab wo laut kar aai to badi pyari dikh rahi thi.. bohut dino bad laut kar aai thi. uske sath uski friends bhi hamari kothi me aai thi.

ab mere andr apne bhai bahno ke liye pyar badhne laga tha.. mai bhagam bhag payal didi ki orr badha.. karib jate hi maine didi ko hug kar lia. mai bhul gaya tha mai pahle mali ke sath mil podo ko pani de raha tha. mere kapde geele the. aise me didi ke kapde geele ho gaye..

tab pahli baar payal didi ne mere moh par ek zor ka chanta maar dia. ye pahla aisa moka tha.. jab mere parivar me se kisi ne mujhe thappad mara tha.. chanta zor ka laga tha. meri ankhon me ansu utar aaye

payal didi mere ansuon ki parwa na karte hue zor se chillai..

payal didi -- ullu ki dum ho tum.. mere sare kapde kharab kar diye.

ek saheli ne kaha -- payal surya akhir tumhara bhai hai

payal ko mujhse zayada apne kapdo ki chinta thi. uski itni well look maine kharab kar di thi.. wo apne kapdo ko dekhti apni saheli se boli

payal -- pata nahi kaise ye mera bhai ban gya. kuch bhi is ke andr mere bhaiyo jaise nahi hai.. kameena sara din naukaron ke sath rahta ha. unki trah ganda rahta ha.. baaten ise karni aati nahi. manners ki ise kuch samjh nahi hai..

fir mujhe dekh boli -- ab khade khade ye tasve kyu baha ho. bhago yahan se

mai didi ko dekh apni ankh se ansu saaf karta wahan se jane laga.. pahli bar mere mann me ye ahsas jaga tha.. mujhe pyar nahi milta.. lekin aisi maar bhi mujhe kyu mili...

payal wo chanta mere liye shamat le aaya.. vijay ne door se ye chanta dekh lia tha. bass fir kyaa tha.. vijay chalte firte kabhi meri peeth par ek laga deta. kabhi sar par.. aise hi woh mujhse kaam ka bol deta..

mai ab aadi hone laga tha.. payal ka attitude ajib tha.. woh jaise kuch alag prakar ki ladki banna chahti thi.. mai uske shauk ke liye uska kama ban gaya.. payal didi ki dekha dekhi uski saheliyon ne bhi mujhe useless samjhna shuru kar dia.

priya didi.. aur parivar me sab hi mere sath same bartav karne lage the.. chante mujhe payal didi ya vijay bhaiya se hi nahi pade the.. ek ka hath khula to samay ke sath sath dusron ke bhi hath khulte chale gaye..

ek moke par maa ne bhi mujhe chanta maar dia. mera chahra maa ke zordar chante se laal pad gaya tha. hua ye tha... sardi ka mausam tha.. mujhe thand lag lgai. thand ke chalte nak bahne lagi. chheenken aane lagi. ek naukarni ne mujhe qahwa bana kar dia. sath hi kuchh dawa bhi di. kuchh aram mila mujhe. aise me mai maa ke paas gaya. us din maine achhe kapde pahn rakhe the..

maa se milne maa ki kuchh friends aai hui thi.. mera dil hua. jaise vijay aur dusre bhai bahan maa ki god me sar rakh kar let jaya karte han. mai bhi let jaaun.. mai maa ke paass gaya.. maa sofe par bethi thi. mujhe dekh smile karti apni freinds ke sath baat karne lagi.. sari friends janti thi mujhe..


jaise hi mai maa ke sath beth apna sar maa ki god me rakha. maa ne mera sar pakad lia.. kamre me ja kar sovo. mai baaten kar rahi hon yahan. aise me tumhara yahan koi kam nahi ha

lekin mai fir bhi wahn se nahi tala. maa ki god me sar nahi rakh saka tha. lekin wahi maa ke karib beth gaya.. maa baaton me lagi rahi. mai bari bari sabko dekhta raha. aur samjhne ki koshish karta raha. khair mujhe baton ki kya samjh aani thi...

aise hi achanak se mujhe ek zordar chheenk aai.. aur meri nak se pani uchhal kar maa ke kapdo par aa gira..

maa cheekhti hui jhatke se uth khadi hui. maa ki freinds hass padi.. maa ko badi subki hui..

maa -- suryaaaaaaaa... ye kyaaa kiya tumne

sath hi maa ne aisa chanta maara. mera pura jabda hil kar rah gaya.. maa aag bagole hui mujhe guse se ghoroti hui boli. tumhe zukam tha to dawa kyu nahi li.. haan batao mujhe.. kamre me aram kyu nahi karne gaye tum..

mai darr gaya.. lekin maa se mile chante ne mere dil me dard jaga dia tha.. maa ka gusa tha keh kam hone me hi nahi aa raha tha..

mai khada raha

maa -- tum to ziddi ho.. sunte hi nahi...

maa apni friends se sorry bolti kapde badal kar wahan jane lagi. mai bhi wahan se chal nikla..

ek baar papa bahar tour par gaye the. apne sath sheeshe ka bana koi gift laaye the.. papa ne sabse kah dia tha.. ye bohut keemati bhi ha aur nayab bhi. sab dhayan rakhna.. ye tootne na paaye..

meri shamat aana baki thi.. papa se bhi mujhe thappad padna tha.. jo mai ek naukar ke sath masti karta hua papa ki us nayab chiz ko tod betha...

us din papa ka thappad khaa kar mai ludakta hua door ja gira tha.. papa ne mujhe khub khari khoti sunaai thi.. jis ladke ke sath mai khel raha tha. uske pita ko papa ne bada zaleel kia......

samay aise hi pheeka pheeka guzarta raha.. fir komal ji aap hamari kothi me padhari.. mai ab askar gum sum raha karta tha. aise me maine aaj tak khud ke siva kisi dusre ko tanhaa nahi dekha tha.. lekin aap ko dekha.. tab maine jana mere bad bhi dunya me koi dukhi hai..

mai chupke chupke aap ko dekhne laga. pyar kya hota ha main anjan tha. lekin aap ka murjhaya chahra dekh mere dil me dard hone laga. bad me jab aap ke bare me ye jana. aapke parivar ke sare sadasy maare gaye han. tab pata nahi kyu mai ek naukar ke ghar ke kamre me chup chaap rone laga tha. komal ji woh meri zindagi ka rona pahli baar aapke liye tha..

haan komal ji main kothi me raha to kai baar aapke liye roya hon main.. tab mai samjh nahi paya tha. lekin aaj samjhta hon. mai apke pyar me roya karta tha.. mera dil chupke chupke aapke liye dhadakne laga tha..


surya itna bol khayalon se bahar aaya komal ko dekhne laga. surya ki nazar jaise hi komal rani ke chahre par padi. wo chaunk gaya..

surya -- arre komal ji aap ro kyu rahi han

komal bheegi awaz me boli -- surya tumhare sath sabne kitni zayadti kari hai na

surya -- ye to nahi pata.. lekin samay ne mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse keemati cheez daan bhi kari hai.. aap ho komal ji mere liye is dunya ki sabse keemati chiz. us kothi me mere apnu se mujhe kuchh nahi mila.. lekin us kothi me aap ke aane se mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi mil gai thi.... aap na aati to jaisa mai aaj badal gaya hon. aapko dekhe bina badal hota to shayad mai apne parivar ke har ek sadasy se nafrat karne lagta.. lekin komal ji.. maine nafrat karna seekha hi nahi hai. kabhi mere andr koi aisa ahsas jaga bhi hai to aap hi aap han mere andr.. mere andr se nafrat jaisa sab dho dia karti han... ye dunya sabhi ke liye jaisi bhi ho.. lekin mere liye aapke hone se haseen se bhi haseen ha ye dunya..

haan komal ji mujhe apne parivar walun se bohut si shikayen han.. lekin aap ko pa maine sab ki sabhi galatiyon ko maaf kar dia ha.. mujhe kisi se koi shikayat nahi hai komal ji..


komal apne ansu poohnchti hui surya ko dekh boli -- surya itna sab hone par bhi tum sab ko shama kar rahe ho.

surya muskura kar komal ko dekhne laga.. fir sar haan me hila dia

koaml rani -- mere dil ki kisi dhadkan me abhi bhi tum nahi utre ho surya.. lekin mai ye baat pure iman ke sath bol rahi hon. tumhara sath dunya me har ek sath se badhkar payara hoga mere liye..

surya khil utha.. chamakte chahre ke sath bola -- komal ji.. aap ne itna kah dia.. mujhe sab kuch mil gaya. aap sath rahne ki baat karti han. aap ki khushbu mere sath hai.. akhri saans tak mere sath rahegi.. kahte han lalach buri bala ha.. kisi ki ek ungli ko pakad kar pura ka pura pane ki icchhhaa kabhi insan ke andr se nahi jati.. mai bhi aakhri saans tak aapki aarzo karta rahunga.. lekin.. aap ke ye shabd bhi mere liye mujhe mile har inam se badhkar han..

komal rani -- aage ki kahani nahi sunaaoge tum surya

surya -- parivar ka attitude hi tha.. wo maine aapko bata dia komal ji. baki sari baaten aise kai incidents par adharit han. same sabhi ka reaction, ek ek karke mujhe sare thappadon ka haal batana padega.. pahle shayad mai bata bhi deta. lekin aapki ankhon me mai ansu nahi dekh sakta. pahle bohut dekh chuka hon komal ji. ab aur nahi..

ab pahle aap strong ban jaaiye.. maom se pathar ki ban jaaiye.. detail aapko mai batata rahunga.. saalon ki kahani minto me ya ghanto me to sunaai nahi ja sakti..

komal rani -- sahi kaha tumne surya.. aur fir tumhari kahani me dard hi dard ha.. tum youn karo.. kothi se jab tum nikle.. wahan se kahani sunaao... aisa kyaa hua tumhari zindagi me.. tum surya se badshah ban gaye..

surya uth khada hua -- komal ji aaj aap ko yahan ki kuch sair karwa dun. fir kuchh dikhaonga.. uske bad aapko kothi se nikalne ke bad ki kahani sunaaonga...


komal bhi uth khadi hui.. surya ne komal ko dekh apna hath badha dia.. komal surya ko dekh uske hath ko dekhti apna hath badha gai.. surya ne bade hi naram pakad ke sath komal ka hath pakad lia...


surya komal ko liye neeche utarne laga.

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surya fir khawab ki si halat me bola -- jab mera janam hua to mai bhi parivar ke dusre bachhon ki tarah khush naseeb tha. dunya me sabse pahla sparsh jo maine paya.. wo sparsh maa ka tha.. dunya me sabse pahle kisi ko jana to woh maa thi..

lekin.....


komal bade dhayan se surya ke bujhe hue chahre ko dekh rahi thi. soch rahi thi. kitna chamakdar chahra ha surya ka. lekin kaise bujh kar rah gaya ha. komal bade dhayan se surya ki jeevan kahani sun rahi thi.. surya "lekin" par a kar ruk gaya ha. jaise purani yaadon me doob gaya ho.. kamol rani ne surya ko nahi chhed. surya ko khud se apne hisab se apni kahani sunane ka moka dia..

surya ne sar utha kar komal ko nahi dekha. aise hi bola -- maa shabd aisa ha.. zuban par aaye to moh me mithas khul jati ha. dunya me koi shabd maa shabd se badhkar meetha nahi hai.. koi rishta maa ke rishte se badhkar nahi hai. koi ahsas maa ki mamta ke ahsas se badhkar nahi hai. mai maa ki aaghosh me tab rak raha. jab tak maa mujhe doodh pilati rahi. jaise hi maa ka doodh thama. mere liye maa ke doodh ke bad dusra doodh aur aise hi meri umar ke bachon ko khilai jane wali foods ka intezam kar dia gaya.. ye sab normal ha. har bachha maa ke doodh ke bad upare doodh aur dusri chizon ki orr chal padta ha. fir jaise jaise woh bada hota ha. uski zindagi me aur bohut kuchh si chizen shamil hone lagti ha..

dunya ke har bachhe ki tarah mere sath bhi hua.. lekin fir mere sath jo hua. wo dunya me bhi kai bachhon ke sath hota ha.. aur un bachhon ki qismat ka haal acha nahi hoa karta.. mere nasib bhi dunya ke un bachhon jaise ho gaye.. jo dunya me thode se hi the.. woh bachhey maa ke doodh ke bad jin bachhon se unki maaen door ho jaya karti han..

mai koi iklota nahi tha.. mai koi special beta nahi tha.. mujhse pahle bhi kai bete the mere maa ke. meri bahne bhi thi.. maa kis kis par dhayan deti.. aisa agar maa se poochaa jaaye to maa zarur aisa hi jawab deti.. lekin jab maa ne mujhpar kam aur dusre paanchon par apna dhayan badha dia to main jaise paraya ho gaya.. mai chhota tha.. aur sab bade the... isliye maa par unki zimmedari zayada thi. yahan maa galat bhi nahi thi.. shayad mujhse pahle mere bhai bahno ke sath bhi maa ne aisa hi kia tha... ek ke bad dusre aane wale ko doodh pilaya.. uska doodh chhoota to bade wale par dhayan badha dia.. kyunki woh bada ho raha tha.. usay samjhane aur dunya ki seekh dene ki zayada zarurat padti thi.. har maa aisa karti ha. so meri maa bhi aisa karne par majbur thi.

sab routine ke hisab se chal raha tha.. mai maa ke pass kam aur maid ke paas zayada rahne laga. maid ke bad mai dusre naukaron ke hathu me rahne laga. mai ajib tha. pata nahi dene wale ne mujhe kaisi surat thi. mere apne mujhse kam aur meri hi kothi ke naukar zayada pyar karne lage.

samay guzarta raha aur fir mai naukaron ke karib aur karib hota chala gaya. mai bhale hi maa ki god me nahi tha. lekin tha to maa ki nazron ke saamne. din me kai kai bar mujhe dekh leti thi. youn maa relax raha karti..

main panch saal ka hua.. tab sabne jaan lia.. mai mand buddhi hon. mere andr kashish ki kami hai.. aksar dekhne me ye aata ha.. un bachhon ko zayada pyar kia jata ha. jo roz nayi nayi harkaten karte han, shararten karte han. naye naye shabd moh se nikal apne parivar walun ko hasate han. lekin mai aisa nahi tha..

mai aisa nahi tha.. mere liye sabko chinta honi chahiye thi.. lekin maine pahle hi kaha aapse komal ji. mere ilawa bhi kai the.. maa aur sabke liye woh zaydada payare ho gaye the. wo padhne lage the. achi achi baaten karne lage the. unke andr parivarik rakh rakhao tha. baat karne ka dhang unke andr aa raha tha. mai shant bacha tha.

lekin koi nahi janta tha. mere chahre par bhav bhale hi nahi hua karte the. lekin mere andr vichar zarur janam lia karte the.

padhai me mera dimag kam nahi karta tha. pahle mujhe school me dakhal karwaya gaya.. lekin mere palle kuchh nahi pada.. mujhe doctor ko dikhaya gyaa. pata chala mai aisa dimag rakhta hon.. mere jaise dimag wale ke sath dimag khapaya to ja sakta ha. lekin usay zayada samjhaya nahi ja sakta.

youn mera school bhi band ho gaya. tab mujhe kothi me jaise azad chhod diya gaya. chahiye to ye tha. mujhse tawajju badha di jaati. mere liye desh bhar ke doctoro se meetings ki jaati. paise ki konsi kami thi.. lekin nahi.. sabne jaise ye maan lia.. mai ek bekaar purza hon.. kabhi samay ne mujhe kuchh daan karna hoga to kar dega..


maa bohut busy ho gai thi. bachhon ko sambhalna.. fr itni badi kothi ko sambhlna. dada ji the. woh apne maamlat me uljhe rahte the. papa aur chacha business me lujhe hue the. mere bhai, bahne aur chacha ke bachhe sab padh likh rahe the. main mand buddhi tha. unke kisi kam ka nahi tha. wo mujhse na to dosto jaisi baaten kar sakte the. na mujhse padhai ke silsilay me salah mashwara kar sakte the.

mai unki mahfil ka ladka nahi tha.. mere bhai bahno ne bhi mujhe nazar andaz karna shuru kar dia....

mai naukaron ka hokar rah gaya.. dhire dhire hi sahi lekin mujhe dunya ki samjh aane lagi. kisi baat ki samjh agar meri umar ke vyakti ko turant lag jaya karti thi to mujhe der se samjh me aati thi.. is sab me mera koi kasoor nahi tha.. main paida hi aise hua tha.. banane wale ne mujhe banaya tha. mai khud se ban kar dunya me nahi aaya tha. mai apne bhai bahno jaisa nahi tha. to isme mera koi kasoor nahi tha.

sab bethe baaten kar rahe hote. aise me mai chal kar maa ke paas ja pohnchta. maa ek nazar mujhe dekh sabse baaton me lag jaya karti. mai maa ke karib jata. kabhi maa ki god me bethta. to maa mere sar ke balon me hath chalane lagti.

kabhi mere bhai bahn bethe mastiyan kar rahe hote.. aise me mai maa ke paas jata aur agar maa ke paas mera koi bhai ya bahn hoti to maa mujhse kahti

maa -- surya tu apni didi ke paas ja

mai payal didi ke paas jata.. wo kahti -- kitna boring ha maa mera ye wala bhai.. surya tum chhoti ke paas jao.. mai chhoti didi priya ko dekhta. wo reserve rahne wali ladki thi..

priya -- nahi nahi mere pass na aana. aaj tum kitne gande ho rahe ho.

aise me kabhi kisi ne ye nahi kaha.. surya tum meri god me aa jaao. maa to maa dadi aur sab bhi mujhe aise hi haste hue door kar dia karte.. mai ronqi bachha nahi tha. kisi ki god me jata bhi to gum sum betha rah jata. aur gum sum bachhe kam hi kisi ko payare hua karte han

meri jaga koi aur hota to ro ro kar zid karke apne liye pyar pane lagta. lekin mai rone wala bachha nahi tha. sab ko sunta dekh wahan se chal padta.. tab bhi koi ye nahi kahta tha.. arre surya tum kahan ja rahe ho. idhar aao mere pass...

ye us samay ki baaten ha. jab maine attitude par dhayan dena nahi seekha tha. ye baaten meri memory me save rah gai thi. mujhe gila bhi nahi karna aata tha. pyar pana to mai seekh hi nahi saka tha. maid ya naukraniyan mujhe pyar deti thi. aur mai khush raha karta tha.. aise hi pyar ki chah mere mann me maa dadi aur apnu ke liye thi. lekin mai ziddi nahi tha..

mere dusre bhai aksar maa ki god me sar rakh kar apni daily ki baaten bataya karte. aur maa unki baaten sunkar khub hasa karti. unhe khub pyar dia karti.. mere andr aisi koi skill nahi thi.. mai kaise maa ko hasaya karta. agar aisa hota to maa bhi mujhe sun has dia karti aur mujhe pyar dia karti.

fir mera uthna bethna aur sona jaagna zayada tar naukaron ke gharon me hone laga..

ek baar maa ko main nahi dikha.. maa ne mujhe talash kia.. mai nahi mila to naukaron se kah kar mujhe talash karwaya.. ye maa ki woh mohabbat thi mere liye. jo ek bachhe ke dikhai na dene par umad aaya karti thi..

baad me talash karwane par maa ko pata chala. mai ek naukarani ki ghar me so gaya tha.. maa ko pata chala.. mai surakshit hon. isi kothi me hon.. maa santusht ho gai. maa ne tab narazgi ka izhaar nahi kia.. ye nahi kaha. arre kothi ka beta hokar naukaron ke ghar me kyu so raha ha.

ye pahli bar tha. tab maa sakhti karti aur mujhe naukaron ke gharon me sone se tok deti to shayad samay badal jata. mai wo na ban pata jo bad me ban gaya tha....

mai aaye din naukaron ke gharon me sone laga. sab ke liye mai maalikon ka beta tha. aur naukron ke liye ye badi baat thi. unke maalik ka beta unke ghar me so raha ho.. youn mere liye mere parivar me jaisi chahat ne janam nahi lia tha. naukron ke dilon me woh chahat mere liye janam lene lagi..

mai 8 saal ka hua.. tab mai apnu se bohut door ho gaya tha.. naukron ke karib ho gaya tha. aisa nahi tha. mai maa ya sab ke paas nahi jaya karta tha.. jata tha. lekin meri value aur bhi kam ho gai thi. mera bada bhai vijay ladkpan me dakhal ho chuka tha. uske shauk dekhne wale the. wo kothi ki boundry me hi rifle ki trainning karne laga.. aapne dekha hi hoga komal ji.. kothi kai acre ke area ke gird pheli hui hai. aise me kai roads banaye gaye han gadiyon ke aane jaane ke liye.. vijay un roads par bike chalata.. stunt marta..

maa aur sab usay dekh door se hi khushi ka izhaar karte.. vijay ke bad fir dusre bhai bahno ne bhi bike chalana shuru kar di. chacha ke beton ne bhi apne apne shauk shuru kar diye...


aise hi ek bar vijay ke kuchh dost usse milne aaye.. mai ek mali ke sath khada tha..

vijay -- oye surya idhar aa

mere bhai kabhi kabhi hi mujhe bulaya karte the.. mai bhagam bhag unke pass jaya karta tha..

mai -- ji bhaiya

vijay jo mujhse kuch kahne wala tha.. hasne laga. uske dost usay hasta dekh hasne lage. vijay ke andr rakh rakho bohut tha.. wo mere kandhe par hath maarta hasta hua apne dosto se bola

vijay -- ye mera bhai hai surya.. lekin nira buddhu ha.. chal surya bhaag kar woh uthaa ke laa

vijay ne apne dosto ko dikhane ke liye door padi ek plastic ki kursi utha kar lane ko kaha tha.. mai zayada na soch kar wahan se bhaga aur kursi utha laya.. vijay mera bhai tha. mai is kothi me uske jaisa hi power rakhne wala beta tha. vijay chair kisi naukar se bhi mangwa sakta tha. lekin usne apne dosto ko dikhane ke liye mujhe kursi laane ko bhej dia. so mai wo kursi uthaa laya. ek koi khas baat nahi thi. lekin vijay apni soch ke anusar mujhe useless samjhta hua apne dosto ko bhi samjha raha tha..

mai kursi le aaya..

vijay -- arre.. is ek kursi ka kyaa karna ha. mai aur mere kitne dost han. ja ja ke aur kursiyan utha laa.. mai to bas awen hi tha. bhagam bhag ek ek karke kuriyan utha lata.. ek naukar ne vijay se kaha. wo apne sath dusre naukaron ko sath mila kar kursiyan le aata ha.. lekin vijay ne usay jhidak dia..

maalik tha. maalik bankar rahne ke gur uske andr aa rahe the. naukron ko jhaad pilane laga. uske dosto me uski value badh rahi thi. wo kyu peeche rahta..

mai aisa nahi tha. mujhe unki baaton par, unke kahe kamon par gusa aata.. mujhe rona nahi ata tha. to gusa bhi nahi aata tha..

aise hi vijay ko dekh baki sare bhai bahno ne mujhse aise hi apne friends ke saamne dheron kam karwane shuru kar diye.. payal didi ke shauk khas ladkiyon wale the. wo bhi vijay ki tarah guns chalana seekhne lagi. wahan ek instrucre payal didi ke liye hire kiya gaya. didi chhoti umar me hi usse karate ki training lene lagi.. aur mai aise me payal didi ke order ke anusar usse karib rahta..


samay guzra. payal didi school trip par kahin bahar gai. jab wo laut kar aai to badi pyari dikh rahi thi.. bohut dino bad laut kar aai thi. uske sath uski friends bhi hamari kothi me aai thi.

ab mere andr apne bhai bahno ke liye pyar badhne laga tha.. mai bhagam bhag payal didi ki orr badha.. karib jate hi maine didi ko hug kar lia. mai bhul gaya tha mai pahle mali ke sath mil podo ko pani de raha tha. mere kapde geele the. aise me didi ke kapde geele ho gaye..

tab pahli baar payal didi ne mere moh par ek zor ka chanta maar dia. ye pahla aisa moka tha.. jab mere parivar me se kisi ne mujhe thappad mara tha.. chanta zor ka laga tha. meri ankhon me ansu utar aaye

payal didi mere ansuon ki parwa na karte hue zor se chillai..

payal didi -- ullu ki dum ho tum.. mere sare kapde kharab kar diye.

ek saheli ne kaha -- payal surya akhir tumhara bhai hai

payal ko mujhse zayada apne kapdo ki chinta thi. uski itni well look maine kharab kar di thi.. wo apne kapdo ko dekhti apni saheli se boli

payal -- pata nahi kaise ye mera bhai ban gya. kuch bhi is ke andr mere bhaiyo jaise nahi hai.. kameena sara din naukaron ke sath rahta ha. unki trah ganda rahta ha.. baaten ise karni aati nahi. manners ki ise kuch samjh nahi hai..

fir mujhe dekh boli -- ab khade khade ye tasve kyu baha ho. bhago yahan se

mai didi ko dekh apni ankh se ansu saaf karta wahan se jane laga.. pahli bar mere mann me ye ahsas jaga tha.. mujhe pyar nahi milta.. lekin aisi maar bhi mujhe kyu mili...

payal wo chanta mere liye shamat le aaya.. vijay ne door se ye chanta dekh lia tha. bass fir kyaa tha.. vijay chalte firte kabhi meri peeth par ek laga deta. kabhi sar par.. aise hi woh mujhse kaam ka bol deta..

mai ab aadi hone laga tha.. payal ka attitude ajib tha.. woh jaise kuch alag prakar ki ladki banna chahti thi.. mai uske shauk ke liye uska kama ban gaya.. payal didi ki dekha dekhi uski saheliyon ne bhi mujhe useless samjhna shuru kar dia.

priya didi.. aur parivar me sab hi mere sath same bartav karne lage the.. chante mujhe payal didi ya vijay bhaiya se hi nahi pade the.. ek ka hath khula to samay ke sath sath dusron ke bhi hath khulte chale gaye..

ek moke par maa ne bhi mujhe chanta maar dia. mera chahra maa ke zordar chante se laal pad gaya tha. hua ye tha... sardi ka mausam tha.. mujhe thand lag lgai. thand ke chalte nak bahne lagi. chheenken aane lagi. ek naukarni ne mujhe qahwa bana kar dia. sath hi kuchh dawa bhi di. kuchh aram mila mujhe. aise me mai maa ke paas gaya. us din maine achhe kapde pahn rakhe the..

maa se milne maa ki kuchh friends aai hui thi.. mera dil hua. jaise vijay aur dusre bhai bahan maa ki god me sar rakh kar let jaya karte han. mai bhi let jaaun.. mai maa ke paass gaya.. maa sofe par bethi thi. mujhe dekh smile karti apni freinds ke sath baat karne lagi.. sari friends janti thi mujhe..


jaise hi mai maa ke sath beth apna sar maa ki god me rakha. maa ne mera sar pakad lia.. kamre me ja kar sovo. mai baaten kar rahi hon yahan. aise me tumhara yahan koi kam nahi ha

lekin mai fir bhi wahn se nahi tala. maa ki god me sar nahi rakh saka tha. lekin wahi maa ke karib beth gaya.. maa baaton me lagi rahi. mai bari bari sabko dekhta raha. aur samjhne ki koshish karta raha. khair mujhe baton ki kya samjh aani thi...

aise hi achanak se mujhe ek zordar chheenk aai.. aur meri nak se pani uchhal kar maa ke kapdo par aa gira..

maa cheekhti hui jhatke se uth khadi hui. maa ki freinds hass padi.. maa ko badi subki hui..

maa -- suryaaaaaaaa... ye kyaaa kiya tumne

sath hi maa ne aisa chanta maara. mera pura jabda hil kar rah gaya.. maa aag bagole hui mujhe guse se ghoroti hui boli. tumhe zukam tha to dawa kyu nahi li.. haan batao mujhe.. kamre me aram kyu nahi karne gaye tum..

mai darr gaya.. lekin maa se mile chante ne mere dil me dard jaga dia tha.. maa ka gusa tha keh kam hone me hi nahi aa raha tha..

mai khada raha

maa -- tum to ziddi ho.. sunte hi nahi...

maa apni friends se sorry bolti kapde badal kar wahan jane lagi. mai bhi wahan se chal nikla..

ek baar papa bahar tour par gaye the. apne sath sheeshe ka bana koi gift laaye the.. papa ne sabse kah dia tha.. ye bohut keemati bhi ha aur nayab bhi. sab dhayan rakhna.. ye tootne na paaye..

meri shamat aana baki thi.. papa se bhi mujhe thappad padna tha.. jo mai ek naukar ke sath masti karta hua papa ki us nayab chiz ko tod betha...

us din papa ka thappad khaa kar mai ludakta hua door ja gira tha.. papa ne mujhe khub khari khoti sunaai thi.. jis ladke ke sath mai khel raha tha. uske pita ko papa ne bada zaleel kia......

samay aise hi pheeka pheeka guzarta raha.. fir komal ji aap hamari kothi me padhari.. mai ab askar gum sum raha karta tha. aise me maine aaj tak khud ke siva kisi dusre ko tanhaa nahi dekha tha.. lekin aap ko dekha.. tab maine jana mere bad bhi dunya me koi dukhi hai..

mai chupke chupke aap ko dekhne laga. pyar kya hota ha main anjan tha. lekin aap ka murjhaya chahra dekh mere dil me dard hone laga. bad me jab aap ke bare me ye jana. aapke parivar ke sare sadasy maare gaye han. tab pata nahi kyu mai ek naukar ke ghar ke kamre me chup chaap rone laga tha. komal ji woh meri zindagi ka rona pahli baar aapke liye tha..

haan komal ji main kothi me raha to kai baar aapke liye roya hon main.. tab mai samjh nahi paya tha. lekin aaj samjhta hon. mai apke pyar me roya karta tha.. mera dil chupke chupke aapke liye dhadakne laga tha..


surya itna bol khayalon se bahar aaya komal ko dekhne laga. surya ki nazar jaise hi komal rani ke chahre par padi. wo chaunk gaya..

surya -- arre komal ji aap ro kyu rahi han

komal bheegi awaz me boli -- surya tumhare sath sabne kitni zayadti kari hai na

surya -- ye to nahi pata.. lekin samay ne mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse keemati cheez daan bhi kari hai.. aap ho komal ji mere liye is dunya ki sabse keemati chiz. us kothi me mere apnu se mujhe kuchh nahi mila.. lekin us kothi me aap ke aane se mujhe meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi mil gai thi.... aap na aati to jaisa mai aaj badal gaya hon. aapko dekhe bina badal hota to shayad mai apne parivar ke har ek sadasy se nafrat karne lagta.. lekin komal ji.. maine nafrat karna seekha hi nahi hai. kabhi mere andr koi aisa ahsas jaga bhi hai to aap hi aap han mere andr.. mere andr se nafrat jaisa sab dho dia karti han... ye dunya sabhi ke liye jaisi bhi ho.. lekin mere liye aapke hone se haseen se bhi haseen ha ye dunya..

haan komal ji mujhe apne parivar walun se bohut si shikayen han.. lekin aap ko pa maine sab ki sabhi galatiyon ko maaf kar dia ha.. mujhe kisi se koi shikayat nahi hai komal ji..


komal apne ansu poohnchti hui surya ko dekh boli -- surya itna sab hone par bhi tum sab ko shama kar rahe ho.

surya muskura kar komal ko dekhne laga.. fir sar haan me hila dia

koaml rani -- mere dil ki kisi dhadkan me abhi bhi tum nahi utre ho surya.. lekin mai ye baat pure iman ke sath bol rahi hon. tumhara sath dunya me har ek sath se badhkar payara hoga mere liye..

surya khil utha.. chamakte chahre ke sath bola -- komal ji.. aap ne itna kah dia.. mujhe sab kuch mil gaya. aap sath rahne ki baat karti han. aap ki khushbu mere sath hai.. akhri saans tak mere sath rahegi.. kahte han lalach buri bala ha.. kisi ki ek ungli ko pakad kar pura ka pura pane ki icchhhaa kabhi insan ke andr se nahi jati.. mai bhi aakhri saans tak aapki aarzo karta rahunga.. lekin.. aap ke ye shabd bhi mere liye mujhe mile har inam se badhkar han..

komal rani -- aage ki kahani nahi sunaaoge tum surya

surya -- parivar ka attitude hi tha.. wo maine aapko bata dia komal ji. baki sari baaten aise kai incidents par adharit han. same sabhi ka reaction, ek ek karke mujhe sare thappadon ka haal batana padega.. pahle shayad mai bata bhi deta. lekin aapki ankhon me mai ansu nahi dekh sakta. pahle bohut dekh chuka hon komal ji. ab aur nahi..

ab pahle aap strong ban jaaiye.. maom se pathar ki ban jaaiye.. detail aapko mai batata rahunga.. saalon ki kahani minto me ya ghanto me to sunaai nahi ja sakti..

komal rani -- sahi kaha tumne surya.. aur fir tumhari kahani me dard hi dard ha.. tum youn karo.. kothi se jab tum nikle.. wahan se kahani sunaao... aisa kyaa hua tumhari zindagi me.. tum surya se badshah ban gaye..

surya uth khada hua -- komal ji aaj aap ko yahan ki kuch sair karwa dun. fir kuchh dikhaonga.. uske bad aapko kothi se nikalne ke bad ki kahani sunaaonga...


komal bhi uth khadi hui.. surya ne komal ko dekh apna hath badha dia.. komal surya ko dekh uske hath ko dekhti apna hath badha gai.. surya ne bade hi naram pakad ke sath komal ka hath pakad lia...


surya komal ko liye neeche utarne laga.

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[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

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