Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

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आखिर सोनल ने मन की बात राज से कह ही दिया राज का कहना भी सही हैं विक्की बाहर आकार कुछ गलत किया तो राज विक्की के साथ कुछ भी करेगा।

अदभुत अतुलनीय लेखन कौशल

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बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।

तो आखिरकार इशिता और समर का रिश्ता भी पक्का हो गया।।
एक बात समझ मे नहीं आता कि पंडित हमेशा ऐसा मुहूर्त क्यों बताता है जिसमे या तो समय नहीं रहता या फिर समय इतना ज्यादा रहता है कि लोग प्रतीक्षा नहीं कर पाते।

Thank you

Taaki pandit ki jeb jaldi garam ho. Kyoki pandit jaanta hai jyaada wait koi nhi karega aur jaldi ka time denge toh jaldi jeb garam hogi.

 

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Congratulations for 700 pages

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[Mahi Maurya]

Update 133​

Dheere dheere time guzarne lagta hai aur shaadi ka din najdeek aane lagta hai. Sablog shaadi ke kaam mein busy hojaate hai. Par Sonal ko toh sirf ek jagah baitha diya jaata hai aur uski nigraani mein sabhi bachho ko baitha diya jaata hai. Jisse Sonal chah ke bhi uth nhi sakti thi.

Raj Sonal ki iss halat ka pura maza le raha tha. Woh jaanmuzz ke Sonal ke saamne aake usko pareshan karta usko chidata jisse Sonal ko bahot gussa aata. Par Raj Sonal ka dhyaan bhi pura rakhta. Uski nazar harwaqt Sonal ke upar hi rehti.

Agar Sonal ko kisi chiz ki jarurat hoti toh Raj uske saamne hota. Time to time Sonal ko khaana khilana bhi Raj achhe se dekh raha tha.

Dheere dheere Sangeet ka din aajata hai. Sablog bahot khush the sivaay Sonal ke. Kyoki usko strict warning mili thi ke woh ek jagah chup chaap khadi rahegi.

Sangeet ke sham sablog naach gaa rahe the aur Sonal ek jagah khadi hoke bebas se unsab ko dekh rahi thi. Raj toh jaanmuzz ke Sonal ko dikha dikha ke naache raha tha jiss wajah se Sonal ko bahot gussa aaraha tha.

Sonal: Mann mein. Dekho toh kaise naach rahe hai mujhe dikha dikha ke. Kaha mere bagal mein khade hoke mujhe support karenge. Aane do kamre mein chorungi nhi.

Abhi Sonal yeh soch hi rahi thi ke tabhi Raj uske bagal mein aajata hai aur dheere se uske kaan mein bolta hai.

Raj: Kyaa huaa meri baby ko.

Sonal: Gusse mein. Bhaad mein gayi baby. Aap aaiye raat ko kamre mein aapko batati hu main.

Raj: Areee itnaa gussa nhi karna chahiye. Tum itna gussa karogi tog humare bachhe pe iska bura asar hoga.

Sonal: Aapko parwaah hai meri aur mere bachhe ki. Aapko bilkul bhi parwaah nhi hai humlogo ki. Agar hoti toh humne dikha dikha ke naachte nhi. Humare paas khade rehte.

Raj: Aree meri jaan toh bura maan gayi. Main toh bas tumhare saath thodi masti kar raha tha.

Sonal: Achha mujhe takleef deke aapko maza aaraha hai. Yehi aap pyaar karte hai mujhse.

Raj: Achha baba Sorry galti hogyi. Maaf kardo. Ab harwaqt tumhare saath hi rahunga khush.

Sonal: Koi jarurat nhi hai. Aap jaaiye enjoy kijiye. Biwi ko toh aap bhul hi gaye hai.

Raj: Aree meri jaan tumhe kaise bhul sakta hu. Tum toh meri nas nas mein ho. Pleaseee maaf kardo. Galti hogyi.

Sonal kuch nhi bolti bas muh fula ke wahi khadi rehti hai. Raj wahi Sonal ke paad khada hojaata hai aur uske saath chedkhaani karne lagta hai.

Sangeet ka program khatam hone ke baad sablog apne apne ghar chale jaate hai. Sonal apne kamre mein aati hai toh woh Raj se koi baat nhi karti.

Raj Sonal ko apni baahon mein leke usse maafi maangne lagta hai. Par Sonal koi baat nhi kar rahi thi.

Raj: Sonuu maaf kardo naa. Galti hogyi. Aage se aisa nhi karunga. Tumhe pata hai naa tum aise chup rehti ho toh mujhe bilkul achha nhi lagta. Pleaseee maaf kardo.

Sonal: Aap abhi bol rahe phir aisa nhi karenge. Par kal shaadi mein phir se aap mujhe dikha dikha ke naachenge.

Raj: Kal main harwaqt apni Sonu ke paas rahunga. Uske saath hi khada rahunga. Pleasee maaf kardo. Tum toh meri achhi Sonu ho naa. Meri pyaari Sonu ho. Pleaseeee.

Sonal: Achha achha thikk hai. Maaf kiyaa. Par aage se aisa kiya naa toh main aapse phir kabhi baat nhi karungi.

Raj: Kabhii nhii karungaa.

Phir dono so jaate hai.

Agle din shaadi thi toh sablog subah se hi busy the. Par Raj apne waade ke mutabik harwaqt Sonal ke saath hi thaa. Woh usko ek pal ke liye bhi akela nhi chor raha tha. .

Dekhte dekhte sham hojaati hai aur shaadi ka time bhi hone lagta hai. Sablog apne apne kamre mein taiyaar horahe thee.

Raj apne kamre mein aata hai toh dekhta hai Sonal ready horahi hai. Woh apne blouse ki dori baandhne ki koshish kar rahi thi par usse nhi horaha tha.

Raj: Agar tumse nhi horaha hai toh main baand du.

Sonal: Seriously Raj. Biwi ke blouse ki dori baandne ke liye bhi aap puch rahe hai. Yeh nhi ki aake meri help kardee.

Raj Sonal ke pichhe aake uske blouse ki dori baandhne lagta hai par beech beech mein sararat karke Sonal ki peet mein gudgudi bhi kar raha tha.

Sonal: Aapko koi kaam bolna hi bekaar hai. Ek toh yaha late horaha hai aur aapko masti suj rahi hai.

Raj: Ek baat bolu. Aaj kal tum bahot chid chid karne lagi ho. Meri Sonu aisi toh nhi thi.

Sonal: Achha main chid chid karne lagi hu ab. Pehle toh aapko yehi baate pyaari lagti thi.

Raj: Pyaari ab bhi lagti hai. Par tum jaise karti ho naa woh achha nhi lagta. Har baat pe tum pareshan hojaati ho. Choti choti baat pe gussa hojaati ho.

Abhi Sonal kuch bolti ke tabhi pichhe se Smita bolti hai.

Smita: Woh isiliye ke iss waqt Sonal ki jo halat hai usme mood baat baat mein change hota hai. Har choti choti pe chid jaana gussa karna yeh hoga hi. Isiliye complain karna band karo aur enjoy karo.

Sonal: Par yeh samajte hi nhi hai Mummy. Har waqt bas mujhe pareshan karte hai.

Raj: Ab Mummy ke samne nhi Sonal.

Smita: Achha ab bas karo tumdono. Sonal tum ready ho naa.

Sonal: Jii Mummy.

Smita: Toh chalo chalke Aarav ki aarti utaro. Tum uski bhabhi ho.

Sonal: Par yeh toh Nandini bhabhi ka haq hai naa woh badi hai.

Smita: Haa. Tum dono hi karne wali ho. Woh tumhara hi wait kar rahi hai. Chalo jaldi.

Phir sab nichhe aajate hai aur shaadi ke pehle ki saari rashm karne lagte hai aur uske baad sablog marriage hall ke kiye nikal padhte hai.

Sablog Aarav aur Samar ke aage naachte hue jaa rahe the par Raj Sonal ke saath gaadi mein baitha hua tha. Aur yeh chiz Sonal ko achhi lagti hai ke uska pati uske saath hai.

Kuch der mein sablog marriage hall aajate hai. Aarav aur Samar ko stage pe baitha diya jaata hai.

Thodi der mein waha Neha Vishal Soniya aur Varun aajate hai. Rashmi bhi apne pati ke saath aayi hui thi. Neha ne toh shaadi karli thi par Soniya ne sirf engagement hi ki thi. Wohlog aake charo ko congratulate karte hai aur stage mein unke bagal mein khade hojaate hai.

Tabhi waha Mr. And Mrs. Khanna bhi aajate hai. Deepak aur Meera ne unhe bhi invite kiya tha. Sonal unhe dekh kar khush thi. Par jab woh Mrs. Khanna ko dekhti hai toh usse unke chehre pe thodi udaasi bhi dikhti hai.

Sonal: Uncle Aunty kaise hai aaplog.

Dono: Hum achhe hai beta. Aur tumhe bahot bahot badhai ho. Tumhare Mummy papa ne bataya tha ke tum maa banne wali ho.

Sonal: Thank You Uncle Aunty.

Phir unke beech koi baat nhi hoti. Mr. And Mrs. Khanna stage se utar kar baaki mehmaano ke beech aajate hai. Par Sonal ki nazar jaise unpe hi tham gayi thi.

Kuch der baad Raj Sonal ke paas aata hai toh Sonal Raj se bolti hai.

Sonal: Raj mujhe waha mehmaano ke paas jaana hai.

Raj: Tum waha jaake kyaa karogi Sonal. Tum yaha aaram se baitho naa.

Sonal: Mujhe waha thoda kaam hai. Pleaseee le chaliyee.

Raj: Achha thik hai chalo.

Phir Raj Sonal ko leke mehmaano ke beevh aajata hai. Sonal sidha Mr and Mrs. Khanna ke paas aati hai aur bolti hai.

Sonal: Uncle Aunty kyaa baat hai. Main bahot der se dekh rahi hu aaplog kuch udaas se hai.

Mr. Khanna: Nhii nhii Sonal. Aisi koi baat nhi hai.

Sonal: Nhii Uncle. Kuch toh baat hai. Main bahot der se dekh rahi hu. Bataiye naa kyaa baat hai.

Mrs. Khanna: Woh beta hum Vicky se milne gaye thee. Usse apni galti ka aihsaas hogya hai. Bahot ro raha tha aur maafi bhi maang raha thaa. Bhale hi humne usse boldiya tha ke humse uska ab koi rishta nhi hai. Par beta hai woh mera. Mere se uski woh takleef nhi dekhi gayi.

Mr. Khanna: Beta bhale hi woh jaisa bhi hai par humara ek lauta beta hai. Agar tumlog usse maaf karke uski saza kam karwa do toh bahot achha hota. Maana usne jo kiya hai woh maafi ke kaabil nhi hai.

Sonal: Uncle Aunty main isme kuch nhi keh sakti. Yeh sab mere haath mein nhi hai. Aur maine Vicky ko maaf kardiya hai. Mere dil mein uske liye koi gila shikwa nhi hai.

Phir Sonal waha se wapas stage mein aajati hai. Par uske dimaag mein Mr. And Mrs. Khanna ki baat hi chal rahi thi.

Thodi der baad shaadi ki rashm start hoti hai. Aarav aur Samar ko mandap pe baithaya jaata hai. Kuch der baad Payal aur Ishita ko unke paas baitha diya jaata hai.

Phir unka kanyadaan kiya jaata hai. Payal ka toh uske mummy papa ne kiya tha aur Ishita ka Ishant aur Shruti ne kiya tha. Phir phere hote hai sindoor aur mangalsutra bhi pehnaya jaata hai.

Dekhte dekhte shaadi puri hojaati hai aur bidaai ka waqt aajata hai. Payal apne maa baap ke toh Ishita apne dono bhai aur bhabhi ke gale lag khub roti ha. Ishita toh Khaash kar Ishant aur Shruti ke. Kyoki uske maa baap ke marne ke baad undono ne kabhi bhi usse maa baap ki kami mehsus nhi hone di.

Bidaai ke baad sabki aankhein nam thi par dil mein khushi thi ke unki beti ab apne asli ghar chali gayi aur apni nayi zindagi ki suruaat karne wali hai.

Payal jaha bidaai ke baad Kapoor House aati hai wahi Ishita ek hotel mein jaati hai jaha aaj ki raat wohlog rukhne wale the. Ishita ke swagat ke liye Swati aur Yash wahi Hotel mein chale gaye the. Unke saath Rashmi bhi wahi thi. Idher Payal ka swagat uski badi behen cum jethani karti hai.

Swagat ke baad Payal ko uske kamre mein bhej diya jaata hai. Udher Hotel mein bhi Ishita ke swagat ke baad usse ek room mein bhej diya jaata hai aur baaki sab bhi apne apne room mein chale jaate hai.​

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।।
वैसे देखा जाए तो विक्की को अपनी गलती का एहसास हो गया और एक माँ बाप की परेशानी को देखते हुए राज और सोनल को उसके बारे में सोचना चाहिए। खासकर तब जब विक्की जैसे नालायक बेटे के इतने अच्छे माँ बाप हों। विक्की के लिए नहीं कम से कम उसके माँ बाप के लिए विक्की को जेल से बाहर निकालना चाहिए राज को।।

 

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बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।।
वैसे देखा जाए तो विक्की को अपनी गलती का एहसास हो गया और एक माँ बाप की परेशानी को देखते हुए राज और सोनल को उसके बारे में सोचना चाहिए। खासकर तब जब विक्की जैसे नालायक बेटे के इतने अच्छे माँ बाप हों। विक्की के लिए नहीं कम से कम उसके माँ बाप के लिए विक्की को जेल से बाहर निकालना चाहिए राज को।।

Thank you

Jail se direct bahar toh nhi aasaktaa. Par uski saza kam karwa ke jaldi bahar la sakta hai. Aur wahi karega Raj.

 

[Mahi Maurya]

Update 134​

Raj jab apne room mein aata hai toh Sonal khidki ke paas khadi thi. Raj Sonal ke paas aake usko apni baahon mein le leta hai aur bolta hai.

Raj: Humare bachhe ne aisa kaun si galti kardi jo tum usse aise khadi rehke saza de rahi ho.

Sonal: Aisi koi baat nhi hai Raj. Main bas kuch soch rahi thi.

Raj: Achhhaa. Toh kyaa soch hai mere pyaari si biwi.

Sonal: Agar main aapse kuch maangu toh kyaa aap mujhe dengee.

Raj: Tumhe maangne ki koi jarurat nhi hai tum bas order diya karo.

Sonal: Kyaa aap Karan Bhaiya ko bolke Vicky ki saza kam nhi karwa sakte. Aaj Uncle Aunty aaye the toh unse baat karne pe unhone bola ke usse apni galti ka aihsaas hogya hai. Aur maafi bhi maang raha tha. Isiliye please uski saza kam karwa dijiye. Mujhse Uncle Aunty ka dukh dekha nhi gaya.

Raj: Tumhe pata hai tumhari isi achhai ka faiyda log uthate hai.

Sonal: Pleasee maan jaaiye naa. Kyaa aap apni biwi ki itni si baat nhi maanenge. Pleasee.

Raj: Achha thikk hai. Main karta hu bhaiya se baat. Khushhh.

Sonal: Thankkk youuu. Aap bahott achhe hai. I Lovee Youuu.

Raj: I Love You Too. Par agar usne bahar aake phir se kuch kiya toh main usse nhi chorungaa.

Sonal: Thikk hai.

Phir dono so jaate hai.

Agle din subah Ishita jaha Samar ke saath apne ghar aati hai wahi Payal bhi Aarav ke saath apne ghar jaati hai pagfhere ki rashm ke liye. Sham ko Samar aur Ishita apne parivaar ke saath Jaipur chale jaate hai. Jaipur jaate waqt bhi Ishita khub roti hai.

Dekhte dekhte inki shaadi ko bhi kuch mahine guzar jaate hai aur Sonal ki delivery date bhi bahot hi jyaada najdeek aajati hai. Kisi bhi din usko admit karna padh sakta tha. Raj ne Karan se baat karke Vicky ki saza bhi kam karwa di thi.

Ek din raat ko sablog aaram se so rahe the. Par tabhi achanak se Sonal ki neend toot jaati hai uske pet mein dard bhi hone lagta hai.

Sonal: Rajjjjjj Rajjjjj uthiyeeeee.

Par Raj gehri neend mein so raha thaa isiliye uske bulane ke baad bhi nhi uth raha tha.

Sonal: Dard se chillate hue. Rajjjjjjjjj. Uthiyeeeeeee.

Sonal ke aise chillane se Raj ki neend toot jaati hai aur woh jhatt se uthke baith jaata hai.

Raj: Kyaaa huaaa chilla kyo rahi ho.

Sonal: Timeee aagya haii meraaa. Jaldi se Mummy ko bulaiyeee. Aaaahhhhhhh Mummyyyyyyyyy.

Sonal ki baat sunke Raj jhatt se bhaagta hai aur apni maa ke kamre ke paas aake jorr jorr se darwaaza khatkaane lagta hai.

Kuch der mein Smita darwaza kholti hai aur Raj ko waha dekh kar woh samaj jaati hai kyaa hua hai.

Smita: Jaldi se sabko utha. Main Sonal ko sambhalti hu. Yeh bol woh Sonal ke paas bhaagti hai.

Raj jaldi se Ragini Nandini Payal sabko uthata hai aur Sonal ke paas bhaagta hai.

Smita: Raj jaldi se gaadi nikal. Nandini Sonal ke doctor ko call karo aur bolo hospital aajaye. Aarav Swati ko bhi call karke bolde.

Sonal: Rote hue. Aaaahhhhhh Mummmyyy bahottt darddd horaha haiiii. Kuchhh kijiyeee naaaaa. Aaaahhhhhhhh.

Ragini: Bas bas Sonal. Thodi der hum hospital jaa rahe hai naa. Rajj jaldi karrr.

Karan: Main gaadi nikalta hu. Raj tu Sonal ko leke aa. Yeh bol woh bahar bhaag jaata hai.

Raj jaldi se Sonal ke paas aata hai aur usse godd mein uthake nichhe jaane lagta hai.

Smita: Rajj sambhal kee.

Raj Sonal ko leke bahar aata hai aur usko gaadi ke backseat mein sula deta hai. Smita Sonal ka sir apni god mein le leti hai aur Ragini uske pairon ko. Karan Car drive karne lagta hai aur Raj uske paas baith jaata hai.

Payal: Bhaiyaa yeh bhabhi ka bag le lijiye. Isme sab jarurat ka samaan hai.

Raj woh bag le leta hai aur Karan gaadi ko hospital ki taraf bhaga deta hai. Aarav bhi Payal aur Nandini ko leke pichhe pichhe nikal jaata hai.

Udher Swati ko jab Aarav call karke bolta hai toh woh bhi Yash ko saath nikal jaati hai. Ishant aur Shruti ghar mein hi rehte hai bachhon ke saath.

Thodi der mein Sonal ko leke hospital pahonch jaate hai aur Sonal ko OT mein lejaaya jaata hai. Thodi der baad sablog aajate hai. Raj toh tension mein idher udher ghume jaa raha tha.

Smita: Raj ek jagah baith jaa. Kyo aise ghum raha hai.

Raj: Mummy Sonal ko kitna dard horaha tha. Woh thikk toh hogi naa. Mujhe bahot tension horahi hai.

Smita: Aree kuch nhi hogaa usse. Aur yeh dard toh har aurat ko sehna hi padhta hai.

Nandini: Aur nhi toh kyaa. Tumlogo ko kyaa lagta hai bachhe ko janam dena aasan hota hai. Bachhe ko janam dete waqt jo dard hota hai naa uss dard ko sehne ki himmat aur taqat sirf hum aurato ke paas hoti hai. Aur tum chinta mat karo. Sonal bilkul thikk hai. Bas kuch hi der mein bachhe ki awaaz sunayi degi.

Sablog Raj ko samjhane lagte hai par Raj ka tension kam hi nhi horaha tha woh bas OT ke saamne idher udher chal raha thaa. Tabhi waha ek nurse aati hai aur bolti hai aap mein se OT mein jo patient se unka family member kaun hai.

Raj: Kya hua sister. Sab thik hai naa. Main uska pati hu. Sonal thikk hai naa.

Nurse: Jii aap tension naa le. Woh thikk hai. Abhi delivery mein time hai aur doctor aagaye hai. Tab tak aap yeh admission form bhar dijiye.

Aarav: Aap form mujhe dijiye. Main fill kar deta hu. Yeh bol Aarav form leke reception pe chala jaata hai.

Nandini: Swati tumne Jaipur call karke bataya yaa nhi.

Swati: Oo sorry bhabhi main bhul gayi. Mujhe jaise hi pata chala main turant aagayi. Main abhi kardeti hu. Yeh bol Swati thoda durr jaake Ishita ko call karti hai.

Ishita: Kyaa huaa bhabhi itni raat ko call kiya sab thikk hai naa.

Swati: Haa sab thikk hai. Samar kaha hai.

Ishita: Samar toh so rahe hai. Unhe uthau kyaa.

Swati: Tum baad mein utha dena. Maine bas yeh bolne ke liye call kiya hai ke Sonal ko hospital mein admit kardiya hai. Tumlog kal aajana.

Ishita: Kyaaa. Admit kardiya. Matlab main phir se bua ban gayi. Aur Mami bhi.

Swati: Bani nhi ho banogi. Tum Mummy Papa ko boldena.

Ishita: Thik hai. Hum kal subah tak aajayengee. Yeh bol call cut kardeti hai aur jaake Samar ko uthati hai.

Ishita: Samar Samar uthiyeee. Samarrrr.

Samar: Kyaa hai Ishu. Sone do na.

Ishita: Aree Sonal bhabhi ko Hospital mein admit kardiya hai. Swati bhabhi ka call aaya tha. Uthiyee naa.

Samar: Jhatt se uthke. Kyaaa Shinchan hospital mein.

Ishita: Haaa. Aap uthiye aur tickets dekhiye Main Mummy Papa ko batati hu. Yeh bol woh Meera ke kamre ki taraf bhaagti hai.

Ishita Meera ke kamre mein aake darwaaza knock karti hai toh kuch der baad Meera darwaaza kholti hai aur saamne Ishita ko dekh hairan hoti hai.

Meera: Aree Ishu beta kyaa baat hai itni raat ko. Sab thikk hai naa.

Ishita: Mummy woh Mumbai se call aaya tha. Sonal bhabhi ko admit kardiya hai. Kal chalna hai waha.

Meera: Sachhhh. Bhagwaan karee sab achha ho.

Ishita: Jiii. Kal subah subah hi nikalna hai toh samaan pack karlijiye. Samar tickets check kar rahe honge.

Meera: Thikk hai.

Idher Hospital mein Sonal ka dard badhta jaaraha tha doctor uske reports ko ekbaar phir se recheck kar raha tha. Reports check karne ke baad woh bahar aata hai aur bolta hai.

Doctor: Dekhiye delivery mein thoda time baaki hai. Par Patient ki body mein khoon ki thodi kami hai. Toh humhe khoon chadana hoga.

Raj: Doctor Meri Sonal aur mera bachha toh thikk hai naa.

Doctor: Haa Patient aur bachha bilkul thikk hai. Aaplog jaldi se khoon ka intezaam kardiye.

Raj: Kis group ka khoon chahiye doctor.

Doctor: B+.

Raj: Mera bhi yehi group hai. Aap mera khoon le lijiye.

Doctoe: Sister inko le jao aur blood check karke khoon le lo aur patient ko chada do.

Nurse: Yes Doctor. Phir Raj Nurse ke saath chala jaata hai.

Thodi der baad Sonal ki delivery time hojaata hai toh Doctor bhi apne kaam mein lag jaata hai. Bahar ab sabko thodi tension horahi thi.​

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।।

सोनल ने बिल्कुल सही किया राज को बोलकर कि वो विक्की की सजा को कम करवाने के लिए करन से बात करे।। सोनल अस्पताल में हैं क्योंकि किसी भी समय उसे बच्चा हो सकता है। नंदिनी ने सही कहा। एक बच्चे की जन्म के समय माँ को 1000 बोल के बिजली के झटके जैसे दर्द होता है।। इसीलिए तो माँ को दुनिया मे सबसे सहनशील कहा गया है।

 

[Mahi Maurya]

Update 135​

Raj: Mummy sab thikk hogaa naa.

Smita: Haa Raj sab thikk hogaa. Tu chinta mat kar. Bas kuch hi der mein nurse bahar aake khushkhabri degi.

Kuch 15-20 mins baad Nurse bahar aati hai toh sab usko gher lete hai aur sawaal puchne lagte hai.

Nurse: Shant hojaiye aaplog pehle. Mujhe kuch bolne denge tab naa main kuch bolungi.

Nurse ke bolne ke baad sablog shant hojaate hai toh Raj bolta hai.

Raj: Sister please bataiye naa meri Sonal aur mera bachha kaisa hai.

Nurse: Aapki patni bilkul thikk hai. Aur aapke bachhe bhi bilkul swastha hai. Congratulations aapko twins hue hai. 1 beta aur 1 beti.

Nurse ki baat sunke sablog bahot jyaada khush hojaate hai. Raj ki aankhon se toh khushi ke aansu nikalne lagte hai.

Raj: Mummy sunaa aapne main 2 bachhon ka baap bangaya. Mujhe 2 bachhe hue hai.

Smita: Haa Rajj sunaa mainee. Main bhi toh 2 bachhon ki dadi bangayi.

Nandini: Sister hum kab tak mil sakte hai.

Nurse: Filhal toh woh behosh hai. Kuch der humlog unhe ward mein shift kar rahe hai uske baad aaplog mil sakte hai. Phir Nurse andar chali jaati hai.

Bahar sablog ekdusre ke gale lag ekdusre ko congratulate kar rahe the. Swati ne call karke Shruti ko aur Jaipur mein bhi bata diya tha. Wohlog bhi bahot hi jyaada khush thee.

Kuch der baad doctor bahar aata hai aur bolta hai.

Doctor: Congratulations Mr. Kapoor.

Raj: Thank You Doctor. Kyaa hum unse mil sakte hai.

Doctor: Bas unhe ward mein shift kiya jaa raha hai phir mil sakte hai.

Ragini: Doctor bachhe aur Maa swastha toh hai naa.

Doctor: Haaa bachhe ekdum swastha hai aur rahi baat maa ki toh bhi swastha hai par filhal thodi kamzori hai.

Smita: Doctor dono bachhon mein bada kaun hai.

Doctor: Ladki ka janam 1 min pehle hua hai. Phir doctor waha se chala jaata hai.

Kuch der ke baad Sonal aur bachhon ko ward mein shift kardiya jaata hai. Sonal kamzoori ki wajah se abhi bhi behosh hi thi.

Ward mein shift karne ke baad sablog Sonal aur bachhe ke paas jaate hai. Smita aur Ragini toh jaate hi ek ek bachhe ko apni godd mein utha leti hai.

Ragini: Kitni pyaari hai.

Smita: Haa didi. Dekhiye ladke ki aankhe bilkul Sonal ki tarah hai.

Ragini: Aur ladki ki naak Raj ki tarah.

Nandini: Mummy mujhe bhi toh milne dijiye. Aakhir main inki badi mummy hu.

Payal: Aur main chachi hu. Mujhe bhi milne dijiyee.

Phir ek ek karke sablog bachhon se milte hai. Par Raj toh Sonal ke paas baitha tha aur durr se hi apne bachhon ko dekh raha tha.

Ashok: Aree bachhon ke pita ko bhi dekhne do. Tumsab toh usse bhul hi gaye ho.

Ashok ke bolne ke baad bachhon ko Raj ke bagal mein rakhe palne mein sula diya jaata hai. Jiske baad Raj bas ek tak apne dono bachhon ko dekhne lagta hai. Usse toh jaise aur koi sudh budh hi nhi thi.

Abhi Raj bachhon mein khoya hua tha ke tabhi Nandini ka phone baj uthta hai. Woh dekhti hai ke Shruti ka video call aaya hua hai.

Nandini: Haaa Shruti bolo.

Shruti: Bolna sunna baad mein. Pehle mujhe mere bhatije aur bhatiji se milwao. Kabse wait kar rahi hu.

Phir Nandini palne ke paas aake apne mobile se bachhon ko dikhati hai.

Shruti: Kitnee pyaare hai bhabhi. Pure Raj aur Sonal ki tarah dikhte hai.

Nandini: Haa ekdumm. Bahott pyaare hai.

Shruti: Bhabhi Swati ko bolo ghar aajaye. Ansh baar baar neend se uth raha hai aur ro raha hai.

Swati jo bagal mein thi woh sunn leti hai.

Swati: Bas didi aarahi hu.

Phir call cut hojaata hai.

Raj: Mummy aaplog ab ghar jaaiye. Waha dadi akeli hai.

Smita: Hmm Thikk hai. Main aur tu yahi rukhte hai baaki sab ghar jao. Subah aajana.

Phir sab ekbaar aur bachhe ko dekh kar ghar ki taraf nikal jaate hai.

Unnsab ke jaane ke thodi der baad hi Sonal ko hosh aane lagta hai. Hosh mein aate hi woh sabse pehle ek hi chiz bolti hai.

Sonal: Mere bachheee.

Raj: Sonalll.

Sonal: Rajjjj mere bachhe kaha hai. Mujhee dekhna hai mere bachhon ko. Kaha hai woh.

Raj: Shant hojao Sonal. Humare bachhe ekdum thikk hai. Woh dekho tumhare bagal mein hi so rahe hai.

Sonal jhatt se apne bagal mein dekhti hai toh paati ke hai palne mein uske dono bachhe so rahe the jinhe dekh kar hi Sonal ki aankhon mein aansu aajate hai.

Sonal: Aankhon mein aansu liyee. Rajjj humare bachhe. Yehh humaree bachhe haii.

Raj: Haa Sonall yeh humare hi bachhe hai. Aaj main bahott khushh hu. Tumne mujhee 2 bachhon ka baap bana diyaa. Main bahott khushh hu.

Sonal: Aaj main puri hogyi Raj. Aaj main puri hogyi. Ab mujhee aur kuchh nhii chahiyeee. Kuchh nhii.

Smita: Sonalll.

Sonal: Mummyyy. Mainn maa bangayi Mummy. Yehh mere bachhe hai.

Smita: Haa Sonall. Bahott bahott badhaii ho. Tumne aaj humhe bahott badi khushi di hai.

Sonal bas apne bachhon ko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Tabhi waha Nurse aati hai aur bolti hai.

Nurse: Chaliye ab aaplog bahar jaaiye. Ab bachhon ke feeding ka time hogya hai.

Phir Raj aur Smita bahar chale jaate hai aur Sonal apne bachhon ko feed karne lagti hai.​

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।

ये तो बहुत ही खुशी की बात है कि सोनल को जुड़वा बच्चे पैदा हुए।। सबसे ज्यादा खुश हो राज है। आज उसने अपने जीवन का एक और पड़ाव पा लिया है। आज वो एक पति से एक पिता बन गया है।।

 

[Jaguaar]

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।।

सोनल ने बिल्कुल सही किया राज को बोलकर कि वो विक्की की सजा को कम करवाने के लिए करन से बात करे।। सोनल अस्पताल में हैं क्योंकि किसी भी समय उसे बच्चा हो सकता है। नंदिनी ने सही कहा। एक बच्चे की जन्म के समय माँ को 1000 बोल के बिजली के झटके जैसे दर्द होता है।। इसीलिए तो माँ को दुनिया मे सबसे सहनशील कहा गया है।

Thank you

 

[Destiny]

Update 135​

Raj: Mummy sab thikk hogaa naa.

Smita: Haa Raj sab thikk hogaa. Tu chinta mat kar. Bas kuch hi der mein nurse bahar aake khushkhabri degi.

Kuch 15-20 mins baad Nurse bahar aati hai toh sab usko gher lete hai aur sawaal puchne lagte hai.

Nurse: Shant hojaiye aaplog pehle. Mujhe kuch bolne denge tab naa main kuch bolungi.

Nurse ke bolne ke baad sablog shant hojaate hai toh Raj bolta hai.

Raj: Sister please bataiye naa meri Sonal aur mera bachha kaisa hai.

Nurse: Aapki patni bilkul thikk hai. Aur aapke bachhe bhi bilkul swastha hai. Congratulations aapko twins hue hai. 1 beta aur 1 beti.

Nurse ki baat sunke sablog bahot jyaada khush hojaate hai. Raj ki aankhon se toh khushi ke aansu nikalne lagte hai.

Raj: Mummy sunaa aapne main 2 bachhon ka baap bangaya. Mujhe 2 bachhe hue hai.

Smita: Haa Rajj sunaa mainee. Main bhi toh 2 bachhon ki dadi bangayi.

Nandini: Sister hum kab tak mil sakte hai.

Nurse: Filhal toh woh behosh hai. Kuch der humlog unhe ward mein shift kar rahe hai uske baad aaplog mil sakte hai. Phir Nurse andar chali jaati hai.

Bahar sablog ekdusre ke gale lag ekdusre ko congratulate kar rahe the. Swati ne call karke Shruti ko aur Jaipur mein bhi bata diya tha. Wohlog bhi bahot hi jyaada khush thee.

Kuch der baad doctor bahar aata hai aur bolta hai.

Doctor: Congratulations Mr. Kapoor.

Raj: Thank You Doctor. Kyaa hum unse mil sakte hai.

Doctor: Bas unhe ward mein shift kiya jaa raha hai phir mil sakte hai.

Ragini: Doctor bachhe aur Maa swastha toh hai naa.

Doctor: Haaa bachhe ekdum swastha hai aur rahi baat maa ki toh bhi swastha hai par filhal thodi kamzori hai.

Smita: Doctor dono bachhon mein bada kaun hai.

Doctor: Ladki ka janam 1 min pehle hua hai. Phir doctor waha se chala jaata hai.

Kuch der ke baad Sonal aur bachhon ko ward mein shift kardiya jaata hai. Sonal kamzoori ki wajah se abhi bhi behosh hi thi.

Ward mein shift karne ke baad sablog Sonal aur bachhe ke paas jaate hai. Smita aur Ragini toh jaate hi ek ek bachhe ko apni godd mein utha leti hai.

Ragini: Kitni pyaari hai.

Smita: Haa didi. Dekhiye ladke ki aankhe bilkul Sonal ki tarah hai.

Ragini: Aur ladki ki naak Raj ki tarah.

Nandini: Mummy mujhe bhi toh milne dijiye. Aakhir main inki badi mummy hu.

Payal: Aur main chachi hu. Mujhe bhi milne dijiyee.

Phir ek ek karke sablog bachhon se milte hai. Par Raj toh Sonal ke paas baitha tha aur durr se hi apne bachhon ko dekh raha tha.

Ashok: Aree bachhon ke pita ko bhi dekhne do. Tumsab toh usse bhul hi gaye ho.

Ashok ke bolne ke baad bachhon ko Raj ke bagal mein rakhe palne mein sula diya jaata hai. Jiske baad Raj bas ek tak apne dono bachhon ko dekhne lagta hai. Usse toh jaise aur koi sudh budh hi nhi thi.

Abhi Raj bachhon mein khoya hua tha ke tabhi Nandini ka phone baj uthta hai. Woh dekhti hai ke Shruti ka video call aaya hua hai.

Nandini: Haaa Shruti bolo.

Shruti: Bolna sunna baad mein. Pehle mujhe mere bhatije aur bhatiji se milwao. Kabse wait kar rahi hu.

Phir Nandini palne ke paas aake apne mobile se bachhon ko dikhati hai.

Shruti: Kitnee pyaare hai bhabhi. Pure Raj aur Sonal ki tarah dikhte hai.

Nandini: Haa ekdumm. Bahott pyaare hai.

Shruti: Bhabhi Swati ko bolo ghar aajaye. Ansh baar baar neend se uth raha hai aur ro raha hai.

Swati jo bagal mein thi woh sunn leti hai.

Swati: Bas didi aarahi hu.

Phir call cut hojaata hai.

Raj: Mummy aaplog ab ghar jaaiye. Waha dadi akeli hai.

Smita: Hmm Thikk hai. Main aur tu yahi rukhte hai baaki sab ghar jao. Subah aajana.

Phir sab ekbaar aur bachhe ko dekh kar ghar ki taraf nikal jaate hai.

Unnsab ke jaane ke thodi der baad hi Sonal ko hosh aane lagta hai. Hosh mein aate hi woh sabse pehle ek hi chiz bolti hai.

Sonal: Mere bachheee.

Raj: Sonalll.

Sonal: Rajjjj mere bachhe kaha hai. Mujhee dekhna hai mere bachhon ko. Kaha hai woh.

Raj: Shant hojao Sonal. Humare bachhe ekdum thikk hai. Woh dekho tumhare bagal mein hi so rahe hai.

Sonal jhatt se apne bagal mein dekhti hai toh paati ke hai palne mein uske dono bachhe so rahe the jinhe dekh kar hi Sonal ki aankhon mein aansu aajate hai.

Sonal: Aankhon mein aansu liyee. Rajjj humare bachhe. Yehh humaree bachhe haii.

Raj: Haa Sonall yeh humare hi bachhe hai. Aaj main bahott khushh hu. Tumne mujhee 2 bachhon ka baap bana diyaa. Main bahott khushh hu.

Sonal: Aaj main puri hogyi Raj. Aaj main puri hogyi. Ab mujhee aur kuchh nhii chahiyeee. Kuchh nhii.

Smita: Sonalll.

Sonal: Mummyyy. Mainn maa bangayi Mummy. Yehh mere bachhe hai.

Smita: Haa Sonall. Bahott bahott badhaii ho. Tumne aaj humhe bahott badi khushi di hai.

Sonal bas apne bachhon ko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Tabhi waha Nurse aati hai aur bolti hai.

Nurse: Chaliye ab aaplog bahar jaaiye. Ab bachhon ke feeding ka time hogya hai.

Phir Raj aur Smita bahar chale jaate hai aur Sonal apne bachhon ko feed karne lagti hai.​

Mata pita banne ki khushi ek tarfa aur duniya bhar ki khushi ek tarfa par palda hamesha mati pita banne ki khushi ka bhari hota hai. Ye pal raj aur sonal ke jeevan me aa chuka hai.

Adbhut atulniya lekhan kaushal

 

[Jaguaar]

बहुत ही बेहतरीन महोदय।

ये तो बहुत ही खुशी की बात है कि सोनल को जुड़वा बच्चे पैदा हुए।। सबसे ज्यादा खुश हो राज है। आज उसने अपने जीवन का एक और पड़ाव पा लिया है। आज वो एक पति से एक पिता बन गया है।।

Thank you