Thriller DARK GIRL (Completed)

[Indrajeet]

Badhiya update tha Bhai bs title ke hisab se abhi kuch samjh nhi aa rha ki story kispe based h

 

[Casinar]

Thanx casi Bhai .
Kya vampire Bhai ne 4 hi stories likhi thi ya or bhi thi . 1 haweli 2. PAAP . Bangalow no. 13 . And this 4 . Dark Girl

Immo bhai main ne haveli aur paap padhe the Vampire bhai ke exbii par.
Baat ye hai ke unn dinon 2010 / 2011 mein mera 3 favourite writers the exbii mein jinn ke kahaniyon ko main padhta tha aur regular comments karta tha threads par. Saath sath apne threads bhi run karta tha. Weh log bhi mere threads par comments karte aur mujhe encourage karte kyunke main tab newcomer tha....
Ab kyunke main teenon k kahaniyon ko sath sath padhta to kabhi aaj sochta hoon to unn teenon k stories ko mix karke sochne lagta hoon
Woh 3 writers the 1. Jatin bhai. 2. Shakespeare001 aka Deepak bhai aur third Vampire bhai. Ek baar to main ne Deepak bhai k thread par jatin bhai ki update ka comment kar diya tha
Aaj bhi inn teenon k kahaniyon mein confuse rehta hoon.
Haan Vampire bhai ka issue hua tha UA postings ko lekar aur wo naraz hokar apne saare updates delete karke exbii chorr gaye the.... bungalow 13 running tha bich mein chorr gaye the
Magar ye DARK GIRL unhon ne kissi aur forum mein likhe the shayad main ne ye wala nahin padha kabhi. Aaj pehli baar padh raha hoon thanks tu you.

 

[Casinar]

"Aap police ke paas yun nahi gayi? Ya gayi thi?" Maine sawalon ka silsila jaari rakha.
"Gayi thi. Kal FIR darj karayi maine"Usne jawab diya.
"Phir bhi aap yahan mere saamne bethi hain. Is baat ka matlab main ye nikalun ke aapko police par bharosa nahi ya aap apni behen se behad mohabbat karti hain aur uski talash mein you dont wanna leave any stone unturned?"
"Dono" Usna mere lambe se sawal ka chhota sa jawab diya.
"Hmmm" Maine sochte hue phir cigarette jalayi "Ye toh hue basics. I will need some more details"
"Jaise ke?" Usne phir dupatta theek kiya, meri nazar phir lalchayi par is baar kismet ne saath nahi diya.
"Jaise ke vo kahan kaam karti thi, kahan rehti thi, uske dost kaun kaun the vagerah vagerah"
"Uske doston ke baare mein toh main nahi jaanti, kabhi usne bataya hi nahi. Kahan kaam karti thi main ye bhi nahi jaanti kyunki usne sirf itna bataya tha ke kisi private office mein assistant ki job karti hai.Par haan, main ye jaanti hoon ke vo kahan rehti hai aur shayad usse hi aapko aapke pehle do sawalon ke jawab bhi mil jaayen" Vo boli.
"Matlab?" Main uski baat ka matlab samajh toh gaya tha par phir bhi uske munh se sunne ke liye sawal puchh dala.
"I mean vo ek ladies hostel mein rehti thi, you know what i mean?. Working women hostel. Paying guest type, outstation auraton ke liye"
"Haan main samajh gaya" Maine jawab diya "Vahan saath rehne wali ladkiyon ko shayad pata ho ke vo kahan kaam karti thi"
"Yep aur uske doston ke baare mein bhi vo ladkiyan bata sakti hain. Balki vo ladkiyan sab uski dost hi hongi"
"Yep. True. We can ask them" Maine kaha.
"Toh kya main ise aapki haan samjhun?" Usne vo sawal puchha jiska jawab mujhe namein dena tha par aisa hua nahi.
Case dekhne mein bahut simple lag raha tha. Ek outstation ladki jo Mumbai mein rehti thi, kaam karti thi pichhle ek mahine se gayab hai. Ye koi nayi baat nahi thi. Aisa toh Mumbai aur Mumbai hi kya Hindustan ke har shehar mein roz-marra ki si baat hai.Log aksar kho jaate hain. Kabhi kabhi vo milte hain aur kabhi kabhi unki laash aur kabhi kabhi dono mein se kuchh bhi nahi.
Aise cases mein pehle bhi handle kar chuka tha. Log khote hain toh 2 hi suraten nikalti hain. Ya toh vo apni marzi se gayab hain ya apni marzi ke khilaff. Agar marzi se gayab hote hain toh aksar mil jaate hain aur phir mera kaam khatam ho jata hai. Vo kyun gayab hue, kya vajah thi ye unki aur unke gharwalo ki sardardi hoti hai, isse mera kuchh lena dena nahi.
Haan agar apni marzi ke khilaff gayab hon toh ismein bhi 2 suraten nikalti hain. Ya toh vo agva yaani ke kidnap hue ya phir unke saath kuchh anhoni hui. Agar kidnap huen toh aksar ransom call aa jaati hai aur mamla sulat jata hai. Ya toh insaan ghar aa jata hai ya uski laash ka pata mil jata hai. Agar anhoni hui ho toh bhi der sawer pata lag hi jata hai.
Case ek ladki ka tha aur mujhe shuru mein hi andaza ho gaya tha ke kya hua hoga. Agar paise ke liye kidnap hui hoti toh ab tak ransom call aa jaani chahiye thi par aisa hua nahi. Aur uski behen ko dekh kar ye andaza ho hi raha tha ke vo koi bahut ameer gharane ki ladki nahi thi toh ye option toh maine shuru mein hi rule out kar diya tha.
Yaani option number 2 jo ki hamare desh mein ladkiyon ke gayab hone ki sabse badi vajah hoti hai. Aise ayyash kism ke log jo apni tharak mitane ke liye rape ki hadh tak chale jaayen, aise logon ki hamare desh mein koi kami nahi. Ladki ko uthana, uske saath zabardasti karna aur phir kahin use ya uski body ko dump kar dena inke liye koi badi baat nahi hoti aur yahi possibility mujhe is case mein bhi lag rahi thi.
Kisi ne use kidnap kiya, uska rape kiya, aur kyunki ek mahine se uska koi pata nahi toh ye mana ja sakta tha ke rape ke baad uski jaan li aur ab uski laash kahin kisi naale mein padi sad rahi hogi. Aakhri andaza maine is baat se lagaya ke uske ghar par abtak uski maut ki khabar nahi gayi thi toh isliye agar uski jaan li gayi hai aur kisi ko uska pata nahi toh matlab ke laash bhi ab tak mili nahi.
Kul milakar case aasan lag raha tha. Mujhe laga ke main pehle bhi aise cases mein deal kar chuka hoon toh koi badi baat nahi hai.
"Theek hai i will take the case. Aap aaj shaam ko mere office aa jaiyega, kuchh papers vagerah sign karne ke liye aur meri fees vagerah discuss karne ke liye.Baaki ki details bhi main aapse tab hi le loonga"
"Great" Vo ekdam se khush ho uthi aur tab pehli baar mera dhyaan uski badi badi chhatiyon se hatkar uski aankhon ki taraf gaya. Kuchh ajeeb si baat thi uski aankhon mein, ek ajeeb si kashish"
"Aur haan, shaam ko aate hue apni behen kiek tasveer please le aaiyega"
"Vo toh abhi hai hamare paas" Usne apne bag mein haath dala aur ek photo nikal kar meri taraf badhayi. Maine tasveer apne haath mein li aur ek nazar daali.
"Ye toh aapki photo hai" Maine uski taraf dekhte hue kaha. Photo mein jo ladki thi aurmere saamne jo ladki bethi thi vo hubahu ek hi thi, sivaay kapdon ke.
"Nahi vo meri behen hi hai. Ham judva hain.Shakal soorat ekdam 100% milti hai" Usne meri baat ka jawab diya.
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Wonderful.
Kiss mod par update ko end kiya hai bhai ne wah.
Ab pata chala behen identical twins hein. Superb.

 

[Casinar]

Baaki k kal padhing immo bhai.
Thanks very much for sharing thus treasure with us.

 

[The Immortal]

Baaki k kal padhing immo bhai.
Thanks very much for sharing thus treasure with us.

Thanx for your wonderful response casi Bhai . Kal tak 2-3 update post Kar dunga .

 

[The Immortal]

Chapter 3 - Policewala

Agle din subah uthkar maine Nisha ko phone kiya toh usne utha liya.
"Kal kahan thi sara din? Kitna phone kiya maine tujhe. Aur office kyun band tha?" Maine uske call receive karte hi sawalon ki jhadi laga di.
"Kitna phone kiya tha maine aapko kal subah ye batane ke liye ke office nahi aa paoongi. Par aap toh aise ghode bech kar sote ho ke murde bhi sharma jaayen" Usne jawab diya.
"Achha maine phone nahi uthaya toh tune bhi apna phone band kar diya?"
"Office aa rahe ho na aaj. Vahin milo, poori baat batati hoon"
"Theek hai. Main thoda der se aaoonga" Maine bed se uthte hue kaha.
"Ismein kaun si nayi baat hai" Usne kaha aur haste hue phone rakh diya.
Kuchh der baad main taiyyar hokar ghar se nikla aur sidha Chembur police station pahuncha.
Vo mera bachpan ka dost tha, mera langotiya yaar. Bachpan mein ham ek hi school gaye, ek hi colony mein rahe, saath khele aur saath saath hi apni professional life shuru ki. Usne Mumbai police join kar li aur maine apni agency khol li.
Inspector Munawwar Khan, short mein Munna, Chembur police station mein bataur Police Inspector tainaat tha. Chunki mera kaam aisa tha ke mera wasta aksar policewalo se padta tha toh vo mera bachpan ka dost hone ke naate hamesha mere kaam aata tha.
"Vo aaye hain mehfil mein chandi lekar,
Ke Roshni mein nahane ki raat aayi hai "
Mujhe aata dekh vo uth khada hua aur apnebaahen phailata hua meri taraf badha.
Uska sunaya sher sunkar main chaunk pada.
"Ye kahan suna tune?" Maine use gale lagate hue puchha. Kal raat yahi lines mujhedekh kar Bijli ne bhi kahi thi.
"Jagjit Singh ki bahut famous ghazal hai, kyun?" Vo ghoom kar vaapis table ke doosri aur apni seat par ja betha aur main uske saamne beth gaya.
"Nahi aise hi. Kal bhi mujhe dekh kar kisi ne same lines kahin thi" Maine apna cigarette ka packet nikala.
"Pehli baat toh ye thi ke cigarette agar tunejalayi toh baaki ka poora din yahin jail mein bitayega aur doosra ye ke kaun thi vo?" Usne muskurate hue puchha.
"Pehli baat toh ye ke Jail jaane ko main taiyyar hoon basharte ke andar tu cigarettepine de" Maine usi ke andaaz mein uski baat ka jawab diya "Aur doosra ye ke tujhe kaise pata ke vo ladki hi thi, ladka bhi toh hosakta hai"
"Dekh unless tu haal filhal mein Gay ban gaya ho, mujhe poora yakeen hai ke koi ladki hi hogi pakka. Aur agar tu sahi mein Gay ho gaya hai toh bhai sahab darwaza udhar hai, utho aur chalte bano. Mujhe apni izzat pyaari hai" Uski baat par ham dono hi dil khol kar hase.
"Nahi fikar mat kar teri izzat abhi salamat hai " Maine kaha.
"Kya lega. chaai mangaoon?" Usne puchha.
"Nahi rehne de. Nashta ghar se karke hi nikla tha. Ek kaam se aaya hoon"
"Haan bol na meri jaan, tere liye jaan haazirhai"
Vo bachpan se hi kaafi dabang mijaaz ka raha tha. Hamesha apni akad mein rehta tha aur apne dil ki hi karta tha. Kisi ko faaltubolne nahi deta tha aur agar koi bol jaaye toh pal bhar mein haath chhod deta tha. Aaye din school aur college mein uske jhagde hote rehte tha aur mahine mein kam se kam ek baar toh uske maan baap kouski shikayaten sunne ke liye school aana hipadta tha.
Aur shayad uska ye nature hi uske police mein bharti hone ki sabse badi vajah tha. Vo hamesha apni hi chalane ki koshish kartatha aur vardi pehenne ke baad toh use aisa karne ka sarkari license mil gaya tha.
Police force join karne ke baad vo theek vaisa hi policewala bana jaisa ke hamari hindi films mein dikhaya jata hai. Ek bahut hi kaaiyyan kism ka insaan jise Uper ki kamai se use koi shikayat nahi thi, rishwat lene ko hamesha taiyyar rehta tha, Had darje ka be-imaan, 2 second mein apni baatse palat jaaye aur munh ke bajaay haath se zyada baat kare.
Par in sabse alag mere liye vo aaj bhi vahi Munna tha jo mere bachpan ka dost tha. Mere liye kuchh bhi karne ko hamesha taiyyar rehne wala mera vo dost jo mere liye mere sage bhai se kam nahi tha aur yahi darja mera bhi uski nazar mein tha. Bahar ki duniya ke liye bhale vo kitna hi bada kamina aur be-imaan kyun na tha, mujhe usne kabhi kisi baat ke liye inkaar nahi kiya aur jo kaha, vo hamesha kiya.
"Abhi haal filhal mein koi ladki ka case aaya hai kya kahin? Koi gumshuda, koi rape vagerah, kahin kisi ladki ki koi laash baramad hui ho ya kisi ladki ne koi complaint file ki ho?" Maine puchha.
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[Rahul]

 

[The Immortal]

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[The Immortal]

"Abhi haal filhal mein koi ladki ka case aaya hai kya kahin? Koi gumshuda, koi rape vagerah, kahin kisi ladki ki koi laash baramad hui ho ya kisi ladki ne koi complaint file ki ho?" Maine puchha.
"Naya case liya hai koi tune?"
"Haan" Maine bataya.
"Kya scene hai?"
"Vahi purana kissa. Ek insaan gayab hai, main dhoondh raha hoon" Maine phir se cigarette nikalni chahi par phir Khan ki baat yaad karke irada badal diya.
"Tu na saale, koi aur kaam kyun nahi kar leta. Ye gumshuda logon ko dhoondhte dhoondhte mujhe toh lagta hai ke tu hi kahin ek din na gumshuda ho jaaye"
"Ho bhi gaya toh mujhe dhoondhne ke liye tu hai na" Maine kaha "Aaya hai koi naya case aisa?"
"Ye Mumbai hai meri jaan" Vo kursi par aaram se pasarta hua bola "Yahan roz naye aise kisse aate hain. Kabhi rape, kabhi murder, kabhi kidnap. Tere sawal ka jawab bahut bada hai. Ek poori lambi list nikal kar de sakta hoon main tujhe"
"Yeah i guess you are right" Vo sahi keh raha tha "Anyways, ye tasveer dekh"
Maine Saanwli ki tasveer nikal kar uski tarafbadhayi. Tasveer dekh kar uske bhaav ek pal ke liye badle, chehre par ek expression aaya aur chala gaya.
"Means iske baare mein kuchh aaya hai?" Uske chehre ke badalte bhaav ko padhte hue maine kaha.
"Yeah i think so. Jaani pehchani shakal lagti hai. Shayad kuchh information main de sakta hoon tujhe" Vo utha aur apne pichhe rack par rakhi files mein kuchh dhoondhne laga.
Kuchh der baad usne ek file kholi aur tasveer ko file ke andar lagi photo se milane laga.
"Nahi, shakal milti zaroor hai par koi aur hai" Kehte hue usne file meri taraf badhayi.
File ke andar kisi ladki ke gumshuda hone ke F.I.R darj thi aur ek photo lagi thi. Us ladkike aur saanwli ke nain naksh halke ek jaise zaroor the, rang bhi saanwla tha par vo koi aur thi.
"Nahi not her" Kehte hue maine file use vaapis kar di.
"Tu photo chhod ja mere paas. Main scan karwata hoon police data base aur dekhta hoon kuchh nikalta hai toh. Naam kya hai ladki ka?"
"Saanwli Mitra" Maine bataya.
"Address?"
"Poora toh mujhe yaad nahi, baad mein message kar doonga tujhe par idhar kahin Kalyan mein rehti thi kisi ladies hostel mein"
"Theek hai main dekhta hoon agar kuchh milta hai toh. Kal shaam ko kya kar raha hai?" Usne photo apne drawer mein rakhte hue kaha.
"Kuchh khaas nahi, kyun?"
"Milte hain kahin. Dinner karte hain saath. Bade din ho gaye saath bethe hue"
"Pichhle Sunday hi toh tu mere ghar par pada hua tha"
"Haan toh pichhla Sunday gaye 5 din ho gaye mere bhai aur 2 din mein agla sunday aa jaayega"
"Theek hai" Main hanste hue bola "Ghar aa jana shaam ko. Vahin se nikal lenge kahin"
Police station se bahar aate hi maine sabse pehle ek cigarette jalayi. Vo mujhe kabhi smoke nahi karne deta tha. Jitna waqt bhi saath hota, mujhe cigarette jalane ki permission nahi hoti thi. Hamesha yahi hota tha ke uske jaate hi mera sabse pehla kaam cigarette sulgane ka hota tha.
Khan se milkar maine thodi der ke liye socha ke office jaoon par phir irada badalkar main Juhu ki taraf chal pada. Sooraj sar par aa chuka tha aur sadkon par traffic duguna ho gaya tha. Manzil tak pahunchte pahunchte mujhe khasa time laggaya.
Ghar ke gate ke bahar pahunch kar maine doorbell bajayi. Bahar lage intercom par kuchh pal baad ek aurat ki aawaaz sunai di.
"Kaun hai?"
"Aditya"
"Kaun Aditya?"
"Aditya Sharma"
"Kaun Aditya Sharma?"
"Kitne Aditya Sharma ko jaanti hain aap?"
Mere sawal ka koi jawab nahi aaya. Intercom par kuchh der khamoshi rahi aur phir lohe ke bade se gate ke andar bana ek chhota darwaza apne aap khul gaya. Gaadi mujhe bahar hi chhodni padi aur main ghar ke andar daakhil ho gaya.
Darwaza mere pichhe phir apne aap hi band ho gaya.
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[Rahul]

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